Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

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[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Story ek aise ladke ki jiske maa baap ko dhokhe se maar diya aur uske pure pariwar ko tukdo mai baant diya gaya aur chod diya gaya bachpan mai he usai pyar ke liye taras ne ko Uske apne he pariwar ke logo ne usai mara,dard diya aur rulaya ..tab uske dadaji ne uski ungli thami.Apne dard ko chupa kar usai layak banane ke liye apne se saalo dur kar diya janha mila usai uska pyar aur usne bi usai garibi ki wajah se dhokha de diya..ab uska maksad sirf badla lena tha apne maa baap ka aur jab wo louta toh NIRWANA banke tuta apne dushmano par jo tadpata tha tadpata tha dushman ki rooh ko....aur is safar mai usai jaan se jayda pyar karne wali mili par pyar ke naam se he ab usai nafrat ho gayi thi toh... kya le payega wo badala apne maa baap ke khun ka akhir kisne mara tha uske maa baap ko,koun h wo dhushman,kya usai milega wo pyar jiske liye wo tadpa tha...pyar emotion aur action se bharpur safar....Raj -- hero of the family...update padhne ke baad bus request h likes jarur deve...kyoki yahi reward milta h mujhe ap sabki taraf se




Update 1

Mandawa—


Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar

Chcha -shaitan singh

Chachi-indra devi

Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h

Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h

Name----- surendra singh

gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega

Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh

Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.

Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h

Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero ko pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai
Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h

Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h

Ab Intro ---Hero ke pariwar ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h


Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan

jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h


Dadi ---sumitra devi

Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..
Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko

Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge

Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .

Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate

Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunke gusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu

Raj – chachi main agaya

Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..

Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h

Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h

Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi

Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.


Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......

Aj ke liye itna he masti mai padhne ka likes aur Revoes thokne ka ab dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Nice start bhai

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Family Introduction

Thakur Jagmal Singh Nirwan raj ke Dada ji aur sahdev singh ke father...

Sumitra devi (Dadi ji)


Inke teen bete aur 2 beti hai
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1) Shaitan Singh(Bade chacha)aur wife
Indra devi (Badi Chachi)

Ek beta ek beti
Beta: Surender
Beti : Babita
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2)late Sahdev Singh Nirwan Hero's father

Vidya Singh Nirwan Hero mother

Father mother ki death kaise huvi clear nahi h

Sahdev aur Vidya ka beta
RAJ ( second personality NIRWANA)
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3)late Parwat Singh Nirwan (chote chacha)

Supriya (Choti chachi) caring nature...

3 Beta betiya

Badi beti : Mamta Singh

Choti beti: Kavita Singh

Beta: Ajay singh

Thakur Jagmal singh ki badi beti anju nirwan missing hai last time dehradhun vidya ke sath thi
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Choti beti : Divya Singh Nirwan
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Bheema chacha ( ye ek anath the but thakur saab inko apna beta mante hai jab ye chote the tab hi unko Jagmaal singh apne sath haveli le ker aaye the )


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Sunil singhaniya: Raj ka dost / Bhai second personality valentine rider bachpan se he raj ke sath h schooling ek jagah se huvi h
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Shweta Singh : Raj aur Sunil ki muh boli bahen Dono ke sabse jayda close h school se he attachment h noughty nature h dono bhayiyo ko sage bhaiyo se jayda pyar karti h

Joginder Singh: Shweta father ( Delhi Commissioner)

Chiefelhi chief h secret information aur support karte h Nirwana aur valentine rider ko

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Deepika Singhania: Raj aur Sunil ki dusri muh boli bahen singhaniya group ki varish...

Kaptan Singhania: ( Singhania groups of
company ke malik)Depika ke papa aur Sunil ke muh bole papa inhone Sunil ko god liya hua hai aur sahdev singh ke purane parichit h

Deepti Singhania: Deepika mother (House wife simple nature)


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Anirudh Goshwami
Beti: Richa Goswami hero ka first crush vidya group of hospitals ki owner


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Manisha: Raj ke school ki dost ..Raj ki student bhi h most impactful character in story
Manisha mom: Collector in Mumbai
Manisha Father: Ranjan Sharma
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Poonam( heroine) : Manisha ki collage dost aur Raj ko apna pati maan chuki h caring nature...simple personality h...
(Ye apne chacha chachi ke sath rahti hai iske maa baap Ravinder singh aur Ritu bachapan me hi mar gaye)

