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Abhi update post kar rha hu..
I know sab naraz hein review nhi milenge but its ok...
Reason jiski bajah se update nhi diya...
1...maine year drop liya he entrance exam ke liye so pressure jyada he aap sabhi samajh skte honge i think ..
2...mera phone kharab tha or mera sara purana content lost ho gya....
3...i write story bcz i like to write and read and i got distrubed so ab pahle wali baat nhi rahi....
Abhi ek update post kar rha hu agar pasand aaye to bta dena dena bhi likh dunga... Response achha hua to ek or update bui de skta hu or na pasand aaye to bhi bta dena story band kari ya continue rakhu...
I know kisi ko ko characters bhi yaad nhi honge....
Sorry' gayab hone ke liye.....
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Update-57
Maine ek camera man ko pakada or apne upar camera set karaya.....
mai--- Ye raha tumhare sahar ka don Tiyagi lekin ab ye kisi ko maar skta maar kya marne ki soch bhi nhi sakta.....
mai---Aise bohot se Tiyagi har gali maohlle colony mein baithe hone unhe mai e baat bata dun agar samaj mai gandgi failane ki koshish ki to mai unhe hi is duniya se saaf kar dunga......
or fir maine Tiyagi ki tango ko use jaise kapde dhote hein us tarah se jamin mai patakne laga.....
or fir maine usko bich mai se chir diya ......
and once sab freeze ho gye lekin tangein kanp rahi thi....
khade the lekin gaand fat rhi thi aur ultiyan to intna bhayankar scene dekhne ke baad common si baat hein.....
mai--- this is what i can do if any one try to mess with me...NEVER EVER TRY TO KNOW WHO I AM OTHERWISE YOU WILL BE A MYSTERY FROM THAT MOVEMENT BECAUSE I AM MYSTERY MAN.....
ABB AAGE....
Asmani bijliyo ki tez gadgadhat ke sath ke sath sahar ki light gayab ho jati he or bilkul andhera ho jata he upar se chalti thandi tez andhi ke sath aati bhayank awazein so jo bhid ikhatha thi usme bhi bhagdad mach gyi.....
Aage jo hua vo mere liye bilkul unexpected tha hua kuchh he ki achanak hi mere samne kuchh bhayank shakal wale prani dekhe jo aaj tak mene sapne mai bhi nhi dekhe...
Mere samne teen bhayank creatures khade the jinme se bohot badbu aa rhi thi or mujhe galat hone na abhash ho rha tha....
Mai abhi se soch hi rha tha unme se ek ne apne hatho ko gol gol ghumane laga pahle anti clock wise fir clock wise jisse us round mai kuchh roshni hone lagi or usne apne hatho ko pichhe kar ke meri taraf throw kiya ho kuchh aisa kiya or mai kuchh na samajh saka....
Vo kisi energy beam ki tarah tha jisse or sab bohot achanak ho rha ki kuchh samajh nhi pa rha tha or tabhi dusre ne kuchh kiya or mujhe aisa feel hone laga ki mera dum ghut rha ho....
Koi mera gala dawa rho ho mere hath per bandh diye ho....
Maine bada dam laga kar kaha--- kon ho tum log kyu aaye ho yaha meri kya dushmani he tumse ....
Lekin pta nhi kyu is baat ko sun kr vo log bohot hi bhyank hasi hasne lage....
creatures will be written as C1 and and so on
C1-- hahahahahhah ham kon he tujhe abhi pta nhi laga mtlb tujhe abhi kisi be bataya nhi shayad khair achhha he....
C2--- or ham kyu aaye hein vo ham kar ke dikhayege
Ye kah kar vo teeno khaufnak hasi hasne lage...
Or teesre ko ishara karte hein or vo meri taraf bad rha tha usne apne hatho ko asman ki or kiya or jor jor se kuchh bolne laga to uske hath mai ek chhadi type kuchh aa gya . ....
Lekin ab tak mai apne aap ko control kar chuka tha sambhal gya tha or mein apne talwar ko yaad kiya uske aate hi mere charo taraf roshni paida hua or mai azad feel karne laga....
Fir vo teeno mere se ladne ko tayar ho gye or mujhpe attack karne lage mai bhi unse laga to mujhe pta chala ki vo bohot power full hein or mujhe apni powers ka pura gyan nhi tha koi koi attack mera aisa hota ki unki halat buri kar di or koi aisa hota ki unhe jyada farak na padta....
