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Villian....Death halo on Monday night between 10 to 11pm
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Update 89.....
Finding past—begins
alone feelings—Suruwaat....
After 2 days......
Sham ka samay tha aur Main ek hill ke top pe baitha huva tha....
mere samne suraj din bhar apni roshni se sabke jeevan ko roshan kar ke aram karne ke liye ja raha tha ......meri nighaye bus doobte suraj ko he dekh rahi thi jis ki dheemi halki roshni shanti de rahi thi...ek ajib sa sukun mil raha tha akele baith ke .....
Man mai vichar chal rahe the jinhe main khud nahi samaj pa raha tha....aur bus samne dekhe ja raha tha ek tak........suraj doob gaya tab mere dil se awaj ayi kya meri jindgi ke dhuk u he doobenge kabhi .....mera vaise bi koyi nahi h is duniya mai aur jo h wo bi paiso Ke liye marna chahte h ....aur sayad yahi kaaran mere maa baap ko marne ka raha hoga....par gareeb hona bi toh paap h richa bi toh isiliye dur hoti gayi thi mujse ....kabhi samajne ki kosis he nahi ki ....kaas ek baar viswas kar liya hota.... aj bi yaad h usne muje hawas ka bhukha kaha tha......richa agar main hawas ka bhukha hota toh tumhare sath toh sex nahi kiya tum jarur bahki par maine har baar roka.....tum hamesa kahti thi i trust you ...but tut gaya kuch he palo mai .. main samajta hu sab tumhari galti nahi h meri bi bahut galtiya h aur main ata tumhe manane bi kyoki aj bi main tumhe beintiha pyar karta hu....mera dil aj bi tumhe bahut yaad karta h....tum agar dubara sakal na dikhane wali baat na kahti toh jarur tumse milta aur tumhe manata par sayad mere jeevan mai tumhara sath itna he tha....main tumhe yaad kar bahut tadap liya hu ab ek nayi suruwat karunga .....ab tumhe dil ki gahrayiyo se nikalne ki puri kosis karunga tum mera adhura khawab he rah jaogi is janam mai .sabki tarah mera pyar bi adhura rah jayega...bus meri yahi duwa h tum hamesa khus raho.....miss you.... hamara pyar aj mere dil aur yado ki gahrayiyo mai dab gaya h hamesa ke liye ..........thodi dair u he baithne ke baad...main sunya ki awasta mai ho gaya janha na mera dil na dimag kuch kar par raha tha bus meri nazar samne ki taraf thi.....kuch dair baad mera phone ring hone laga....
Main--- Hello
Ye hello hello kya hota h bhai 5 hours ho gaye ....hum bhukhe baitha h ...ap 2 hours ka kahke gaye the ...
Main--- time dekh kar raat ke 9 baj gaye h ....main half hour mai aya....call cut....aur mere chahre pe muskaan agayi.
Dur .....
Ladki -richa hamesa tu yanha ati h ghumne aisa kyo....
Richa--- dil karta h mera ek sukun milta h yanha par yanha apnapan sa lagta
Ladki--- yaar achi jagah ghuma kar na pub mai chalte h aj raat dance masti karenge yanha ke pub mast h.
Richa--- dil nahi karta h mera ...Aur chalte huve road ke kinare baithe ek shaks jo gitar baza raha tha usai ek doller deti h ..aur uske pass khadi ho jati h
Ladki--- tu jab bi ati h isai 1 doller deti h aur yahi rahti h kafi dair aisa kyo...
Richa--- pata nahi bus main jab bi ati hu ye yanhi baitha milta h .....iske music mai ek ahsas h jo muje khichta h .....
Ladki--- tu aur teri soch chal ghar chalte h....
Richa tu chal main gitaar sunke ati hu....aur wo khadi hoke auro ke sath gitaar sunne lagti h..
Richa ka ye roj ka routine tha ...wo roj guitar sunti aur ek doller deti aur ghar ajatiiii.......
Aj bi wo behad dhayan se he sun rahi thi ..Richa itne dhayan se sunti thi ki usai ek sukun ek ahsas sa milta tha us dhuun mai usai aisa mahus hota tha ki wo usi ka dard bayan kar rahi h ...jab dil halka mahus hota wo wapas ghar ki taraf lout aati thi bus isi pal he dard kuch kam hota tha ab wo thoda bolti thi par ab bi wo ek kamre mai band hokar apne khayalo ki duniya mai chali jati ....jaise un khayalo mai koyi usai kisi se milne ka besabri se intezaar ho.... ...aur unhi khayalo mai samay bitati.....aj bi wo sapno ki duniya mai thi par uske chehre pe pareshani ke bhav the jissai uska chehra pasine se bhiga huva tha aur chehre pe dar aur pareshani ke bhav arahe aur ja rahe the ...aur wo dheere dheere dheere bol rahi thi nahi nahi nahi.......aur uski nind khul jati h.....uski ankho se ansuu beh nikalte h.....
Jaisalmer.......
Shivani--- fast fast
Kuch waqt baad
Sam village jo jaisalmer se 40 km ki duri par h apne dunes yani rait ke tilo aur tourism ke liye famus h wanha 2 open jeeb ka picha shivani police team ke sath kar rahi thi ....dono jeeb agai jake divied ho jati h...