Poonam Chacha: Ranveer Singh (gaanv ke sarpanch)
Poonam Chachi:house wife

kriti: raj ki school class mate wo raj ko love karti h but khudko uske layak nahi samajhti h


Nanihaal. : Thakur umed singh inke 2 bete aur 3betiya h jismai vidya sabse choti h

Bata: Manohar singh state ka business h
Wife - house wife h
Beti: Anu singh Mumbai mai padhti h
Beti -: seema singh ye ancient antic ki knowledge rakhti h aur sahdev singh ke sath kaam karti thi jo accident mai mar gayi

pariwaar mai teen betiya h simmi dimpii aur nittii


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Ajju Aur Shruti ( Computer Expert, Hacker)
Abbay: Ajju aur Shruti ka dost isai sab hulk kahte h

Ye tino family ki tarah rahte h aur secretly police main under cover officer ki tarah work karte h
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Sonali: Superintendent of police. ( Raj ko pyaar kerti hai aur raj bhi bahut manta h inhe most dangerous and deadly lady police officer h jis sai bade bade criminal kaanpte hai aur raj ke agai nayi dulhan ki tarah behave karti h)

Shivani: ACP sonali ki muu boli choti bahan h
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Rajeev Singh: Inspector h most trustable person

Beti: Rinky Singh( raj ki college dost
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Madhu : Raj ke pados ki bhabhi (Dehradhun Nursary school ki teacher h raj par crush h inhe )
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Aag aur Xabhi: Raj aur sunil ke guru sath he sahdev singh ke purane dost , speciality ek close combat mai expert h toh dusra weapon expert h

Sahdev singh friends...

Ravindar singh : college friend vidya ka ladla devar jiske liye vidya uski bhabhi maa saman h...aur ek ishare par kuch bhi kar sakta h abhi status unknown h

Narpat singh : friend ..status unknown ...

Enemy
Death halo : Martial art expert Fighter

Mama : identity secret lives in mumbai

Scorpion tribe: ye kanha se kisi ko nahi pata h par past se
inka reletion h inka fighting level kya h abhi clear nahi

prepared by ellysperry bro...


Family of Raj (Hero)
Raj Singh Nirwan /
Nirwana - Main protagonist of Story.

Jagmaal Singh Nirwan - Raj ke Dadaji, Mandwa mai rahte h aur 56 gaon ke jamindar thakur.

Sumitra Devi - Raj ki dadi.

Sahdev Singh (Dead) - Raj ke Father, inki maut abhi tak ek mystery hai.
Vidya Singh - Raj ki Maa, abhi zinda hai yaa mrityu ho gayi keh nahi sakte...
Shaitan Singh - jagmaal singh ka bada beta aur Raj ka Tau.

Indra Singh - Shaitan ki Patni, Raj ki Tai.

Parbat Singh (Dead) - Raj ke chacha

Supriya - Parbat ki patni Raj ki chachi.

Mamta aur Kavita - Parbat Singh ki betiya, Raj ki behan aur uski jaan.

Ajay - Parbat Singh ka Beta, Raj ka chota bhai.

Bheema - Jagmaal Singh ka gaud liya beta, Raj ke liye chacha saman.
Divya - Raj ki choti bua
Jhanvi - Divya ki beti, Raj ki choti behen


Other Important Character

Sunil Singhania - Raj ka Dost aur uski jaan. Sath me School me aur ashram me shiksha li
Deepika - Raj ki muhboli behan, Kaptan Singhania ki beti.
Kaptan Singhania - Himachal ke bade businessman, Deepika ke pita aur Sunil ko legally apna beta banaya hai.

Guruji - Raj ke ashram ke guruji h
Richa Goswami - Raj ka pehla pyar, Anirudh Goswami ki beti.

Shweta - Raj ise apni sagi behan manta hai, Raj ki jaan hai. School me Raj ke sath padhi hai naughty nature h

School ke baki dost...
Suchitra - School group ki ek ladki
Kriti - Raj ki dost uske sath padhti thi, uski pehli sex partner
Komal - School Group ki ek ladki
Sunita - School group ki ek ladki
Ravi- School me padhne vale Raj ke dushman
Javed - same school ka dushman

Sonali Verma - Police SP, Raj se beinteha pyar karti hai criminal naam se thar thar kaanpte h

Xabhi - Raj ke Fighting Trainer
AAG - Raj ke Fighting Trainer
Jaggu Bhai (Dead) - Manali ka local gunda, first main villain

