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Adultery Rise of the Death (completed)

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Waqt ke sath har ek cheej badalta hai....insaan bhi badal jaate hai.....
Kaveri ko marne ke waqt Vikram ko bohot hi sukun mila tha...lekin baad mein ek khalipan sa mehsoos hone laga...ab use logo ko marne mein koi maja nahi aa raha tha...jo sukun use mil raha tha wo nahi mil raha tha.....lekin unhe takleef mein dekhke sukun mil raha tha....

lekin asliyet yeh nahi thi...asliyat mein to Vikram ek bohot hi nek dil insaan hai...kuch waqt ke liye uske andhere hisse ne uspe kaabu jaroor paa liya tha..lekin ab dheere dheere uska asli roop samne aa raha tha...aur wo ab khudke feelings se hi pareshan hone laga....lekin uske sath huye galat ko bhi wo nahi bhul paa raha tha....wo abhi bhi wahi pe atka hua hai...age nahi badh paa raha hai....
jab bhi wo sab kuch bhulne ki kosish karta...tab hi use wo chehre yaad aa jaate...jo usko tadapta hua dekhke maje lete the....use wo dard yaa jata....jo wo ab tak jhelta hua aya hai....har wo yatnaye yaaad aati hai...jo use logo ne di hai...dusro ko wo kya hi galat thehraye...uske khudke apno ne uska sath nahi diya...

har raat ko use nightmares aate hai....aur uske jakhmo ko phirse kured dte hai....uske man mein ab after thoughts ane lage hai...ke wo jo bhi kar raha hai...kya wo sahi hai...kya use dusro ko ek aur mauka dena chahiye....galti sab karte hai..sabko hi ek dusra mauka jaroor milna chahiye...
jaldi hi use yeh baat realize ho gayi ...ke dusra mauka koi bhi desreve nahi karta....kyunke jab koi bhi galat karta hai...uske pehle ji use kaafi mauka mil jata hai...use kaafi mauka milta hai ke..wo galti na kare...piche hat jaaye...uska man use jaroor rokta hai...lekin phir bhi galat kar baithta hai...to isi liye har galti ki saja jaroor hoti hai...koi maafi nahi...aur gunaah ki maut....

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Kaveri ki maut se Vikram ke family mein jitni dukh ka mahol gujra...usse kaayi jyada dar ka mahol paida ho chuka hai...kyunke kuch ko chhor ke baaki kisi ko bhi nahi pata ke Vikram ne kaveri ko khyun maraa....aur isi liye sab dar mein ji rahe hai ke pata nahi ke agli baari kiski hogi...

isi beech Sandhya bhi Ajay ki tarah bhaag chuki thi....jisko kisine dhundne ki kosish nahi ki....ab har ek cheej ka reason to nahi hota...kyun nahi dhunda yeh to baaki ke family wale hi jaane....
khair wo bhaag chuki hai...kyunke Vikram ne uske ghar mein ghuske uske samne uski chaachi ki jaan le chuka hai...aur koi bhi kuch nahi kar paya...pura seher yeh najara dekha...lekin koi bhi kuch nahi kar paya...isi liye har ek insaan ke taraha...jo humesha apne pblms se bhaagta hai...wo bhi bhaag gayi...yehi ek aas mein ke Vikram use dhund nahi paayega....

Vikram ki dono bua ki family bhi aa chuki thi...lekin unke hath mein bhi kuch nahi tha....siwaye dukh wyakt karne ke
Malini to coma mein hi thi...uski uthne ki koi umeed hi nahi thi....apni saari jindagi waise hi duron ki daya pe jindaa rahegi...jo ek insaan ki sabse baadi saja hoti hai...jab wo dekh sun sab sakta hai...lekin na kuch bol sakta hai...na kuch kar sakta hai....

