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bro story bahut acchi ja rahi hai....
awesome
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Update 4
Morning me mumy muje utha ne ati he or kehti he beta chalo uth jao
Main : good morning mom
Mom :god morning beta chalo jaldi jao or ready hoke niche aa jao papa wait kar rahe he tera
Main: Ok mom
Thodi der me ready hoke me niche ata hu
To dad daining tabel pe brekfast kar rahe hote he
Main: goodmorning dad
Dad :goodmorning ahsu beta
Ao betho
Or btao kub nikal rahe ho india jane ke liye
Main ne Dad se kaha
hum 2 din bad niklege india ke liye or
3 Flight Tickets book karwa dege aap ?
Dad ok tickets book karwa duga
Main ne papa ko thenkx kaha itne me dad bole tumhare
dono dost kai dino se nazar nahi arahe sandy or rahul
Maine kaha dad wo abi enjoy kar rahe he vacation ko
Fir dad brekfast karke office nikal jate he
Or me bi nasta kar ke mom ke pas chale
Jata hu
Mom:ao beta betho
Main nahi mom muje jana he sandy or rahul ke pas bus wo kya he thode pese chaaiye the shopping ke liye
Mom:thik he beta mom almari me se ek card muje nikal ke deti he
Ye lo beta isme se jitne chaiye pese nikal lena
Sandy or rahul ko bi shopping karwa dena
Main ok mom thenkyou so muche love you mom
Mom:mom ko thenkyou bolta he koy
beta sub tere liye he to he
Jaldi se jao sandy or rahul ko milke shoping karo or tino sath me sham ko ghar aa jaana
Thik he beta
Main: ok mom chalo me jata hu bye
Main ghar se apni bicycle leke anath ashram ki taraf nikal jata hu
Waha anath ashram ke bahar he ek ground he waha muje mere dono dost mil jate he
Sandy ahsu ko dekh kar kehta he aj bada khus
Lag raha he lagta he kam ban gaya
Ahsu do no ke pas ate huwe kehta he
Aj kuch bolo ge nahi late huwa isliye
Rahul:nai aj kuch nai kahege tuje
Sandy:tere face pe khusi saf jhalak rahi he ke tuje india jane ki Permission Mil gai he
Main:ha bhai mil gai me to tumko Surprise Dene aya yaha to tum logo ne Surprise Kardiya
koi bat nahi chalo shoping ke liye nikal te he
Sandy ye bicycle anath ashram me laga de hum texi se jayege shopping karne
Hum tino taxi se nikal jate he
apne liye kapde vagairah ki shopping karne or shaam ko gher aajate he
Gher ate he mom ham tino se kehti he kesa raha aj ka din
Sandy :aunty ek dam badhiya raha aj ka din or
Kese he aap or uncle dikh nahi rahe
Mom kehti he i am fine beta or uncle office se ate he hoge
rahul tu chup kyu khada he kuch bolega nahi
Rahul. Wo bus ese hi aj pura din ghum ne ki wajese thak gaya hu na is liye aunty
Maine kaha mom hum mere kamre me ja rahe he dinar karne ke liye bula lijyega
Rat ko hum sub khane ke liye daining tabel pe bethe hote he tub dad kehte he ahsu beta tumrai tikets book hogi he perso ki
Maine kaha thik he dad
Fir khana khtam karke mom dad hum tino ko india me ghumne jane ke salah mashvera dene lage
Or fir
Sandy or rahul anath ashram chale jate he or me apne kamre ki tarf chala jata hu
Next day subho uth ke apne jane ki tayyari me lag jata hu or sandy or rahul ko bi paking karne ke liye kehdeta hu esa hi bhag dod me pura din nikal jata he mera
Rat me diner ke time jack uncle mujse kehte he kaha kaha ghumne jane wale ho beta
Maine kaha hum mumbai jayege fir waha se koi acchi jaga dekh kar hotel me rukege or long drive pe jayege wahi se desaid karege kaha jana he
Jack uncle thik he beta
Khana khake apne rooom me jate he sandy ko call karke subho me ready rehne ke liye keh diya
Next day subho me ready hoke apna bag leke niche aya or bag said pe rakh ke nasta kiya
Dad:ready hogaye beta chalo nikal te he
Main ne kaha ha dad chalo nikal te he
Mom:ahsu apna khayal rakhna or time se khana kha lena or din me subho sham muje call karna thik ke
Ye kehte he mom ki ankho me asu agaye
Mom ap ese roye nahi me apna khayal rakhuga or sahi time pe kha bi luga
Or wese bi jack uncle hmare sathi to he ap tention na le
(sandy or rahul ko pta nahi he ke jack uncle is trip me unke sath he or unko protect kar rahe he)
Mom se wida lekar main
Or papa gadi me beth kar anath ashram ki taraf nikal jate he sandy or rahul ko pikup kar ke hum airpot nikal jate he
Jack bi unhi ke piche next flight se india jane ke liye nikal jata he apne khas admiyo ko lekar
Morning me mumy muje utha ne ati he or kehti he beta chalo uth jao
Main : good morning mom
Mom :god morning beta chalo jaldi jao or ready hoke niche aa jao papa wait kar rahe he tera
