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Baat sahi hai issiliye bahen ki tate likhne ka maan nahi kr raha hai ya to ek or story likhna chalu kr du ya phir ek stop pe kaag duAur aap bhi to tin tin stories likh rahe hai
Ek kahavat apni suni hogi teen tigra kam bigada aapke sath bhi kuch Aisa ho raha hai
yaa phir sauteli masum behen ka second part laa duBaat sahi hai issiliye bahen ki tate likhne ka maan nahi kr raha hai ya to ek or story likhna chalu kr du ya phir ek stop pe kaag du
Haa Bhai ek sath 2-3 stories likhna is not a good idea. Mere mind me ek idea Sarvnaash ka aaya tha aur mene story start kar di. But ab dono stories sath me likhna tough ho rha hai.
But aage se ek baar me ek hi story like likhunga.
I would suggest you that tum pehle first story chudai ki sabki par hi focus karo.
Baki tumhari marzi
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Aap ek kaam kijiye hai har Story ka ek time fixed kar sakte hai.Baat sahi hai issiliye bahen ki tate likhne ka maan nahi kr raha hai ya to ek or story likhna chalu kr du ya phir ek stop pe kaag du
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Zabardast updateUpdate 15
'Love ends'
Sugandha - hello
Suresh - kya hai.
Sugandha - ji main puch rahi thi ki aap kab aayenge.
Suresh - ye puchne ke liye phone kiya hai. Janti ho main kitna busy hu.
Sugandha - aapko to harr vakt bas kaam kaam hi sujhta hai, yahan par patni aur bacche bhi hai unki to koi fikr nahi hai. Samar ko itne mahine ho gye hai aaye hue, kya sochta hoga ki uske bade papa ke paas vakt hi nahi hai ghar ke liye.
Suresh - to vo kya sochta hai uski vajah se main apna business chhod du kya.
Sugandha - maine ye to nahi kaha
Suresh - tumhari faltu bato ke liye time nahi hai mere pass, ab phone rkho mujhe meeting me jana hai.
Ye kehkar Suresh phone kaat deta hai, Sugandha ko Suresh ki aisi baato se thoda bura lagta hai vo iss time kitchen me thi. Kavita Sanjana aur Komal apne apne room me the, jab Samar kitchen me pani lene aata hai.
Vo Sugandha ko kinhi khyalo me khoya pata hai.
Samar - Maa
Sugandha - haaan?
Samar - kya soch rhi hain..
Sugandha - hmm? nhi kuch bhi to nhi..
Samar - phir aapke chehre par udasi? mujhe ye bilkul achi nahi lagti.
Sugandha - (muskura deti hai) kuch chahiye tha.
Samar - nahi main to bas pani lene aaya tha.
Sugandha - ruko abhi deti hu.
Sugandha right side ghumkar samar ke liye bottle me pani bharne lagti hai.
Samar - agar koi baat ho to mujhse chipana mat maa vrna main aapse naraz ho jaunga.
Sugandha muskurate hue, pani bharte hue hi uska jawab deti hai.
Samar uske left side usse lagkar hi khada tha aur sugandha right side dekh rahi thi.
Sugandha - acha baba nahi chhipaungi.
Jaise hi pani bharkar Sugandha mudti hai samar ke itne kareeb hone ke karan uska chehra samar ke chehre ke thik samne hota hai.
Aur achanak se iss hadbadi me Sugandha ke honth Samar ke hontho se chhu jate hai.
Sugandha ke sharir me ek sihran daud jati hai.
Ye sab bahut jaldi aur pal bhar me hua tha, isse pehle ki vo koi reaction deti unke honth alag ho chuke the.
Samar bhi ek baar ke liye hairan ho jata hai ki abhi ye kya hua. Halaki ye anjane me hi hua tha, lekin sugandha ko sharm mehsus ho rahi thi.
Uski najre jhuk gyi thi.
Dono kuch nahi bol rhe the.
Samar - maa...vo..
Sugandha - lo pani...jao ab
Samar - huh..haa
Samar pani lekar vahan se aa jata hai
Samar - shit shit, ye kya hua, pakka maa naraz ho gyi
hongi. Itne paas khade hone ki kya jarurat thi.
