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Nice and superb update....Update 16
'Danger Coming'
Raat ka vakt tha, sab dinner karke apne apne room me the. Keval Sugandha hall me baithi thi. Vo suresh ka wait kar rahi thi, kuch na hone par usne TV chala liya tha.
Kareeb 11:45 minute par bell baji to Sugandha ne jakar darwaja khola.
Sugandha - aa gye aap
Suresh - dikhai nahi deta samne hi khada hu.
Sugandha - maine to sirf yuhi pucha, acha andar aaiye.
Suresh - hatogi to aaunga na.
Vaise to suresh ke dil me kbhi sugandha ke liye pyar nahi tha, lekin jaise jaise vo apni aiyashiyon me dubta gya vaise vaise kamya use sugandha ke khilaf aur bhadkati gyi. Aur ab to vo frustrate ho chuka tha. Halaki suresh ke paas paise ki kami nahi thi aur agar vo sugandha se mangta to vo ek baar nahi puchti kisliye chahiye.
Lekin jab buddhi par pathar pade ho to kya kiya jaa sakta hai. Use lagta tha ki sugandha ne uski jaydad usse cheeni hai.
Suresh andar aata hai, aur sofe par aakar baith jata hai.
Sugandha use pani lakar deti hai, vo pani bina piye side me rakh deta hai.
Sugandha - khana laga du kya
Suresh - nahi khana mujhe
Sugandha - bahar se khake aaye hai kya
Suresh - tum jara chup nahi reh sakti, bol diya naa nahi khana.
Suresh - itna gussa kyu kar rhe hai mene sirf pucha.
Suresh - koi jarurat nhi hai ye jhutha fikr jatane ki. Aur ye bahar car kiski khadi hai new.
(Vahi car jo sugandha ne Samar aur Sanjana ke liye li thi college le liye)
Sugandha - ye to mene Samar ko lekar di hai.
Suresh ki ye sunkar jhante sulag gayi ki itni mehngi car sugandha ne samar ke liye li hai.
Suresh - kya? tumhara dimag kharab hai
Sugandha - kya hua?
Suresh - itni mehngi car tumne uske liye li hai, kya uske bina college nahi jaya jaa skta tha.
Sugandha - abhi pta hai naa baccho ke sath kya hua tha, vo car bhi damage ho gyi thi. 2 crore hi to gye hai.
Isi baat ko lekar suresh aur sugandha me behes hone lagi. Kuch der ye behes chali aur.
Suresh - tumse to baat karna hi bekar hai, pta nhi konsi manhoos ghadi me tumse shadi ki thi.
Sugandha ko ye sunkar bahot bura lagta hai.
Upar se Samar jo ki niche hi aa rha tha bhi unki batein sunta hai,
Samar - tau ji kya baat hai aap kyu maa ko daant rhe hai.
Suresh - tumse matlab, apni hadd me raho.
Ye kehkar vo chala jata hai apne kamre me.
Sugandha ki aankhe nam thi.
Samar - maa kya hua, dekhiye aap roiye mat pls. (Uske aansu pochte hue)
Sugandha - kuch nahi beta, pta nahi ye kyu aise ho gye hai, aaj kal to kuch jyada hi naraz rehte hai.
Samar - kya unhe mera yahan rehna pasand nahi aa rha. Agar aisa hai to main kahi aur chala jata hu.
Sugandha - ek thappad marungi na to hosh thikane aa jayenge, kyu jayega kahi aur, ye tera hi ghar hai. Khabardar jo dubara bola aisa to.
Samar - (muskurate hue) acha sorry, nahi jaunga, lekin tau ji.
Sugandha - unki tu chinta mat kar. Shayad jyada kaam ki vajah se stress me honge.
Sugandha - vaise tujhe kuch chahiye tha kya, itni raat ko, soye nahi abhi tak.
Samar - haa vo main to bas pani lene aaya tha.
Sugandha - acha, chal main deti hu.
Sugandha kitchen me jake uske liye pani bharne lagti hai. Samar ko dhyan aata hai ki yahi par usne galti se sugandha ko kiss kar liya tha.
