Incest Ravan ek villan & The Ruhi ( fantasy, thriller family loves,action suspense story)

[Akil]

Abi tak ke re start kaafi achha hai umeed hai aage updates regular rahenge bro.....

 

[Baap Ji]

for new story.....

hmm.... ruhi ki kirdaar kaafi interesting hain...
Maybe, aage chalke ruhi ko sachai ki raah par chalte aur anyaay ke khilaf ladne ki wajah se ushe saja mili...
( writer sahab bura na maniyega... intro mein heroines ki height kuch zyadaa hi kam likh diye... plz edit kar dijiyega)
Brilliant update sir....... Great going
.

Thank you so much naina g
Edit kar di hight

Meri samajh me nhi Aa raha story achi ya buri

 

[Naina]

Thank you so much naina g
Edit kar di age

Meri samajh me nhi Aa raha story achi ya buri

drama, action, emotional combo hain aur kya chahiye..... narrations aur language ki pakad kaafi majbut hain.... flow bhi achhi hain.....

&
sir.. age nahin height kam hain .. ruhi - 4.5 feet, sohi - 4.6feet, Akanksha - 4 feet only .... aditi - 4.3...

 

[Stone cold]

Dr. Hutiya : lotpot: ab bas Dr. Bencho aur Tittu mama ki Kam hai phir lagegi aag
Waise bro pichli bar story ke intro Mai Akansha Ka naam Nahi tha... Kya ye new entry hai aur apna chikna londa assu aur uski family Ka intro Nahi hai

 

[Naina]

Update 8


Ye sun k aurat ek zor ka thappar Ruhi ko marti hai
Aurat rokar : tab kyo nahi diye jab mere bache bhuke tadap rahe they ab mujhe Inki zarurat nahi hai.

Ruhi kuch nahi kehti bas aake car me baithi hai or chal deti ghar ki taraf.

Ab age....

Sohi Ruhi ke gaal par thappar k Nissan dekh leti hai jise dekh kar gusse or dukh apna prakat karti hai.

Sohi nam ankho se : dadu ye apke face par kya hua
Roha jo pichey baithi wo ye sun leti hai.
Roha : Sohi kya hua betu
Sohi ; Maa dadu k face par kisi ne hit kiya, bataye na dadu kisne kiya ye.
Ruhi ka gussa bahut high hota hai wo kuch nhi kehti bas gusse me Sohi ko dekh ke dubara se driving par consiontreat karne lagti hai.

Roha : Ruhi kya face ko beta tum thik to ho na.
Ruhi : hmm I'm fine mom


Fir raste me hi Sohi ko school chod kar Ruhi ghar ati hai aur ghar aate hi bad par let k rone lagti hai.




Ruhi man me ; kaisi duniya me Mai paida ho gayi hu Gandhi ji ne isliye azadi dilayi k log azaadi k Baad bhi bhukh se mare kya guzarti hogi us aurat par agar culculate kare to Bharat k sabhi ammero se tax k tour par 2 _2 hazar rupees le to bhi is desh k sabhi log pet bhar k roti khaye
Jab pakode bechne wala P. M hoga to ye haal to hoga log hi bewakoof hai jo esa karte hai ese chor logo ko boat dete shitt mujhe isse Matlab nhi in logo k galat neta choose karne ki vajh se us bahen k jaise log pistte hai na jane is desh ka kya hoga kaise tarakki karega
Kabhi Kabhi man karta hai ki ese netao ko Maar du.

Yahi sab sochte hue Ruhi ki ankh lag jati hai or wo neend ki wadio me kho jati hai.

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C. B. I head quarter Mumbai shaher.

Raj aditi or kuch c. B. I k log head quater me bane ek bade se room me hote & hacking computers hote jinse cctv cameras ko control kiya jata hai.

Raj bahut der se aditi ko ghure Jaa raha tha jise aditi dekh leti lekin ignore karti hai.
Raj man me : kya mast figure hai iska ass ufff kya mote mote aam hai hontho pe lipstick ankho me kajal jald hi ye mere bedroom me hogi.

Aaj aditi bhut jyada khubsurat lag rahi thi jis par se raj ki nazar nhi hath rahi hoti hai

Kya soch rahe hai Raj
Aditi yun khade use ghurte hue raj ko dekh kar kehti hai.

