Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Ok toh quiz begin ho gaya h winner ki ek khwahish next update mai puri kar di jayegii...
Toh question ye h ki... next update mai kya hoga..
1 sunil ko raj ka pata chal jayega
2 kya Raj ki yadast wapas aa jayegi...
3 Death halo kya karega next update mai tattu wale aur ko bulayega ..
4 death halo khud attack kar kar dega aur dubara raj ko ghayal kar dega...

72 hours h in mai se ek par lock kardo aur aisa kyo lagta h thoda explain kar do..kyoki most probably jab tak update bhi ready ho jayega...

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Awesome update bhai

Ab maja aaega

Zabardast fantastic update

Nice update

Thank you so much for your precious warm energetic reviews thank you so much

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

nice update..!!
sunil ne shweta gale me locket dala hai toh uski location janane ke liye hi dala hoga..!! raj ne sultan ka video leak kar diya hai..uske baad police walo ka bhi video leak kar diya hai..uske baad raj ne ek warning wala bhi video leak kar diya hai..ab har jagah sirf nirwana ke charche ho rahe hai..ab bure kaam karne walo ko tension ho rahi hai ki agla number kiska hoga..aur public khaskar ladkiyon me toh nirwana hero ban gaya hai aur trend bhi ho raha hai.

Ha wo jo warning wala video dala h usai bahut kuch badlega...aur tagda bawal hoga....par is baar nirwana ni ek beta lega heesab

.!! yeh anthony samajh raha hai ki usko tin lgo ko marna hai..ek nirwana, dusra woh ladka matlab raj aur tisra rajeev..lekin usse kaha pata hai ki raj hi nirwana hai..anthony nirwana ko nahi janta lekin raj aur rajeev ko janta hai aur pehle inn dono marne ki soch raha hai..lekin usse kaha pata hai k woh khud hi khud ki mout ko bula raha hai..!!

Is baar anthony bi chalaki dikha raha h soch ke hamla karega weakness dhund raha h but sahi kaha jab tak wo plan kare aisa na ho ki uski planing he bigad jaye....

yeh ripper kya plan karega soch ke raj ka sar dard kar raha tha toh shweta ne uska sar daba kar sula diya..muze hamesha lagta hai ki raj aur shweta bhai behen nahi bante toh achha hota..shweta raj ke liye ideal partner lagti hai..!!

Ha ha ha sach bolu toh mera wo charecter h jaisi bahan main khud chahta hu but sayad is janam toh nahi hogi khawish sayad agle janam ho jaye bus isliye apni feelings story mai daal kar puri kar raha hu

yeh chutiya ripper ne shweta aur rinky ko kidnap karne ka plan bana liya hai..aur usne dono ko kidnap kar liya hai..usse lag raha hai jaise woh raj ke sath game khel raha hai lekin maine jaise raj ke character ko samjha hai uss hisab se raj ko pehle hi pata hoga ki ripper aisa hi kuchh karega..kyunki raj kabhi bhi shweta ke liye itni loose security nahi rakh sakta hai..aur itni asani se koi bhi shweta ko kidnap nahi kar sakta hai..toh raj ne janbujh kar shweta ko kidnap hone diya hai aur shweta bhi chill hi hogi kyunki usse pata hai ki raj usse kuchh nahi hone dega..rinky thodi dari huyi hai ki raj ke itne dushman kaise lekin ab ghar me hi dushman (shaitan singh) ho toh kya kar sakte hai

Bilkul bilkul bilkul sahi kaha raj itne apne kho chuka h aur pyar ki ahmiyat samjta h toh atleast ab wo kisi bi apne ko khona nahi chahega...isliye sab planning he thi....

aur ripper ki baton yeh toh samajh aagaya hai ki woh raj ki supari lekar yaha aaya hai aur ab raj ko pata karna hai ki kisne uski supari di hai..aur ripper raj ko doudana chahta hai lekin raj hi uss harami ripper ko doudake marega..aur iss ripper ka bhi video banayega kyunki isne bhi ladkiyon ka rape kiya hai aur rinky aur shweta par gandi najar daali hai..toh raj iss ripper ke ussi ke style me tukade tukade karega aur pata lagayega ki kisne uski supari di hai..!!

Ha bilkul aur pata lagte he phir khair nahi uski but is baar game maza ayega....

raj ne rajiv ko apne family ke time huye hadse ki jankari lene ko bola hai aur uss time ke police inspector ko bhi dhundhane ko bola hai..aur pashupati naam ke gunde ko dhundhane ko bhi bola hai..rinky bhi ab raj ko pyaar karne ko bechain hai aur woh bhi raj se dur nahi hona chahti hai..!! rajni madam ne bhi raj ka shukriya ada kiya kyunki raj ne suman ki jaan bachayi thi..!!

Ha pashupati wala seen bahut solid hoga aur fight bi maza ayega ...par is different try kiya h aur ye behad pasand ayega wo sab milenge jo reader ko chahiye heros entry emotion aur faddu action thank you so much for your precious and energetic awesome review

 

[mkgpkr]

Superb excellent lajawab update

 

[JAI]

shaandar update dear

 

[ckkhndu]

nicely updated bro

 

[Arvind Sharma]

nice1

 

[Vk248517]

Update 88

Finding past—begins

RIPER



Main full speed se bike bhaga raha tha tabhi ek car mere barabar akar muje takar marti h aur meri bike inbalance ho jati h . main balance karne ki kosis karta huva side mai khadi ek car se takrata huva bike roke deta hu....meri nazar us takar marne wali car pe jati h aur carwale muje ghur kar dekh rahe hote h aur gadii ki taraf ishara karte h ki time kam h......maine bike ki race tez kari toh vroom vroom ki tez sound ane lagi aur main full speed mai clutch choda aur bhaga di aur car bi mere piche ho gayi but meri speed bahut tez thi wo log piche rah jate h....abhi ek musibat ko paar he kiya tha ki agai city se bahar road block ki huvi thi road ke bicho bich tankar khada huva tha...maine bike ko khada kiya aur paidal he bhagne laga kache rasto se shortcut marta huva mere piche 1 sports cycle wala bi mera picha kar Raha tha aur uske helmet mai camera laga huva tha ye live shweta aur rinky bi alag alag jagah se dekh rahi thi ... Janha rinky tense thi toh shweta bus live dekh rahi thi bina kisi expression ke .

