Desi Man
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Kya mast dhamakedaar kahani hai, pehli baar xforum par maa-bete ki itni mast kahani padh raha hoon, aisa lagta he nahi ki aap first time likh rahe ho , aap toh mujhe koi manjhe hue writer lagte ho, ye bholu aur ratna ki baatcheet sunke toh maza he aa gaya
Thank you friend.
Haan mein pehli baar nahi likh rha hu. I write professionally. Stay tuned for more and keep expressing scenarios I will try to draw inspiration from them
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Bholu(Utsuk hokar): "Kya kaam maa?"
Ratna bhi samajh jaati hai Bholu ki iccha shakti badh rhi hai, woh ab cheezo ko lekar icchuk bhi hone lga hai. Woh ek chain ki saas leti hai.
Ratna : "Tereko pta hai na subash tunay kaisey (choot ki taraf ungli krke) pyar kia tha"
Bholu : "Pyar? Mein toh toffee nikal rha tha na maa?"
Ratna : "Haan wahi mere bholu, jab bhi tu isko jeebh se chooyega toh usko pyar hee kehte hai aur aaj tunay khuub saara pyar kia isko"
Bholu ab bhi nahi samajh paa rha tha ki ye sab kya hota hai?
Ratna : "Bholu dekh jaise mein roz aati hu na dukaan sey toh mein thaq jaati hu tu mere pair dbata hai fir mujhey aaram aata hai aisi hee kabhi kabhi meri munia bhi thaq jaati hai jisko keval jeebh se dbate hai aur woh firse theek ho jaati hai usme dard band ho jaata hai"
Bholu : "Accha maa, maa subah tera dard band ho gya tha nahi hua tha toh teri munia ko firse dba du"
Ratna ye sunkar hich kicha gyi. Usko andar ek garmi mehsoos hui. Bholu ne toh puri masumiyat se bola tha, woh toh apni maa ko dard mein nahi dekh skta tha lekin Ratna ko ek second ke liye lga maano Bholu bholepan mein nahi balki gandi baatein bol rha hai.
Ratna(mann mein) : "Nahi Bholu aisa nahi soch payega, mein bhi kya kya soch rhi hu, buddhi bhrasht na ho jaaye meri bhagwaan"
Ratna : "Haan beta mera dard bnd ho gya tha tunay itne pyar se dbaya usko,"
Bholu : "Haan maa tu btana tunay pehle kyu ni btaya teri munia mein dard hota hai mein toh pair dbata hee hu lge haath usko bhi dba dunga."
Ratna apne bete ki masumiyat par fida tha, uska beta jaanta hee nahi tha ki woh apni maa ki choot chaat rha tha naaki koi sewa kar rha tha. Ek tarah ki sewa toh hai ye lekin aisi jisko bahar nahi bta sakte. Ratna soch rhi thee ki uska Balwan usko ek second bhi dard mein nahi dekh skta.
Ratna : "Haan haan beta tu chinta na ley ab dard hoga toh dba dungi"
Bholu : "Ruk maa tu baad mein btana ek baar mujhey teri munia par jeebh lgane dey vrna tu dard mein hee rhegi."
Ratna usko laakh mna karti hai par Bholu baat par atak jaaye toh atak hee jaata tha. Ratna usko samjhati hai lekin woh ek nahi maanta. Ant mein Ratna hee apna sir pakad leti hai.
Ratna(sir pakadkar) : "Le tu dbale meri munia ko, tu baat toh maanta nahi hai itna bda ho gya hai lekin teri zidd abhi tak baccho waali hai, le dba ley"
Ye bolkar Ratna bistar par seedhi lait jaati hai aur apne pair faila leti hai. Iss baar Bholu khuud hee smjh jata hai aur uske pairo ke beech lait jata hai. Ratna apne pair Bholu ke kandho par rkh deti hai. Ab nazara kuuch aisa tha ki Ratna laiti hui thee uske pair Bholu ke kandho par thay aur Bholu uske pairo ke beech laita hua tha.
Bholu : "Maa"
Ratna : "Haan?"
Bholu : "Toffee kha hai maa?"
Ratna : "Bewkoof itni bdia cheez tere saamne rkhi hai tujhey iske saath bhi toffee chahiye, ye ladka bhi na, shareer bhagwaan ne pahalwan ka dia aur buddhi gadhe ki, ab tere liye toffee kha se lau", Ratna se ruka nahi ja rha tha aur yha uska beta toffee ki baatein kr rha tha, swabhavik hai ki ye toh hona hee tha.
Ratna : "Aaj bina toffee ke dard khatam krde Balwaan, teri maa ki munia mei boht dard hai", Ratna karhane ki acting karne lagti hai.
Bholu uski acting samajh nahi pata aur iss baat ko sochkar ki uski maa dard mein hai woh apna dhyan uski choot par lga deta hai. Bholu bde dhyan se aur aaram se uski choot mein apni jeebh ghuma rha hota hai.
Ratna(sisakte huye): "Aah aaram se balwan, mere balwaan aaram sey, aisi hee beta mza aa rha hai dard khtm ho jayega aisi hee karta reh"
Bholu usi dheemi gati ke saath Ratna ka daana masalta rehta hai, Ratna ki choot mein jeebh kisi chakki ki tarah chal rhi thee. Ratna ko madhoshi aa rhi thee pichli baar toh woh khuud ko rok rhi thee lekin iss baar usne aisa kuuch nahi socha tha. Ratna Bholu ke baal pakad rhi thee, mann karta tha ki woh Bholu ka sir apni choot mein puri tarah dba ley lekin ab bhi woh khudko roke huye thee.