Samar - maa
Sugandha - hmm
Samar - vo...vo...
Sugandha - are kya vo...vo... bol kya hua
Samar - I'm sorry
Sugandha - kisliye
Samar - vo din me vo galti se...
Sugandha samajh jati hai ki samar kya bol rha hai
Sugandha - it's ok beta, vo sab to bhul se ho gya. Aur mujhe bhi dhyan rkhna chahiye tha. Tum usko leke guilt me mat raho.
Samar - thanks maa
Sugandha - ye lo pani aur jakar so jao, kafi raat ho chuki hai. Sugandha jate jate samar ke forehead par ek kiss karti hai.
Raat ke gehre andhere me ek ship mumbai port par aakar rukta hai.
Aadmi - jaldi karo, sara maal time par deliver karna hai.
5-6 aadmi jaldi jaldi bade bade boxes ko ship se utar rahe the. Tabhi ek box unse galti se gir jata hai. Aur usme se fishes bahar gir jati hai.
Aadmi - haramkhoro dhang se kaam karo vrna inhi machliyo ki tarah tumhare shareer me bhi drugs bharva kar supply kar dunga.
Dusra aadmi - boss ye mast idea hai fish ke andar drugs bharkar local fish market me bech do. Sabko lagega ki fish bechi jaa rha hai,lekin khareedne vala janta hai ki use kya lena hai. Lekin boss ye to aadhi hi drugs hai.
Aadmi - baki ki 4 din baad aayengi.
Aadmi - aur ye bta vo ladkiyon ki delivery ka kya hua. 100 ladkiya hui yaa nhi.
Dusra aadmi - haa boss, 80 ladkiya ho gyi hai, 1.5 mahine baad delivery kar di jayegi.
Aadmi - chutiye, is kaam ke liye 1.5 mahina chahiye tujhe.
Dusra aadmi - kya karu boss, ladkiyo ko uthana aaj kal aasan nahi hai, upar se vo sale serial killer vale scene ke baad se police bhi hamesha high alert par rehti hai.
Aadmi - mujhe usse koi matlab nahi hai. Aur 1.5 mahine ka time nahi hai apne pass, 2 hafte me delivery chahiye apne ko.
Dusra aadmi - boss aisa mat karo, 2 hafte bahut kam hai, kam se kam 1 mahina to do.
Aadmi - chal thik hai 30 din hai tere paas, agar 30-31 hua naa to sale tujhe hi ghagra pehna ke bech dunga.
Dusra aadmi - nahi nahi boss, kaam ho jayega.
Subah sab dining table par baithe breakfast kar rahe the
Komal niche aati hai,
Komal - good morning everyone.
Sanjana - good morning ki bacchi, jaldi uthna sikh le tere chakkar me late ho jate hai hum.
Komal aati hai aur samar ki bagal ki seat par baith jati hai, lekin baithne se pehle vo sabke samne hi samar ke galo par kiss karti hai.
Suresh - ye kya harkat hai komal.
Komal - kya hua papa
Suresh - kya hua, ab tum badi ho gyi ho, ek jawan ladke ko is tarah kiss karna thik nahi hai.
Komal - par papa mene to bas...
Suresh - main behes nahi karna chahta, ab chupchap khana khao.
Suresh - (hmm...ye dono kuch jyada hi samar ke kareeb aa rhi hai, mujhe kuch jaldi karna padega. vrna kahi mujhse pehle ye inn dono ki naa maar le. Bahut kar liya acha hone ka natak...ab kuch aisa karna hoga ki ye sari property bhi meri ho jaye aur sanajana aur komal ki bhi mil jaye)
Suresh ki baat se sabka mood off tha.
Suresh baar baar sanjana ko ghur rha tha, jispar kisi ka dhyan nahi tha sivay kavita ke.
To be Continued.........
