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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai bhai...Update 5
Aaj Samar apne room me hi exercise kar rha tha, lekin vo akela nhi tha uske sath komal bhi thi. Jo uski pith ke upar baithi hui thi or Samar push ups kar rha tha.
Komal - forty eight, forty nine, fifty...
Samar - komal ko apne upar se utarte hue...chal ab hat mere upar se.
Komal - kya Bhai abhi to 50 pushups hi hue hai. Aap to kehte ho ki aap 100 pushups kar lete ho.
Samar - Haa to vo to me akela karta hu tujhe baithakar nhi. Ek to itni bhari hai. Sara din bas khati bhens ki tarah.
Komal - kya kha bhens. Hmm mujh jaise figure vali ladki pure college me nhi milegi aapko.
Samar - Haahaaahaa...tu majak bahut acha karti hai... tujhe to standup comedian hona chahiye,,, Moti
Komal - kya kha moti... Mujhe aapse baat hi nhi karni. Jaa rhi hu me apne room me.
Samar - Are tum to naraz ho gyi... Me to majak kar rha tha.
Komal - mujhe aapka majak bilkul pasand nhi aaya, jaa rhi hu me apne room me...bye.
(Komal darvaza jor se pitkar chali jati hai)
Samar - Are sun to...yrr. ye ladki bhi naa kuch pta nhi kab kaise react kregi.
Breakfast ke time sabhi sath me baithe hote hai. Aaj Suresh bhi inke sath tha.
Suresh - (Samar se) or beta kaisa rha tumhara pehla din college me.
Samar - bahut acha tha tauji (jhuth)
Suresh - bahut achi baat hai, college me dhyan se padhna tumhari dadi ko bahut ummiden hai tumse.. aur koi problem ho to sanjana ko btana vo tumhari senior hai college me to help kar degi.
Samar - Ji tauji, me man lgakar padhunga. Or Sanjana Di ne to... (Sanjana ki taraf dekhte hue)
Sanjana ko lga ki kahi Samar kal vali baat na btade ghar me, yahi sochkar vo ghabra rhi thi.
Suresh - Sanjana ne kya beta...
Samar - kuch nhi tauji... Me ye keh rha tha ki kal sanjana di ne meri ragging hone se bachayi.
Suresh - ye to bahut achi baat hai beta... (Sanjana se) ab tumhe hi inka college me dhyan rkhna hai komal or Samar ka.
Sanjana - ji papa. (Man me - isne btaya kyu nhi kal ke bare me... Sanjana's self - tujhe impress krne ki koshish me.
Sanjana - tu chup kar, jarur koi or baat hogi.
Sanjana's self - or kya baat hogi, vaise handsome bhi hai.
Sanjana - Fuck of)
Breakfast karke Suresh apne office chala jata hai , or sanjana jo ki divya ke sath uski car se college jati thi vo bhi nikal jati hai.
Samar - komal jaldi aa late ho rha hai...
Komal - (gusse me) aa rhi hu naa... kya hai.
Samar - are ab tak naraz hai... acha sorry.
Komal Samar ki bike par bethte hue
Komal - me aapse baat bhi kar rhi, chalo ab.
Or market ke pass bike rokna meri ek friend bhi aayegi
Samar - Ok (hmm lgta hai jyada hi naraz hai, chal beta aaj to koi rishwat dekar manana padega)
Dono bike par baithkar college ke liye nikal padte hai, raste me Samar bike market ke pass rokta hai to thodi der me ek ladki unke paas aati hai.
Samar - are khushi tum...(ji ha komal ki dost khushi hi thi jo pehle din samar ki dost bani thi)
Khushi - Hi Samar tum?
Komal - tum dono jante ho ek dusre ko
Khushi - Haa vo ( khushi komal ko sab kuch batati hai)
Komal - Samar ko ghur kar dekhti hai ( man me - badi jaldi hai ladkiyo se dosti krne ki) phir khushi se ye mere bhai hai to tere bhi bhai hue samjhi..ab chal jaldi late ho rha hai.
Phir teeno Samar, Komal or Khushi college ke liye nikal padte hai. Raste me khushi komal ke kaan me kuch kehti hai to komal bike rokne ko bolti hai.
Komal - Bhai bike roko.
Samar - ( bike rokte hue) kya hua
Komal - aap jao hme kuch or kaam hai hum abhi aate hai.
Samar - are lekin ab kya kaam pad gya, college mushkil se 500-600 meter dur hai.
Komal - isliye to aap jao hum aa jayenge.
Samar - pakka na
Komal - haa pakka ab jao
Samar - thik hai, lekin jaldi aana.
Ye kehkar Samar nikal padta hai bike lekar jabki komal or khushi pass ke medical store par chali jati hai.
Samar jab college pahuchta hai to dekhta hai ki kuch ladke college gate ke bahar juniors ko pakad kar unki ragging kar rhe the, unki nazar Samar par nhi padti to samar bhi unhe ignore karke apni bike parking me park krne chala jata hai. Parking me hi use Shalini mam dikhti hai to vo unke pass chala jata hai.
Samar - good morning mam
Shalini - good morning
Samar - mam vo mujhe kal ke bare me baat karni thi.
