Incest Rebel Romeo

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UPDATE 1


Ye meri new story he or mera english writing kafi week he
Is liye speling mistak hogi to ap ise let go kariye ga

Ye khani me apko romance or action dono dekhne ko milega

Me ye nai kahuga ke story 100% complate karuga
Pata nahi kab ye sas tham jaye
Jub tak update aye padh te rahiye

Hafte me only 3 update ayege





Fameily Intro

Father--Rustam reddy Age=52
Apni mehnat or lagan se ye
Aj UK ke subse amir admi me sumar He
Lekin kisi ne inko dekha nahi he

Reddy group of company ke owner

Mother-sana reddy Age=49

Ye log ek dam medal class femily jese rehte he
Kisi ko bi pata nahi ke ye itne amir he yaha tak ke ahsaan ko bi bus itna pata he uske papa reddy group of company me employr he



Me apne ghar ka ek lota varis
Ahsaan Reddy--Age=18
Dikhne me avrage he
Just 12th pass kiya he
School me bi avrage raha he

Or frnds ki bat kare to ye bi iske sath me hi padh te he

Sandeep--age=18
Rahul--age=18

Ye dono anath ashram me rehte he

Baki ke intro story me ate rahe ge

Congratulations for new story
Nice intro

 

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UPDATE 2


ye log landon me rehte he is liye in ki Hindi me conversation likhuga

Gher ki bat kare to
ek banglow typ ka gher he Ahsaan ka jis me do flor he
Jisme bich me gher he
or gher ki charo tarf gardan bana huwa he
gher ke charo tarf choti choti gahns he
ek banglow me ghusne ke liye gate hota he wese he ek gate he

Jisme niche ke flor pe ek kicthen
ek bada sa hall he or ek room he jisme
Ahsaan ke ghare ke chote mote kam karne wale
ek uncle(kaka) rehte he jinka
Name he--jack age 48
Ham jack uncle ko apna gher ka membar hi mante he
Jack uncle ek army ritayer offiser he landon ambasy ke
Or ek dam fit rakhte he apne apko
Second flor pe

3room he
Ek me ahsaan ke mom or dad rehte he
Second me ahsaan rehta he or tisra room guest rom he
Jo hamesa band rehta he



Rustam offis jane ke liye ready hokar niche ata he
Or dining tabal par beth kar sana ko brekfast laga ne ko kehta he

Sana : kitchen se nilke te huwe kehti he
Kya bat he ji aj bhot jaldi office jane ke liye tayyar hogaye

Rustam: wo aj ek importan miting he is liye jana he or jack kaha he dikh nahi raha

Sana :pata nahi kahi gaya hoga

Rustam : ok jaldi brekfast lagao muje der horahi he lag ta he aj muje he gadi chalake jana padega

Sana:thik he abi lai

Rustam brekfast karke office nikal jata he
Or sana ahsaan ke room ki tarf jati he usko utha ne ke liye
Room me entar hoti he sana shock ho jati he

Kyu ke uska beta ahsaan jamin pe soya huwa he or nind me muskura raha he
Sana shock ke mare bus ahsaan ko hi dekh ti rehti he

Fir sana use utha ne jati he ahsu uth ja beta subho ke 8 buj rahe he

Ahsu nind me hi kehta he sone dona mom
Hub thodina school jana he
Muje sub pyar se ahsu bulate he
Sana: ahsu beta tuje pata he na tuje aj sandy(sandeep) or rahul ko milne jana he
Tune muje kal jaldi utha ne ko bola tha na

Ahsu teri mom meto bhul hi gaya tha accha huw apne yad dila diya

Wo do no meri jan le le ge
Agar jaldi nai phoca to

Ahsu mom ap nasta lagao me bus thody der me aya
Ye keh kar woshroom me chale jata he or
ahsu ready hoke nice ake dining tebal par beth jata he

Ashu:mom jaldi nasta do muje let horaha he

Sana : ha beta bus abi lati hu



Ahsu nasta karke sandy or rahul ko milne nikal jata he apne bicycle Leke anath ashram ki taraf

Sandy or rahul
Ahsu ka hi intejar kar rahe hote he

(sandy or rahul landon ke anath ashram me bade huwe he to unke rehenki life style be acchi khasi he )

