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Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

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Hellohoney

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Besabri se intajar bhai hiro ka kamal dekhna he waiting for update
 

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:huh: brothers may toh chahu ga is story ko para he na ji
Qk jo wrighter readers k liy time nahi nikal sakta mtlb us ko readers ke qader he nahi hai
Subha say online h yay ni k ek update bhe dayday!..
 
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as u wish
 
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Post Edited:

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UPDATE-22


jiski bajah se mujhe goli na lag saki lekin mein jamin par gir padi aur dard se karahne lagi ...

ki tabhj ek chir parichit awaz mere kano mein aayi jise sunkar meri aankhon mai khun utar aaya...
awaz...ye kya krwa diya dilwar tumne ise nhi marna tha?
Dilawar...to kya karta mai haan ?
Dilawar...ek to isne vaise hi naak mai dum kar rkha hai...aur dusra aaj isne mere kitne aadmiyon mara hai

AAB AAGE...


awaz -jisko marna tha uska tumhe koi ata pta nhi is bechari ko maar diya...


Dilawar - jitna nazuk tum ise samaz rahi ho ye utni nazuk hai nhi...kya naam tha ladke ka?

ye jo awaz thi ye koi aur nhi asha bhua thi...

bhua...Raj

dilawar- lagta hai ye ya to use apne sath nhi layi ya phir use kahin bahar hi chhod kar aayi hai...

asha...han aisa ho skta hai...kisi ko bhejo bahar dekhne...

dilawar...ham...dabria jara bhejo kisi ko...


fir dabria munh se ek awaz karti hai ki tabhi 15 logon ki uski team hazir ho jati hai jisme 2 ladke or 13 ladkiya thi...


dabria...jao kuchh log jakar bahar dekh kar aao koi hai to nhi...


fir unme se koi 5-6 log chale jate hein jinme 2 ladke the ...


jab mujhe pata chala ki ye pura plan Raj ko marne ke liye tha to mera dimag satak gya...


is waqt asha aur dilawar kuchh batein kar rahe the ...


Asha...dilawr kahin ye mar to nhi gyi...


abhi dilawar kuchh kahta usse pahle hi maine uthte hue kaha...


tumhare bajuon mein itna dum nhi,
maar do hamein ye kisi baham se kam nhi,


vo dono mujhe khada dekh kar chaunk gye aur sath hi sath dabria aur uski team bhi...



mai... ''aaj hame unhonhe dhoka diya,
jinhone kabhi hame god mai liya''


mai...akhir kya bigada hai usne tumhara...


asha ne kuchh nhi kaha


mai...bolo kya hua...


usne to kuchh nhi kaha lekin dilawar ne kaha jo bhi ho lekin aaj to tum nhi bachogi...


aur usne dabria ko kuchh ishara kiya...


mai bhi ab ready ho gyi thi aur maine apni ek talwar nikal li thi...


usne apni ek fighter ko ladne bheja...vo mujhe karate dikhane lagi... lekin mai apni jagah par khadi rahi...


aur jaise hi vo ruki hui maine uske uske ghutne mai samne se laat mari jis se vo wahan se tut gya or uski chikh nikal gyi...



mai...kya dabria bachho ko paal rakha hai koi dhang ka sa fighter bhejo


fir unme se ek koi kareeb 6 feet ki ek nigro fighter nikal kar aayi uske haath mai talwar bhi bohot bhari thi...


usne aate hi talwar se mujhpar hamla kar diya maine use talwar se roka lekin phir bhi uski talwar mere baju ko cheerte hue gyi...


usne tabhi furti se dushra baar kiya maine sambhalte hue apni talwar ko aage kiya lekin ek to vo bohot takatbar thi aur dusra uski talwar bhi kuchh bhari thi...


jiska natiza ye hua ki meri talwar tut gyi aur mai peechhe ki taraf gir gyi...



or vo dono hath upar kar ke talwar ko mere mai marne hi wali thi ki achanak gir jati hai...


hue ye tha ki jahan ham lad rahe the vo jagah seedhiyon ke kareeb thi or uski peeth seedhiyon ki taraf thi jaise hi usne
maujhe marne ke liye ki tabhi usne uske peeche se uske ghutne mai laat mari jiski bajah se uska balance bigad gya or vo ghuton ke bal zamin par gir theek usi waqt mai peechhe ko palat gyi...or khadi ho gyi


girne ki bajah se uski talwar zamin mai gad gyi jiska fayda uthate hue maine uske munh par ek super kick zad di or vo charo khane chit ho gyi...