Shalini - kaho
Samar - phir samar usse kal ki puri baat btata hai,. Isliye me kal late hua tha mam.
Shalini - hmm... pehle hi din tumne senior se jhagda bhi kar liya.
Samar - no mam vo..
( Abhi ye dono baat kar hi rhe the ki itne me inhe kuch shor ki aawaz sunai deti hai...to ye dono uss taraf chal padte hai)
Komal or khushi jab college pahuchte hai to un ladko ki nazar inpar padti hai, ye 4 ladke hote hai.
Ladka 1 - Ooo bhai vo dekh kya mast item chalke aa rhi hai.
Ladka - 2 Haa bhai, chal inke maje lete hai.
Ladka - 3 salo lal vali (komal) se dur rehna use to me pataunga.
Jab komal or khushi college gate ke pass pahuchati hai to vo ladke unhe rokte hai.
Ladka 2 - aye ladki tum dono idhar aao.
Khushi to unke bulane par hi ghabraane lagti hai lekin komal unhe ignore karke aage jati hai to ek ladka unke samne aakar khada ho jata hai.
Ladka 4 - sunai nhi diya hamne bulaya to
Komal - kon ho tum, hato hmare samne se.
Ladka 3 - hmm attitude... Iski lene me to mja ayega.
Komal - tameez se baat kro samjhe...or jante nhi ragging krna illegal hai. Hato hmare samne se.
Ladka 1 - bhai ye vali kuch jyada hi akad dikha rhi hai ise to ache se sabka sikhana padega.
Ladka 4 - abhi tak to hum pyar se baat kar rhe the lekin lgta hai tum pyar se manne vali nhi ho.
Charo ladke komal or khushi ko pakad lete hai or khich kar apni car ki taraf le jane lgte hai.
Ye sab kuch college gate ke bahar ho rha tha isliye koi kuch nhi keh rha tha, aas paas kafi students ko bheed lag gai thi...lekin sabhi bas dekh rhe the. Kuch unki madad krne ko keh to rhe the lekin koi bhi aage badhne ki himmat nhi kar paa rha tha.
Khushi - chhodo hme, pls
Komal - chhodo hme varna
Komal or khushi apne aap ko chhudane ki koshish karti hai or isi bich komal ka hath jor se 3 ladke ko padta hai jiska naam Amit tha. Komal ne ek jordar thappad amit ko mara tha jiski aawaz gunj gyi thi.
Komal - mujhe chunne ki himmat mat krna samjhe.
Amit - sali tune mujhe thappad mara ab dekh me kya krta hu... Abhi to tujhe akele me lejakar krta lekin ab yahi sabke samne teri aisi halat krunga ki maut ki bheekh mangegi.
Ye kehkar amit komal ko pakadkar usko car se sata deta hai or uske sath jabardasti krne ki koshish krne lgata hai. Komal khud ko chudane ki koshish karti hai lekin amit ko takat ke aage vo kuch nhi kar pati. Khushi ko bhi baki ladko me pakad rkha tha. Apne ko itna mazboor dekhkar komal ki aankho me aansu aa jate hai.
Komal - chhodo mujhe kutte chhod de.
Abhi amit kuch aage kar pata ki itne me uski kamar pe ek jordar punch aakar lgta hai or uski pakad komal se hat jati hai, vo 4 kadam aage jakar jamin par girta hai.
Samne komal dekhti hai to samne Samar khada hua tha jo shor sharaba sunkar idhar aaya tha.
Komal - Bhai
Samar ki aankhe gusse me jal rhi thi or sharir me kampan ho rha tha.
Komal daudkar jati hai or Samar ke gale lag jati hai.
Komal - (rote hue) bhai ye ladka...isne...
Samar ki nazar amit par hi thi vo komal ko dekhkar kuch shant hota hai or uske aansu pochkar usse Shalini mam ke pass bhejta hai.
Amit ko girta dekhkar un tino ne bhi khushi ko chhod diya tha or Samar par hmla krne ke liye aa gye the.
Ek ladka samar ko piche se aake daboch leta hai, lekin Samar apne hath piche lejakar uss ladke ki gardan pakadkar usse jhukte hue aage ki taraf patak deta hai. Phir baki do ladke samar par samne se ek sath hmla krte hai, ek ladka samar ko lat Marta hai to Samar uski lat pakadkar use aage ki taraf khich deta hai jisse us ladke ki dono tange split me khul jati hai or usse itna jordar dard hota hai jaise uski gaand kisi ne cheer di ho.
Dusre ladka samar par punches se hmla krta hai, shayad vo boxer tha, uske punch bahut speed se samar ko lagte hai...lekin Samar sambhalkar turant uske punch ko block kar leta hai or phir ek jordar ghutna uski pasliyon par marta hai jisse uski haddi tut jati hai or vo vahi dher ho jata hai.
Teeno ladke jameen par behosh pade the, lekin Samar ko sabse jyada gussa amit par tha isliye vo amit ke pass jata hai jo abhi uthne ki koshis kar rha tha or dubara se ek lat markar use gira deta hai.
