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Fantasy Reincartaion

baddevil1297

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Dosto m bi story likhne ka try kar rha hu plz spport karna sayad achi na likh pao par kosis to kar hi sakte h or ye story maine apne ap se likh rha hu kisi se na koi samband h iska na hi hoga
 
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Red Skull

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congratulations for new story bro
 

baddevil1297

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Darti se dur kisi planet par kuch log ek ladke ka picha kar rhe the jiski age kuch 20 ya 25 k aspas hogi wo us par lagatar hmle kar rhe the or wo bach ja rha tha tabhi unme se ek ne needles k aakar ki kuch chije fanki <br>
Jinse wo ladka &quot;jade hand&quot; khkar ke apne hath aage karta h <br>
Ladka ( ye niddles poisons niddle the jinpe mere jade hand hi kam kar sakte the inse hath ekdum ice jese ban jate the jo poison ko resist karte the )<br>
Isi tarh wo ek mounton k last end tak phunch jate h niche dekhne par sirf or sirf lava type dikh rha tha <br>
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Jo log us ladke ko pakdne aaye the wo the ek sect k log the jo us ladke ko saza dene aaye the kyuki wo unke partibandit area jha jana sbka mana h wo wha gya tha or wha se ek rahsyayi kitab jo usne uthyai the lakin ab uske pass koi rasta nhi bacha tha <br>


Sect k log - beche tumhe us jagah jane ki saza milgi kuki wha aaj tak koi nhi jane diya jata tha tumne hmare sect ka niyam bhang kiya h ladka - agar gyan k liye muje marna bi pade to koi gam nhi lakin m jate jate apko ye gift karna cahunga

Aise khte hi usne ek kamal k full type hwa me unke pass chod diya

Jise dekh kar tang sect (kabila ) wale log ascharyachakit ho gye or sochne lage ki agar aisa genious hmare sect me jinda rhega to hm bhut tarki kar sakte h ass pass k sect m ham sbse uper honge lakin tab tak der ho chuki the ladke ne us mountain se chalag laga di the

Sect ka maine head - ye kya kiya tumene or aisa bolkar usne jaldi se sath walo ko dekha or bola dundho use agar wo jinda bach gya to m use sect ka head bnaounga

Ye to the inki bate ab chalte h apne hero par
 

DAIVIK-RAJ

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Darti se dur kisi planet par kuch log ek ladke ka picha kar rhe the jiski age kuch 20 ya 25 k aspas hogi wo us par lagatar hmle kar rhe the or wo bach ja rha tha tabhi unme se ek ne needles k aakar ki kuch chije fanki <br>
Jinse wo ladka &quot;jade hand&quot; khkar ke apne hath aage karta h <br>
Ladka ( ye niddles poisons niddle the jinpe mere jade hand hi kam kar sakte the inse hath ekdum ice jese ban jate the jo poison ko resist karte the )<br>
Isi tarh wo ek mounton k last end tak phunch jate h niche dekhne par sirf or sirf lava type dikh rha tha <br>
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Jo log us ladke ko pakdne aaye the wo the ek sect k log the jo us ladke ko saza dene aaye the kyuki wo unke partibandit area jha jana sbka mana h wo wha gya tha or wha se ek rahsyayi kitab jo usne uthyai the lakin ab uske pass koi rasta nhi bacha tha <br>


Sect k log - beche tumhe us jagah jane ki saza milgi kuki wha aaj tak koi nhi jane diya jata tha tumne hmare sect ka niyam bhang kiya h ladka - agar gyan k liye muje marna bi pade to koi gam nhi lakin m jate jate apko ye gift karna cahunga

Aise khte hi usne ek kamal k full type hwa me unke pass chod diya

Jise dekh kar tang sect (kabila ) wale log ascharyachakit ho gye or sochne lage ki agar aisa genious hmare sect me jinda rhega to hm bhut tarki kar sakte h ass pass k sect m ham sbse uper honge lakin tab tak der ho chuki the ladke ne us mountain se chalag laga di the

Sect ka maine head - ye kya kiya tumene or aisa bolkar usne jaldi se sath walo ko dekha or bola dundho use agar wo jinda bach gya to m use sect ka head bnaounga

Ye to the inki bate ab chalte h apne hero par
Story ki starting point sahi hai
Dekhte Hain next update me kya hota hai
Aur sath hi hero aur us ladke main kya sambandh hai
 

baddevil1297

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Update 2 <br>
Aah mera sir aisa khkar jab maine ankhe kholi to maine apne apko dekha maine umer se chota lag rha tha mera sarir bi kamnjor lag rha tha jese kisi bachhe ka sarir ho tbhi muje pass kisi k hone ka ahsas hua jab maine unhe dekha to m soch m padh gya k ye kon h or m kha aagya hu mera aisa sochne ka mtlb ye tha ki is jagh ko maine kbhi apne sect m nhi dekha tha or fir uper se us aurat ka phnava hi muje aisa kh rha tha ki maine apne sect m nhi hu maine soch hi rha tha ki us aurat ki avaj aayi <br>
Aurat - beta ab kese ho tumhe dard to nhi ho rha aise hi bhut kuch kh gyi wo mujse or maine bas unhe dekh rha tha ek ajeeb sa apna pan ka ahsas muje ho rha tha <br>
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Abhi m soch hi rha tha mera sir drd hone laga muje sb yaad aane laga kese is life k bare m kese mere ma bap yha rhte h kese meri ma kisi k ghar jadhu pocha krke apna gujara karti h mere pitaji to kuch sal bhar se bimar h ise phle hmara bi bada ghar tha pta nhi kya wajh hui k ham sab yha aa gye fir achanak se mere pitaji ki tabhiyat kharab rhne lagi or unhone bistar pakad liya abhi m in sb k bare m soch hi rha tha ki<br>
Maa - beta kya soch rhe ho or ye bata ki tuje itni chote kese aayi<br>
Maine unko kya btata ki muje bhut mar padi thi school se raste m aate time or wajah bi kuch nhi the bas maine kuch ladko ka kha manne se inkar kar diya tha <br>
Ankush - bas ma khlte khlte chot lag gyi the muje <br>
Bekar sa bhana h na par kya kre ab kuch samj nhi aaya to yhi bol diya <br>
Maa:: thik h beta par apna dyan rakha kar or ye khakar wo mere liye kuch bnane gyi <br>
Short intro sbhi ka <br>
Balbir singh - hero father age 42 ekdum shant sawbhav k vykit apne priwar pe jan dene wale <br>
Kusum - hero mom ekdum shant hero se bhut pyar karti h unka bhut ladla h age 40 <br>
Divya - hero ki judwa age 18 bhut jyada khubsurat thike nain naksh <br>
Ankush - hero age 18 abhi to kamjor sa dikhta h lakin hight 6 fit se kuch uper hi hogi <br>
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