Raj : sach kahu jhuth
Aditi : jhuth
Raj smile karte hue : tumhe
Ye Kehte hue raj halka sa Muskura deta hai.

Asif : raghav kuch dikha cctv photos me.

Abhi tak to kuch bhi nhi sir
Raghav jo computer desk pe baithe ek cafe par nazar banaye hue hota hai wo asif se kehta hai.

Asif raj se : to tumhare hisab se yahan devil ayega
Raj : shayad wo Aa chuka ho I mean wo wahan already maujud ho
Ye sun k aditi bade gour se raaj ko dekhne lagti hai.

Tabhi computer ki screen par ek video play hoti hai.
Jisme ek cartoon chuhe ki tarah hota hai wo nachne lagta hai.
Aaaahh hahaha bhosdi walo devil ko pakdoge tumhari Maa ka maki saka devil is everywhere now he's with you mither fuckers....

Asif chilla ke : ye kya bakbaas hai raghav

Raghav sar ko pakde hue kehta hai : sir hamare computer ko kisi ne hack kar liya hai
Aditi : uncle I think devil usi cafe me hai.

Ye itna Kehte hue office nikalte hue aditi samne cafe ki taraf bhagne lagti hai.

Raj : aditi ruko wahan devil ke log honge Ruk jao.

Asif : aditi Ruk jaoo

Lekin aditi nahi rukti
Ye dekhkar raj bhi pichey pichey bhagne lagta hai.

Aur office se Bahar aake aditi ko pakad kar ek deewar se chup jata hai.
Raj : tum Pagal ho gayi ho jo marne Jaa rahi ho
Aditi : chodo mujhe devil is Samay akela hoga use pakadna asan hoga.

Tabhi raj aditi ke sar ko pakad kar ghumata hai.

Raj : wo dekho aaya kuch nazar
Jab samne aditi dekhti hai to Kai log kale suit me cafe k bahar ghum rahe hote hai or kuch duri par Kai bikes khadi hoti hai.

Ye dekh kar aditi ek dam shant hokar ek nazar un sab par dalti fir ek nazar raj par tabhi use ehsaas hota hai ki koi uski kamar ko pakda hai.

Aditi sharmate hue raj k hath par apna hath rakhti hai or hata deti hai.

Aditi or raj bilkul ek dusre se chipke hue khade hote hai
Raj : kash ye pal yahi Ruk jaye..
Aditi tirchi nigaah se raj ko dekhti hai.
Aditi ye ache se samajh gayi thi ki raj use like karta hai lekin abhi tak aditi ke dil me raj k liye esi koi feeling nhi thi.

Tabhi cafe se ek admi jo hat ode hota hai wo cafe se nikalta hai.


Aditi : koi cafe se Bahar aa raha hai
Raj : face to nhi dikh raha tum yahi ruko dekhne do kya karta hai.

Aditi : ise us place ka Address mil gaya hai jahan se code lene ham jayenge.

Raj : cool down Babe ham iska picha karenge abhi kuch....

Raj jaise hi itna keh pata hai aditi dhakka dekar cafe ki taraf devil or waqi k gundo par andha dhun faring karne lagti hai.

Dhaye Dhaye Dhaye....

Aditi Kai logo ko ab tak shoot kar chuki hoti hai tabhi bike wale gunde aditi ki taraf ek 47 se fayering karne wale hote ye dekh kar aditi k pair kanpne lagte hai or wo road k bicho bich khadi ho jati hai ab tak aditi ki bullets bhi khatm ho chuki hoti hai.

Jaise hi Aditi ko lagta hai ki ab uski sanse thamne wali hai jab kuch nhi hota to ankhe khol kar samne dekhti hai.

Dhaye Dhaye Dhaye..
Raj road par khadi Caro k upar ud ud k gundo ko shoot kar raha hota hai.

Aditi k Paas aake uske hath ko pakad kar un gundo ko shoot karte hue aditi ko bacha kar wahan se dur le jane lagta hai or aditi bas raj ko hi dekhe Jaa rahi hoti hai..

Aditi ko ek side me lakar raj fir cafe k samne ho rahi golabari k beech me aakar shoot karne lagta hai.

