- 9,887
- 64,897
- 204
Nav varsh ki bahut bahut shubhkamnaye ...upar wala apke sabhi sapno ko pura kare...aur ye varah apke aur apke pariwar ke liye dhero khushiya laye...
Update Tommorow...
Update Tommorow...
Last edited:
Ok pakka par update taiyaar karke ata huAaj mood off sa lag rela hai aaj ju Update dene ke baad aao adde pe backchodi pelte sab baith ke Xabhi to hoga hi waha !!
tabtak jara apan baahar ghum aajata huOk pakka par update taiyaar karke ata hu
Prabhu 1 sand wala pad chuke hai or 1or aaya hai sand wala wo sala updat hi nai de Raha hai ab kare to kare kya 1 writer hai komal wo bahan ki ...di Holi se aage duniya na dekhi lund barabar bhi Holi pe likhna na aata hai or chali hai 5 5 story 1sath chalane me what a chutiyapa 1 story likho but achchhe se likho na ki 3rd class storySaand story padhlo chudayi chudayi he chudayi h pura gaanv chuda huva h usmai ab aur kya he bad words use karu yaar
Aur toh koyi bi aisi story ha manhoos se mahan tak wo read karlo ...agar na read kari ho tohPrabhu 1 sand wala pad chuke hai or 1or aaya hai sand wala wo sala updat hi nai de Raha hai ab kare to kare kya 1 writer hai komal wo bahan ki ...di Holi se aage duniya na dekhi lund barabar bhi Holi pe likhna na aata hai or chali hai 5 5 story 1sath chalane me what a chutiyapa 1 story likho but achchhe se likho na ki 3rd class story
Btw apki sand wali achchhi thi story
Congratulations for new thread and nice startStory ek aise ladke ki jiske maa baap ko dhokhe se maar diya aur bachpan mai he usai pyar ke liye taras ne ko chod diya gaya ..tab uske dadaji ne uski ungli thami.Apne dard ko chupa kar usai layak banane ke liye 5 saal dur kar diya janha mila usai uska pyar aur usne bi usai dhokha de diya..ab uska maksad sirf badla lena tha jab wo louta toh NIRWANA banke tuta dushmano par jo tadpata tha tadpata tha dushman ki rooh ko....aur is safar mai usai jaan se jayda pyar karne wali mili par pyar ke naam se he usai nafrat ho gayi thi...pyar emotion aur action ka safar....Raj -- hero of the family
Update 1
Mandawa—
Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar
Chcha -shaitan singh
Chachi-indra devi
Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h
Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h
Name----- surendra singh
gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega
Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh
Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.
Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h
Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai
Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h
Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h
Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan
jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h
Dadi ---sumitra devi
Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..
Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko
Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge
Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .
Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate
Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunke gusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu
Raj – chachi main agaya
Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..
Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h
Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h
Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi
Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.
Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......
Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai
Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega
Prabhu 1 sand wala pad chuke hai or 1or aaya hai sand wala wo sala updat hi nai de Raha hai ab kare to kare kya 1 writer hai komal wo bahan ki ...di Holi se aage duniya na dekhi lund barabar bhi Holi pe likhna na aata hai or chali hai 5 5 story 1sath chalane me what a chutiyapa 1 story likho but achchhe se likho na ki 3rd class story
Btw apki sand wali achchhi thi story