Fantasy Reincartaion

[baddevil1297]

Story ki starting point sahi hai
Dekhte Hain next update me kya hota hai
Aur sath hi hero aur us ladke main kya sambandh hai

Thanks bhai commnet k liye muje jyada acha likhna to nhi aata lakin likh rha hu so support karna or galti jarur btana

 

[Aryanv]

awesome update

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Matter of life and death

congregation for new story

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Darti se dur kisi planet par kuch log ek ladke ka picha kar rhe the jiski age kuch 20 ya 25 k aspas hogi wo us par lagatar hmle kar rhe the or wo bach ja rha tha tabhi unme se ek ne needles k aakar ki kuch chije fanki <br>
Jinse wo ladka &quot;jade hand&quot; khkar ke apne hath aage karta h <br>
Ladka ( ye niddles poisons niddle the jinpe mere jade hand hi kam kar sakte the inse hath ekdum ice jese ban jate the jo poison ko resist karte the )<br>
Isi tarh wo ek mounton k last end tak phunch jate h niche dekhne par sirf or sirf lava type dikh rha tha <br>
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Jo log us ladke ko pakdne aaye the wo the ek sect k log the jo us ladke ko saza dene aaye the kyuki wo unke partibandit area jha jana sbka mana h wo wha gya tha or wha se ek rahsyayi kitab jo usne uthyai the lakin ab uske pass koi rasta nhi bacha tha <br>


Sect k log - beche tumhe us jagah jane ki saza milgi kuki wha aaj tak koi nhi jane diya jata tha tumne hmare sect ka niyam bhang kiya h ladka - agar gyan k liye muje marna bi pade to koi gam nhi lakin m jate jate apko ye gift karna cahunga

Aise khte hi usne ek kamal k full type hwa me unke pass chod diya

Jise dekh kar tang sect (kabila ) wale log ascharyachakit ho gye or sochne lage ki agar aisa genious hmare sect me jinda rhega to hm bhut tarki kar sakte h ass pass k sect m ham sbse uper honge lakin tab tak der ho chuki the ladke ne us mountain se chalag laga di the

Sect ka maine head - ye kya kiya tumene or aisa bolkar usne jaldi se sath walo ko dekha or bola dundho use agar wo jinda bach gya to m use sect ka head bnaounga

Ye to the inki bate ab chalte h apne hero par

nice update bhai

 

[baddevil1297]

Update 3
Ab aage

Jesa ki apne padha ki mom kahana bnane chali gyi uske bad maine sochne laga ki ye sarir bhut kamjor h or yha bi takat hi mayne rakhti wese shi hi soch rha tha maine har jagh takat hi to mayne rakhti h agar mujme takat hoti to maine unse na pit kar aata lakin ab or nhi ab muje is sarir ko taktwar bnana hoga or apna ma or pitaji ki bi help karni hogi meri past life ki knowlege mere bhut kam aayegi abhi muje yha kuch jadi butiya chaie the jo jald se jald mere sarir ki kmjori ko mita sake uske liye main do hi jagh dipend rh sakta tha ya to market ya fir m khud unko jangal se dundh kar leke aau kyuki yhi ek fastest way the jo muje mere sarir ko bharne m or takat dene m kam aa sakti the lakin muje koi andaja nhi tha ki wo kitni mahngi aayegi isliye maine jangal se hi lane ka faishla kiya ab ye to ho gye kam maine time dekha to 2 bajne wale the meri bhan bi school se aati hi hogi itne me wo ander aa gyi

Usne aate hi ek najar dekha or phir apne kamre me chali gyi ye ghar 3 kamro ka set h ek mera meri bhan ka or momdad ka sb ground flore pe hi h maine uske behviour ko lakar bi preshan tha wese uska ye roj ka hi tha usne kbhi dhang se bat nhi ki mujse chalo koi na ise bi line pe le aaye ge

Thodi der me maa aagyi

Maa - le beta ye soup pi le thoda

Main - thik h maa ap ise rakh do

Maa jab tak muje dekhti rhi jab tak maine soup khtam nhi kar liya usko khtm karne k bad

main ::: maa muje kuch pese cahiye the muje bhar jana h 2 din bad aaunga

Maa ::: beta pese to m de dungi par abhi tuje chot lagi h or aise m tu kha jae ga maine tuje khi nhi jane dungi

