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Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

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Story ek aise ladke ki jiske maa baap ko dhokhe se maar diya aur bachpan mai he usai pyar ke liye taras ne ko chod diya gaya ..tab uske dadaji ne uski ungli thami.Apne dard ko chupa kar usai layak banane ke liye 5 saal dur kar diya janha mila usai uska pyar aur usne bi usai dhokha de diya..ab uska maksad sirf badla lena tha jab wo louta toh NIRWANA banke tuta dushmano par jo tadpata tha tadpata tha dushman ki rooh ko....aur is safar mai usai jaan se jayda pyar karne wali mili par pyar ke naam se he usai nafrat ho gayi thi...pyar emotion aur action ka safar....Raj -- hero of the family

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Update 1

Mandawa—


Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar

Chcha -shaitan singh

Chachi-indra devi

Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h

Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h

Name----- surendra singh

gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega

Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh

Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.

Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h

Badi beti--

mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai
Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h

Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h


Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan


jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h


Dadi ---sumitra devi


Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..
Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko

Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge

Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .

Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate 😃😃

Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunke 😡😡gusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu

Raj – chachi main agaya

Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..

Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h

Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h

Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi

Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.


Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......

Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai


Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega
Starting to achi ha agay dekhtay hen
 

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Update 97...

Finding past—Revenge begins

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Huu....hmmm....fuuuu.....huuuu....hmmm..fuuuu...

muje aur strong hona hoga..dagger hawa mai saye...saye..ki awaj se jaldi jaldi ghum raha tha pichle 3 hour se lagataar workout kar raha tha raj.....kafi time se disturbance ki wajah se workout nahi kar paya tha...

Mera agai ka time bahut tuff hone wala h....muje practice reguler rakhni h...

Workout se uski body ka har shape perfectly dikh raha tha.....

Rajeev ke influence se attendence ki problem solve ho gayi thi school ki....raj nahakar relax ho gaya shweta school gayi thi ..isliye aram se coffee pikar sochne laga .....




Ek hour baad gardan mai bane basement mai samne board par kafi sari images aur clues pin ups kiye huve the...jismai wo har information thi jo usai chahiye thi ....ek jagah ungli point kar yanhi jana hoga.....



Kafi Dair baad ek jagah pahucha aur puchtaz karne pe bi kuch pata nahi laga toh thak kar ek jagah baith gaya ....

Akhir kanha ho ap....main haar nahi maan sakta...pura din dundhne par bi usai koyi jankari nahi mili. khali hath he wapas agaya.....

Jab apne ko dhundne jaye aur wo na mile toh kaisa mahsus hota h waisa he usai feel ho raha tha man toh kah raha tha ki wo yanhi h ass pass ...bahut gahri kasmakas dimag mai chal rahi thi ki kaise wo apni bua ko dhunde par koyi raah usai nazar nahi nazar arahi thi ...online naam se document bi dhude. par koyi clue he nahi mila usai jaise ye naam ho he nahi ...is duniya mai

Agle din school se ane ke baad phir usne naam se aur year ki ghatna batakar har ashram har anathalay har hotel har mukin jagah talash ki par koyi atapata nahi mila....jis udeshya se wo yanha aya tha usai wo pura karna tha par aj sabi raste band nazar arahe the...

Par dundne se khuda bi milta h toh usai bi pata chal he gaya ek gaanv se ek aurat ne usai call kiya...

Raj ankho mai khusi liye bike bhagta huva ja raha tha......aj usai ek umid ki nayi raah nazar ayi ....wo jald he pahuch gaya gaanv dur gaanv mai

Khat khat ....

Maa ji apne phone kiya tha ladki ki jankari ke liye....

Aurat---andar ao..

Aurat--- ...ha wo ayi thi yanha bahut buri halat thi uski ...jagah jagah chot ke nishan the khun ñikal raha tha mere pass he chupi rahi ek mahine tak...maine bahut baar pucha par usne yahi bataya sabko maar diya h sabko maar diya...wo kisi se nahi bolti thi ek mahine baad chot tikh huvi toh chali gayi bahut bhali ladki thi... Ha usne madad ke taur pe ye ek chain di thi... Kuch dair baad wo ek locket type chain layi aur boli usne kaha tha wo ek din wapas ayegi isai lena isai bechna mat .....

Raj ne usai hath mai le liya aur apne seene se laga liya phir usai yaad aya ki kaise uski bua usai godh mai uthaye ghumti rahti thi aur us manhoos din bi wo unki he godh mai khel raha tha....man ke andar hazaro bhav arahe the uthal puthal machi huvi thi vicharo ki jisai us aurat ne toda.....beta kya lagti h wo tumhari...

Raj sukhriya apne bure waqt mai madad ki aur wo sabkuch h meri ... ye ek lakh h apke kaam ayenge ...

Raj bina piche dekhe he nikal gaya aur us gaanv se bahar jane wala har aasspass ki jagah par puchtaj karta raha ....par agai koyi jaankari nahi mili .....raj sidha rajeev ke office pahuch gaya ...

Janha pahle se he shuruti abhay ajju moujud the...

Rajeev--- kya baat h raj ..

