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Ye pocket FM ki ek storie jaisi lag rahi hai mere khayal se us ka naam Vampire System thaUpdate 1:- (Introduction)
Mera naam Karan hai. Karan Roy!
Main is waqt apne ek room ke apartment mein baitha hu aur muth maartehuye Earth ki history ki baare mein soch raha hu. I mean main koi intelligent nahi hu lekin chutiya bhi nahi hu
, History to pata hi hai. Ab saal chal raha hai 2061 ab main tumhe Earth ka past aur present ke baare mein thodi baate batadu. To Past mein Earth pe bhut saari Countries thi, government thi, bhut si languages thi, cultures they, terrorists bhi they, in sab Countries aur terrorists ya countries between countries War hoti rehti thi lekin mamla 2050 tak thik chal raha tha aur Earth ki technology bhi kaafi achi ho chuki thi
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Lekin fir hua Earth par ek Alien Planet se attack us Alien species ka naam tha “Drake” Wo sab Green color ke they aur kam se kam 3 meter lambe aur kisi Lizard ki tarah dikhte they lekin unki Skin kisi Dragon jaisi thi, unki technology aur spaceships Earth se 20 guna jyada advance thi. Aur un Drakes ne purey Earth ke sath ek War ched di aur unhone sabhi countries ki aisi maa chodi ki sabko ek sath aana padalekin Drakes ne fir bhi inke laude laga diye. Earth walo ko unse ladne mein problem ho rahi thi kyuki unke Weapons Drakes par koi asar nahi kar rahe they Guns wagarih sab chud chuki thi aur Earth walo ko lagne laga tha ki ab to laude lag chuke hai aur unhe koyi nahi bacha sakta
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Lekin tabhi Earth ke logo mein se hi Humans ka ek bhut bada Group saamne aaya aur unhone Drakes ke sath War ka rukh hi badal diya aur un logo ka naam pada “Originals”. Un sab ke paas thi “Abilities” like elemental powers aur bhut si 1000 tarah ki Powers. Ab unhone apni Power to dikhayi lekin fir bhi Drakes ko hara nahi paaye, to unhone apni powers logo se Share ki aur us War se kaafi saare Heroes nikal ke aaye. Ye War kam se kam 5 saal tak chali thi. Humans jit to gaye they aur Drakes wapis bhi chale gaye they lekin unki sirf ek Spaceship aayi thi aur Earth ka naksa bigad ke chali gayi thi.
Ab Earth ke logo ko dar tha ki wo log wapis aa sakte hai aur fir se laude laga sakte hai aur un logo ke paas powers ke alawa kuch nahi tha unse ladne ke liye aur unko pata tha ki Drakes jo aaye they wo sirf Soldiers hi they. Jab sabki gaand fati huyi thi tab “Originals” saamne aaye aur unhone apni abilities Books mein daal ke baaki humans ke sath share karni suru kar di. Lekin “Abilities” sirf ameer logo ko aur jo gareeb they unhe mili gaand pe laat. Kyuki madarchod “Originals” ne wo Abilities Book paiso mein baichi aur bichara gareeb aadmi kaha se kharide ye sab. Ab Powers ki Problem solve huyi to ek problem aur khadi huyi ki unke paas koi technology ya Weapons nahi they. Lekin is problem ko bhi solve karne ke liye bhi ek mahasay parkat huye unka naam tha “Richard Eno” unhone Earth ke logo ko bhut hi advance Technology di. Unhe Beast Planets se introduce karwaya aur kayi teleporters bana ke diye jisse Humans Beast Planets pe jaa sake aur un Beast ko hunt kar sake un Beasts se mile huye Crystal se Beast Weapons taiyar kar sake jo ki kaafi Powerful ho Drakes ke khilaaf.
Ab Problem ye huyi ki Earth pe kisi ka Control nahi tha. Aur ye problem Solve karne ke liye 4 Originals Family saamne aayi jo baaki Originals se kaafi Strong thi. Un chaaro Families ne Military banayi aur Military ko Earth Power ki Ability de di. Aur in 5 Superpowers ne bhut saare Beast Planets pe kabza kar liya waha ke khatarnak Beasts ko maarke. Sab sahi jaa raha tha lekin sab ki Maa tab chudi jab Earth par se Weak Humans ko Beast Planets pe rehne ke liye bhej diya gaya. Earth pe sirf Originals Family aur Military hi Reh sakti thi. Baaki kisi ko Earth pe rehna hai to unhe bhut jyada paisa dena padega in Superpowers ko nahi to niklo Beast Planets pe. Ab chalo Beast Planet hi sahi wo bhi rehne layak they lekin waha bhi rehne ke liye logo ko Tax dena padta tha un Superpowers ko jinke Planets pe wo hai.
