स्टोरी का कंटेंट अच्छा होगा तो लोग पढ़ेंगे। आपकी कहानियां शुरू में बहुत प्रॉमिसिंग होती हैं। लेकिन आगे जा गोल गोल ही घूम रही है।Kya bas 2-4 writer hi ache bache hai kya jinke update late dene se bahut Miss kar Rahi h public..... Waise bhi meri story 99% cuckold hai kon padta hoga aisi topic story fir bhi likh dete hai...
Jankayar you are a wonderful and finest writer in this forum and i am also a very big fan of your writing skills hance this topic is too good.Kya bas 2-4 writer hi ache bache hai kya jinke update late dene se bahut Miss kar Rahi h public..... Waise bhi meri story 99% cuckold hai kon padta hoga aisi topic story fir bhi likh dete hai...
To remove him, you have to prove, that you have more incomplete stories than Kalua. (Black )Mere hote huwe ju ko kon head banaya![]()
Don't be embarrassed for your incomplete stories. These muthhal reader's don't know the essence of adhuri kahanaiyan..Kya bas 2-4 writer hi ache bache hai kya jinke update late dene se bahut Miss kar Rahi h public..... Waise bhi meri story 99% cuckold hai kon padta hoga aisi topic story fir bhi likh dete hai...
I have more successful incomplete story's than anyone from xf membersTo remove him, you have to prove, that you have more incomplete stories than Kalua. (Black )
Tell us your count.![]()
I have more successful incomplete story's than anyone from xf members![]()
Still waitingrestart ker di kiaParhu ga raat ko wapis lekin iss baar chor ke gaya na
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