RIPER--- not bad not bad acha khel raha h 5 km dur h abhi bhi hmm maza araha h aur ek cutter ko press karne laga..

Idhar main bhagta ja raha tha sports cycle wala jiske helmet mai camera laga tha wo piche rah gaya par main.... Jaise he paki sadak pe chada bikes se 10 bande bi mere agai agaye aur .....main samaj gaya tha ki ye kyo aye h par mere pass bi time nahi tha puchne ke liye maine khanjar nikala aur bina ruke sabse pahle wale ke gale pe ghop diya phir piche wale ke pait mai aur aise he cheerta fadta bhagta raha....kuch he pal mai sab niche pade huve the....aur road cross kar bhagne laga

RIPER---live dhek ke ohhh ye toh bike walo se bach nikla par ye camere wala gaya kanha tabi cycle wale ke camre mai raj ko dekh ke ye raha..phir piche mudke acha ek baat bata tu uske sath rahti h uske sath maza ata hoga na ...

Shweta--- muskarakar jab wo mile usi se puch lena ...wo tuje sahi se batayega ki kitna maza ata h muje .....waise uske sath sone mai alag he sukun h tu nahi samjhega.

RIPER--- oh tewar matlb teri ache se leta h ....koyi na usai maarke he lunga teri bi filhal dekhta hu tuje bachata h ya usai....

Shweta--- bus usai dekhti rahi....



Idhar main--- bhagta huva ja raha tha aur distane 3 km tha aur time kam the main full speed se bhage ja raha tha ...Phir se agai 5 bande khade the

Main--- bina ruke bhagta huva he gaya aur samne wale pe ghutne leke uski chest pe land huva aur dubara jump leke ek ke seene ke aar paar khanjar kar diya aur piche 2 samaj pate usai pahle he gale pe khanjar chal gaya tha ek jo sports bike pe tha maine kaha bike chod aur bhag ja jaise he wo bike se utra aur bhaga....mai uski bike start karke bhagane laga...aur piche se aake khanjar se uski gardan kaat di ..aur location ke liye nikal gaya

RIPER--- time dekhkar blootooth pe bola janha shweta aur rinky bandhi thi wanha gunjne lagi ha ha ha 5 minut bache h tumahara ashiq toh nahi ayega lagta h ab kuch toh katna padega par kya aahhh tumhare ungliya kaisi rahegi ....toh boys chalo kaato inki right hand ki ungliya...kosis karna dard na ho bahut sweet h dono......tabi bike ki awaj sunayi dii .hold hold hold boys ye toh agaya.... On time .....but how....

Main--- bike ke breaks mare jo ghasit ti huvi sidhi jake uske agai ruki....

RIPER--- style maar raha h maar le tu khus ho ja

Main--- silent raha ...

RIPER--- oh attitude koyi na teri dono chamiya alag jagah h band h janha tu muje maarke he ja sakta h 15 minut mai aur agar tune muj pe hath uthaya toh unka kuch na kuch tutega aur tu agar 5 second se jayda niche gira raha toh bi main unhe maar dunga rule simple h ok hero .....

Main--- meri tumse koyi dushmani nahi h toh tum muje kyo marne chahte ho hum toh mile bi nahi h....

RIPER--- maar khate khate sunta ja ...

Aur diya ek punch mere thobde pe main gira niche ....riper teri supari di h kisi ne aur di ek kick meri chest mai main phir dur jake gira...

RIPER--- 1 cr ki supari di h koyi h jo tuje mara huva dekhna chahta h...

Aur phir riper ne ek ghutne ki mere pait mai mari main ghutno ko bal niche baith gaya aur dheere dheere phir se khada huva toh usne ek kick meri ribs pe mari aur mere mu se khun nikal aya....

Main--- khun thuk kar par mera toh mere dadaji ke ilawa koyi nahi h aur wo muje kabhi mara huva nahi dekh sakte h ..

RIPER danda utha ke raj ki pith mai marta h jo tut jata h....phir ek kick marta h jisa raj dur jake girta h aur kahta h

RIPER---tere ghar mai aur koyi nahi h jhut bolta h ...riper se jhut ahhh teri tadap dekh ke maza araha h muje main bi dekhu kitni dair maar khayega tu ha ha ha tere marne ke baad un mai se ek ko chod dunga ye wada h tu decied kar le ha ha ha ....chod main he kar lunga

Main maar khata huva yanha wanha gir raha tha ....

RIPER--- bus bahut khel liya ab tu marega aur ek rod utha ke leg pe mari....ja upar ma baap se mil lena ...

Main--- ek ek baat ..

RIPER--- bol na.....

Main--- ek wish h meri ...itna huk toh banta he h....

RIPER--- banta h na jarur banta h tera bolna kya khayega kya piyega ...ladki chahiye kya waise wo wali bol rahi thi tu usai bade maze deta h....tere baad main usai maze dunga bahut aag h usmai lagta h tu bhujata nahi h......

Main--- gusai se usai dekhta hu ..

RIPER--- ek thapad mu pe marta h .ankhe niche samja chutiye nahi toh abhi kaat dunga...

Main--- gardan nichi kar leta hu...

RIPER--- jaldi bhonk agar kuch kahna h toh......phir piche apne admiyo se ye chutiya kuch bolta he nahi bc....

Main--- kaaaakkk...koun maarnaaa chhahhta h ....