Usi road par cafe se dur khadi ek car k andar :

Admi : ye kon hai jo hamare logo ko mar raha hai sunita
Sunita : billa lagta hai c. b. I ka kutta hai.
Billa : rana ko call karke pucho code mila ya nahi use abhi tak

Tabhi sunita call karti hai lekin

Sunita : he's Dade

Intro : billa ye Mumbai ka don hai or chandani ka kutta
Sunita : ye billa ki Randi hai ladkiyan saplayi ka kaam ye sambhalti hai.

Aditi : shitt devil pata nahi kaha gayab ho gaya meri ankho k samne hi tha.
Asif : tumne bahut badi bewakoofi kar di hai or tumhari jaan jate jate bachi aditi raj na hote to ham tumhe kho dete.
Aditi : I'm sorry uncle Mai devil k bahut kareeb thi
Asif : shut up, ab koi galti na ho tumse 3 din baad code lene jana hai to Mai fir se ye bewakoofi nahi dekhna chahta hu tumhari.

Aditi nam ankho se : ji sir ab mai esi mistake dubara nahi karungi code milte hi paise sare transfer ho jayenge world Bank me.


Asif : raj samajh me nahi Aa raha k kaise us devil ne hamari security system hack kar li jabki ye bahut mazbut hai.

Raj : simple uske pass apse ache hacker honge.

Asif : raat ho gayi hai aditi ab tum ghar jao.

Aditi : hmm sir

Meeting khatm hone k baad head quarters se dono bahar aate hain.

Raj mai taxi bulata hu.
Aditi ; walk karte hue chale
Raj : why not

Fir dono Andheri raat me walk karte hue chalne lagte hai.

Aditi : raj i swear devil bhut nazdeek tha mere fir pata nahi achank se wo kahan gayab ho gaya.

( jab aditi sar pe cap wale k bikul nazdeek Aa jati hai to wo cap wala ladka inbisible car wo car jo dikhayi nahi deti usme baith k sabke samne se nikal jata hai)

Raj : Hmmm shayad wo wohi chup gaya ho tumhe dekh kar or mauqa milte hi bhag gaya ho.
Aditi : hmm sahi kaha

Aditi ek nazar raj ko dekhti hai fir halke se smile karti hai.
Aditi : thank you meri Jaan bachane k liye.
Is par raj bas aditi ko dekh kar ek halki si smile de deta hai.

Raj : tum yahan Mumbai me akeli rehti ho & where is your parents.

Ye sun k aditi halki si sad ho jati hai
Aditi : mai jab choti thi tab ghar me ek chor ghus aya tha mujhe marne kyoki us chor k bhai ko dad ne jail bheja isliye usne dad ko dhamki di k mujhe Maar k bhai ka badla lega jab wo aya to mujhe bachahte hue mom dad dono ne apni jaan gawa di.

Jab raj ye sunta hai to aditi ko apne sine se laga leta hai.



Raj : sun kar afsos hua

Raj man me : Kitna galat soch raha tha mai is ladki k bare me ye to pehle se hi gham me hai shayad isse pyaar ho gaya hai mujhe.

Aditi raj ki bahon se nikalte hue : tumhare parents kaha rehte hai.
Raj : same story Bachchan me hi mere Maa baap mar gaye
Itna sunte hi aditi fir raj k gale lag jati hai or raj ki peeth sehlane lagti hai.

Fir dur hat k raj ko dekhne lagti hai.

Raj : ham dono hi is duniya me akele hai kyo Na ek dusre ka sath de
Aditi raj k chahere par nazar dal kar kehti hai : tum doge mera sath hamesha k liye
Raj aditi ka hath pakad ke : ha dunga aakhiri Sans tak.

Ye sunte hi aditi raj k gal par halka sa kiss Kar k nazre niche kar leti hai.

Raj bhi halka Sharma jata hai.

Raj man me : kya ho raha hai ye mere sath kaisi feeling hai ye na jane kitni hi ladkio ko choda lekin esi feeling kabhi nahi aayi shayad ye meri Jaan ban gayi hai ye kiss sex se Kai jyada acha tha.

Hath do apna.

Aditi ki Awaaz sun kar raj apne khayalo se Bahar aata hai.

Raj :kya hua
Aditi : hath do
Aditi itne pyaar se kehti hai ke raj bas uske bhole bhale chahere me hi dekhta reh jata hai.

Raj k hath ko pakad kar uski sabse choti ungli me daal deti hai.