Raj locket dikha kar wo jinda h ye saboot h ...ap in rasto par har jagah puchtaz karwayiye jarur kuch pata chalega.....har budhe bhudiya se khaskar muje unse jald se jald milna h...

Rajeev--- ok main karwata hu tum inse baat karo

Shuruti --- agai ki kya planning h ...

Raj----- ek gaya ab uske sathi jo aj bi pashupati ke he sath h unhe cheerna h aur unhe main khud saza dunga..ajuu bhai apne kaam kiya ....

Ajju – projecter on karta huva har baat samjta gaya ..

Raj ke chehre ke expression toh change na huve par baki ke chahre ke expression sakht ho gaye...

Abhay--- sir ye toh bahut jayda he khatarnaak nikla ....ye baate toh pahle nahi pata thi...

Rajeev--- Raj....

Raj—khada hokar ...maine apna bachpan aiso se kaise ladna h sikhne mai he bitaya h ye 5 ho ya 50ya 500 he kyo na ho ...karma toh milega he...mai. Wo hathiyaar hu jo inko cheerne faadne ke liye he bana h

Abhay – filhal ye abhi bahar h par iska adda yanha se 80 km ki duri par he h janha se iska bhu mafiya ka kaam hota h.......

Raj—toh taiyari karo...aur ha jinda jalna h petrol bombs banao maut asan nahi honi chahiye .....ye baat mere guru xabhi aur aag sir ne kahi thi jitna tadpaoge utna sukun tum paoge...




Raj ki pith dekh kar koun kah sakta tha ki ek young ladka itna behrahm ho sakta h.....



Toh wanhi ...

Aurat--- apni beti ko godh mai uthaye sahar se bahar nikalne ki kosis kar rahi thi kumbh ka mela suru ho chuka tha khub bheed thi....usi ka wo fayda uthana chahti thii ...muu ko dhak kar wo agai jati ja rahi thi na saman tha na kuch bus apni beti ki jaan bachane ki kosis thi...wo kaise bi karke bus mai chad gayi ....aur sabse piche chipkar baith gayi uska dil jor jor se dhadak raha tha ....wo bus yahi dua kar rahi thi ki kaise bi ye bus chal pade bus .....wo baar baar dua kar rahi thi ...Uska dhayan apni beti ki awaj se tuta ..

Jhanvi – mumma ap tension mat lo god hamari help karega wo sabki help karte h ....dekhne wo hume invisible kar. Denge wo gande uncles hume dhund he nahi payenge....aur fir super hero ayega aur un sabko punish karega.....

Apni beti ki bholi baato ko sunke uska dil paseej gaya usai seene se lagakar boli ..ha meri bachi .......aisa he hoga ...par uska dil janta tha ki wo log kitne khatarnak h ......wo bus intezaar karti rahi ...15 minut ho chuke the bus na chali tabi 2 jane bus mai chade ...

Pahla ache se dekhna re ....

Dusra tikh h...

Wo har seat pe check karta huva araha tha ..

Aurat ne jaise he ye dekha wo jaldi se seat ke niche ki taraf jhuk gayi uski toh sanse he atak gayi thi ...aur uski akhiri bachi huvi umid ne heemat tod di ....ab bachna muskil tha....wo bus last tak pahuchne he wala tha ki bus ka horn baj gaya .....

Pahla chal be wo maabeti yanha nahi h dusri bus check karte h .....

Aurat ko jab bus chalne ka ahsas huva tab uski jaan mai jaan ayi....aur wo seedhi baith gayi h.....aj phir maut usai chukar nikal gayi aur nikalni he thi 17 saal ki umar se he maut se rubaru hoti arahi thi....ab usai sukun tha ki wo bach nikal jayegi aur apni beti ke sath nayi jindgi ki suruwat karegi.....par dar se dil abhi bi dhadak raha tha aur yahi haal uski beti ka bi tha ....




Dusri tarf......

Delhi

Cheif--- i dont want any excuse sonali...you know very well kya hoga if we failed ....

Sonali--- sir humne sari jagah talash ki but vithal nahi mila h....aur rdx bi wanha nahi h janha danger ne bataya tha...

Jogindar--- sir humne sab jagah monitoring rakhi huvi h kuch bi hoga hume pata chal jayega ...

Chief--- no no jogindar ap samaj nahi rahe wanha itna rush rahta h ek afwaha bi hazaro ki jaan lene ke kiye kafi h aur ye toh bloody fucking rdx h sorry to say but truth is truth....

Jogindar--- toh usai bolte h jo best h ....aur main kinki baat kar raha hu ap jante ho pura heemachal 24 hours mai clean ho gaya tha

Chief--- i think you r right uski team he best rahegi ..

Shivani ko kuch samaj nahi aya.....

Sonali--- seriously sir ...uski team u mean killing machine xabhi and Aag ...came on sir they are monesters....aur sunil...wo tank.... blood lusty h...kitno ko marega pata nahi aur mostly raj kya hoga agar wo ruka nahi no no no...lashe ginte ginte thak jaoge ap ...no never ...

Cheif--- tumahara pyar bol raha h ...