RIPER--- rod hawa mai uthake tera saga h .....naam nahi pata h muje... aur rod uthakar sir pe marne lagta h.....

Par ye kya uska danda sir se pahle he ruk jata h....riper ki ankhe choudi ho jati h...wo jor lagata h chudane ki par chuda nahi pata h ..



Main--- dande ko pakde pakde he tedi muskan ke sath hans ke isai tadpana kahte h kya .....toh phir isai kya kahenge main riper ko dusre hath se uska coller utha ke pakad leta hu aur uthake ghumakae niche patakta hu aur dubara uthakar phir phir patakta hu ......wo farsh pe pada huva dard se chillata h ..

RIPER--- dard se bil bilata huva ab teri wo dono kutiya marengi tune muj pe hath uthaya.......unke tukde tu dekhekga .....phir blootooth par chillakar kaat dalo dheere dheere dono ko .....ye bi toh dekhe ....Phir chillakar dekh teri chamiya kaise tadapti h....

Main--- wo jaise he meri taraf mudta h main bhagkar piche se uski gardan ek hath se pakadkar sidhi laat uski pith mai marta hu wo pichewade ke bal farsh pe girta h ....aur phirse bilbilane lagta h..

RIPER--- tum ...tumhari itni heemat bahut huva ab tu dekh kya haal hota h unka...

Main--- maine sab dekh aur sun liya h tu dekh ....ab...

Riper jaise he screen ki taraf dekhta h uski ankho choudhi ho jati h hairani se kaise kaise kaise.....tu toh yanha h....

Main--- beta ye game tera kabhi tha he nahi........

Riper ek baar muje toh ek baar screen ki taraf dekhta h...

Main--- tu yahi soch raha h na isai toh tere admi ne airport mai jate dekha tha .....main teri sabse badi galti yahi thi ki tune muje bus ek senior class ka ladka samja....pata h tune jab pahli baar call kiya tha tab he tere liye plan bana liya tha ....Ab tere in admiyo ki bari ....aur ek ke di kaan par jaise he teda hoke jhuka di ek laat muu par rapat ta huva gira piche phir dusra marne aya aur jaise hath ghumaya jhuk kar di uske pait mai aur niche jhukte huve ke thobde pe di ghutne ki sidha hoke ulta gira niche

Main--- tere 2 toh gaye ab 2 aur bache h ...aur undone ki taraf dekh kar dur pada apna khanjar uthaya aur wo ye dekh bhagne lage main fenke ke ek ko mara jo sidha uski pith mai ghus gaya aur jo dusra bhagne lag raha tha uski taraf ek padi huvi rod fenki jo pairo mai lagi aur jab tak wo khada hota maine pith mai se khanjar nikal ke uske sir mai ghusa diya

RIPER jo ye sab dekh raha tha wo hairan tha .....Wo khada huva aur apni gardan ghumakar tere bare main information adhuri thi par koyi baat nahi main tuje apne hatho se marunga...

Main--- meri information jo nikalte h wo duniya se nikal lete h ...

Main uski taraf aur wo meri taraf bhaga aur usne lath mari maine block ki phir punch mara maine block kiya aur dubara se usne punch marne ki kosis ki maine uska hath pakda aur jor se dhobhi pachad diya wo mere pura upar se aake niche gira ...phir uske hath aur ek pair ko pakadke upar uthaya aur niche feka ....wo dard se chillaya par mere dimag mai toh usne jo baat shweta ke liye kahi thi wo he baat ghum rahi thi....main uske leg ko pakda aur utha ke patakne laga aur wo dard se chilla raha tha phir dur fenk diya usai..... Wo dheere dheere dubara se khada huva aur phir ek kick mari jisai maine block kiya aur uske gale pe kick di ...niche late gaya

Main--- aya bada riper bhisdike 10 pade nahi ki ...guda pichwade se bahar aagaya

RIPER--- niche pada huva aj tak main kabhi nakaam nahi huva hu par tuje kaise pata laga ki wo dono kanha h .... Aur pata tha toh itni dair maar kyo khayi...

Main--- jaise tuje pahle kaha ye sab hamara plan tha wo airport se thodi dair baad he bahar aagaya tha.....ye hamara plan tha aur agar tuje sirf muje marna hota toh tu ata aur marta chala jata par tune phone kiya ...tabi maine sab plan kar liya tha ....aur jab tu rinky ko utha ke le gaya muje thodi dair baad he pata lag gaya tha mere admi piche he the aur rahi baat us ladki ki toh wo meri bahan h

RIPER--- tabi uski ankho mai dar nahi tha par uska kaise pata laga ..

Main--- uske gale mai jo locket h na usmai gps h taki wo kanhi bi jaye hamesa hamari nigaho mai rahe...aur ab tere last sawal ka jawab toh main itni dair chup isliye tha kyoki muje janna tha ki koun muje marwana chahta h toh naam tu janta nahi h ..toh mere kisi kaam ka nahi h .....par tadpana kya hota hu tu ye toh jaan le ..aur apne hath ke anguthe uski ankho mai ghusa diye ...wo khub chatpataya par tabi rajeev sir ka call aya aur unhone kuch samjhaya toh maine chod diya usai ..

Phir....riper se tu kanha se h .....

RIPER--- dard se main up mai gaziyabad se hu ........

uski gardan pe laat maari aur wo behosh ho gaya deewar se takra ke ...Main ghar aagaya janha hum sare baithe the

Sunil--- kuch bolega ab ye kyo marna chahta tha ....aur kisne bheja tha isai...

Main--- ruk kar property ke liye ....par mere marne se kisi ko kya fayda hoga property mai

Rajeev--- tumhare pass kya h kya nahi ye toh muje nahi pata par tumhara hisaa banta h property mai toh jahir si baat h agar tum khatm ho jate ho toh property divide nahi hogi.....

Main--- toh bi main toh kisi se kuch nahi mangta hu maine toh pahle he mana kar rakha h....

