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Fantasy Rise Of A Vampire

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Update 7:- (Unwritten Rules)







Jaise hi hum dono hallway se jaa rahe they waise hi mujhe apni body mein ek sudden surge mehsoos huyi. Peter “Hey, sayad tumhe doctor ke paas jaana chahiye, mujhe pata hai is School mein Healers hai wo tumhe ek baar mein thik kar denge.” Main “yeah thanks, main wahi jaa raha hu, aur tujhe mere sath aane ki koi jaroorat nahi hai, kal waise bhi busy day hone wala hai to tujhe Dorm mein wapis chale jaana chahiye.”






Halanki peter mere liye worried tha lekin fir bhi lawde ki fati padi thi. Peter bhi jyada der tak Hallway mein nahi rukna chahta tha. aur mujhe pata tha ki Peter hesitate ho raha hai ki kya kare aur kya na kare. Isliye usey uski uljhan se nikalne ke liye maine hi bola. Main “Dekh tu tension mat le, aakash bathroom gaya hai aur wo dorm mein hi tere ko milega.” Meri baat sunte hi Peter jaldi se dorm ki taraf bhag gaya apni Watch chupate huye kyuki usey firse yahi incident nahi chahiye tha wo bhi itna jaldi.





Uske jaate hi main jaldi se paas wale Boy’s Washroom mein ghus gaya, maine ghuste hi apne hath ko dekha jaha Kyle ne apne Claw se cut maar diya tha. mirror mein dekhte huye main asani se mera Arm khud be khud heal hote huye dekh sakta tha. halanki ye kaafi slow lag raha tha lekin Reality mein ye kaafi fast tha. aur kisi ko apni hi kisi chot ko aise naked eye se heal hote dekhna ek amazing sight thi. Mere ko apni body mein kuch strange hota mehsoos ho raha tha. maine ye baat Peter ke sath baat karte huye notice ki thi aur isiliye hi main Peter ko jaldi se bhagana chahta tha taaki ye dekh ke Peter ko ye na lage ki mere paas koi Ability hai.





Kuch minutes wait karne ke baad maine apni Status Screen kholi, aur jaisa maine socha tha wahi ho raha tha aur meri HP dheere-2 badh rahi thi.





<HP 8/10>

<HP 10/10>

<Your HP had been healed>

<Your Hunger has grown>




Jaise ye notification aayi waise hi mujhe bhi bhookh lagne lagi aur iska matlab yahi tha ki agar System mere Wounds ko Heal kar raha hai to use badle mein Energy bhi to chahiye hogi. Mere Pet mein halka sa dard tha jaise main aaj ka Breakfast miss kar diya ho. Lekin kuch khaane se Pehle mujhe ek kaam aur tha jo main abhi karna chahta tha aur wo kaam tha training Room mein jaane ka. Abhi late ho raha tha aur kal se Classes start thi isliye jyadatar Students wapis chale gaye they aur iska matlab yahi tha ki ab mere paas best chance tha training room mein jaane ka jab mujhe koi dekh na raha ho.





Main Finally Training room mein pahucha ye ek large hall tha jo ki bich mein bikul khaali tha lekin walls ki taraf bhut saare technological equipments rakhe huye they. Waha pe bhut se Mech Robots they, Shooting Targets aur bhi bhut kuch tha jiske baare mein mujhe kuch idea nahi tha mujhe to bas Power Level testing Equipment ki talash thi. Kuch der idhar udhar dekhne ke mujhe wo Same machine dikhi jo Testing Field mein thi. Is Waqt yaha koi nahi tha isliye main jaldi se us Drum ke saamne jaake khada ho gaya.





Waha pe mere alawa ek Person aur tha jiske baare mein mujhe pata nahi tha. wo aur koi nahi balki Sneha thi aur wo mere aane se pehle apne arrows se Target Practice kar rahi thi lekin mere aane se wo chup ke mujhe dekh rahi thi ki main kya karne aaya hu kyuki main lawda sabki nazro mein weak tha. wahi maine apni gaand tak ki Strength use karke us drum ko Punch kiya aur mere andaze ke hisab se mera Score 10 hi tha jo mera system mujhe pehle se hi bata raha tha. Wahi Sneha mujhe dekhke Shock thi kyuki mere Strength ab Double thi aur usey lag raha tha ki maine apni strength sabse kyu chupayi aur isiliye usne mera picha karne ki soch li aakhir wo bhi pata karna chahti thi ki mere jaise Weak ladke ko apni Strength chupane ki kya jaroorat hai. Aur mujhe is baare mein lawda kuch nahi pata tha.




