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Sandeep singh nirwan

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Update 260 part two Thunder posted masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka

kuch bhaiyo ne kaha ki time mat do mujhe unki baat sahi lagi agai se yahi tikh rahega aur ye jo ulta sidhe likh rahe h unke liye itna he kahunga padhna h toh padho warna mat padho dusri regular update wali stories padhlo yanha wo person kuch kahe jo regular comment karta h tab sahi lagta h par dusre nahi ..aur mere pass time hoga tab update ayega ..baki ap samjhdar ho aur ab phir bhi kuch likhte ho toh phir ye apke sanskar h..
Agai se no fix time na date 🙏
 
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Sahi baat hai
Jisse Story ke update ke baare mein chaar line nahi likhi jati
Wo story ke baare mein keh raha hai.

Mana ki story ke baare mein criticize kar sakte ho
Mein khud bhi kabhi update mein kuch acha nahi lagta wo bol deta hu Ki mujhe ye acha nahi laga

Lekin kehne ka ek tareeka hota hai
Ek decent way mein aap apni baat keh sakte ho lekin nahi log direct writer par humla bol dete hai .
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Kya fight Thi...kya climax Thi yaar...ronghte khade hogaye... Maja aagaya bhai.... itna tension dene se pahle AAP update Hi Naa dete bhai...chota update bolke itni badi planing.... Next update kab aayega..yahi fikar hai mujhe..... thank you very much for this update ..... love you
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Update 260 part two Thunder posted masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka

kuch bhaiyo ne kaha ki time mat do mujhe unki baat sahi lagi agai se yahi tikh rahega aur ye jo ulta sidhe likh rahe h unke liye itna he kahunga padhna h toh padho warna mat padho dusri regular update wali stories padhlo yanha wo person kuch kahe jo regular comment karta h tab sahi lagta h par dusre nahi ..aur mere pass time hoga tab update ayega ..baki ap samjhdar ho aur ab phir bhi kuch likhte ho toh phir ye apke sanskar h..
Agai se no fix time na date 🙏

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Update 260 part two

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Jab un charo ne arahi awaj ki direction mai dekha toh kuch pal unhe kuch nazar nahi aya tha par sparking ke bich unhe niche jameen se bane hole se upar aye shakhs ki sakal nazar ayi toh uncharo ke jaan mai jaan agayii aur wo bhi ladkhadate huve khade hone lage ….

Niche se upar aye shakhs ne un charo ki taraf dekha …aur phir un rakhsaso ki taraf dekhne ke baad apne hath mai pakde bade se blade ko ghasit ta huva unki taraf lekar gaya aur uski speed har uthte kadam ke sath ab pal pal badhyi gayi aur phir usne ek jump hawa mai li aur apne ek hath se he us bade se blade ko hawa mai ghumate huve sidha ek ke sir mai de mari aur us shakhs ke waar mai itni power thi ki wo us rakhsas ko upar se cheerta huva adhe sari mai jakar rooka ..aur shakhs ne ek laat uske seene par rakhkar us blade ko bahar nikal liya ….aur phir dubara se khudko itni tezi se ghumaya ki agla war ek ke pairo par huva aur uske dono pairo ko kaat kar uske sarir se alag kar diya …par ye toh suruwaat thi ..uske kahar ki wo jiske pass se gujra uske sarir ko cheerta gaya…aur kareeb 7 ko cheerne ke baad jaise he wo palta uske blade se ek rakhsas ka blade takraya toh dono ke blade adhe tut gaye …par wo shakhs rooka nahi aur ek jump ke sath us rakhsas ke kandhe par chad gaya aur hath mai pakda wo tuta huva blade uske sir mai pura dhansa diya ….ye sab dekh kar sherdil bola “ ek toh time se ata nahi h aur ab gussa dikha raha h ..itna he gusa araha h toh pahle ajata”

Sunil ne usai bolte dekha toh bola “ tu kyo usai ungli kar raha h uska dimag hila huva h”

Sherdil sunil ki taraf dekhkar “ wo kyo” phir sochkar “sach bata tune ab kya udta teer liya h har baar tere khujli kuch jayda he rahti h”

Sunil ne samne raj ko ladta dekh kar kaha “maine bus usai kuch dair pahle piche se gale par maarkar behosh kiya tha”

Sherdil raj ki taraf dekhkar “toh kya dikat h phir kuchhhh nn” itna kahte rook gaya aur ankhe faade sunil ko dekh kar kaha “tu kamine tune usai behosh kiya ..abe issai pange lene se acha ye rakhsas h ..tere picheade mai kide kaat rahe the jo isai ungli ki”