Vithal - Delhi ka gunda aur arms dealer, Jr. Victor ke liye kaam karta tha.
Rajiv - Police Inspector in Uttrakhand, Father of Rinky
Rinky - Raj ki dost in Doon School
Madhu - Teacher in Doon School Dehradhun...raj ki neighbour
Chief - Delhi Special Branch Incharge, Sonali's Boss

Anjana - Deepika ki bestfriend, Raj ki dost aur sex partner

Raka - Dehradun ka gunda, Vithal ka Subordinate

Sultan (Gunda)- Raka ka Right hand
Anthony - Dehradun ka gunda, Raka ke Rival gang ka leader
John - Anthony ka Aadmi, Doon school me attack me shamil tha.
Aditya - Anthony ka bhai, Doon school me uska jasus tha drugs supply mai involve
Pashupati - MLA, Second main villain divya par attack mai shamil tha

Anjali - Pashupati ki beti

Jishan - Pashupati ka wafadar

Manisha - Raj ki dost in Doon school aur Sunil ki hone wali wife raj inhe bahut manta h
Rajni : raj ki school teacher
Suman - madhu mam ki behan, Raj ne Sultan se bachaya tha ise

Shiwani - SP in police, Sonali ki behan jaisi, Raj ki achi dost jo har waqt us sai mazak karti rahti h
Ajju, Abhay, Shruti - Agents in special police force, Raj ke dost aur uski attack team ke sathi.

Chanderi - Death halo's brother, Sunil and Team ne maar diya tha milke.

Mantri Shivam Shinde - Cabinet minister, isne chanderi ko bheja tha Kaptan Singhania ko dhamki dene ke liye.

Jasien -(Dead) Death halo ka right hand.

Manohar Singh aka Sr. Victor - Raj ka Mama aur mumbayi underworld Don

Shakti Singh aka jr. Victor - Manohar ka Beta

Anu Singh - Manohar ki beti, Raj ki behen

Rahul - Deepika ka Boyfriend

Rajni - Raj ki Mumbai college ki teacher, ise Raj ne bachaya tha aur raj se pyar karti h
Simran - Model, Raj ki spy in underworld

Ravinder Singh - Sahdev Singh ke chote bhai jaisa

Poonam - Ravinder ki beti
, Raj se sachha pyar karti hai.

Ranvir Singh - Poonam ke chacha

Mech aur mike Finland ke trained fighters raj ke sath kaam karte h ..inki ek sister h alita urf jennifer

Hariya chaudhary - Jagmaal Singh ka dushman, iske hath pair kaat diye the. (Update 6)
Sunil Sethi - (Dead) Raj ka teacher in 7th class, dushmano ka jasus (Update 7, 8)
Ummed (Kulguru) - Jagmaal singh ke parivar ke guru

Hari Singh - durgapur ka thakur, jaine Sunil Sethi ko Raj ke bare me pata karne school bheja tha.

Harendra - Hari Singh ka Beta.

Kallu - Raj se school competition heemachal wrestling me harne wala (Update 24)

Raghu - javed ne paise diye the ise, kallu se Raj ko pitwane ke. (Update 24)

Vickey (Dead) - Manali trip par Raj ke hatho mara gaya Update 51-52

Pathan - Haridwar attack me Afghan ki party

Danger - Jaipur me RDX ka supplier

Sappu - Bikaner me RDX supplier

Prepared by Samar singh

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Update 1

Mandawa—


Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar

Chcha -shaitan singh

Chachi-indra devi

Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h

Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h

Name----- surendra singh

gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega

Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh

Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.

Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h

Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai
Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h

Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h


Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan

jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h


Dadi ---sumitra devi

Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..
Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko

Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge

Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .

Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate

Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunke gusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu

Raj – chachi main agaya

Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..

Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h

Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h

Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi

Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.


Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......

Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai

Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega

Dhasu update bro

keep posting

next update kab bhai

 

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Update 1

Mandawa—


Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar

Chcha -shaitan singh

Chachi-indra devi

Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h

Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h

Name----- surendra singh

gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega

Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh

Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.

Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h

Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai
Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h

Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h


Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan

jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h


Dadi ---sumitra devi

Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..
Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko

Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge

Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .

Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate

Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunke gusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu

Raj – chachi main agaya

Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..

Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h

Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h

Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi

Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.


Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......

Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai

Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega

congrats for new update

 

[Sauravb]

Amazing start...

 

[Aeron Boy]

Good start bro

 

[Arjun2000]

Nice story