Aditi : ye hamare pyaar ki nishani hai agar mai devil ko pakadte Waqt mari gayi to ye tumhe meri Yaad dilayega..

Raj : ab tum meri ho tumhe kuch nahi ho sakta devil chu bhi nhi payega.

Aditi : mujhe mere raj par Pura bharosa hai lekin wo bahut shatir hai jab time aaye to mujhe bachane ki jagah us devil ko shoot karna.

Raj fike man se : Hmmm, choro se itni nafrat isliye na ki unhone tumhare mom dad ko mara
Aditi : Hmmm, thank you so much meri life me ane k liye.

Raj man me : apne love se ab or jhuth nahi bol sakta mujhe apna sach batana hoga Kal hi bata dunga fir chahe jo ho.

Raj : Kal date par chalogi mere sath
Aditi : kyo kuch karna hai
Raj : pagli tujhe bahut jaldi ho rahi hai shugraat ki.

Aditi sharma k : chi gandi
Raj : tomorrow 4o 'clock kiss coffee shop

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Apni Maa ki Awaaz sun Ruhi ankhe kholti hai.
Ruhi : khana apne bana liya mom mujhe bula liya hota.
Roha : koi Baat nahi beta, sun Sohi mooh fula k baithi hai jaa pehle to use mana

Ruhi : ap jaye mom aati hu

Roha k jane k Baad Ruhi mooh hath dhone washroom me jati or fresh hoke niche haal me ati hai Sohi dono gaal fula dining table ko ghurr rahi hoti hai.

Ye dekh kar Ruhi ki hasi chut jati hai.
Ruhi man me : bikul bachi lag rahi hai Bachchan ki harkat e iski gayi nahi hai abhi.

Ruhi pass Jaake chair pe baith jati hai.

Ruhi : kya hua meri gulabo ko aaj gulab ki tarah khil rahi hai

Sohi : hin hin hon hon.....
Ruhi : ohhh gussail sherni ban gayi meri gulabo hehe..

Sohi kuch nahi kehti fir se gurrahat nikalne lagti hai.

Ruhi ko ye dekh kar bada maza aa raha hota hai
Ruhi : dadu se bolna nahi hai
Sohigusse me Ruhi jo dekhti lekin kuch nahi kehti.
Ruhi : bhigi billi ab mere samne sher ban rahi hai

Sohi : chilla k mama inse kahe mujhse baatein na kare
Roha kichen me se tej swar me: tum dono ki batein tum dono jano mujhe mat ghasito.
Ruhi Sohi k pet par hath rakhte hue : ab to mamma ne bhi keh diya mai ab tere sath kuch bhi kar sakti hu rape karu tera
Sohi : mamma ye meri izzat lut rahi hai.

Ruhi Jab ye sunti to pet pakad k Hasne lagti hai
Sohi : Ruk Kyo gayi karo na rape
Ruhi : hehehe tu nahi sudhregi Ruk abhi batati hu tujhe
Ye Kehte hue Sohi k pet me gud gudi karne lagti hai.
Sohi : mujhe nahi hoti... Hihihihihi dadu chore hihihi

Ruhi : kya kaha tha abhi to badi sherni ban rahi thi nahi chorti mai

Sohi : hihihi chore di ab nahi hu naraz
Ruhi hath hatate hue: pakka
Sohi : Hmmm thori si
Ruhi : fir gudgudi karu kya
Sohi : nhi bataye mere boyfriend ka mood kyo off tha subah kya hua par.

Ruhi : tu bina jane manne wali kaha to sun..........

Sohi ye jaan ke sad ho jati hai
Sohi : dadu ap bahut achi hai I love you so much
Or Sohi Ruhi par apna pyaar jatate hue apne sar ko Ruhi k kandhe par rakh leti hai.




Ruhi bhi pyaar se Sohi k Sar ko sehlane lagti hai.

Isi tarah sara din guzar jata hai raat ko masti karte hue dono so jati hai.

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Mumbai shaher
Ek ghar me....

Papa papa ap Kab aayenge ab
Admi : beti mai jald aunga Shimla me meri posting hui hai isliye kuch time lag jayega
Aurat : khayal rakhiye ga apna
Ladki : papa ap mere 18 birthday par to yahan aayenge na
Admi : Haa meri pyari beti akanksha
Fir dono gale milte hai ladki apne Baap se bichadne k gham me bhut roti hai uski Hari ankho se lagatar ansu beh jate hai
Admi : akki chalo rona band karo meri ladli ki in pyari ankho me ansu bikul bhi ache nahi lagte.