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Abhishek Kumar98
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Bahut jabardast update bhai ab Suresh aa gaya hai aur use jaldi bhi bahut hai property aur Komal, Sanjana ko apna banane ki toh wo kuch na kuch galti jarur karega dekhte hai aage kya hota Kavita hi note kar Rahi hai Suresh ko iska matlab hai yehi Suresh ka bhanda fodegiUpdate 16
'Danger Coming'
Raat ka vakt tha, sab dinner karke apne apne room me the. Keval Sugandha hall me baithi thi. Vo suresh ka wait kar rahi thi, kuch na hone par usne TV chala liya tha.
Kareeb 11:45 minute par bell baji to Sugandha ne jakar darwaja khola.
Sugandha - aa gye aap
Suresh - dikhai nahi deta samne hi khada hu.
Sugandha - maine to sirf yuhi pucha, acha andar aaiye.
Suresh - hatogi to aaunga na.
Vaise to suresh ke dil me kbhi sugandha ke liye pyar nahi tha, lekin jaise jaise vo apni aiyashiyon me dubta gya vaise vaise kamya use sugandha ke khilaf aur bhadkati gyi. Aur ab to vo frustrate ho chuka tha. Halaki suresh ke paas paise ki kami nahi thi aur agar vo sugandha se mangta to vo ek baar nahi puchti kisliye chahiye.
Lekin jab buddhi par pathar pade ho to kya kiya jaa sakta hai. Use lagta tha ki sugandha ne uski jaydad usse cheeni hai.
Suresh andar aata hai, aur sofe par aakar baith jata hai.
Sugandha use pani lakar deti hai, vo pani bina piye side me rakh deta hai.
Sugandha - khana laga du kya
Suresh - nahi khana mujhe
Sugandha - bahar se khake aaye hai kya
Suresh - tum jara chup nahi reh sakti, bol diya naa nahi khana.
Suresh - itna gussa kyu kar rhe hai mene sirf pucha.
Suresh - koi jarurat nhi hai ye jhutha fikr jatane ki. Aur ye bahar car kiski khadi hai new.
(Vahi car jo sugandha ne Samar aur Sanjana ke liye li thi college le liye)
Sugandha - ye to mene Samar ko lekar di hai.
Suresh ki ye sunkar jhante sulag gayi ki itni mehngi car sugandha ne samar ke liye li hai.
Suresh - kya? tumhara dimag kharab hai
Sugandha - kya hua?
Suresh - itni mehngi car tumne uske liye li hai, kya uske bina college nahi jaya jaa skta tha.
Sugandha - abhi pta hai naa baccho ke sath kya hua tha, vo car bhi damage ho gyi thi. 2 crore hi to gye hai.
Isi baat ko lekar suresh aur sugandha me behes hone lagi. Kuch der ye behes chali aur.
Suresh - tumse to baat karna hi bekar hai, pta nhi konsi manhoos ghadi me tumse shadi ki thi.
Sugandha ko ye sunkar bahot bura lagta hai.
Upar se Samar jo ki niche hi aa rha tha bhi unki batein sunta hai,
Samar - tau ji kya baat hai aap kyu maa ko daant rhe hai.
Suresh - tumse matlab, apni hadd me raho.
Ye kehkar vo chala jata hai apne kamre me.
Sugandha ki aankhe nam thi.
Samar - maa kya hua, dekhiye aap roiye mat pls. (Uske aansu pochte hue)
Sugandha - kuch nahi beta, pta nahi ye kyu aise ho gye hai, aaj kal to kuch jyada hi naraz rehte hai.
Samar - kya unhe mera yahan rehna pasand nahi aa rha. Agar aisa hai to main kahi aur chala jata hu.
Sugandha - ek thappad marungi na to hosh thikane aa jayenge, kyu jayega kahi aur, ye tera hi ghar hai. Khabardar jo dubara bola aisa to.
Samar - (muskurate hue) acha sorry, nahi jaunga, lekin tau ji.
Sugandha - unki tu chinta mat kar. Shayad jyada kaam ki vajah se stress me honge.
Sugandha - vaise tujhe kuch chahiye tha kya, itni raat ko, soye nahi abhi tak.
Samar - haa vo main to bas pani lene aaya tha.