Agli subah sabhi students ek alarm se 8:00 baje uthe aur ye alarm pure dorm mein baji thi aur iska matlab tha ki apni gaand uthao aur dress pehenke jaldi se Canteen mein pahucho Breakfast ke liye. Wahi main jab uthke naha dhoke tel lagake Canteen ki taraf nikla to mujhe Sytem ne is notification se mujhe welcome kiya.



<You have completed your daily Quest>

<Avoid direct sunlight for 8 hours>

<Reward 5 Exp>

<75/100 Exp>




Main jaldi se Canteen mein Pahcuha to wahi mujhe Peter aur Aakash mil gaye main bhi unke sath apni plate leke baith gaya aur khaane pe tut pada aur mujhe khaana khaate dekh ke aakash aur Peter bhi hasne lage. Maine jaldi se apni Plate finish ki aur Peter ki Plate bhi finish ki jo usne chod di thi, meri bhookh nahi mitti thi to maine lagatar 2 littre pani bhi pi liya tab jaa ke saans aaya.




<A daily Quest has been complete: Drink two litres of water>

<Reward 5 Exp>

<80/100 Exp>




Ab main sirf 20 Points dur tha level up karne se aur main ye dekhne ke liye excited bhi tha ki Level 2 pe pahuchne ke baad mujhe kya benefits milte hai ya ye System chutiya hai. Fir mujhe suddenly apni Inspect Skill ki yaad aayi to main wo Skill Aakash pe use ki.




<Name: Aakash Blade>

<HP: 10/10>

<Race: Human>

<Ability: None>

<Blood type: O->




Main aakash ki ye detail dekh ke kuch had tak shocked ho gaya tha kyuki ye bata raha tha ki Aakash ke paas koi ability nahi hai.


Main “Oye Aakash, kya tu Erin ki Ice Power abhi bhi use kar sakta hai kya?”




“mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum mujhme itne interested ho.” Aakash ne mujhe aankh maarte huye bola. “Actually meri ability roz reset ho jaati hai aur maine aaj subah se kisi ki ability copy nahi ki hai to abhi filhal mere paas koi ability nahi hai.” Iske baad mere mann mein bhi koi doubt nahi raha aakash ki ability ko lekar isliye hum teeno hi Class ki taraf nikal gaye. Ye time first Class ka tha aur hum teeno hi apni batayi gayi huyi class mein pahuche aur hamara Class teacher wo kal wala jhaatu Del hi tha. yaha pe baithne ki seats Power levels ke according thi lekin aakash mere aur Peter ke sath end mein hi baith gaya Level 1 wali Seat pe. Aur aisa hote hi doosre students ne apas mein baate suru kar di aakash ko leke ki wo weak Level 1 walo ke sath kyu baitha hai isse strong students ka naam kharab hoga. Uske baad hamara introduction hua ek normal class ki tarah aur aise hi wo class bhi nikal gayi.




Main, Peter aur Aakash teeno hi Class se bahar aa gaye kuch Snacks khaane ke liye. Jaise hi maine class se nikal ke hallway clear kiya to mere saamne fir se ek notification aa gayi.



<All Stats Have Been Halved>


Hum teeno ne snacks liye aur wk bench pe baith gaye. Is time mujhe bhut pasine aa rahe they aur mujhe kaafi weak feel ho raha tha.

Aakash "oyy, tu thik to hai na, mujhe firse tu bimar lag raha hai."

Main "nahi be chutiye bimar nahi hu bas mujhe garmi dusro se jyada lagti hai."



Hum teeno thode time tak wahi baithe bakwas baate karte rahe jisme main aur aakash hi ek dusre ko gaaliya de rahe they. Lekin achanak hi hamare saamne ek 6 ladko ka group aa gaya aur un sab ke Arm pe ek badge laga tha jisse pata chal raha tha ki wo sabhi Second year wale hai.