Idhar us shakhs ne ek ke gardan mai tuta huva blade pura gusa diya …aur ye scene dekh sherdil phir bola “ab ye bhi bata de ki iski kounsi atma ya wo personal wo kya kahte h haa….personality bahar ayi h”

Sunil “ pata nahi par tu dur he rahna abhi isai”

Sherdil “chutiya nahi hu jo lal chaddi pahan kar is saand ke agai jaunga”

Tabhi sherdil khada hokar apna hathiyar utha ge raha tha ki ek rakhsas ne us par waar kiya toh sherdil side hat gaya aur apna dagger uthakar kar uski kamar par lagataar war karte huve bola “sala ghante ka leader hu main aj bach jau phir is raj ka ilaj karwaunga warna ye doubble tripple hokar mujhe heart attack se he maar dega”

Phir ghumte huve us rakhsas ke sarir ke har jagah knife ghusa ghusa kar usai maar diya aur uske pass he late kar badi badi saanse lene laga aur bola “yaa khuda aj bacha le in haivano se” itna kah wo khada hone laga aur achanak dikhi usai samne se ati huvi ek badi si bladeaur sherdil piche ki taraf puri takat lagakar jump kar gaya warna uska sarir bich mai se cheer gaya hota

Sherdil “ baal baal bacha”

Abhi wo samaj pata usai pahle he agai wale rakhsas ka waar dubara se aya par ab sherdil thak chuka tha wo furti se nahi bach sakta tha isliye wo sirf apne upar ate waar ko apne daggar se rokne ke liye taiyaar ho gaya par wo rokta usai pahle he ek blade udti huvi aakar us rakhsas ke chehre ko fadte huvi uske chehre ke andhar he dhans kar rook gayii..aur ek shakhs sherdil ke pass se nikla aur sidha uski chest par ek jump ke sath mari …aur us rakhsas ko maut ke ghat utar diya….aur phir sherdil ke kandhe par thap thapi di aur tezi se baakiyo ki taraf nikal gaya toh yahi mech aur mike dono milkar ek rakhsas ko maut ke ghaat uatar diya toh sunil bhi akela ek se bhida huva tha aur ghayal hone ke baujud usai har taraf ghumkar maare ja raha tha kyoki un rakhsas roopi experiments mai yahi kami thi ki wo furtilai nahi the aur isi ka fayida in sab ko mila tha isliye wo ab tak in sabka maar paye the…

Ab sunil akhiri wale se lad raha tha …tabhi uske pass se wo shakhs nikla aur us rakhsas ke ek pair ko apne dagger se adha fadta huva nikal gaya …wo rakhsas niche ki taraf jhukta huva ghutne par agaya toh sunil ne puri takat lagakar uske gale par war kiya toh us rakhsas ki adhi gardan kaat gayii…aur phir ek waar huva aur uski gardan kat kar alag ho gayi ..

Sunil jo pahchan gaya tha ye koun h wo bola“tu agaya bhai”

Wo shakhs sunil ki taraf palta aur bola “ ha aur ab chodkar nahi jaunga …tu yanha se niche ja aur jo jinda h sabko tikhane laga de ..in bakiyo ko main dekhta hu”

Tabhi sherdil udhar se chillya “marna h toh aise he mar de par ye jo tere andar itni atmaye ghusa rakhi h unhe mat nikala kar …warna heart attack se he mar jaunga main”

Tabhi eternity ki awaj ayi “xabhi aur aag ko tumhari jarurat h jaldi se unke pass pahucho”

Ye baat sunte he raj bola main jata hu tum charo yanha se niche walo ko tikhane lagate huve ao”

Sabne ha mai gardan hilayi aur raj unko chod tezi se watch mai dikh rahi location ki taraf bhaga aur kuch minuts mai he wo base ke roof par tha aur phir apne pass se granade nikala aur ek hole mai rakh diya ….boom ki awaj se dhamaka huva aur deewar mai ek hole ban gaya wo tezi se usmai ghusa aur phir usne upar se niche dekha “hmm toh three floor basement bana rakha h” phir uski nazar ek pipe par gayi aur wo sidha fisalta huva niche ki taraf jane laga par usai gallary mai padi lashe bhi dikh rahi thi aur usai bakhubhi andaza ho gaya tha ki yanha kitni tabhayi machi h…wo sidha ground floor par utara aur jaldi se se xabhi aur aag ki direction mai jane laga janha usai lashe he lashe dikhayi di…