Sunil--- tu abhi bi samja nahi mere bhai yanha tu dil se kaam le raha h isai aise samaj dadaji ki 3 bete aur 2 betiya h unmai 2 bete is duniya mai nahi h aur 2 betiyo mai se ek ab nahi h aur dusri laapata h...jaisa abhi tak pata h hume toh property ke abhi tak ke heesaidar h tu tere badepapa aur mamta kavita aur surendra babita ab soch tu mar gaya toh baki 2 he hisaidar rahenge tere badepapa aur choti chachi...ke bache

Shweta--- choti chachi ab badal gayi h toh bache tumahre badepapa shaitan singh usi ko hoga na fayda...

Rajeev right beti...aur tume koun marwana chahega....

Main--- khada hokar chacha....is baar galti kardi tune...

Rajeev--- ek baar aur dimag mai ayi h..

Main--- kya ..

Rajeev--- bura mat manna raj beta agar wo tumhara chacha tumhe marne bhej sakta h toh wo tumhari chachi ki betiyo ko bi maarne ki kosis karenge .... Toh khatra unhe bi h ..

Main--- agar ye sach mai chacha shaitan h toh uski mulakaat ab shaitan se he hogi.....chachaa......



Mandawa---- chacha ko hichkiya ane lagi heeeeecchhh heeeeccchhhh.....

Shaitan--- ab ye koun yaad kar raha h aur ye jee kyo ghabra raha h mera .



Aj ke liye itna he
Likes aur revoes pelne ka.....dosto....

Awesome updates

 

[Jasdil]

Nice update bro

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

Update 89.....

Finding past—begins

alone feelings—Suruwaat....



After 2 days......

Sham ka samay tha aur Main ek hill ke top pe baitha huva tha....


mere samne suraj din bhar apni roshni se sabke jeevan ko roshan kar ke aram karne ke liye ja raha tha ......meri nighaye bus doobte suraj ko he dekh rahi thi jis ki dheemi halki roshni shanti de rahi thi...ek ajib sa sukun mil raha tha akele baith ke .....

Man mai vichar chal rahe the jinhe main khud nahi samaj pa raha tha....aur bus samne dekhe ja raha tha ek tak........suraj doob gaya tab mere dil se awaj ayi kya meri jindgi ke dhuk u he doobenge kabhi .....mera vaise bi koyi nahi h is duniya mai aur jo h wo bi paiso Ke liye marna chahte h ....aur sayad yahi kaaran mere maa baap ko marne ka raha hoga....par gareeb hona bi toh paap h richa bi toh isiliye dur hoti gayi thi mujse ....kabhi samajne ki kosis he nahi ki ....kaas ek baar viswas kar liya hota.... aj bi yaad h usne muje hawas ka bhukha kaha tha......richa agar main hawas ka bhukha hota toh tumhare sath toh sex nahi kiya tum jarur bahki par maine har baar roka.....tum hamesa kahti thi i trust you ...but tut gaya kuch he palo mai .. main samajta hu sab tumhari galti nahi h meri bi bahut galtiya h aur main ata tumhe manane bi kyoki aj bi main tumhe beintiha pyar karta hu....mera dil aj bi tumhe bahut yaad karta h....tum agar dubara sakal na dikhane wali baat na kahti toh jarur tumse milta aur tumhe manata par sayad mere jeevan mai tumhara sath itna he tha....main tumhe yaad kar bahut tadap liya hu ab ek nayi suruwat karunga .....ab tumhe dil ki gahrayiyo se nikalne ki puri kosis karunga tum mera adhura khawab he rah jaogi is janam mai .sabki tarah mera pyar bi adhura rah jayega...bus meri yahi duwa h tum hamesa khus raho.....miss you.... hamara pyar aj mere dil aur yado ki gahrayiyo mai dab gaya h hamesa ke liye ..........thodi dair u he baithne ke baad...main sunya ki awasta mai ho gaya janha na mera dil na dimag kuch kar par raha tha bus meri nazar samne ki taraf thi.....kuch dair baad mera phone ring hone laga....

Main--- Hello

Ye hello hello kya hota h bhai 5 hours ho gaye ....hum bhukhe baitha h ...ap 2 hours ka kahke gaye the ...

Main--- time dekh kar raat ke 9 baj gaye h ....main half hour mai aya....call cut....aur mere chahre pe muskaan agayi.



Dur .....



Ladki -richa hamesa tu yanha ati h ghumne aisa kyo....

Richa--- dil karta h mera ek sukun milta h yanha par yanha apnapan sa lagta

Ladki--- yaar achi jagah ghuma kar na pub mai chalte h aj raat dance masti karenge yanha ke pub mast h.

Richa--- dil nahi karta h mera ...Aur chalte huve road ke kinare baithe ek shaks jo gitar baza raha tha usai ek doller deti h ..aur uske pass khadi ho jati h

Ladki--- tu jab bi ati h isai 1 doller deti h aur yahi rahti h kafi dair aisa kyo...

Richa--- pata nahi bus main jab bi ati hu ye yanhi baitha milta h .....iske music mai ek ahsas h jo muje khichta h .....

Ladki--- tu aur teri soch chal ghar chalte h....

Richa tu chal main gitaar sunke ati hu....aur wo khadi hoke auro ke sath gitaar sunne lagti h..

Richa ka ye roj ka routine tha ...wo roj guitar sunti aur ek doller deti aur ghar ajatiiii.......