Sandy: or kitna wait karna padega
Rahul : are sandy ata hi hoga ahsu
Itna kehte he samne se ahsu bicycle se ate huwe dikh ta he

ahsu : unke pas ate huwe kese ho bhai log
Sandy or rahul :bhai ke bache hame 8 baje bulake khud itna late araha he

Ahsu:are bhai wo thoda lait ho gaya tha kal lat night tak mobile me movie dekha to sone me der hogai is liye
wo to mom ne subho me utha ya is liye agaya nai to me ahi nai pata

Sandy: chal bhai koi bat nai ahsu
Ye bata sub kese he gher pe or jack uncle kese he
Ashu: sub thik he bhai
Rahul : ahsu bata bhai hub kya plan karna he ghumne jane ke liye
idhar landon me he ghumna he ke kahi baher be out of cuntry jaye

Sandy :rahul kuch ho to nahi gaya tuje sidha out of cuntry ghum ne ki bat kar raha he
Rahul:are bhai kab tak idher he landon me ghum te rahege kahi or jate he

Ahsu :rahul sahi keh raha he sandy
Rahul: muje india jana he bhai bhot suna he india ke bare me ghum ne ke liye ek dam best jaga he ye or ahsu tere mom dad bi india se he belong karte he
Sandy :chalo tum dono kehte he to india ghum ke aye lekin muje nahi lagta ke ahsu ke mom dad ahsu ko jane ke parmisan de

Rahul: hmm ye to problam hogai muje bi esa lagta he ahsu ko nai jane de india
Lekin ahsu ek bar kosis karke to dekh kuch kam ban jaye
Ahsu : thik he me kosis karuga mom dad ko mana ne ki
Chalo fir kal yahi milte he

(Sana or rustam ki jaan basti he ahsu me
Ek hi baccha hone ke karan ye ahsu ko kahi be akele door ghum ne jane nahi dete )

Nice update

 

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UPDATE 2


ye log landon me rehte he is liye in ki Hindi me conversation likhuga

Gher ki bat kare to
ek banglow typ ka gher he Ahsaan ka jis me do flor he
Jisme bich me gher he
or gher ki charo tarf gardan bana huwa he
gher ke charo tarf choti choti gahns he
ek banglow me ghusne ke liye gate hota he wese he ek gate he

Jisme niche ke flor pe ek kicthen
ek bada sa hall he or ek room he jisme
Ahsaan ke ghare ke chote mote kam karne wale
ek uncle(kaka) rehte he jinka
Name he--jack age 48
Ham jack uncle ko apna gher ka membar hi mante he
Jack uncle ek army ritayer offiser he landon ambasy ke
Or ek dam fit rakhte he apne apko
Second flor pe

3room he
Ek me ahsaan ke mom or dad rehte he
Second me ahsaan rehta he or tisra room guest rom he
Jo hamesa band rehta he



Rustam offis jane ke liye ready hokar niche ata he
Or dining tabal par beth kar sana ko brekfast laga ne ko kehta he

Sana : kitchen se nilke te huwe kehti he
Kya bat he ji aj bhot jaldi office jane ke liye tayyar hogaye

Rustam: wo aj ek importan miting he is liye jana he or jack kaha he dikh nahi raha

Sana :pata nahi kahi gaya hoga

Rustam : ok jaldi brekfast lagao muje der horahi he lag ta he aj muje he gadi chalake jana padega

Sana:thik he abi lai

Rustam brekfast karke office nikal jata he
Or sana ahsaan ke room ki tarf jati he usko utha ne ke liye
Room me entar hoti he sana shock ho jati he

Kyu ke uska beta ahsaan jamin pe soya huwa he or nind me muskura raha he
Sana shock ke mare bus ahsaan ko hi dekh ti rehti he

Fir sana use utha ne jati he ahsu uth ja beta subho ke 8 buj rahe he

Ahsu nind me hi kehta he sone dona mom
Hub thodina school jana he
Muje sub pyar se ahsu bulate he
Sana: ahsu beta tuje pata he na tuje aj sandy(sandeep) or rahul ko milne jana he
Tune muje kal jaldi utha ne ko bola tha na

Ahsu teri mom meto bhul hi gaya tha accha huw apne yad dila diya

Wo do no meri jan le le ge
Agar jaldi nai phoca to

Ahsu mom ap nasta lagao me bus thody der me aya
Ye keh kar woshroom me chale jata he or
ahsu ready hoke nice ake dining tebal par beth jata he

