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Bilal jan

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[Point of view from Third person]

mumbai mai ye anath ashram bahoot bada ta and iss mai bahoot bacche te

raj bi idhr rehne laga yaha pe vo kisi se bi baate nai karta ta bas apne mai rehta ta isss tarh samy bit ta gya

raj ke mom dad or baki sab ne bi raj dundne ki bahot kosis ke but unko kai nai mila dhire dhire vo sab bi apne mai busy ho gye raj ko Lagabag sabi bul gye te diya ko kuch pta hi nai ta

raj anath ashram mai se padne jata ta iss tarh uska 10th ka exam kahtm ho gya ta aaj uska result ta

vo aaj bi kisi se baat nai karta ta bas apne mai mast rehta ta usko sports mai interest ta Isliye uski body bi athletic ti jisse vo uake umar se thoda bada lagta ta

vo scl gya and vaha pe uska results announcement hua jis mai usne all over india mai top kiya ta jiss se usko scholarship mila jis mai usko age ki study le liye usa jana ta jis mai sab scholarship ki tarf se ta so vo chala gya usa

2 saal baad......


Raj ko uski family ke bare kuch bi pta nai hai uska lagta hai vo anath hai ab bhai 5 saal mai jo hua usko kese pta ho ga

Aaj raj vapis india aa raha ta in 2 years mai raj bahoot badl gya 6 pack abs gora rang nile anke koi ladki usko deke to dekti reh jaaye

raj usa mai street fights mai devil 😈 name se famous ta but uska face kisi ne nai deka ta usne bahoot paisa kama liya ta jiss us ne apni company open ki ti jiska name "King group of companies"

Raka to 2 saal mai most of har ek field mai top mai ti but uske owner ko kisi ne nai deka

company ko Julie name ki ek ladki sambal ti hai

raj india mai delhi gya and vaha le uska jo gar ta vaha pe gya

uska gar bahoot bda ta luxurious ta

[ point of view from raj ]

Mai apne gar mai enter kiya and room mai jake ek painting ko gumaya and vaha pe ek eye scaner aya usne meri anke ko scan kiya and vaha pe ek door aa gya and mai open kar ke andr gya door close ho gya

vaha ek loft se mai niche aa gya

niche aa ke room. Mai bahoot sare weapons , swords raki huie ti and samne computer screens lagi huie ti jesa mai room mai enter hua ek awaj ayi

awaj : welcome sir

me: thanks king

king: sir abi thodi der mai raw chief ke sath meeting hai

me: hmm. Ohk

[king : ye ek computer program hai jo world ke sabi technology se relationship rakne vale kisi ko bi hack kar sakta hai but isko koi bibtrace bi nai kar skata

Ye maine usa mai gya ta tab banya ta]


Thodi der baad meeting st hoti hai

raw chief : kesa hai

me: fine sir

raw chief : clg mai admission kab le rehe ho clg st ho gye hai

me: bas ab thodi der mai nikl Raha hu

raw chief : delhi mai dhmal kab se suru ho rahi hai devil ki

me: bas thode din mai 😊

rwa chief : ohk. Byy

me: byy

me: king delhi mai sabi underworld ki info niklo

king: ohk. Sir

fir mai bahr ata hu and fresh ho ke simpal se kapde pehne ke nikl ta hu kisi ache restro mai

mere pass world ke best cars collection ta and kapde best te byt muje simple rehne pasnd hai

mai restaurant mai gya and kahna order kiya and lunch finish kar ke mai college ki tarf nikl gya

ye college sabse best and sabse bada college hai delhi ka

mai vaha pe paidal gya ta fir mai principal ke office mai gya

me: sir muje admission chiye mba mai

pricipal : but abi admission nai mil sakta college ko st hue 1 month ho gya hai

me: sir kuch bi kariye mujko admission chiye

principal : 50 lakh rupees lage ga

me: cash chiye ya online transfer karu

meri baat sun ke vo shock ho gya usne nai socha hoga ki mai esa bolunga

principal : ye account no hai daal do

maine accound no liya and phone mai transfer kar diya

unko message aya ki paise aa gye hai

Principal: tik hai document jama karva do kal se aa jana clg

me: ohk. Thanks sir

maine apne document diya and admission kara ke gar ki or nikla gya


Baki next update mai......
Buhat he amazing update 👍
 

Bilal jan

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Update 4

Mai clg se nikl ke gar aa gya

(gar ke bare mai bata deta hu
Gar 3 Flor ka hai
Ground flor pe kitchen and 5 rooms hai
2nd floor mai 6 room hai mera room second flor pe hai
3rd flor pe gym hai )

