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nice update ...abhi teeno ki training hogi japan me ...
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buht badiya jaa rahe bro....kamal ki story hai....
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Mst story h bhai
Aaj hi Sare update padhe mja aagya
Ab jldi se nya update dedo bro
Waiting for next....
Aaj hi Sare update padhe mja aagya
Ab jldi se nya update dedo bro
Waiting for next....
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UPDATE 11
Next day hum teeno bhaiyo ne milke khub shoping ki or moj masti ki
Dusre din jack uncle or hum teeno apne hall me agaye apne bag lekar
Mom hum teeno se apna mobile yahi chhod ke jana he or tumhare dad ne jo card diya tha pese yus karne ke liye use bi yahi chhodkar jana hai
Hum teeno to mom ki bat sun ke heran ho gaye
Mom heran hone ki jaru rat nai he bus tum log waha training ke liye ja rahe ho waha mobile or peso ka kuch kam nahi he peso ki jarurat pade to jack uncle se mang lenA thik he
Or last bat ke jub log tum yaha se jaoge tum teeno se hamara koi contect nahi rahega or jack uncle tum ko jesa kahe wesa karte rehana
Humne kaha theek he mom
Hum teeno ne mom or dad ko gale laga ya
Or jack uncle ke sath nikal pade airpot ki tarf
Ek naye safar ki or
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Ham log japan ke tokyo saher me aagaye the
Jack uncle hamara ruk ne ka intejam saher se thodi dur ek jungel type ka ilaka tha waha ke ashram me kiya huwa tha jaha saadhu sant waghera log rehte he bhot hi ajib lag raha tha muje yaha par
Jack uncle ahsu tum teeno bhai aj ke din aaram karlo kalse tumhari training shuru hogi jo yaha ke mahaguru naomi dege
Ahsu:jack uncle ap training dene wale the na fir ye mahaguru bich me kaha agaye
Jack uncle mai bhi tumhe training duga abi usme waqt he
Jao aram karo baki bate kal karege
Hum teeno bhai hame jo kamra mila tha waha aagaye or sogaye
Next day jack uncel hame maha guru naomi ke pas le gaye
Jack uncle ne unhe dono hat jod ke pranam kiya or hamne bi wesa hi kiya
Jack uncle guru ji ye mere tino bete jese he
Me chata hu ap inhe training de
Guru naomi:me in teeno ko trainig to de du ga lekin inhe wada karna hoga ke ye galt kam me inhe jo training di he wo galat jagah use na ho
Ham teeno ek sath me kaha
Guru ji ham wada karte he apki di huwi siksha ham galt jagah yus nahi kare ge
Guru naomi thik he baccho
Jao idhar pas ke jungel me jakar lakadiya iklahtti karo uska ek bhara bana kar apne khande par uchakar lao lakdiyo ka bhara jitna jyada rahega utna tumhare liye accha rahega ye kam tumhe teeno ko subho sham karna he lagatar 15 din tak karna he or a
Uske bad apko aage ki jankari di jaygi ye keh kar guru naomi chale gaye jack uncle ke sath
Sundyb:bhai ye kya tha hum ye sub karne aye he yaha par lakadiya uthane
Rahul:chal bhai jo bolahe karna to padega hi
Ahsu:ha bhai chalo ye bi ek training ka hissa he or hame karna hi padega
Hum teeno bhai jungel ki or nikal pade lakadiya lene
Hamko sub lakadiya ikhati karne me time nahi laga or uska bhara hum se jitna hosake utna banaya or utha ne lage
Hamri to gand hi fat gai thi jub lakadiyo ka bhara bana to jese wese utha kar hum teeno bhai nikal pade ashram ki tarf ashram phochte phochte to hamari bhot buri halat hogai thi
Ese hi 10din bit gaye or hame lakadiyo ko bhare ka wajan bi kum lagne laga tha or hamara 15din ka wakt khatm ho gaya tha