Ashu:mom jaldi nasta do muje let horaha he

Sana : ha beta bus abi lati hu



Ahsu nasta karke sandy or rahul ko milne nikal jata he apne bicycle Leke anath ashram ki taraf

Sandy or rahul
Ahsu ka hi intejar kar rahe hote he

(sandy or rahul landon ke anath ashram me bade huwe he to unke rehenki life style be acchi khasi he )

Sandy: or kitna wait karna padega
Rahul : are sandy ata hi hoga ahsu
Itna kehte he samne se ahsu bicycle se ate huwe dikh ta he

ahsu : unke pas ate huwe kese ho bhai log
Sandy or rahul :bhai ke bache hame 8 baje bulake khud itna late araha he

Ahsu:are bhai wo thoda lait ho gaya tha kal lat night tak mobile me movie dekha to sone me der hogai is liye
wo to mom ne subho me utha ya is liye agaya nai to me ahi nai pata

Sandy: chal bhai koi bat nai ahsu
Ye bata sub kese he gher pe or jack uncle kese he
Ashu: sub thik he bhai
Rahul : ahsu bata bhai hub kya plan karna he ghumne jane ke liye
idhar landon me he ghumna he ke kahi baher be out of cuntry jaye

Sandy :rahul kuch ho to nahi gaya tuje sidha out of cuntry ghum ne ki bat kar raha he
Rahul:are bhai kab tak idher he landon me ghum te rahege kahi or jate he

Ahsu :rahul sahi keh raha he sandy
Rahul: muje india jana he bhai bhot suna he india ke bare me ghum ne ke liye ek dam best jaga he ye or ahsu tere mom dad bi india se he belong karte he
Sandy :chalo tum dono kehte he to india ghum ke aye lekin muje nahi lagta ke ahsu ke mom dad ahsu ko jane ke parmisan de

Rahul: hmm ye to problam hogai muje bi esa lagta he ahsu ko nai jane de india
Lekin ahsu ek bar kosis karke to dekh kuch kam ban jaye
Ahsu : thik he me kosis karuga mom dad ko mana ne ki
Chalo fir kal yahi milte he

(Sana or rustam ki jaan basti he ahsu me
Ek hi baccha hone ke karan ye ahsu ko kahi be akele door ghum ne jane nahi dete )

Good start, keep writing

 

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UPDATE 3


Sandy or rahul se milke ahsu gher a jate he

Mom: agaye ahsu beta
Ahsu: ha mom or kuch bat karni thi apse
Mom: ha bolo beta kya bat he
Ahsu: sandy or rahul india ghumne jane ka bol rahe he
Mom soch me padjati he ek bar india ka nam sun kar or fir kehti he beta me tere dad se puch ke dekh te hu fir tuje btaugi

Ahsu. ok mom kal muje jawab chaiye
Mom:thik he

(ahsu ki jaga pe main likhug)

Main ne notice kiya ke india ka name lete he mom tention me agaye he is liye maine jada bat nahi ke or apne kamre me chala gaya or action movi dekhne laga mobile me

Sham ko papa office se ate he or hall me ake sofe pe beth jate he

Mom hall me beth kar tv dekh rahi hoti he
Dad :kya bat he ap kabi tv dekh te nahi or aj ap
Tv dekh rahi ho or mere ane ka pata bi nahi chala
Mom:apke bete ko india jana he ghumne
Sidha mud de ke bat keh di mom ne
Dad ye sun ke to ek jhatke me khada ho jata he
Kya keh rahi ho sana ise waha jane nai de sakta me
Mom is me
me kya kar sakti hu
Use kabi na kabi to jana he padega na india
Aj nahi to kal
Is liye me kehti hu use jane dijye
Or usko bina btaye hum uski security ke liye jack ko bhej dege uske piche

Or mere bete ne aj tak hum se kuch manga nahi he or usne pehli bar kuch managa he
Hum se uski khusi hamari khusi he

Dad:thik he bhejdo lekin tumhare bhai ko kehdena mera ahsu (yani jack ko mom jack ko muhbola bhai manti he)
Sahi salamt muje wapis chaiye
Mom:thik he meh kehdugi bhai ko ap tention na le
Jub tak jack ahsu ke sath he use kuch nahi hoga
Dad:thik he
Enki yaha bat khtam hote he jack ke entry hoti he gher me kya bat he Didi