Sugandha - acha, chal main deti hu.
Sugandha kitchen me jake uske liye pani bharne lagti hai. Samar ko dhyan aata hai ki yahi par usne galti se sugandha ko kiss kar liya tha.
Samar - maa
Sugandha - hmm
Samar - vo...vo...
Sugandha - are kya vo...vo... bol kya hua
Samar - I'm sorry
Sugandha - kisliye
Samar - vo din me vo galti se...
Sugandha samajh jati hai ki samar kya bol rha hai
Sugandha - it's ok beta, vo sab to bhul se ho gya. Aur mujhe bhi dhyan rkhna chahiye tha. Tum usko leke guilt me mat raho.
Samar - thanks maa
Sugandha - ye lo pani aur jakar so jao, kafi raat ho chuki hai. Sugandha jate jate samar ke forehead par ek kiss karti hai.
Raat ke gehre andhere me ek ship mumbai port par aakar rukta hai.
Aadmi - jaldi karo, sara maal time par deliver karna hai.
5-6 aadmi jaldi jaldi bade bade boxes ko ship se utar rahe the. Tabhi ek box unse galti se gir jata hai. Aur usme se fishes bahar gir jati hai.
Aadmi - haramkhoro dhang se kaam karo vrna inhi machliyo ki tarah tumhare shareer me bhi drugs bharva kar supply kar dunga.
Dusra aadmi - boss ye mast idea hai fish ke andar drugs bharkar local fish market me bech do. Sabko lagega ki fish bechi jaa rha hai,lekin khareedne vala janta hai ki use kya lena hai. Lekin boss ye to aadhi hi drugs hai.
Aadmi - baki ki 4 din baad aayengi.
Aadmi - aur ye bta vo ladkiyon ki delivery ka kya hua. 100 ladkiya hui yaa nhi.
Dusra aadmi - haa boss, 80 ladkiya ho gyi hai, 1.5 mahine baad delivery kar di jayegi.
Aadmi - chutiye, is kaam ke liye 1.5 mahina chahiye tujhe.
Dusra aadmi - kya karu boss, ladkiyo ko uthana aaj kal aasan nahi hai, upar se vo sale serial killer vale scene ke baad se police bhi hamesha high alert par rehti hai.
Aadmi - mujhe usse koi matlab nahi hai. Aur 1.5 mahine ka time nahi hai apne pass, 2 hafte me delivery chahiye apne ko.
Dusra aadmi - boss aisa mat karo, 2 hafte bahut kam hai, kam se kam 1 mahina to do.
Aadmi - chal thik hai 30 din hai tere paas, agar 30-31 hua naa to sale tujhe hi ghagra pehna ke bech dunga.
Dusra aadmi - nahi nahi boss, kaam ho jayega.
Subah sab dining table par baithe breakfast kar rahe the
Komal niche aati hai,
Komal - good morning everyone.
Sanjana - good morning ki bacchi, jaldi uthna sikh le tere chakkar me late ho jate hai hum.
Komal aati hai aur samar ki bagal ki seat par baith jati hai, lekin baithne se pehle vo sabke samne hi samar ke galo par kiss karti hai.
Suresh - ye kya harkat hai komal.
Komal - kya hua papa
Suresh - kya hua, ab tum badi ho gyi ho, ek jawan ladke ko is tarah kiss karna thik nahi hai.
Komal - par papa mene to bas...
Suresh - main behes nahi karna chahta, ab chupchap khana khao.
Suresh - (hmm...ye dono kuch jyada hi samar ke kareeb aa rhi hai, mujhe kuch jaldi karna padega. vrna kahi mujhse pehle ye inn dono ki naa maar le. Bahut kar liya acha hone ka natak...ab kuch aisa karna hoga ki ye sari property bhi meri ho jaye aur sanajana aur komal ki bhi mil jaye)
Suresh ki baat se sabka mood off tha.
Suresh baar baar sanjana ko ghur rha tha, jispar kisi ka dhyan nahi tha sivay kavita ke.
To be Continued.........
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