Vijendra ke ahankar tut chuka hai...use iss baat ka ehsaas bhi ho chuka hai ke...wo bhi insabka hissedar hai...wo bhi unmeses ek hai...jisne aaj iss janwar ko janam diya hai...wahi wo baap hai...jisne apne bache ko marke..ek jaanwar ko paida kiya hai...
lekin kisi ko bhi iss baat ka ehsaas tak nahi hua ke...akhir asli baat kya hai ...jo Vikram inta nirdayi ....ban chuka hai...siwaye ek ko chhorke...wo thi Tamanna...

usne apne bhai ko bachpan se dekhte huye aayi hai ke...uska bhai kitna nek dil hai...kitni bhi pareshani aa jaye...wo humesha dheeraj se kaam leta hai...kabhi bhi wo beheka nahi ....jo aaj wo iss halat mein hai...jab wo apne bhai ko apne samne dekhi thi...to wo use pehechan hi nahi paayi thi...uske chehre ki wo masoomiyat...kahi bhi nahi thi....thi to bas dard aur...nafrat...jise wo pehechan gayi thi...

usne thaan li ke...kuch bhi karke use hi sab kuch sahi karna hoga...use hi Vikram ke dard ko kaam karna hoga..lekin kaise...wo to ab uske samne tak jaane se thartharati hai...to phir kaise....akhir mein usne khudko majboot kari aur...chal padi Vikram ke paas...
jaha pohochke usne Vikram se baat karne ki mang ki...aaj peheli baar kisi ne Vikram ke paas aane ki himmat ki thi...isliye uske admiyo ne bhi use jaane diya...
Tamanna Vikram ke paas pohochke phirse khauf kha gayi...jab usne bola.....mujhe ek karan do ke main tumhe jinda chhor dun...

jiske jawab mein Tamanna kuch na keh paayi...aur wo jo bhi kehne aayi thi sab bhul gayi...uske paas kehne ko kuch nahi tha...wo ulte pair wapas aa gayi...
usne kayi baar aur kosish ki ...lekin har bar Vikram use ignore kar deta..jaise Tamanna uske liye exist hi nahi karta....
phir bhi Tamanna apna hausla na chhodi...wo kosish karti rahi....aur kehte hai na kosish karne walo ki kabhi har nahi hoti....

akhir mein Vikram ko jhukna hi pada...
Tamanna....main janti hun ke tumne bohhot dukh jhela hai...mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ke ...tumhare aisa banne ke piche bohot bada karan hai....main unhe badal to nahi kar sakti ...lekin tumhe unhe kam karne ki kosish jaroor kar sakta hun....

Tamanna ke iss baat ke jawab mein...Vikram hasa...pagalon ki tarha hasa...kaafi der tak hasta raha...jise dekhke Tamanna ko pehle ajeeb lagi...lekin samay bitte ke sath....use dar lagne ;laga.....

Vikram...mera dard kam karogi.....hahahahahaha...tum kuch nahi kar sakti...kuch bhi nahi..kyunke yaha humare hath mein kuch bhi nahi hai...kuch bhi nahi....hahahahahaha...chhalawa hai chhalawa...yeh sab bas chhhalawa hai...main tum sab bas chhalawa hai.....ahahahahahaha

Vikram ki iss baat se Tamanna ekdum confuse ho gayi.....jaise ab readers log hone wale hai.....
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Waqt ke sath har ek cheej badalta hai....insaan bhi badal jaate hai.....
Kaveri ko marne ke waqt Vikram ko bohot hi sukun mila tha...lekin baad mein ek khalipan sa mehsoos hone laga...ab use logo ko marne mein koi maja nahi aa raha tha...jo sukun use mil raha tha wo nahi mil raha tha.....lekin unhe takleef mein dekhke sukun mil raha tha....