Aj bi wo behad dhayan se he sun rahi thi ..Richa itne dhayan se sunti thi ki usai ek sukun ek ahsas sa milta tha us dhuun mai usai aisa mahus hota tha ki wo usi ka dard bayan kar rahi h ...jab dil halka mahus hota wo wapas ghar ki taraf lout aati thi bus isi pal he dard kuch kam hota tha ab wo thoda bolti thi par ab bi wo ek kamre mai band hokar apne khayalo ki duniya mai chali jati ....jaise un khayalo mai koyi usai kisi se milne ka besabri se intezaar ho.... ...aur unhi khayalo mai samay bitati.....aj bi wo sapno ki duniya mai thi par uske chehre pe pareshani ke bhav the jissai uska chehra pasine se bhiga huva tha aur chehre pe dar aur pareshani ke bhav arahe aur ja rahe the ...aur wo dheere dheere dheere bol rahi thi nahi nahi nahi.......aur uski nind khul jati h.....uski ankho se ansuu beh nikalte h.....



Jaisalmer.......




Shivani--- fast fast

Kuch waqt baad

Sam village jo jaisalmer se 40 km ki duri par h apne dunes yani rait ke tilo aur tourism ke liye famus h wanha 2 open jeeb ka picha shivani police team ke sath kar rahi thi ....dono jeeb agai jake divied ho jati h...

Shivani--- left wali jeeb ka picha karo aur uske typer par fire karo....

Kafi dair ki masakat ke baad jeeb wale hath ajate h

Shivani---bahut ud liya ab tere pankh kutar du ya bolega

Admi--- chup raha ...

Ek gun fire sound aya aur sath he chillane ki awaj aur ek niche pada tadfadane laga ...

Shivani—tu bolega ya...iski trah tadfadta huva marega

Admi--- ha bolunga na ye saman delhi jana tha ye afganistaan se Pakistan ke raste bharat mai ata h....

Shivani--- wanha kisko dete ho

Admi--- ye muje nahi pata par yanha ye maal hum sappu supplier ko dete h jo agai bhejta h muje itna he pata maidam...Muje chod do...

Shivani--- chod dungi aur ye bata sappu pappu supplier kanha milega

Admi--- bikaner uska adda wanhi h border ke karib ..wo yanha ata rahta h ...

Shivani--- inspector ko ishara kar deti h azad kar do .....

Aur piche 2 gun fire sound ati h ...



Next day Morning...



Main--- ab tikh ho tum .....ghoom sakti ho

Manisha—yaar dr ne rest kaha tha letai rahne ko nahi kaha tha ...tum toh meri maa se bi bure ho is mamle mai....wo muje ghumne toh deti ..thoda bahut par tumne toh hilne he nahi diya upar se tumhari wo goliya......par aj pata nahi kaise maan gaye tum....

Main---Dr ne ok kaha h isliye... toh tikh h aj beauty ko bike se khuli hawa khilata hu ......ok ....aj school chalogi jao ready ho jao ..Isilye subhe jagaya h...

Manisha ke sath chal pada school manisha ko mere sath dekh ke janha sab ladkiya jal rahi thi ......toh ladko ke seene pe saanp ajgar sab lotpalate kha rahe the....class mai firse rounak agayi thi ab hum charo sath he baithe the

Aditiya—toh buddy kab ja rahe ho competition ke kiye start hone mai 5 din baki h ....

Main--- yaar maidam toh bus se bol rahi h but hum train se jayenge morning 8 baje chalti h ..aur dopahar ko chod degi din bhar rest aur agle din competition mai part leke wapas...

Aditiya rinky --- ye best rahega....... Yaar train ka safar bahut comfortable rahega .....

Aditiya—manisha tu dhayan rakhna....

Manisha--- main tikh hu aur ye rahega macho men sath mai...toh dhayan rakh lega

Rinky—kya karwayegi .....isai aisa ha ha ha ha ....

Janha hum hans rahe the toh koyi aisa bi tha jiske chehre se kuch aur he nazar araha tha .......jiski umid muje bi nahi thi kyoki main bi umid nahi kar sakta hu ki mera itna khatarnak roop dekhne ke baad koyi school se mujse dushmani karega par lagta h kuch toh raj h uska bi......

Main ghar par room mai leta tha aur gahri soch mai tha tab shweta ayi aur mere pass late gayi....

Shweta--- acha toh kya socha ja raha h ..

Main--- usai gale laga ke life ke bare mai

Shweta – jara muje bi batana

Main--- pata h shweta maine pichle kafi waqt mai itne logo ko mara h ki kabhi kabhi sapne mai bi khud ko khun ka pyasa dekhta hu....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera jeevan aisa bi hoga ....janha mere apne muje marne wale honge....maine kabhi kisi se pyar ke alawa kuch nahi manga bachpan mai pyar ke liye tarsa bada huva toh ek ke sath jindgi jeene ke sapne sajaye aur usai thoda sa ajmaya toh wo gareeb samajke chod gayiii....meri zindgi mai he itni muskile kyo h....

Shweta--- sach bolu toh bhai apko chahne wale jayda h sabse pahle main ......jo ap par ankh band kar ke viswas karti h phir mamta kavita jinhe maine dekha nahi par muje pata h wo apko bahut chahti h.....phir sage bhai se bhadkar pyar karne wala bhai sunil.....uski barabari toh koyi nahi kar sakta h.....jo ap pe ane wale har khatre ko apne par le leta h.....aur deepika dii wo toh bus sabkuch apko manti h sayad he koyi din aisa ho jab apko yaad na kare....aur toh aur SP mam jo apko sayad like bi karti h mere mummy papa jo apko apna beta mantr h ....badepapa kaptaan aur mousi....aur one only Dada ji jinke sacrifies ke agai sabka pyar chota h aur kitne naam ginau ap batao bheema chacha... choti chachi... mana jindgi muskil h par apko chahne wale jayda h ...aur apko chahne wali bi hogi kahi toh hogi aur mere bhai ke liye bhagwan khud bhejega usai.....bilkul poonam ke chand jaisi hogi khubshurat apke jeevan mai Chand ki khubsoort roshni ki trah apke jeevan mai khusiya bhar degi....

Main--- sir ko chum kar love u so much my sweet sis..