"Lagta hai Rumours sahi hai, tum teeno ko hamare sath aana hoga, humey tumse kuch baat karni hai."



Wo hum teeno ko ek khopche mein leke gaye aur humey ek hi baat boli jo ki is School ka ya ye keh lo is World ka "High Power level wala Person Low level ke Power level wale se dosti nahi rakh sakta" ab main aur pete to kuch nahi bole kyuki hamari aukat hi nahi thi aur aakash ke paas bhi koi Ability nahi thi is time aur usey pata tha ki ye log bina uski ability jaane usey touch bhi nahi karne denge. Mujhe aur peter ko Aakash kaafi sahi banda lagta tha aur wo hamare sath rehta tha to hume koi tang bhi nahi karta tha lekin is baat se sayad high level pe baithe log offend ho gaye they aur isiliye unki baat ka saaf matlab tha ki hum alag alag rahe aur is baat se hum teeno hi khus nahi they aur teeno ke hi is baat mein alag alag reason they. Mera reason saaf tha ki mera is jindagi mein ab tak koi dost nahi tha aur maine in dono ko hi Apna dost maan liya tha Lekin mujhe in dono ke reasons hi pata nahi they.



Aur is baat ke liye humne decide kiya ki Aakash humse duri bana ke rakhega kyuki abhi main aur aakash bilkul bhi Second Year walo se panga lene ke liye taiyar nahi they. Is baat se Aakash bhut gussa ho gaya aur hum dono ko chod ke kahi chala gaya. Lekin Aakash alag kism ka insaan tha usey meri fikr thi ki kahi mujhe wo log hurt na kare isliye wo mujhse dur ho gaya lekin wo shaant baithke sab kuch sehne walo mein se nahi tha aur usne mann bana liya tha ki wo ab sab ke piche jaayega jo humey alag karne mein laga tha.




Aur wahi Sneha bhi mujhe chupchap follow kar rahi thi jiske baare mein mujhe pata nahi tha. Usne humey second year se deal karte huye bhi dekha tha aur wo hairan thi ki mere aur Peter jaise log pehle din hi attention mein kaise aa gaye. Lekin Sneha ek baat ke liye kaafi Confuse thi ki Main waha bhut Weak lag raha tha un second Year walo ke saamne aur usne ye baat bhi notice kar li thi ki main Sunlight mein aate hi Weak behave karne lagta hu jaise sach mein Weak ho gaya hu.





TO BE CONTINUED...
Yahan par bohot Kam stories Hein jinne padte huye dil krta hai padte jayein... Or aage pages pr updates ki bharmar ho... Unmen aap ki story v hai.....mazedar story.. vese aase power stats wali ik do stories padi Hein lekin yeh unse alagh hai.. intersting hai :yourock: .... Bss updates poste rahiye bhai... Karan vampires family mein se hai...or abb khoon ki bhookh/pyas ko kabb tkk rokta hai dekhte Hein or pehla shikar kon hoga..?.... Or Sneha kya kya dekhegi or...... zabardast story :good:
 

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Update 1:- (Introduction)









Mera naam Karan hai. Karan Roy! :cool:





Main is waqt apne ek room ke apartment mein baitha hu aur muth maarte :jerker: huye Earth ki history ki baare mein soch raha hu. I mean main koi intelligent nahi hu lekin chutiya bhi nahi hu ;) , History to pata hi hai. Ab saal chal raha hai 2061 ab main tumhe Earth ka past aur present ke baare mein thodi baate batadu. To Past mein Earth pe bhut saari Countries thi, government thi, bhut si languages thi, cultures they, terrorists bhi they, in sab Countries aur terrorists ya countries between countries War hoti rehti thi lekin mamla 2050 tak thik chal raha tha aur Earth ki technology bhi kaafi achi ho chuki thi :claps: .












