Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update 235 Posted masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka

Next update on
Sunday afternoon
Between 12 to 2 pm

abse updates afternoon mai ayenge thand ko dekhte huve afternoon time tikh rahega

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Sattu ki dono n milker kia sutayi ki h ab danger bhai ka namber h dekhte h unke saath kia hota h

Ha ab danger ko danger h

Dada ji shaitan ki karastani ka pata chal gaya h raj ko mana ker dia nahi tow shaitan ab tak shaitan lok pahoch gaya hota
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h

Unka heesab kayde se hoga aur solid hoga ...bus kuch waqt aur h ......

Fantastic amazing mind blowing update Sandeep singh nirwan bhai...

Ye kesi jaga h jaha ladkiyo ko Kaata ja raha h or kya ye log human organ nikal k bechate h kya per agar ye log human organ bechane k liye kar rahe h

Bus jald he khul jayega agle update mai bro ho saka toh kal mil jayega update....

to shirf ladkiyo k hi kyu ladko k kyu nahi or ye insaan k bhes me janwar kon he jo logo ko jinda hi Kat deta h ye to dekhne layak hoga

Bilkul insaan ke bhes mai vahsi darinde h agle update mai sayad clear kar dunga.....

or raj bhi do jaga se injured ho gaya h or jab ye dono ki takrar hogi to raj ko thodi problem ho sakti he ab to next update ka besabri se intezaar he...

Bilkul raj bi injured h ye ab sochna hoga kaise niptege itne bade rakhsas se ...

S & S udher jaipur m danger bhai ko dhoondhne m lagi huwi h or idher Raj sultaan n jo apna adda bataya tha usme maut ka khel khelne m laga huwa h lekin yaha per lashe or ladkiyon ko bhandh kyon rakkha gaya h

Ye sawal wakayi samjhne layak h ki raj ko yahi address kyo diya par wanha kuch toh suspicious h....

kia woh shaitan jaisa dilhne wala aadmi inko khata h ya fir body part nikala jaata h in ladkiyon ka
Baherhal dekhte h Raj ab iss gende se kaise paar pata h
Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai

Raj ko pahli baar aise khatre ka samna karna pada h....jisai usai bahut sikhne ko milega.....Thank you shandar review ke liye

 

[Story readers]

Update 91

Finding past begins

Following different scenes....

Raj first encounter...... shadaw fighter



Chief---well done ...ab der na karke is danger bhai ka pata karo ab kuch din he bache h hamare pass ....jismai hume ye bi lata nahi h ki kya hone wala h ....aur kaise hone wala h....

Sonali sir – hum bus kuch dair mai he nikal rahe h.....

Chief--- ok main commissioner ko inform kar deta hu......

Sonali ji sir...

3 pm ek innova aur unhe protect karti 2 police jeep road pe siren ke sath bhagi ja rahi thi .....

Shivani--- but mam danger ki location pata nahi h aur jaipur bahut badi jagah...

Sonali--- yes but local police ki help se he dhund payenge let see kya hota h....jaipur commissioner ko inform kar diya hoga sir ne ..ap contact karke is danger naam ke bande ko dhundne ke liye kah do...



Toh raj ki taraf kya huva h aj wo morning se jante h....

In train....8am

Raj manisha rinky safar kar rahe the ...

Raj--- in mind kaise pata chalega....kaise jab tak ye pashupati...aur inspecter nahi milta tab tak kuch nahi pata lagega.....

Rinky manisha raj ki taraf dekh kar apas mai bate kar rahi thi par raj apni he gahri soch mai tha...abhi sab apni udhed bhun mai tha

Manisha—kya baat h...

Rinky batane se man halka hoga

Raj--- muskarakar Har kisi ki jindgi mai bahut gahre raj hote h aur sawal hote h jinka jawab dundna hota h wahi main kar raha hu....talash ....

Rinky—aisi kya talash h...



Raj— is sawal ka pura jawab toh mere pass he nahi h isi sawal ka jawab toh main khud dhund raha hu ....khair chodo in bato ko ....taiyari kaisi h

Dur se 2 jane teeno par nighaye jamaye huve the ...Jo har moment par najar jamaye huve the aur pal pal ki khabar agai de rahe the....jiski bhanak raj ko nahi thi ........



Delhi office ......



Sunil--- tu muje 4 cr ka jawab de de aur free ho ja warna tuje samaj nahi ayega tera kya huva

Maneger ap muje dhamka rahe h mera jija Sp h main nahi darta .....

Tabi awaj ayi chatak chatak chatak chatak...aur ye awaj office ke bahar tak sunayi di ..aur sab office ki taraf dekhne lage...

Sunil--- coller tikh karke ye dhamki muje mat dena warna tu aur tera Sp dono gaand khujlate maroge samje....

Office ke bahar employees baat kar rahe the ye h koun ...kya personality h smart h brave h manegers ki kayde se le li h...

Dusra employee pahle toh nahi dekha jarur badi baat h isliye finance wale pure staff ki le rakhi h...

Sunil--- Reports ki detail banake agai bhej deta h aur usai ek reply ata h....aur uske chehre pe muskaan ajati h



Toh dusri taraf



Raj nanitaal pahuch kar rest kar raha tha....usai intezar tha raat ke hone ka ...kyoki raat ko he usai nikalna tha....aur jaise jaise raat gahrati ja rahi thi uski nighaye kathore hoti ja rahi thi ......aur raat ke barah baje ka alarm bajte he wo hotel ki khidki khol nikal gaya... bahar usai bike park mili usne phone mai location nikali aur nikal gaya speed se karib 15 km bike drive karne ke baad jungle ke andar ek makan dikha jo 2 manjila aur ghost house lag raha tha



...dekhne par he body mai dar ki sihran doudne lage Raj ne asspass charo taraf nazar uthayi.....aur dekhne laga usai charo taraf sirf sunsaan aur jaanwaro ki awaje he arahi thi...raat ke gahre sannate mai sirf raj ki he chalne ki halki halki awaje arahi thi....

Raj man mai ye kaise ho sakta h ki yanha koyi nahi h sultaan ne toh yanhi ka address confirm kiya tha...muje sittu se bi confirm karna chahiye tha....

Raj dheere dheere gate ke pass pahucha aur andar jhakne ki kosis ki par kuch na dikha.....pure bangle ko charo taraf ache se dekhne ke baad ...

Raj man mai yanha kuch toh gadbad h itne sunsaan ilake mai bada makan aur koyi nahi ...muje sabse pahle upar he check karna chahiye h ....phir dhire dhire deewar mai nikale pather aur khidke ke chajjo ke sahare upar chad gaya upar se wo dheere dheere niche jane ke liye sahi rasta dhundhne laga....par ek he rasta dikha darwaje ka jisai niche ja sakta tha par uska dil nahi maan raha tha aur usai bahut intense feeling arahi thi ...par usai andar toh jana toh he tha toh usne gate ke pass kaan laga ke suna toh andar se koyi awaj nahi arahi thi....