Bholu apni jeebh se puri kahani likhe ja rha tha aur uss kahani mein uski maa ki aadakari dekhne layak thee. Ratna ki bhari bhari jangho ka wazan koi aam aadmi toh utha hee nahi sakta tha, kyuki Bholu ki kad-kathi ek pahalwaan jaisi thee uske liye Ratna ka wazan uthana muskil nahi tha. Ratna 5'5'' ki gori chitti aurat thee, bhari bharkam gaand aur vishal kaay chuchay liye woh kisi haseena se kam nahi lagti thee. Umar bhaley hee 44 thee lekin shareer mein jawani thee. Wahi uska beta Bholu 22 saal ka jawaan ladka tha, 6'1'' ka Bholu kad kathi mein pehelwaan tha, uske liye Ratna ko uthana baaye haath ka khel tha. Ratna ko pta tha ki Bholu ke shareer mein boht jaan hai isiliye woh bhi acche se pair lapet kar uske upar laiti hui thee.
Ratna ki aakhein bnd thee, choot mein se paani aur Bholu ki jeebh se pure kamre mein awaaz ho rhi thee. Beech beech mein Ratna siskaria chorr deti, jisko Bholu ye samajhta ki uski maa ko abhi bhi dard ho rha tha. Aisi hee 8-10 minute hone ke baad Ratna ke pair akadne lgey, pair akadte akadte uski choot ne jharna khol dia. Ratna ek dm se Bholu ke muuh par jhad gyi aur dheeli pad gyi. Ratna ki saas fuul rhi thee aur halki halki usko need bhi aa rhi thee. Anand ki iss raftaar se uska shareer pura dheela pad chuka tha aur maano kuuch minute ke liye toh uske andar hilne ki bhi shakti nahi thee. Bholu ko lga ki uski maa so gyi hai toh woh bhi uske pairo se nikalkar uske barabar mein lait gya.
Ratna : "Bholu chal 2 cup chai bna la, shareer mein thoddi akadan hai woh bh chali jayegi"
Bholu uthkar chai bnane chla jata hai. Ratna firsey yehi soch rhi thee usne 4 ghnte pehle hee sochta tha ki woh abse Bholu ke saath kuch nahi karegi aur usne firsey mukh chodan krwa hee lia. Ratna apni stithi par taras kha rhi thee, lekin iss baat se khush thee ki Bholu ye baat apne tak hee rkhega kisi ko btayega nahi aur ab woh koshish kregi ki aisa kuuch har giz na ho.
Bholu uske liye chai bna lata hai. Ratna chai pee rhi thee aur apne hee khyalo mein khoyi thee. Ratna ke sir hawas bhi jagah bna rhi thee par uska dil nahi maan rha tha. Dimaag se aurat aur dil se maa ka mail kuuch baith nahi rha tha. Ratna bechari har waqt yahi sochti ki usko yhi par ruk jana chahiye samaj kya kahega lekin fir usko usi samaj se nafrat hoti jo uske saath kabhi nahi khda tha. Ratna mazboot aurat thee lekin zindagi ke utar chadaav dekh kar woh samaj ka chintan karna kam kar chuki thee. Samaj ke liye aaj jo galat hai kal woh sahi ho jata hai.
Ratna ka dimaag yehi keh rha tha ki band kamro mein kya hota hai kisi ko kya pta aur dunia kaun hee hoti hai sahi galat ka faisla karne waali?
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Bholu(Utsuk hokar): "Kya kaam maa?"
Ratna bhi samajh jaati hai Bholu ki iccha shakti badh rhi hai, woh ab cheezo ko lekar icchuk bhi hone lga hai. Woh ek chain ki saas leti hai.
Ratna : "Tereko pta hai na subash tunay kaisey (choot ki taraf ungli krke) pyar kia tha"
Bholu : "Pyar? Mein toh toffee nikal rha tha na maa?"
Ratna : "Haan wahi mere bholu, jab bhi tu isko jeebh se chooyega toh usko pyar hee kehte hai aur aaj tunay khuub saara pyar kia isko"
Bholu ab bhi nahi samajh paa rha tha ki ye sab kya hota hai?
Ratna : "Bholu dekh jaise mein roz aati hu na dukaan sey toh mein thaq jaati hu tu mere pair dbata hai fir mujhey aaram aata hai aisi hee kabhi kabhi meri munia bhi thaq jaati hai jisko keval jeebh se dbate hai aur woh firse theek ho jaati hai usme dard band ho jaata hai"
Bholu : "Accha maa, maa subah tera dard band ho gya tha nahi hua tha toh teri munia ko firse dba du"
Ratna ye sunkar hich kicha gyi. Usko andar ek garmi mehsoos hui. Bholu ne toh puri masumiyat se bola tha, woh toh apni maa ko dard mein nahi dekh skta tha lekin Ratna ko ek second ke liye lga maano Bholu bholepan mein nahi balki gandi baatein bol rha hai.
Ratna(mann mein) : "Nahi Bholu aisa nahi soch payega, mein bhi kya kya soch rhi hu, buddhi bhrasht na ho jaaye meri bhagwaan"
Ratna : "Haan beta mera dard bnd ho gya tha tunay itne pyar se dbaya usko,"
Bholu : "Haan maa tu btana tunay pehle kyu ni btaya teri munia mein dard hota hai mein toh pair dbata hee hu lge haath usko bhi dba dunga."
