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Villian....Death halo on Monday night between 10 to 11pm
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Gajab kya he pratikriya di h apne toh dil khus ho gaya wo binocular wala agai ayega jald he .....nahi wo jo bi h usne ek baat boli thi mai sikar ki ankho mai dhek ke sikar karta hu marne wale ko pata hona chahiye wo kyo mar raha h .... ....ab toh jonny jhonny ka wait ho raha h.....Kya hi Update diya bhaya ju ne gajab ka Update 83, tha gajab ka mtlab boleto bawal tha bawal ekdum vaardaat waala scene bana diya tha ki apan ko ek dialogue likhne ka man kr reiya
"beta ham kaand nhi krte ham to vaardat me jaane wale vaardat giri krte hai koni bete agle Update da smjh jawega tu"
Bhai gajab ka Update tha ab saaye jara apne launde ke action pe to kya hi maara unki to gaand bhi sukh gayi thi lekin ju ne to sp ki gaand ki seal hi tudawadi gajab apne launde ne to kyaa hi pela unn sabko ek ek ki rowai chutt rahi thi gajab man Hatt's off this is amazing you given......aise bloody action scenes to apan bhi n diya hoga saayad apne pahle wale story me but you did this man !!
And ab baat kre sunil ki to apan ne bola tha n ki sunil hi hoga wo kyunki sunil hi Khanjargiri krta hai.......ab aate apan log apne launde ke raj ki acting pe to mughe kuch puchna hai kahi ju ne uski extra training to n krwayi acting aor drama wali gajab ka acting kiya apne launde ne kya hi bolu ek pal ko laga kahi pagala wagla to n gaya yaa ju ne kisi bache ko likhne ko to nde di bich me update Khair ab aate apan log comissioner ki gand pe to wo to Sonali ne muhchodi hi kr ke bhosda bana diya
Aur ab next update me apna launda johny-johny khelega matlab john ki gaand me kal fool laga ke RIP John ka sign laga hi do Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya.......aur rahi baat uss dooorbein matlab boleto binaculars wale shaks ki to wo confirm koi raj ka khabri hoga lekin may be wo killer bhi ho sakta hai jo dekh raha ho John ka adda kyunki usne bhi sayad dekh liya hoga raj ko action krte hue aur wo ab jab raj yaha John ko tapkane aayega tab maarne ka plan banaya hoga Khair dekhte kya hota hai
Aur last baat Sultan ko to raj ne saayad se sunil ke dwara kidnap kr basement me taang ke rakha hai........
Take care.......
Gajab yaar chhha gaye guru bahot hi umda vaala update ,Update 83
Finding past—begins
Thunderbolts strikes—no mercy.....
police wala bhag ke hume rokne arahe the unmai se ek ko rajeev ne utha ke patak diya aur dusre ko main pakad ke deewar pe fek deta hu jo piche tangi tasweer se takrata h aur tute sishe uski chest mai ghus jate h.... Aur samne se jo danda leke marne ata h uske agai hath kardeta hu danda tut jata h wo meri taraf dekhta h aur main uski taraf main na mai gardan hilata hu aur ek laat uski ribs pe marta hu wo sidha kursi pe jake girta h aur kursi tut jati h ...phir ek jana sarkari banduk ghumta h marne ke liye main fisal ke niche se uske piche khade police wale ke ghutne pe laat marta hu wo jhuk jata h aur khada hoke uske mu pe apne ghutne ki marta hu....agai ke 2 daant bahar girte h uske aur wo dur jake girta h....phir ek muje piche se aake gardan se pakad leta h.....main usai utha ke ulta piche girta hu jisai uska sir jameen se takrata h aur uski pakad dheeli ho jati phir main apni kohni se kayi waar uske muu pe karta hu aur khada hoke usai uthake dubara niche patakta hu..... Phir apni hath se 2 ungliyo ka ishara Sp ki taraf karta hu jiska matlab tha meri nazar tuj par he h..tabi inspecter ek mukke ki mere face pe marta h jisai mai inch bhar piche hota hu jaise he dubara marne ki kosis karta h main uska hath pakad leta hu aur dusre hath se uski gardan pakad ke badi table pe utha ke patakta hu jisai wo table todta huva niche girta h ....ek jana piche se meri pith pe banduk marta h ...main mudke usai dekhta hu aur ek sath khub sare punch marta hu uski puri body vibrate hone lagti h aur ek punch full power se marta hu uske jabde pe wo dur girata h aur ripat ta huva jake piche deewar se takrata h aur ludak jata sabki gaand fat jati h sur ek baar ke liye sab rook jate h apni jagah. ..phir mud kar main inspecter ko khada kar ke apni taraf khinch ke uske jabde pe kohni ki marta hu sale ke sgai ke dant tut jate h....phir rajeev ki taraf dekhta hu toh usai 3 police wale ne pakda huva hota h...main bhag ke ek ke muu pe side se kick deta hu uska face deewar mai bani almari mai ghus jata h aur ek ka gala pakad ke piche fekta hu ....