Akanksha : Hmmm
Admi : chalo ab tum jao tumhari Maa se kuch Baat karni hai.

Admi : naina sabko akela chor k use dhundne mat jana
Nanina : nhi apki galti ko mujhe thik karna hai na jane kis hal me hoga ap jaye hamari fikr na kare meri un do betiyon ko bhi mera pyaar dena.

Fir admi apna bag lekar ghar se bahar aata or chal deta apne safar par.

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Sohi : okay dadu mom ab chalti hu ummhhhhhhhhh
Ye Kehte hue Sohi Ruhi ko kiss karke college k liye nikal jati hai.

Uske jane k Baad dono Maa betiyan t. V on karke dekhne lagti hai.

Ting tung ting......
Roha : is Waqt kon aya hoga
Ye Kehte hue sofe se uthti hai jab Ruhi ko tv dekhte hue pati to khud gate kholne k liye chal deti hai.

Jab darwaza kholti Roha to dekh k chonk jati hai.
Police....
Roha : kya kaam hai apko commissioner shakti ne bheja hai kya apko

Police ka officer : ji nahi yahan ham ms. Ruhi Singh k liye Aye hai unhone kal2 reporters ko buri taraj ghayal kiya isliye unke khilaaf fir darj ki gayi hai.

Ye sun k Roha bahut sad ho jati hai
Roha : ruhiiii.....
Maa k chikne ki Awaaz sun k Ruhi pichey ghum k dekhti to ek hawaldarni Aa rahi hoti hai andar Ruhi bhi uth k chal deti unke paws.

Sara mamla janne k Baad use sab samjh Ata hai ki police kyo ayi hai.

To be continue....

ruhi ki soch yahin se badal jayegi sayad....
Akanshaa ki entry ho gayi hain.....
kya baat hain writer sahab... naina bhi hain yahan
koi naa.... just kidding....
Ohh... yeh toh hona hi tha.... ruhi ko le gaye.... sayad ishki dad aake isko jamanat kar le maybe...
Brilliant update writer sahab great going

 

[K S Lover]

Nice update

 

[Badshah Khan]

Great going bhai
Naina aur akansha ki bhi entry Hogayi
Aur lagta hai shakti ake rohi ki zamanat karvayega
Aditi aur raj ki kahani taj jati hai dekhte hai
Keep posting

 

[Akil]

Waise abhi tak ke updates kaafi achchhe rahe
Toh shakti ki new family bhi enter ho hi gayi but have one question here uski new family ke baare mein roha and family ko pata hai ki nahin? Uski second family mein kaun kaun roha and family ke baare mein jaanta hai aur kaise?
Secondly yeh raj hi toh apna devil urfff devi lal toh nahin na
Dekhte hain ab raj aditi ruhi ki life mein kya kya hona hai
Naina jise dhundh rahi hai woh devi laal toh nahin na?
Kya naina devi laal urf devil ko dhoondh paayegi?
Kya devil ko apni families ke baare mein koi bhi ma'aloomat haasil hai ki nahin?

 

[Baap Ji]

drama, action, emotional combo hain aur kya chahiye..... narrations aur language ki pakad kaafi majbut hain.... flow bhi achhi hain.....

&
sir.. age nahin height kam hain .. ruhi - 4.5 feet, sohi - 4.6feet, Akanksha - 4 feet only .... aditi - 4.3...

OK again edited karta hu aur ye feet nhi fut 4 fut hota hai na
C. M me likhunga

 

[Baap Ji]

Dr. Hutiya : lotpot: ab bas Dr. Bencho aur Tittu mama ki Kam hai phir lagegi aag
Waise bro pichli bar story ke intro Mai Akansha Ka naam Nahi tha... Kya ye new entry hai aur apna chikna londa assu aur uski family Ka intro Nahi hai

Dr. Bahencho
Hahahah upcoming story me dekhne ko mil jayega

Bhi assu aur uski Maa ka intro story me hi de diya hai isliye yahan nahi diya.
Akanksha ka bhi intro update me hi tha