Mom bhai wo ahsu ko india ja na he ghum ne to me keh rahi thi ke apko ahsu ke safty ke liye uske piche jana hoga
Jack :me samj gaya didi bus kab jana he muje bta dena
Mom.thik he bhai me kal ahsu se puch ke btati hu

Fir mom dinar bana ne ke liye kitchen me chali jati he
Dad sad voice me jack se bus itna he kehte he mere bete ke jimme dari tum ko soup tahu
jack :are jiju ap to senty hogaye
Tention mat lo ahsu mere bete jesa he use kuch nahi hohga
Dad:ek he beta he mera fikar to rahe ge
Ahsu ko india ke culture ke bare me jada pta nahi he
Jack:ap be fikar rahiye use waha kuch nahi hoga
Idhar inki bat khatam hote he jack apne kam ke liye niakal jata he

Dinar ke waqt sub dining tabel pe bethe hote he
Or mom khana laga ti he sub ke liye
Dad:Ahsu beta kab jana he india
Main kabi mom ko to kabi dad ko dekhta
Dad:kya huwA ahsu beta esa kyu dekh rahe ho
Main:kya such me dad me india jau ghumne
Dad:ha beta jao khub moj masti karna waha bus ladai jhagde se dur rehna
Main thik he papa
Wese muje dout he ke muje ap itne asani se akele to nahi bhejge itne door
Par pakka yakin he jack uncle ko ap mere piche jarur bheje ge
Dad:ha wo to hum bheje ge he bus tum se dur rahe ga jack tumhari safty ke liye
Main:ap itna tention kyu lete ho dad me koi itna bada rich man nahi hu jo ap muje itni security dete he muje pata he jubse me 7th me tha tub se jack uncle muje protect karte arahe he esa kyu dad
Dad :wo me abi bta nahi sakta jub sahi waqt ayega tumhe pata chal jayga
Mom:ap dono bus bate he karte rahoge ya khana bi khauge or jack tumne bi khana shuru nahi kiya
Jack :ise to sub pata he ke me isko protact karta hu or muje esa lagta tha ke ahsu ko pta hi nai hoga
Main:are jack uncle thori bhot tips to apne he muje shekhai he apne as pas ke logo ko pahachaan Ne ki or jo bande ap ne mere piche laga rakhe he na wo sub formal me rehte huwe bi ek dam army type ke bande lagte he or hamesa mujse thori duri bnaye rakh te he kyu uncle mene sahi kaha na
Jack:ek dam sahi kaha he tumne
Dad :lagta he jack tumhari training dene ka waqt agaya he
Main:konsi training dad
Dad:wo beta ese he muh se nikal gaya chalo khaana khao
Main :mun me soch ta hu papa konsi training ki bat kar rahe the jack uncle se
Hmm muje kya papa jo bolege wo karluga main

Khana khatm karke mom dad ko good night wish kiya or apne kamre me chala gaya main

Apne room me ake maine sandy ko call kare ke bata diya kal subho me milne ke liye

Awesome update

 

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Update 4

Morning me mumy muje utha ne ati he or kehti he beta chalo uth jao

Main : good morning mom
Mom :god morning beta chalo jaldi jao or ready hoke niche aa jao papa wait kar rahe he tera

Main: Ok mom

Thodi der me ready hoke me niche ata hu
To dad daining tabel pe brekfast kar rahe hote he
Main: goodmorning dad
Dad :goodmorning ahsu beta
Ao betho
Or btao kub nikal rahe ho india jane ke liye

Main ne Dad se kaha
hum 2 din bad niklege india ke liye or
3 Flight Tickets book karwa dege aap ?
Dad ok tickets book karwa duga
Main ne papa ko thenkx kaha itne me dad bole tumhare
dono dost kai dino se nazar nahi arahe sandy or rahul

Maine kaha dad wo abi enjoy kar rahe he vacation ko

Fir dad brekfast karke office nikal jate he
Or me bi nasta kar ke mom ke pas chale
Jata hu
Mom:ao beta betho
Main nahi mom muje jana he sandy or rahul ke pas bus wo kya he thode pese chaaiye the shopping ke liye
Mom:thik he beta mom almari me se ek card muje nikal ke deti he
Ye lo beta isme se jitne chaiye pese nikal lena
Sandy or rahul ko bi shopping karwa dena

Main ok mom thenkyou so muche love you mom

Mom:mom ko thenkyou bolta he koy
beta sub tere liye he to he
Jaldi se jao sandy or rahul ko milke shoping karo or tino sath me sham ko ghar aa jaana
Thik he beta
Main: ok mom chalo me jata hu bye

