Fantasy Rajj (Prince of universe)

[mashish]

God or unki wife apne mehal me bath kar bate kar rahe the.
God- ajj app bahut khush lag rahi ho kya Baat hame nahi batayegi (god ne apni wife se pucha)

God's wife(G.W)- app nahi jante hai hum khush kyu hai(G.W ne God ki taraf dekh kar haste huye pucha)

God- Hame to pata hai par fir bhi hum app se janna chahte hai

G.W- ajj humara beta prithvi par janam lene wala hai or hum use fir se dekh or mill payenge.

God- Haa app use dekh payegi par milne k liye abhi bhi samay hai.

G.W- app kehna kya chahte hai ki hum apne bete se mil bhi nahi sakti( thodi nirash hote hue kaha God ki wife ne)

God- wo ab Insaan ke rup me janam lega jis vajha se abhi to app use nhi mil sakti kyuki abhi use apke or apne bare mai kuch Yaad Nahi hoga par use uske janm par koi bhi gift jrur de sakti hai(God ne apni patni ko nirash hote dekh kaha)
G.W- kya mai use uski shaktiya de sakti hu.

God- Haa app de sakti hai par Sirf uska ikk ansh or uska bhi wo istemaal apne 18 saal ke hone ke Baad hi kar payega.

G.W- kya hum use uski adhi sakti bhi nahi de sakti.

God- app use adhi kya puri sakti de sakti par fir se vasa hi hoga use fir se marna hoga kyuki wo phir wasa hi jiddi ban jayega or app janti hai uski jid hi uski mout karn bani thi.

G.W- par Iss baar hum use aachi tarha se samjhayege or Phir se vasa hone nahi dege.

God- bina mehnat ke parapet ki gayi har chij ka parinaam acha nahi hota apke dwara uske Sirf ikk bar Kehne par hi har mang puri karne ki wajah se hi wo jiddi bana or Phir vo sab huaa usne apni us mang ko pura na karne par wo sab kiya or uski Jaan chali gayi.
God- hum agar uski mang pura kar dete to shayad ye bhramhand hi nast ho gya hota.

(God ki Iss Baat ko sun kar God ki wife ko wo samy Yaad Aa Gaya jab unki hi aakhon ke samne unke bete ne apni Jaan gwa di thi or unki ankhe nam ho gyi)

Kuch Waqt chup rahne Baad God ki wife ne kaha agar use waha kuch ho gya to app to jante hai Iss Waqt agar use mere bete ke janm ka pata chala to vo use marne ki koshish jarur karega. Chahe Iss samay wo kaid me hai par Phir bhi apne logo jo is Waqt dharti par hai unse hamla jarur karwayega or bina shaktiyo ke mera bete kase un se surakshit rahega.

God- app bhul rahi hai ki apka or humara dono ka ansh hai or use koi bhi itni asani se nahi Maar sakta.
Or rahi Baat use pata lagne ki jab tak wo azad nahi ho jata tab tak use hamare bete ka abhas bhi nahi hoga.

G.W-Agar Phir bhi use uski shaktiyo ki jarurat padi to.

God- asa hoga to nahi par fir bhi agar asa hua to jarurat k samey wo apni shaktiyo ka istemaal kar payega jab uski Jaan jane ka khatra hoga or amm insano ke mukable uska shrir jyada takatvar hoga.
Kuch Or bhi bate hui unke beech fir God chal diye City of Angel's ki taraf.
City of Angel's ( Naam se hi pata chalta hai ki isme angels hi rahte hoge or ise God ne bhramhand se door banaya tha jaha vo sare angel shanti se unke sath reh sakte the)

God to chale gaye par God ki wife prithvi ke madhavpur Naam ke gaaw ke ikk ghar ko me bhathi aurat jisko dekh ke hi lag raha tha ki vo pregnant hai usse dekhne lagti hai or kuch pal dekh kar Phir kisi kaam me lag jati hai.