Amit - kon hai madarchod tu...tu janta nhi tune kisko mara hai teri maa chod dunga me.
Samar ko ab or gussa aa gya tha vo amit ke upar bethkar uske chehre par ghuso ki barsat kar deta hai. Samar lgatar bina dekhe uske chehre par mukke mare Jaa rha tha.
Samar - or madarchod tu nhi janta ki me kon hu, tune meri behen ko hath lgya na tere isi hath ko tod deta hu.
Amit ka pura chehra khun se lal ho gya tha, phir samar ne uske dono hatho ko pakda or itne jor se ghumaya ki uske dono hatheliyo ki haddiya tut gyi. Amit ki jordar chikh ne pure mahol ko shant kar diya.
Phir samar komal ke pass jata hai to komal uske gale lag jati hai or khushi bhi.
Komal - bhai...I'm sorry bhai...agar aap nhi aate to me...
Khushi - thanks Bhai aapne Aaj hme bachaya.
Samar - ( komal se) pagal hai kya...sorry kyu bol rhi hai...or meri gudiya ko koi pareshan krega to uski me isse bhi buri halat krunga...chal ab apne aansu poch..rote hue bilkul achi hu lagti.
Khushi se chalo tum bhi ab college chalte hai lgta hai pehli class bhi khatam ho gyi.
Itne me sanjana bhi vahan aa jati hai, sanjana ko dekhkar vo uske gale se lag jati hai.
Or sab kuch sanjana ko btati hai, jise sunkar sanjana samar ko dekhti hai....mano jaise man hi man me thanks keh rhi ho.
Sanjana - acha ab rona band kro dekho sara face khrab kar liya, chalo ab mere sath....komal or khushi ko apne sath leke chalne lagti hai.
Samar vhi par khada tha to usse bhi bolti hai
Sanjana - tum bhi chalo (ye pehli baar tha jab sanjana ne pyar se Samar se kuch kha tha. Phir ye sab canteen ki taraf chal dete hai.
Shalini ne samar ko baad me usse Milne ko kehkar chali gyi thi.
Saurabh - ( Vicky se ) bhai vo ladka to Amit tha na.
Vicky - haa be, (samar ki taraf ishara krte hue) ye janta nhi isne iss ilake ke sabse bade gunde ke bhai ko mara hai.
Saurabh - vaise bhai sahi hua kal tumhari ldai isse nhi hui, dekha nhi un charo ki kya halat ki isne.
Vicky - chup sale... Soch amit ka bhai iski kya halat krega.
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Awesome update bhaiUpdate 5
Aaj Samar apne room me hi exercise kar rha tha, lekin vo akela nhi tha uske sath komal bhi thi. Jo uski pith ke upar baithi hui thi or Samar push ups kar rha tha.
Komal - forty eight, forty nine, fifty...
Samar - komal ko apne upar se utarte hue...chal ab hat mere upar se.
Komal - kya Bhai abhi to 50 pushups hi hue hai. Aap to kehte ho ki aap 100 pushups kar lete ho.
Samar - Haa to vo to me akela karta hu tujhe baithakar nhi. Ek to itni bhari hai. Sara din bas khati bhens ki tarah.
Komal - kya kha bhens. Hmm mujh jaise figure vali ladki pure college me nhi milegi aapko.
Samar - Haahaaahaa...tu majak bahut acha karti hai... tujhe to standup comedian hona chahiye,,, Moti
Komal - kya kha moti... Mujhe aapse baat hi nhi karni. Jaa rhi hu me apne room me.
Samar - Are tum to naraz ho gyi... Me to majak kar rha tha.
Komal - mujhe aapka majak bilkul pasand nhi aaya, jaa rhi hu me apne room me...bye.
(Komal darvaza jor se pitkar chali jati hai)
Samar - Are sun to...yrr. ye ladki bhi naa kuch pta nhi kab kaise react kregi.
Breakfast ke time sabhi sath me baithe hote hai. Aaj Suresh bhi inke sath tha.
Suresh - (Samar se) or beta kaisa rha tumhara pehla din college me.
Samar - bahut acha tha tauji (jhuth)
Suresh - bahut achi baat hai, college me dhyan se padhna tumhari dadi ko bahut ummiden hai tumse.. aur koi problem ho to sanjana ko btana vo tumhari senior hai college me to help kar degi.
Samar - Ji tauji, me man lgakar padhunga. Or Sanjana Di ne to... (Sanjana ki taraf dekhte hue)
Sanjana ko lga ki kahi Samar kal vali baat na btade ghar me, yahi sochkar vo ghabra rhi thi.
Suresh - Sanjana ne kya beta...
Samar - kuch nhi tauji... Me ye keh rha tha ki kal sanjana di ne meri ragging hone se bachayi.
Suresh - ye to bahut achi baat hai beta... (Sanjana se) ab tumhe hi inka college me dhyan rkhna hai komal or Samar ka.
Sanjana - ji papa. (Man me - isne btaya kyu nhi kal ke bare me... Sanjana's self - tujhe impress krne ki koshish me.
Sanjana - tu chup kar, jarur koi or baat hogi.