Gar mai ek maid hai jo kana vagera banate hai

mai apne room mai ake lock kar diya and ake so gya sham ko uta fresh hoke secret room mai aa gya

King: good evening sir
Me: good evening king

Me: list ready ho gya

King: yes sir

Me: kon hai jo sab handel kar raha hai delhi mai

King: sir home Minister hai and uske sath mla hai baki sab gunde hai

Me: ohk. Byy


king: byy sir

me vaha se nikl ke room mai aa jata hu fir niche jata hu

me: auntie ek coffee dena

mai maid ko auntie bolta hu

maid: ji baba

fir thodi der mai unhone muje coffee de and mai usko leke chat pe aa gya

vaha pe tandi hava ko mehsus karte hue coffee pine laga

coffee pine ke baad mai bike leke ese hi gumne nikl gya

bike simple ta apna splender

me bike leke chla gya mall mai vaha pe jake ese hi gumne laga

maine socha aaj dinner bahr karta hu so maine gar phone kar ke auntie ko bta diya ki mai bahr kahne vala hu

fir mai ese hi gum raha ta tab muje ek shop mai kapde dike jo muje bahot ache lage ao mai try karnw chla gya muje vo bahoot pasnd aye so maine karid liya and fir ek movie ticket leke movie dekne chla gya

jab movie kahtm hoke mai bahr aya time deka to 9 baj gye te

mai vaha pe ek ache restro mai gya and kahna order kar ke tabel pe jake bet gya

tab vaha pe kuch ladke ladkio ka group aya and mere samne vale table pe bet gye

Tab ek ladki boli

ladki: deko to kese faticher log bi yaha aa jate

ladka : ha riya sahi bol rahi hai pta nai kaha kaha se aa jate hai

riya: ha rahul garib sala

ye sab muje bol rehe te muje gussa to aa raha ta but mai kuch bola nai tab mera order bi aa gya mai kahne laga

(intro


rahul: age 24 hai mla ka beta hai
aayise hi karta hai pure din roj nai ladkio ke saath sota hai

amit: age 24 hai hm ka beta hai
ye bi bigda hua same rahul jesa hai

priya: age 23 hai rahul ke behn hai
ye bi gamdni hai sabko apne baap ke dam pe dara ti hai

baki riya and anuska and hina ko jante hi hoge

Sohan : age 24 hai eska baap ek businessman hai ye bi rahul kesa hai)



mai apne kahna ka raha ta

Anushka : deko to sala kese ka raha hai

priya: ha jane kabi kaya hi nai ho

sab hasne lagte hai

muje ab bahoot gusse aa raha ta fir bi thoda control kiya ta

mai sabki tarf gusse se dekta hu

rahul: sala humko dek raha hai ruk bta ta hu


ye bol ke vo ut ke mere pass ata and mera collar pakd ke bolta hai humko dekta hai sala

ab muje bardast nai hua and maine ek punch uske muh pe jad diya

vo vahi gir gya ye dek ke sab khde ho jate hai

amit muje marne jese ata hai mai usko bi ek marta hu
vo bi gir jata hai sohan to ye dek ke dar gya ta vo age hi nai aya

me: hospital le jao dono ko kai mar na jayee

vo sirf behosh hue te

fir mai vaha se nikla jata hu

piche ladkia shock mai kadi ti


fir vo unko hospital paunchti hai and gar chli jati hai sab gusse mai ti tino behne gar jati hai Vaha gar pe sab hall mai bete hue te

jab vo enter karte hai tab sab inko dekte hai dek ke hai samj mai aa raha ti gusse mai hai

papa: kya hua tum sab ko gusse mai kyu ho

vo sab kuch bta deti hai

bade papa: uski itni himmat saale ko chodnge nai

mummy : ha humari bachiyo ko kuch ho jata to

papa: tum tension na lo mai pta karvata hu kon hai vo

mai to vaha se nikl ke bike le ke gar chla jata hu amd fresh hoke so jata hu

next day

mai subh 5 baje uta and gym mai chla gya vaha pe muje 7 baj gya fir mai room mai ake fresh hone chla gya