Lekin fir hua Earth par ek Alien Planet se attack us Alien species ka naam tha “Drake” Wo sab Green color ke they aur kam se kam 3 meter lambe aur kisi Lizard ki tarah dikhte they lekin unki Skin kisi Dragon jaisi thi, unki technology aur spaceships Earth se 20 guna jyada advance thi. Aur un Drakes ne purey Earth ke sath ek War ched di aur unhone sabhi countries ki aisi maa chodi ki sabko ek sath aana pada :sigh: lekin Drakes ne fir bhi inke laude laga diye. Earth walo ko unse ladne mein problem ho rahi thi kyuki unke Weapons Drakes par koi asar nahi kar rahe they Guns wagarih sab chud chuki thi aur Earth walo ko lagne laga tha ki ab to laude lag chuke hai aur unhe koyi nahi bacha sakta :evillaugh: .









Lekin tabhi Earth ke logo mein se hi Humans ka ek bhut bada Group saamne aaya aur unhone Drakes ke sath War ka rukh hi badal diya aur un logo ka naam pada “Originals” :hippi: . Un sab ke paas thi “Abilities” like elemental powers aur bhut si 1000 tarah ki Powers. Ab unhone apni Power to dikhayi lekin fir bhi Drakes ko hara nahi paaye, to unhone apni powers logo se Share ki aur us War se kaafi saare Heroes nikal ke aaye. Ye War kam se kam 5 saal tak chali thi. Humans jit to gaye they aur Drakes wapis bhi chale gaye they lekin unki sirf ek Spaceship aayi thi aur Earth ka naksa bigad ke chali gayi thi.








Ab Earth ke logo ko dar tha ki wo log wapis aa sakte hai aur fir se laude laga sakte hai aur un logo ke paas powers ke alawa kuch nahi tha unse ladne ke liye aur unko pata tha ki Drakes jo aaye they wo sirf Soldiers hi they. Jab sabki gaand fati huyi thi tab “Originals” saamne aaye aur unhone apni abilities Books mein daal ke baaki humans ke sath share karni suru kar di. Lekin “Abilities” sirf ameer logo ko aur jo gareeb they unhe mili gaand pe laat. Kyuki madarchod “Originals” ne wo Abilities Book paiso mein baichi aur bichara gareeb aadmi kaha se kharide ye sab. Ab Powers ki Problem solve huyi to ek problem aur khadi huyi ki unke paas koi technology ya Weapons nahi they. Lekin is problem ko bhi solve karne ke liye bhi ek mahasay parkat huye unka naam tha “Richard Eno” unhone Earth ke logo ko bhut hi advance Technology di. Unhe Beast Planets se introduce karwaya aur kayi teleporters bana ke diye jisse Humans Beast Planets pe jaa sake aur un Beast ko hunt kar sake un Beasts se mile huye Crystal se Beast Weapons taiyar kar sake jo ki kaafi Powerful ho Drakes ke khilaaf.






Ab Problem ye huyi ki Earth pe kisi ka Control nahi tha. Aur ye problem Solve karne ke liye 4 Originals Family saamne aayi jo baaki Originals se kaafi Strong thi. Un chaaro Families ne Military banayi aur Military ko Earth Power ki Ability de di. Aur in 5 Superpowers ne bhut saare Beast Planets pe kabza kar liya waha ke khatarnak Beasts ko maarke. Sab sahi jaa raha tha lekin sab ki Maa tab chudi jab Earth par se Weak Humans ko Beast Planets pe rehne ke liye bhej diya gaya. Earth pe sirf Originals Family aur Military hi Reh sakti thi. Baaki kisi ko Earth pe rehna hai to unhe bhut jyada paisa dena padega in Superpowers ko nahi to niklo Beast Planets pe. Ab chalo Beast Planet hi sahi wo bhi rehne layak they lekin waha bhi rehne ke liye logo ko Tax dena padta tha un Superpowers ko jinke Planets pe wo hai.









Ye to huyi Past ki baate ab batata hu Earth ka Present aur fir bataunga Abilities ke baare mein. Is time Earth Originals aur Military ke control mein tha. Jaise maine pehle bataya waise hi Originals mein se 4 sabse strong families power mein thi.