Sanjana's self - or kya baat hogi, vaise handsome bhi hai.
Sanjana - Fuck of)
Breakfast karke Suresh apne office chala jata hai , or sanjana jo ki divya ke sath uski car se college jati thi vo bhi nikal jati hai.
Samar - komal jaldi aa late ho rha hai...
Komal - (gusse me) aa rhi hu naa... kya hai.
Samar - are ab tak naraz hai... acha sorry.
Komal Samar ki bike par bethte hue
Komal - me aapse baat bhi kar rhi, chalo ab.
Or market ke pass bike rokna meri ek friend bhi aayegi
Samar - Ok (hmm lgta hai jyada hi naraz hai, chal beta aaj to koi rishwat dekar manana padega)
Dono bike par baithkar college ke liye nikal padte hai, raste me Samar bike market ke pass rokta hai to thodi der me ek ladki unke paas aati hai.
Samar - are khushi tum...(ji ha komal ki dost khushi hi thi jo pehle din samar ki dost bani thi)
Khushi - Hi Samar tum?
Komal - tum dono jante ho ek dusre ko
Khushi - Haa vo ( khushi komal ko sab kuch batati hai)
Komal - Samar ko ghur kar dekhti hai ( man me - badi jaldi hai ladkiyo se dosti krne ki) phir khushi se ye mere bhai hai to tere bhi bhai hue samjhi..ab chal jaldi late ho rha hai.
Phir teeno Samar, Komal or Khushi college ke liye nikal padte hai. Raste me khushi komal ke kaan me kuch kehti hai to komal bike rokne ko bolti hai.
Komal - Bhai bike roko.
Samar - ( bike rokte hue) kya hua
Komal - aap jao hme kuch or kaam hai hum abhi aate hai.
Samar - are lekin ab kya kaam pad gya, college mushkil se 500-600 meter dur hai.
Komal - isliye to aap jao hum aa jayenge.
Samar - pakka na
Komal - haa pakka ab jao
Samar - thik hai, lekin jaldi aana.
Ye kehkar Samar nikal padta hai bike lekar jabki komal or khushi pass ke medical store par chali jati hai.
Samar jab college pahuchta hai to dekhta hai ki kuch ladke college gate ke bahar juniors ko pakad kar unki ragging kar rhe the, unki nazar Samar par nhi padti to samar bhi unhe ignore karke apni bike parking me park krne chala jata hai. Parking me hi use Shalini mam dikhti hai to vo unke pass chala jata hai.
Samar - good morning mam
Shalini - good morning
Samar - mam vo mujhe kal ke bare me baat karni thi.
Shalini - kaho
Samar - phir samar usse kal ki puri baat btata hai,. Isliye me kal late hua tha mam.
Shalini - hmm... pehle hi din tumne senior se jhagda bhi kar liya.
Samar - no mam vo..
( Abhi ye dono baat kar hi rhe the ki itne me inhe kuch shor ki aawaz sunai deti hai...to ye dono uss taraf chal padte hai)
Komal or khushi jab college pahuchte hai to un ladko ki nazar inpar padti hai, ye 4 ladke hote hai.
Ladka 1 - Ooo bhai vo dekh kya mast item chalke aa rhi hai.
Ladka - 2 Haa bhai, chal inke maje lete hai.
Ladka - 3 salo lal vali (komal) se dur rehna use to me pataunga.
Jab komal or khushi college gate ke pass pahuchati hai to vo ladke unhe rokte hai.
Ladka 2 - aye ladki tum dono idhar aao.
Khushi to unke bulane par hi ghabraane lagti hai lekin komal unhe ignore karke aage jati hai to ek ladka unke samne aakar khada ho jata hai.
Ladka 4 - sunai nhi diya hamne bulaya to
Komal - kon ho tum, hato hmare samne se.
Ladka 3 - hmm attitude... Iski lene me to mja ayega.
Komal - tameez se baat kro samjhe...or jante nhi ragging krna illegal hai. Hato hmare samne se.
Ladka 1 - bhai ye vali kuch jyada hi akad dikha rhi hai ise to ache se sabka sikhana padega.
Ladka 4 - abhi tak to hum pyar se baat kar rhe the lekin lgta hai tum pyar se manne vali nhi ho.
Charo ladke komal or khushi ko pakad lete hai or khich kar apni car ki taraf le jane lgte hai.
Ye sab kuch college gate ke bahar ho rha tha isliye koi kuch nhi keh rha tha, aas paas kafi students ko bheed lag gai thi...lekin sabhi bas dekh rhe the. Kuch unki madad krne ko keh to rhe the lekin koi bhi aage badhne ki himmat nhi kar paa rha tha.
Khushi - chhodo hme, pls
Komal - chhodo hme varna
Komal or khushi apne aap ko chhudane ki koshish karti hai or isi bich komal ka hath jor se 3 ladke ko padta hai jiska naam Amit tha. Komal ne ek jordar thappad amit ko mara tha jiski aawaz gunj gyi thi.
Komal - mujhe chunne ki himmat mat krna samjhe.