lekin asliyet yeh nahi thi...asliyat mein to Vikram ek bohot hi nek dil insaan hai...kuch waqt ke liye uske andhere hisse ne uspe kaabu jaroor paa liya tha..lekin ab dheere dheere uska asli roop samne aa raha tha...aur wo ab khudke feelings se hi pareshan hone laga....lekin uske sath huye galat ko bhi wo nahi bhul paa raha tha....wo abhi bhi wahi pe atka hua hai...age nahi badh paa raha hai....
jab bhi wo sab kuch bhulne ki kosish karta...tab hi use wo chehre yaad aa jaate...jo usko tadapta hua dekhke maje lete the....use wo dard yaa jata....jo wo ab tak jhelta hua aya hai....har wo yatnaye yaaad aati hai...jo use logo ne di hai...dusro ko wo kya hi galat thehraye...uske khudke apno ne uska sath nahi diya...

har raat ko use nightmares aate hai....aur uske jakhmo ko phirse kured dte hai....uske man mein ab after thoughts ane lage hai...ke wo jo bhi kar raha hai...kya wo sahi hai...kya use dusro ko ek aur mauka dena chahiye....galti sab karte hai..sabko hi ek dusra mauka jaroor milna chahiye...
jaldi hi use yeh baat realize ho gayi ...ke dusra mauka koi bhi desreve nahi karta....kyunke jab koi bhi galat karta hai...uske pehle ji use kaafi mauka mil jata hai...use kaafi mauka milta hai ke..wo galti na kare...piche hat jaaye...uska man use jaroor rokta hai...lekin phir bhi galat kar baithta hai...to isi liye har galti ki saja jaroor hoti hai...koi maafi nahi...aur gunaah ki maut....

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Kaveri ki maut se Vikram ke family mein jitni dukh ka mahol gujra...usse kaayi jyada dar ka mahol paida ho chuka hai...kyunke kuch ko chhor ke baaki kisi ko bhi nahi pata ke Vikram ne kaveri ko khyun maraa....aur isi liye sab dar mein ji rahe hai ke pata nahi ke agli baari kiski hogi...

isi beech Sandhya bhi Ajay ki tarah bhaag chuki thi....jisko kisine dhundne ki kosish nahi ki....ab har ek cheej ka reason to nahi hota...kyun nahi dhunda yeh to baaki ke family wale hi jaane....
khair wo bhaag chuki hai...kyunke Vikram ne uske ghar mein ghuske uske samne uski chaachi ki jaan le chuka hai...aur koi bhi kuch nahi kar paya...pura seher yeh najara dekha...lekin koi bhi kuch nahi kar paya...isi liye har ek insaan ke taraha...jo humesha apne pblms se bhaagta hai...wo bhi bhaag gayi...yehi ek aas mein ke Vikram use dhund nahi paayega....

Vikram ki dono bua ki family bhi aa chuki thi...lekin unke hath mein bhi kuch nahi tha....siwaye dukh wyakt karne ke
Malini to coma mein hi thi...uski uthne ki koi umeed hi nahi thi....apni saari jindagi waise hi duron ki daya pe jindaa rahegi...jo ek insaan ki sabse baadi saja hoti hai...jab wo dekh sun sab sakta hai...lekin na kuch bol sakta hai...na kuch kar sakta hai....

Vijendra ke ahankar tut chuka hai...use iss baat ka ehsaas bhi ho chuka hai ke...wo bhi insabka hissedar hai...wo bhi unmeses ek hai...jisne aaj iss janwar ko janam diya hai...wahi wo baap hai...jisne apne bache ko marke..ek jaanwar ko paida kiya hai...
lekin kisi ko bhi iss baat ka ehsaas tak nahi hua ke...akhir asli baat kya hai ...jo Vikram inta nirdayi ....ban chuka hai...siwaye ek ko chhorke...wo thi Tamanna...

usne apne bhai ko bachpan se dekhte huye aayi hai ke...uska bhai kitna nek dil hai...kitni bhi pareshani aa jaye...wo humesha dheeraj se kaam leta hai...kabhi bhi wo beheka nahi ....jo aaj wo iss halat mein hai...jab wo apne bhai ko apne samne dekhi thi...to wo use pehechan hi nahi paayi thi...uske chehre ki wo masoomiyat...kahi bhi nahi thi....thi to bas dard aur...nafrat...jise wo pehechan gayi thi...