Main:: ma muje kuch nhi hua h or promise m tumhare pass shi se wapis aa jao ga bas do din jane do or abhi m kuch nhi bta sakta is bare m



Bhut manane k bad jakar maa mani maine unse kh diya tha ki m subh hote hi nikal jau ga islie unhone muje 2hjar rupay diye maine bola muje itne nhi lage ge par unhone de diye

Fir maine late gya thodi der bad muje nind aa gyi maine shyam ko utha fir kuch time bad sbne dinner kiya or sone chale gye muje abhi nind nhi aa rhi the maine soch rha tha ki agar wo jadi butiya wha nhi mili to m kya karu ga fir socha ek bar dekhne m kya harj h wha jakar or wese bi unke bare m sayad hi yha kisi ko pta ho isliye unhe whi dundhna hi shi hoga isi tarh sochte sochte muje nind aagyi

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Update 3
Ab aage

Jesa ki apne padha ki mom kahana bnane chali gyi uske bad maine sochne laga ki ye sarir bhut kamjor h or yha bi takat hi mayne rakhti wese shi hi soch rha tha maine har jagh takat hi to mayne rakhti h agar mujme takat hoti to maine unse na pit kar aata lakin ab or nhi ab muje is sarir ko taktwar bnana hoga or apna ma or pitaji ki bi help karni hogi meri past life ki knowlege mere bhut kam aayegi abhi muje yha kuch jadi butiya chaie the jo jald se jald mere sarir ki kmjori ko mita sake uske liye main do hi jagh dipend rh sakta tha ya to market ya fir m khud unko jangal se dundh kar leke aau kyuki yhi ek fastest way the jo muje mere sarir ko bharne m or takat dene m kam aa sakti the lakin muje koi andaja nhi tha ki wo kitni mahngi aayegi isliye maine jangal se hi lane ka faishla kiya ab ye to ho gye kam maine time dekha to 2 bajne wale the meri bhan bi school se aati hi hogi itne me wo ander aa gyi

Usne aate hi ek najar dekha or phir apne kamre me chali gyi ye ghar 3 kamro ka set h ek mera meri bhan ka or momdad ka sb ground flore pe hi h maine uske behviour ko lakar bi preshan tha wese uska ye roj ka hi tha usne kbhi dhang se bat nhi ki mujse chalo koi na ise bi line pe le aaye ge

Thodi der me maa aagyi

Maa - le beta ye soup pi le thoda

Main - thik h maa ap ise rakh do

Maa jab tak muje dekhti rhi jab tak maine soup khtam nhi kar liya usko khtm karne k bad

main ::: maa muje kuch pese cahiye the muje bhar jana h 2 din bad aaunga

Maa ::: beta pese to m de dungi par abhi tuje chot lagi h or aise m tu kha jae ga maine tuje khi nhi jane dungi

Main:: ma muje kuch nhi hua h or promise m tumhare pass shi se wapis aa jao ga bas do din jane do or abhi m kuch nhi bta sakta is bare m



Bhut manane k bad jakar maa mani maine unse kh diya tha ki m subh hote hi nikal jau ga islie unhone muje 2hjar rupay diye maine bola muje itne nhi lage ge par unhone de diye

Fir maine late gya thodi der bad muje nind aa gyi maine shyam ko utha fir kuch time bad sbne dinner kiya or sone chale gye muje abhi nind nhi aa rhi the maine soch rha tha ki agar wo jadi butiya wha nhi mili to m kya karu ga fir socha barbm m kya harj h wha jakar or wese bi unke bare m sayad hi yha kisi ko pta ho isliye unhe whi dundhna hi shi hoga isi tarh sochte sochte muje nind aagyi

