Fantasy Rajj (Prince of universe)

[Nitin@1998]

Bhai next Sunday se ayega

Kab chalu karoge bhai

 

[Mr. Jb]

Sorry to all ki maine apni story par itni der tak koi update nahi diya par ab se asa nahi hoga chahe mai hafte me ek hi update kyu na du par update jrur ayega

 

[Vk248517]

Sorry to all ki maine apni story par itni der tak koi update nahi diya par ab se asa nahi hoga chahe mai hafte me ek hi update kyu na du par update jrur ayega

Welcome bro

 

[Mr. Jb]

Dharti se krodo miles door ik grah jispe roshni ka namu nishan nahi hai waha ek gufa mai achanak roshni hoti hai or us roshni se ek shaks bahar nikalta hai
Shaks ke samne ek behad khubsurat ladki murti thi or us murti ka ek hath me ek anghuthi thi par us anghuthi par jaha hira laga hota hai vo jagha khali thi or us murti ke samne prakat huye admi ke hath me black diamond tha us admi ne Pehle murti fir hath me pakde huye kale rang ke moti ko dekha or sochne laga
Vo admi-- akhir goddess ne mujhe ise is murti se azad karne ke liye usse hi kyu bheja chalo abb goddess ne kaha hai to puch bhi nahi sakta or uper se isme se itni dark energy nikal rahi hai
US shaks ne apne hath me liye huye kale moti ko us anghuthi me fit kiya or tabhi us anghuthi se ek black liquid nekal Kar murti ko cover karne laga jab us liquid me us murti ko puri tarha se dhak liya to usme se ek roshni nikalne lagi or phir achanak se vo roshni us murti ke andar sama gyi or tabhi ek dhamaka huya ye dhamaka itna jordar tha ki us murti ke Paas khada shaks bhi murti se dur jakar gira or jab usne dobara us murti ki taraf dekha to waha ab koi murti nahi khadi thi ek behad khoobsoorat ladki khadi thi par us Ladki ki ankhe abhi band thi or us ladki ne jaise hi ankhe kholi or Phir us admi se pucha
Kya tumhe raj ne mujhe azaad karne ke liye bheja hai
US ladki ki Awaaz me bahut gussa jise mehsoos kar ke vo admi ek pal ke liye dar gya par Phir bhi himmat kar ke bola
Nahi mujhe kisi raj ne nahi balki goddess ne bheja hai
US admi ki Baat sun us ladki ne apni anghuthi ki taraf dekha or kaha
Shadow ring mujhe Maa ke Paas le chalo
US ladki ke itna Kehte hi uske sane ek portal khul gya or vo ladki us se ho kar bade se mehal ke samne pahunchi or jaise hi usne mehal me kadam rakha vase us pas black rose ki barish hone lagti hai vo ladki jo ab tak thode gusse me thi ab uske honto par ek pyari si muskaan Aa jati hai ladki mehal ke Ander ki taraf chal deti hai or sochti hai
(Ajj bhi ye nahi badle mera gussa kaise kam karna hai enhe acche se pata hai oper se Maa bhi unka hi sath deti hai par ajj chahe kuch bhi ho jaye inko acche se sabak sikhaungi taki fir kabhi asi galti naa kare)
Yahi sab sochte huye vo ladki Ek mahal ke kamre ke samne ja kar khadi ho jati hai or jaise hi vo darwaza khatktane vali hoti hai usse Awaaz ati hai
Awaaz- Ander Aa jao aleeza
Aleeza Awaaz sunte hi darwaza kholti hai or Ander chali jati hai or uske samne khadi orat ko Maa Keh kar uss se lipat jati hai or uski aankhon se assu behne lagte hai
Vo orat bade pyaar se aleeza ka sir ko sehla kar usse chup karati hai
(Vo orat koi or nai balki goddess hai)
Goddess - chup ho jayo meri bachi koi Baat nai jo tumne kiya tha vo bilkul sahi kiya tha Iss liye uss bare me soch kar mat ro
Aleeza- par Maa app bhi janti hai ki uss ghatna ki shuruaat ki jimmedaar bhi mai hi thi naa mai unse jid karti or naa itna Sab kuch hota
Goddess- chodo un batto ko jo beet gya so beet gya abb uss bare me mat socho or meri Baat dyaan se suno tumhare kaid hone ke Baad raj ne bhi apne app ko khatam kar liya tha ek nayi shuruaat ke liye or ab uska janam dobara ho chuka hai use uski pichli jindagi ke bare me kuch Yaad Nahi hai or naa hi apni asli pehchaan ke bare me Iss liye tumhe bhi dyaan rakhna hai ki jab tak sahi samay nahi Aa jata tab tak tum use kuch bhi nahi batayogi
Aleeza- par Maa app janti hai ki main Maa bann ne wali hu or is samay unka mere sath naa rehna

