Mafiadon
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It is really a very nice story. Your amazing and thrilling writing is very much interesting and enjoyable! Please keep going buddy.
बहुत सुन्दर अपडेट! कहानी सही दिशा में जा रही है।aur neeta wahan se tezi se aaandar aapne bedroom mai jati hain.....aabhi bhi bhola wahin farsh par chup chaap baitha hua tha......
Aab bhola chup chaap wahan se uthatha hain aur seedha bahar chala jata hain......uske munn mein is samay kai tarah ke sawal chal rahein the......
Neeta shyam ko rasam mai naye sadi pahan ke aate hai..
aur aapne pati ki taraf jane lagti hai.. Tab wo ladaki kanta neeta ko dekh ke haske uske samne se nikal jati hai .. kuch der baad wo ladaki neeta ko phir se milati hai..
kaise ho memsaab..
thik hu..
baat kuch aage badi ki nahi..
Neeta bade aacharya se uski aur dekhte hui kahti hai
konse baat..
jane dijiyega..waise bhola achha aadmi hai..
wo to mai jan chuki thi tabhi to itani badi badi aawaje nikal rahi thi..
kya kare wo itana maza de raha tha ki aawaje khud bhi khud bahar nikal rahi thi..
jada shahani mat ban.. mai sab janati hu..
waise memsaab aap ka mard itana maza deta hai kya..
mera mard bhola itane maze deta hai ya nahi tuje kya karna hai..
muje to kuch karna nahi hai.. par muje lagata hai bhola itana maja koi nahi deta hai..
matlab tera ye pahale time nahi tha..
nahi memsaab .. hamara to 2 saal se chal raha hai..
matlab bhola ne mujase jhooth bola tha..
kya kaha tha bhola ne aap se..
kuch nahi.. tuje kya karna hai..
mai samaji .. bhola ne aapse kya kaha hoga.. shyad aapko impress karne ke liye bola hoga .. 2 minute mai patake dikhaunga.. yahi na memsaab..ye bhola ki purani aadat hai ..
Kanta ne aise kahne ke baad neeta use kuch nahi kahti aur waha se gusse se chali jati hai..Bhola ke paas..Pahle wo bhola ko idhar udhar dekhti hai.. Use bhola kahi nahi milata.. wo lagbhag 10-15 minute bhola ko dhundate hai.. par use bhola kahi nahi milata..wo kuch logo se puchati hai par unko bhi pata nahi tha..
aab ek jagah 2-3 ladies khadi thi.. waha pai neeta jati hai.. aur unse puchati hai..
Aap ne bhola ko kahi dekha kya
Tab usmai se ek lady ne neeta ko kaha
madam AAP USS bhola ke saath Jada Baat mat kijiyega nahi to Lene ke dene pad jayenge .. is par Neeta has ke baat Ko Taal dete hai..
wo mere pati ne ek kaam bataya hai wo usko batana hai
tab dusari ladies kahti hai
wo to thik hai par aap uske saath jada ghumo mat ya baat bhi mat kiya karo.. hum aap ke bhaliye ke liye hi kah rahe hai..
tab neeta gusse se thik hai.. dhanewad kah ke waha se aage chali jati hai... use aage bhola dikh jata hai.. neeta aab uske paas chali jake uske samne khadi ho jati hai..
aur gusse mai use kahti hai
Tumane muje jhoot kyon bola..
kya jhoot bola..neeta raani..
tab nakhare se neeta kahti hai
mai koi neeta raani nahi hu..samaje..
kya jhooth..
yahi ki us ladaki matlab kanta se tumara 2 saal se chakkar hai aur tumane aisa kaha ki mai usko 2 minute mai patake dikhaunga..
maine aise to nahi kaha tha..
aisa nahi lekin kabhi kaha nahi ki tumara us ladaki ke saath 2 saal se chakkar hai..
kahata to tum room kaise dete..
tumane ye saab room ke liye kiya na ..
haa..
aur kuch nahi naa..
haa.. aur kuch nahi ..tere ko kya laga..
kuch nahi..
aisa kah ke neata jane lagi..tab bhola kahta hai
boliye na neeta raani..aap ko kya laga..
neeta piche ghum ke gusse se dekhate hai..
no neeta raani..
kya..
muje neeta rani mat kaho..
to kya kahu..sirf raani..
neeta hasti hai..
sirf neeta thik hai. sirf neeta..
neeta hasati hai..aur waha se chali jati hai..
thodi der baad bhola neeta ke paas jata hai..neeta kuch kaam kar rahi thi kuch ladies logo ke saath..bhola uske paas jata hai..neeta ko lagata hai ye kuch bolega .. iss liye wo waha se uth ke baju mai chali jati hai..aur kuch kaam karne ka natak karti hai..neeta aab waha kaam kar rahi thi..neeche dekh ke..ek baar wo uppar aapni garden karti hai..
tab bhola waha jata hai.. bhola uske paas aaya hai ye jankar wo kisi se baat karane lagi..
sirf neeta..
neeta kisi se baat kar rahi thi..bhola ke aise kahanae se ghum jati hai..
sirf neeta ji..
kya hai..
nakhra dikhte hui kahte hai..
tum muje aise kyon bula rahe ho..
aap ne to kaha tha..
maine to neeta bola tha..
aapne sirf neeta bola tha..
neeta hasati hai..
maine wo..
neeta chup ho jati hai..
boliye aap ne kya..
kuch nahii.. bolo tumane muje kyon bulaya..
bhola neeta ko upper se leke niche tak dekhata hai.. aise dekhane se neeta sharma jate hai..
aap iss sadi mai bahot hi lajwaab dikh rahi ho..bahot khubsurat dikh rahi ho..
neeta sharmati hai..uske chehare par hasi aa jati hai..
thank you..
sirf thank you..
to kya..
itani achhi tariff ki..shyad aap ke mard ne bhi itani achhi tariff nahi ki hogi..kya sahab ji ne ye sadi pahane ke baad aap ki tarif ki hai kya..
neeta sochane lagati hai..sachmuch .. gagan ne abhi tak muje notice hi nahi kiya hai..
kiye kya aap ki tariff..
unone aabhi tak muje dekha hi nahi hai..
sharmate hui neeta kahti hai..
kya baat kar rahi ho..
haa..
wo kaam mai busy hai..
tabhi gagan neeta ke paas aata hai..
neeta jara mere saath chalo na..ek kaam hai..
aur wo chala jata hai..wo jane ke baad bhola kahta hai..
abhi to dekha na..
neeta waha se gagn ke piche chali jati hai..
boliye na sirf neeta..
neeta kuch nahi bolati..
mai janata hu.. wo tumari tariff nahi kar sakata..
neeta bhola ko dekhte hai ghum ke..
wo ek shaant nature ka aadmi hai..
aur tum..
mai bhi..
neeta hasati hai..
maine tumko thank you kaha na aab jao tum..
nahi..sirf neeta .. sirf thank you se kaam nahi chalega..
to..
muje na..
neeta ke aankho mai dekhata hai..
kya..
kaise bolu..
tabhi phir se gagan neeta ko aawaj lagata hai..
neeta aao na..
chut maari ka.. fir beech mai aa gaya..
mere husband hai wo.. unse jara tamij se baat karo..
to mai kon hu..
muje pata nahi..kahke waha se chali jati hai..