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Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

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mysteryman

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BHAI LOG JO BHI ISE PADE PLEASE RPLY JARUR KARNA...

Ab jo situation bani hui hai story mai use fastforward mai nikal dun ya phir detailed likhun with some emotions...

NEXT UPDATE WILL DEPEND UPON WHAT U REPLYA SO PLEASE REPLY...
 
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mysteryman

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UPDATE-32
khair agar Raj ko 24 ghante se pahle hosh gya to vo khtre se poori tarah bahar ho jayega....
phir sabhi Raz ke liye dua mangne lage...or chachi to jaise mandir mai jam hi gyi thi wo to waham se uth hi nhi rhi thi....
khair aise waqt guzar ne laga lekin Raj ko hosh nhi aaya....
priya apne dad ke kandhe par sira rakhkar ro rhi thi...ki tabhi koi akar unke samne khada ho jata hai jise dekh kar dono hi bohot jor se chonk jate hein....


ABB AAGE...

or chonkna lazmi bhi tha kyonki jo kuchh waqt pahle tak unke khoon ka pyasa tha aaj unhi ke samne ankhon mai anshoo liye khada tha...
shayad ab tak to sabhi readers ko pta chal gya hoga lekin fir bhi mera farz hai batane ka to uska naam hai TAMINA...
jo ki kuchh ghanto pahle kisi musibat ki tarah samne khadi thi vo ab nam ankhon se or jhijhakte hue kahti hai...
Tamina...uncle
[third person to readers] =bhai log tension nhi lene ka ki ab tamina ne devraj ko uncle kyon kaha...ye mystery aaj hi khul jayegi ....chalo mai hi bta deta hun...Tamina ke dad or priya ke dad dono hi dost the
ek baar ko to p dad ko bhi apne kano par vishwash nhi hota kya Tamina ne sach mai unse uncle kaha...
Tamina...aise kya dekh rhe ho uncle
p dad... kuchh yadein taza ho gyi...
Tamina...mere se jo bhi galtiyan hui unke liye mujhe maaf kar do
p dad...koi baat nhi beta galatfahmiyan sabhi ko ho jati hein...
tamina...lekin uncle mujhe puri baat jananni hai ki ...
p dad...hmm aao baitho
fir tamina baith jati hai...
p dad...to beta ye baat tumhate janm se pahle ki hai jab tumhare papa or mere dost par koi aulad nhi thi...ya yun kaho ki hui nhi...tab tumhare papa ko unke bade bhai ne samjhakar apne bete ko god lene ki salaj di... khair marta kya na krta unhone unke bete ko god le liya...
lekin unke irade sahi nhi the jaisa ki tumhe pta hai tumhare papa mere sathi the to paise ki koi kami nhi thi...
or isi ke chalte unke apne ho unke dushman ban gye...
jab vo ladka bada hua to uske asli maa baap ne use tumahre papa ke khilaf bhadkana shuru kar diya or bataya ki kaise unhone sari property cheen li or tumhe bhi...
tamina...lekin usko vishwash kaise hua ki vo unka ladka hai...
p dad...usko bhi vishwash nhi hua tha lekin usne apna dna check karaya jo ki tumahre papa se match nhi hua or unse match ho gya....ye baat tumhare papa ko baad mai pta chali...
ab tak tumhara bhi janm ho chuka tha or tumhare papa ne property dono ke naam adhi adhi kar di thi...
jab usko ye baat pta chali to unlogon ne ek din tumahare mata pita ka road accident kara diya...
lekin jaisa ki tumhe pata hi hoga agar 18 saal se pahle tumhe kuchh ho jata to tumhari property sarkari fund mai chali jati...
isiliye unhone tumhare 18 saal tak ke hone ka intjar kiya or jab tum 18 saal ki hui to tumko marne ke priyash kiye gye...lekin chunki tumko sabhi tarah ki training di ja rhi thi isliye koi tumhara kuchh na bigad saka...
aur jo tumhara nakli bhai tha vo tumse pyar karne ka jhootha natak karta tha...taki tumhe koi shak na ho...or vo ab tak galatkamo mai pad chuka tha jaise drug dealing, kidnaping, murders or bhi baohit se najayaj dhandhe jinko batane mai bhi saram aati hai...