Wo jaise he aag aur xabhi ke kareeb pahucha toh…

Aag “ inhe hum dekhte h wo us direction mai inka leader gaya h usai roko”

Raj bhi tezi se bhagta huva us bataye gaye direction mai jane laga..aur kuch turn karne ke baad usai paidal andar ek tunnel mai ghusta us jagah ko lead kar raha person dikhayi diya…

Raj “bhagne ki itni jaldi”

Us shakhs ne palat kar dekha aur apne dono gaurds ko ishara kiya…

Raj ne bhi apne dono dagger hath mai liye aur agai badh gaya …left right pairo ke movement karte huve usne samne wale dono gaurds ko confuse kiya aur pahle wale ke waar se bachte huve phir dusre ke waar se bachte huve sidha leader ki taraf bhaga ye dekh dono gaurds bhi palat kar uski taraf bhage … idhar us prision leader ne bhi apni taraf raj ko ata dekh gun nikal li aur raj ki taraf karne wala tha ki dagger udta huva aakar sidha uske us hath ke kandhe mai dhans gaya aur phir kuch seconds mai usai dubara tez dard jo huva tha raj ke us dhanse huve dagger ko nikalne se ..

Raj uski gardan par dagger lagate huve “game is over…aur tum dono drop your weapon”par un dono ne koyi reaction nahi dikhaya …

Raj ne us leader ki gardan par knife ko halka sa cut dete huve bola “dono ko bol weapon down kare..”

Us leader ne bhi ishara kiya tab tak xabhi bhi agaye aur undono gaurds ke sir mai do bullets utar di…aur bole

Xabhi “ ab weapon down ki jarurat nahi h”

Ab sari conversation english mai h jo hum hindi mai padhenge

Raj “ prisoners kanha h”

Ye soon kar bhi wo shakhs kuch nahi bola toh raj ne xabhi ko ishara kiya aur xabhi ne apne hath mai pakda knife ko sidha uski jhang mai dhansa diya…aur us shakhs ki bahut tez cheek nikal gayiii…dard ke mare

Raj “ Tu marega nahi kyoki ye is tarah se he apne sikar ko tadpaate h aur is had tak tourture karte h ki uski atma bhi jawab dene lag jati h”

Abhi raj ne itna he kaha thi ki aag bhi agaye aur unke chehre par is waqt bahut bhayanak expression the

Aag “chod is chutiye ko isai mujhe de iske pichwade mai petrol daal kar nanga nahi nachaya toh mera naam bhi aag nahi …oye xabhi ja kanhi se bhi desiel ya petrol kuch bhi mile lekar aa”

Xabhi “ mar jayega ye”

Aag “aise kaise mar jayega marne se pahle aag bhuja dunga phir iske aagai aag lagunga aise he iske har aag ko jala kar bhunkar akhir mai isai bahar un rakhsaso ke agai fenk dunga ab tu ja aur desiel ya petrol lekar aa mujhe gusa mat dila”

Apne baare mai itne bhayank plan sunkar wo prision leader bhi ghabrane laga..

Aag “rook pahle iske hath bandh du …”

Leader ko laga ki wo bola nahi toh mar jayega isliye wo bola“ main bataunga tum pucho kya puchna chahte ho”

Aag “ raj ye sala aise sach nahi bolega pahle iske oichwade ko ko jalane dete h”

Raj “ ek chance toh dijiye isai”

Aag “ bola na ye chutiya sach nahi bolega tu rook rassi nahi mil rahi bandhne ke liye”

Raj “ wo us koune mai wire pade h”

Ye soonkar us leader ne jaldi se kaha “ are tum pucho toh sahi kya puchna chahte ho jawab sahi nahi lage tab wo option use karna”

Raj “ prisoners kanha h”

Wo leader “yanha koyi prisoners nahi h”

Aag ye sunte he bole “ bola tha ye nahi batayega isai iski gaand jal kar koyle ki tarah nahi hogi ye nahi bolega”

Wo leader frustrated aur ghabrakar kasmasata huva “ uparwale ki kasam main sach bol raha hu yanha koyi prisioner nahi h yanha bus hume un experimental subjects ko safe rakhna hota h aur tum jaisa koyi aye toh usai maar dena hota h”

Raj “matlb yanha prisioner nahi h”

Wo leader “ ha yanha koyi prisoner nahi h”

Raj “ toh kanha h”

Wo leader “ mujhe kaise pata hoga”

Aag ye soon bifar pade aur bole “Rook iska agai se kaatne de mujhe tab bolega ye kutta”

Wo leader darte huve “ mujhe nahi pata h …aur yanha sirf wo experimental subjects he ate h”