Raj --aisa lag raha h jaise yanha koyi rahta he nahi ....but jis tarike se maine sultaan ko tourture kiya h wo jhut toh bol nahi sakta tha.....

Phir wo roof se niche ek kadki ki chath pe utra aur latak kar khidki ko push kiya toh nahi khuli thoda aur thaka dene pe khidki khul gayi ...

Aur jaise he khidki khuli andar se ek hawa ka jhonka aya ...wo dheere se andar uatra aur dekhne ki kosis ki par kuch nazar nahi araha tha pura makan andhre mai tha sirf chand ki halki halki roshni arahi thi khidkiyo se tab usai apne piche kuch mahsoos huva

Whoos ki awaj se ek chakuu nikal gaya aur piche deewar pe lag gaya ....raj agar niche na jhuka hota toh uski gardan mai hota wo chaku .....raj ke sarir mai ek jhurjhuri daud gayi par usne turant he khud par kabu kar liya aur dekhne ki kosis ki janha se usai khatra mahsus huva tha par kuch nahi dikha ...raj ko samaj he nahi aya ki kya huva aur jab wo samjne ki kosis kar raha tha tab ek chaku uski jhang mai aake laga....aur uski ek ghuti si cheek nikal gayi....par usne turant he khud ke dard par kabu pa liya samajne ki kosis karne laga...aur 1 second mai he samne kudh gaya...

Whoos aur ek chaku piche diwar mai ghoos gaya raj ne apna dagger nikala aur samne ghumaya par khali gaya par usai ek awaj agayi usne ek final chance liya jo agar kamyaab na hota toh wo seriously bahut injured hota....aur phir dubara se bina deri left ka move dikha ke right mai gaya

Whoos.....aur khachhh..... ki awaj ayi aur gardan jamin pe gir gayi aur uske piche dhad girgaya...raj ne niche dhayan se dekha toh ek bilkul black dress pahne aur chehre pe bi black mask lagaye admi ki dead body giri huvi thi...

Raj oh my god isliye yanha itni shanti h inhone shoes he aise pahne h jisai thodi si bi awaj na ho..raj ne usai tatol ke dekh tha toh usai kuch bi nahi mila sivaye lighter aur sigrate ke ...

Jaise he andar ghusa toh ek lambi gallary thi


aur usmai bi shanti thi raj samaj gaya ki is baar bahut khatra h wo ek ek kamra check karne laga ek kamre mai usne lighter jalaya toh uski hairani se phati rah gayi usai yakeen he nahi ho raha tha


Samne ek ladki ko latkaya huva tha raj jab pass gaya toh usko bi dil dahal gaya samne latki ladki ke body ke parts nika liye gaye the. raj turant bahar aya aur niche ke floor ki taraf jane laga toh ek koune ka door open tha wo dheere dheere uski taraf gaya usne dhayan se dekha toh ek saya deewar ke sahre tik kar baitha tha raj ne pass se dekha toh ek ladki deewar ke sahre besudh padi thi


aur uski nabs chal rahi thi uske samne table par bahut sare cheer faad ke aujaar pade the....ab raj ne socha aur u wo wapas gaya aur ek lakdi ko uthaya aur uske charo taraf kapda lapet jala diya aur galary mai fenk diya aur intezar karne laga kuch he dair mai 2 kaale saye dheere dheere




hath mai chaku liye agar andhera ho toh bilkul bi na dikhe upar aye aur lakdi ko dekha phir aas pass dekhne lage par unhe kuch na dikha...phir ankho he ankho mai ishara kiya aur agai ane lage raj jo ek kamre se dhek raha tha wo position mai khada ho kuch pal baad ge ek cheek ghunj gayi watavaran mai raj ne dagger uske dil ke andar ghusa diya tha....aur dusre wale ne ek sath kayi chakuu fenke par raj ne admi ki body ko agai he rakha aur uski ko uthake chakuu wale ke upar fenk diya... dono ke bich dagger se waar suru ho gaya dono he ek dusre ke waar ko rok rahe the aur bahut tezi se ek dusre pe attack kar rahe the...Raj ki speed kafi tez thi aur usai mouka mil he gaya aur us killer ko bi maar diya

Raj---huuu trained assasians wo bi yanha aisa kya h yanha its too dengerous place ye jarur sultan ka trap raha hoga ki marte marte bi mere marne ka intezaam kar jaye ....par yanha kuch toh khass h jo itni security h ye log 50 logo par bi bhari h...aur raj stairs se first floor par aya toh usai andhere ke karan kuch nahi dikh raha tha usne ek pair dheere se rakha toh charr ki awaj huvi ...raj ye to woodan floor h ispe toh chalna bi muskil h aur chalunga toh awaj hogi yani ye bi ek trap h... ..usne jab dubara agai dekha toh gallary ke dusri side 2 laal ankhe dikhi jo usai he ghur rahi thi...

Raj ye kya h ab tabi usai ghurahat ki tez awaj ayi aur wo 2 laal ankhe uski taraf bhag ke ane lagi..raj ne hath mai pakde dagger par kaske grip tight kardi aur pass ate he dagger uspar chala diya par uske danto ne raj ka hath pakad liya aur gusai se hilane laga raj ne bina deri kiye dagger jaldi se uske gale mai utar diya kaatne ke karan dard ke mare raj ki bi halat buri ho gayi thi raj ne jab uske jabde dekhe toh jaldi se dur ho gaya aur uske muu se nikla pitbull...


raj khada hokar har ab aur savdhani se har kamre ko check karne laga kuch nahi mila sirf deefreezer aur jaar pade huve the usai ek koune mai ek rasta basement ki taraf ja raha tha raj ne usai dekha aur jane se pahle asspass se ujale ke liye 2 furniture ki lakdi ko jala liya aur ek ko niche ki taraf fenk diya jisai ye saaf ho gaya niche koyi nahi h raj sidhiya utar niche aya aur jagah ko dekha tha wo ek hall tha aur uske andar darwaja tha raj ne kaan laga ke suna toh koyi awaj nahi ayi phir darwaje ke lock ko bahar se khola jo bina tale ke lock tha darwaza

chaarrrrr.........

ki awaj se dheere dheere khula aur samne jo raaz ne dekha usko dekh uski ankhe fati rah gayi....andar ek lash


tangi huvi thi bich mai toh ek koune mai ladki bandhi huvi thi


toh
ek koun mai hath pair se bandhi niche leti huvi thi
2 ladkiya naam matra ke kapdo mai besudh bandhi



padi huvi thi raj ne ek ladki ko hilaya toh wo drugs ke nashe mai chur thi bus ek jo chair se bandhi thi usai he halka hosh tha .