Shivani--- left wali jeeb ka picha karo aur uske typer par fire karo....
Kafi dair ki masakat ke baad jeeb wale hath ajate h
Shivani---bahut ud liya ab tere pankh kutar du ya bolega
Admi--- chup raha ...
Ek gun fire sound aya aur sath he chillane ki awaj aur ek niche pada tadfadane laga ...
Shivani—tu bolega ya...iski trah tadfadta huva marega
Admi--- ha bolunga na ye saman delhi jana tha ye afganistaan se Pakistan ke raste bharat mai ata h....
Shivani--- wanha kisko dete ho
Admi--- ye muje nahi pata par yanha ye maal hum sappu supplier ko dete h jo agai bhejta h muje itna he pata maidam...Muje chod do...
Shivani--- chod dungi aur ye bata sappu pappu supplier kanha milega
Admi--- bikaner uska adda wanhi h border ke karib ..wo yanha ata rahta h ...
Shivani--- inspector ko ishara kar deti h azad kar do .....
Aur piche 2 gun fire sound ati h ...
Next day Morning...
Main--- ab tikh ho tum .....ghoom sakti ho
Manisha—yaar dr ne rest kaha tha letai rahne ko nahi kaha tha ...tum toh meri maa se bi bure ho is mamle mai....wo muje ghumne toh deti ..thoda bahut par tumne toh hilne he nahi diya upar se tumhari wo goliya......par aj pata nahi kaise maan gaye tum....
Main---Dr ne ok kaha h isliye... toh tikh h aj beauty ko bike se khuli hawa khilata hu ......ok ....aj school chalogi jao ready ho jao ..Isilye subhe jagaya h...
Manisha ke sath chal pada school manisha ko mere sath dekh ke janha sab ladkiya jal rahi thi ......toh ladko ke seene pe saanp ajgar sab lotpalate kha rahe the....class mai firse rounak agayi thi ab hum charo sath he baithe the
Aditiya—toh buddy kab ja rahe ho competition ke kiye start hone mai 5 din baki h ....
Main--- yaar maidam toh bus se bol rahi h but hum train se jayenge morning 8 baje chalti h ..aur dopahar ko chod degi din bhar rest aur agle din competition mai part leke wapas...
Aditiya rinky --- ye best rahega....... Yaar train ka safar bahut comfortable rahega .....
Aditiya—manisha tu dhayan rakhna....
Manisha--- main tikh hu aur ye rahega macho men sath mai...toh dhayan rakh lega
Rinky—kya karwayegi .....isai aisa ha ha ha ha ....
Janha hum hans rahe the toh koyi aisa bi tha jiske chehre se kuch aur he nazar araha tha .......jiski umid muje bi nahi thi kyoki main bi umid nahi kar sakta hu ki mera itna khatarnak roop dekhne ke baad koyi school se mujse dushmani karega par lagta h kuch toh raj h uska bi......
Main ghar par room mai leta tha aur gahri soch mai tha tab shweta ayi aur mere pass late gayi....
Shweta--- acha toh kya socha ja raha h ..
Main--- usai gale laga ke life ke bare mai
Shweta – jara muje bi batana
Main--- pata h shweta maine pichle kafi waqt mai itne logo ko mara h ki kabhi kabhi sapne mai bi khud ko khun ka pyasa dekhta hu....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera jeevan aisa bi hoga ....janha mere apne muje marne wale honge....maine kabhi kisi se pyar ke alawa kuch nahi manga bachpan mai pyar ke liye tarsa bada huva toh ek ke sath jindgi jeene ke sapne sajaye aur usai thoda sa ajmaya toh wo gareeb samajke chod gayiii....meri zindgi mai he itni muskile kyo h....
Shweta--- sach bolu toh bhai apko chahne wale jayda h sabse pahle main ......jo ap par ankh band kar ke viswas karti h phir mamta kavita jinhe maine dekha nahi par muje pata h wo apko bahut chahti h.....phir sage bhai se bhadkar pyar karne wala bhai sunil.....uski barabari toh koyi nahi kar sakta h.....jo ap pe ane wale har khatre ko apne par le leta h.....aur deepika dii wo toh bus sabkuch apko manti h sayad he koyi din aisa ho jab apko yaad na kare....aur toh aur SP mam jo apko sayad like bi karti h mere mummy papa jo apko apna beta mantr h ....badepapa kaptaan aur mousi....aur one only Dada ji jinke sacrifies ke agai sabka pyar chota h aur kitne naam ginau ap batao bheema chacha... choti chachi... mana jindgi muskil h par apko chahne wale jayda h ...aur apko chahne wali bi hogi kahi toh hogi aur mere bhai ke liye bhagwan khud bhejega usai.....bilkul poonam ke chand jaisi hogi khubshurat apke jeevan mai Chand ki khubsoort roshni ki trah apke jeevan mai khusiya bhar degi....
Main--- sir ko chum kar love u so much my sweet sis..