Main--- jaiye rinky ko sambhaliye inhe mai dekh lunga aur bahar jo Nirwana naam ka khada hoga usai bolna sabko andar leke ajaye bus bahut huva ab
Rajeev--- ka ka ka...kya..tha..tha..tikh h tikh h ....main bolta hu ..
Aur jab rajeev bahar jata h tab uska muu khula rah jata bahar sare police wale behosh pade the sabko itni buri tarah maara gaya tha ki halat kharab thi ...jeee rahe the ya mar gaye the rajeev ko kuch samaj nahi araha tha wo kabhi thane ki taraf dekhta toh kabhi samne un police walo ke upar baithe huve ko jo hath mai pakde khanjar ko ghuma raha tha.....
Rajeev--- nananana..... nirwanaaaa.....
Aur wo shaks gardan uthake rajeev ke dekhta h aur chal ke uske pass ata h...
Rajeev--- dar se piche hoke Raj ne bulaya aur kaha h inhe bi utha ke leke ao....
Nirwana – ok ....aur phir 2 ko kandhe pe uthata h aur 2 ko ghasit ke lane lagta h
Rajeev bus usai he dekhta rahta h....
Andar
Ek police wala side mai padi pistal nikal ke fire karta h main jump karke dodge karta hu aur ek danda sidha uske hath ki traf fenk deta hu jisai uski pistal niche gir jati h aur sidha uske gale pe takat se war karta hu toh uske naak mu kaan se khun nikalne lagta h aur mar jata h
SP--- jo side mai dar se khada tha wo bolta h ye ye ye haivaan h phir sittu ki taraf dhek ke ye kisai ulaj liye ho tum madarchod....aise toh hum bi nahi marte h ye ye toh rakhsas h itni buri tarah se maine aj tak kisi ko nahi dekha h marte huve...tu bhosdike aj bach gaya toh teri maa chod dunga...
Sittu toh pahle he dara huva tha aur lockup ke andar se dekh raha tha aur uske sath john gang ke gundai the un sabki bi fati padi thi kayi apna sir pit rahe the ro rahe the.....pahle he raj ne unhe itna dhoya tha aur jo ek umid bachi thi wo bi ab tut gayi thi
Ab 3 jane bache the SP aur 2 police wale SP dono ko ishara karta h ek meri taraf bhag ke ata h main sidha uske jabde pe kick deta hu wo niche girta h aur takrakar phir ulta hoke girta h dusra jo uske piche tha wo wanhi rook jata h dar ke mare aur piche khiskne lagta h..main uski taraf bhadkar puri takat se ek ghutne ki jump karke chest pe marta hu wo tikh sp ke pass se udta huva piche girta h .... Aur SP ki ankho mai dar aur dahsat dikhne lagti h...
Main---Sp kya bola tha tuje ja ek aur mouka diya karle phone jisai laga sakta h bol de NIRWANA khada h mere samne muje marne aya h... Bachao muje..
SP ko rahat milti h wo number dial karta usai pahle he 2 police wale andar ake girte h aur wo andar ata h....aur kandhe wale dono ko bi fenk deta phir rajeev 2 ko laake fekta h..
Rajeev--- baki ko main lata hu ap yanhi rahiye....