usne thaan li ke...kuch bhi karke use hi sab kuch sahi karna hoga...use hi Vikram ke dard ko kaam karna hoga..lekin kaise...wo to ab uske samne tak jaane se thartharati hai...to phir kaise....akhir mein usne khudko majboot kari aur...chal padi Vikram ke paas...
jaha pohochke usne Vikram se baat karne ki mang ki...aaj peheli baar kisi ne Vikram ke paas aane ki himmat ki thi...isliye uske admiyo ne bhi use jaane diya...
Tamanna Vikram ke paas pohochke phirse khauf kha gayi...jab usne bola.....mujhe ek karan do ke main tumhe jinda chhor dun...

jiske jawab mein Tamanna kuch na keh paayi...aur wo jo bhi kehne aayi thi sab bhul gayi...uske paas kehne ko kuch nahi tha...wo ulte pair wapas aa gayi...
usne kayi baar aur kosish ki ...lekin har bar Vikram use ignore kar deta..jaise Tamanna uske liye exist hi nahi karta....
phir bhi Tamanna apna hausla na chhodi...wo kosish karti rahi....aur kehte hai na kosish karne walo ki kabhi har nahi hoti....

akhir mein Vikram ko jhukna hi pada...
Tamanna....main janti hun ke tumne bohhot dukh jhela hai...mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ke ...tumhare aisa banne ke piche bohot bada karan hai....main unhe badal to nahi kar sakti ...lekin tumhe unhe kam karne ki kosish jaroor kar sakta hun....

Tamanna ke iss baat ke jawab mein...Vikram hasa...pagalon ki tarha hasa...kaafi der tak hasta raha...jise dekhke Tamanna ko pehle ajeeb lagi...lekin samay bitte ke sath....use dar lagne ;laga.....

Vikram...mera dard kam karogi.....hahahahahaha...tum kuch nahi kar sakti...kuch bhi nahi..kyunke yaha humare hath mein kuch bhi nahi hai...kuch bhi nahi....hahahahahaha...chhalawa hai chhalawa...yeh sab bas chhhalawa hai...main tum sab bas chhalawa hai.....ahahahahahaha

Vikram ki iss baat se Tamanna ekdum confuse ho gayi.....jaise ab readers log hone wale hai.....
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Vikram ke 2 gunhegaar bhaag gayee par Vikram ne kuch nhi kiyaa. Aisa kyoo.


Kya Vikram unhe chorr degaa. Aur uss Kajal ko bhi itni aasani se chorr degaa.
 

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aaeee ladke chal uth....sala apne sasural aya hai kya...chal uth.....ek hawaldar cheekhte huye jail ke andar soya hua ek 20 saal ke ladke ko bola,...jisse ladke ka neend tuta....aur jagte hi wo apne aas paas dekha....usko ajeeb sa eh saas hua...aur kuch yaad karne laga.....lekin use bas itna hi yaad aya ke wo abhi jail mein hai....aur wo ek sapna dekh raha tha....jis sapne mein wo ek bohot hi taqatwar jeeb tha...jise koi nahi hara sakta tha.....usne apne gunehgaro ko bhi saja di thi.....

lekin uss sapna aur haqeeqat mein kuch changes the...jaise ke uski koi 2 maa nahi thi...ek hi thi...haa uske 3 aur behen the...aur baap wo ek acha admi hai...nek dil hai....aur ek bhara poora family hai...jisne use humesha se pyar kiya hai....lekin phir wo jail mein kaise....iska jawab kuch mahine pehle milega...