mai to apne simple kapde te vo phne liya and niche ake dinning table pe bet ke

me: auntie Brenda fast

maid: ji baba laiye

fir vo bf lati hai and mai bf finish kar ke apne bike leke clg nikl jata

mai bike parking kar ke apne class ko dunda hu and class mai chla jata hu

thodi der baad ek teacher ate hai

muje dek ke tum new lagta ho
mam: you stand up tum inro do

mai kada hota hu

me: mam mera name Rajveer hai but sabi muje raj bulta hai mai 12th usa mai kiya ta and maine 99.99% ke sath vaha pe top kiya ta

mera intro sun ke sab shock ho jate hai

mam: good sit down

fir iss tarh lectures hote rehte hai

for recess hoti hai mai canteen mai ata hu

apne liya ek coffee order karta hu and table pe jake bet jata hu vaha pe sohan, priya and meri behno ne muje vaha pe dek liya unko bahoot gussa aya and papa and bade papa ko bol diya

priya ne bi mla and hm ko inform kar diya

mai sahnti se coffee pi raha ta

thdoi der baad vaha cars ka kafila ata hai amd sath mai police bi ate hai

itna shor saraba sun sab ground ektta hota hai

mai dekne jata hu ki kya hua

vaha pe jake deka to hm and mla aya hue

mla& hm : kisne mere bete ko mara ta

ye bole hi te ke vaha pe bahoot cars ane lagti hai and vaha pe rukti hai un mai bodyguards niklta hai
jo latest weapons and black suit mai ta tab vaha pe thodi mai vaha cars ati hai jis mai se bahoot gunde nikl te hai

ab mere liye itne sare log to bata du ki jo do log ko mara ta vo log coma mai chle gye te 😂😂😂

mai bi ek call karta hu

Vaha ye sab dek ke sab students or teachers and principal bi aa gya ta

principal : kya sir aap sab yaha achank

mla: kisne humare dono le bete ko mara and vo coma mai chle gye hume pta chla ki vo yai hai

ye sab chal raha ta tab mai canteen mai jake ek chai leta hu and usko leke ground mai chla jata hu and unke cars ke thode dur jake chair laga ke bet jata hu

yr mera kand dek ke baki sabi or bi shock ho jate hai

tabi vaha pe 5 log ata hai unke pass guns te sab ke face pe mask ta and ek ke hath mai guns ke sath ek bada box ta
vo log mere pass ake piche kade ho jate and box muje dete hai mai box kolta hu and us mai se apna sword niklta hu

ye dek ke to sab shock ho jate hai

riya: ye vahi hai papa

me: ha to bola bhai kya masla hai

mla : inspector dek kya rehe ho arrest karo

inspector bi dara hua ta

tabi vaha pe siren ki avaj sunai deti hai


baki next update mai....
Zabardast update👍
 
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thodi der mai vaha jab sabi cars ake rukti hai to sabi police ke cars ti

Ek car mai se dgp niklte hai vo vaha pe hm, mla and papa and bade papa ko dekte hai to vo shock ho jaate hai

vo unki tarf jaate hai

dgp: are singh shab aap yaha kya kar rhe hai

papa: yaha pe ek ladke ne humari bachio ke dost ke sath batmizi ki ti Isliye aya hu

dgp: or ye mla and hm sahb?

bade papa: vo samne ladka beta hai na usne inke ladko ko mara hai

papa: lekin dgp sir aap kya kar rehe hi

dgp: mai us ladke se milne aya hu

papa: what likin kyu

dgp: pta nai bas ypar se order hai

vo meri or ate hai

me: welcome sir

dgp: thanks

me: sir mai sidhi baat bolta hu agr hm or mla ke sath police hai unko side mai kade rehke tamasa dekne order de digiya warna vo bich mai aya to vo bi maare jaynge

dgp: ohk.

dgp sab ko order dete hai and sab police vale side mai khde ho jaate hai ye dek ke papa and bade papa shock mai hote vahi hm and mla to gusaa aa gya ta

me: mr pratp and mr veer aap chup chap side mai ho jaayga aap free mai shikar ho jaynge apki ladkio ko bi thodi tamiz siko paisa ka bahoot gamnd hai

papa: tum hote kon ye bolne vala aaj tum zinda nai jaaoge

me hasta hua : aap ko kya lagta hai dgp sir yaha tamsa kyu dek rehe hai

mla and hm dusro gundo ko bula liya yaha dek ke unko pta chal gya ta ki itne kuch nai hoga