Shweta--- bhai ayegi ....apki jindgi mai bahut bahut khusiya ....ayengi aur warna hum bhai bahan toh h he chill karenge no tension no fikar bus khusiya he khusiya...

Hum dono hamari he bate kar rahe the toh dur....Kanhi

Poonam oh poonam

Poonam—ayi chacha.....ayi....

Chacha--- tu itna kaam mat karwaya kar wo bachi h uske maa baap ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...kya kahenge wo...

Chachi – main thodi he karwati hu wo khud karti h ..

Chacha--- sab pata h muje ...dekh meri beti h wo usai jara bi dukh huva kabhi toh tu samaj liyo muje jeete ji maar degi tu wo mere bhai bhabi ki akhiri nishani h unhone muje apne bete ke jaise pala tha jo ye sab h unki he mehnat ka...

Tabi poonam ajati h...

Chacha--- beti sans le le ab meri baat soon agle mahine koombh ka mela lagega haar 12 saal mai ek baar hota h toh hum bi chalenge...pavitra snan ka mouka dubara mile ya na mile.....

Poonam—ji baba maine bi bus kitabo mai padha h sirf....

Chacha ja ab aram karle itna kaam mat kar nahi toh tere papa ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...bolenge meri chori se itna kaam karwata tha...

Poonam—na baba ap jaise chacha chachi ho jiske pass unhe kabhi dhuk ho he nahi sakta h aur ap mere maa baba ho toh ek beti apne maa baap ki seva nahi karegi toh kiski karegi....

Chachi—aur jo choro se ladti h...wo...

Poonam—wo toh ulaj rahe the toh dhar diye ....2 kaan ke niche

Chachi—dekha.. aise toh ye apne pati ke bi maar degi

Chacha--- ha ha ha.....akhir beti kiski h...

Poonam—aur kya main na jane wali ap dono ko chod ke main toh ap dono ke sath he rahungi....



Night 11pm...



Shivani--- ji mam yes ....ha jaisalmer ka sappu supplier h wo agai delhi maal supply karta h .....

Sonali--- hmmm good job shivani

Shivani--- one thing mam they have planning for some thing big inhone bahut badi planning ki warna itne hathiyaar aur rdx kisliye mangwaye

Sonali--- matlb

Shivani--- mam ye dusri khep h ek pahle achuki h toh ap sochiye hathiyaaar toh india mai bi mil jate phir itni mehnat kyu...aisa kya h jismai ye bhari tabahyi macha sakte h....

Sonali--- hmm point toh h ok tum find out karo koyi clue aur sappu supplier ke pappu pe tharo ache se bakega wo jarur kaam ka ...main yanha pata karti hu aur jald he tumse milti hu.....



Chief so ....

Sonali--- sari information deti h..

Chief--- aisa kya h ....jiski ye planning kar sakte h itne bhari matra mai....



Ek secret place pe

Oye habibi pathan khus huva . ye toh car bilkul police gaadi jaisa lagta h aur ye wardi bi pura police jaisa he dikhta h...oye tum toh pathan ko Khus kar diya....

Vithal—ap hamare junior victer ke khass mehmaan ho apke liye jaan hajir h....bus ap thodi meri tarif kar dena .

Pathan--- oye ek baar ye kaam ho jaye hum tumko malamaal kardega...

Vithal—jarur hoga ....



Aj ke liye itna he ....

Nice update Sandeep singh nirwan bhai. Is update se aage ke story ka bahut sa plan aapne show kiya hai.
Jais sayad apna hero aur 3rd heroine poonam kumbh ke mele me milenge.
Aur ye dher sare rdx nd all ye sayad mele me hi boom visphot ki planing ke liye hi hoga. Aur mujhe lagta hai usi se bachate hue apna raj waha poonam se milega. Aur ye baat mujhe kafi achilagi ki aapne richa ko aaj dikhaya sath mete bhi ache se dikhaya ki ab wo thoda bahut bol rahi hai. Warna purane roop me show krte to maja nahi aata. Ab dekhte hai dono ka milna kab hota hai. Aur ye compition me kya hoga? Kya waha bhi koi dhamal kamal hoga ya waha se kuch new start hoga ab ye sb to aage hi pata chlega.
Chliye jldi se wait rahega aapke next update ka.

 

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Update 89.....

Finding past—begins

alone feelings—Suruwaat....



After 2 days......

Sham ka samay tha aur Main ek hill ke top pe baitha huva tha....


mere samne suraj din bhar apni roshni se sabke jeevan ko roshan kar ke aram karne ke liye ja raha tha ......meri nighaye bus doobte suraj ko he dekh rahi thi jis ki dheemi halki roshni shanti de rahi thi...ek ajib sa sukun mil raha tha akele baith ke .....

Man mai vichar chal rahe the jinhe main khud nahi samaj pa raha tha....aur bus samne dekhe ja raha tha ek tak........suraj doob gaya tab mere dil se awaj ayi kya meri jindgi ke dhuk u he doobenge kabhi .....mera vaise bi koyi nahi h is duniya mai aur jo h wo bi paiso Ke liye marna chahte h ....aur sayad yahi kaaran mere maa baap ko marne ka raha hoga....par gareeb hona bi toh paap h richa bi toh isiliye dur hoti gayi thi mujse ....kabhi samajne ki kosis he nahi ki ....kaas ek baar viswas kar liya hota.... aj bi yaad h usne muje hawas ka bhukha kaha tha......richa agar main hawas ka bhukha hota toh tumhare sath toh sex nahi kiya tum jarur bahki par maine har baar roka.....tum hamesa kahti thi i trust you ...but tut gaya kuch he palo mai .. main samajta hu sab tumhari galti nahi h meri bi bahut galtiya h aur main ata tumhe manane bi kyoki aj bi main tumhe beintiha pyar karta hu....mera dil aj bi tumhe bahut yaad karta h....tum agar dubara sakal na dikhane wali baat na kahti toh jarur tumse milta aur tumhe manata par sayad mere jeevan mai tumhara sath itna he tha....main tumhe yaad kar bahut tadap liya hu ab ek nayi suruwat karunga .....ab tumhe dil ki gahrayiyo se nikalne ki puri kosis karunga tum mera adhura khawab he rah jaogi is janam mai .sabki tarah mera pyar bi adhura rah jayega...bus meri yahi duwa h tum hamesa khus raho.....miss you.... hamara pyar aj mere dil aur yado ki gahrayiyo mai dab gaya h hamesa ke liye ..........thodi dair u he baithne ke baad...main sunya ki awasta mai ho gaya janha na mera dil na dimag kuch kar par raha tha bus meri nazar samne ki taraf thi.....kuch dair baad mera phone ring hone laga....

