Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

[ragish7357]

bhai is story pr kbhi update aayenge ya nhi..........

 

[kingxlegion]

bhai is story pr kbhi update aayenge ya nhi..........

Nahi bhai ye story khatam ho chuki hy. Iski koi update nahi aany wali. Bilawagah wait karny ka faida nahi. Ignore maro.

 

[Naik]

Are har din aate ho aap online lekin kehte bhi nahi ho ki iss kahani ko kab shuru ker rehe h ya nahi ker rehe ho yahi bata do bhai
Baaki aap ki marzi
Intizar ker rehe h aur kerte h rahenge

 

[Asif khan]

Are har din aate ho aap online lekin kehte bhi nahi ho ki iss kahani ko kab shuru ker rehe h ya nahi ker rehe ho yahi bata do bhai
Baaki aap ki marzi
Intizar ker rehe h aur kerte h rahenge

Ri8

 

[Htcw456]

Hello writer g
what's up dude
where are you, after such a long time you never came back and please complete your thread dear
Please bro, pity on us because of incomplete stories or thread my heart is pounding dear please came back and complete your thread waiting curiously
with love your reader

 

[Aakash.]

Hello Everyone
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.

Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..

Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread.

Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread.

Regards :Xforum Staff.

 

[Calm_777]

UPDATE-17


Priya ne mere haath ko apne haton mein pakda aur bohot hi masoom hi sakal ke satha poocha''kya hua''


mai...kuchh nhi...pahli baar to mai tumhe pahchan hi nhi paya tha...itna badal jo gyi ho...aur doosri bajah tum hi ho....


is baat ko sunkar shayad priya ko pta chal gya tha ki mai kya kahna chata hun...
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Abb aage......................................................


priya ko pta nhi kya hua is baat se kuchh udas si ho chuki thi uske chahare par ek alag dard sa mahsush ho rha tha...

usne ab mera hath jo pakda tha vo ab chhod diya tha...use shayad us ek hi line se bohot dukh pahuncha tha...kahte hein na kabhi kisi ko dukh dene ke liye jyada kuchh nhi kadwi juban aur aur teekhe sabd hone chahiye vo kisi bhi dil ke kavah ko bhed ke us mein jakham de dete hein ...


aaj aisa hi kuchh mere se ho gya tha par na to meri juban kadwi thi aur na hi jyada teekhe sabd the...


mein isliye kisi se jyada batein karna pasand nhi krta ki kab kahan kise kis baat ka bura lag jaye...


ab mein pachhta rha tha ki ab kuchh hona to hai nhi phir maine ise us baat ko yaad dilakar dukh de diya...


aur jab koi dukh mein hota hai mujhe bohot bura lagta hai...chahe vo koi bhi sahi insan ho ya janbar khair...


maine Priya se puchha ki hua aisa to maine kuchh nhi kaha...

Priya...mai tumhari tarah dhakkan nhi hun jo ye bhi na samjhu ki kis bre mein baat kar rhe ho...


mai...ha tum dhakkan kahan ho tum to billi ho

mai mahol ko halka karna chahta tha par koi asar nhi hua kyonki ye vaat shayad priya ke dil par lagi thi...


Priya...Plesase! Raj mein is wakht mazak ke mood mein nhi hun...


usne mera naam liya to mai samaz gya ki ye kuchh jyada hi serious ho gyi hai kyonki jab vo normal hoti hai hamesha hasti hui rahti hai aur mujhe to kabhi bhi bina chidaye nhi rahti hai...


mai...sorry agar tumhe bura laga ho to...vo bas mere munh se nikal gya mera koi irada nhi tha ki mai janbuzhkar tumhe tang karun ...


Priya...nhi isme tumhari koi galti nhi hai , galti to sab meri hai kyonki maine tumhe dard diya,tumhe meri wajah se bohot kuchh sahana pada...


Mai...chodo yaar ab kya hona hai in baton ko kar kar bas purane jakham aur hare ho jate hein...


priya...mujhe maaf kar do maine tumhe bohot dard diya hai...

mai...maine tumhe kabhi galat samjha hi nhi...par tumhe tab hua kya tha jo tumne...aisa kiya

Priya...mujhe maaf kardo mai tumhr abhi nhi bta sakti hun...mai mazboor thi...


ab mai bhi serious ho chuka tha kyonki mai bhi jan na chahta tha usne aisa kyon kiya tha...


mai...lekin kyon kiya tumne aisa batao to sahi..

Priya...agar maine bta diya to shayad tum kayi logon se nafrat karne lag jao...isliye abhi janana sahi nhi hoga tumhare liye...


mai...mai kis se nafrat karne lag jaunga aur kis liye batao to sahi...


Priya...mai abhi nhi bta sakti ,lekin sirf itna bta sakti hun ki vo tumhare apne hein, is se jyada mai tumhe kuchh nhi bta skti...