Vahan sugandha bhi khyalo me gum thi.
Sugandha - hey bhagwan, kya kar baithi main thoda dekh nahi sakti thi aise achanak palatne ki kya jarurat thi. Usse baat karungi.
Agle din subah sanjana komal aur samar college ke liye nikal rhe the ki
Sugandha - samar
Samar - haa maa
Sugandha - vo...vo...
Samar bhi sugandha se kuch kehna chahta tha lekin
Sugandha - vo main keh rahi thi ki dhyan se jana
Samar -ahh thik hai maa
Samar nikal padta hai sanjana aur komal ke sath, raste me vo divya aur khushi ko bhi pick kar leta hai.
Samar - so girls main tum sabke sath ab college me nahi rahunga.
Sab ek sath - kya, kyon
Vo sabka aisa reaction dekh ke hasta hai..
Samar - mera mtlb hai ki ab mujhe vo drugs ke bare me pta lgana hai to tum sab apna dhyan rkhna ok. Aur koi baat ho to mujhe btana.
Sab - ok
Sanjana - tum bhi apna dhyan rkhna ye sab bahut risky hai.
Samar -sure
Ye sabhi college pahunchte hai
Koi bhi class me nahi jata sabhi canteen me baithe the.
Samar - oye chhutki tu class me kyo nahi jaa rhi.
Komal - aap teeno (samar, sanjana, divya ) bhi to nahi ja rhe.
Samar - to hamari nakal kregi kya ja chupchap class me
Komal apna sar baccho ki tarah hilate hue
Komal - nahi
Samar - aur tum khushi
Khushi - mene bola isko chalte hai lekin isne mujhe bhi nahi jane diya.
Samar -
Komal -
Samar - thik hai mat jao fail ho jaogi to maa se daant tumhe hi padegi
Komal - aap kab kaam aaoge.
Samar - mtlb
Komal - mtlb ab to principal sir aapko jante hai aap unse kehkar meri attandance ka dekh lena.
Samar - bahut chalu hai tu
Komal - aakhir behen kiski hu.
Samar - sanjana divya tum dono to seniors hona tumhe to pta hoga ki college me sabse badnaam ladke kon hai jo thode awara type ke ho.
Sanjana - nahi samar hum to ladko se dur hi rehte hai, aur aise ladko ko hum kaise janenge bhala.
Divya - haa samar tumse pehle college me sirf saurabh aur Vicky se hi hamari baat hoti thi vo bhi isliye kyoki vo dono Jasmine aur Suchi ke friends hai.
Haa shayad unhe kuch pta ho usually ladke jante hai naa aisi baato ko isliye.
Samar - haa ye bhi sahi hai ok to mujhe unse hi puchna chahiye.
Itne me vaha charo Vicky, Saurabh, Suchi aur Jasmine pahuch jate hai.
Jasmine - hi guys, kya batein ho rahi hai.
Sab vahan baith jate hai
Suchi - hi samar ab kaise ho tum kafi dino ke baad college aaye tum sab.
Samar - haa main thik hu
Jasmine - lekin tumhara accident hua kaise tha.
Samar - accident?
Suchi - haa hame divya se kal hi pta chala ki sanjana kyu nhi aa rhi.
Samar - haa vo...ab thik hai sab.
Mumbai me hi kisi jagah
Ek ladki khane vali dining table par apni tange khol ke padi thi aur ek aadmi uski chut me zor zor se dhakke laga raha tha.
Aur ye koi aur nahi Suresh hi tha.
Suresh - ahh mera aane vala hai beti.
Ladki - haa papa mera bhi hone vala hai, ahhh maro meri jamkar....aur zor zor se maaro.
Suresh kuch der aise hi dhakke lagane ke baad uski chut me jhad jata hai.
After some minutes
Ek aurat Suresh ki taraf ek sharab ka peg badha deti hai.
Aurat - ye lo.
Suresh - thanks jaan sach me chudai ke baad peg alag maja deta hai.
Ladka - sahi kaha papa aapne.