Kuch samey Baad us aurat ke room me ik admi ata hai or kehta hai- menu kuch din or Phir hamara bacha janam lega maine bhi pita g se Baat kar li hai wo mere bisuness ko kuch samay me shuru karne ke liye paise de dege or Phir mai tum or hamara bacha sehar me chale jayege vahi rahege.
Vo aurat- mai bache ke janam ke Baad kuch der tak mai yahi rahungi or Phir jab tak app apna bisuness bhi set kar lijiyega.
Admi- parso hi mai apne ikk dost ke pass Jaa raha hu jo Mumbai mai rehta hai apne bisuness ko or badhane ke liye use paise chahiye or Iss liye usne mujhe apna partner banne ka offer diya hai isliye Usse mill kar mai sari kanoni karwahi kar ke tumhare delivery ke Waqt Aa jauga.
Aurat- app apna sara kaam araam Se kar ke wapas Aa jaiyega.
Admi-abb tum araam karo
Aurat- app bhi so jaiye
Dono soo gaye

nice start

 

[mashish]

Update 2
Ase hi kuch din beet jate hai ajj minu ki delivery hai or vo opration theater(OT) me thi or bahar apne pita or Maa ke sath baitha vikram Thakur jo menu ki Dard bhari Awaaz Ko sun thoda menu or apne hone wale bacche ko lekar tention mea tha
Ander OT me menu ko bohut Dard ho raha tha har beet te pal ke sath menu ki Condition bigadti Jaa rahi thi Phir achanak se samay ruk jata hai or menu ke garbh me ik roshni parvesh karti hai Jab vo roshni menu ke garbh me sama kar gayab ho jati hai to samay fir se chalne lagta hai menu kaa Dard khatam ho jata hai Phir ati hai bacche ke rone ki awaz menu bacche ko janam dete hi bihosh ho jati hai Docter minu ko ek injection lagate hai or bahar Aa jate hai.
Jaise hi Doctor bahar ati hai vikram apne mata pita ke sath Docter ke pas ati hai.
Vikram- Doctor menu or bacha kaise hai.
Doctor- gabranne ki koi Baat nahi hai bacha or Maa dono thik hai. mubarak ho ladka hua hai
Docter ki Baat sunte hi vikram or uske mata pita khushi se jhoom uthte hai vikram ki Maa khush hoker apne gale ki sone ke chain ko Doctor ko de deti
Vikram or uske mata pita ke khush hone karan ye bhi tha ki unke parivaar nayi pidhi ka iklota ladka tha baki sab ladkiya hi thi.
Vikram ki Maa-doctor kya mai bahu or bache se mill sakti hu
Doctor-kuch samay unhe kamre me shift kar diya jayega tab app mil sakti hai
Doctor ye bata ke chali jati hai
Kuch samy Baad sabhi menu or bache se millte hai or har koi bari bache ko goad main uthata hai or jab uski nili chamakti ankhon main dekhta to sabhi usi main kho sa jata hai
asse hi sabhi mil kar ghar Chale jate hai or hospital mai vikram or uski Maa reh jati hai 2 din Baad menu ghar Aa jati hai sare gaaw me mithai banti jati hai.
Kuch character
INTRO
DAD....Vikram Thakur
MoM....Menu Thakur
Dada ji... Suryakant Thakur
Dadi ji.... Suman Thakur
Chote Chacha.... Maninder Thakur
Choti chachi.... Gayatri Thakur
Beti.... Nisha Thakur (20)age
Beti..... Dipika Thakur(19)age
Bade chacha....Jogender Thakur
Badi chachi...... Menka Thakur
Beti... Saloni Thakur
Pariwaar mai kewal mai hi ladka piada hua hu
(abb mai sabko rishte ke hisab se likhuga)
Udhar God apne ikk angel ko bulate hai Phir use kuch samjhate hai or vo angel waha se chala jata hai
Idhar abhi menu ko ayee kuch samay hi hua tha ki ikk sadhu baba(SB) un ke ghar ke bahar ate hai dada ji unhe ghar ke Ander bulate hai unka bahut adar or saktkaar karte hai. SB bhi unhe ashirwaad dete hai.
Dada ji mom ko bulate hai or sath hi bache ko lane ko bhi Kehte Hai
Dada ji- baba kirpa kare or meri bahu or mere pote ko bhi ashirwaad de
SB ikk baar bache ko dekhte hai or pihr use ashirwaad dete hai or Kehte Hai
SB- iski aankhon ki chamak or mukh ta tej bata raha hai iska bhavishya Kitna ujwal hoga
MoM- baba kirpa app mere bete ki namkaran ka mahurat bhi bata de
Baba bache ke sir par hath rakhte hai or Phir apni ankhe band kar lete hai Phir unhe ek angel dikhai deta hai SB angel ko parnaam karte hai
SB- App ke darshan paa kar mai danya ho gaya mai lord angelus
LA- mai bas apko Iss bache ki jimmedari app ko dene aya tha. Apko iski demon lord ke logo ki najar me ane se bachana jab tak ye khud ki raksha karne yogya na ban jaye.
SB- app ne mujhe apne kisi karya ke yogya samjha mere liye bade sobhagya ki Baat hai. Kya app mujhe Iss bache ke bare me kuch bata sakte hai taki mai iska khayaal ache se rakh saku.
LA- apko bas itna hi bata sakta hu ki ye bacha hamare liye bahut khas hai. Baki Samay ane par apko bhi pata chal jayega.
SB- lord kya app kirpya mujhe iski aankhon ki chamak ko kam karne ka koi tarika bata sakte kyuki iski aankhon ki chamak kmhar kisi ke akarshan ka karna ban sakti hai.
LA- iski ankhon ki chamak ko kam karne ke liye bhi apko ek Pooja karni hogi jo app ajj se Saat din baad karni hogi or usi din app Iss bachi kaa namkaran bhi karna hoga or iska naam Raj rakhna hai.