nice update
waiting for next update

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update 2 <br>
Aah mera sir aisa khkar jab maine ankhe kholi to maine apne apko dekha maine umer se chota lag rha tha mera sarir bi kamnjor lag rha tha jese kisi bachhe ka sarir ho tbhi muje pass kisi k hone ka ahsas hua jab maine unhe dekha to m soch m padh gya k ye kon h or m kha aagya hu mera aisa sochne ka mtlb ye tha ki is jagh ko maine kbhi apne sect m nhi dekha tha or fir uper se us aurat ka phnava hi muje aisa kh rha tha ki maine apne sect m nhi hu maine soch hi rha tha ki us aurat ki avaj aayi <br>
Aurat - beta ab kese ho tumhe dard to nhi ho rha aise hi bhut kuch kh gyi wo mujse or maine bas unhe dekh rha tha ek ajeeb sa apna pan ka ahsas muje ho rha tha <br>
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Abhi m soch hi rha tha mera sir drd hone laga muje sb yaad aane laga kese is life k bare m kese mere ma bap yha rhte h kese meri ma kisi k ghar jadhu pocha krke apna gujara karti h mere pitaji to kuch sal bhar se bimar h ise phle hmara bi bada ghar tha pta nhi kya wajh hui k ham sab yha aa gye fir achanak se mere pitaji ki tabhiyat kharab rhne lagi or unhone bistar pakad liya abhi m in sb k bare m soch hi rha tha ki<br>
Maa - beta kya soch rhe ho or ye bata ki tuje itni chote kese aayi<br>
Maine unko kya btata ki muje bhut mar padi thi school se raste m aate time or wajah bi kuch nhi the bas maine kuch ladko ka kha manne se inkar kar diya tha <br>
Ankush - bas ma khlte khlte chot lag gyi the muje <br>
Bekar sa bhana h na par kya kre ab kuch samj nhi aaya to yhi bol diya <br>
Maa:: thik h beta par apna dyan rakha kar or ye khakar wo mere liye kuch bnane gyi <br>
Short intro sbhi ka <br>
Balbir singh - hero father age 42 ekdum shant sawbhav k vykit apne priwar pe jan dene wale <br>
Kusum - hero mom ekdum shant hero se bhut pyar karti h unka bhut ladla h age 40 <br>
Divya - hero ki judwa age 18 bhut jyada khubsurat thike nain naksh <br>
Ankush - hero age 18 abhi to kamjor sa dikhta h lakin hight 6 fit se kuch uper hi hogi <br>
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Very nice update bhai maza aa gya

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update 3
Ab aage

Jesa ki apne padha ki mom kahana bnane chali gyi uske bad maine sochne laga ki ye sarir bhut kamjor h or yha bi takat hi mayne rakhti wese shi hi soch rha tha maine har jagh takat hi to mayne rakhti h agar mujme takat hoti to maine unse na pit kar aata lakin ab or nhi ab muje is sarir ko taktwar bnana hoga or apna ma or pitaji ki bi help karni hogi meri past life ki knowlege mere bhut kam aayegi abhi muje yha kuch jadi butiya chaie the jo jald se jald mere sarir ki kmjori ko mita sake uske liye main do hi jagh dipend rh sakta tha ya to market ya fir m khud unko jangal se dundh kar leke aau kyuki yhi ek fastest way the jo muje mere sarir ko bharne m or takat dene m kam aa sakti the lakin muje koi andaja nhi tha ki wo kitni mahngi aayegi isliye maine jangal se hi lane ka faishla kiya ab ye to ho gye kam maine time dekha to 2 bajne wale the meri bhan bi school se aati hi hogi itne me wo ander aa gyi

Usne aate hi ek najar dekha or phir apne kamre me chali gyi ye ghar 3 kamro ka set h ek mera meri bhan ka or momdad ka sb ground flore pe hi h maine uske behviour ko lakar bi preshan tha wese uska ye roj ka hi tha usne kbhi dhang se bat nhi ki mujse chalo koi na ise bi line pe le aaye ge

Thodi der me maa aagyi

Maa - le beta ye soup pi le thoda

Main - thik h maa ap ise rakh do

Maa jab tak muje dekhti rhi jab tak maine soup khtam nhi kar liya usko khtm karne k bad

main ::: maa muje kuch pese cahiye the muje bhar jana h 2 din bad aaunga

Maa ::: beta pese to m de dungi par abhi tuje chot lagi h or aise m tu kha jae ga maine tuje khi nhi jane dungi