Vikram ka ek chacha hai aur unka ek beta hai....jisse Vikram ka kabhi bhi nahi bana....humesha dono mein kuch na kuch ko leke an ban rehti hai...kyunke chacha ka beta Vikram se jalta tha...kyunke Vikram dikhne mein sundar tha...muscular tha...aur padhayi khelkud mein bhi kafi hoshiyar tha.....aur chacha ke bete ko humesha se VIkram se compare kiya gaya.....

lekin dheere dheere sab badla....Vikram ki jo pariwar usse pyar karti thi...wo usse dur jaane lagi...uski behene jo uspe jaan chhidakti thi...wo usse dur jaane lagi....uski chhoti behen uski jaan Mansi...usne to usdin usko rapist tak keh di thi....jo wo nahi hai....aur uske pariwar wale bhi usse muh mod liye....

kyunke VIkram ek ladki se pyar karta tha....aur dono mein love relation bhi tha....aur dono pariwar ko hi yeh baat pata thi.....lekin yeh ek jaal nikla...Vikram ke chacha ke ladke ka...jiske naam Ajay hai...usne Kajal ..us ladki ko pehle patay....aur use Vikram ko apne pyar ke jaal mein fasane ka kaam diya....

phir jis din Vikram ka 20 wa janam din aya...us din ghar mein hi party thi...ek badi party...kyunke Vikram ka baap ek millionaire jo thehre...khair party mein bohot log aaye the...aur party ke beech mein hi Ajay ne Vikram ko chhat pe jaane ko bola...jaha pehle se Kajal ready thi...aur jaise hi Vikram waha pohocha...wo cheekhne lagi...aur Ajay bhi peeche peeche baki logo ko leke pohoch gaya....jahan sabne dekha ke Vikram Kajal ko pakadne ki kosish kar raha hai...aur Kajal rote huye bhag rahi hai...usse dur jaane ki kosish kar rahi hai....aur uske kapde fate huye the...sharir pe ghaw ke nishan the....

Kajal ke baap ne police ko bula liya...usse pehle unhone Vikram ko bohot mare the...jisme Ajay bhi shamil tha....Vikram roya..sabse apni begunahi ka bheekh manga...lekin sabke samne jo tha...use koi nakar to nahi sakta tha.....usdin Vikram ko pata chala ke sab use pyar to karte the lekin itna nahi ke uspe Viswas rakh sake.....

khair police ne VIkram ko arrest kiya...court mein trial chala.....halaki medical test se rape proof to nahi hua...lekin attemt to rape ka charge jaroor laga...aur usme aur tadka add kiya Vikram ki badi behen Sandhya ne...jisne uspe molestation ka iljam lgayi...aur VIkram ko 7 saal ki saja huyi....

pehle pehle Vikram har din jab bhi koi pariwar wala ya aur log paas hote to wo apne begunahi ka bheekh mangta .....lekin jab dheere dheere use reality ka ehsaas hua...wo chup ho gaya...use pata chal gyaa ke uski baat koi nahi sunega..usko bina koi gunaah ke saja kat te huye...kareeb 2 saaal hone ko chale the...aur isi beech jail mein aur bhi bohot kuch hua...usko mara gaya...itna ke ek do bar to marne ke halat mein aa chuka tha...kyunke usne jail ke baaki kuch kaidio ka kaha nahi mana tha....

uska kayi baar rape hua...buri tareeke se....aur yahi ek akhri cheej thi uske jindagi mein jo uske sanity ko khatm kar diya....wo ekdum chup ho gyaa...pichle 6 mahine se usne ek bhi sahbd nahi bola tha...bas intejar mein hai ...sahi waqt ka....usne apne sharir ko kaafi badal liya tha...wo pehle jaha fit tha...ab wo mascular ban chuka tha....uske chehre se masoomiyat jaa chuki thi...badhi huyi dadhi....aur lambe baal ...pehchanna mushkil hai use ab...aur sabse pariwartan uske man mein aya tha....kyunke pehle jo ek sweet careening kind banda tha....ab simply kaha jaaye to ek jaanwar ban chuka hai...jiske man mein bas badle ke bhao hi hai....