Ladki - lekin papa jab aap sanjana vala role play karte ho to aur badhiya chodte ho mujhe.
Is vakt hall me 4 log baithe hue the, charo ke charo pure nange hi the. Aur sabke hatho me sharab se bhare kaanch ke glass the.
Aur ye thi Suresh ki dusri family.
Jab Suresh aur Sugandha ki shadi hui thi to vo gaon me hi rehte the, lekin suresh aksar kaam ke silsile me mumbai aata tha. Jitna shareef aur sidha vo ghar valo ke samne khud ko dikhata tha vo vaisa bilkul nahi tha. Mumbai me agar ek din ka kaam hota to 5 din ka bolkar aata aur phir yahan aakar aiyashiyan karta. Sharab, jua aur randibaazi jahan hoti suresh har uss party me hota. Ye sab vo apni shadi ke pehle se karta tha aur uske baad bhi usne nahi chhoda. Partiyon par udaye paise ko vyapar ke hisab me gadbad karke pura karta. Aisi hi ek party me uski mulakat Kamya se hui.
Uski khubsurati par vo mohit ho gya aur uske sath ratein rangeen karne laga. Lekin Kamya ko suresh me ek aiyash paise vala ladka najar aaya aur usne suresh par apne husn aur baton ka aisa jadu chalaya ki usne Sugandha se shadi ke 6 mahine baad hi mumbai me kamya se shadi kar li.
Sugandha inn sab baton se puri tarah anjan thi. Idhar gaon me use Sugandha ne ladki ko janam diya aur kamya ne suresh ko ek ladke ka baap banaya, iske baad suresh aur jyada kamya ki giraft me aa gya.
Usne apne baap aur bhai ko btakar apna hissa manga aur mumbai me shift hokar business karne laga. Lekin suresh ke baap ko laga ki shayad suresh kisi galat sangat me padh gya hai isliye unhone suresh ko business ke liye paise to diye lekin khandani jaydad jiski kimat arbon me thi vo sugandha ke naam kar di aur usse vaada bhi le liya ki vo ye jaydad sirf apne baccho ko degi.
Suresh ke sare irado par pani fir gya, uska plan tha ki vo mumbai me aakar kamya ke sath khulkar jindagi ke maje lutega, lekin kyoki sugandha bhi ek padhi likhi ladki thi aur ab uski haisiyat suresh se kahi badh ke thi to vo mumbai aakar bhi sugandha se alag nahi ho skta tha.
Suresh ke business par bhi final control sugandha ka hi tha, halaki sugandha suresh se pyar karti thi aur patni dharm ko bahut acche se nibhati thi. Lekin jab jaydad uske naam karne ki bari aayi to usne apne sasur se kiye vaade ko todne se mana kar diya. Suresh kahi naa kahi mumbai aakar bhi sugandha se niche hi raha. Jitni pahuch aur rutba suresh ne mumbai me bnaya tha usse jyada rutba sugandha ka tha.
Vo ek bade doctor ke taur par to sabko janti hi thi aur vo aksar charity bhi karti uska naam shahar ke bade logo me hota tha. Suresh ko ye baat katai pasand nahi thi.
Aise vakt me kamya usko aur bhadkati, use uksati.
Sugandha se to use sanjana aur komal hui thi. To vahi kamya ne ek beta Vicky aur ek beti Suchi di. Suresh ek sex ka bhuka insan ban chuka tha. Kamya khud to apne bete Vicky se chudti thi aur Suchi apne baap Suresh se. Inke ghar me sex ka nanga nach chalta tha. Suchi ko chodte chodte ab vo sanjana aur komal ko bhi chodne ki sochne laga tha aur isme suchi uska pura sath deti thi, uske sath role play karke.
Charo log nange baithe batein kar rahe the.
Suresh - sach me jindagi ka asli maja tum logo ke sath hi aata hai. (Suchi ki gaand par hath pherta hue)
Kamya - jab se betichod bane ho, patni ko to bhul hi gye ho.
Suresh - (kamya ke samne apna lund karte hue) kahan janeman tum to pehla pyar ho mera bolo to abhi chod du.