Ratna apne bete ki masumiyat par fida tha, uska beta jaanta hee nahi tha ki woh apni maa ki choot chaat rha tha naaki koi sewa kar rha tha. Ek tarah ki sewa toh hai ye lekin aisi jisko bahar nahi bta sakte. Ratna soch rhi thee ki uska Balwan usko ek second bhi dard mein nahi dekh skta.
Ratna : "Haan haan beta tu chinta na ley ab dard hoga toh dba dungi"
Bholu : "Ruk maa tu baad mein btana ek baar mujhey teri munia par jeebh lgane dey vrna tu dard mein hee rhegi."
Ratna usko laakh mna karti hai par Bholu baat par atak jaaye toh atak hee jaata tha. Ratna usko samjhati hai lekin woh ek nahi maanta. Ant mein Ratna hee apna sir pakad leti hai.
Ratna(sir pakadkar) : "Le tu dbale meri munia ko, tu baat toh maanta nahi hai itna bda ho gya hai lekin teri zidd abhi tak baccho waali hai, le dba ley"
Ye bolkar Ratna bistar par seedhi lait jaati hai aur apne pair faila leti hai. Iss baar Bholu khuud hee smjh jata hai aur uske pairo ke beech lait jata hai. Ratna apne pair Bholu ke kandho par rkh deti hai. Ab nazara kuuch aisa tha ki Ratna laiti hui thee uske pair Bholu ke kandho par thay aur Bholu uske pairo ke beech laita hua tha.
Bholu : "Maa"
Ratna : "Haan?"
Bholu : "Toffee kha hai maa?"
Ratna : "Bewkoof itni bdia cheez tere saamne rkhi hai tujhey iske saath bhi toffee chahiye, ye ladka bhi na, shareer bhagwaan ne pahalwan ka dia aur buddhi gadhe ki, ab tere liye toffee kha se lau", Ratna se ruka nahi ja rha tha aur yha uska beta toffee ki baatein kr rha tha, swabhavik hai ki ye toh hona hee tha.
Ratna : "Aaj bina toffee ke dard khatam krde Balwaan, teri maa ki munia mei boht dard hai", Ratna karhane ki acting karne lagti hai.
Bholu uski acting samajh nahi pata aur iss baat ko sochkar ki uski maa dard mein hai woh apna dhyan uski choot par lga deta hai. Bholu bde dhyan se aur aaram se uski choot mein apni jeebh ghuma rha hota hai.
Ratna(sisakte huye): "Aah aaram se balwan, mere balwaan aaram sey, aisi hee beta mza aa rha hai dard khtm ho jayega aisi hee karta reh"
Bholu usi dheemi gati ke saath Ratna ka daana masalta rehta hai, Ratna ki choot mein jeebh kisi chakki ki tarah chal rhi thee. Ratna ko madhoshi aa rhi thee pichli baar toh woh khuud ko rok rhi thee lekin iss baar usne aisa kuuch nahi socha tha. Ratna Bholu ke baal pakad rhi thee, mann karta tha ki woh Bholu ka sir apni choot mein puri tarah dba ley lekin ab bhi woh khudko roke huye thee.
Bholu apni jeebh se puri kahani likhe ja rha tha aur uss kahani mein uski maa ki aadakari dekhne layak thee. Ratna ki bhari bhari jangho ka wazan koi aam aadmi toh utha hee nahi sakta tha, kyuki Bholu ki kad-kathi ek pahalwaan jaisi thee uske liye Ratna ka wazan uthana muskil nahi tha. Ratna 5'5'' ki gori chitti aurat thee, bhari bharkam gaand aur vishal kaay chuchay liye woh kisi haseena se kam nahi lagti thee. Umar bhaley hee 44 thee lekin shareer mein jawani thee. Wahi uska beta Bholu 22 saal ka jawaan ladka tha, 6'1'' ka Bholu kad kathi mein pehelwaan tha, uske liye Ratna ko uthana baaye haath ka khel tha. Ratna ko pta tha ki Bholu ke shareer mein boht jaan hai isiliye woh bhi acche se pair lapet kar uske upar laiti hui thee.
Ratna ki aakhein bnd thee, choot mein se paani aur Bholu ki jeebh se pure kamre mein awaaz ho rhi thee. Beech beech mein Ratna siskaria chorr deti, jisko Bholu ye samajhta ki uski maa ko abhi bhi dard ho rha tha. Aisi hee 8-10 minute hone ke baad Ratna ke pair akadne lgey, pair akadte akadte uski choot ne jharna khol dia. Ratna ek dm se Bholu ke muuh par jhad gyi aur dheeli pad gyi. Ratna ki saas fuul rhi thee aur halki halki usko need bhi aa rhi thee. Anand ki iss raftaar se uska shareer pura dheela pad chuka tha aur maano kuuch minute ke liye toh uske andar hilne ki bhi shakti nahi thee. Bholu ko lga ki uski maa so gyi hai toh woh bhi uske pairo se nikalkar uske barabar mein lait gya.
Ratna : "Bholu chal 2 cup chai bna la, shareer mein thoddi akadan hai woh bh chali jayegi"
Bholu uthkar chai bnane chla jata hai. Ratna firsey yehi soch rhi thee usne 4 ghnte pehle hee sochta tha ki woh abse Bholu ke saath kuch nahi karegi aur usne firsey mukh chodan krwa hee lia. Ratna apni stithi par taras kha rhi thee, lekin iss baat se khush thee ki Bholu ye baat apne tak hee rkhega kisi ko btayega nahi aur ab woh koshish kregi ki aisa kuuch har giz na ho.