Lekin tabhi unme unhe pta nhi apne ajeeb se hathiyar ko jo ki kisi bade dhanush ke type ka tha use asman ki taraf kiya or ek asman ke ek pink and green type kuchh roshni nikli or seedhe uske hathiyar pe aayi usne use meri taraf load kiya or jese hi usne mujhe hit kiya meri talwar dur ja kar giri vo sidha akar mere dil pe laga tha dil seene se bahar aane ko ho rha tha....
Lekin maine apne pura dam lagakar apne ko ek baar fir khada kiya or mai apni talwar ki taraf lapka lekin bich mai hi mujhe bohot jor ki laat padi or mai kisi lohe ke khambe se ja kar takraya sarir se jese jaan hi nikal gyi ek baaar fir himmat kar ke khada hua or unse ladne ke liye tayar hua ...
Jise dekhkar vo log hasne lage or .....
Mujhe gussa aaya or mai unhe apni puri takat laga ke marne laga or lekin unpe kuchh asar nhi hua.....
C3--- hahahahahahahahaha tu kya samjhta he tu taqatwar he nhi na bachche tu galatfahmi mai na rah TAKAQTWAR TU NHI TERA HATHIYAR HE... Tu bhi bina is hathiyar ki tarah sab ki tarah kida makoda hi he.....
C2--- kya bola tha tu MYSTERY MAN he hahahahaha tu kida he or kuchh nhi or kahke vo meri talwar ko uthata he lekin usse nhi uthti uso alag fenk deti he.....
C1--- ohhhh to mtlb ise marna padega tabhi takwar hamari hogi....or ye kah kr sabhi hasne lagte hein....
Or vo mere upar koi roshni chhodte hein jisse mere sarir mai jhatke lagte hein aisa lag rha tha koi atma ko bahar khich rha he....
C3--- hahahahahahahahaha tujhe pta he ye bhi badi kamal ki chiz he (meri talwar ke pass baith kar) jisme taqat hoti he usi to apnati he or usne meri talwar ko pakad liya use jhatke lage lekin usne talwar nhi chhodi or sahan karta rha....
Mere sarir se atma khich rhi thi munh se dard ki chikh nikal rhi thi or ankho se anshu nikal rhe the...
Or meri ankhein band hone ko thi tabhi ek white roshni nazar aati he jo un creatures or mere bich mein aake khadi ho jati jise dekhkar mere chahre par muskan aati he...
Ek akhiri baar dekh lu chahra mere mahboob ka...
khwahish thi meri ki samay bhi didar ho mujhe mere yaar ka....
Or fir meri ankhein band ho jati hein....
TO BE CONTINUED
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Bc ya kya ho gya ab story ma sahi maza ayega next ka besabri sa intzar haUpdate-57
Maine ek camera man ko pakada or apne upar camera set karaya.....
mai--- Ye raha tumhare sahar ka don Tiyagi lekin ab ye kisi ko maar skta maar kya marne ki soch bhi nhi sakta.....
mai---Aise bohot se Tiyagi har gali maohlle colony mein baithe hone unhe mai e baat bata dun agar samaj mai gandgi failane ki koshish ki to mai unhe hi is duniya se saaf kar dunga......
or fir maine Tiyagi ki tango ko use jaise kapde dhote hein us tarah se jamin mai patakne laga.....
or fir maine usko bich mai se chir diya ......
and once sab freeze ho gye lekin tangein kanp rahi thi....
khade the lekin gaand fat rhi thi aur ultiyan to intna bhayankar scene dekhne ke baad common si baat hein.....
mai--- this is what i can do if any one try to mess with me...NEVER EVER TRY TO KNOW WHO I AM OTHERWISE YOU WILL BE A MYSTERY FROM THAT MOVEMENT BECAUSE I AM MYSTERY MAN.....
ABB AAGE....
Asmani bijliyo ki tez gadgadhat ke sath ke sath sahar ki light gayab ho jati he or bilkul andhera ho jata he upar se chalti thandi tez andhi ke sath aati bhayank awazein so jo bhid ikhatha thi usme bhi bhagdad mach gyi.....
Aage jo hua vo mere liye bilkul unexpected tha hua kuchh he ki achanak hi mere samne kuchh bhayank shakal wale prani dekhe jo aaj tak mene sapne mai bhi nhi dekhe...
Mere samne teen bhayank creatures khade the jinme se bohot badbu aa rhi thi or mujhe galat hone na abhash ho rha tha....
