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Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

Story ki ending kya hogiiii


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Sanki Rajput

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Update 88 to bohot hi dhamakedar raha. Kya hi kahu bro gajab ka action tha yaar apan ko feel areli thi ekdum gajab, ju ke action scenes kaabil-e-taarif hai bhai usme koi sak nhi..... Hatt's off to your writing man.....and kyaa hi haal kiya uss "Riper" d......mai literally sach bolu uski haalat n maine pahle hi soch lo thi jab Shweta ne kaha tha "jab wo aaye to puch lena" bhai sach kahu to you are suspense creator man and uske saath saath to ab ju ek great director ban rahe ho kyun be Xabhi aur Itachi_Uchiha aur haa Sandeep singh nirwan ka side liya to dekh liyo be.......:bat:..........:evillaugh:

Take care bhaya.......
 
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Xabhi

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Update 88 to bohot hi dhamakedar raha. Kya hi kahu bro gajab ka action tha yaar apan ko feel areli thi ekdum gajab, ju ke action scenes kaabil-e-taarif hai bhai usme koi sak nhi..... Hatt's off to your writing man.....and kyaa hi haal kiya uss "Riper" d......mai literally sach bolu uski haalat n maine pahle hi soch lo thi jab Shweta ne kaha tha "jab wo aaye to puch lena" bhai sach kahu to you are suspense creator man and uske saath saath to ab ju ek great director ban rahe ho kyun be Xabhi aur Itachi_Uchiha aur haa Sandeep singh nirwan ka side liya to dekh liyo be.......:bat:..........:evillaugh:

Take care bhaya.......
Mai kyo kisi or ka side lunga jb tumne Pahle se hi le rakha hai... Ham sab to Pahle se hi ek side hai na...
 

Xabhi

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Sanki Rajput

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Sach to kaha tha kisi ne pyaar agar ho jaaye to usse koi gair-e- gaalib bhi n rok paaye to hum naakam koshish bhi kyaa kre.....haaye ye dil ka mamla hota hai mere yaaro ye dil se ki jaati hai n ki dimag se aur wo dil ki kasish jo dard ban ke ahat si daur rahi hai uss (Richa) kuri-d-dil me !! Hmm lagta to sabhi ko yahi hai ki ye dard bhulana asaan hoga par n mere yaaro ye dard dil ka haal bayan kregi n ki wo tumhare lamho ka jo tumne uss pyaar ke saath bitaye par haa ye jarur kah du iss pyaar me koi gair nhi hota jaise Richa ko wo guitar bajane ki dhun uske dil me uth rahe dard ko bhavo ke sahare bahar nikaal phek rahi thi,wo pal to jaise ek lamha sa ban jaana chahiye jaise tumne bogh sa utaar diya ho apne dil se kuch pal ke liye par yahi to sahi ho raha hai apne Richa ke liye......Khair jald hi wo iss dard ko sambhal bhi legi jo uske liye mushkil to bohot hoga par asaan bhi nhi hoga !!

Raj to jaise apne unn jindagi ke dard ke uttaar chadhao me fas gaya yaa kahu to unn lamho ke bhaavo ne usse iss kadar pirona suru kar diya ki uske dard bhi kuredne se lage jo lajmi hi thi aur uske khud ke chacha ne huhh ?? literally Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya apan bhi kabhi iss daur se gujra tha yaa kaho to abhi bhi gujarta hi hu aur ye dard bayaan Krna bhaaye ye dil aur dimag mera chorta hi nhi jo iss hath d chadd gaya ki likhta hi rah gaya !!

Aur wahi apne raj ka wo pyar jo jald hi usse dhundti hui yaa kaho to uski kismat usse milayegi hi par ye asaan nhi hoga,par kahte hai n pyaar kuch bhi krwa sakti hai kuch bhi aur ye baat yaha sab jaante hi honge aur ye baat yaha lagu bhi hogi, aur Poonam hame kumbh ke mele milegi akhir wahi to unn dono ke pahli dastaan banegi literally a romantic vibes not it's a action vibes I can smell it !! Khair dekhte hai

And and and...... haaye ye adaaye iski ankho pe wo chasme ki kashish kya hi adaaye puri kayaamat dhaa rahi hai ye Shivani to akhir one time bandi hai apni and iske itne form me kah reli hai to lagta hai aage kahar dhaane waali hai.......


Bohot hi jabardast raha ye update 89 bohot hi jabardast Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya boleto emotional sa hogaya tha ye update par apan thahra inn mamlo me PHD waala :roflol: kyun be Xabhi

Take care........
 

Xabhi

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Sach to kaha tha kisi ne pyaar agar ho jaaye to usse koi gair-e- gaalib bhi n rok paaye to hum naakam koshish bhi kyaa kre.....haaye ye dil ka mamla hota hai mere yaaro ye dil se ki jaati hai n ki dimag se aur wo dil ki kasish jo dard ban ke ahat si daur rahi hai uss (Richa) kuri-d-dil me !! Hmm lagta to sabhi ko yahi hai ki ye dard bhulana asaan hoga par n mere yaaro ye dard dil ka haal bayan kregi n ki wo tumhare lamho ka jo tumne uss pyaar ke saath bitaye par haa ye jarur kah du iss pyaar me koi gair nhi hota jaise Richa ko wo guitar bajane ki dhun uske dil me uth rahe dard ko bhavo ke sahare bahar nikaal phek rahi thi,wo pal to jaise ek lamha sa ban jaana chahiye jaise tumne bogh sa utaar diya ho apne dil se kuch pal ke liye par yahi to sahi ho raha hai apne Richa ke liye......Khair jald hi wo iss dard ko sambhal bhi legi jo uske liye mushkil to bohot hoga par asaan bhi nhi hoga !!

Raj to jaise apne unn jindagi ke dard ke uttaar chadhao me fas gaya yaa kahu to unn lamho ke bhaavo ne usse iss kadar pirona suru kar diya ki uske dard bhi kuredne se lage jo lajmi hi thi aur uske khud ke chacha ne huhh ?? literally Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya apan bhi kabhi iss daur se gujra tha yaa kaho to abhi bhi gujarta hi hu aur ye dard bayaan Krna bhaaye ye dil aur dimag mera chorta hi nhi jo iss hath d chadd gaya ki likhta hi rah gaya !!

Aur wahi apne raj ka wo pyar jo jald hi usse dhundti hui yaa kaho to uski kismat usse milayegi hi par ye asaan nhi hoga,par kahte hai n pyaar kuch bhi krwa sakti hai kuch bhi aur ye baat yaha sab jaante hi honge aur ye baat yaha lagu bhi hogi, aur Poonam hame kumbh ke mele milegi akhir wahi to unn dono ke pahli dastaan banegi literally a romantic vibes not it's a action vibes I can smell it !! Khair dekhte hai

And and and...... haaye ye adaaye iski ankho pe wo chasme ki kashish kya hi adaaye puri kayaamat dhaa rahi hai ye Shivani to akhir one time bandi hai apni and iske itne form me kah reli hai to lagta hai aage kahar dhaane waali hai.......


Bohot hi jabardast raha ye update 89 bohot hi jabardast Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya boleto emotional sa hogaya tha ye update par apan thahra inn mamlo me PHD waala :roflol: kyun be Xabhi

Take care........
Tumhari PHD Hamne adde pr Di hai
 
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