Raj tum tikh ho

Ladki marna nahi marna nahi marna nahi.uske chahre pe bahut dar tha...aur uski bahut buri halat thii..wo raj ko dekh kanpkapane lagiiii

Raj hey. Hey its ok koyi nahi marega koyi main bachane aya hu....

Ladki--- nazar uthakar dekhti h phir bolti h wo maar denge hume le chale wo kaat deta h sabko .

Raj-- koun kaat deta h ...

Ladki--- wo janwar h bada sa ...bahut bada.....wo yanhi h asspass he usai awaj agayi hogi wo ata he hoga...

Raj--- ghabrao nahi bata sakti ho kitne admi h yanha...

Ladki--- wo araha hoga wo jinda katega ....koyi nahi bachega

Raj man mai par maine toh 3 ko he mara h... Aur har jagah check karke aya hu sivaye ...ek jagah ke....

Tabhi dur ek taraf se tannn tannn awaj ane lagi aur kisi lohe ki chij ke ghasitne ki awaje ane lagi.....

Raj ne jab us taraf dekha toh first time uska dil bi jor se dhadkne laga....







Aj ke liye itna he .....
likes aur revoes dene ka.....
Jald milte h....

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Nice

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Kaha beech mjhdhar m chhodd diye bhaai bhtt mjaa aa rha tha pdhne m
Although bhtt bdhiya mod liya h. KAhani ne jbrdst bhai

Bus ap mod he mod h aur story action ki aur he chalegi

Fantastic update

Good update

Thank you so much for your precious and energetic reviews keep supporting

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Awesome update

Fantastic update

Awesome update

Ahan! Raaj bhi dheela pad gaya ab dekhty hai samny Kon hai jis Sy Raaj bhi Dara

Hmm 7 feet ka daanav .....

Raj kaa dil dhurakta hay zaroor muger samnay walay kee lassh Kay tukray gerty hay chahay woo koi bhi huu yea bhi muray gaa kun Kay RAJ Asal may YUMRAJ Kaa Autar hay or YUMRAJ ko bhi bhala mertioo aaty hay

Kya he dialogue diya h yamraj ko mirtyu ati h kya dekhte h kaise sambhalta h issai

Zabardast update

Thank you so much for your love and support
keep supporting

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 90

Finding past—begins

S & S -- Madness....



Dadaji--- bheema shaitan ki detail nikal jara kanha kanha gaya h ek saal mai aur kitne paise nikale h pichle 5 saal mai..aur ye bi kisai mila h ....jarur kuch na kuch hath lagega...

Bheema--- babuji yanha ka toh pata kar lunga munim ji se kahke par wanha ka ...ka kaise pata chalega .

Dadaji--- wanha ki chinta mat kar wanha apne ap detail nikal jayegi tu yanha kheto aur factory pichle 5 saal ka pura heesab nikalna har ek account ka aur ghar ke har ek jane ke account ki detail nikalna....aur kavita mamta ki security ke liye wanha ki agency ko bol de security aur bhade de .....

Bheema--- ji babuji......

Dadaji--- chalo dair savare ek toh samne aya.....par ye un logo mai se nahi h jisne sahdev ko maraya ho sakta h ....ye sirf paiso ka bhukha h par galti toh ki h saja bi milegi....par iske piche koun h ......ye Janna jaruri h .....raj ko toh maine samjha diya h ki wo sabra se kaam le aur jab tak hum kuch nahi karenge jab tak confirm na ho jaye.aur insabke piche koun h uska pata na lag jaye uske baad he nirnay lenge..

Bheema--- ji babuji apne sahi kiya...par babuji mamta kavita ko bulana nahi h .........ab toh raj bi agaya h....

Dadaji--- bulayenge bus raj dehradhun jis wajah se gaya h wo wajah puri ho jaye...kyoki ek atit ka heesa toh saaf ho jaye ..taki dusri taraf ka rukh kiya jaye....aur phir usai bi wo kya kahte ho tum aj ke bache suprise ha wo denge un dono ko yanha bulake.....

Choti chachi jo ye bate sun rahi thi unki ankho se bi ansuu bah nikle ki jald he unki betiya unke pass hogi aur wo man he man boli muje maaaf kar dena meri bachiyo ki mane tumhe itni dur kar diya apne bhai se. Par ab tumhari maa tumhe kabhi nahi rokegi...kabhi nahi tokegi ..



Toh andar haveli mai ...call par

Shaitan--- apke kahne pe maine risk liya aur marne ki supar di... Ha usi ko di thi ha ha purai rs advance mai diye the par wo abhi tak koyi jawab nahi aya.kuch gadbad na ho gayi ho ....

Samne se--- kuch nahi hoga....tumhe paise miljayenge muje bus jagmaal singh ki barbadi chahiye h uska rutba chahiye h uska sab kuch chahiye h...

Shaitan--- le lo waise bi wo muje apna beta mante he nahi h aur muje bi sirf paisa chahiye h unhone sab sahdev ke naam kar rakha h uska wans khatam hoga tabi sab mera hoga ....aur jo bacha h property mai wo us randi supriya ko de diya h ..

Samne se toh bus karta ja jo main kahu ....hum bi thakur h jaban aur vachan ke pakke h...bus mera kaam pura ho jaye ..

Shaitan--- agar mere baap ko pata lag gaya na toh jinda nahi chodega kisi ko bi ....kuch karo ap

Samne se sab sahi hoga....bus intezar karo sabra ka fal meetha hota h...





In call....

Deepika--- hi kya kar rahi h

Shweta--- mamta kavita se baate kar rahi thi di..wo jald he india ane wali h

Deepika--- maine kal he baat ki thi ..maza ayega jab wo bi yanha ajayengi sab sath honge ...raj bahut khus ho jayega

Shweta--- ha di bahut maza ayega khub dhum machayenge

Deepika--- ha kyu nahi tuje yahi toh dikhta h har waqt. tere wanha ke kisai pata h muje samji waise soon hum wanhi arahe h next month haridwar ganga snan ke liye hamara group ayega toh main 2 din ke liye ajaungi tumhare pass...usai mat batana....bilkul bi

Shweta--- yeh huvi na baat aur main bi parso he arahi hu apke pass.apse pahle he he he.. waise ao ao apko apke bhai ki gopiya dikhaungi khub maze mai h apka ladla bhai.. Chalo mai jati hu bhai awaj mar rahe h ap batana mat ok bye love u dii...



Anthony base...

Anthony---kya tu sach bol raha h...

