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Sci-FI [{RAJ - VIRAJ (Hero/Devil - Two In One) (Complete)} {RAJ - VIRAJ --- Two In One (Mystery Of The Snow Mountain Of Himlistan) (Running)}]

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Story ke part 1 & part 2 ki story Puri Tarah alag hai
Ek taraf part 1 earth per ki story hai
To dusri taraf part 2 me other Planet ke Sath Sath supernatural power bhi hai

dono story ke 2-3 character hi same hai Baki sab different Hero & Heroine bhi





RAJ - VIRAJ (Hero/Devil - Two In One) (Complete) PDF





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PART-2
UPDATE-1
Hamare vaigyanikon ka kahana hai ki iss brahmand me Kai aisa planet hai Jahan per jivan sambhav hai
Agar ham unki sune to unmen se Kuchh planet ke jeev ham logon Se bhi jyada shaktishali Hai,
Kuchh magic ka prayog karte Hai

To kahin Ka science ham logon ke science se bahut aage Nikal Gaya Hai.

Hamare planet earth per Kai dharmo Ke log niwas karte Hain

Aur sabhi dharm Granth ke hisab se bhagwan ka janm earth per Hi hua Hai.
Lekin kabhi kisi ne yah socha Hai ki
Kya koi bhagwan ka janm Kisi dusre planet par hua Ho

Kisi Ne Nahi socha
Lekin ek aisa bhagwan Hai Jinke bare mein ham Kuchh bhi Nahin jante

Jinka janm earth per Nahin hua Hai
Jinka janm hua Hai Himlistan per

Mani Shankara yahi naam hai us bhagwan ka.

Jinka janm Himlistan mein hua hai


Himlistan
Aaj ke samay me yah brahmand ka ek aisa planet hai

Jahan magic To Hai hi Sath hi sath yahan per science itna aage badh chuka hai ki ek tarah se ise magic hi mana jata hai
Shuruaat me iss planet per science jyada viksit Nahi tha

Lekin magic shuru Se Hi tha.

Iss planet per 80% jal aur 20% bhumi hai

Hamare earth Ki Tarah yaha par bhumi alag alag Nahin
Balki ek hi Jagah rectangular shape mein hai
Aur Iske bich me hai Snow mountain(Him parvat) Jo ise do barabar bhago me batti hai.

Him parvat ke ek Taraf jungle Nadiya aur kuchh rahasyamai jagah hai

Lekin vahan koi insan nahin rahata hai.
Yahan per jungle nadi sabhi magic kar sakte hain

Vahin dusri taraf insan rahte hai.

Jinke pass janm Se Hi koi Na koi magical power rahti hai.
Yahan Ke logo ka manna hai ki him parvat per devtaon ka nivas sthal hai.
Yahan Ke insan do group me rehte Hai Aur donon Ke bich 36 ka aakda chalta rahata hai

Pahla group Ko Himjam aur dusre group ko Stantam Kaha jata hai


Chaliye ab story start karte Hain

Kaha jata hai Ki Himjam Kabile ek mahila ne

Him parvat ke devtaon ko Khush kar
Unse ek aisa power prapt Kiya
Jiske dwara vah Kuchh bhi kar sakti thi

Aur yah power pidhi dar pidhi ek mahila se dusre mahila me transfer hote Gaya
Iss kabil mein kisi bhi couple ko pahla baccha beta hota tha aur dusra beti.
Iss power ke Karan dekhte hi dekhte Himjam kabila Stantam kabile se bahut aage Nikal Gaya.
Himjam kabila Satya aur ahinsa par vishwas rakhta tha
Jis Karan yahan ki praja bahut khush thi.


Vahi Stantam kabile Ke log

Kisi bhi Tarah iss power ko Pana chahte the
Jiske liye vah Kuchh bhi karne ko taiyar tha
Aur fir Aaya ek aisa samay chakra
Jisne sab Kuchh badal kar Rakh Diya.