Dusre din hamrai mulakat guru naomi se hoi
Or unhone hame teeno se jungel ke ped ko kulhadi se kat ne ko kaha or use kate huwe ped ki jo dali hoti he unko alag kar ke unka bhara bana ne ko kaha 15 din tak
Ye sun ke to hum teeno chock gaye kyu ke hum teeno ko allag allag ped katna tha or use ped ko kat kar uski jo dali ati he use kat kar alag karna tha or uska bhara bana na tha o
Hamri to halat hi kharab hogi thi
Karna to tha hi hum teeno guru naomi ko pranam karke nikal aye bahar
Jack uncle hame bahar hi mil gaye unke hat me teen khuladi thi
Jack uncle ye lo tumhare liye he
Or dhyan rahe ek dusre ko suport nahi karna he ek banda hi pura ped katega tum teeno mil kar nahi katoge ye lo or apne kam pe lag jao
Hum teeno ka to mood hi of hogaya tha
Life kabi khulhadi nahi pakdi or chal pade jungel ki taraf
Jungel me humne aake ped kat na suru kiya kafi time hogaya hame ped kat te kat te bhot buri halat hogi thi hamri
Jese tese ped kat kar hamne ped ki daliya alag ki or uske chote chote tukde karke uska bhara banane lage hume ne jate huwe ped ki daliyo ke bhot sare bharae banye or ashram me le jane lage kasm se ek hi bhara le jate le jate halt kharb hogi pasi ne se pure kapde gile hogaye the hamre or sub bhare uchakar lane me kafi rat hogi thi
Ese hi or din bit ne lage or hum kafi asani se ped kat kar uski daliya alag karke jaldi apna kam karlete or hamare 15din or nikal gaye
Hame yaha ek mahina hone aya tha mom dad ki bhot yad aarhi thi hum teeno bhai yo ko
Lekin hum bat nahi kar sakte the
Hum teeno bhai yo ne than liya tha hum log yaha ki sari training puri kare ge or mom dad ke pure parivar ko milane ki kosis karege
Sory dosto update late de raha hu
Kya karu job abi start huwa he to time nahi mil raha likhne ka lekin wada karta hu hafte me tin update ate rahe ge
Next day hum teeno bhaiyo ne milke khub shoping ki or moj masti ki
Dusre din jack uncle or hum teeno apne hall me agaye apne bag lekar
Mom hum teeno se apna mobile yahi chhod ke jana he or tumhare dad ne jo card diya tha pese yus karne ke liye use bi yahi chhodkar jana hai
Hum teeno to mom ki bat sun ke heran ho gaye
Mom heran hone ki jaru rat nai he bus tum log waha training ke liye ja rahe ho waha mobile or peso ka kuch kam nahi he peso ki jarurat pade to jack uncle se mang lenA thik he
Or last bat ke jub log tum yaha se jaoge tum teeno se hamara koi contect nahi rahega or jack uncle tum ko jesa kahe wesa karte rehana
Humne kaha theek he mom
Hum teeno ne mom or dad ko gale laga ya
Or jack uncle ke sath nikal pade airpot ki tarf
Ek naye safar ki or
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Ham log japan ke tokyo saher me aagaye the
Jack uncle hamara ruk ne ka intejam saher se thodi dur ek jungel type ka ilaka tha waha ke ashram me kiya huwa tha jaha saadhu sant waghera log rehte he bhot hi ajib lag raha tha muje yaha par
Jack uncle ahsu tum teeno bhai aj ke din aaram karlo kalse tumhari training shuru hogi jo yaha ke mahaguru naomi dege
Ahsu:jack uncle ap training dene wale the na fir ye mahaguru bich me kaha agaye
Jack uncle mai bhi tumhe training duga abi usme waqt he
Jao aram karo baki bate kal karege
Hum teeno bhai hame jo kamra mila tha waha aagaye or sogaye
Next day jack uncel hame maha guru naomi ke pas le gaye
Jack uncle ne unhe dono hat jod ke pranam kiya or hamne bi wesa hi kiya
Jack uncle guru ji ye mere tino bete jese he
Me chata hu ap inhe training de