Anthony bhai-- ha bhai main sach bol raha hu ...2 din baad jayega competition ke liye ...apke dono sikar h rajeev ko chod ke...

Anthony tab toh maza ayega Ab dekhta hu wanha kaise bachega....pichli baar toh nirwana bich mai bacha le gaya tha dono ko par ab kaise bachega mujse...

Anthony bhai--- maine toh pahle bi help ki thi rinky kidnaping mai bi par apke admi he kamjor padh gaye ...har pal ki khabar di thi john ko...

Anthony--- chote galti sabse hoti h john taiyari se he gaya tha par un teeno ne gadbad kardi par isbaar chuk nahi hogi main bi chupke se he waar karunga ....taki moka he na mile .....

Anthony bhai--- bhai is baar chodna mat warna agai apne drugs ke dandhe mai dikat karega ....

Anthony chinta mat kar waar is baar satik hoga bina galti ke ......john ka badla hum jarur lenge john mere bhai ki tarah tha....ek sacha wafadar insaan...is baar kaam pura hoga he hoga ...mere 50 cr nagad rakhe tha us godam mai wo bi le gaya tha wo.....sale se dugna wasoolunga.... Bahut badi galti ki h hamse ulaj ke..



Toh idhar haridwar Raka ke adai pe tring tring tring tring....

Raka---- vithal....bhai ..ka phone wo bi is waqt ek toh sala dinmaan aise he kharab chal rahe h upar se ye bhai ka call hey parbhuu bachana..phir call utha kar hello...bhai...wo

Vithal—Raka ek mouka aur de raha hu agle mahine muje itne ...bande aur tu chahiye h aur koyi Galti nahi...honi chahiye h bada plan h ..isliye puri hosiyari baratni h ...

Raka---- bhai main wanhi hu wo apke liye top ka kunwara maal uthana h na haridwar bahut ayengi....isliye wanhi hu 5 utha rakhi h aur 10 aur utha lunga apko 15 kadak ladkiya dunga...

Vithal—wo karta rahna chutiye par ye bahut jaruri h agar kaam kar diya toh mala maal ho jayega tu samja ..hamara naam international ho jayega afganistan ki party h... Ye kaam huva toh victer bhai se milne ka mouka milega

Raka----vivivi...victer bhai se milne ka mouka ...bhai bhai jarur pura hoga kaam har haal mai Bus ap aise he muj par ashriwaad banaye rakhe .....

Vithal – kaam pura ho jaye phir pura Uttrakhand tera ...isai jayda ashriwaad na de sakta main tuje....

Raka----bhai yahi bahut h...

Call cut...





Dehradhun----

Madhu—toh kitne din ke liye ja rahe ho ... competition ke liye...pahle bataya he nahi tumne...pata nahi kounsi duniya mai rahte ho....kanhi mehmano se dil toh nahi laga liya h...

Main--- ha ha ha ap bi na majak acha tha mam 3 din ka tour h aur 2 din ghumenge toh 5 din atleast lag he jayenge....tab tak shweta apke sath he rahegi...hamesa ki trah iska dhayan rakhna..ye badmaashi bahut karti h....

Shweta--- aaaaha...bade aye main ja rahi hu delhi papa mumy ke pass aur deepika dii aur sunil bhai ke pass ....Ek week ke liye sick leave ki application de dungi he he he...

Madhu --- ok toh raj jab bi ao milna muje bi kaam h ....tumse

Main--- ha kyo nahi jarur mam....Apko kabhi bi koyi bi help chahiye boliyega ....muje khusi hogi..Acha main kuch kaam ja raha hu dhayan rakhna ap dono....

Madhu—man mai jarurat toh h ab kaise batau......





Kuch dair baad rajeev office...

Rajeev--- ha raj kar diya h...tum befikra hoke ja sakte ho ...bura na mano toh ek baat meri manlo

Main--- Kahiye na apko jo kahna ap bari bari pucha mat kijiye aur purani baate bhul jayiye ...

Rajeev--- raj mera experience tumse jayda h isliye suggestions h wo 3 officer jinhe sonali mam bi sath rakhne ke liye kaha tha unhe team mai liya h wo kaam ayenge ache h teeno.. trained h young h ...sharp minded h

Main--- agar apko tikh lagte h toh done h but double check kar lena kyoki main bina ajmaye kisi pe trust nahi karta hu toh ap ek baar check karlo phir ok lage toh is jagah ki puri information nikal ke rakhe taki dikat na ho......... Aur mera kaam ka kuch pata laga ....

Rajeev--- jald he pata lag jayega raj pashupati naam ke gunde aur us time ke inspecter ka bi agar permotion huva hoga toh aj bi on duty par hoga warna retiered huva toh aur time lagega

Main--- ok sir chalta hu 2 din baad nikalna bi h thodi padhyi bi karlu..

Rajeev--- ha rinky bata rahi thi ....ok tc........

Main---ok sir ....



Delhi .......

Meeting mai agaye sabhi ..

PA—Ji sir but pahle toh koyi aur .

Tumahara jitna kaam h utna he karo ...samjhe..

PA—ghabrakar ji ji sir...

Meeting room...

Employee – sir ye past five year ki report h ...

Samne se--- are u kidding with me maine order diye the last 10 year tak ki financial report chahiye h....

Employee—ji ji sir wo dundhni padegi...

Samne se--- dhundhni padegi par tumhe tumhari job aur isai baitha ke rakho jab tak main documents na check karlu...

Employee sir sir sir...par ussi guards ghasit ke le gaye

Samne se--- assistan maneger ko bulao aur ek hour mai muje report chahiye h.......main office mai hu...

Phir call milkara dii kanha ho ap main delhi hu ....

Deepika--- tu ruk main ati hu....

Sunil--- jo address de raha hu us office ana ok .... Lunch sath ke karenge.....



Next day......

Sunil sonali..deepika anjana sath break fast kar rahe the ....

Sonali--- nahi usai rahne do wo wanha kaam se busy h karne do hum sab baad mai chalenge wanha mele mai snan karne ke baad

Deepika ye best rahega ..

Sunil main bi ajaunga ...

Sonali--- 15 din he toh bache h bus....



Wanhi dehradhun.....

Main--- are meri maa Sab packing kar li h kal nikalna h aj nahi ... Aur yaar bacha nahi hu

Rinky aur manisha hans rahi thi ...

Shweta ok ...ok gusa kyo hote ho pichli baar apki packing deepika di ne ki yaad h na aur main bi kuch din phir ghar ja rahi hu.....

Main--- ok koyi dikat nahi chacha chachi ko mera charansparsh dena.... aditiya tune pata lagaya uske bhai ka

Aditiya-- nahi bhai koyi detail nahi h....