Bholu uske liye chai bna lata hai. Ratna chai pee rhi thee aur apne hee khyalo mein khoyi thee. Ratna ke sir hawas bhi jagah bna rhi thee par uska dil nahi maan rha tha. Dimaag se aurat aur dil se maa ka mail kuuch baith nahi rha tha. Ratna bechari har waqt yahi sochti ki usko yhi par ruk jana chahiye samaj kya kahega lekin fir usko usi samaj se nafrat hoti jo uske saath kabhi nahi khda tha. Ratna mazboot aurat thee lekin zindagi ke utar chadaav dekh kar woh samaj ka chintan karna kam kar chuki thee. Samaj ke liye aaj jo galat hai kal woh sahi ho jata hai.
Ratna ka dimaag yehi keh rha tha ki band kamro mein kya hota hai kisi ko kya pta aur dunia kaun hee hoti hai sahi galat ka faisla karne waali?
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Update 5
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Yahi chintan mein uska puri shaam aur raat nikal gyi. Bholu bhi ghar ke kaam puray krne mein magan tha, Ratna bhi 2 baar ke mukh chodan se khush thee usme boht kuuch krne ki aag thee lekin sharam ka parda usko roke baitha tha. Uska dimaag daleel toh de rha tha par dil nahi qubool kar rha tha. Isi chintan mein dono maa bete bistar par laite thay parantu baat nahi kar rhe thay. Ratna ka dhyan barabar mein laitey Bholu par gya aur Bholu bhi kuuch soch rha tha, Ratna Bholu ko sochte huye kam hee dekhti thee isliye uska dhyan apne bete par kendrit ho gya
Ratna : "Ae Balwaan kya soch rha hai?"
Balwan : "Kuuch nahi maa,"
Ratna : "Arre btana kya soch rha hai? bde dhyan se deewar dekh rha hu"
Balwan : "Maa agar mein ameer hota toh tujhey sab kuuch khareed kar de deta, fir hme dukaan aur kheto mein itni mehnat na karni pdti"
Ratna: "Tera paise ka rona fir shuru ho gya, abhi bhi kaunsa hm bhookey mar rhe hai? Kya kami hai bta? Tujhey bola hai na kam dimaag chalaya kar", Ratna ye boli pr fil sambhal gyi, "Mera matlab ki dimaag sahi cheezon par lgaya kar paise vaise ka mt soch, hm bhi ameer hai"
Balwan : "Hm bhi ameer hai? Kaisey? Maa tere pass khajana hai kya?"
Ratna : "Khajana toh hai beta, lekin tu uss khajane ki tijori nahi khol payega"
Balwan : "Kyu maa? Tu bta boht jaan hai mere mein, koi bhi tijori khol dunga mein"
Ratna(haskar): "Bewkoof tu nahi smjhega ye waali tijori pyar se khulti hai zabardasti nahi."
Balwan firse apni maa ko dekh rha tha usse koi baat nahi samajh aa rhi thee.
Ratna : "Acchal chal soja ab subah dukaan jaldi kholni hai, boht log aayengey samaan lene"
Ye sunkar Bholu so jata hai aur uski maa bhi neend mein chali jaati hai.
Agli Subah dono maa bete subah jaldi jaldi dukaan kholne chale jaate hai. Dukaan par bheed thee, aisa nahi hai aas pass dukaane nahi thee par Ratna aur Balwaan ka swabhav itna ghula mila tha ki log unse hee lena pasand krte thay baakio ki hamdardi thee ki ek bechari widhwa aur uske dimaagi kamzor bete ka ghar chal jayega. Ratna ko logon ki ye baatein acchi nahi lgti thee par jin baato se ghar chalte hai unko naa chahte huye bhi maan lena chahiye aur yehi Ratna ne kia. Bholu jitna seedha Ratna utni hee tezz thee.
Saara samaan baatne ke baad kareeban subah 8 bjey dono maa bete free huye. Tabhi dukaan par Hamid mia aaye. Hamid mia Rani khet mein hee carpenter thay, swabhaav se milan saar aadmi khari baat krne waale, zindagi mein khoob izzat kamayi lekin hmesha kismat itni kharab ki paise na kma paaye. Hamid mia ne zindagi bhar mehnat kari thee sabhi unki izzat karte thay ek wahi thay jo akeli aurat ka dukh samajhte thay kyuki unki khudi beti Fatima bhi boht kam umar mein akeli ho gyi thee, uska pati mar jaata toh accha tha lekin woh usse choorkar bhaag gya tha. Pura gao hee yehi kehta tha ki uss ladki ke saath boht galat hua. Jawani mein hee Fatima apne pati ka ghar chorr Delhi se vapis apne abbu ke ghar Rani Khet aa gyi thee aur saath mein apne pet mein ek bcchi bhi lekar aayi.
Hamid Mia aaj kareeban 62 saal ke thay umar se zyada hee lagte thay par insaan acche thay. Unki beti Fatima bhi ab kareeban 42 saal ki ho gyi thee jo Ratna ki acchi dost bhi thee, zyada milna julna tha nahi lekin dono ne ek jaisi dikaatein dekhi thee toh ek ham dardi unn dono mein ek dusre ke liye thee. Fatima ki bacchi jisko pet mein lekar woh apne ghar vapis aayi thee aaj woh bhi badi ho gyi thee.
Ratna : "Kaisey ho Hamid chacha, aaj kaisey aana hua"
Hamid : "Arre Ratna bitia hm badia, tu aur tera beta itni dua dete ho mujhey kya hoga? Accha tera Balwaan kahan hai dikh nahi rha"
Ratna : "Balwan toh samaan lene pass ke gao gya hai, subah subah hee sab bik gya dukaan par firse samaan lgana hai kal fir bekna hai"
Hamid : "Oh ho, kab tak aayega woh?"