Main: Ok mom
Thodi der me ready hoke me niche ata hu
To dad daining tabel pe brekfast kar rahe hote he
Main: goodmorning dad
Dad :goodmorning ahsu beta
Ao betho
Or btao kub nikal rahe ho india jane ke liye
Main ne Dad se kaha
hum 2 din bad niklege india ke liye or
3 Flight Tickets book karwa dege aap ?
Dad ok tickets book karwa duga
Main ne papa ko thenkx kaha itne me dad bole tumhare
dono dost kai dino se nazar nahi arahe sandy or rahul
Maine kaha dad wo abi enjoy kar rahe he vacation ko
Fir dad brekfast karke office nikal jate he
Or me bi nasta kar ke mom ke pas chale
Jata hu
Mom:ao beta betho
Main nahi mom muje jana he sandy or rahul ke pas bus wo kya he thode pese chaaiye the shopping ke liye
Mom:thik he beta mom almari me se ek card muje nikal ke deti he
Ye lo beta isme se jitne chaiye pese nikal lena
Sandy or rahul ko bi shopping karwa dena
Main ok mom thenkyou so muche love you mom
Mom:mom ko thenkyou bolta he koy
beta sub tere liye he to he
Jaldi se jao sandy or rahul ko milke shoping karo or tino sath me sham ko ghar aa jaana
Thik he beta
Main: ok mom chalo me jata hu bye
Main ghar se apni bicycle leke anath ashram ki taraf nikal jata hu
Waha anath ashram ke bahar he ek ground he waha muje mere dono dost mil jate he
Sandy ahsu ko dekh kar kehta he aj bada khus
Lag raha he lagta he kam ban gaya
Ahsu do no ke pas ate huwe kehta he
Aj kuch bolo ge nahi late huwa isliye
Rahul:nai aj kuch nai kahege tuje
Sandy:tere face pe khusi saf jhalak rahi he ke tuje india jane ki Permission Mil gai he
Main:ha bhai mil gai me to tumko Surprise Dene aya yaha to tum logo ne Surprise Kardiya
koi bat nahi chalo shoping ke liye nikal te he
Sandy ye bicycle anath ashram me laga de hum texi se jayege shopping karne
Hum tino taxi se nikal jate he
apne liye kapde vagairah ki shopping karne or shaam ko gher aajate he
Gher ate he mom ham tino se kehti he kesa raha aj ka din
Sandy :aunty ek dam badhiya raha aj ka din or
Kese he aap or uncle dikh nahi rahe
Mom kehti he i am fine beta or uncle office se ate he hoge
rahul tu chup kyu khada he kuch bolega nahi
Rahul. Wo bus ese hi aj pura din ghum ne ki wajese thak gaya hu na is liye aunty
Maine kaha mom hum mere kamre me ja rahe he dinar karne ke liye bula lijyega
Rat ko hum sub khane ke liye daining tabel pe bethe hote he tub dad kehte he ahsu beta tumrai tikets book hogi he perso ki
Maine kaha thik he dad
Fir khana khtam karke mom dad hum tino ko india me ghumne jane ke salah mashvera dene lage
Or fir
Sandy or rahul anath ashram chale jate he or me apne kamre ki tarf chala jata hu
Next day subho uth ke apne jane ki tayyari me lag jata hu or sandy or rahul ko bi paking karne ke liye kehdeta hu esa hi bhag dod me pura din nikal jata he mera
Rat me diner ke time jack uncle mujse kehte he kaha kaha ghumne jane wale ho beta
Maine kaha hum mumbai jayege fir waha se koi acchi jaga dekh kar hotel me rukege or long drive pe jayege wahi se desaid karege kaha jana he
Jack uncle thik he beta
Khana khake apne rooom me jate he sandy ko call karke subho me ready rehne ke liye keh diya
Next day subho me ready hoke apna bag leke niche aya or bag said pe rakh ke nasta kiya
Dad:ready hogaye beta chalo nikal te he
Main ne kaha ha dad chalo nikal te he
Mom:ahsu apna khayal rakhna or time se khana kha lena or din me subho sham muje call karna thik ke
Ye kehte he mom ki ankho me asu agaye
Mom ap ese roye nahi me apna khayal rakhuga or sahi time pe kha bi luga
Or wese bi jack uncle hmare sathi to he ap tention na le
(sandy or rahul ko pta nahi he ke jack uncle is trip me unke sath he or unko protect kar rahe he)
Mom se wida lekar main
Or papa gadi me beth kar anath ashram ki taraf nikal jate he sandy or rahul ko pikup kar ke hum airpot nikal jate he
Jack bi unhi ke piche next flight se india jane ke liye nikal jata he apne khas admiyo ko lekar
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Thenkx bro
Story sahi track par chal rahi hena bhai me bhot fast forwad to nai likh raha???
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Abhi ek dum perfect chal rahi h bhai..??
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