Raj--- muskarakar ok koyi baat nahi pata karte rahna ......



Meeting room

Chief--- hume specially kumbh ke mele ke andar gadbad na ho upar se order mila h ....toh guys har cctv ko check karo proper working mai ho nahi h toh immediately tikh karwao ....Aur tum sonali.....apni team ke sath sab par nazar rakho......

Sonali--- sir main kal raat rajasthan ke liye nikal rahi hu lead mili h sayad kuch pata lag Jaye ....

Chief--- tumhara jana jaruri h kya.....

Sonali--- yes sir main nahi chahti kuch gadbad ho muje wo supplier jinda chahiye h isliye....kyoki maal supplier ko deliver Saturday ko he hota h isliye main khud pura operation handle karungi....

Chief--- good then go and give me some good news ...



Next day in

Raat ko sonali and apne juniar ke sath train mai safar kar rahi thi...

Junior – mam ye kaam toh bikaner police bi handle kar sakti thi easily phir hum he kyo ...

Sonali--- baat wo nahi tum samjho samne se firing huvi toh ye log bi cross firing karenge usmai wo mar sakta h aur phir yr raj he rah jayega ki ye maal kisko supply huva aur delhi kiske pass pahuchta h...

Junior – ji mam samaj gaya par akele hum dono he....

Sonali--- muskara kar koyi sak h...kya..

Junior ghabrakar na na nahi mam....



Toh dusri taraf 3 police car ka kafila jaisalmer se bikaner ki taraf 100 km prati ghante ki raftar se ja raha tha....jismai shivani aur uski team thi..

Shivani--- jis kaam ke liye muje yanha transfer kiya gaya tha ye ab jald he solve ho jayega ...aur isi udhed bhun mai usai ek nind ki jhapki agayiii.....



Kuch time baad

Mam mam

Shivani--- hmmm

Enter kar gaye h bikaner....

Shivani--- man mai lagta h jayda kaam karne ki wajah se gahri nind agayi.....Ok ek kaam karo mam ke ane mai time h guest house ki taraf le lo aur sab taiyaar ho jao 7 baje tak mam bi ajayengi ....

7.15 am...

Sonali--- all set

Sab yes mam..

Sonali--- again check your weapon...2nd koyi sappu supplier ko shoot nahi karega leg ke ilawa ..3rd sappu ke ilawa wanha jitne bi ho hatho hath shoot kar dena wo sub militants h ap par jara bi daya nahi karenge....

Shivani--- wo yanha se 50 km dur RD650 ke pass chipa huva h aur yanha ke 20 jano ki police team support karegi.......

Sonali--- then lets go...

Toh wanhi sappu supplier...

Sappu...bc ye rdx abhi tak kyo nahi pahucha h ...danger bhai ko kya jawab dunga mai wo toh kha jayenge....sala ye nashediyo par viswas he nahi karna chahiye h bc nasha karke ghusa hoga kisi ke andar ....1 hour aur wait karunga phir nikalta hu...khud he jake dekhna padega...Tabi phone ring hota h

Sappu ha bol

Samne se bhai police agayi h charo taraf se gher rakha h....

Sappu – tum koune wale ghar se firing karo main dusri taraf se nikal jaunga

Ji bhai aisa he hoga...

Idhar

Sonali--- shivani tum yanha se har check karti huvi ao main dusri taraf se ati hu baki gher kar rakhna koyi matlb koyi bi nahi jane paye

Shivani mam--- hum dono he yanha se check karte huve chalte h aur baki 4 ka group baant kar search karega jaldi hoga kaam

Sonali—good done search....

Ye sab 4 ke group mai baant kar chal diye RD 650 nahar ke kinare basa chota sa gaanv h ...aur is gaanv ke jagah sappu supplier chupa huva h...

S &S agai bhad rahi thi har ghar ko check kar ke tab gaanv ke ek koune se firing suru ho gayi aur sabhi police wale us ghar ki taraf gherne ke liye jane lage...Firing aur tez ho gayi...

Shivani --- mam chale lagta h wo mil gaya h...

Sonali--- mere piche ao hame us taraf nahi is taraf jana h ...ye sab sirf bali ke bakre h...

Aur huva bi wahi firing ki awaj sunke sabi police divert ho gaye ek ghar ki taraf aur sappu apne 3 chamcho ke sath dusri taraf se bhag nikla...

Shivani--- wo dekhiye mam bhag raha h wo

Sonali—wo chahiye he chahiye chalo usai pakadte h ..

Chor police ki doud suru huvi registhan mai wo charo gaanv ke unka roj ka kaam tha toh...

Piche unke 2 bhukhi sherniya jo sikar ko jinda pakadna chahti thi par wo ye bhul gayi ki ye unka ilaka tha sappu unhe apne piche piche 5 km dur bhaga kar apni chupne ki jagah le aya janha 7 jane aur chupe huve the ...unhone dur se he sappu aur uske piche ati 2 police wali ko dekh liya aur bahar nikalkar gher liya dono ko.....

Sappu--- ha ha ha fans gayi madam police ....

Shivani--- bhadwe ye gun gaand khujlane ke liye nahi di h....

Sappu--- maidam jo apko janna h wo goliya chalne se toh na milne se raha

Sonali---police ka danda jab pichwade mai ghusta h na toh sab bolne lag jate h...

Sappu--- madam apko sach janna h toh inse lad kar aur jeet kar ana hoga banduk ke sahare toh main kuch na batane wala aur yanha har minut keemti h madam location change ho jati h...sab kismat ka khel h ap sochlo ap jeeti toh sab bataunga...warna ap jaankar bi apna pichwada he ghisati rah jaogi....

S &S ek dusre se bahut din ho gaye h ...toh aj ho jaye.....

Sonali--- chal bhadwo ajao...

Samne se 4 bhagte huve aye toh Sonali ke piche shivani khadi thi ...jaise he pahle wale ne hath ghumaya marne ke liye sonali jhuk kar dodge kar gayi aur piche se shivani ne uske mu par punch jad diya aur uske piche hote he agai khadi sonali ne uski chest par kick maar di wi piche wale 2 se takra gaya aur teeno niche gire phir jo ek khada tha usai shivani jump kar ke mu pe ghutne ki di toh wo piche ki taraf khiska toh sonali turant uske piche agayi aur ek mukka uski reed ki haddi pe mara aur wo dard se bilbilata huva jameen pe gir gaya...

Sappu--- kyo ro tumse ye choriya na sambhal ri maro.....