Sonali--- ap jo chahe wo samje but wo nahiiii..

Jogindar--- sonali log mare jayenge ...aur uski he team ye kar sakti h...

Sonali--- nope bilkul nahi main dhund lungi promise h ye mission hum pura karenge har baar uski madad nahi le sakti hu pichli baar he....nahi sir....Hum aj he nikal rahe wanha har jagah nazar rakhenge aur ap vithal ko dhundhiye.....

Bahar akaar .....Sonali chup chap baith gayi ...

Shivani--- team ye kounsi team h aur raj ye koun h

Sonali--- tum jisai hath kadi lagi rahi thi

Shivani jo pani pi rahi thi usai jaise he yaad aya uska pani gale mai he atak gaya....jorse khansi ane lagi......usne sapne mai bi nahi socha tha ki uski pahuch itni unchi hogi.......

Shivani--- Raj wo ek ladka h young ladka h wo lead karta h....

Sonali--- ne usai ghoor kar dekha....

Shivani ko kuch yaad aya andar ki baato ka toh wo jaldi se chup ho gayiii.....




Dusri taraf......

Train mai ....

Baba apne ye toh liya he nahi....

Poonam budha hogaya h tera baba itna he kha sakta h ab...

Poonam—budha honge apke dushman abhi bi bilkul tandurust lagte ho ...ap...bahar niklo toh pura gaanv dekhta h....abhi jawan ladko se jawan lagte ho dubara byah ho jaye apka toh


sab hasne lag jate h .......

Poonam jhep si jati h sabko hansta dekh

Baba--- are muje na dhundhni dusri teri chachi he tikh h mere liye ab tere liye dhundenge ladka tu padh likh le pahle....

Poonam—ap fir shuru ho gaye maine kaha tha na ki main apko kanhi chod ke nahi jaungi...

Baba--- are pagli main ja he isiliye raha hu ki tuje humse jayda khayal rakhne wala ladka mile ....samji ....

Ab wo bechari kya he bolti par ha upar wali birth par late kar wo itna jarur sochne lag gayi thi ki kya sapno ka rajkumar kahaniyo ke ilawa hakikat mai bi hota h aur hota h toh kaisa hota h ...muje kaise pata lagega wo he mere sapno ka rajkimar hoga ....kya main pahchan lungi ...wo gusai wala toh nahi hoga na .... Jaisa bi ho bus khadus na ho sweet sa ho ...

Ab usai nahi pata tha ki uparwale ne jodi likh di h aur wo bankar rahegi

“ ek bin maa baap ki ladki aur ek bin maa baap ka ladka dono he ek dusre ke jajbaat ko samjhenge ek taraf masoom ladki aur dusri taraf ek beast “

Kya hoga jab dono milenge

Kaise milenge

Kya pahchan payenge ek dusre ke pyar ko......

Kya sonali bi hogi us waqt .....

Sawal bahut h jawab...ek bi nahi....

Likes aur revoes mai kanjusi na karne ka

Aj ke liye itna he ......


Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 

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Sandeep singh nirwan

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Nice update
Sukhriya bro👍👍👍👍👍👍
Superb update 😍
Are surya bhai kem cho👏👏
Nice 1 bro👍👍👍👍👍
Great update yrr isme aapne Tadap dikhayee hai, Nafrat, dar, pareshani, befikri, khayalaat ko dikhaya hai .
Actual ek sath kafi jagah seen chal rahe h....
Raj ko pata chala k uski bua abhi bhi zinda hai aur wo locket bhi mila usne Rajeev ko lagaaya hai is kaam pr
Ha rajeev police wala h uska circle bada h
, bua bhi buss m baith gyiii hai ab dekhte hain k mele m kya hota hai unke saath, wahin S&S bhi pareshan hain k bombs nhi mile hain aur Sonali ki to haalat hi kharaab ho gyi thi jab chiefe ne Raj ki team ka bola aur Shivani ki to saans hi atak gyi.
Ha ye tension toh h bomb milna bahut jaruri h...actualy bomb se jayda toh wo maarkaat macha dete isliye dur he rakhna better h
Maybe k last m inhen Raj ko hi bulaana pade ya Raj ko koi leed mile gi aur wo khud Mele m jaiga aur wahin wo Sonali gang se bhi mile ga aur bua se bhi milan wahin ho ga, baaki to writer pr hai k ap kya likhte ho .
Lion heart bro ... Ye kahna muskil h ki last mai kya hoga but itna pakka h kuch toh hoga agai ke 3 updates mai.....
Shandaar pratikriya ke kiye thank you buddy...👏👏👏👏
Lajawab ab dhamaka hoga
Update majedar tha
Thank you arish bro👏👏👏👏
Fantastic update bhai
Thank you bro 🙏👍🙏👍🙏
Nice update 👍 👌 👏
Ab to aap bhi suspense 😳 lane lage ho kahani mai
Mr x bro suspence ha thoda bahut baki predictable story h....thank you buddy👍👍👍
Fantastic update
Thank you 👍🙏👏🙏🙏
Mast update hai maza aa gaya
Hmm apka part ab suru hoga👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
 
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