Priya...agar tumne kabhi bhi mujhse pyar kiya hai to ab is ke aage tum kuchh nhi puchhoge TUMHEIN MERI KASAM RAJ,


Ab mein kah bhi kya skta tha usne apni kasam jo dedi lekin ab mere dimag main uthal puthal ho rhi thi ki aisa kya hai jis se mai logon se nafrat karne lag jaunga?

vo ghar mai se hi kon hai ? mein jitna is bare mein soch rha tha utna hi mera dimag chakra rha tha...samajh nhi aa rha tha ki ab mai kya karun...


jab koi apno ke hi bare mein kah de to bohot dard hota hai dil mein , dimag kaam nhi karta kisi par vishwash nhi hota...


ab priya mere hi taraf dekh rhi thi lekin mera dhyan uski taraf nhi tha mai to apne hi khyalon mein khoya hua tha ,

ab bilkul mere se sat kar baith gyi aur ek haath mere kandhe par rakha aur doosre haath mein usne mera mera ek haath le liya...

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Priya...mujhe maaf kar do mai abhi tumhe kuchh nhi bta skti par...wkt aane par sab kuchh bta dungi...

mai... akhir kab aayega vo wakht ,aisa kya hai jo mai nhi janta apno kr baare mein...


mai...tumne to mujhe us pyar ki kasam do kbhi tumne hone hi nhi diya...


mai...kya tumne kabhi bhi mujhse pyar kiya hai...batao ye kis pyar ki kasam di hai tumne jo hone se pahle hi kho gya...batao mujhe kya tumne kabhi mujhse pyar kiya hai...aur meri ankhon mein halke halke anshoo ane lage...



pahle to bohot der tak meri ankhon mein dekhti rahi mai bhi uski hi ankhon mein dekh rha tha, kuchh der to usne meri ankhon mein dekha fir apne haath se meri aankhon ke aanshoo saf kiye or neeche pani mein nazar gadaye hue dekhti rahi...


wahan ab ek dam.sannata chaa gya tha aur bas pani bahane ki awaz aa rhi thi meri ab himmat nhi thi ki usse aur baat karun...

isliye mai bhi pani ko dekhte hue uski awaz sunane laga jis se ki thodi bahut shanti mil rhi thi mere man ko...




ki tabhi Priya ne upar ki taraf dekha or ek lambi sans andar kheenchi aur mera jo haath usne apne haath mai pakad rkha tha usko upar kiya aur thoda sa khud neeche ki taraf jhuki aur mere hath par ek kiss kar diya....

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uske kiss karne ke baad maine apne haath ki taraf dekha to paya ki mere hath par uskki lipstoc ko bajah se hoton ke nishan pade hue hein...


mai to bilkul shocked ho gya mujhe is wakt usse aise kisi bhi pratikriya ki koi ummid nhi thi...aur achhmbhe se uski taraf dekhne laga...

pahle to vo sharma gyi lekin fir...

Usne kaha aise kya dekh rhe ho jaise koi bhoot dekh liya ho...


mai...ye kya tha...

priya...tumhe nhi pta...kiss tha...aur isi ke sath usne ek aur baar mere haath ko chum liya...


ye sab mere kiye to ek sapne jaisa tha mai jo kuchh bhi mere sath hua tha sab kuchh bhul gya tha...ki tabhi usne apni sir mere kandhe par rakh diya...


ye kuchh alag hi feeling thi uska hatha mere haath mein tha aur usne mere haath par apne hothon se kiss bhi ki thi aur ab usne apna sar mere kandhe par rakh diya....


yahi sab sochte -sochte maine bhi apna sar uske sar se bhida diya

( ye scene kuchh is tarah tha ki )

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aur mai us pal ko mahsush karne laga ab tak mai puri tarah se shant ho chuka tha aur bas is pal ko mahsush kar rha tha ki tabhi priya kuchh kahana chalu karti hai...


PRIYA KE SABD---------



Ham to bas tumhari yadon mein zindgi ji rahe hein,

zamane mein khush aur akele gam mein rah rahe hein,

fir bhi tum kahte ho ham tumhe dukh de rahe hein,

par shayad tum anjan ho ki zamane ke zahar ko ham pi rhe hein,

bahut muskil hota hai kisi ki yadon ke sahare jina phir bhi ham tumhari yadon mein ji rahe hein,

Nahi raha jata ab in yadon ke sahare ham tumse kah rhe hein,

kar lo ab apne aagosh mein mujhe ye ham tumse kah rahe hein...

TO BE CONTINUED

Is story me hero mujhe chutiya sa lag rha hai. Mai story ki insult nhi krna chahta but ye sach hai.....

 

[Naik]

Bhai kia koyi chance h yaha update aane k

 

[Hondacreta]

waiting

Bhai r u NAND

 

[Yamraaj]

jab tak jinda hun tab tak story band na hogi....

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