Raz ko dekhkar dilwar ne gusse mai kaha ki kahde khade kya dekh rahe ho maro inhe ...


tabhi sabhi ek sath attack kar dete hein yahan ab lagabhag 7-8 member the 2 to past pade the or 5-6 members bahar gye the...


uske order ko sunte hi sabhi ek sath hamla kar dete hein...


ab ham bhi do the lekin mujhe Raj ki chinta ho rhi thi kyonki ye sabhi trained the or Raj ne shayad pahle hi kabhi aisa kiya ho...


lekin vo bhi dikhne mai koi kam nhi tha ek to uski lambai or body bhi thik thak thi jiski bajah se vo kisi se bhi kam nhi tha ....


ab tak vo log ham tak pahunch chuke the ...or ham dono ek dusre ki peeth se peeth bhidaye khadr hue the or dono ki hi talwarein upar thi kuchh is tarah...



unlogon ke aate hi maine apni talwar ko ghumana start kar diya jiska koi tod nhi janta tha uske pass aate aate hi do log narak sidhar chuke the...



udahr Raj ne bhi ek ko maar diya tha...


ab kebal 5 log bache the jinme se ek dabria thi...


ki tan tak jo unke jo log bahar gye the vo bhi aa gye...



or ladne lage ab unka palda thida bhari ho gya tha ...or abhi tak meri team bhi yahan nhi pohonchi thi...



lekin ladne ke alawa hamare pass koi chara nhi tha...


3 ladkiya ek sath mujhse lad rhi thi aur ek ladka Raj se jisko ki Raj ne thodi maskkat ke baad gir diya or uske haath tod diye...


maine bhi un teeno mai se ek ko maar diya tha jiski bajah se dabria ko chhod kar sabhi ne mujhpar attack kar diya ...


jisme se ki Raj ne us ladke ko kheench liya lekin usne Raj ke hath mai laat marke uski talwar gira di...


aur apni talwar se use marne laga lekin vo bachne laga vo RAJ par havi bo rha tha isliye jo mujhse lad rahe the maine un mai se tezi se 2 ki gardan kat di aur talwar feink ke mari aur jo raz se lad rha tha vo seedhe uske pet mai se paar gyi...



lekin mai ab nihatthi thi aur vo teen hathiyar ke sath lekin maine uchhal kar ek ke munh par apna ghutna mara wahan se bhaag kar tezi se apni gun li aur sabhi ko bhun diya jise dekhar DABRIA gusse se pagal ho gyi...


aur usne bhi mujhpar goliyan chala di lekin maine ek deewar ki aut le li...


ki kahin se Raj ne dabria ke taraf talwar fenk kar mazi jis se usko koi khasi chot to nhi aayi lekin uske haath se bandook gir gyi...



jiska fayda uthatw hue mai uske pass pagunch gyi...aur apni talwar utha kar kaha
'' aao dabria aamne samne ka muqabla karte hein''


jis se uske hothon par ek katilana mushqan aa gyi...aur usne ladne ke liye turant hami bhar di...


aur phir shuru hua talwar bazi ka ek ghamashan sangram jisko chalte chalte koi 30 min ho gye lekin koi bhi haar man ne ko tayar nhi tha...



Dabria ab buri tahar se thak chuki thi aur bohot hi jaldi apne ghutne tekne wali thi...


ki tabhi dilawar ne awaz lagai ki e ladki apne hathiyar dal de warna iska gala uda dunga...


jisse mi mera dhyan bhatak gya or dabria ne mere pahle se kate hue haath mai fir se talwar se baar kar diya...


dilawar ne ASHA ke gale par chaku rakh rkha tha or marne ki dhamki ke de rha tha...



aur vo chilla rahi thi ki mujhe bacha lo...
mujhe laga tha ki ye inka fir se koi drama hai...



isliye maine jyada dhyan nhi diya or dabria se ladne lagi...lekin Raj ko kya pata tha uske peechhe yahan kya hua hai...


vo use bachane chala to dilawar ne chuku ko gardan par dawa diya...jiski bajah se gardan se khun bahane lag gya...or Raj jahan tha wahin ruk gya...


ab tak dabria ko maibe pura chhaka liya tha lekin or usko buri tarah se ghayal kar diya uski talwar ko zamin par gira diya tha.. ...


lekin usne beimani karte hue meri aankhon mai ret dàal diya or meri jangh mai ek chhota chaku ghusa diya...


jab ye manzar raz ne dekha to uski aankhon mai khoon utar aaya or usne dabria ko shoot kar diya...



lekin iska fayda dilawar ne uthya aur vo wahan se bhag nikla...aur us Asha ko wahin chhod gya ...


mujhe us ka chehara dekhte hi bohot gussa aa rha tha...



dilawar ka bhagana hua or meri team ki khandar mai entry hui...


( team ka intro baad mai diya jayega)


maine unhe turant hi dilawar ko pakane ke liye bhej diya...


vo log gye lekin unhe dilawar kahin nhi mila to maine unhe wahan ki lashon ko thikane lagane ke liye kaha...



or julie se kaha ki tum mujhe ghar tak chhod aao kyonki meri hathon or pairon mai chot thi jiski bajah se gadi chalane mai dikkalt hoti or raat ka samay vaise hi tha...


jab ye ghaw team ke doctor ne dekhe to usne inhe saaf kar ke dressing
kar di...


Asha...mujhe maaf do mujhse bohot badi galti ho gyi...


aur pata nhi kya kya nhi kaha lekin maine kuchh bhi nhi suna...


aur Raz aur julie se gadi mai chalne ko kaha...


vo dono chal diye mere pair mai lagi thi isliye raj mujhe sahara de rha tha...


TO BE CONTINUED










 

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Lajwab update bhai
Full Action dhmaka
But hero jra kmjor lga
 
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