Amit - sali tune mujhe thappad mara ab dekh me kya krta hu... Abhi to tujhe akele me lejakar krta lekin ab yahi sabke samne teri aisi halat krunga ki maut ki bheekh mangegi.
Ye kehkar amit komal ko pakadkar usko car se sata deta hai or uske sath jabardasti krne ki koshish krne lgata hai. Komal khud ko chudane ki koshish karti hai lekin amit ko takat ke aage vo kuch nhi kar pati. Khushi ko bhi baki ladko me pakad rkha tha. Apne ko itna mazboor dekhkar komal ki aankho me aansu aa jate hai.
Komal - chhodo mujhe kutte chhod de.
Abhi amit kuch aage kar pata ki itne me uski kamar pe ek jordar punch aakar lgta hai or uski pakad komal se hat jati hai, vo 4 kadam aage jakar jamin par girta hai.
Samne komal dekhti hai to samne Samar khada hua tha jo shor sharaba sunkar idhar aaya tha.
Komal - Bhai
Samar ki aankhe gusse me jal rhi thi or sharir me kampan ho rha tha.
Komal daudkar jati hai or Samar ke gale lag jati hai.
Komal - (rote hue) bhai ye ladka...isne...
Samar ki nazar amit par hi thi vo komal ko dekhkar kuch shant hota hai or uske aansu pochkar usse Shalini mam ke pass bhejta hai.
Amit ko girta dekhkar un tino ne bhi khushi ko chhod diya tha or Samar par hmla krne ke liye aa gye the.
Ek ladka samar ko piche se aake daboch leta hai, lekin Samar apne hath piche lejakar uss ladke ki gardan pakadkar usse jhukte hue aage ki taraf patak deta hai. Phir baki do ladke samar par samne se ek sath hmla krte hai, ek ladka samar ko lat Marta hai to Samar uski lat pakadkar use aage ki taraf khich deta hai jisse us ladke ki dono tange split me khul jati hai or usse itna jordar dard hota hai jaise uski gaand kisi ne cheer di ho.
Dusre ladka samar par punches se hmla krta hai, shayad vo boxer tha, uske punch bahut speed se samar ko lagte hai...lekin Samar sambhalkar turant uske punch ko block kar leta hai or phir ek jordar ghutna uski pasliyon par marta hai jisse uski haddi tut jati hai or vo vahi dher ho jata hai.
Teeno ladke jameen par behosh pade the, lekin Samar ko sabse jyada gussa amit par tha isliye vo amit ke pass jata hai jo abhi uthne ki koshis kar rha tha or dubara se ek lat markar use gira deta hai.
Amit - kon hai madarchod tu...tu janta nhi tune kisko mara hai teri maa chod dunga me.
Samar ko ab or gussa aa gya tha vo amit ke upar bethkar uske chehre par ghuso ki barsat kar deta hai. Samar lgatar bina dekhe uske chehre par mukke mare Jaa rha tha.
Samar - or madarchod tu nhi janta ki me kon hu, tune meri behen ko hath lgya na tere isi hath ko tod deta hu.
Amit ka pura chehra khun se lal ho gya tha, phir samar ne uske dono hatho ko pakda or itne jor se ghumaya ki uske dono hatheliyo ki haddiya tut gyi. Amit ki jordar chikh ne pure mahol ko shant kar diya.
Phir samar komal ke pass jata hai to komal uske gale lag jati hai or khushi bhi.
Komal - bhai...I'm sorry bhai...agar aap nhi aate to me...
Khushi - thanks Bhai aapne Aaj hme bachaya.
Samar - ( komal se) pagal hai kya...sorry kyu bol rhi hai...or meri gudiya ko koi pareshan krega to uski me isse bhi buri halat krunga...chal ab apne aansu poch..rote hue bilkul achi hu lagti.
Khushi se chalo tum bhi ab college chalte hai lgta hai pehli class bhi khatam ho gyi.
Itne me sanjana bhi vahan aa jati hai, sanjana ko dekhkar vo uske gale se lag jati hai.
Or sab kuch sanjana ko btati hai, jise sunkar sanjana samar ko dekhti hai....mano jaise man hi man me thanks keh rhi ho.
Sanjana - acha ab rona band kro dekho sara face khrab kar liya, chalo ab mere sath....komal or khushi ko apne sath leke chalne lagti hai.
Samar vhi par khada tha to usse bhi bolti hai
Sanjana - tum bhi chalo (ye pehli baar tha jab sanjana ne pyar se Samar se kuch kha tha. Phir ye sab canteen ki taraf chal dete hai.
Shalini ne samar ko baad me usse Milne ko kehkar chali gyi thi.
Saurabh - ( Vicky se ) bhai vo ladka to Amit tha na.
Vicky - haa be, (samar ki taraf ishara krte hue) ye janta nhi isne iss ilake ke sabse bade gunde ke bhai ko mara hai.
Saurabh - vaise bhai sahi hua kal tumhari ldai isse nhi hui, dekha nhi un charo ki kya halat ki isne.
Vicky - chup sale... Soch amit ka bhai iski kya halat krega.
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Suresh Singh - age 47, Samar ke tauji, Mumbai me textile ka business hai. Kaam me bahut jyada busy rehte hai. Apni family ko Kam time de pate hai.