Iske baad SB LA ko parnaam karte hai or apni ankhe kholte hai or Phir mom se Kehte Hai

good update

 

[mashish]

SB- putri iska naamkarn ajj de 7 din Baad hoga or iske kushal bhavishya ke liye usi din ek Pooja bhi karni hogi
Mom- baba agar app koi appati na ho to kya app hi iska namkaran
SB- Thik hai putri mai ajj se 7 dinn Baad aunga tab tak app sari vyavyastha kar lijiyega
MoM- Dhanyawaad baba
SB kuch der baad sab gharwalo ko ashirwaad dekar chale jate hai
Ase hi saat din bhi beet jate hai athve din subha jab sadhu baba dhyaan me baithe hai to Phir se lord angelus ko dekhte hai
Sadhu baba- parnaam Lord
LA- mai apko kuch kuch bhavishya ke karyo ke bare me batane aya tha.
SB- agya de lord mai apke liye kaya kar sakta hu
LA- jab Raj 15 varsh ka ho jaye tab app ko isse Dhyaan lagana sikhana hoga
SB- kya usse Dhyaan lagana mujhe uske ghar me reh kar usse sikhana hoga lord
LA- Haa par jab vo 16 varsh kaa ho jayega tab mai kisi ko bhejuga or app ko Rajko uske sath bheja a hoga taki vo yudh kala or sath main bahut kuch sikh sakeq
SB-lord apki agya ka palan hoga.
LA SB ko sari Baat smjha kar chale jate.
RSB bhi Raj ke ghar jate hai or Pooja karte hai
Pooja ke Baad SB sab ko raj ki Jaan ko khatra agar ye 16 se 18 varsh ki ayu mai ghar par raha to.
MOM- iska koi upay bhi to hoga baa
SB - iska ikk hi upay hai ki tum jab ye 16 varsh ka ho jayega tab mai auga or isse le kar jauga or jab ye 18 varsh ka ho jayega tab mai isse vapis apke Paas le aunga
Mom- baba kya asa nahi ho sakta ki app bhi tabb 2 saalke liye hamare Paas rahe jisse Raj ko jaan ka khatra vo bhi tal jayega or vo hamare sath bhi reh lega
SB- nahi asa nahi ho sakta kyuki iski Jaan ko khatra apne parivaar ke logo k sath Rehne se hai na ki mere sath naa Rehne se
MoM- thik hai baba agar Baat Raj ki Jaan ki hai to mai tyaar hu app ise jab ye 16 varsh ka hoga tab le jayega
SB- putri tum chinta mat karo in 2salo main main isse Iss yogya bana duga ki bhavishya main koi bhi ise koi jani nahi pahucha sakega jab tak ye na chahe
MoM- baba app kaha rehte hai ye bata dijiye taki hame kabhi bhi apse milna ho to hum app se mill sake
SB- putri jab bhi tumhe hamari avshyakta hogi hum jarur tumse milne ayege par hamre Rehne ke sthan ke bare me hum tumhe nahi bata sakte
Issi tarha SB mom or
baki sab se kuch der Baat kar SB chale jate hai.

very nice update

 

[mashish]

Waiting for next update

 

[mashish]

Waiting

 

[mashish]

writer ji aapka sunday bhi gaya aur aaj yani aapka kal bhi ja rha hai

 

[Nevil singh]