Shweta--- bhai ayegi ....apki jindgi mai bahut bahut khusiya ....ayengi aur warna hum bhai bahan toh h he chill karenge no tension no fikar bus khusiya he khusiya...
Hum dono hamari he bate kar rahe the toh dur....Kanhi
Poonam oh poonam
Poonam—ayi chacha.....ayi....
Chacha--- tu itna kaam mat karwaya kar wo bachi h uske maa baap ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...kya kahenge wo...
Chachi – main thodi he karwati hu wo khud karti h ..
Chacha--- sab pata h muje ...dekh meri beti h wo usai jara bi dukh huva kabhi toh tu samaj liyo muje jeete ji maar degi tu wo mere bhai bhabi ki akhiri nishani h unhone muje apne bete ke jaise pala tha jo ye sab h unki he mehnat ka...
Tabi poonam ajati h...
Chacha--- beti sans le le ab meri baat soon agle mahine koombh ka mela lagega haar 12 saal mai ek baar hota h toh hum bi chalenge...pavitra snan ka mouka dubara mile ya na mile.....
Poonam—ji baba maine bi bus kitabo mai padha h sirf....
Chacha ja ab aram karle itna kaam mat kar nahi toh tere papa ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...bolenge meri chori se itna kaam karwata tha...
Poonam—na baba ap jaise chacha chachi ho jiske pass unhe kabhi dhuk ho he nahi sakta h aur ap mere maa baba ho toh ek beti apne maa baap ki seva nahi karegi toh kiski karegi....
Chachi—aur jo choro se ladti h...wo...
Poonam—wo toh ulaj rahe the toh dhar diye ....2 kaan ke niche
Chachi—dekha.. aise toh ye apne pati ke bi maar degi
Chacha--- ha ha ha.....akhir beti kiski h...
Poonam—aur kya main na jane wali ap dono ko chod ke main toh ap dono ke sath he rahungi....
Night 11pm...
Shivani--- ji mam yes ....ha jaisalmer ka sappu supplier h wo agai delhi maal supply karta h .....
Sonali--- hmmm good job shivani
Shivani--- one thing mam they have planning for some thing big inhone bahut badi planning ki warna itne hathiyaar aur rdx kisliye mangwaye
Sonali--- matlb
Shivani--- mam ye dusri khep h ek pahle achuki h toh ap sochiye hathiyaaar toh india mai bi mil jate phir itni mehnat kyu...aisa kya h jismai ye bhari tabahyi macha sakte h....
Sonali--- hmm point toh h ok tum find out karo koyi clue aur sappu supplier ke pappu pe tharo ache se bakega wo jarur kaam ka ...main yanha pata karti hu aur jald he tumse milti hu.....
Chief so ....
Sonali--- sari information deti h..
Chief--- aisa kya h ....jiski ye planning kar sakte h itne bhari matra mai....
Ek secret place pe
Oye habibi pathan khus huva . ye toh car bilkul police gaadi jaisa lagta h aur ye wardi bi pura police jaisa he dikhta h...oye tum toh pathan ko Khus kar diya....
Vithal—ap hamare junior victer ke khass mehmaan ho apke liye jaan hajir h....bus ap thodi meri tarif kar dena .
Pathan--- oye ek baar ye kaam ho jaye hum tumko malamaal kardega...
Vithal—jarur hoga ....
Aj ke liye itna he ....
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Zabardast Update BhaiUpdate 89.....
Finding past—begins
alone feelings—Suruwaat....
After 2 days......
Sham ka samay tha aur Main ek hill ke top pe baitha huva tha....
mere samne suraj din bhar apni roshni se sabke jeevan ko roshan kar ke aram karne ke liye ja raha tha ......meri nighaye bus doobte suraj ko he dekh rahi thi jis ki dheemi halki roshni shanti de rahi thi...ek ajib sa sukun mil raha tha akele baith ke .....
Man mai vichar chal rahe the jinhe main khud nahi samaj pa raha tha....aur bus samne dekhe ja raha tha ek tak........suraj doob gaya tab mere dil se awaj ayi kya meri jindgi ke dhuk u he doobenge kabhi .....mera vaise bi koyi nahi h is duniya mai aur jo h wo bi paiso Ke liye marna chahte h ....aur sayad yahi kaaran mere maa baap ko marne ka raha hoga....par gareeb hona bi toh paap h richa bi toh isiliye dur hoti gayi thi mujse ....kabhi samajne ki kosis he nahi ki ....kaas ek baar viswas kar liya hota.... aj bi yaad h usne muje hawas ka bhukha kaha tha......richa agar main hawas ka bhukha hota toh tumhare sath toh sex nahi kiya tum jarur bahki par maine har baar roka.....tum hamesa kahti thi i trust you ...but tut gaya kuch he palo mai .. main samajta hu sab tumhari galti nahi h meri bi bahut galtiya h aur main ata tumhe manane bi kyoki aj bi main tumhe beintiha pyar karta hu....mera dil aj bi tumhe bahut yaad karta h....tum agar dubara sakal na dikhane wali baat na kahti toh jarur tumse milta aur tumhe manata par sayad mere jeevan mai tumhara sath itna he tha....main tumhe yaad kar bahut tadap liya hu ab ek nayi suruwat karunga .....ab tumhe dil ki gahrayiyo se nikalne ki puri kosis karunga tum mera adhura khawab he rah jaogi is janam mai .sabki tarah mera pyar bi adhura rah jayega...bus meri yahi duwa h tum hamesa khus raho.....miss you.... hamara pyar aj mere dil aur yado ki gahrayiyo mai dab gaya h hamesa ke liye ..........thodi dair u he baithne ke baad...main sunya ki awasta mai ho gaya janha na mera dil na dimag kuch kar par raha tha bus meri nazar samne ki taraf thi.....kuch dair baad mera phone ring hone laga....