 

[Mr. Jb]

Goddess- (aleeza ko bich me rokte huye) maa banne wali ho nahi balki Maa ban chuki ho jab tum ne khud ko kaid kar liya tha to maine tumhara ek ansh tumse alag kar liya tha or sath hi tumhari kokh me pal rahe bacche ko bhi or Phir tumhare uss us ansh ko hamne Ek duniya me janam lene ke liye kaha kyuki tumhara ansh me dark energy jyada thi to uske dobara janam lene se vo energy tumhare ansh se alag ho gayi or Phir maine raj ke ek ansh ko bhi uss duniya me janam lene ke liye kaha or uss duniya me tum mile or tumhari milne ke Baad sahi samay par tumhare kokh me pal rahe bache ko Humne uski kokh me dal diya or tumhe Ekk pyari si bachchi paida huyi hai
Aleeza- Maa kaha hai meri bachi kya mai uss se abhi mil sakti hu
Goddes- aleeza abhi tum us se nahi mil sakti par hai tumhe uss duniya me jarur jana hai jaha par tumhari bachi hai
Aleeza - Maa agar mai waha ja hi rahi hu to us se mill bhi lu gi or use apne sath yaha wapis bhi le aungi or waise bhi agar kisi ko pata chal gya ki mere or raj ki bachi kisi amm si duniya me hai to us ke liye khatra ho sakta hai
Goddess- aleeza meri Baat suno jis duniya me tumhari betti hai tumhe waha tumhare ansh ko khud me sama kar us ki jagah leni hogi or intezaar karna hoga Jab tak khud raj or tumhari beti tumare Paas nahi atte or Haa agar tumhari iccha hai ki tum apni beti se millo to tum mil sakti ho or vo bhi sirf ek baar or vo rup badal kar or ha uske baad jaise hi tum apne ansh ko apne ander samogi tumhari sari yaade tumhari ring me sama jayigi jab tak tumhara waha se nikalne ka samay nahi Atta or thmhe Paas sirf us ansh ki yaade or shaktiyo hi rahe gi samaj gai
Aleeza- par Maa itna sab karna ki kya jarurat hai or vo(raj) kaha par hai mujhe unse bhi milna hai kya abb bhi mujh se naraaz hai
Goddess- raj ke yaado ke sath sath uski powers bhi us se alag ho gayi hai Iss liye use apni power ko hasil karna hoga or khud ko kabil bhi banana hoga Prince of universe ke ohde ke liye or rahi Baat us duniya me rehne ki( Phir goddess kuch batati hai jo agge pata chalega)
Aleeza- thik hai Maa to kab jana hoga mujhe us duniya me
Goddess- ajj hi jana hoga taki kisi ko tumhare azaad hone ka pata na chale khas kar demon lord ko
Aleeza- thik hai Maa par kya mai ek baar unko dekh sakti hu Jane se Pehle mai vada karti hu ki mai unse milugi nahi bas ek baar dekh kar us duniya me chali jayugi
Goddess- thik hai or mujhe pata tha ki tum use dekhe bina nahi jaogi issi liye tumhe raat ko azaad karaya hai jao Iss waqt vo so raha hoga or ha Iss ( apne haath ko aage kar chota sa kanch ka moti dete huye jiske ander se roshni nikal rahi thi) uske Paas jakar tod dene is se 1 ghante ke liye tumhe koi mehsus nahi kar payega or sath me raj bhi apni neend se uthega nahi is liye jab tak iska asr rahega sirf tab tak hi tum uske Paas rehna thik hai abb to khush ho na
Aleeza- thik hai Maa
Phir kuch der or goddess se Baat kar unka ashirwaad le kar aleeza waha se gayab ho jati hai