Mai koi writer nahi Iss liye Pehle hi bod deta hu ki kahani acchi naa lage to sorry mera dill hua Iss forum pe story likhne ka Iss liye likh raha hu or mai chauga ki app mujhe bataye story apko kasi pasand hai mai pori koshish kauga story ko app sab logo ki pasand ke hisaab se likh saku.
Thanks for waiting

nayi kahani ki dhero shubhkaamnaye mitr

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Bhai kal ayega update

Bhai kal kabhi kisi ka aaya hai keya

 

[Mr. Jb]

U3
Raghav Ahuja
Shanti Ahuja
Richa Ahuja
Raj ke namkaran ke 3 din Baad hi vikram apne dost Raghav ke Paas Mumbai chala gya or Raghav ke sath mill ke hottel or construction ke business ko badhane ke liye khub mehnat karne laga
2 saal dona ne mill kar khub mehnat ki or India ke top 10 businessman me se ek ban gaye
Fir vikram ne Raj or Menu ko bhi apne Paas bula liya
Bulaya to usne apne mata pita ko bhi bulaya tha par unhone gaav me Rehna chahte hai Keh kar mana kar diya
Vikram ne or Raghav me ek sath naye ghar bhi le liye the jo bilkul Paas me hi the isi
Dhere dhere Waqt beet ta gya or Raghav or vikram ki family apas me kafi ghul mil gaye jis karan Raj or Richa ki apas me bahut ban ne lagi dono pura din ek sath hi gujarte the dono ki age bhi same thi or padhte bhi ek hi class me the
Jab Raj 15 varsh ka hua to uske jandin par SB( sadhu baba) aye or unhone menu or vikram ko apne sath ek kamre bulaya
SB- Putar ab samay Aa gya hai ki mai raj ko sikhana shuru kardu
MOM- Par baba apne to kaha tha ki jab Raj 16 saal ka hoga tab app use apne sath lekar
Jayege par abhi to vo 15 saal ka hi hai
SB- Mai use abhi kahi lekar nahi Jaa raha hu bas use dhayan lagana sikhana shuru karne Jaa raha hu jisse use agge jakar jo sikhuga use sikhne me asani hogi
MOM- To Phir app use kab or kaha sikana chahenge
SB- mai use parso se hi sikhana shuru kar dunga or sikne ke liye kisi vishesh jagha ki jarurat nahi hai bas apki ghar ki chat par hi sikha sakta hu
Baba apne Rehne ka intajaam karne ka Keh kar chale jate hai
Ek saal tak baba Raj ko Dhyaan lagana sikhate hai fir ata hai vo din jis din Raj ko baba ke sath jana tha par abhi tak menu or vikram ke elava kisi ko nahi pata tha ki Raj ko 2 saal k liye kahi jana hai yaha tak ki raj ko bhi nahi
Ajj Jab subha baba dhyaan laga rahe tab Angelus unke dhyaan me prakat hue
Baba- Parnaam lord
Angelus baba ko ashirwaad dete hai or Phir Kehte hai
Baba- lord apke Kehne k mutabic maine maine Raj ko dhyaan lagana to sikha diya
LA- apne apna kaam bahut ache se kiya hai
Ab apko use ab himalaya ke Paas ek vijaypur Naam Ka gav Hai waha apko druv Naam Ka vyakti milega apko Raj ko us tak pahunchana hai
Baba- lord kya mai bhi waha Raj ke sath nahi reh sakta
LA- nahi app waha nahi reh sakte kyuki apne jab Raj ke namkaran ke din uski aankhon ki chamak ko kam karne ke liye Pooja ki thi to uske Baad apke sharir me ik adrishya urja ne parvesh kiya tha jo us Pooja ko karne ki wajah se apke Ander sama gayi thi
Apko us urja ko do anguthiyo me dalna hoga or asa karne se pahle apko 2 saal ka samay chahiye hoga kyuki vo urja bahut shaktishali hai Iss liye apko us urja ko dhere dhere anguthiyo me dalna hoga taki vo urja aniyantrit na ho jaye
Baba- jaisa app kahe lord
LA apne hath ko aage karte hai or usme do anguthiya Aa jati hai or un anguthiyo ko baba ko dete hai
LA- in dono anguthiyo me app vo urja ko dal sakte hai
LA baba ko sab bata kar chale jate hai
Baba bhi wasa hi karte hai jasa LA ne kaha tha wo Raj ko dhruv ke Paas chod kar kahi ekant me chale jate 2 saal k liye

 

[Mr. Jb]

Update page 4 par post kiya hai