Ratna : "Woh toh shaam tak aayega chacha, aap batao kaisey aana hua?"
Hamid : "Meri chotti bitia hai na Nargis(Fatima ki beti) kal se woh college ki padhai shuru krne waali hai, aaj isliye socha kuuch accha bnaya jaaye toh raashan paani lene aa chla, Bholu toh hai nahi samaan ghar kaun pohchayega"
Ratna : "Arre Chacha Nargis hmari bhi bitia hee hai, aap samaan likhwa do mein pohcha dungi shaam tak"
Hamid : "Haan bitia boht bhla hoga tera, ye karvadey shaam ko usko kuuch accha khilana hai accha tu bhijwana ye le list abhi mein chalta hu baaki kaam krke aata hu"
Ratna ne Hamia Chacha se list leli aur woh samaan usne ek pinni mein pack kr dia. Bholu toh shaam tak aane wala tha aur dukaan par baithna ab bekar hee tha toh usne socha ki woh ye samaan unke ghar khuud dekar ghar vapis chli jayegi. Hamid mia toh jaldi mein thay par koi ni usne socha kisi buddhe se samaan kya uthwana, Ratna ke katta uthaya aur chaldi Hamid mia ke ghar ki taraf. Pahad se thodda utarkar Ratna Hamid mia ke ghar ki taraf chli gyi. Hamid mia ka ghar baado mein andar ki taraf tha, jagah boht hee par zyada kuuch bna nahi tha, ek kaccha ghar hee tha 2 kamro ka jo khda tha side mein, jisme Hamid unki beti Fatima aur uski beti Nargis rehte thay. Ratna ne socha ki ye samaan dene ke bahane Fatima aur Nargis se mil lia jaaye. Ratna ne samaan ka katta ghar ke peechay lga dia taaki koi dekh na ley aur chorri na krley. Hamid Chacha ke baski nahi hai dobara samaan lena aur nahi Ratna ke baski muft mein samaan baatna so durgatna na hee toh hee accha, kaun hee bharpai karega. Ratna ne peechay se katta lga toh dia aur peechay hee angwaade se usne ghar mein jana theek samjha.
Ratna bahar chappal utarkar andar toh aa gyi, Ratna dusra darwaaja kholkar andar hee jaane waali thee ki tabhi uski nazar khidki se bed par padi toh uski aakhein hee bahar aane ko ho gyi. Uske dil ki raftaar tezz ho padi. Andar ka nazara dekh kar usko chakkar se aane lagey.
Andar chotte se kamre mein Hamid Chacha puray nange laitey thay. Fatima unki beti unke upar bina kapdo ke kisi maharani ki tarah baithi aur Hamid mia ka sir apni poti Nargis ki godh mein tha. Ratna ka galaa sukh gya, usne isse pehle aisa kuuch nahi dekha tha. Woh bhi nahi smjh rhi thee ki usko itna darr kyu lag rha tha. Ratna chup chaap uski khidki mein se jhakti rhi.
Fatima ka jaisa naam tha vaisa thee shareer, Fatima 42 ki thee aur uska sharrer bhi vaisa thee. Bhari bharkam shareer sudool gaand aur gora chehra, agar koi aadmi usko dekh le toh kabhi usse duur na jaaye. Fatima ki beti Nargis usse bhi awwal thee. Nargis ka husan ptla tha, shareer mein agaadi pichai thodddi kam thee parantu uska bhi bhavisya sunehra hee tha. Nargis ke nain nakhas kisi vishwa sundari jaise thay. Hamid mia pure nange laitey thay Fatima unke upar baithi thee, Hamid mia ka sir Nargis ki godhi mein tha aur Nargis unke baalo mein haath fair rhi thee. Nargis aur Fatima dono ne hi kapdey kahi duur fenkey huye thay.
Ratna ko samajh nahi aa rha tha ye kya ho rha hai lekin uska shareer wha se jana bhi nahi chah rha tha. Nargis apne nana ke sir par haath fair rhi thee aur uski maa Fatima bhi kuuch bol rhi thee. Abhi tak toh Ratna ke kaano mein uske hee dil ki awaaz aa rhi thee lekin jaise jaisey uska dimaag shant hona shuru hua usko unki baatein sunai deni shuru ho gyi.
Fatima : "Abbu bahir ka darwaza dhyan se lga dia tha? Pichli baar khurram chacha ne dekho lia tha, allah bachaye aisi dikkat sey"
Hamid Chacha Apni do unglio se nargia ki baayi chuchi dba rhe thay aur baari baari masal rhe thay. Nargis ki chuchi aur chuchia dono hee chotti aur nazuk lag rhi thee.
Hamid : "Chinta kyu karti hai bitia khurram aur uski khatoon ki vaise hee koi nahi maanta, usne agar bahir kisi ko bola na ki Hamid mia apni hee dukhtar(beti) ke saath humbistar thay koi yakeen nahi manega, tu itni pareshani sir na ley apne gate bnd hai koi ni aa rha hai aaj haan bas shaam ko Bholu aayega samaan lekar ya uski maa tab ki tab dekhengey"
Fatima Hamid ke upar baithi thee aur apne shareer ka nichla bhaag apne abbu ke pait par ragad rhi thee, Jab jab Fatima thoddi aage hoti tab tab Hamid mia ke aand Ratna ko dikhte, Hamid mia khuud bhi saawale thay par dono bitia, poti ekdm gori thee. Dudh jaisa rang, Hamid mia bhi pehle gore hee thay itne samay kisani aur mehnat majdoori kar kar ke kaale pad chukay thay.