Ye 4 Families ke naam kuch is parkar se hai:-



Graylash Family (inke paas sabse powerful Lightning abilities hai.)
Sunshield Family (inke paas sabse powerful Fire abilities hai.)
Bree Family (Is Family ke log hand to hand combat mein kaafi powerful hai aur inke paas Beasts ko tame ya control karne ki abilities hai.)
True dream Family (is Family ke Head ke paas ek anokhi hi Ability hai jo kisi dusre human ke paas nahi hai, ye kisi bhi person ki ability cheen ke kisi ko bhi de sakta hai. To iski Family mein different type ke ability users hai.)




Ye to huye Big four family. Ab aate hai military pe to inke jo Higher ups hai unke paas highest level ki Earth ability hai aur jo low rank pe unke paas low level ki Earth abilities hai. Military mein koi bhi join kar sakta hai kisi bhi families se yaha tak ki Originals se bhi to Military mein Different ability users bhi hai.











Ab Earth pe koi Country nahi hai aur na hi different Language hai. Sab log English mein baat karte hai lekin main Story Hindi mein hi bataunga. Baaki Languages ban hai. Earth pe Military ke 8 Schools jo ki different Continent aur islands pe hai. Baaki ka Earth Top Four Families ke paas hai aur baaki ki Originals Families inhi Top Four Families ke under rehti hai. In Sab mein sabse ganda game military khel rahi hai. Military Schools mein 16 ki age ke baad admission hota hai aur koi bhi admission le sakta hai isme chahe wo ameer ho ya gareeb chahe uske paas abilities ho ya na ho. Ab Military un Weak aur Non-Ability user ko tang karwati hai strong students se aur jab wo gareeb log bilkul tut jaate hai to Military unhe Low Level ki Earth Ability de deti hai jisse wo Weak aur Gareeb log Military ko apna bhagwan maan lete hai Military ke liye khud chudne ko taiyar ho jaate hai.















Ab aate hai Abilities ke upper to main batadu ek Person sirf Ek tarah ki Ability hi use kar sakta hai. Aur kisi Chutiye ne ek baar ko chutiya si ability sikh li jaldbaazi mein aur fir aage chalke usey koi achi aur strong ability mil gayi to bas wo lauda hilata reh jaayega aur kuch nahi kar paayega. Ab kayi abilities bhut Rare hoti hai jinhe Originals bhi share nahi kar sakte aur na hi wo kisi ko sikha sakte. Abilities ki Book kayi level mein divide hoti hai jaise tumne Water Abilities ki book kharidi aur wo level 2 ki hai to tum sirf level 2 ki hi Skills use kar paaoge, lekin tum apna level badha sakte ho Same Ability ki High level ki Book kharid ke. Ab ek person ek hi Ability kyu use kar sakta hai. Kyuki agar tum koi ability sikhte ho tumhari Body mein ek alag tarah ke Cells banne lagte hai jinse tum wo ability use kar sakte ho unhe hum “MC Cells” kehte hai aur ek baar Cells change ho gaye to dubara badle nahi jaa sakte aur isiliye ek person ek type ki hi ability use kar sakta hai.






Ab Earth pe koi Country nahi hai to sab milke rehte hai koi Indian nahi Koi American nahi bas Human. Lekin main to Indian hu ye mujhe pata hai aur in logo ke bich Indians ko pehchanna bhut simple hai ek to hamare naam sabse alag aur hamara Face aur Color sabse alag, hamari English sabse alag. Main Baaki Countries ke logo ko nahi pehchaan pata lekin Indians ko pehchaan leta hu.















Chalo Earth aur Abilities ke baare mein lauda lahsun bhut ho gaya. Ab main apne baare mein bhi bata du :y: . Jaise ki Mera naam Karan Roy hai aur mere parents Drakes ke Sath War thi usme maare gaye :sigh: Tab se main Akela hu aur roz khule mein muth marta hu :jerker: Mera Rang fair hai face bhi kaafi thik hai lekin main bhut weak aur dubla patla hu :thumbdown: na mere paas koi ability hai aur na hi paise. To kul mila ke main ek gareeb, anath aur kamjor ladka hu. Main abhi 16 saal ka hu aur next day hi mera normal school khatam hone wala hai. Aur uske baad main join karunga Military. Lekin I Hate Military :puke: .