Yah vah samay tha

Jis waqt Himjam Kabile me vah power
Vahan ki rajkumari Ambika ke paas thi.
Aur usi waqt Stantam kabile ka raja bana tha bhairav jo bahut hi chalak tha.
Lekin iska sabse bada gun iska sundarta tha
Jise Dekh Kar koi bhi ladki is per Mohit Ho jaati thi.

Ek bar ise pata Chala Ki ki rajkumari Ambika akele shikar per gai hai
Isne us samay ka fayda uthaya
Aur rajkumari Ambika ko apne prem Ke jaal mein fansa Kar

Usse vivah kar liya aur uske sath Himjam Kabhi me Chala Gaya.


Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me padhenge Himjam kabile ki barbadi aur Stantam kabile ka Uday
(update 3 me Hero ki entry hogi aur update 3 se Update ka size medium Ya double ho jaega)
 

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maja nahi aaya ..raj ke part ko complete karte pehle ..
Brother aaj Mai ek story
Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

Padh raha hu
And ab tak complete Nahi hua hai

Jis Karan update Nahi likh saka

Otherwise

Second part me first part ke next generation ki hai matlab ki second part earth par present me Saal 2043 me chalegi
Usme first part Ka koi role Nahi hai
Bas uska ek secret first part me hai Jo last me khulega
Otherwise
Second part Ka main hero Raj Nahi hoga
Koi dusra Hoga

And second part me first part ke Kuch hi log honge

Like Raj A&A ek aur Hoga Jo secret hai
and first part Ka update kal evening me aayega

Thanks
 

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Story ke first part ka last update today evening to 9:00 pm tak aayega

Important notice

Second part Ka update 2 Kuch Dino Baad sayad 5-7 din aaega because Main Nahin Chahta ki update ka size chhota and inregular update ho jis Karan mein pahle hi 2nd part ke sabhi ghatnaon per vichar karunga aur Story ka rup-rekha taiyar karunga Jiske baad regular aur medium size update aaenge

Aaj ke update ke baad karna hoga gora Sa intezar maximum 1 week Ka intezaar

Aaj ki shaam koi aane Ko Hai re Baba re Baba intezar aur thoda intezar subu subu subu subu subu use aane to de hai dile bekarar Kar le Jee Bhar Ke pyar aur thoda intezar

Malang movie Ka ek scene jismein hai ek old song subu subu subu subu subu

Jindagi Hai rutha per akar na tuta

Wait next update
Sorry Kuchh jyada likh Gaya
Mention not
ab send kar hi dete Hain
 
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Mai iss sentence Ka matlb Nahi samjhe

Apni update se bara to coment kea ha kuch to hamara khayal kro

Agar free hai to samjaye
Bhai ap ne update choti ke hai aur us ke bad jo coment hai wo bara ha ye kaha tha
 

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Ab tak aapane padha---
Raj Viraj Aaj ek ho chuke hain
Aur sabhi ke sath tahkhane ki taraf jaate Hain

Ab aage---

Jaise hi Raj ne Pradeep aur Riya par
Apne power ka upyog kiya
Un donon ke aankhon ke samne
Alag alag tarah Ke drishy
Dikhai de rahe the
Jo un donon ne apni jindagi me
Kabhi nahin dekha tha
Ek to iss tarah hawa me upar uthana
Aur upar se ya drishya
Vah donon pagal hone lage tha

In Tahkhana
Dad-kya baat hai aaj tum bahut khush lag rahi ho

Mom- voooo aaj mujhe aisa lag raha hai
Ki mera beta mujhse milane aa raha hai
Aapko kaisa mahsus Ho Raha Hai

Dad-mujhe bhi bilkul tumhare jaisa mahsus ho raha hai
Kash yah sab sach ho paye
Hamen to ab asha bhi nahi hai ki
Ham yahan se nikal payenge

Tabhi darwaje ka get khulata hai
Aur bahut sare log andar aate hai

Jab yah sab andar aate hai
To Pratik aur Riya ko hawa me
Dekhkar mom-dad shocked ho jaate hai
Vah Kabhi un donon ko
To kabhi samne dekh rahe the

Mom jaise hi hum sab Ko dekhti hai
Vah hamari taraf daur kar aane lagti hai
Shayad Maa ke dil Ko pata chal gaya tha
Ki yah sab unke bacche hai
Achanak mom niche girne lagti Hai