Raj kuch sochte huve “ toh tu reply kisai dete h har ek hour mai aur signal kisai bhejne ki kosis kar raha tha”

Ye soon kar wo leader thoda chounka aur bola … “ mujhe nahi pata wo koun h par jisne mujse pahle yanha duety ki thi usne bataya tha ki har hour mai call ayegi aur usai jawab dena h aur main deta hu wo koun h kanha se h mujhe nahi pata h”

Raj kuch dair chup raha phir sochkar d bola “sir ye prision ke bare mai janta h par bata nahi raha h …ap sahi ho isai jalana he hoga”

Aag “maine toh pahle he bola tha le xabhi bhi agaya tu niche leta isai ulta”

Raj ne jaise he usai ulta niche patka wo tadfadne laga aur hath pair chalte huve bola “mujhe sach mai nahi pata h ki prison kanha h” usko baat ko unsuna kar aag bhi ab uske kapdo ko knife se cheerne lage aur wo leader niche leta tadfadata huva ab buri tarah ghabrata huva bola “ god ki kasam mujhe nahi pata h…ok …ok…ek minut ek minut … maine ek baar itna suna tha ki wanha ice gir rahi thi matlb wo aisi jagah h janha bahut burf girti h”

Aur ye sunte he raj ke chehre par muskurakahat agayi aur wo samaj gaya ki uski manjil kanha h usne us shakhs ko aag sir ke hawale kar diya …

Wo leader ye dekh chillaya “mujhe chod do msine sab bata diya h”

Raj “ toh last sawal ka jawab de gold kanha h”

Ye sunte he wo leader buri tarah chonk gaya ..par phir apni maut ko dekh wo bola main bus safe ke pass le ja sakta hu wo locker code se khulta aur khulte he ek alaram agai jata h iske maalik ke pass … isai jayda mujhe nahi pata h”

Raj ne ye suna toh uske chehre par ab ek chamak thi jaise wo jo janna chahta tha wo jaan gaya ho uski muthiya kas gayi aur wo bola isai jinda rakhiyega ye abhi bahut kaam ayega ..

Idhar dusri sides se sunil searching mai tha usai raj ki awaj sunayi thi “ mere pass pahuch jaldi”

Sunil turant wanaha se mech mike aur sherdil ko samjha kar raj ki taraf ane laga …raj jo island mai bani ek base ke upar khada tha … sunil uske pass aya aur usai aise khada dekh kar bola “kya baat h”

Raj “pata chal gaya h ki wo kanha h”

Sunil “ye toh bahut achi baat h bhai”

Raj “ ab waqt agaya h ghost ke pakde jane ka”

Sunil confuse hokar“ kya matlb h tera mujhe saaf saaf bol”

Raj ne usai batana suru kiya “ yanha ke leader ne ek baat mujhe batayi thi aur us heesab se ab mujhe yani ghost ko pakde jane hoga…aur wanha se mujhe yanha ke us prision mai bhejha jayega jo karenge dogra sir aur paise dega tu”

Tadakk aur aj pahli baar sunil ne ek thapad raj ko mara uski ankhe gusai se jalne lagi thi

Sunil “ tera dimag kharab ho gaya h kya. us narak mai jayega janha se insan kabhi jinda nahi ata h …kya jawab dunga dadaji ko ki maine khud uske pagalpan mai uska sath diya aur maut ke muu mai bhej aya … nahi bilkul bhi nahi …hum dusra tarika dhundhlenge”

Raj ne uske kandhe par hath rakha toh sunil ne jhatak diya ..

Raj “chal tikh h 24 hours h tu kosis karle agar koyi plan bane toh warna jo maine kaha h wahi he hoga tu janta h wanha tak pahuchne k yahi tarik h”

Sunil ne kuch nahi kaha aur wo bhi dusri taraf dekhne laga…



Us prision mai us leader ke sath mike rook gaya taki wo har hour mai reply de sake …taki jitni dair wo yanha ki ghatna ko daba sake dabaye rakhe aur unhe ravindar ko chudane ka time mil sake toh…idhar eternity ki battisi van mai baithe huve chupaye nahi chip rahi thi uske samne iswaqt bada sa gold ka box rakha huva tha …

Sherdil “ daant mat dikha”

Eternity “ naraj kyo hota h teri wajah se he mission pura huva …aur bola toh tha russian dilaunga tujhe”

Sherdil ye soon bifar gaya aur eternity ko marne ke liye bhada toh raj ne usai rok diya ..