Fatima : "Abbu tumhey ni lgta ye Ratna bhi apne bete ke saath humbistar hoti hogi?"
Fatima ke muuh se aisi baat sunkar Ratna gusse mein aa gyi. Ratna ko jo darr tha wahi baat ho rhi thee lekin mze ki baat ye thee ki Ratna ne aaj tak kuuch bhi aisa nahi kia tha, haan 2 baar usne apne bete ke saath kuuch toh kia tha lekin hum bistar toh woh aaj tak kisi ke saath nahi hui. Ratna ka paara chadh rha tha lekin woh asal mein janna chahti thee ye dunia uske baare mein kya sochti hai?
Hamid : "Lgta kya hai hme toh pura yakeen hai Ratna ki gaand itni bahar khuudsey toh nahi aayegi na, aur uska ladka bhi dimaag se kamzor hai kya pta chalega, Bholu ka lund gheeye jaisa hai, kheto mein moot rha hai tha ek baar mere saath tab dekha tha, itna bda lund Ratna bina liye toh gaand fula nahi legi."
Ye sunkar Ratna ka chehra laal ho gya woh pair patak-kar peechay se bahar aa gyi. Uski saas ful rhi thee, jis Hamid ko woh apna chacha smjhti thee wohi chacha uske baare mein aisa bolega usne kabhi na socha tha. Ratna khud ko kos rhi thee ki jo log parivar mein hum bistar hote hai wohi uske jaiso ka mzaak bna rhe hai. Ratna ne thodda dheeraj dikhaya aur firse wahi khidki ke pass chali gyi unki baatein firse sunne.
Fatima : "Abbu kya hee kare bechari, itni mehnat se paala posa hai ladka, aur koi parivar mein hai nahi toh woh kya hee kare bechari, Ratna shayd iss gao ki sabse acchi aurat hai, hmari hee kitni mdad karti hai apni nargis ko woh kabhi kabhi suit dilwa deti hai, ye koi bhla kam hai kya? Lekin acchi aurat hone ka ye matlab thoddi hai uski koi jismani zarurat nahi hai, na bhai na mujhey toh iss baat mein koi sujh nahi lagti"
Fatima ab bhi apne baap ke upar baithey ragde diye ja rhi thee.
Hamid : "Kyu bitia Nargis, tumhey nahi lgta Bholu aur Ratna band kamro mein kuuch karte hongey", ye bolkar Hamid Nargis ki chuchi dba deta hai.
Nargis(Chilla kar): "Aah nanu kya kar rhe ho, aaram se chuchi nikal hee jayegi."
Hamid : "Arre meri bitia, tu toh jawaan jitna beecho jha se beecho ras hee niklega, tu bta Ratna chachi lagta hai kya karti hongi?"
Nargis : "Nanu ammi mein hoti aur mera beta itna hatta gatta hota mein toh lund se muuh hee na htati"
Ye sunkar Hamid aur Fatima has padte hai, aur ye baat sunkar Ratna ka maatha garam ho rha tha. Aisa lg rha tha usko bukhaar aa rho, usko pta nahi chal rha tha ki ye andar kya ho rha hai?
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Yahi chintan mein uska puri shaam aur raat nikal gyi. Bholu bhi ghar ke kaam puray krne mein magan tha, Ratna bhi 2 baar ke mukh chodan se khush thee usme boht kuuch krne ki aag thee lekin sharam ka parda usko roke baitha tha. Uska dimaag daleel toh de rha tha par dil nahi qubool kar rha tha. Isi chintan mein dono maa bete bistar par laite thay parantu baat nahi kar rhe thay. Ratna ka dhyan barabar mein laitey Bholu par gya aur Bholu bhi kuuch soch rha tha, Ratna Bholu ko sochte huye kam hee dekhti thee isliye uska dhyan apne bete par kendrit ho gya
Ratna : "Ae Balwaan kya soch rha hai?"
Balwan : "Kuuch nahi maa,"
Ratna : "Arre btana kya soch rha hai? bde dhyan se deewar dekh rha hu"
Balwan : "Maa agar mein ameer hota toh tujhey sab kuuch khareed kar de deta, fir hme dukaan aur kheto mein itni mehnat na karni pdti"
Ratna: "Tera paise ka rona fir shuru ho gya, abhi bhi kaunsa hm bhookey mar rhe hai? Kya kami hai bta? Tujhey bola hai na kam dimaag chalaya kar", Ratna ye boli pr fil sambhal gyi, "Mera matlab ki dimaag sahi cheezon par lgaya kar paise vaise ka mt soch, hm bhi ameer hai"
Balwan : "Hm bhi ameer hai? Kaisey? Maa tere pass khajana hai kya?"
Ratna : "Khajana toh hai beta, lekin tu uss khajane ki tijori nahi khol payega"
Balwan : "Kyu maa? Tu bta boht jaan hai mere mein, koi bhi tijori khol dunga mein"
Ratna(haskar): "Bewkoof tu nahi smjhega ye waali tijori pyar se khulti hai zabardasti nahi."
Balwan firse apni maa ko dekh rha tha usse koi baat nahi samajh aa rhi thee.
Ratna : "Acchal chal soja ab subah dukaan jaldi kholni hai, boht log aayengey samaan lene"
Ye sunkar Bholu so jata hai aur uski maa bhi neend mein chali jaati hai.