Mai abhi se soch hi rha tha unme se ek ne apne hatho ko gol gol ghumane laga pahle anti clock wise fir clock wise jisse us round mai kuchh roshni hone lagi or usne apne hatho ko pichhe kar ke meri taraf throw kiya ho kuchh aisa kiya or mai kuchh na samajh saka....
Vo kisi energy beam ki tarah tha jisse or sab bohot achanak ho rha ki kuchh samajh nhi pa rha tha or tabhi dusre ne kuchh kiya or mujhe aisa feel hone laga ki mera dum ghut rha ho....
Koi mera gala dawa rho ho mere hath per bandh diye ho....
Maine bada dam laga kar kaha--- kon ho tum log kyu aaye ho yaha meri kya dushmani he tumse ....
Lekin pta nhi kyu is baat ko sun kr vo log bohot hi bhyank hasi hasne lage....
creatures will be written as C1 and and so on
C1-- hahahahahhah ham kon he tujhe abhi pta nhi laga mtlb tujhe abhi kisi be bataya nhi shayad khair achhha he....
C2--- or ham kyu aaye hein vo ham kar ke dikhayege
Ye kah kar vo teeno khaufnak hasi hasne lage...
Or teesre ko ishara karte hein or vo meri taraf bad rha tha usne apne hatho ko asman ki or kiya or jor jor se kuchh bolne laga to uske hath mai ek chhadi type kuchh aa gya . ....
Lekin ab tak mai apne aap ko control kar chuka tha sambhal gya tha or mein apne talwar ko yaad kiya uske aate hi mere charo taraf roshni paida hua or mai azad feel karne laga....
Fir vo teeno mere se ladne ko tayar ho gye or mujhpe attack karne lage mai bhi unse laga to mujhe pta chala ki vo bohot power full hein or mujhe apni powers ka pura gyan nhi tha koi koi attack mera aisa hota ki unki halat buri kar di or koi aisa hota ki unhe jyada farak na padta....
Lekin tabhi unme unhe pta nhi apne ajeeb se hathiyar ko jo ki kisi bade dhanush ke type ka tha use asman ki taraf kiya or ek asman ke ek pink and green type kuchh roshni nikli or seedhe uske hathiyar pe aayi usne use meri taraf load kiya or jese hi usne mujhe hit kiya meri talwar dur ja kar giri vo sidha akar mere dil pe laga tha dil seene se bahar aane ko ho rha tha....
Lekin maine apne pura dam lagakar apne ko ek baar fir khada kiya or mai apni talwar ki taraf lapka lekin bich mai hi mujhe bohot jor ki laat padi or mai kisi lohe ke khambe se ja kar takraya sarir se jese jaan hi nikal gyi ek baaar fir himmat kar ke khada hua or unse ladne ke liye tayar hua ...
Jise dekhkar vo log hasne lage or .....
Mujhe gussa aaya or mai unhe apni puri takat laga ke marne laga or lekin unpe kuchh asar nhi hua.....
C3--- hahahahahahahahaha tu kya samjhta he tu taqatwar he nhi na bachche tu galatfahmi mai na rah TAKAQTWAR TU NHI TERA HATHIYAR HE... Tu bhi bina is hathiyar ki tarah sab ki tarah kida makoda hi he.....
C2--- kya bola tha tu MYSTERY MAN he hahahahaha tu kida he or kuchh nhi or kahke vo meri talwar ko uthata he lekin usse nhi uthti uso alag fenk deti he.....
C1--- ohhhh to mtlb ise marna padega tabhi takwar hamari hogi....or ye kah kr sabhi hasne lagte hein....
Or vo mere upar koi roshni chhodte hein jisse mere sarir mai jhatke lagte hein aisa lag rha tha koi atma ko bahar khich rha he....
C3--- hahahahahahahahaha tujhe pta he ye bhi badi kamal ki chiz he (meri talwar ke pass baith kar) jisme taqat hoti he usi to apnati he or usne meri talwar ko pakad liya use jhatke lage lekin usne talwar nhi chhodi or sahan karta rha....
Mere sarir se atma khich rhi thi munh se dard ki chikh nikal rhi thi or ankho se anshu nikal rhe the...
Or meri ankhein band hone ko thi tabhi ek white roshni nazar aati he jo un creatures or mere bich mein aake khadi ho jati jise dekhkar mere chahre par muskan aati he...
Ek akhiri baar dekh lu chahra mere mahboob ka
Yahi to khwahish thi meri marte samay nhi didar ho mujhe mere yaar ka....
Or fir meri ankhein band ho jati hein....
TO BE CONTINUED
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