Main--- Hello
Ye hello hello kya hota h bhai 5 hours ho gaye ....hum bhukhe baitha h ...ap 2 hours ka kahke gaye the ...
Main--- time dekh kar raat ke 9 baj gaye h ....main half hour mai aya....call cut....aur mere chahre pe muskaan agayi.
Dur .....
Ladki -richa hamesa tu yanha ati h ghumne aisa kyo....
Richa--- dil karta h mera ek sukun milta h yanha par yanha apnapan sa lagta
Ladki--- yaar achi jagah ghuma kar na pub mai chalte h aj raat dance masti karenge yanha ke pub mast h.
Richa--- dil nahi karta h mera ...Aur chalte huve road ke kinare baithe ek shaks jo gitar baza raha tha usai ek doller deti h ..aur uske pass khadi ho jati h
Ladki--- tu jab bi ati h isai 1 doller deti h aur yahi rahti h kafi dair aisa kyo...
Richa--- pata nahi bus main jab bi ati hu ye yanhi baitha milta h .....iske music mai ek ahsas h jo muje khichta h .....
Ladki--- tu aur teri soch chal ghar chalte h....
Richa tu chal main gitaar sunke ati hu....aur wo khadi hoke auro ke sath gitaar sunne lagti h..
Richa ka ye roj ka routine tha ...wo roj guitar sunti aur ek doller deti aur ghar ajatiiii.......
Aj bi wo behad dhayan se he sun rahi thi ..Richa itne dhayan se sunti thi ki usai ek sukun ek ahsas sa milta tha us dhuun mai usai aisa mahus hota tha ki wo usi ka dard bayan kar rahi h ...jab dil halka mahus hota wo wapas ghar ki taraf lout aati thi bus isi pal he dard kuch kam hota tha ab wo thoda bolti thi par ab bi wo ek kamre mai band hokar apne khayalo ki duniya mai chali jati ....jaise un khayalo mai koyi usai kisi se milne ka besabri se intezaar ho.... ...aur unhi khayalo mai samay bitati.....aj bi wo sapno ki duniya mai thi par uske chehre pe pareshani ke bhav the jissai uska chehra pasine se bhiga huva tha aur chehre pe dar aur pareshani ke bhav arahe aur ja rahe the ...aur wo dheere dheere dheere bol rahi thi nahi nahi nahi.......aur uski nind khul jati h.....uski ankho se ansuu beh nikalte h.....
Jaisalmer.......
Shivani--- fast fast
Kuch waqt baad
Sam village jo jaisalmer se 40 km ki duri par h apne dunes yani rait ke tilo aur tourism ke liye famus h wanha 2 open jeeb ka picha shivani police team ke sath kar rahi thi ....dono jeeb agai jake divied ho jati h...
Shivani--- left wali jeeb ka picha karo aur uske typer par fire karo....
Kafi dair ki masakat ke baad jeeb wale hath ajate h
Shivani---bahut ud liya ab tere pankh kutar du ya bolega
Admi--- chup raha ...
Ek gun fire sound aya aur sath he chillane ki awaj aur ek niche pada tadfadane laga ...
Shivani—tu bolega ya...iski trah tadfadta huva marega
Admi--- ha bolunga na ye saman delhi jana tha ye afganistaan se Pakistan ke raste bharat mai ata h....
Shivani--- wanha kisko dete ho
Admi--- ye muje nahi pata par yanha ye maal hum sappu supplier ko dete h jo agai bhejta h muje itna he pata maidam...Muje chod do...
Shivani--- chod dungi aur ye bata sappu pappu supplier kanha milega
Admi--- bikaner uska adda wanhi h border ke karib ..wo yanha ata rahta h ...
Shivani--- inspector ko ishara kar deti h azad kar do .....
Aur piche 2 gun fire sound ati h ...
Next day Morning...
Main--- ab tikh ho tum .....ghoom sakti ho
Manisha—yaar dr ne rest kaha tha letai rahne ko nahi kaha tha ...tum toh meri maa se bi bure ho is mamle mai....wo muje ghumne toh deti ..thoda bahut par tumne toh hilne he nahi diya upar se tumhari wo goliya......par aj pata nahi kaise maan gaye tum....
Main---Dr ne ok kaha h isliye... toh tikh h aj beauty ko bike se khuli hawa khilata hu ......ok ....aj school chalogi jao ready ho jao ..Isilye subhe jagaya h...