Agli Subah dono maa bete subah jaldi jaldi dukaan kholne chale jaate hai. Dukaan par bheed thee, aisa nahi hai aas pass dukaane nahi thee par Ratna aur Balwaan ka swabhav itna ghula mila tha ki log unse hee lena pasand krte thay baakio ki hamdardi thee ki ek bechari widhwa aur uske dimaagi kamzor bete ka ghar chal jayega. Ratna ko logon ki ye baatein acchi nahi lgti thee par jin baato se ghar chalte hai unko naa chahte huye bhi maan lena chahiye aur yehi Ratna ne kia. Bholu jitna seedha Ratna utni hee tezz thee.
Saara samaan baatne ke baad kareeban subah 8 bjey dono maa bete free huye. Tabhi dukaan par Hamid mia aaye. Hamid mia Rani khet mein hee carpenter thay, swabhaav se milan saar aadmi khari baat krne waale, zindagi mein khoob izzat kamayi lekin hmesha kismat itni kharab ki paise na kma paaye. Hamid mia ne zindagi bhar mehnat kari thee sabhi unki izzat karte thay ek wahi thay jo akeli aurat ka dukh samajhte thay kyuki unki khudi beti Fatima bhi boht kam umar mein akeli ho gyi thee, uska pati mar jaata toh accha tha lekin woh usse choorkar bhaag gya tha. Pura gao hee yehi kehta tha ki uss ladki ke saath boht galat hua. Jawani mein hee Fatima apne pati ka ghar chorr Delhi se vapis apne abbu ke ghar Rani Khet aa gyi thee aur saath mein apne pet mein ek bcchi bhi lekar aayi.
Hamid Mia aaj kareeban 62 saal ke thay umar se zyada hee lagte thay par insaan acche thay. Unki beti Fatima bhi ab kareeban 42 saal ki ho gyi thee jo Ratna ki acchi dost bhi thee, zyada milna julna tha nahi lekin dono ne ek jaisi dikaatein dekhi thee toh ek ham dardi unn dono mein ek dusre ke liye thee. Fatima ki bacchi jisko pet mein lekar woh apne ghar vapis aayi thee aaj woh bhi badi ho gyi thee.
Ratna : "Kaisey ho Hamid chacha, aaj kaisey aana hua"
Hamid : "Arre Ratna bitia hm badia, tu aur tera beta itni dua dete ho mujhey kya hoga? Accha tera Balwaan kahan hai dikh nahi rha"
Ratna : "Balwan toh samaan lene pass ke gao gya hai, subah subah hee sab bik gya dukaan par firse samaan lgana hai kal fir bekna hai"
Hamid : "Oh ho, kab tak aayega woh?"
Ratna : "Woh toh shaam tak aayega chacha, aap batao kaisey aana hua?"
Hamid : "Meri chotti bitia hai na Nargis(Fatima ki beti) kal se woh college ki padhai shuru krne waali hai, aaj isliye socha kuuch accha bnaya jaaye toh raashan paani lene aa chla, Bholu toh hai nahi samaan ghar kaun pohchayega"
Ratna : "Arre Chacha Nargis hmari bhi bitia hee hai, aap samaan likhwa do mein pohcha dungi shaam tak"
Hamid : "Haan bitia boht bhla hoga tera, ye karvadey shaam ko usko kuuch accha khilana hai accha tu bhijwana ye le list abhi mein chalta hu baaki kaam krke aata hu"
Ratna ne Hamia Chacha se list leli aur woh samaan usne ek pinni mein pack kr dia. Bholu toh shaam tak aane wala tha aur dukaan par baithna ab bekar hee tha toh usne socha ki woh ye samaan unke ghar khuud dekar ghar vapis chli jayegi. Hamid mia toh jaldi mein thay par koi ni usne socha kisi buddhe se samaan kya uthwana, Ratna ke katta uthaya aur chaldi Hamid mia ke ghar ki taraf. Pahad se thodda utarkar Ratna Hamid mia ke ghar ki taraf chli gyi. Hamid mia ka ghar baado mein andar ki taraf tha, jagah boht hee par zyada kuuch bna nahi tha, ek kaccha ghar hee tha 2 kamro ka jo khda tha side mein, jisme Hamid unki beti Fatima aur uski beti Nargis rehte thay. Ratna ne socha ki ye samaan dene ke bahane Fatima aur Nargis se mil lia jaaye. Ratna ne samaan ka katta ghar ke peechay lga dia taaki koi dekh na ley aur chorri na krley. Hamid Chacha ke baski nahi hai dobara samaan lena aur nahi Ratna ke baski muft mein samaan baatna so durgatna na hee toh hee accha, kaun hee bharpai karega. Ratna ne peechay se katta lga toh dia aur peechay hee angwaade se usne ghar mein jana theek samjha.
Ratna bahar chappal utarkar andar toh aa gyi, Ratna dusra darwaaja kholkar andar hee jaane waali thee ki tabhi uski nazar khidki se bed par padi toh uski aakhein hee bahar aane ko ho gyi. Uske dil ki raftaar tezz ho padi. Andar ka nazara dekh kar usko chakkar se aane lagey.
Andar chotte se kamre mein Hamid Chacha puray nange laitey thay. Fatima unki beti unke upar bina kapdo ke kisi maharani ki tarah baithi aur Hamid mia ka sir apni poti Nargis ki godh mein tha. Ratna ka galaa sukh gya, usne isse pehle aisa kuuch nahi dekha tha. Woh bhi nahi smjh rhi thee ki usko itna darr kyu lag rha tha. Ratna chup chaap uski khidki mein se jhakti rhi.