 

[Devil hunter123]

Goddess- (aleeza ko bich me rokte huye) maa banne wali ho nahi balki Maa ban chuki ho jab tum ne khud ko kaid kar liya tha to maine tumhara ek ansh tumse alag kar liya tha or sath hi tumhari kokh me pal rahe bacche ko bhi or Phir tumhare uss us ansh ko hamne Ek duniya me janam lene ke liye kaha kyuki tumhara ansh me dark energy jyada thi to uske dobara janam lene se vo energy tumhare ansh se alag ho gayi or Phir maine raj ke ek ansh ko bhi uss duniya me janam lene ke liye kaha or uss duniya me tum mile or tumhari milne ke Baad sahi samay par tumhare kokh me pal rahe bache ko Humne uski kokh me dal diya or tumhe Ekk pyari si bachchi paida huyi hai
Aleeza- Maa kaha hai meri bachi kya mai uss se abhi mil sakti hu
Goddes- aleeza abhi tum us se nahi mil sakti par hai tumhe uss duniya me jarur jana hai jaha par tumhari bachi hai
Aleeza - Maa agar mai waha ja hi rahi hu to us se mill bhi lu gi or use apne sath yaha wapis bhi le aungi or waise bhi agar kisi ko pata chal gya ki mere or raj ki bachi kisi amm si duniya me hai to us ke liye khatra ho sakta hai
Goddess- aleeza meri Baat suno jis duniya me tumhari betti hai tumhe waha tumhare ansh ko khud me sama kar us ki jagah leni hogi or intezaar karna hoga Jab tak khud raj or tumhari beti tumare Paas nahi atte or Haa agar tumhari iccha hai ki tum apni beti se millo to tum mil sakti ho or vo bhi sirf ek baar or vo rup badal kar or ha uske baad jaise hi tum apne ansh ko apne ander samogi tumhari sari yaade tumhari ring me sama jayigi jab tak tumhara waha se nikalne ka samay nahi Atta or thmhe Paas sirf us ansh ki yaade or shaktiyo hi rahe gi samaj gai
Aleeza- par Maa itna sab karna ki kya jarurat hai or vo(raj) kaha par hai mujhe unse bhi milna hai kya abb bhi mujh se naraaz hai
Goddess- raj ke yaado ke sath sath uski powers bhi us se alag ho gayi hai Iss liye use apni power ko hasil karna hoga or khud ko kabil bhi banana hoga Prince of universe ke ohde ke liye or rahi Baat us duniya me rehne ki( Phir goddess kuch batati hai jo agge pata chalega)
Aleeza- thik hai Maa to kab jana hoga mujhe us duniya me
Goddess- ajj hi jana hoga taki kisi ko tumhare azaad hone ka pata na chale khas kar demon lord ko
Aleeza- thik hai Maa par kya mai ek baar unko dekh sakti hu Jane se Pehle mai vada karti hu ki mai unse milugi nahi bas ek baar dekh kar us duniya me chali jayugi
Goddess- thik hai or mujhe pata tha ki tum use dekhe bina nahi jaogi issi liye tumhe raat ko azaad karaya hai jao Iss waqt vo so raha hoga or ha Iss ( apne haath ko aage kar chota sa kanch ka moti dete huye jiske ander se roshni nikal rahi thi) uske Paas jakar tod dene is se 1 ghante ke liye tumhe koi mehsus nahi kar payega or sath me raj bhi apni neend se uthega nahi is liye jab tak iska asr rahega sirf tab tak hi tum uske Paas rehna thik hai abb to khush ho na
Aleeza- thik hai Maa
Phir kuch der or goddess se Baat kar unka ashirwaad le kar aleeza waha se gayab ho jati hai