Main--- Hello

Ye hello hello kya hota h bhai 5 hours ho gaye ....hum bhukhe baitha h ...ap 2 hours ka kahke gaye the ...

Main--- time dekh kar raat ke 9 baj gaye h ....main half hour mai aya....call cut....aur mere chahre pe muskaan agayi.



Dur .....



Ladki -richa hamesa tu yanha ati h ghumne aisa kyo....

Richa--- dil karta h mera ek sukun milta h yanha par yanha apnapan sa lagta

Ladki--- yaar achi jagah ghuma kar na pub mai chalte h aj raat dance masti karenge yanha ke pub mast h.

Richa--- dil nahi karta h mera ...Aur chalte huve road ke kinare baithe ek shaks jo gitar baza raha tha usai ek doller deti h ..aur uske pass khadi ho jati h

Ladki--- tu jab bi ati h isai 1 doller deti h aur yahi rahti h kafi dair aisa kyo...

Richa--- pata nahi bus main jab bi ati hu ye yanhi baitha milta h .....iske music mai ek ahsas h jo muje khichta h .....

Ladki--- tu aur teri soch chal ghar chalte h....

Richa tu chal main gitaar sunke ati hu....aur wo khadi hoke auro ke sath gitaar sunne lagti h..

Richa ka ye roj ka routine tha ...wo roj guitar sunti aur ek doller deti aur ghar ajatiiii.......

Aj bi wo behad dhayan se he sun rahi thi ..Richa itne dhayan se sunti thi ki usai ek sukun ek ahsas sa milta tha us dhuun mai usai aisa mahus hota tha ki wo usi ka dard bayan kar rahi h ...jab dil halka mahus hota wo wapas ghar ki taraf lout aati thi bus isi pal he dard kuch kam hota tha ab wo thoda bolti thi par ab bi wo ek kamre mai band hokar apne khayalo ki duniya mai chali jati ....jaise un khayalo mai koyi usai kisi se milne ka besabri se intezaar ho.... ...aur unhi khayalo mai samay bitati.....aj bi wo sapno ki duniya mai thi par uske chehre pe pareshani ke bhav the jissai uska chehra pasine se bhiga huva tha aur chehre pe dar aur pareshani ke bhav arahe aur ja rahe the ...aur wo dheere dheere dheere bol rahi thi nahi nahi nahi.......aur uski nind khul jati h.....uski ankho se ansuu beh nikalte h.....



Jaisalmer.......




Shivani--- fast fast

Kuch waqt baad

Sam village jo jaisalmer se 40 km ki duri par h apne dunes yani rait ke tilo aur tourism ke liye famus h wanha 2 open jeeb ka picha shivani police team ke sath kar rahi thi ....dono jeeb agai jake divied ho jati h...

Shivani--- left wali jeeb ka picha karo aur uske typer par fire karo....

Kafi dair ki masakat ke baad jeeb wale hath ajate h

Shivani---bahut ud liya ab tere pankh kutar du ya bolega

Admi--- chup raha ...

Ek gun fire sound aya aur sath he chillane ki awaj aur ek niche pada tadfadane laga ...

Shivani—tu bolega ya...iski trah tadfadta huva marega

Admi--- ha bolunga na ye saman delhi jana tha ye afganistaan se Pakistan ke raste bharat mai ata h....

Shivani--- wanha kisko dete ho

Admi--- ye muje nahi pata par yanha ye maal hum sappu supplier ko dete h jo agai bhejta h muje itna he pata maidam...Muje chod do...

Shivani--- chod dungi aur ye bata sappu pappu supplier kanha milega

Admi--- bikaner uska adda wanhi h border ke karib ..wo yanha ata rahta h ...

Shivani--- inspector ko ishara kar deti h azad kar do .....

Aur piche 2 gun fire sound ati h ...



Next day Morning...



Main--- ab tikh ho tum .....ghoom sakti ho

Manisha—yaar dr ne rest kaha tha letai rahne ko nahi kaha tha ...tum toh meri maa se bi bure ho is mamle mai....wo muje ghumne toh deti ..thoda bahut par tumne toh hilne he nahi diya upar se tumhari wo goliya......par aj pata nahi kaise maan gaye tum....

Main---Dr ne ok kaha h isliye... toh tikh h aj beauty ko bike se khuli hawa khilata hu ......ok ....aj school chalogi jao ready ho jao ..Isilye subhe jagaya h...

Manisha ke sath chal pada school manisha ko mere sath dekh ke janha sab ladkiya jal rahi thi ......toh ladko ke seene pe saanp ajgar sab lotpalate kha rahe the....class mai firse rounak agayi thi ab hum charo sath he baithe the

Aditiya—toh buddy kab ja rahe ho competition ke kiye start hone mai 5 din baki h ....

Main--- yaar maidam toh bus se bol rahi h but hum train se jayenge morning 8 baje chalti h ..aur dopahar ko chod degi din bhar rest aur agle din competition mai part leke wapas...

Aditiya rinky --- ye best rahega....... Yaar train ka safar bahut comfortable rahega .....

Aditiya—manisha tu dhayan rakhna....