Meri ek bhut buri adat hai ki main apne mann ki baat saamne wale ke muh pe bol deta hu jisse baad mein meri gaand tut jaati hai :spank: . Matlab koi strong sa ladka mere saamne hai, lekin wo mujhe madarchod lag raha hai to main usko bol deta hu ki “Bhai tu bada madarchod hai.” :redface: Aur fir kya fir meri gaand tut jaati hai aur isliye main khudse kaafi nafrat karta hu ki ye kya chutyia adat hai bhenchod aise to puri life ke laude lag jaayenge :roflol: . lekin maine ye adat thodi control kar li matlab jo meri gaand tod dega usey main kuch bhi bol deta hu :laughing: aur koi aisa hota hai jo mujhe maar hi dega kuch bolne pe to main wo baat bolta jaroor hu lekin apne mann mein :notme: . I mean bhenchod marna thodi na hai :redface: .











Jaise ki maine bataya mere Parents mar chuke aur mera na koi dost hai na koi bandi, aur main hu bhi gareeb ab mujhe ek baat satati hai ki main Earth pe kyu hu mere apartment ka Rent meri padhayi ka kharcha mere khaane pine ka kharcha kaun de raha hai bhenchod aur Military wale time to time mujhe check karne aate hai lekin unki aankho se dikhta hai ki wo mujhe pasand nahi karte. Mat kare pasand mujhe konsa unse apni sagai karwani hai. Mere parents ne mere liye kuch nahi choda bas ek red color ki purani si book ke alawa aur wo book itni Chutiya hai ki main pichle 5 saalo mein usey khol tak nahi paaya hu. Roz usey kholne ki kosis karta hu aur fir haar maanke muth maarke so jaata hu.






Ye sab to bata diya lekin ek cheez to batana bhul hi gaya main. In 5 Superpowers ke alawa ek aur Group hai jinka naam hai “Pure” ab ye Group bada chutiya type ka hai. Is Organisation mein koi Ability user nahi hai. Ye Sirf Beast Gear ke dum pe ladte hai aur inhone isi ke dum pe hi Superpowers ki gaand mein ungli kar rakhi hai. Ye log Ability user se nafrat karte hai aur inka ek hi maksat hai Earth ko firse Ability free banana. Jalte hai saale! Isiliye 5 Superpowers ne inhe terrorist Organisation declare kar rakha hai. Lekin ye log bhi kam nahi hai. Ye logo ka base Earth pe hi hai lekin kaha hai wo kisi ko nahi pata aur naa hi koi ab tak pata laga paaya. Aur is Group ka Leader Earth ke 2 sabse Strong person mein se ek hai.






Baaki Details aapko Stories mein aage mil hi jaayengi aur bhut se raaz bhi khul jaayenge. Jaise Drakes kon hai aur Earth pe attack kyu kar rahe hai? Originals ke paas abilities kaha se aayi? Pure itne strong kyu hai? Richard Eno kaun hai aur ab wo kaha hai? Karan ka past kya hai aur uski Family ka Past kya hai? Karan ki life kaise Change Hoti hai? Aur wo is World mein kya Change laa sakta hai? Aur for God sake ye System kya hai? Karan ki madad kaun kar raha hai Earth pe Rehne ke liye? Kya In 5 Superpowers ke alawa in se bhi bada koi hai? Kya Humans, Drakes, Beasts ke alawa bhi koi aur species hai kya? Matlab species to hai lekin wo kyu hai aur kaha hai? Aur unke baare mein humans ko kyu nahi pata?






In sabhi sawalo ke jawab sirf mere paas hai :shy: kyuki maine bhagwan hu is story ka :hippi: jaanne ke liye Story padhte rahiye, I mean sath bane rahiye maje lete rahiye muth :shag: marte rahiye. Aur jitney Review doge wo bhi dhang ke dena matlab agar kuch galat hai to batao mujhe taaki main sudhar kar saku aur achi hai to tarif karo meri bhar bhar ke:cool: Jitney jyada review utni jaldi update. :ciao:




TO BE CONTINUED….
Great start bro and congratulations for new story 🙏
 
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