Main:: ma muje kuch nhi hua h or promise m tumhare pass shi se wapis aa jao ga bas do din jane do or abhi m kuch nhi bta sakta is bare m



Bhut manane k bad jakar maa mani maine unse kh diya tha ki m subh hote hi nikal jau ga islie unhone muje 2hjar rupay diye maine bola muje itne nhi lage ge par unhone de diye

Fir maine late gya thodi der bad muje nind aa gyi maine shyam ko utha fir kuch time bad sbne dinner kiya or sone chale gye muje abhi nind nhi aa rhi the maine soch rha tha ki agar wo jadi butiya wha nhi mili to m kya karu ga fir socha ek bar dekhne m kya harj h wha jakar or wese bi unke bare m sayad hi yha kisi ko pta ho isliye unhe whi dundhna hi shi hoga isi tarh sochte sochte muje nind aagyi

nice update bhai

 

[Jaat boy]

Story to achi LG rhi h Bhai update do aage

 

[baddevil1297]

Next day
Subh maine 4 baje k karib uth gya tha maine socha aage se yhi rutine follow karunga jitna time meri practice or trainig ko dunga utna acha hoga isliye maine phle fresh hua or phir socha kha jau practice k liye pass k park m jane ka soch kar m nikal gya wha phunch kar maine dekha park kafi bada tha ab se phle m yha kbhi nhi aaya tha bas bahr se jate time dekha tha maine ise ye ander se bhut bda tha bich m jhil type bni hui the uske charo or ki baoundry pe racing track tha thoda ander jaker k park tha jha ghas lgi hui the maine yhi suru karne ka socha phle maine thoda warmup liya or fir maine karate or jijitsu ki practice suru ki wese to martial arts m bhut kuch aata h par abhi suruaat the meri to kam se hi suru karna cahta tha ekdum se itna jyada presure meri body smbhal nhi pati or uper se aaj muje jangal k liye nikalna tha to m wha m styles of self-defense involving kicks, punches, and open-handed chops. ...ki usme muje wha pe 5:30 ho gye the to fir maine ruka or dhyan mudra m baith kar k maine apne ander jankhne muje dyna lagne m preshani to hui par last k 10 mint dyan lagne se maine bhut shant feel kar rha tha ab tak 6 baj chuke the to m wha se utha or ghar ki tarf nikal gya wha se fresh hoker k chal diya bas stand k liye maine bus maine baitha gya ek side me yha se muje bas k under ka sb dikh rha tha abhi bus ko chle hue kuch time hi hua tha ki bas ruki maine dekha to 1 driver bus rukwa rha tha jab bus ruk gyi to driver car k pass gya car bi bhut mhngi lag rhi the Ford Endeavour the maine dekha usme se ek ladies nikli jinki age 40 k aas pass hogi lakin lag nhi rhi the wo bus me aayi sayad car khrab ho gyi hogi unki uske bad bus chal padi unhone ass pass dekha to seat bi full hi the to maine unko apni seat de di socha ma ki umer ki h or uper se pese wali bi sayad hi khada rha jae inse
aurat - thanks beta
Maine- its ok aunty
Uske bad m unke pass na ruk kar aage chala gya abhi bus apne time se chal rhi the ki ek stop par 2 ladke chade dikhne me hi gunde type lag rhe the unhone ass pass dekha to wo ladies par njar gyi wo unke pass gye unko kafi preshan karne lage kbhi unke uper girne ko hote kbhi jan buj kar unko touch karne ki kosis karte aurat bi tang aa gyi the unse
Aurat - tum logo tamiz nhi h kya aram se khde nhi ho sakte
Ladka1- tamiz to h madm par kya kare tumko dekhkar bhul gye kya tagda mal ho tum
Ladka - 2 bas ek bar tamiz sikhane ka moka hme bi do