Vahi Jab Raj andar aata Hai
Ti dekhta hai ki mom daur kar
Uske taraf aa rahi hai
Aur achanak girne lagti hai
Tabhi Raj apne aankh se
Kuchh ishara karta hai
Aur mom hawa mein hi ruk jaati hai
Jab Raj dhyan se dekhta hai
To use pata chalta hai
Ki mom-dad janjiro se bandhe hue hai
Raj turant apne aankh se
Kuchh ishara karta hai
Aur janjeere khul jaati hai
Raj Ko apne mom-dad Ka
Haal dekh kar bahut gussa aata hai
Aur vah Pradeep aur riya ko
Hawa se niche gira deta hai
Jis se ve donon wapas hosh me aate hain
Aur un donon ki Kuchh memory
Jo vah bhul chuke the
Wapas aa jaati Hai

P&R-Ham donon yaha per kaise hain
Ham to uska picha kar rahe the


In donon ki baten kisi Ko samajh nahin aati hai
Lekin raj ko bahut gussa a raha tha
Aur vah ek aag Ka ball
Un donon ki taraf chhodata hai
Vahin jab is baat ka pata
P&R ko chalta hai
Vah uss ball Ko wapas mor dete hai
Jisse raj thoda socked ho jata hai
Raj un donon per apne
Alag alag tarah Ke power ka
Prayog karta hai
Jise vah donon milkar
Aasani se khatm kar dete hai
Achanak Raj ke dimag mein Kuchh aata hai
Aur vah apne sabhi power ka
Ek enegy ball banakar
Un donon ke taraf chhodta hai
Jisse P&R bahut ghayal hote hain
ah donon aapas me kuch ishara karte hai

Aur vahan se achanak gayab ho jaate Hai

Raj Apne sabhi power ka prayog karta hai
Lekin vah un donon ko dhundh nahi pata

(Raj Ko yah pata nahin tha
Ki uske isi galti Ke karan
Kuchh salon baad bahut bada toofan
Aane wala Hai)

Mom-dad ke milane Ke Karan
Raj iss ghatna ko bhul jata hai
Aur fir family emotion shuru hota hai
Neha ko yah pata tha ki
Mom ke hisab se vah usi Ki beti hai
Neha dad ko side me le jaati hai
Aur unse apne parents ke bare me puchti hai
Jab dad Ko pata chalta Hai Ki
Neha vahi hai jise unhone apni beti banaya tha
To vah kahate Hain

Dad-mujhe nahin pata
Tum kiski beti ho
Jab meri beti janm ke samay hi
Mar gai thi to mai
Andar se bahut tut gaya tha
Uss samay koi mere pass aaya
Aur tumhen mujhe dekar Kaha ki
Sahi samay aane per vah
Dobara aaega aur fir
Vah vahan Se chala gaya
Vah bahut jaldi me lag raha tha

Vahi Raj ne bhi yah baat sun liya
Usne apne pita se kaha ki
Vah Neha Se pyar karta Hai
Dad Ko bhi koi aapatti nahin hui
Kuchh samay baad mom ko
Sach bata diya gaya aur
Raj aur Neha ki shaadi ho gai.

2-3 Salon baad Ansh aur Anshu ki bhi shaadi ho gai
Ek sanskari ladka aur ladki dekhkar
Ansh aur Anshu Ke bich bahut lagao tha
Isliye Anshu Ne Ansh ke sath rahane Ka faisla Kiya
Aur ant me aansu bhi
Apne papa ke ghar me hi
Rant lekar rahane lagi
Kyunki uska pati bahut sanskari vicharon wala tha
Isliye vah Ghar jamai nahin banna Chahta tha
Jis karan usne rent dene Ka faisla Kiya
Sabhi log khushi-khushi rahane lage......

END OF FIRST PARTi nahin banna Chahta tha
Jis karan usne rent dene Ka faisla Kiya

Sabhi log khushi-khushi rahane lage......

END OF FIRST PART
Next update posted
 
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