Aur sabhi 10 ek sath aake gher liya aur sonali aur shivani bi pith se pith laga kar khadi ho gayi....aur samne dekhne lagi jaise shivani ne ek ko muka mara toh dusre ne laat mari pait mai yahi haal sonali ka huva sonali ne ek ka muka block kiya aur ek muka usai mara itne mai dusre ne ek kick breast pe mar di ...dono dard mai ek pait ko toh breast ka sahlane lagi aur phir sonali bhag ke samne wale mu par he apna ghutna de mara.....aur wo piche udta huva gira aur tabi usko side se ek laat padi aur wo ludak gayi aur wo admi dubara marne aya toh uske dono akhrot ko hath se pakad liya side se ek mu par padi. Par sonali ne puri takat se akrot ko pakad ke masak diya tab ek kick aur uske mu pe padi toh piche giri.....aur yahi haal shivani ka tha usne bi apna ghutna ek ke taango ke bich mai dhar diya tabi ek na uske piche se baal pakadke niche gira diya aur 2 jane ek sath laat marne lage toh usne ek ke leg ko pakad ke gira diya aur uske upar chad 2 mukke he mare the ki ek laat mu pe lagi aur piche gir gayi......ab 7 jane unhe khade huve dekh rahe the aur wo dono niche giri huvi thi dono phir se khadi huvi aur bhid gayi ek maar rahi thi toh 2 pad rahi thi ..

Toh udhar Rd 650

Mam kanha h..

Dusra sonali mam bi nahi h..

Inspector 1 ye bahut badi dikat ho gayi yanha sappu supplier bi nahi

Inspector 2 dundho jaldi har disha mai jao aur signal jamer ko hata do saare contact mai rahna madam nahi mili toh blender ho jayega 5 km ke radius tak dhundho jaldi 10 us ragisthan ki taraf jao...

Toh idhar...

Sonali aur sonali bi ghayal ho rakhi thi aur udhar abhi bi 5 jane pairo pe khade the..

Sappu--- maidam muskil h ya toh goli maar do ya jane do ...kyo khoti kar rahi ho muje ...

Shivani--- hoto se khun puchke agar tu mard h toh jaban ka pakka rahna hum jab tak pairo pe khadi h tab tak nahi haari h...

Sonali--- bus ab bahut huva

Aur dono apni belt kholne lagi...

Sappu--- are madam ye kya nangi ho rahi ho wo hum baad mai waise he karlete ..

S &S ek dusre ki taraf dekh kar belt ko hath mai pakad liya ....aur samne chal di ...

Sonali--- ne belt ki bina deri kiye samne wale ke sir par maar diya aur belt ka agai ka hissa padte he khun ka funwara foot pada aur sir pakad kar baith gaya dusre ne hath se marne ki kosis ki toh left hand se block kiya aur belt ki ek sath kayi waar sir par aur leg par kiye .....toh udhar shivani ne toh ek hath mai belt aur ek hath mai pen le liya jaise he ek ne muka mara pen gusa diya hath mai aur dard se chilla bi nahi paya tha ki uske sir par 2 belt ki maari charo khane chit ho gaya aur dusre ki taraf gayi belt ghumaya aur jaise he samne wale ne belt ki taraf hath kiya pen gardan mai phir jaang mai ghusa diya aur lait te he uski pith pe belto ki marne lagi 5 minut mai pancho jamin pe the ...aur ab scene ye tha ki jamin pe sappu baitha aur samne S&S baithi ..gusai mai khadi thi

Shivani--- bhonk warna ab hume ghanta fark nahi padta ki tu jinda rahe ya mare..

Sappu--- muje jane doge toh bataunga ...

Sonali--- ok promise jaise tu teri baat ka pakka h main bi pakki hu jane dungi koyi goli nahi chalayega khus....

Sappu--- ok ye sara maal danger bhai jata h jo jaipur mai baithte h aur wanhi se delhi jata h is baar 2sri baar h isai pahle 3 admi aye toh unhe jaipur pahuchaya tha...

Shivani--- 3 admi kya naam aur koyi photo h kya...unki

Sappu--- mam nahi muje itna he pata h par ha ye first time h aur wo log apas mai pathan bhai baat karke bol rahe the

Dur se

Inspecter wo udhar kuch dikhayi de raha h lagta h aur thoda agai ane pe ye toh madams lag rahi h all team all team follow sun direction on desert side ...jaldi aye...

Idhar..

Sonali--- meri jaban ki paki hu main ja sakta h toh chala ja ....ab hamri bari h....

Aur dono belto se marne lagi sabko kya taang kya pichwada sari jagah se kapde faate huve the maar se aur dur se bhag ke arahe police walo ko unki cheekhe sunayi de rahi thi ....aur jab police wale pass aye toh dona ki halat dekh aur unke chehre ka gusa dekh koyi pass nahi phir

Inspector mam mar jayenge

Shivani--- toh marna he h inhe dont make noice keep silent

Aur phir dono apna gussa sappu supplier par utarne lagi aur usko itna mara ki mare ya jiya yahi nahi pata lag raha tha phir 2 goli mari aur rawana ho gayi ....bechare police wale baki ko leke aye jinka pura sarir udhda huva tha ...

Half hour baad

Shivani--- mam muje is pure mission mai apke sath team mai shamil hona h...

Sonali--- mere sath maut he ghumti h pith piche koun goli maar de pata nahi h main aise aise logo se uljhi huvi h jo bahut powerfull h tum abhi tikh ho ye as a senior nahi bus friend samaj kar kah rahi hu...

Shivani--- mam aj itna fun i mean kuch kiya h aisa mahus huva bilkul free hand bina kisi pressure ke job ki h....muje aise he rahna....

Sonali--- muskara kar ...ok then....next target danger ...



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Update 91

Finding past begins

Following different scenes....

Raj first encounter...... shadaw fighter



Chief---well done ...ab der na karke is danger bhai ka pata karo ab kuch din he bache h hamare pass ....jismai hume ye bi lata nahi h ki kya hone wala h ....aur kaise hone wala h....

Sonali sir – hum bus kuch dair mai he nikal rahe h.....

Chief--- ok main commissioner ko inform kar deta hu......

Sonali ji sir...

3 pm ek innova aur unhe protect karti 2 police jeep road pe siren ke sath bhagi ja rahi thi .....

Shivani--- but mam danger ki location pata nahi h aur jaipur bahut badi jagah...

Sonali--- yes but local police ki help se he dhund payenge let see kya hota h....jaipur commissioner ko inform kar diya hoga sir ne ..ap contact karke is danger naam ke bande ko dhundne ke liye kah do...



Toh raj ki taraf kya huva h aj wo morning se jante h....

In train....8am

Raj manisha rinky safar kar rahe the ...

Raj--- in mind kaise pata chalega....kaise jab tak ye pashupati...aur inspecter nahi milta tab tak kuch nahi pata lagega.....