Nice update

 

[Naik]

Goddess- (aleeza ko bich me rokte huye) maa banne wali ho nahi balki Maa ban chuki ho jab tum ne khud ko kaid kar liya tha to maine tumhara ek ansh tumse alag kar liya tha or sath hi tumhari kokh me pal rahe bacche ko bhi or Phir tumhare uss us ansh ko hamne Ek duniya me janam lene ke liye kaha kyuki tumhara ansh me dark energy jyada thi to uske dobara janam lene se vo energy tumhare ansh se alag ho gayi or Phir maine raj ke ek ansh ko bhi uss duniya me janam lene ke liye kaha or uss duniya me tum mile or tumhari milne ke Baad sahi samay par tumhare kokh me pal rahe bache ko Humne uski kokh me dal diya or tumhe Ekk pyari si bachchi paida huyi hai
Aleeza- Maa kaha hai meri bachi kya mai uss se abhi mil sakti hu
Goddes- aleeza abhi tum us se nahi mil sakti par hai tumhe uss duniya me jarur jana hai jaha par tumhari bachi hai
Aleeza - Maa agar mai waha ja hi rahi hu to us se mill bhi lu gi or use apne sath yaha wapis bhi le aungi or waise bhi agar kisi ko pata chal gya ki mere or raj ki bachi kisi amm si duniya me hai to us ke liye khatra ho sakta hai
Goddess- aleeza meri Baat suno jis duniya me tumhari betti hai tumhe waha tumhare ansh ko khud me sama kar us ki jagah leni hogi or intezaar karna hoga Jab tak khud raj or tumhari beti tumare Paas nahi atte or Haa agar tumhari iccha hai ki tum apni beti se millo to tum mil sakti ho or vo bhi sirf ek baar or vo rup badal kar or ha uske baad jaise hi tum apne ansh ko apne ander samogi tumhari sari yaade tumhari ring me sama jayigi jab tak tumhara waha se nikalne ka samay nahi Atta or thmhe Paas sirf us ansh ki yaade or shaktiyo hi rahe gi samaj gai
Aleeza- par Maa itna sab karna ki kya jarurat hai or vo(raj) kaha par hai mujhe unse bhi milna hai kya abb bhi mujh se naraaz hai
Goddess- raj ke yaado ke sath sath uski powers bhi us se alag ho gayi hai Iss liye use apni power ko hasil karna hoga or khud ko kabil bhi banana hoga Prince of universe ke ohde ke liye or rahi Baat us duniya me rehne ki( Phir goddess kuch batati hai jo agge pata chalega)
Aleeza- thik hai Maa to kab jana hoga mujhe us duniya me
Goddess- ajj hi jana hoga taki kisi ko tumhare azaad hone ka pata na chale khas kar demon lord ko
Aleeza- thik hai Maa par kya mai ek baar unko dekh sakti hu Jane se Pehle mai vada karti hu ki mai unse milugi nahi bas ek baar dekh kar us duniya me chali jayugi
Goddess- thik hai or mujhe pata tha ki tum use dekhe bina nahi jaogi issi liye tumhe raat ko azaad karaya hai jao Iss waqt vo so raha hoga or ha Iss ( apne haath ko aage kar chota sa kanch ka moti dete huye jiske ander se roshni nikal rahi thi) uske Paas jakar tod dene is se 1 ghante ke liye tumhe koi mehsus nahi kar payega or sath me raj bhi apni neend se uthega nahi is liye jab tak iska asr rahega sirf tab tak hi tum uske Paas rehna thik hai abb to khush ho na
Aleeza- thik hai Maa
Phir kuch der or goddess se Baat kar unka ashirwaad le kar aleeza waha se gayab ho jati hai