Main Rinky ke pass uske sir par hath ferta hu aur uska chera upar karta hu toh uske honto ke kone se khun nikal raha hota h....aur wo dari huvi thi kyoki itni maar kaat usne nahi dekhi thi woh sidhe muje gale laga leti h aur rone lagti h
Main – sunil inspector ka hath aur phir SP ki taraf dekh kar tu mila phone jald he tera number h
Sp sidha commissioner ko phone mila deta h...aur batane lagta h....
Aur idhar sunil sidha jake inspecter ka hath pakadke marodne lagta h aur inspecter ki cheekhe ghunj uthti h main rinky se
Main--- dekh isai ye ab kabhi kisi ko hath nahi laga payega dekh....sunil dono tod de
Aur kadak ki awaj ati h aur sath he inspecter ki dardnaak chikho ki bhi....rajeev baki bahar pade huvo ko bi kuch dair mai andar laake fenk deta h ....ab andar rajeev main sunil aur rinky he the...tab rajeev bolta h...
Rajeev--- confuse hoke ap nirwana ho toh phir raj
Wo--- mask utar kar apko kya lagta h
Rinky—ke chare pe muskaan ajati h...aur bolti h ap nirwana ho muje yakin nahi hota h main apse mili hu ....par ye Raj kyo kah raha tha muje ki main nirwana ki dost hu oh matlab main raj ki dost hu toh apki bi huvi aur smile karti h...
Sunil--- muskarane lagta h.....
Rajeev--- rinky rinky rinky ko hilakar ye young businessman sunil sighniya h singhaniya group ke new ceo...inki photo aye din magzine news pepar mai ati h....
Rinky – shock se hhhhhhhhhhh pagal ho chuki thi aj....
Main bahut huva kaam khatm nahi huva abhi bahut baki h rinky tum sabke phone le lo sabke matlab sabke aur sunil yanha cctv h uski hard disc le le taki saboot na mile aur taiyar hoja recording ke kiye....
Tabi rajeev bolta h sabut main mita deta hu ye kaam mujpar chod do inka carodo ka maal jala diya jisai ye dhund nahi paye toh Choti si baat h..
Hum dono---????
Rajeev--- jinhone meri beti ki ijjat bachayi .....ho unke sath ek beti ka baap kabhi dhokha nahi kar sakta h ...trust me
Main--- ok aur sunil time for Nirwana revange.....kyoki
MERE NAAM MAI H NIRWAANA AUR MAIN MOKHS DETA NI HU TADPATA HU TADPATA HU USKI ROOH KO
Rajeev palatkar dekhta h aur jab dekhta h ki ye baat maine kahi thi toh wo ek baar muje aur ek baar apni beti ki taraf dhekta h aur uski ankho se khusi ke ansuu nikal ate h aur man mai he bolta h main toh u he aj tak dar ke jee raha tha meri beti ki rakhsa ke liye toh khud yamraj baithe h toh maut kaise chu sakti h usai jarur maine kuch ache karam kiye honge jo bhagwaan ne suni h meri aur phir lag jata h saboot mitane ...
10 minut baad
Main--- muu pe mask laga kar aur sunil ki dress pahan kar Uttrakhan wasiyo main Nirwana Ek baar fir se is baar apko ek aisa sach dikhane aya hu jisai soon aur dekhkar apka khun khol jayega .....phir camera police walo ki taraf karke ye h hamre rakhsak jinke bharose hum khud ko safe aur surakshit mahsus karte h.....ab dhayaan se dekhiyega .kya ho jab rakhsak he bhaksak ban jaye inki sachayi kya h ap khud janiye fir plat kar
Main--- tum sab ne meri baat nahi suni na Tum police walo ne sultan ka sath diya aur ek ladki ki kiddnaping karne ki kosis ki jab wo mumkin nahi huvi toh Tum log usko aur uske baap aur ek padhne wale ladke ko thane mai utha ke le aye apni wardi ke dum par tum yahi nahi ruke aur ladki ka sabne milke rape karne ki kosis ki ye inka jurm h aur ab suno inka jurm inki jubani main phir ek ko pakadke uska hath he kaat deta hu kalayi se wo chillane lagta h main ssssshhh jitna chilayega utna katunga aur dusra hath bi kaat deta hu faltu ki koyi bi awaj nikli toh jaan se maar dunga samjhe....phir baki police walo se bolta hu bolte ho ya nahi phir inspecter ko ghasit ke lata hu aur usko camere ke samne lake uski ankho mai ungliya daal ke ankh fod deta hu.....wo pant mai moot deta h dard se main bol warna agai hath katunga..