Manisha ke sath chal pada school manisha ko mere sath dekh ke janha sab ladkiya jal rahi thi ......toh ladko ke seene pe saanp ajgar sab lotpalate kha rahe the....class mai firse rounak agayi thi ab hum charo sath he baithe the
Aditiya—toh buddy kab ja rahe ho competition ke kiye start hone mai 5 din baki h ....
Main--- yaar maidam toh bus se bol rahi h but hum train se jayenge morning 8 baje chalti h ..aur dopahar ko chod degi din bhar rest aur agle din competition mai part leke wapas...
Aditiya rinky --- ye best rahega....... Yaar train ka safar bahut comfortable rahega .....
Aditiya—manisha tu dhayan rakhna....
Manisha--- main tikh hu aur ye rahega macho men sath mai...toh dhayan rakh lega
Rinky—kya karwayegi .....isai aisa ha ha ha ha ....
Janha hum hans rahe the toh koyi aisa bi tha jiske chehre se kuch aur he nazar araha tha .......jiski umid muje bi nahi thi kyoki main bi umid nahi kar sakta hu ki mera itna khatarnak roop dekhne ke baad koyi school se mujse dushmani karega par lagta h kuch toh raj h uska bi......
Main ghar par room mai leta tha aur gahri soch mai tha tab shweta ayi aur mere pass late gayi....
Shweta--- acha toh kya socha ja raha h ..
Main--- usai gale laga ke life ke bare mai
Shweta – jara muje bi batana
Main--- pata h shweta maine pichle kafi waqt mai itne logo ko mara h ki kabhi kabhi sapne mai bi khud ko khun ka pyasa dekhta hu....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera jeevan aisa bi hoga ....janha mere apne muje marne wale honge....maine kabhi kisi se pyar ke alawa kuch nahi manga bachpan mai pyar ke liye tarsa bada huva toh ek ke sath jindgi jeene ke sapne sajaye aur usai thoda sa ajmaya toh wo gareeb samajke chod gayiii....meri zindgi mai he itni muskile kyo h....
Shweta--- sach bolu toh bhai apko chahne wale jayda h sabse pahle main ......jo ap par ankh band kar ke viswas karti h phir mamta kavita jinhe maine dekha nahi par muje pata h wo apko bahut chahti h.....phir sage bhai se bhadkar pyar karne wala bhai sunil.....uski barabari toh koyi nahi kar sakta h.....jo ap pe ane wale har khatre ko apne par le leta h.....aur deepika dii wo toh bus sabkuch apko manti h sayad he koyi din aisa ho jab apko yaad na kare....aur toh aur SP mam jo apko sayad like bi karti h mere mummy papa jo apko apna beta mantr h ....badepapa kaptaan aur mousi....aur one only Dada ji jinke sacrifies ke agai sabka pyar chota h aur kitne naam ginau ap batao bheema chacha... choti chachi... mana jindgi muskil h par apko chahne wale jayda h ...aur apko chahne wali bi hogi kahi toh hogi aur mere bhai ke liye bhagwan khud bhejega usai.....bilkul poonam ke chand jaisi hogi khubshurat apke jeevan mai Chand ki khubsoort roshni ki trah apke jeevan mai khusiya bhar degi....
Main--- sir ko chum kar love u so much my sweet sis..
Shweta--- bhai ayegi ....apki jindgi mai bahut bahut khusiya ....ayengi aur warna hum bhai bahan toh h he chill karenge no tension no fikar bus khusiya he khusiya...
Hum dono hamari he bate kar rahe the toh dur....Kanhi
Poonam oh poonam
Poonam—ayi chacha.....ayi....
Chacha--- tu itna kaam mat karwaya kar wo bachi h uske maa baap ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...kya kahenge wo...
Chachi – main thodi he karwati hu wo khud karti h ..
Chacha--- sab pata h muje ...dekh meri beti h wo usai jara bi dukh huva kabhi toh tu samaj liyo muje jeete ji maar degi tu wo mere bhai bhabi ki akhiri nishani h unhone muje apne bete ke jaise pala tha jo ye sab h unki he mehnat ka...
Tabi poonam ajati h...
Chacha--- beti sans le le ab meri baat soon agle mahine koombh ka mela lagega haar 12 saal mai ek baar hota h toh hum bi chalenge...pavitra snan ka mouka dubara mile ya na mile.....
Poonam—ji baba maine bi bus kitabo mai padha h sirf....
Chacha ja ab aram karle itna kaam mat kar nahi toh tere papa ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...bolenge meri chori se itna kaam karwata tha...
Poonam—na baba ap jaise chacha chachi ho jiske pass unhe kabhi dhuk ho he nahi sakta h aur ap mere maa baba ho toh ek beti apne maa baap ki seva nahi karegi toh kiski karegi....
Chachi—aur jo choro se ladti h...wo...
Poonam—wo toh ulaj rahe the toh dhar diye ....2 kaan ke niche
Chachi—dekha.. aise toh ye apne pati ke bi maar degi
Chacha--- ha ha ha.....akhir beti kiski h...
Poonam—aur kya main na jane wali ap dono ko chod ke main toh ap dono ke sath he rahungi....
Night 11pm...