ab tak maine khufiya tarike se tumhare papa ke case ki chhanbeen ki or jab mujhe pta chala ki isme us gandi nali ke keede ka hath hai to mai seedha tumhare ghar ki aur nikala...
lekin wahan jab mai pohoncha to dekha vo ek glass mai juice lekar usme kuchh mila rha hai...
or jaise hi wahan maine apni maujudgi ka ahsash karaya vo ekdam sakpaka gya or drama kar liya lekin maine wahan rakhi zahar ki sishi ko uthakar kaha ki kyon kar rho ho aisa...
to vo drama karne laga jisme mujhe koi dilchaspi nhi thi kyonki mujhe sach ka pta tha...
isliye maine ek uske kaan ke neeche diya or vo sab kuchh batane laga lekin achanak hi usne mujhpar table par rakhe chaku se hamla kiya...
jiske reaction mai mere hath se goli chal gyi...or tabhi tum wahan aagyi or bina sach jane hi mujhe gunhgar man liya....
lekin mujhe koi afsosh nhi hai us sapole ke sath aisa hi hona chahiye tha...jisne mere dost ki hasti khelti jindgi ko tabah kar diya...
aur jo property tumhare us bhai ko mili thi us se uske asli maa baap aaj aish kar rhe hein pta hi hoga tumhe kitne bade business man hein vo ab...
Tamina jor jor se rone lagi or apne hi galon par thappad marte hue kahne lagi....
mat kahiye us kutte ko mera bhai jisne mere maa baab ko kuchh paison ke liye maar diya...mujhse kitno badi galti ho gyi...maine apko gunhgar samjha jisne meri hi jaan bachai....
Tamina...p dad ke pairon mao girte hue...kyon nhi maar diya mujhe kyon chhod diya uncle maar dete mujhe...
maine us bhai ke badle ke liye jisne meri jindgi barbad karna chahi kisi or ke bhai ki jaan ko khatre mai daal diya...
hospital mai aise idhar udhar se guzar rahe log ye dekh rhe the ...isliye priya ne uthkar use chup karne ki kosish jisse hua ye ki tamina or jor jor se priya ke gake lag kar rone lagi....
kuchh baad vo chup hui or Raj ke haal chal ke bare mein puchha or use jindgi or maut ke bich ladta dekh uske anshoo fir se nikalne lage...isliye vo wahan se akar priya ke pass baith gyi ...p dad is waqt wahan nhi the vo kahin gye the...
Tamina... i am sorry for whatever i have done...
priya...its ok...insan se hi galtiya hoti hein or samay rahte tumhe ahsash ho gya is se jyada kya badiya ho sakta hai...
Tamina...bohot bada dil hai tumahara or sath mai fighting skills bhi mai tumse kabhi nahi jit skti...
priya...tumne mujhe hara diya aaj ...jo meri jaan hai usi ki jaan par khtara hai to kya fayda mera...or jor jor se rone lagi....
tamina ne use shant karaya or kaha...kuchh nhi hoga use vishwash rkho....
tabhi wahan priya ke dad aa gye sath mai mom bhi thi jo ki khana layi thi apne sath....
sabhi ne khana kha liya priya or chachi ko chhodakar dono ko hi bohot samjhaya lekin kisi ne khana nhi khaya....
ab tak raj ki halat mai koi sudhar nhi tha log bhi uski dekhrekh mai lage hue the lekin koi sudhar nhi tha....
fir kuchh samay baad p mom and chachi ko jabardasti ghar bhej diya gya or priya ko bhi kyonki dono ko hi driving nhi aati thi...


TO BE CONTINUED
 

mysteryman

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sorry bhai log jistarike se update post hua hai shayad padne mai pareshani hogi...

lekin ab kuchh nhi kiya ja skta post ho gya hai aur update bhi pasand na aaye shayad kyonki bohot hi short mai TAMINA ka matter niptaya hai galiyon ke liye DIL SE MAAFI...

AUR JO BHI GALTI HUI HO USKE BARE MAI PLEASE INFORM KAREIN
 

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sorry bhai log jistarike se update post hua hai shayad padne mai pareshani hogi...

lekin ab kuchh nhi kiya ja skta post ho gya hai aur update bhi pasand na aaye shayad kyonki bohot hi short mai TAMINA ka matter niptaya hai galiyon ke liye DIL SE MAAFI...

AUR JO BHI GALTI HUI HO USKE BARE MAI PLEASE INFORM KAREIN[/QUOTES





Bhai bahut bdhia update hai ,ha thoda chotta jarur hai I HOPE NEXT UPDATE DHAMAKE DAR HOGA
 
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