Main ghar se apni bicycle leke anath ashram ki taraf nikal jata hu
Waha anath ashram ke bahar he ek ground he waha muje mere dono dost mil jate he

Sandy ahsu ko dekh kar kehta he aj bada khus
Lag raha he lagta he kam ban gaya

Ahsu do no ke pas ate huwe kehta he
Aj kuch bolo ge nahi late huwa isliye
Rahul:nai aj kuch nai kahege tuje
Sandy:tere face pe khusi saf jhalak rahi he ke tuje india jane ki Permission Mil gai he
Main:ha bhai mil gai me to tumko Surprise Dene aya yaha to tum logo ne Surprise Kardiya
koi bat nahi chalo shoping ke liye nikal te he
Sandy ye bicycle anath ashram me laga de hum texi se jayege shopping karne

Hum tino taxi se nikal jate he

apne liye kapde vagairah ki shopping karne or shaam ko gher aajate he

Gher ate he mom ham tino se kehti he kesa raha aj ka din

Sandy :aunty ek dam badhiya raha aj ka din or
Kese he aap or uncle dikh nahi rahe

Mom kehti he i am fine beta or uncle office se ate he hoge
rahul tu chup kyu khada he kuch bolega nahi

Rahul. Wo bus ese hi aj pura din ghum ne ki wajese thak gaya hu na is liye aunty

Maine kaha mom hum mere kamre me ja rahe he dinar karne ke liye bula lijyega

Rat ko hum sub khane ke liye daining tabel pe bethe hote he tub dad kehte he ahsu beta tumrai tikets book hogi he perso ki

Maine kaha thik he dad
Fir khana khtam karke mom dad hum tino ko india me ghumne jane ke salah mashvera dene lage
Or fir

Sandy or rahul anath ashram chale jate he or me apne kamre ki tarf chala jata hu

Next day subho uth ke apne jane ki tayyari me lag jata hu or sandy or rahul ko bi paking karne ke liye kehdeta hu esa hi bhag dod me pura din nikal jata he mera

Rat me diner ke time jack uncle mujse kehte he kaha kaha ghumne jane wale ho beta

Maine kaha hum mumbai jayege fir waha se koi acchi jaga dekh kar hotel me rukege or long drive pe jayege wahi se desaid karege kaha jana he
Jack uncle thik he beta

Khana khake apne rooom me jate he sandy ko call karke subho me ready rehne ke liye keh diya

Next day subho me ready hoke apna bag leke niche aya or bag said pe rakh ke nasta kiya

Dad:ready hogaye beta chalo nikal te he
Main ne kaha ha dad chalo nikal te he

Mom:ahsu apna khayal rakhna or time se khana kha lena or din me subho sham muje call karna thik ke
Ye kehte he mom ki ankho me asu agaye

Mom ap ese roye nahi me apna khayal rakhuga or sahi time pe kha bi luga
Or wese bi jack uncle hmare sathi to he ap tention na le
(sandy or rahul ko pta nahi he ke jack uncle is trip me unke sath he or unko protect kar rahe he)
Mom se wida lekar main
Or papa gadi me beth kar anath ashram ki taraf nikal jate he sandy or rahul ko pikup kar ke hum airpot nikal jate he
Jack bi unhi ke piche next flight se india jane ke liye nikal jata he apne khas admiyo ko lekar

Nice update

 

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UPDATE 5

Hamari Flight india me mumbai airpot me land karti he or ham mumbai Airpot se bahar ajate he
Dad ne hamre hotel me ruk ne ka intejam pehle se he kar diya tha

Is liye hame picup karne hotel ke tarf se car aye huwi thi hum usme beth ke hotel jane ke liye nikal jate he

Raste me sandy kehta he akhir hum india aahi gaye bhot maza ane wala he ye trip me

Rahul: ha bhai bhot maza ane wala he ye trip me

Sandy jub meri tarf dekhta he to mujse kehta he bhai kya dekh raha he baher ki taraf

Maine ne kaha kuch nahi bhai bus ek alag he sukun mil raha he yaha aakar muje or such kahu to bhot iccha thi muje yaha ane ki or itna kehte he