Bade papa : ruk abi bata ta hu

ye bol ke unnone cm ko call kiya

cm: hlo mr veer boliye kese yaas kiya

bade papa: ye yaha clg mai dgp kuch kar nai raha or khda hoke dek raha hai

cm: kya tum us ldke ke samne ho

bade papa: ha ek ladka hai and uske sath kuch 5 jan gund leke kadhe hai

cm: are aap log usse dur rahana

bade papa: lekin hm and mla bi hai

cm: are unko unke pad se hatne ke liya pm ka call aya ta vo ab hm or mla nai hai

bade papa: kya wo shock mai te

cm : ha or aap us ladke se dur rahi hai

bade papa: tik hai

papa: kya hua bahiya cm kya bole

fir bade papa sab kuch bta dete hai ye sun ke to papa and meri behne bi shock mai hota hai

vaha mla or hm ko bi phone aa gya ta ki unko unke pad se hata diya hai

me apne teams ko order deta hu ki hm or mla ko uda de

un mai se do ne dirct gun se hm or mla ki khopdi uda di ye dek ke to sab shock ho gye priya to ye dek ke behosh ho gai

baki gunde marne age aya

mai apni sword leke age gya and jo pela aa raha ta uska sir uda diya 5 jan ne muje ger liya mai age vale ko sir uda diya tab piche se ek ne mera sirt zor se kicha zis se mera sirt fat gya and meri puri body dikne lagi

ab muje jyda gussa aa gya to maine ek sath sab ke sir uda diye jkab sab niche pade to log meri body dek rehe te

mai apni team ki tarf muda and unko bola ki sab ko bund dalo itne sir dhad se alg hone ke karn baki gunde apni jagh kahde ho gye te

jab mai apni team ki tarf muda tab meri pit papa ki yarf ho gai and unhone meri pit pe lion ka tattoo deka to vo shock ho gye and unke anko mai se ansoo nikle bade papa ne pucha kya hua tab unhonr meri or isara kiya tab meri behne and bade papa ne meri or deka unohne mera tatto deka tab bade papa ki anko mai asoo aa gya

meri behno ko kuch yaad nai ta so unhe pta nai chla

tab tak meri team ne sab mo uda diya ta tab do cars ayie and mai and meri team us mai bet ke chle gye

papa ne jab deka ki mai jaa raha to vo meri or bade but tab tak bahoot der ho chuki ti papa ,bade papa and behne bi unki car mai bet ke gar aa gye

papa ki anke abi bi num ti

vo gar enter hue tab

badi mummy : apne us ladke ko sabk sikya na ki usne kya galti ki hai

sab sofe par bet gye

mom: ha boliye na usne meri betiyo pe and uske dosto pe hath uta ke bahoot badi galti ki ti

Anushka gusse mai : mom usko papa and bade papa ne kuch bi nai kiya

mom: kya

fir hina ne sab bta diya

badi mummy : kya aap ne usko cgod diya and usne mla and hm ko maar diya and police ne kuch bi nai kiya

papa gusse mai : agr humne kuch bi kiya hota to abi hum tumarhe samne zinda nai hote abi

bade papa: tino behone se : tumne uske pit pe kya deka ta zara bato to inko

mom: kya deka ta

riya : mom uske pit par ek lion ka tattoo ta zise dek ke pta nai papa and bade papa kya hua rone lage


itna sunte hi mom and badi mummy socho mai gum ho gai

mom jadli se uti and apne room mai almari mai bahoot dund ke meri do tin photo le ayie 5 saal vali zis mai ek mai mera tatto vala ta and dusre mai mom ne jo gift diya hua ta vo pene ke phota ta

mom niche ake tattoo vala photo meri behneo ko dikte hai

hina: choti mom ye bilkul same to same tattoo hai

ye sun ke to vo or bi sadme mai chli gai tab riya ne dusri photo leke deka to usme jo locket dek ke vo sochne lagi tab inhe yaad aya ki mall mai bi ye locket merw gale ta

riya photo dikate hue

riya: mom ye locket to uske gale ta maine mall mai deka ta

ye sun ke

mom: nai ye nai ho sakta or rone lagi

photo dek ke meri behno ko bi kuch kuch yaad ane laga ta

Hina: mom ye haumre bhai ke photo hai and vo aaj jo ladka haumre samne ta vo hmara bhai ta hai na

Badi mummy ne ha mai sir hilya ye dek ke tino behne rone lagi

Mom: prtap muje mera beta chiye kuch bi kariye

Papa: mai kosis karta hu

Papa: bahiya cm ko call kari saayd use kuch pta ho





baki next update mai
Awesome update👍
 
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Story ka writer Lapata ho gaya hai please nazdiki police station Mein FIR likhvayen Taki vah jald mil sake
 
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