Shivani--- ji mam yes ....ha jaisalmer ka sappu supplier h wo agai delhi maal supply karta h .....
Sonali--- hmmm good job shivani
Shivani--- one thing mam they have planning for some thing big inhone bahut badi planning ki warna itne hathiyaar aur rdx kisliye mangwaye
Sonali--- matlb
Shivani--- mam ye dusri khep h ek pahle achuki h toh ap sochiye hathiyaaar toh india mai bi mil jate phir itni mehnat kyu...aisa kya h jismai ye bhari tabahyi macha sakte h....
Sonali--- hmm point toh h ok tum find out karo koyi clue aur sappu supplier ke pappu pe tharo ache se bakega wo jarur kaam ka ...main yanha pata karti hu aur jald he tumse milti hu.....
Chief so ....
Sonali--- sari information deti h..
Chief--- aisa kya h ....jiski ye planning kar sakte h itne bhari matra mai....
Ek secret place pe
Oye habibi pathan khus huva . ye toh car bilkul police gaadi jaisa lagta h aur ye wardi bi pura police jaisa he dikhta h...oye tum toh pathan ko Khus kar diya....
Vithal—ap hamare junior victer ke khass mehmaan ho apke liye jaan hajir h....bus ap thodi meri tarif kar dena .
Pathan--- oye ek baar ye kaam ho jaye hum tumko malamaal kardega...
Vithal—jarur hoga ....
Aj ke liye itna he ....
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शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jannUpdate 89.....
Finding past—begins
alone feelings—Suruwaat....
After 2 days......
Sham ka samay tha aur Main ek hill ke top pe baitha huva tha....
mere samne suraj din bhar apni roshni se sabke jeevan ko roshan kar ke aram karne ke liye ja raha tha ......meri nighaye bus doobte suraj ko he dekh rahi thi jis ki dheemi halki roshni shanti de rahi thi...ek ajib sa sukun mil raha tha akele baith ke .....
Man mai vichar chal rahe the jinhe main khud nahi samaj pa raha tha....aur bus samne dekhe ja raha tha ek tak........suraj doob gaya tab mere dil se awaj ayi kya meri jindgi ke dhuk u he doobenge kabhi .....mera vaise bi koyi nahi h is duniya mai aur jo h wo bi paiso Ke liye marna chahte h ....aur sayad yahi kaaran mere maa baap ko marne ka raha hoga....par gareeb hona bi toh paap h richa bi toh isiliye dur hoti gayi thi mujse ....kabhi samajne ki kosis he nahi ki ....kaas ek baar viswas kar liya hota.... aj bi yaad h usne muje hawas ka bhukha kaha tha......richa agar main hawas ka bhukha hota toh tumhare sath toh sex nahi kiya tum jarur bahki par maine har baar roka.....tum hamesa kahti thi i trust you ...but tut gaya kuch he palo mai .. main samajta hu sab tumhari galti nahi h meri bi bahut galtiya h aur main ata tumhe manane bi kyoki aj bi main tumhe beintiha pyar karta hu....mera dil aj bi tumhe bahut yaad karta h....tum agar dubara sakal na dikhane wali baat na kahti toh jarur tumse milta aur tumhe manata par sayad mere jeevan mai tumhara sath itna he tha....main tumhe yaad kar bahut tadap liya hu ab ek nayi suruwat karunga .....ab tumhe dil ki gahrayiyo se nikalne ki puri kosis karunga tum mera adhura khawab he rah jaogi is janam mai .sabki tarah mera pyar bi adhura rah jayega...bus meri yahi duwa h tum hamesa khus raho.....miss you.... hamara pyar aj mere dil aur yado ki gahrayiyo mai dab gaya h hamesa ke liye ..........thodi dair u he baithne ke baad...main sunya ki awasta mai ho gaya janha na mera dil na dimag kuch kar par raha tha bus meri nazar samne ki taraf thi.....kuch dair baad mera phone ring hone laga....
Main--- Hello
Ye hello hello kya hota h bhai 5 hours ho gaye ....hum bhukhe baitha h ...ap 2 hours ka kahke gaye the ...
Main--- time dekh kar raat ke 9 baj gaye h ....main half hour mai aya....call cut....aur mere chahre pe muskaan agayi.
Dur .....
Ladki -richa hamesa tu yanha ati h ghumne aisa kyo....
Richa--- dil karta h mera ek sukun milta h yanha par yanha apnapan sa lagta
Ladki--- yaar achi jagah ghuma kar na pub mai chalte h aj raat dance masti karenge yanha ke pub mast h.
Richa--- dil nahi karta h mera ...Aur chalte huve road ke kinare baithe ek shaks jo gitar baza raha tha usai ek doller deti h ..aur uske pass khadi ho jati h
Ladki--- tu jab bi ati h isai 1 doller deti h aur yahi rahti h kafi dair aisa kyo...
Richa--- pata nahi bus main jab bi ati hu ye yanhi baitha milta h .....iske music mai ek ahsas h jo muje khichta h .....
Ladki--- tu aur teri soch chal ghar chalte h....
Richa tu chal main gitaar sunke ati hu....aur wo khadi hoke auro ke sath gitaar sunne lagti h..