Guru naomi:me in teeno ko trainig to de du ga lekin inhe wada karna hoga ke ye galt kam me inhe jo training di he wo galat jagah use na ho
Ham teeno ek sath me kaha
Guru ji ham wada karte he apki di huwi siksha ham galt jagah yus nahi kare ge
Guru naomi thik he baccho
Jao idhar pas ke jungel me jakar lakadiya iklahtti karo uska ek bhara bana kar apne khande par uchakar lao lakdiyo ka bhara jitna jyada rahega utna tumhare liye accha rahega ye kam tumhe teeno ko subho sham karna he lagatar 15 din tak karna he or a
Uske bad apko aage ki jankari di jaygi ye keh kar guru naomi chale gaye jack uncle ke sath
Sundyb:bhai ye kya tha hum ye sub karne aye he yaha par lakadiya uthane
Rahul:chal bhai jo bolahe karna to padega hi
Ahsu:ha bhai chalo ye bi ek training ka hissa he or hame karna hi padega
Hum teeno bhai jungel ki or nikal pade lakadiya lene
Hamko sub lakadiya ikhati karne me time nahi laga or uska bhara hum se jitna hosake utna banaya or utha ne lage
Hamri to gand hi fat gai thi jub lakadiyo ka bhara bana to jese wese utha kar hum teeno bhai nikal pade ashram ki tarf ashram phochte phochte to hamari bhot buri halat hogai thi
Ese hi 10din bit gaye or hame lakadiyo ko bhare ka wajan bi kum lagne laga tha or hamara 15din ka wakt khatm ho gaya tha
Dusre din hamrai mulakat guru naomi se hoi
Or unhone hame teeno se jungel ke ped ko kulhadi se kat ne ko kaha or use kate huwe ped ki jo dali hoti he unko alag kar ke unka bhara bana ne ko kaha 15 din tak
Ye sun ke to hum teeno chock gaye kyu ke hum teeno ko allag allag ped katna tha or use ped ko kat kar uski jo dali ati he use kat kar alag karna tha or uska bhara bana na tha o
Hamri to halat hi kharab hogi thi
Karna to tha hi hum teeno guru naomi ko pranam karke nikal aye bahar
Jack uncle hame bahar hi mil gaye unke hat me teen khuladi thi
Jack uncle ye lo tumhare liye he
Or dhyan rahe ek dusre ko suport nahi karna he ek banda hi pura ped katega tum teeno mil kar nahi katoge ye lo or apne kam pe lag jao
Hum teeno ka to mood hi of hogaya tha
Life kabi khulhadi nahi pakdi or chal pade jungel ki taraf
Jungel me humne aake ped kat na suru kiya kafi time hogaya hame ped kat te kat te bhot buri halat hogi thi hamri
Jese tese ped kat kar hamne ped ki daliya alag ki or uske chote chote tukde karke uska bhara banane lage hume ne jate huwe ped ki daliyo ke bhot sare bharae banye or ashram me le jane lage kasm se ek hi bhara le jate le jate halt kharb hogi pasi ne se pure kapde gile hogaye the hamre or sub bhare uchakar lane me kafi rat hogi thi
Ese hi or din bit ne lage or hum kafi asani se ped kat kar uski daliya alag karke jaldi apna kam karlete or hamare 15din or nikal gaye
Hame yaha ek mahina hone aya tha mom dad ki bhot yad aarhi thi hum teeno bhai yo ko
Lekin hum bat nahi kar sakte the
Hum teeno bhai yo ne than liya tha hum log yaha ki sari training puri kare ge or mom dad ke pure parivar ko milane ki kosis karege
Sory dosto update late de raha hu
Kya karu job abi start huwa he to time nahi mil raha likhne ka lekin wada karta hu hafte me tin update ate rahe ge
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Apko esa lagta he bro lekin abi likh nahi pa raha me new job start he yar kam pe jayada dhyan de raha hu us liye update likh nahi para ha story band to nahi hogi bus late update ayege fil hal to ek mahine tak
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