Wha sb k sb bas tmasa dekh rhe the koi bi samne nhi aa rha tha mujse bardast na hua to m chal diya unki taraff or sida ek diya ladka 1 ke muh me jise sale ka khun nikal aaya abhi wo smbhal pate ise phle hi dusre wale ko bi diya bus phir kya tha apko pta h india ki public ka phle to wo kuch khti nhi lakin agar koi kisi par ladies k mamle m hath utha de to sab k sab use marne lagte h un logo ko apni jaan chudani muskil ho gyi the wo bhag liya tabhi wo aurat mujse fir boli
Aurat - thanks beta tum na hote to pta nhi kya hota
Main -are aunty ye to mera farj tha
Aurat - aaj tumne do bar meri help ki h thanks wese kya name h tumhara
Main :: ji mera name ankush h
Aurat : mera name anuradha choudhry h maine xxxxx shar m rhti hu kbhi aao to milna
Maine - ji aunty
Abhi maine unhe btata ki maine bi whi se hu itne me hi unki car aa gye the jise bus rok kar driver ander aaya or unhe chlne ko khne laga wo aunty muje bye bol kar nikal gyi or maine bi chal diya apne safar par thodi der me maine ek ganv pahuncha wha se kuch dur paidal chalne ka bad jangal ki sima suru the
wese ye jangle thoda khtarnak tha yha se bhut afwah aati the ki aaj is janwar ne hmla kiya to itne gayal ho gye lakin risk to lena tha or ab mere kam meri past life knowlege bi aane wali the jisme se meri purple eye bi the jo ki 100 meter k under aane wali har chhoti se choti movment ko bi cover karti the isme meri eyes ka coloue purple ho jata tha or muje har movement bhut asani se dikhti the cahe wo chinti hi kyu na ho bas us par focous karo to sb dikhta tha or dusra the mere jade hand jo ek tarh se mere hatho ko bilkul strong bna deta tha like metle type ise me asani se kisi bi chij ko rok sakta tha or sbse badi bat inpe posion ka koi asar nhi hota tha wese abhi meri speed jyada nhi the ek normal humon se lakin aane wale samay me ispe bi kam karna tha to ab maine jangal m enter karne ja rha se forest ki sima suru the maine chal diya ander kafi der chalne k bad m kuch under aa gya tha wese ye jangal kafi ghnna tha mtlb ki yha par kafi pass pass phed the abhi maine aas pass dundhna suru kiya tha wese muje kuch hurbs suruaat me hi mil gyi the par jo muje cahiye tha wo nhi mila tha abhi tak wo the blue silwar grass ye ak aise chij the joki apki devlopment ko bhut badha deti the yani apke body devlope jo 1year me honi hogi wo 1 month me kar degi muje pakka yakin nhi tha k e mil bi payega ya nhi phir bi kosis jari the maine abhi chal hi rha the ki muje kuch avaj aayi maine apni purple eye ko activate kiya or muje pta laga yha se kuch 30 meters ki duri par ek siyar h jo ki sayad meri smell feel karta hua aa rha h maine ladne ka faishla kiya wo abhi pass aa hi rha tha ki maine apne bag se cahku nikala jo maine raste me se liya tha ek hath me cahku lene k bad maine wait karne laga k kab wo samne aaye thodi der me ham amne samne the wo bi ful confidence me lag rha tha sala k aaj to akela mila h badiya maza aayega khane me par use sayd ye nhi pta tha ki ye maza h ya saza jese hi usne mujpe chalang lagayi maine side hata or dusre hath se caku uski side kiya jise use ek acha khasa kat lag gya tha pet k pas apna ghav dekh kar to wo pagl hi ho gya ful gusse e mujpe japta maine side to ho gya par muje bi khroche aayi jo uske nakhuno se the ab maine ise serious lene ka faisla kiya or koi moka na dete hue uspe japta or pura caku uske sir k par kar diya uske bad m utha kapde saf kiya or chal diya apne raste
whaskafi dur aane k bad muje ek jarna type mila maine kafi thak gya tha to maine nhane ka faisla kiya maine usme nhane lga pani kafi thanda tha maja aa gya nhake abhi maine nha hi rha tha ki muje kuch dikhyi diya