Sugandha Singh - Age 45, Samar ki badi maa, Family or kaam me balance banakar chalti hai. Sanskari ke sath sath modern khyal bhi rakhti hai. Doctor thi, lekin filhal vo kaam chod diya hai. Abhi sirf medical colleges me guest ke taur pe lecture deti hai. Khubsurati ki misal hai, apni umra se jyada jawan nazar aati hai.
Sanjana Singh - Age 22, Suresh or Sugandha ki badi beti, thodi ziddi hai, apni chize kisi ke sath share krna pasand nhi hai. Mumbai se hi Business Management me Graduation kar rhi hai. Abhi 3rd year me hai.
Komal Singh - Age 19, Suresh or Sugandha ki choti beti, abhi 12th paas ki hai, sabke sath pyar se rehna pasand karti hai. Ghar me sabki ladli hai.
Suraj Samar ke sath mumbai tak aana chahta tha, lekin Samar ne jabardasti use railway station se hi vapas lauta diya or akela Mumbai tak train me aa gya. Jab train Station pe pahuchi to Samar ek baar ke liye itni bheed dekh kar hairat me padh gya, Usne apni sari jindagi gaon me hi bitayi thi, pass ke shahar me bhi vo tab hi jata tha jab koi jarurat ho. Itni bheed uske liye nayi baat thi, halanki Mobile me internet ke jariye usne duniya bhar ki jankari hasil kar li thi. Lekin aankho dekha experience to alag hi hota hai.
Samar - huhh itni bheed, chal samar ab tu bhi inme se ek hai.
Train se utarkar samar Exit ki taraf jata hai to bahar taxi ki line lagi hui thi. Samar apna mobile nikalkar call krta hai.
Samar - Hello, haa badi maa main bahar aa gya hu, aap kahan par hai.
Sugandha Samar ke samne hi peeth karke khadi thi.
Sugandha - Beta, me to exit ke paas hi khadi hu. Tum kahan par ho.
Samar - me bhi to vahi khada hu badi maa.
Sugandha palatkar dekhti hai to use samar nazar aata hai, vo use dekhte hi pehchan leti hai. Lekin Samar use nhi pehchanta. Sugandha jab uske karib aati hai, to Samar use dhyaan se dekhta hai or pehchanta hai. Or phir uske pairo ko chune ke liye jhukta hai. Sugandha use beech me hi rokakar apne gale se lga leti hai.
Sugandha - Mera beta, gale lag jaa mere lal. Kitna arsa ho gya tujhe dekhe.
Sugandha Samar ko gale se lgaye rkhe hi baate krti hai.
Sugandha - Tujhe meri yaad bhi nhi aayi hogi. Tujhe gale se lgakar kitna sukoon mil rha hai, Mere bete.
Sab log station PE inhi dono ko dekh rhe the. Samar ne ye baat notice ki or Sugandha se bola.
Samar- maine bhi aapko yaad Kiya badi maa. Chaliye ab ghar chalte hai. Sab hme hi dekh rhe hai.
Sugandha - dekhne de, me apne bete ko gale lga rhi hu kisi gair ko nhi.
Samar- ghar Jake jee bharke gale lga Lena badi maa. Mujhe bahut bhookh lagi hai.
Sugandha - are haa tu kitna lamba safar karke aaya hai, thak gya hoga, chal ghar chalte hai.
Samar apna saman uthakar chal deta hai, dono car me bethkar nikal padte hai.
Car me - Sugandha - acha beta Ghar par sab kaise hai, maa ji or Kavita.
Samar- sab ache hai badi maa, dadi to aapko bahut yaad karti hai.
Sugandha - acha hai, ab tu yahi padhega, maa ji ne kal phone karke btaya tha mujhe tere baare me. Bilkul apni maa pe gya hai padhai me awwal.
Samar- Haa badi maa, dadi ne jidd karke bhej diya. Mene to kaha tha ki vahi kisi college me padh lunga.
Sugandha - kyu vahan kyu pdega, yahan padhna. Main Tera admission shahar ke sabse bade college me karaungi. Sanjana bhi usi me padhti hai or ab komal bhi vahi jaegi. 1 mahine baad se college shuru hoga. Tab tak shahar ko dekh le, yahan adjust ho jaa. Dekh to kitna dubla ho gya hai, lgta hai kavita kuch deti nhi khane ko.
Sugandha sab kuch ek hi saans me bol gyi.
Samar - are badi maa, me to yu hi bol rha tha, or gaon me to mere jaisa koi nhi or aap kehti hai ki me dubla ho gya.
Sugandha - haa tere jaisa koi nhi, itna dubla or kon hoga gaon me.
Samar is baat pe hans diya,
Samar - acha badi maa Ghar me sab kaise hai, tau ji, didi or komal.
Sugandha - sab thik hai beta, tere tauji ko to time hi nhi milta kaam se, sanjana apne dosto ke sath busy rehti hai or komal use to filmi sapne dekhne se fursat nhi. Ab tu aa gya hai mujhse bhi koi baat krne vala hoga.
Sugandha - or ye bta station pe tune mujhe pehchana kyu nhi. Hmm?