Fatima ka jaisa naam tha vaisa thee shareer, Fatima 42 ki thee aur uska sharrer bhi vaisa thee. Bhari bharkam shareer sudool gaand aur gora chehra, agar koi aadmi usko dekh le toh kabhi usse duur na jaaye. Fatima ki beti Nargis usse bhi awwal thee. Nargis ka husan ptla tha, shareer mein agaadi pichai thodddi kam thee parantu uska bhi bhavisya sunehra hee tha. Nargis ke nain nakhas kisi vishwa sundari jaise thay. Hamid mia pure nange laitey thay Fatima unke upar baithi thee, Hamid mia ka sir Nargis ki godhi mein tha aur Nargis unke baalo mein haath fair rhi thee. Nargis aur Fatima dono ne hi kapdey kahi duur fenkey huye thay.
Ratna ko samajh nahi aa rha tha ye kya ho rha hai lekin uska shareer wha se jana bhi nahi chah rha tha. Nargis apne nana ke sir par haath fair rhi thee aur uski maa Fatima bhi kuuch bol rhi thee. Abhi tak toh Ratna ke kaano mein uske hee dil ki awaaz aa rhi thee lekin jaise jaisey uska dimaag shant hona shuru hua usko unki baatein sunai deni shuru ho gyi.
Fatima : "Abbu bahir ka darwaza dhyan se lga dia tha? Pichli baar khurram chacha ne dekho lia tha, allah bachaye aisi dikkat sey"
Hamid Chacha Apni do unglio se nargia ki baayi chuchi dba rhe thay aur baari baari masal rhe thay. Nargis ki chuchi aur chuchia dono hee chotti aur nazuk lag rhi thee.
Hamid : "Chinta kyu karti hai bitia khurram aur uski khatoon ki vaise hee koi nahi maanta, usne agar bahir kisi ko bola na ki Hamid mia apni hee dukhtar(beti) ke saath humbistar thay koi yakeen nahi manega, tu itni pareshani sir na ley apne gate bnd hai koi ni aa rha hai aaj haan bas shaam ko Bholu aayega samaan lekar ya uski maa tab ki tab dekhengey"
Fatima Hamid ke upar baithi thee aur apne shareer ka nichla bhaag apne abbu ke pait par ragad rhi thee, Jab jab Fatima thoddi aage hoti tab tab Hamid mia ke aand Ratna ko dikhte, Hamid mia khuud bhi saawale thay par dono bitia, poti ekdm gori thee. Dudh jaisa rang, Hamid mia bhi pehle gore hee thay itne samay kisani aur mehnat majdoori kar kar ke kaale pad chukay thay.
Fatima : "Abbu tumhey ni lgta ye Ratna bhi apne bete ke saath humbistar hoti hogi?"
Fatima ke muuh se aisi baat sunkar Ratna gusse mein aa gyi. Ratna ko jo darr tha wahi baat ho rhi thee lekin mze ki baat ye thee ki Ratna ne aaj tak kuuch bhi aisa nahi kia tha, haan 2 baar usne apne bete ke saath kuuch toh kia tha lekin hum bistar toh woh aaj tak kisi ke saath nahi hui. Ratna ka paara chadh rha tha lekin woh asal mein janna chahti thee ye dunia uske baare mein kya sochti hai?
Hamid : "Lgta kya hai hme toh pura yakeen hai Ratna ki gaand itni bahar khuudsey toh nahi aayegi na, aur uska ladka bhi dimaag se kamzor hai kya pta chalega, Bholu ka lund gheeye jaisa hai, kheto mein moot rha hai tha ek baar mere saath tab dekha tha, itna bda lund Ratna bina liye toh gaand fula nahi legi."
Ye sunkar Ratna ka chehra laal ho gya woh pair patak-kar peechay se bahar aa gyi. Uski saas ful rhi thee, jis Hamid ko woh apna chacha smjhti thee wohi chacha uske baare mein aisa bolega usne kabhi na socha tha. Ratna khud ko kos rhi thee ki jo log parivar mein hum bistar hote hai wohi uske jaiso ka mzaak bna rhe hai. Ratna ne thodda dheeraj dikhaya aur firse wahi khidki ke pass chali gyi unki baatein firse sunne.
Fatima : "Abbu kya hee kare bechari, itni mehnat se paala posa hai ladka, aur koi parivar mein hai nahi toh woh kya hee kare bechari, Ratna shayd iss gao ki sabse acchi aurat hai, hmari hee kitni mdad karti hai apni nargis ko woh kabhi kabhi suit dilwa deti hai, ye koi bhla kam hai kya? Lekin acchi aurat hone ka ye matlab thoddi hai uski koi jismani zarurat nahi hai, na bhai na mujhey toh iss baat mein koi sujh nahi lagti"
Fatima ab bhi apne baap ke upar baithey ragde diye ja rhi thee.
Hamid : "Kyu bitia Nargis, tumhey nahi lgta Bholu aur Ratna band kamro mein kuuch karte hongey", ye bolkar Hamid Nargis ki chuchi dba deta hai.
Nargis(Chilla kar): "Aah nanu kya kar rhe ho, aaram se chuchi nikal hee jayegi."
Hamid : "Arre meri bitia, tu toh jawaan jitna beecho jha se beecho ras hee niklega, tu bta Ratna chachi lagta hai kya karti hongi?"
Nargis : "Nanu ammi mein hoti aur mera beta itna hatta gatta hota mein toh lund se muuh hee na htati"
Ye sunkar Hamid aur Fatima has padte hai, aur ye baat sunkar Ratna ka maatha garam ho rha tha. Aisa lg rha tha usko bukhaar aa rho, usko pta nahi chal rha tha ki ye andar kya ho rha hai?