Kamya - abhi nahi abhi Vicky ne gaand mari hai ab raat me karna.
Vicky - to aaj suchi ko main chodunga.
Suchi - aise utawle ho rhe ho jaise pehli baar ho roj to marte ho. haaahaaa.
Kamya - aaj sab yahi hall me karte hai. Milkar.
Suchi - haa
Suresh - bada maja aayega. Suchi beti komal ka role play karenge.
Suchi - haaahaaa dad aapko iss beti se jyada uss beti ki marne ki kyu padi rehti hai.
Suresh - kya karu beta, jo chiz mushkil ho milna ise karne me jyada maja aata hai.
Kamya - to aasan kar do naa. kab tak iss ghar me rahenge.
Suresh - mere chutiya baap ne sari property uss sugandha ke naam kar di, sali dikhati to aise hai jaise kitni pativrata ho lekin hasti hogi kutiya ki dekh sara paisa mere paas hai, tu to bikhari hai.
Kamya - to koi tarkeeb nikalo naa ki sari jaydad hame mil jaye.
Suresh - (Vicky ko taraf ishara karte hue) iss sale ko bola tha sanjana ko pyar me fasane ke liye. Lekin sala uske samne apni hi behen ko girlfriend banakar ghumta hai.
Vicky - main kya karu papa vo sanjana kisi ladke ko paas hi nahi aane deti suchi ne usse dosti ki to uska dost bankar uske paas jaa pata hu. Main to koi rasta nikal leta, lekin ab vo sala Samar aa gya hai. Jab dekho tab unke aas paas hi rehta hai.
Suresh - uska bhi kuch karna padega.
Vicky - lekin dad takat bahut hai usme, 4-4 ladko ko akela pita tha.
Suresh - hmm sab janta hu, uska bhi intezam karna padega. Tu bas kisi tarah Sanjana ko fasa.
Sugandha ne sari property uske aur komal ke naam ki hui hai, ye baat sanjana ko bhi nahi pata.
Ek baar sanjana fass jaye to komal ka bhi kuch kar lenge.
Vicky - haa dad ye mast hoga, Paisa milega uske sath sath sanjana ki chut bhi.
Suchi - hmmm uski chut milne baad to aap mujhe bhul jaoge.
Suresh - (uski chuchi ko pakadte hue) kisne kaha, tujhe to main sabse jyada chodunga. Balki tujhe to patni bana lunga, vo dono to uss kaminee sugandha ki paidaish hai unhe to apni aur Vicky ki randi banaunga.Kyu Kamya.
Kamya -
Suresh - koi kuch bhi bano chudai to sab karenge. Jaise abhi karne vale hai. (Kehkar kamya ko pakad leta hai)
Phir raat bhar inn charo ke bich sex ka nanga nach chalta hai kabhi baap beti, maa beta to kabhi bhai behen aur pati patni. Kaun kya hai kuch nahi pta.
Aadmi - haramzade ek to tune pehle hi iske sath suhagrat manake iski kimat 30 lakh se 15 karva di.
Aadmi - meri patni hai vo
Aadmi - (uske muh par ek noto ki gaddi marte hue) ye le aur kahi bahar randibaazi kar. Ab iss chokri ke paas najar aaya to lund kaat dunga. 1.5 mahine me iski delivery hai Dubai me.
Vo aadmi paise leta hai aur chala jata hai.
Aadmi - iska khyal rakh, kuch khila pila ise achi dikhegi to dubara kimat badh jayegi.
Aurat - main kya karu kuch khati hi nahi ye, bas upar dekhti rehti hai.
Aadmi - bada daam mil rha tha iska, tere harami bete ne sab barbaad kar diya. Aisi desi gaon ki kachi kaliyon ki bahar badi maang hai. Main Paisa badhwa lunga. Tu bas apne bete ko isse dur rkhna.
Aurat - haa samjh gyi.
Aadmi - 1.5 mahine baad vapas aaunga.
Vo aadmi nikal jata hai.
Aur chanda kamre ki khidki se bas uss aasman ko dekh rahi thi. Uske mann me ek hi baat ghum rahi thi....1.5 mahina.
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