Inspector --- aaahhhhh bbbba bolta huuu....mmmuje...SP sahab ne dus lakh rs diye the aj thane mai phone se galat jawab dene ke ki doon school se phone sye toh ye bolna h ki hum kanhi aur reki karne aye h aur hume kidi bi keemat par sultan ki madad karne ke liye kaha tha aj ...
Main--- 2 thapad marke agai bak kutte
Inspecter --- ahhhh Sp sahab sultan ke liye kaam karte h....wo Imandar inspecter rajeev ne jo sultaan ka maal pakda tha uska pata karne chate the sultaan ke liye.....isiliye jab kidnapping fail ho gayi toh khud hume leke madad ke liye pahuch gaye ....
Main phir uski ek ungli kaat deta hu jo bahut dard naak tha phir ghutne pe 2nali bandook maar ke tod deta hu jisai dekh piche kayi police wale moot dete h...dar ke mare phir jaise he main inspecter ki jeeb kat ta hu sabki halat patli ho jati h aur main SP ko dekhta hu toh SP toh kab ka dar se apni fati gaand silne ki kosis kar raha tha . phir puri takat se ek mukka inspecter ke gardan ke piche marta hu jisai wo dur jake girta h .......muje pata tha ab wo jindgi bhar ventileter pe he rahega....
Ab main dheere dheere chalke Sp ki taraf jata hu wo piche khiskta huva diwar ke chipak jata h main pass jake uski coller pakad hu aur khinch ke uthake usi table pe patakta hu janha rinky ko letaya tha.... Wo pith ke bal girta h aur table ko todta hu niche farsh par girta h phir khinch kar usai bahar nikale ek jhatke mai uski belt nikalta hu ......aur uski shirt utarne ko bolta hu phir pant aur jameen pe leta ke baki police walo se jo isko jeetna marega belt aur dando se usai kam dard milega aur iska khun nahi nikalna chahiye h full 3rd degree 5 minut h agar pasand na sya toh fir ...itna sunte he sab lag gaye dande aur belto se sutne uski pith ki puri chamdi nikal gayi thi aur gaand se guda bahar agaya tha piche ki sari chamdi udhad gayi thi
Main--- maza nahi aya maine movies mai dekha h jab criminal bolta nahi h tum uski gaand mai kuch daalte ho phir madarchoda iske kyo nahi dala police wale dar ke mare uski tange chodi karke danda gand mai bina deri ke gusa dete h niche sp jitna danda andar jata utna chilla raha tha aur mere chahre pe muskaan thi....phir uski bi hath ki unguliya jeeb ankh fod di aur reed ki hadi tod di.... Aur yahi haal sabka kiya pura thane mai sirf khun ki mahak thi....
Phir ek tirchi muskaan se sittu ki taraf dekha....aur sittu ki fatne lagiii usai apni maut nazar arahi thi aur wo ro ro kar raham ki bikh mang raha tha....
Main sittu ke pass jake usai jail ka lock up khol ke bahar gasit ke laya aur sunil se
Main--- le ja isai ab koyi bi aasakta h aur in baki gundo ko kaat de par pahle hum 2no ko jail mai karde aur chabi wapas latka dena taki yahi lage ye loge thane mai khule he ghum rahe the aur us jhansi ki rani ko sambhal lena muje dar kisi se nahi lagta h bus usi ka lagta h ......ab tak asmaan utha liya hoga uski chamchiyo ne usai sab bata diya hoga koun bachayega... Ram jane ...ye le dress change ho gayi h ab ja is chutiye ko leke hume band karde
Sunil--- lock lagate huve jiske naam se ache ache dar jate h wo apni bahan se darta h ha ha ha...
Main beta maar toh tuje bi padegi tera bi jikra huva hoga maine tuje bulaya nahi tha he he he.....tuje pakka usne bulaya tha aur tu kya kar raha h ...