Hamri gadi hotel ke samne ake rukti he
Jese hi hamri najar hotel pe padi ham to dekh te he reh gaye hotel ke badle mahel kehna sahi hoga
(Ho bi kyu na akhir mumbai ki san he
Taj hotel)

Main man me socha ta hu dad ke pas itne pese kaha se aye jo itne mehenge hotel me hamare liye book kiya
Fir me jada na soch te huwe hum tino hotel me chale gaye
Haum tino ka kamra ek he tha
Thodi der rest karke hum ne apne room me he khaana manga liya
Khana kha kar hum bethe huwe the
Hamre room ki jo gallery Thi waha se samander ka najara saf dikh raha tha
Rahul :aj to kahi ja nahi sakte ghum ne kyu na samander kina re ghum ke aye sham ko
Sandy:ha ye sahi rahe ga
Kya kehte ho ahsu
Maine kaha thik he

Sham ke waqt ham tino pedal he nikal jate he samandar kinare thandi thandi havaye chal rahi bhot sukun mil raha tha yaha ake
Koi apne gf ke sath baho me bahe dal ke bethe howe the to koi apny family ke sath bethe bethe game khel rahe the to koi ghode savari kar raha tha ye naza ra dekh bhot accha lag raha tha

Nahi to hamre (landon )city me log samandar kina re nange puunge chote kapdo me ghum te rehte he ?
Rahul or sandy be ye najara dekh rahe the
Sandy kehta he hamre yaha se accha to idhar ka mahol he
Rahul: such me yar kitna enjoy kar rahe he ye log
Kaash ke hamri be koi family hote to hum be ek sath me ese he enjoy or moj masti kar rahe hote ye kehte he rahul ki ankho me ansu aajate he idher sandy ke face be sad ho jata he

Maine kaha bhai kisne kaha tumhare mom dad nahi he mere mom dad tumhare be mumy papa hena
hum sub ek family to he kya mere mumy papa ne tumeh kabi anath nahi samjha he hamesa tumhe apne bete jesa mana or rakha he or mom dad ne to tum dono ko apne sath rehne ke liye bi kitni bar kaha he

Mere esa kehte he dono muje gale lag ke rone lagte he fir maine unko thodi der rone diya jis se unka dil halka ho jaye or esa waps feel na
kare

Thodi der he hoi thi ke muje mom ka call ata he
Mom:kya kar rahe ho beta
Maine kaha mom hum tino samandar kinare ghum ne aye huwe he
Mom:accha or kesa lag raha he india jake
Main ek dam mast mom bhot accha lag raha he
Mom:hmmm sandy or rahul ko maza araha he ke nahi waha par
Main:dono ko maza araha he abi thodi der pehle ro rahe the yaha ghumne aye huwe familys ko dekh kar
Mom:beta bin maa bap ke bacche he ro na to ayega he or tu tention mat le unke mom dad ki kami puri kar de ge hum
Tum log india se ao ge to ek surprise he tum tino ke liye
Ahsu khus hote hove love you mom
Mom:love you to beta sandy or rahul ka kahyal rakhna thik he or apna bi
Main thik he mom chalo bad me bat karta hu rat hogai he yaha par kal bat kare ge

Mom se bat karke hum tino hotel aajate he or apne room me he rat ka khana mangava ke khana kha kar so jate he

Idhar london me
Mom or dad apne kamre be bethe huwe the
Dad mom se kehte he ahsu se bat hoi apki
Mom: ne kaha ha thodi der pehle hi bat ki ahsu se or
Mom papa se mere sath jo bat hoi the wo dad ko bta ti he or kehti he
kyu na hum sandy or rahul ko anath ashram me jake unhe goud lele

Dad ye to bhot acchi bat he wese
Dono ko humne aj tak apne bete jesa hi mana he wo dono hamre sath nahi rehna chate to me kya kar sakta hu

Mom ap tention na le ye bar me unhe apne sath hi rakh ne wali hu bus
Dad thik he kal ham dono anath ashram jake
unhe goud lene ki formalitie Puri kar lege thik he
Mom ha thik he
Hum un tino ko jub yaha ayege tub unhe surprise Dege
Or subse jyada khus to hamara beta hi hoga
Use do bhai mil jayge
( note....sandy or rahul ko ahsu ke mom dad tub se jante he jub ahsu 7ts class me tha fir in tino ke gheri dosti ho jati he or inka ahsu ke ghar ana jana laga rehta he ahsu ke mom dad ne kai bar sandy or rahul ko apne sath rehne ke liya mana ya he lekin wo dono nahi mane undono ko esa lag raha tha ke wo kahi bojh na ban jaye ahsu ke mom dad pe is liye wo ahsu ke waha rehne se mana karte the )