Eternity “ cool down bro …russian nahi chahiye toh mana kar de bhadakta kyo h ladko ke shokh h toh wo bhi ho jayenge …”

Ye soon sherdil kuch karta raj bol pada

Raj “ eternity tune jo manga tunhe de diya aur mujhe pata h tu kya karega is gold ka …ab tera dream pura ho chuka h”

Eternity bich mai he “ sath chalne ka mat kahna bus main aise he tikh hu dost”

Raj muskura kar “ ab tujhe mera ek aur kaam karna h par ye kaam france wale kaam se bhi bada hoga”

Eternity jo gold ke box par hath fira raha tha uska hath fisal gaya aur box se uska muu sidha takraya aur dard se karahte huve bola “whattt…france se bada bhai mai already most wanted hu aur kya karwana chahta h ki most wanted ke agai stars bhi lag jaye ”

Raj “ aur ye kaam 24 hours baad karna h jab tak tujhe jo karna h karle”

Eternity “ matlb 24 hour he h mere jeene ke”



48 ghante baad….

Helicopter ki tez ghadgadahat ke sath do helicopter russia mai ek secret place par lend huve aur un dono helicopters ke aaspass russian secret service aur miltary intelligence ke log ghere huve khade the…unke agai khada aged person jo chief tha wo agai aya..

“Toh tum hath aahe gaye”

Samne bhediye mai jakda huva wo shakhs muskaraya aur bola “ghost hamesha ghost he rahega”

Chief “tumhare itne chahne wale h duniya mai ki jabse tumhare pakde jane ki news mili h tumhe wo marne ke liye bahut betab h aur unhi mai se ek ne millions mai dollar kharch kiye h tumhari khass saza ke liye…”

Uske pass khade aur bhi adhikariyo ne ye baat suni toh wo muskara diye kyoki wo jante the ki ghost kis bala ka naam h…



Finland mai he kanhi secret place par janha sirf dur dur tak ice he ice thi aur koyi sapne mai nahi soch sakta tha ki yanha worldki sabse khunkhar jail h wanha par aj bahut chahal pahal thi…sabhi khunkhar criminals bahar ground mai the tabhi wanha mike ki sound on huvi aur prision commander ki awaj ayi…

“Kal tumhara naya sathi araha h kuch toh usai bahut ache se jante bhi h” us commander ki baat sunkar sab dhayan se sunne lage ..

Commandar agai bola “ most wanted in 6 countries russia,france,japan,china,and india”

Uski ye baat sunte he bahut sare khunkhar criminal ke chehre upar ki taraf uth gaye aur jaise wo samaj rahe ho ki ye wohi toh nahi h…aur commander ki awaj ayi “sahi soch rahe ho gangs ke gangs ko maut ke ghaat utarne wala GHOST”

Aur uski baat sunkar kuch ke chehre par bhayankar se bhayankar expression the unke wo expression saaf bhanya kar rahe the ki unhe kitni nafrat h us naam ke shakhs se…par inke viprit koune mai ek taraf book padh raha wo shakhs bilkul khanosh tha …aur uski us khamoshi ko disturb na kare isliye wanha ki security uske pass he rahti thi…iski bhi bahut badi wajah thi aur wo wajah thi jo bhi uske pass gaya wo jinda nahi louta tha aj tak isliye commander kisi ko bhi uske pass nahi jane deta tha….

Raat ka waqt tha aur finland ki us ice par kayi sari ice par chalne wali gadiya puri security ke sath ek kaidi ko wanha layi …aur commander ne usko dekhte he kaha “ mr ghost welcome h hell mai yanha se bus isi raste se aya ja sakta h par wapas nahi jaya ja sakta h ab se yahi h tumhari duniya”

Wo shakhs jo raj tha usne kuch nahi kaha aur bus ek baar muskara kar us commander ko dekha …

Commander “ ye muskurahat bhi chali jayegi jab subhe tum apne chahne walo se miloge …aur wo tumhari kitni hadiya todenge mujhe bhi andaza nahi h par dint worry marne nahi dunga tumhe” itna kah wo uski taraf muskuraya aur usai le jane ka ishara kiya …

Raj ko wo gaurds andar lekar jane lage toh raat mai bhi puri jail mai shor mach gaya …raj bus charo taraf dhayan se dekhta huva ja raha tha….kyoki usai pata tha ki subhe ki suruwaat kaisi hogi par insabse alag uske dil mai ek bechaini aur utsukta thi ki wo ravindar singh se milega toh kya kahega…aur usai bus ab subhe ka intezar tha jab wo apne papa ke best friend ko dekhega…



Aj ke liye itna he …

Mind-blowing superb bhai maza agaya
 
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