Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

[spritemathews]

Nice update

 

[Acme]

Nice update

 

[Prem Chopra]

koi bhi nhi chahta hai ki uski story ka flow bigde,kuchh pareshaniyon ke chalte mai update nhi de paya uska bhi khed hai...

update 1000 words se upar ka hai aur mujhe nhi lagta ki ise chhota mana jana chahiye...

Update ka MATLAB words nahi hota ek update me ek pura incident likha jata h

 

[Johnboy11]

Too good bhai.
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Aur very awesome update h bhai.
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Nye raaj khulne lge h.
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Bhai aap ye -ve comment wale pe dhyan mt do iska ek hi kaam h story ko band karwana isne Dev bhai ko bhi yhi bola tha isliye aap apni story pe dhya do likhte raho.
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Good going.
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Keep posting.
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[Genius]

Superb update

Lagta hai priya koi secret agent hai

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai bhai waiting for next update

 

[Scorpionking]

Shaandaar update bhai maza a Gaya.agla update kab tak ayega .

Waiting for next update.

Keep posting

 

[Kratos]

Bhi tumhari story to kya kahe words nahi hai..itni acchi hai. But tumhare update regular nahi aa rahe, isse story padne ka interest chala jata hai. Agar ho sake to update regular do..

 

[lover585]

jabarjast

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Nic update