Rinky manisha raj ki taraf dekh kar apas mai bate kar rahi thi par raj apni he gahri soch mai tha...abhi sab apni udhed bhun mai tha

Manisha—kya baat h...

Rinky batane se man halka hoga

Raj--- muskarakar Har kisi ki jindgi mai bahut gahre raj hote h aur sawal hote h jinka jawab dundna hota h wahi main kar raha hu....talash ....

Rinky—aisi kya talash h...



Raj— is sawal ka pura jawab toh mere pass he nahi h isi sawal ka jawab toh main khud dhund raha hu ....khair chodo in bato ko ....taiyari kaisi h

Dur se 2 jane teeno par nighaye jamaye huve the ...Jo har moment par najar jamaye huve the aur pal pal ki khabar agai de rahe the....jiski bhanak raj ko nahi thi ........



Delhi office ......



Sunil--- tu muje 4 cr ka jawab de de aur free ho ja warna tuje samaj nahi ayega tera kya huva

Maneger ap muje dhamka rahe h mera jija Sp h main nahi darta .....

Tabi awaj ayi chatak chatak chatak chatak...aur ye awaj office ke bahar tak sunayi di ..aur sab office ki taraf dekhne lage...

Sunil--- coller tikh karke ye dhamki muje mat dena warna tu aur tera Sp dono gaand khujlate maroge samje....

Office ke bahar employees baat kar rahe the ye h koun ...kya personality h smart h brave h manegers ki kayde se le li h...

Dusra employee pahle toh nahi dekha jarur badi baat h isliye finance wale pure staff ki le rakhi h...

Sunil--- Reports ki detail banake agai bhej deta h aur usai ek reply ata h....aur uske chehre pe muskaan ajati h



Toh dusri taraf



Raj nanitaal pahuch kar rest kar raha tha....usai intezar tha raat ke hone ka ...kyoki raat ko he usai nikalna tha....aur jaise jaise raat gahrati ja rahi thi uski nighaye kathore hoti ja rahi thi ......aur raat ke barah baje ka alarm bajte he wo hotel ki khidki khol nikal gaya... bahar usai bike park mili usne phone mai location nikali aur nikal gaya speed se karib 15 km bike drive karne ke baad jungle ke andar ek makan dikha jo 2 manjila aur ghost house lag raha tha



...dekhne par he body mai dar ki sihran doudne lage Raj ne asspass charo taraf nazar uthayi.....aur dekhne laga usai charo taraf sirf sunsaan aur jaanwaro ki awaje he arahi thi...raat ke gahre sannate mai sirf raj ki he chalne ki halki halki awaje arahi thi....

Raj man mai ye kaise ho sakta h ki yanha koyi nahi h sultaan ne toh yanhi ka address confirm kiya tha...muje sittu se bi confirm karna chahiye tha....

Raj dheere dheere gate ke pass pahucha aur andar jhakne ki kosis ki par kuch na dikha.....pure bangle ko charo taraf ache se dekhne ke baad ...

Raj man mai yanha kuch toh gadbad h itne sunsaan ilake mai bada makan aur koyi nahi ...muje sabse pahle upar he check karna chahiye h ....phir dhire dhire deewar mai nikale pather aur khidke ke chajjo ke sahare upar chad gaya upar se wo dheere dheere niche jane ke liye sahi rasta dhundhne laga....par ek he rasta dikha darwaje ka jisai niche ja sakta tha par uska dil nahi maan raha tha aur usai bahut intense feeling arahi thi ...par usai andar toh jana toh he tha toh usne gate ke pass kaan laga ke suna toh andar se koyi awaj nahi arahi thi....

Raj --aisa lag raha h jaise yanha koyi rahta he nahi ....but jis tarike se maine sultaan ko tourture kiya h wo jhut toh bol nahi sakta tha.....

Phir wo roof se niche ek kadki ki chath pe utra aur latak kar khidki ko push kiya toh nahi khuli thoda aur thaka dene pe khidki khul gayi ...

Aur jaise he khidki khuli andar se ek hawa ka jhonka aya ...wo dheere se andar uatra aur dekhne ki kosis ki par kuch nazar nahi araha tha pura makan andhre mai tha sirf chand ki halki halki roshni arahi thi khidkiyo se tab usai apne piche kuch mahsoos huva

Whoos ki awaj se ek chakuu nikal gaya aur piche deewar pe lag gaya ....raj agar niche na jhuka hota toh uski gardan mai hota wo chaku .....raj ke sarir mai ek jhurjhuri daud gayi par usne turant he khud par kabu kar liya aur dekhne ki kosis ki janha se usai khatra mahsus huva tha par kuch nahi dikha ...raj ko samaj he nahi aya ki kya huva aur jab wo samjne ki kosis kar raha tha tab ek chaku uski jhang mai aake laga....aur uski ek ghuti si cheek nikal gayi....par usne turant he khud ke dard par kabu pa liya samajne ki kosis karne laga...aur 1 second mai he samne kudh gaya...

Whoos aur ek chaku piche diwar mai ghoos gaya raj ne apna dagger nikala aur samne ghumaya par khali gaya par usai ek awaj agayi usne ek final chance liya jo agar kamyaab na hota toh wo seriously bahut injured hota....aur phir dubara se bina deri left ka move dikha ke right mai gaya

Whoos.....aur khachhh..... ki awaj ayi aur gardan jamin pe gir gayi aur uske piche dhad girgaya...raj ne niche dhayan se dekha toh ek bilkul black dress pahne aur chehre pe bi black mask lagaye admi ki dead body giri huvi thi...

Raj oh my god isliye yanha itni shanti h inhone shoes he aise pahne h jisai thodi si bi awaj na ho..raj ne usai tatol ke dekh tha toh usai kuch bi nahi mila sivaye lighter aur sigrate ke ...