Fantastic update

 

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UPDATE 7

Next day subho me hum log jaldi uth gaye
Ready hoker nasta kiya or lah-ladakh jane ki tayyari karne lage

Hum tino apne bags lekar hotel ki bahar chal diye
Fir shurunhuwa hamara leh ladakh ka safar waha hum tin din ruke kafi mozmasti ki waha pe hamne bike ride bi kiya hotel me na ruke ke ham logo ne camping kiya fir waha se hum log jammu kashmir nikal gaye ghumne waha be do din ruk kar waps aagaye delhi
Agele din hamri landon ki flight thi is liye hamne pura din aram kiya or naxt day hum tino landon phoch gaye

Landon Airpot se hum log jese hi bahar aye to dekha samne mom dad khade the
Maine unke pas jake mom dad ko gale mila
Sandy or rahul be mom dad ke pas aake jese he une pair chune ke liye jhuke un dono ko gale se laga liya or sair par hat gumha ke kehne lage sada khus raho beta

Main:kya bat he mom dad ap dono aye he hame lene
Apne taklif kyu ki
Mom:isme taklif ki kya bat he beta tere dad aj ghar the is liye agye tum tino ko lene
Fir hum sub gher ki tarf nikal jata he

Raste me sandy kehta he aunty hame anath ashram drop kardena pahle
Mom:nahi beta abi sath me chalo ghar pe kal chale jana
Sandy:thik he aunty
Hamri car ghar pe ake rukti he or hum sub ghar me ajate he
Dad: kesa raha tum teeno ka india ka safar
Rahul:ek dam mast uncle bhot maza aya
India me hamara to dil he nai kar raha tha idhar aneke
Ahsu:ha dad bhot accha laga india jake
Wese dad ap se ek bat puchu
Dad:ha pucho na beta
Maine :dad ap log be india se belong karte he
To hamara be koi gher or parivar hogena
Ye bat maine jaise kahi papa tention me agaye
Iteme mom waha ajati he or kehti he chalo sub log khane beth jaye ye
Fir Hum sub khane beth jate he
Meri nazar to dad par he rehti he jo bhot tention me dikhay de rahe the jub se mene unse india me apne gher or parivar ke bare me pucha tha
Ham khana kha kar hall me bethe the
Mom:sandy or rahul aj se tum dono yaha rahoge hamare sath
hamne tum dono ko goud le liya he
Ye sun te hi ham teeno shok ho jate he
Sub se jyada khus me huwa tha
Wahi rahul or sandy to ye bat sunke shok ke mare khade hojate he or mom dad ko gale lag kar rone lagte he
Mom:shant ho jau beta hub kabi apne mom dad ko yad karke rona nahi
Hum hena tumhare mom dad aaj se hame mom dad kehana thik he
Sandy or rahul ek sath kehte he thik he mom?
Mom:sandy or rahul beta tum dono ahsu ke room me rahoge ajse thik he
Ahsu:mom aj apne muje bhot bade khusi di he meri life ka subse accha din he ye
Mere dono dost aj mere bhai bun gaye he
Hub me apne apko kabi akela mehsus nahi karuga ye kehte he main re ankhe num ho jati he jo khusi ke ansu the
Mom:are beta esa rote nai he tum ne jub india me sandy or rahul ki bat ki thi mujse tub he hamne sandy or rahul ko anath ashram jake goud le liya tha hum to bus tum teeno ke ane ka intejar kar rahe the
Main: mom apne ye bhot accha kiya

Fir hum tino mere kamre me ajate he jub aya to dekha ek king size ka bad laga huwa he or diwar par ham teeno ke 12th exam ke last din ke jo photo khichi thi uski badi se photo lagi huwi thi hum teeno ye dekh kar bhot khus ho jate he

Next day subho me hum sub brekfast karne bethe huwe the
Dad :baccho hub kya karna he age ke padhai ke liye konse college me admission Lena he
Maine kaha humne abi kuch socha nai he dad
Kal btayge ap ko
Dad:thik he beta
Ham teeno nasta karke upar apne kamre me
Agaye
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Dusri taraf india me sarika college jane ke liye apne ghar se nikal te he
Wahi raste me gundo ki najar sarika pe padti he jo gadi me bethe bethe ganja funk rahe the
Ye wahi gunde the jub ahsu india aya or sarika ko bacha ya tha