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Lajawab

 

[Naik]

Aaj hi saare update padhe bahot behtareen kahani likh rehe h aap
Bas aise hi lakhte rahiye
Thanks for lovely and wonderful update

 

[Shanu]

Very nice update bhai

 

[Luffy]

Goddess- (aleeza ko bich me rokte huye) maa banne wali ho nahi balki Maa ban chuki ho jab tum ne khud ko kaid kar liya tha to maine tumhara ek ansh tumse alag kar liya tha or sath hi tumhari kokh me pal rahe bacche ko bhi or Phir tumhare uss us ansh ko hamne Ek duniya me janam lene ke liye kaha kyuki tumhara ansh me dark energy jyada thi to uske dobara janam lene se vo energy tumhare ansh se alag ho gayi or Phir maine raj ke ek ansh ko bhi uss duniya me janam lene ke liye kaha or uss duniya me tum mile or tumhari milne ke Baad sahi samay par tumhare kokh me pal rahe bache ko Humne uski kokh me dal diya or tumhe Ekk pyari si bachchi paida huyi hai
Aleeza- Maa kaha hai meri bachi kya mai uss se abhi mil sakti hu
Goddes- aleeza abhi tum us se nahi mil sakti par hai tumhe uss duniya me jarur jana hai jaha par tumhari bachi hai
Aleeza - Maa agar mai waha ja hi rahi hu to us se mill bhi lu gi or use apne sath yaha wapis bhi le aungi or waise bhi agar kisi ko pata chal gya ki mere or raj ki bachi kisi amm si duniya me hai to us ke liye khatra ho sakta hai
Goddess- aleeza meri Baat suno jis duniya me tumhari betti hai tumhe waha tumhare ansh ko khud me sama kar us ki jagah leni hogi or intezaar karna hoga Jab tak khud raj or tumhari beti tumare Paas nahi atte or Haa agar tumhari iccha hai ki tum apni beti se millo to tum mil sakti ho or vo bhi sirf ek baar or vo rup badal kar or ha uske baad jaise hi tum apne ansh ko apne ander samogi tumhari sari yaade tumhari ring me sama jayigi jab tak tumhara waha se nikalne ka samay nahi Atta or thmhe Paas sirf us ansh ki yaade or shaktiyo hi rahe gi samaj gai
Aleeza- par Maa itna sab karna ki kya jarurat hai or vo(raj) kaha par hai mujhe unse bhi milna hai kya abb bhi mujh se naraaz hai
Goddess- raj ke yaado ke sath sath uski powers bhi us se alag ho gayi hai Iss liye use apni power ko hasil karna hoga or khud ko kabil bhi banana hoga Prince of universe ke ohde ke liye or rahi Baat us duniya me rehne ki( Phir goddess kuch batati hai jo agge pata chalega)
Aleeza- thik hai Maa to kab jana hoga mujhe us duniya me
Goddess- ajj hi jana hoga taki kisi ko tumhare azaad hone ka pata na chale khas kar demon lord ko
Aleeza- thik hai Maa par kya mai ek baar unko dekh sakti hu Jane se Pehle mai vada karti hu ki mai unse milugi nahi bas ek baar dekh kar us duniya me chali jayugi
Goddess- thik hai or mujhe pata tha ki tum use dekhe bina nahi jaogi issi liye tumhe raat ko azaad karaya hai jao Iss waqt vo so raha hoga or ha Iss ( apne haath ko aage kar chota sa kanch ka moti dete huye jiske ander se roshni nikal rahi thi) uske Paas jakar tod dene is se 1 ghante ke liye tumhe koi mehsus nahi kar payega or sath me raj bhi apni neend se uthega nahi is liye jab tak iska asr rahega sirf tab tak hi tum uske Paas rehna thik hai abb to khush ho na
Aleeza- thik hai Maa
Phir kuch der or goddess se Baat kar unka ashirwaad le kar aleeza waha se gayab ho jati hai

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