Ye to huyi Past ki baate ab batata hu Earth ka Present aur fir bataunga Abilities ke baare mein. Is time Earth Originals aur Military ke control mein tha. Jaise maine pehle bataya waise hi Originals mein se 4 sabse strong families power mein thi.
Ye 4 Families ke naam kuch is parkar se hai:-
Graylash Family (inke paas sabse powerful Lightning abilities hai.)
Sunshield Family (inke paas sabse powerful Fire abilities hai.)
Bree Family (Is Family ke log hand to hand combat mein kaafi powerful hai aur inke paas Beasts ko tame ya control karne ki abilities hai.)
True dream Family (is Family ke Head ke paas ek anokhi hi Ability hai jo kisi dusre human ke paas nahi hai, ye kisi bhi person ki ability cheen ke kisi ko bhi de sakta hai. To iski Family mein different type ke ability users hai.)
Ye to huye Big four family. Ab aate hai military pe to inke jo Higher ups hai unke paas highest level ki Earth ability hai aur jo low rank pe unke paas low level ki Earth abilities hai. Military mein koi bhi join kar sakta hai kisi bhi families se yaha tak ki Originals se bhi to Military mein Different ability users bhi hai.
Ab Earth pe koi Country nahi hai aur na hi different Language hai. Sab log English mein baat karte hai lekin main Story Hindi mein hi bataunga. Baaki Languages ban hai. Earth pe Military ke 8 Schools jo ki different Continent aur islands pe hai. Baaki ka Earth Top Four Families ke paas hai aur baaki ki Originals Families inhi Top Four Families ke under rehti hai. In Sab mein sabse ganda game military khel rahi hai. Military Schools mein 18 ki age ke baad admission hota hai aur koi bhi admission le sakta hai isme chahe wo ameer ho ya gareeb chahe uske paas abilities ho ya na ho. Ab Military un Weak aur Non-Ability user ko tang karwati hai strong students se aur jab wo gareeb log bilkul tut jaate hai to Military unhe Low Level ki Earth Ability de deti hai jisse wo Weak aur Gareeb log Military ko apna bhagwan maan lete hai Military ke liye khud chudne ko taiyar ho jaate hai.
Ab aate hai Abilities ke upper to main batadu ek Person sirf Ek tarah ki Ability hi use kar sakta hai. Aur kisi Chutiye ne ek baar ko chutiya si ability sikh li jaldbaazi mein aur fir aage chalke usey koi achi aur strong ability mil gayi to bas wo lauda hilata reh jaayega aur kuch nahi kar paayega. Ab kayi abilities bhut Rare hoti hai jinhe Originals bhi share nahi kar sakte aur na hi wo kisi ko sikha sakte. Abilities ki Book kayi level mein divide hoti hai jaise tumne Water Abilities ki book kharidi aur wo level 2 ki hai to tum sirf level 2 ki hi Skills use kar paaoge, lekin tum apna level badha sakte ho Same Ability ki High level ki Book kharid ke. Ab ek person ek hi Ability kyu use kar sakta hai. Kyuki agar tum koi ability sikhte ho tumhari Body mein ek alag tarah ke Cells banne lagte hai jinse tum wo ability use kar sakte ho unhe hum “MC Cells” kehte hai aur ek baar Cells change ho gaye to dubara badle nahi jaa sakte aur isiliye ek person ek type ki hi ability use kar sakta hai.
Ab Earth pe koi Country nahi hai to sab milke rehte hai koi Indian nahi Koi American nahi bas Human. Lekin main to Indian hu ye mujhe pata hai aur in logo ke bich Indians ko pehchanna bhut simple hai ek to hamare naam sabse alag aur hamara Face aur Color sabse alag, hamari English sabse alag. Main Baaki Countries ke logo ko nahi pehchaan pata lekin Indians ko pehchaan leta hu.