Sarika ne jis gundeo ko tamacha mara tha uska name danny tha jo ungundo ka leader tha wo apne aadmiyo se kehta he ishare se us ladki ko utha na he chal jaldi gadi bhaga

Danny sarika ko apni gadi me kheench leta he or uska muh band kardeta he or kehta he apne adde pe le chal gadi is chamiya ko aj kali se phool banay ge
Idhar ye bat sunte he sarika chhath pataane lagatee hai or
Sarika ke sath laga tar teen din tak rap karne ke bad
use vaheen chhod aate hain jahaan se uthaaya tha saarika bejaan se haalat mein rod par padee huee thee raaste mein aane jaane vaale log bas aise hee dekh rahe the
kisee ne bhee help nahin kee saarika kee saarika himmat haar chukee andar se bilkul toot chukee thee thodee himmat karake saarika apane pair par khadee huee aur ghar kee taraph chal dee saarika un ladakiyon mein se nahin thee jo aatmahatya kar le
saarika ne thaan liya tha vah gundon ko aisee saja degee ki unakee ruh tak kaamp uthegee
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Nice update

 

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UPDATE 8

Ham teeno Apne Kamre Mein Baithe hue the
Sandy Mujhse Kahta Hai bhai, kaun se college mein admission lena he

Maine kaha mein India Jana chahta hu
Sandy aur Rahul meri baat sunkar hairan ho jate he
Maine kaha mein India College karne ke bahane Apne mom-dad ki family ke bare me pta karna chata hu mom-dad India se he to mom-dad ki family bhi Hogi India mein

main Janna Chahta Hun Ki Aisa Kya hua tha ki mummy papa yahan Landon Mein rehte
Hain Akele apni family se door


Maine Kai bar Mom Ko Kisi Se call par baat karte hue dekha hai aur vah jab call aata hai tab mummy bahut khush rehti hai mujhe aisa lagta hai ke wo call India se hi aata Hoga aur kisi ke bare me puch ti rehti he sayad samne koi phone pe lady hogi muje esa lagta he

Rahul:main bhi kai baar Socha Hai Ki mom-dad Akele Yahan Kyon rahte hain aur unke Parivar wale in se milane Kyon Nahin Aate

Main ne To Aaj Tak Kisi Ko Mere Ghar Aate Hue Dekha hi Nahin Hai Ki mom dad Se Koi milane Aaya ho

Mom se puchna padega Kyon Yahan Akele rahte hain? Aur unke Parivar wale aur rishtedar koi milane Kyon Nahi ate ye keh kar main chup ho jata hu


idhar mom-dad apne kamre mein baithe hue the Dad mom se kahate Hain aaj to tumne bacha He liya muje varna mai ahsu ko kya jawab deta Hamare family ke bare me


Mom-use kabina kabi to bata na hi padega ham dono ki family ke bare
Or muje lagta he ye waqt sahi he use bata ne ke liye
Dad: ya kya keh rahi ho tum agar hamne use bata diya to india jane ke liye jidd karega abi use puri tarah tayyar karne me wat he uski traing be baki he jo jack dene wala he
Mom:aap tentinon na lo me sub sambahl lugi
kub tak chupke bethe rahe ge hum landon me hame bi to jana he padega na india
Is liye waqt aa gaya he ahsu ko bta ne ka
Dad: jesa tum thik lage vesa karo
Mom:thik he me kal ahsu se bat karti hu


Next day subho me hum sub nasta kar ke hall me bethe huwe the
Dad office jane ke liye nikal gaye
Mom ham teeno se kehti he to kya soch he tum logo ne konsi college me admison lena he
Maine kaha mom muje apse kuch bat karni he
Mom :ha bolo beta kya puchna he
Maine kaha mom hamra koi parivar he ya nahi
Meri batt sun ke to mom thoda soch me pad gayi
Mom:beta me tum ko sub batugi sham ko tumhare dad gher ajaye tub
Maine kaha thik he mom


Hum teeno gher pe bethe huwe boor hore the to hum ghum ne nikal gaye hub bus muje shamm ka intejar tha



Dosto update chota he
Eid karne ke liye gav aya huw hu to itna hi
Likh paya hu next update 2din bad mega update ayega

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