Sunil--- shocked me rocked....
Thodi dair baad dhadam se darwaja tut ta h
Awaj--- every one handsup ...aur phir samne ka haal dhek ke 3no ka dar ke mare unka ji ghabrane lagta h unhe charo taraf sirf khun he khun dikhta h sab kuch tuta huva tha thana kam shamshan ghat lag raha tha... wo sab dhayan se dekhte h toh ek kone mai ek ladki dari huvi baithi huvi baithi thi wo uske pass jate h unmai se ek ladki thi wo usai sambhalti h aur puchti Kya huva yanha......
Rinky—mma ma ma mam na na na na NIRWANA ....aur rone lagti h
Lady officer—ok ok dont cry phir baki se search karo raj ko dhundo
Baki officer dekhte h ki 2 jane lockup mai h toh ...wo udhar jate h main aram se leta huva tha
Officer—who is raj
Main--- uuunnncleee main hu raj. Please muje bacha lijiye apko sonali mam ne bheja h..na...
Officer—meri taraf shock se dekhte h phir ha bolte h..
Main--- wooo...sonali..mam bahut achi h wo muje bahut pyar karti h muje khana bi khilati h wo nahi ayi sath mai.....
Officers apna sir khujkane lagte h aur yahi haal rajeev ka tha aur rinky toh man mai he bolti h ye kya chij .....
Half hour hum wanha baithe hote h aur log report de rahe hote h ki commissioner bi ajata h police walo ke sath....
Commissioner – andar ka mahol dekh pagal ho jata h aur un officer ko dekhta h aur koun ho tum wo teeno apna i card dikhate h tab agai puchta h kisne kiya
Officer—Sir sure nahi h but ye teeno kah rahe Nirwana ne kiya h....aur sabke ke liye ambulence arahi h....phir inka bayaan le liya jayega inhe medical ki jarurat h ..
Commissioner – nahi in teeno ko nahi chod sakte h ye gawah aur suspects bi h...
Main--- sunke ghur ke dekhta hu phir masoom chehra bana kar officer se uncle uncle ye muchi wale uncle gande h main sonali mam ko bataunga ye jail mai rakhenge muje sur dant bi rahe h sab bataunga unhe wo ache se uncle ko dantengi unke pass bahut taakat h wo super girl h wo ud bi sakti h phir sonali ka number dial karta hu aur sona phone uthati h
Sonali--- tum tikh ho na tumhe bahut marungi muje ane do wanha phir dekhti hu tumhe..muje nahi bata sakte agar koyi baat thi toh...sabko maar doge...tumhe kuch ho jata toh..upar se phone nahi uthate ho....tum raj bahut maar khaoge kasam se kah deti hu ....
Main--- man mai hey bhagwan pahle meri toh sunlo
Sonali--- bolte kyo nahi ab kanha gayi juban tumhari ya dahi jam gaya h ab muu mai..
Main--- sonali mam sonali mam ye bade se muchi wale uncle muje aur ache uncle ko dant rahe h....ap inhe dantye na..ye lo uncle baat karo..ap apki pitti hogi he he he aur taliya bajane lagata hu...
Commissioner ghusai se muje dekh ke hello...
Sonali ---wapas se apne roudra roop mai ajati h.. agar usai 5 minut bi roka toh 6 minut tere hath mai tera resignation letter hoga ..
Commissioner – muje dhamki de rahi ho janti ho main koun hu..
Sonali--- main ache se janti hu par tu nahi janta h ki tu kisai baat kar raha h aurr tere samne koun khada h jane de warna tu nahi ja payega....ye tufaan toh chala jayega subhe tak par subhe tera baap tere office mai hoga usai tu samjha ni pahega ...samja....ki kyo tune inhe roka aur criminals ko nahi pakda samja teri sari kartute subhe teri office main hongi....aur jayda bakwas ki toh bhosdike ko gaand mai jhaduu ghusa ke mor bana dungi samja ...
Commissioner rumal se pasine puch kar ghabrate huve thik h....
Main--- he he he muchi wale uncle ki fat gayi he he he
Rinky--???
Rajeev---?????