Chalo Earth aur Abilities ke baare mein lauda lahsun bhut ho gaya. Ab main apne baare mein bhi bata du. Jaise ki Mera naam Karan Roy hai aur mere parents Drakes ke Sath War thi usme maare gaye
na mere paas koi ability hai aur na hi paise. To kul mila ke main ek gareeb, anath aur kamjor ladka hu. Main abhi 18 saal ka hu aur next day hi mera normal school khatam hone wala hai. Aur uske baad main join karunga Military. Lekin I Hate Military
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Meri ek bhut buri adat hai ki main apne mann ki baat saamne wale ke muh pe bol deta hu jisse baad mein meri gaand tut jaati hai. Matlab koi strong sa ladka mere saamne hai, lekin wo mujhe madarchod lag raha hai to main usko bol deta hu ki “Bhai tu bada madarchod hai.”
Aur fir kya fir meri gaand tut jaati hai aur isliye main khudse kaafi nafrat karta hu ki ye kya chutyia adat hai bhenchod aise to puri life ke laude lag jaayenge
. lekin maine ye adat thodi control kar li matlab jo meri gaand tod dega usey main kuch bhi bol deta hu
aur koi aisa hota hai jo mujhe maar hi dega kuch bolne pe to main wo baat bolta jaroor hu lekin apne mann mein
. I mean bhenchod marna thodi na hai
Jaise ki maine bataya mere Parents mar chuke aur mera na koi dost hai na koi bandi, aur main hu bhi gareeb ab mujhe ek baat satati hai ki main Earth pe kyu hu mere apartment ka Rent meri padhayi ka kharcha mere khaane pine ka kharcha kaun de raha hai bhenchod aur Military wale time to time mujhe check karne aate hai lekin unki aankho se dikhta hai ki wo mujhe pasand nahi karte. Mat kare pasand mujhe konsa unse apni sagai karwani hai. Mere parents ne mere liye kuch nahi choda bas ek red color ki purani si book ke alawa aur wo book itni Chutiya hai ki main pichle 5 saalo mein usey khol tak nahi paaya hu. Roz usey kholne ki kosis karta hu aur fir haar maanke muth maarke so jaata hu.
Ye sab to bata diya lekin ek cheez to batana bhul hi gaya main. In 5 Superpowers ke alawa ek aur Group hai jinka naam hai “Pure” ab ye Group bada chutiya type ka hai. Is Organisation mein koi Ability user nahi hai. Ye Sirf Beast Gear ke dum pe ladte hai aur inhone isi ke dum pe hi Superpowers ki gaand mein ungli kar rakhi hai. Ye log Ability user se nafrat karte hai aur inka ek hi maksat hai Earth ko firse Ability free banana. Jalte hai saale! Isiliye 5 Superpowers ne inhe terrorist Organisation declare kar rakha hai. Lekin ye log bhi kam nahi hai. Ye logo ka base Earth pe hi hai lekin kaha hai wo kisi ko nahi pata aur naa hi koi ab tak pata laga paaya. Aur is Group ka Leader Earth ke 2 sabse Strong person mein se ek hai.
Baaki Details aapko Stories mein aage mil hi jaayengi aur bhut se raaz bhi khul jaayenge. Jaise Drakes kon hai aur Earth pe attack kyu kar rahe hai? Originals ke paas abilities kaha se aayi? Pure itne strong kyu hai? Richard Eno kaun hai aur ab wo kaha hai? Karan ka past kya hai aur uski Family ka Past kya hai? Karan ki life kaise Change Hoti hai? Aur wo is World mein kya Change laa sakta hai? Aur for God sake ye System kya hai? Karan ki madad kaun kar raha hai Earth pe Rehne ke liye? Kya In 5 Superpowers ke alawa in se bhi bada koi hai? Kya Humans, Drakes, Beasts ke alawa bhi koi aur species hai kya? Matlab species to hai lekin wo kyu hai aur kaha hai? Aur unke baare mein humans ko kyu nahi pata?
In sabhi sawalo ke jawab sirf mere paas haikyuki maine bhagwan hu is story ka
marte rahiye. Aur jitney Review doge wo bhi dhang ke dena matlab agar kuch galat hai to batao mujhe taaki main sudhar kar saku aur achi hai to tarif karo meri bhar bhar ke
Jitney jyada review utni jaldi update.
TO BE CONTINUED….
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Damha bro story ka link de do gay. Mai boht sarch kiya lekan muja story ni mili. Thanks
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