Jaise he andar ghusa toh ek lambi gallary thi


aur usmai bi shanti thi raj samaj gaya ki is baar bahut khatra h wo ek ek kamra check karne laga ek kamre mai usne lighter jalaya toh uski hairani se phati rah gayi usai yakeen he nahi ho raha tha


Samne ek ladki ko latkaya huva tha raj jab pass gaya toh usko bi dil dahal gaya samne latki ladki ke body ke parts nika liye gaye the. raj turant bahar aya aur niche ke floor ki taraf jane laga toh ek koune ka door open tha wo dheere dheere uski taraf gaya usne dhayan se dekha toh ek saya deewar ke sahre tik kar baitha tha raj ne pass se dekha toh ek ladki deewar ke sahre besudh padi thi


aur uski nabs chal rahi thi uske samne table par bahut sare cheer faad ke aujaar pade the....ab raj ne socha aur u wo wapas gaya aur ek lakdi ko uthaya aur uske charo taraf kapda lapet jala diya aur galary mai fenk diya aur intezar karne laga kuch he dair mai 2 kaale saye dheere dheere




hath mai chaku liye agar andhera ho toh bilkul bi na dikhe upar aye aur lakdi ko dekha phir aas pass dekhne lage par unhe kuch na dikha...phir ankho he ankho mai ishara kiya aur agai ane lage raj jo ek kamre se dhek raha tha wo position mai khada ho kuch pal baad ge ek cheek ghunj gayi watavaran mai raj ne dagger uske dil ke andar ghusa diya tha....aur dusre wale ne ek sath kayi chakuu fenke par raj ne admi ki body ko agai he rakha aur uski ko uthake chakuu wale ke upar fenk diya... dono ke bich dagger se waar suru ho gaya dono he ek dusre ke waar ko rok rahe the aur bahut tezi se ek dusre pe attack kar rahe the...Raj ki speed kafi tez thi aur usai mouka mil he gaya aur us killer ko bi maar diya

Raj---huuu trained assasians wo bi yanha aisa kya h yanha its too dengerous place ye jarur sultan ka trap raha hoga ki marte marte bi mere marne ka intezaam kar jaye ....par yanha kuch toh khass h jo itni security h ye log 50 logo par bi bhari h...aur raj stairs se first floor par aya toh usai andhere ke karan kuch nahi dikh raha tha usne ek pair dheere se rakha toh charr ki awaj huvi ...raj ye to woodan floor h ispe toh chalna bi muskil h aur chalunga toh awaj hogi yani ye bi ek trap h... ..usne jab dubara agai dekha toh gallary ke dusri side 2 laal ankhe dikhi jo usai he ghur rahi thi...

Raj ye kya h ab tabi usai ghurahat ki tez awaj ayi aur wo 2 laal ankhe uski taraf bhag ke ane lagi..raj ne hath mai pakde dagger par kaske grip tight kardi aur pass ate he dagger uspar chala diya par uske danto ne raj ka hath pakad liya aur gusai se hilane laga raj ne bina deri kiye dagger jaldi se uske gale mai utar diya kaatne ke karan dard ke mare raj ki bi halat buri ho gayi thi raj ne jab uske jabde dekhe toh jaldi se dur ho gaya aur uske muu se nikla pitbull...


raj khada hokar har ab aur savdhani se har kamre ko check karne laga kuch nahi mila sirf deefreezer aur jaar pade huve the usai ek koune mai ek rasta basement ki taraf ja raha tha raj ne usai dekha aur jane se pahle asspass se ujale ke liye 2 furniture ki lakdi ko jala liya aur ek ko niche ki taraf fenk diya jisai ye saaf ho gaya niche koyi nahi h raj sidhiya utar niche aya aur jagah ko dekha tha wo ek hall tha aur uske andar darwaja tha raj ne kaan laga ke suna toh koyi awaj nahi ayi phir darwaje ke lock ko bahar se khola jo bina tale ke lock tha darwaza

chaarrrrr.........

ki awaj se dheere dheere khula aur samne jo raaz ne dekha usko dekh uski ankhe fati rah gayi....andar ek lash


tangi huvi thi bich mai toh ek koune mai ladki bandhi huvi thi


toh
ek koun mai hath pair se bandhi niche leti huvi thi
2 ladkiya naam matra ke kapdo mai besudh bandhi



padi huvi thi raj ne ek ladki ko hilaya toh wo drugs ke nashe mai chur thi bus ek jo chair se bandhi thi usai he halka hosh tha .

Raj tum tikh ho

Ladki marna nahi marna nahi marna nahi.uske chahre pe bahut dar tha...aur uski bahut buri halat thii..wo raj ko dekh kanpkapane lagiiii

Raj hey. Hey its ok koyi nahi marega koyi main bachane aya hu....

Ladki--- nazar uthakar dekhti h phir bolti h wo maar denge hume le chale wo kaat deta h sabko .

Raj-- koun kaat deta h ...

Ladki--- wo janwar h bada sa ...bahut bada.....wo yanhi h asspass he usai awaj agayi hogi wo ata he hoga...

Raj--- ghabrao nahi bata sakti ho kitne admi h yanha...

Ladki--- wo araha hoga wo jinda katega ....koyi nahi bachega

Raj man mai par maine toh 3 ko he mara h... Aur har jagah check karke aya hu sivaye ...ek jagah ke....

Tabhi dur ek taraf se tannn tannn awaj ane lagi aur kisi lohe ki chij ke ghasitne ki awaje ane lagi.....

Raj ne jab us taraf dekha toh first time uska dil bi jor se dhadkne laga....







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Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

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[Sandeep singh nirwan]

अद्भुत,
आपके पिछले 2 अपडेट मे आपने सोनाली और शिवानी के माध्यम से जो तहलका मचाया है, क्या बोलूँ मै.... उफ्फ
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गौर फर्माइयेगा....
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हम बलबानो की जननी है, तुमको बलबान बना देंगे ।
हम अबला है या सबला, तुमको यह ध्यान दिला देंगे ।।
हम शांतिवित भी, ज्ञानी भी, हम ही झान्शी की रानी भी ।
यह अटल प्रतिज्ञा ठानी है, भारत स्वाधीन करा देंगे ।​

अस्वथामा भाई आपकी ये पंखतीया नारी की शक्ति को स्पष्ट रूप से प्रदर्शित कर रही हैं जो आज मुझे दिल से बेहद पसंद आई मेरे अपडेट को नारी प्रधान बनाने को सार्थक कर गई

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बस कुछ छंद ही ज़ेहन मे थे, जो आपकी रचना पढ़ने के बाद खुद ब खुद मेरे मुख पे आगयी ।
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खैर, पिछले अंश की बात करते है...
राज शायद अपने दुश्मनो के कोई जाल मे फसने बाला है, या फिर फस चुका है...
और आखिर ये है कोन सी जगह जहाँ इंशानो के साथ ऐसी बर्बरता की गयी ।
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बात आपकी लेखनी की करे तो, वक़्त के साथ वो और भी सुदृढ़ ही होते जा रही है

ये अभी तक एक जाल पर्तित हो रहा है पर सुलतान ने ईसाई यथा पर भेजा एच ये बहुत सोचने वाली बात है

Sandeep singh nirwan बंधु।
जिस तरह आपने, उचित समय पे सही चित्र का चयन किये है वो काबिले तारीफ़ है ।
लेकिन अंत मे आपने किस सांढ़ जैसे राक्षष को दिखा दिये । साला अपने को भी डर लग गया । और हमारे हीरो राज को भी ।
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बाकी, अंश मज़ेदार था, आपको आगे के लिए शुभकामनाएं .।
धन्यबाद

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