Hum bahar aye toh officers bi piche aya lady officer—sir sonali mam ne apko protect karne aur apni dekh rekh mai lene ke liye kaha h
main ap ek kaam kijiye samne jo car khadi h usai follow karte huve ajaiye ...mere sath ok apki bi duety ho jayegi
Lady officer—shocked ki ye toh bilkul tikh h aur sir khujlate huve ki ho kya raha h but bechari kuch samaj na payi
Wo ok bol mere piche ho li....
Main rajeev rinky ko unke ghar choda toh
Rajeev--- main nahi janta kaise tumhara ahsan chukaunga ..
Main--- jald milenge ahsan chuka sakte ho aur waise bi mere rahte mere apno ko koyi nuksan nahi pahuch sakta h kal commissioner office jayiyega meri wajah se job gayi thi na apko wapis mil jayegi....wanha chief se milna
Rajeev--- khus raho hamesa.... rinky tum Raj ko bye bolke ajao....
Rinky—papa ke jate he sidha mere gale lag gayi uski ankhe nam thi aur boli thank you aur thoda uncha hoke mere forhead pe kiss ki...thank youfor everything...
Main---bus kitna thank you bologi tum safe ho tumhari family safe h jald he tumhare papa wapas duety pe honge phir uska hathpakad kar agar pahle bata deti toh dikat he nahi hoti...
Rinky—ohh right muje sapne ate the na ki main the great Nirwana ki friend hu na idiot itna pata hota toh paka bolti ...aur phir se gaal pe kisss karke bhag gayi ..
Main--- pagal ladki.....car ko officer ke sath leke hospital aa gaya....
Bahar mera admi khada tha usne bataya sab tikh h andar gaya toh mainsha tikh thi treatment kar diya tha 15 din ka complete bed rest bataya tha aur aditya bi ek ankh kali karwa ke aur patti karake baitha tha...
Main---manisha ko dekh ke oh my god muje nahi pata tha mere sath lady singham rahti h ab toh main bach ke he rahunga....
Mainsha ne ishare se muje pass bulaya aur ek thapad mara aur auu auuu ahhh karne lagi ...
Main--- mara muje dard tuje ho raha h...
Manisha --- raj ko ghur kar bewakoof maar muje bi toh padi thi phir ghoor kar koun hu tum .... champoo se rahte the tabi doubt tha tumhare hath tumhari prediction ...har chij muje yahi batati thi u r somthing else ....
Main--- kya karegi jaanke acha 15 din meri mehmaan banke mere ghar rahegi i promise rape nahi karunga...
Meri is baat se sab muskarane lage...aur manisha ne ankhe jhapka ke ha kahi ....main aditiya tuje maan gaya bhai abhi late ho gaya h tu ghar ja main hu yanha police ki car h wo chod degi aur samja bi degi tere mama mami ko aur ..kal is pagal ladki ko discharge karke ghar he admit karwata hu iska sara dhayan wahi rakha jayega...dr ko arrange karlunga main...Aditya ke jane ke baad ..main bi wanhi manisha ke pass wale sofe pe he late gaya....aur half hour baad mere chehre pe ek muskaan agayiiii aur mu se nikala jhonny jhonny yes papa gaand tuti no papa..toh todni padegi beta.... mere chahre pe ek muskaan thi.. par main ye bhul gaya tha kamre mai manisha bi thi jo muje he dekh rahi thi a aur uske chehre pe ek bhav agaye jo muje nahi pata the ki kya the....
Main so gaya kyoki kal ke din muje jhonny jhonny yes papa khelna tha ...
PREDATOR AUR PREY ABHI PURA NAHI HUVA THA.....
Udhar
John apne khufiya tikhane pe pada huva tha Uski halat bahut buri ho rakhi thi wanha 20 jane aur the jinhone sultaan ke charo rasto ko roka tha
John—sab band kardo koyi bahar nahi jayega koyi andar nahi ayega
Jhonny ki halat dekh kisi ko kuch samaj nahi araha tha kyoki john ki halat bahut buri thi...
Bahar ek ek banda durbinse khufiya base dekh kar wapas chal diya.....
Toh ek ghar ke basement mai sultan nanga latka huva tha.......
Aj ke liye itna he ......
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