Richa ka ye roj ka routine tha ...wo roj guitar sunti aur ek doller deti aur ghar ajatiiii.......
Aj bi wo behad dhayan se he sun rahi thi ..Richa itne dhayan se sunti thi ki usai ek sukun ek ahsas sa milta tha us dhuun mai usai aisa mahus hota tha ki wo usi ka dard bayan kar rahi h ...jab dil halka mahus hota wo wapas ghar ki taraf lout aati thi bus isi pal he dard kuch kam hota tha ab wo thoda bolti thi par ab bi wo ek kamre mai band hokar apne khayalo ki duniya mai chali jati ....jaise un khayalo mai koyi usai kisi se milne ka besabri se intezaar ho.... ...aur unhi khayalo mai samay bitati.....aj bi wo sapno ki duniya mai thi par uske chehre pe pareshani ke bhav the jissai uska chehra pasine se bhiga huva tha aur chehre pe dar aur pareshani ke bhav arahe aur ja rahe the ...aur wo dheere dheere dheere bol rahi thi nahi nahi nahi.......aur uski nind khul jati h.....uski ankho se ansuu beh nikalte h.....
Jaisalmer.......
Shivani--- fast fast
Kuch waqt baad
Sam village jo jaisalmer se 40 km ki duri par h apne dunes yani rait ke tilo aur tourism ke liye famus h wanha 2 open jeeb ka picha shivani police team ke sath kar rahi thi ....dono jeeb agai jake divied ho jati h...
Shivani--- left wali jeeb ka picha karo aur uske typer par fire karo....
Kafi dair ki masakat ke baad jeeb wale hath ajate h
Shivani---bahut ud liya ab tere pankh kutar du ya bolega
Admi--- chup raha ...
Ek gun fire sound aya aur sath he chillane ki awaj aur ek niche pada tadfadane laga ...
Shivani—tu bolega ya...iski trah tadfadta huva marega
Admi--- ha bolunga na ye saman delhi jana tha ye afganistaan se Pakistan ke raste bharat mai ata h....
Shivani--- wanha kisko dete ho
Admi--- ye muje nahi pata par yanha ye maal hum sappu supplier ko dete h jo agai bhejta h muje itna he pata maidam...Muje chod do...
Shivani--- chod dungi aur ye bata sappu pappu supplier kanha milega
Admi--- bikaner uska adda wanhi h border ke karib ..wo yanha ata rahta h ...
Shivani--- inspector ko ishara kar deti h azad kar do .....
Aur piche 2 gun fire sound ati h ...
Next day Morning...
Main--- ab tikh ho tum .....ghoom sakti ho
Manisha—yaar dr ne rest kaha tha letai rahne ko nahi kaha tha ...tum toh meri maa se bi bure ho is mamle mai....wo muje ghumne toh deti ..thoda bahut par tumne toh hilne he nahi diya upar se tumhari wo goliya......par aj pata nahi kaise maan gaye tum....
Main---Dr ne ok kaha h isliye... toh tikh h aj beauty ko bike se khuli hawa khilata hu ......ok ....aj school chalogi jao ready ho jao ..Isilye subhe jagaya h...
Manisha ke sath chal pada school manisha ko mere sath dekh ke janha sab ladkiya jal rahi thi ......toh ladko ke seene pe saanp ajgar sab lotpalate kha rahe the....class mai firse rounak agayi thi ab hum charo sath he baithe the
Aditiya—toh buddy kab ja rahe ho competition ke kiye start hone mai 5 din baki h ....
Main--- yaar maidam toh bus se bol rahi h but hum train se jayenge morning 8 baje chalti h ..aur dopahar ko chod degi din bhar rest aur agle din competition mai part leke wapas...
Aditiya rinky --- ye best rahega....... Yaar train ka safar bahut comfortable rahega .....
Aditiya—manisha tu dhayan rakhna....
Manisha--- main tikh hu aur ye rahega macho men sath mai...toh dhayan rakh lega
Rinky—kya karwayegi .....isai aisa ha ha ha ha ....
Janha hum hans rahe the toh koyi aisa bi tha jiske chehre se kuch aur he nazar araha tha .......jiski umid muje bi nahi thi kyoki main bi umid nahi kar sakta hu ki mera itna khatarnak roop dekhne ke baad koyi school se mujse dushmani karega par lagta h kuch toh raj h uska bi......
Main ghar par room mai leta tha aur gahri soch mai tha tab shweta ayi aur mere pass late gayi....
Shweta--- acha toh kya socha ja raha h ..
Main--- usai gale laga ke life ke bare mai
Shweta – jara muje bi batana
Main--- pata h shweta maine pichle kafi waqt mai itne logo ko mara h ki kabhi kabhi sapne mai bi khud ko khun ka pyasa dekhta hu....maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera jeevan aisa bi hoga ....janha mere apne muje marne wale honge....maine kabhi kisi se pyar ke alawa kuch nahi manga bachpan mai pyar ke liye tarsa bada huva toh ek ke sath jindgi jeene ke sapne sajaye aur usai thoda sa ajmaya toh wo gareeb samajke chod gayiii....meri zindgi mai he itni muskile kyo h....