Manisha--- main tikh hu aur ye rahega macho men sath mai...toh dhayan rakh lega

Rinky—kya karwayegi .....isai aisa ha ha ha ha ....

Janha hum hans rahe the toh koyi aisa bi tha jiske chehre se kuch aur he nazar araha tha .......jiski umid muje bi nahi thi kyoki main bi umid nahi kar sakta hu ki mera itna khatarnak roop dekhne ke baad koyi school se mujse dushmani karega par lagta h kuch toh raj h uska bi......

Main ghar par room mai leta tha aur gahri soch mai tha tab shweta ayi aur mere pass late gayi....

Shweta--- acha toh kya socha ja raha h ..

Main--- usai gale laga ke life ke bare mai

Shweta – jara muje bi batana

Main--- pata h shweta maine pichle kafi waqt mai itne logo ko mara h ki kabhi kabhi sapne mai bi khud ko khun ka pyasa dekhta hu....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera jeevan aisa bi hoga ....janha mere apne muje marne wale honge....maine kabhi kisi se pyar ke alawa kuch nahi manga bachpan mai pyar ke liye tarsa bada huva toh ek ke sath jindgi jeene ke sapne sajaye aur usai thoda sa ajmaya toh wo gareeb samajke chod gayiii....meri zindgi mai he itni muskile kyo h....

Shweta--- sach bolu toh bhai apko chahne wale jayda h sabse pahle main ......jo ap par ankh band kar ke viswas karti h phir mamta kavita jinhe maine dekha nahi par muje pata h wo apko bahut chahti h.....phir sage bhai se bhadkar pyar karne wala bhai sunil.....uski barabari toh koyi nahi kar sakta h.....jo ap pe ane wale har khatre ko apne par le leta h.....aur deepika dii wo toh bus sabkuch apko manti h sayad he koyi din aisa ho jab apko yaad na kare....aur toh aur SP mam jo apko sayad like bi karti h mere mummy papa jo apko apna beta mantr h ....badepapa kaptaan aur mousi....aur one only Dada ji jinke sacrifies ke agai sabka pyar chota h aur kitne naam ginau ap batao bheema chacha... choti chachi... mana jindgi muskil h par apko chahne wale jayda h ...aur apko chahne wali bi hogi kahi toh hogi aur mere bhai ke liye bhagwan khud bhejega usai.....bilkul poonam ke chand jaisi hogi khubshurat apke jeevan mai Chand ki khubsoort roshni ki trah apke jeevan mai khusiya bhar degi....

Main--- sir ko chum kar love u so much my sweet sis..

Shweta--- bhai ayegi ....apki jindgi mai bahut bahut khusiya ....ayengi aur warna hum bhai bahan toh h he chill karenge no tension no fikar bus khusiya he khusiya...

Hum dono hamari he bate kar rahe the toh dur....Kanhi

Poonam oh poonam

Poonam—ayi chacha.....ayi....

Chacha--- tu itna kaam mat karwaya kar wo bachi h uske maa baap ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...kya kahenge wo...

Chachi – main thodi he karwati hu wo khud karti h ..

Chacha--- sab pata h muje ...dekh meri beti h wo usai jara bi dukh huva kabhi toh tu samaj liyo muje jeete ji maar degi tu wo mere bhai bhabi ki akhiri nishani h unhone muje apne bete ke jaise pala tha jo ye sab h unki he mehnat ka...

Tabi poonam ajati h...

Chacha--- beti sans le le ab meri baat soon agle mahine koombh ka mela lagega haar 12 saal mai ek baar hota h toh hum bi chalenge...pavitra snan ka mouka dubara mile ya na mile.....

Poonam—ji baba maine bi bus kitabo mai padha h sirf....

Chacha ja ab aram karle itna kaam mat kar nahi toh tere papa ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...bolenge meri chori se itna kaam karwata tha...

Poonam—na baba ap jaise chacha chachi ho jiske pass unhe kabhi dhuk ho he nahi sakta h aur ap mere maa baba ho toh ek beti apne maa baap ki seva nahi karegi toh kiski karegi....

Chachi—aur jo choro se ladti h...wo...

Poonam—wo toh ulaj rahe the toh dhar diye ....2 kaan ke niche

Chachi—dekha.. aise toh ye apne pati ke bi maar degi

Chacha--- ha ha ha.....akhir beti kiski h...

Poonam—aur kya main na jane wali ap dono ko chod ke main toh ap dono ke sath he rahungi....



Night 11pm...



Shivani--- ji mam yes ....ha jaisalmer ka sappu supplier h wo agai delhi maal supply karta h .....

Sonali--- hmmm good job shivani

Shivani--- one thing mam they have planning for some thing big inhone bahut badi planning ki warna itne hathiyaar aur rdx kisliye mangwaye

Sonali--- matlb

Shivani--- mam ye dusri khep h ek pahle achuki h toh ap sochiye hathiyaaar toh india mai bi mil jate phir itni mehnat kyu...aisa kya h jismai ye bhari tabahyi macha sakte h....

Sonali--- hmm point toh h ok tum find out karo koyi clue aur sappu supplier ke pappu pe tharo ache se bakega wo jarur kaam ka ...main yanha pata karti hu aur jald he tumse milti hu.....



Chief so ....

Sonali--- sari information deti h..

Chief--- aisa kya h ....jiski ye planning kar sakte h itne bhari matra mai....



Ek secret place pe

Oye habibi pathan khus huva . ye toh car bilkul police gaadi jaisa lagta h aur ye wardi bi pura police jaisa he dikhta h...oye tum toh pathan ko Khus kar diya....

Vithal—ap hamare junior victer ke khass mehmaan ho apke liye jaan hajir h....bus ap thodi meri tarif kar dena .

Pathan--- oye ek baar ye kaam ho jaye hum tumko malamaal kardega...

Vithal—jarur hoga ....



Aj ke liye itna he ....

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