Samar - are badi maa me to aapko dekhte hi pehchan gya tha vo to bas.
Sugandha - kya vo to bta.
Samar - aap itni khubsurat lag rhi thi ki me kuch bol hi nhi paaya.
Sugandha- (sharamakar) chal badmash, apni badi maa se hi flirt krta hai, lgta hai kavita ke laad pyar ne jyada bigad diya. Teri pitai karni padegi.
Samar - mene to sach hi kaha badi maa.
Sugandha -
Isi tarah batein krte hue ye ghar pahunchate hai.
Ek high society me Sugandha ka 2 manzila ghar tha. Koi mahal to nhi tha, lekin dekhkar lgta tha ki paisa kafi lgaya hai ghar me. Ghar me enter krte hi ek chota sa corridor shuru hota tha or uske baad living room. Niche ek side me Kitchen or mandir the or dusri side Sugandha or Suresh ka room or 2 guest room. upar bhi Komal, Sanjana ke room the or ek guest room.
Ghar me pahuchkar sugandha komal ko aawaj deti hai, Komal... Komal..
Komal - Ayi maa.... Kya hua maa, aap to mujhe padhne bhi nhi deti.
Sugandha - sab pta hai mujhe kitna padhti hai, ye dekh kon aya hai.
Komal Samar ko dekhti hai aur pehchanne ki koshish karti hai.
Sugandha - are pagal ladki aise kya dekh rhi hai, Tera bhai hai - Samar, Ranjit chacha or Sweta ka beta
Komal ne samar ko sirf bachpan me hi dekha tha, kyoki vo gaon sirf ek baar hi gyi thi uska janm bhi mumbai me hi hua tha. Isliye vo samar ko pehchan nhi payi, lekin jab sugandha ne btaya ki vo kon hai to komal bahut khush hui, kyoki sugandha aksar ghar or gaon ke bare me use batati thi.
Komal - Samar bhai, (zor se gale lagte hue) maa hmesha aapki baat krti hai. Kehti hai samar Aisa hai, Samar vaisa hai. Khushi se jhumte hue, aap mumbai ghumne aaye hai, mein aapko pura shahar dikhaungi. Thik hai.
Sugandha - vo mumbai ghumne nhi, padhne aaya hai ab vo yahi rhega. Sanjana ke college me hi iska admission karvana hai, tere sath.
Komal - sach me, yahoo... Tab to aur maza ayega. Hum sath me college jaenge. Pta hai bhai me hmesha chahti thi ki mera ek bhai ho aur dekho aap aa gye. Ab aap kahi mat jana. Ok
Samar- kahi nhi jaunga, apni gudiya ko chhodkar. Vaise badi maa or koi nhi dikhai de rha, kahan hai sab.
Sugandha - sanjana gyi hogi kahin apne dosto ke sath, or iske papa to business trip par gye hai.
Samar - oh.. acha
Komal - chaliye bhaiya, mere room me aapko apne video games dikhati hu.
Sugandha - (thoda dantate hue) vo abhi abhi aya hai pehle use fresh hone de, phir dikhati rehna apne games.
Komal - ok maa
Samar - badi maa koi baat nhi, use mat datiye. Komal se - pehle me fresh ho jau. Phir hum sath me tumhare games dekhenge.
Komal - Ok bhaiya (Samar ke galo pe kiss karte hue) or apni maa ko jibh dikhakar bhag jati hai.
Sugandha - ye ladki bhi naa, iske papa or. behen Kam the ise sar par chadhane ke liye, ki ab tu bhi iski side le rha hai.
Samar - koi baat nhi badi maa, abhi bachi hai. Aap to mere liye kuch khane ko laiye bahut bhukh lagi hai. Or me kis room me jakar fresh hou.
Sugandha - abhi to tu samne vale room me chala jaa, jaldi hi me tere liye kamra khali karvati hu, vo kya hai naa abhi kuch kamro me renovation ka kaam chal rha hai.
Samar - ok badi maa.
Samar fresh hokar, khana khakar usi room me aaram krta hai or uske baad komal ke sath uske games dekhta hai or khelta bhi hai. Isi tarah raat ho jati hai.
Raat 8 bje dinner ke lime pe sugandha komal or Samar ko aawaz deti hai.
Sugandha - Samar... Komal.. niche aa jao mene khana lga diya hai.
Samar - abhi aaye badi maa..., Chal gudiya niche chalte hai. Badi maa bula rhi hai.
Komal - O ho.. ye maa bhi naa kabhi mujhe khelene nhi deti. Kitna maza aa rha tha. Mene aapke player ko almost maar diya tha.
Samar- itni der se to game hi khel rhe hai, or mujhe in video games ki itni practice nhi hai vrna tum jit nhi paati. Vaise asli me to fight me mujhe koi nhi hara skta.
Komal - kyu aapko kya martial arts aate hai.
Samar - Haa
Komal - kya sach me, oh my god mujhe naa martial arts bahut pasand hai. Bas mujhe aate nhi hai. Aap sikhaoge mujhe?
Samar- thik hai sikha dunga, lekin kisi se kehna mat. Samjhi.