Shweta--- sach bolu toh bhai apko chahne wale jayda h sabse pahle main ......jo ap par ankh band kar ke viswas karti h phir mamta kavita jinhe maine dekha nahi par muje pata h wo apko bahut chahti h.....phir sage bhai se bhadkar pyar karne wala bhai sunil.....uski barabari toh koyi nahi kar sakta h.....jo ap pe ane wale har khatre ko apne par le leta h.....aur deepika dii wo toh bus sabkuch apko manti h sayad he koyi din aisa ho jab apko yaad na kare....aur toh aur SP mam jo apko sayad like bi karti h mere mummy papa jo apko apna beta mantr h ....badepapa kaptaan aur mousi....aur one only Dada ji jinke sacrifies ke agai sabka pyar chota h aur kitne naam ginau ap batao bheema chacha... choti chachi... mana jindgi muskil h par apko chahne wale jayda h ...aur apko chahne wali bi hogi kahi toh hogi aur mere bhai ke liye bhagwan khud bhejega usai.....bilkul poonam ke chand jaisi hogi khubshurat apke jeevan mai Chand ki khubsoort roshni ki trah apke jeevan mai khusiya bhar degi....
Main--- sir ko chum kar love u so much my sweet sis..
Shweta--- bhai ayegi ....apki jindgi mai bahut bahut khusiya ....ayengi aur warna hum bhai bahan toh h he chill karenge no tension no fikar bus khusiya he khusiya...
Hum dono hamari he bate kar rahe the toh dur....Kanhi
Poonam oh poonam
Poonam—ayi chacha.....ayi....
Chacha--- tu itna kaam mat karwaya kar wo bachi h uske maa baap ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...kya kahenge wo...
Chachi – main thodi he karwati hu wo khud karti h ..
Chacha--- sab pata h muje ...dekh meri beti h wo usai jara bi dukh huva kabhi toh tu samaj liyo muje jeete ji maar degi tu wo mere bhai bhabi ki akhiri nishani h unhone muje apne bete ke jaise pala tha jo ye sab h unki he mehnat ka...
Tabi poonam ajati h...
Chacha--- beti sans le le ab meri baat soon agle mahine koombh ka mela lagega haar 12 saal mai ek baar hota h toh hum bi chalenge...pavitra snan ka mouka dubara mile ya na mile.....
Poonam—ji baba maine bi bus kitabo mai padha h sirf....
Chacha ja ab aram karle itna kaam mat kar nahi toh tere papa ko kya mu dikhaunga upar jake ...bolenge meri chori se itna kaam karwata tha...
Poonam—na baba ap jaise chacha chachi ho jiske pass unhe kabhi dhuk ho he nahi sakta h aur ap mere maa baba ho toh ek beti apne maa baap ki seva nahi karegi toh kiski karegi....
Chachi—aur jo choro se ladti h...wo...
Poonam—wo toh ulaj rahe the toh dhar diye ....2 kaan ke niche
Chachi—dekha.. aise toh ye apne pati ke bi maar degi
Chacha--- ha ha ha.....akhir beti kiski h...
Poonam—aur kya main na jane wali ap dono ko chod ke main toh ap dono ke sath he rahungi....
Night 11pm...
Shivani--- ji mam yes ....ha jaisalmer ka sappu supplier h wo agai delhi maal supply karta h .....
Sonali--- hmmm good job shivani
Shivani--- one thing mam they have planning for some thing big inhone bahut badi planning ki warna itne hathiyaar aur rdx kisliye mangwaye
Sonali--- matlb
Shivani--- mam ye dusri khep h ek pahle achuki h toh ap sochiye hathiyaaar toh india mai bi mil jate phir itni mehnat kyu...aisa kya h jismai ye bhari tabahyi macha sakte h....
Sonali--- hmm point toh h ok tum find out karo koyi clue aur sappu supplier ke pappu pe tharo ache se bakega wo jarur kaam ka ...main yanha pata karti hu aur jald he tumse milti hu.....
Chief so ....
Sonali--- sari information deti h..
Chief--- aisa kya h ....jiski ye planning kar sakte h itne bhari matra mai....
Ek secret place pe
Oye habibi pathan khus huva . ye toh car bilkul police gaadi jaisa lagta h aur ye wardi bi pura police jaisa he dikhta h...oye tum toh pathan ko Khus kar diya....
Vithal—ap hamare junior victer ke khass mehmaan ho apke liye jaan hajir h....bus ap thodi meri tarif kar dena .
Pathan--- oye ek baar ye kaam ho jaye hum tumko malamaal kardega...
Vithal—jarur hoga ....
Aj ke liye itna he ....
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School wala dushman khatarnak hoga aur shweta ne sahi kiya.....
Vithal aur pathan ki planning bahut badi h....aur jabardast h....kaand bahut. Bade honge....
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Ye scene bi mast jayega bro aur dono ek sath milengi tab kya hoga raj se
Ye sab vithal se juda h bro
Raj se koyi rishta nahi h poonam ka aur pathan aur vithal bada plan kar rahe h...
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