Komal - (dhire se ) Ok
Samar - chal ab niche, vrna badi maa gussa krengi.
Is tarah ye dono niche aate hai or table pe aakar beth jate hai. Komal puchti hai - kya bnaya hai maa.
Sugandha - aaj mene sabkuch apne bete ki pasand ka bnaya hai.
Komal - hmmm meri pasand ka to kabhi kuch nhi bnati.
Sugandha - chup kar, har dusre din to apni pasand ka hi banwati hai or pura din kamre se jo maharani ki tarah aadesh deti ki mumma ye bnado vo bnado.
Ye sunkar komal sirf khilkhilakar has di
Sugandha - ye sanjana kahan reh gyi, komal jara phone to kar use.
Komal abhi phone kar hi rahi thi ki itne me sanjana tez kadmo ke sath andar aati hai.
Sugandha - aa gyi beti, chal aaja mene khana lga diya hai.
Abhi tak sanjana ka dhyan Samar par nhi gya tha, lekin jaise hi samar ne sanjana ko dekha... Uski to duniya hi tham gyi, itni khubsoorat, haseen ladki usne kabhi nhi dekhi thi. Sanjana ki khubsurati to pure college me famous thi. College ki ladkiya to usse rask karti thi. Sab ladke uspe fida the, lekin sanjana ke gusse ki vajah se kisi ladke ki himmat nhi hoti thi use prapose krne ki, jawab sabhi jante the ki inkar hi hoga. Sanjana me khubsurati ke sath sath mazbooti bhi thi, na jane kitne ladke jinhone sanjana se badtameezi ki thi... Uske thappado se apne jabde hilva chuke the.
Samar ki aankhe to mano duniya ko dekhna hi bhul gyi thi... Sanjana ne jab dekha ki samne table pe ek ladka betha use ghur rha hai to uski bauhe chad gyi. Use aise ghurne vale ladke katai pasand nhi the. Bechare Samar ka first impression hi kharab gya tha and first impression is the last impression.
Samar ka dhyan tuta komal ki awaz se...
Komal - hai naa meri didi sabse khubsurat.
Samar - Haa
Komal - kya
Samar - hmm! Kuuuch... Kuch nhi.
Komal - khane pe focus Karo Bhai vrna lene ke dene pad jayenge.
Sanjana - Maa ye kon hai.
Sugandha - beta ye samar hai, Ranjit chacha ka beta, ab se yahi rahkar pdegha.
Sanjana ne ek baar samar ko gaur se dekha aur phir apna dinner krne lagi.
Khana khane ke baad sabhi hall me TV dekh rhe the tabhi doorbell bajne ki aawaz ayi..
Sugandha ne jakar darvaza khola to samne Suresh khada tha.
Sugandha - aa gye aap, andar aaiye.
Suresh ghar ke andar aate hue sugandha se pani mangta hai.
Sugandha - (Pani dete hue) aap to 2 din baad aane vale the.
Suresh - haa, lekin kaam jaldi pura ho gya to aa gya, 2 din baad phir Jana hai. Or suno khana mat lgana. Bas mujhe aaram krna hai.
Sugandha - Ji
Itne me Samar aakar suresh ke paon chhuta hai.
Suresh - Jite raho, or gaon me sab kaise hai. Safar to thik se hua naa.
Samar- Ji Tauji, gaam me sab thik hai or safar bhi aaram se hua.
Suresh - achi baat hai, sugandha ne bataya tha tumhare bare me, jaldi hi admission ho jaega college me to komal ke sath hi padhna.
Suresh - acha ab me sone chalta hu, bahut thak gya hu. Or baccho tum bhi so jao. Ab kafi raat ho gyi hai.
Komal - Ok Papa
Suresh apne kamre me chala jata hai.
Sugandha - (sanjana se) beti tum aaj komal ke sath room share kar lo samar ke liye room Khali ho jaega.
Sanjana - kya? No mom, aap janti hai ki mujhe kisi ke sath room share krna pasand nhi. Nhi me akeli hi soungi.
Sugandha - beta abhi baki kamro me renovation ka kaam chal rha hai to koi room Khali nhi hai. Thoda adjust krna pdega.
Sanjana - No mom, isse kahiye hall me so jae.
Sugandha - (gusse me) bas, kyu hall me soega vo, mene keh Diya ki tum komal ke sath room share krogi to krogi. Discussion end.
Sanjana - Samar ko gusse se dekhkar apne pair patakte hue chali gyi.
Sugandha - Beta uski baato ka bura mat manna thodi ziddi hai ye ladki.
Samar - koi baat nhi badi maa, aapne unhe bewajah daanta me to hall me bhi so skta tha.
Sugandha Samar ko muskurakar dekhti hai or apne room me chali jati hai.
Raat me sanjana komal ke sath ek room me soti hai or apne man me sochti hai.
Sanjana - hmm mere room ko mujse chhina tujhe me chhodungi nhi bacchu. Bhondu si to shakal hai or mujse panga lene chala hai.
Apne gusse me Sanjana ne Samar ki personality par dhyan hi nhi diya ki vo kitna handsome hai.