lekin kaal raat ko ek ajeeb si baat huyi thi...uske sapne mein ek ladka aya tha....aur usne khud ko LORD CHAOS bataya...aur yeh bhi ke wo ek god hai...aur usne kaha ke tumhe main itni taqat de raha hun...ke tum ab dharti ke sabse shakti shali insaan ho....jo chahe wo kar sakte ho...halaki Vikram ko bas mehej yeh ek sapna hi lag raha tha us Undead King ke sapne ki tarah...lekin aaj usne soch liya tha ke wo apna badla lena suru karega...sabse pehle yaha jail se hi uski suruwat hogi....

isi liye pichli raat ko hi usne Kitchen mein kaam karte waqt ek chaku apne paas chhupa liya tha...wo apne cell se nikla...aur jaha pe baaki ke kaydi kaam kar rahe the...waha pohoch gaya...apne piche Chaku ko chhupaye...wo pohocha Raghu ke paas...jisne uspe julm ki suruwat ki thi...jo murder charges pe andar band hai....

khair VIkram Raghu ke piche gaya...apne hath mein chaku ko nikala....aur Raghu ke sar ko bayee hath se pakad ke uske gale mein chaku ghuma diya...Raghu iss achanak huye humle ekdum hadbada gyaa...lekin Vikram ke hath se nahi chhut paya....baaki kaidi jo aspas the...unmein hadbadi mach gayi...koi jaldi jailor ko bulane chala gaya....

Vikram ke chehre pe koi bhi emotions nahi the...wo bas dhere dhre Raghu ke sar ko katta raha...jab tak uska sar uske dhar se alag na ho gaya....Raghu bakri ki tarah awaj karta raha ...hath pair marta raha...aur akhir mien jake uska sharir bhi shant pad gaya....
isi beech Jailor bhi aa gaya...aur sath mein kuch police wale bhi.....jo Vikram ko apna hathiyar fekne ko bolne lage....

lekin bina Maa kali ke tarah ek hath mein chaku aur dusre hath mein Raghu ka kata hua sar leke...age badhta raha...ek bohot kaoufnak manjar tha...kuch to ultiya karne lage.....Vikram ke pure sahrir pe khun..uske hath ka chaku....aur akhir mein uske hath mein Raghu ka kata hua sar...aur sabse darwani baat thi ....Raghu ke khuli huyi ankhein....jo saaf gawah the ke ...marne se pehle usne kitna dard saha hai....

Jailor ne jab dekha ke Vikram nahi ruk raha hai...aur uske taraf hi aage badh raha hai...usne fire ka order de diya...aur Vikram ko ek goli jake lagi...lekin tajjub ki baat use kuch bhbi farak nahi pada....wo waise hi chalta raha...dheere dheere...jaise maut khud chalke jaa raha ho....chehre pe koi bhi bhao nahi...emotionless....

JAilor ne jaise hi dekha ke goli ka koi asar nahi ho raha hai....usne fir se fire ka order diya....Vikram sharir chhalni ho gaya...lekin koi farak nahi...wo waise hi chalte huye jailor ke ekdum kareeb aa gyaa....aur abtak Jailor aur baaki sabka dar se buri halat ho chuki thi....kuch bhag gaye...kuch dar ke mare wahi pe jame rahe....Vikram ne jailor ko Raghu ka sar pakdaya...aur uska kandha thapthapaya....aur age badh gya....

agle 2 ghanto tak pure jail mein bas cheekhein gunjti rahi....aur ek ke bad ek sar kata lash gidne lagi....kasayi jaise bakri ko kat ta hai...aj vikram wahi kasayi ban chuka tha...lekin wo insan kat raha tha....koi bhag bhi nahi paa raha tha...kyunke jaha bhi jaav raha tha...Vikram bhi wahi pohoch ke unhe dhund le raha tha....aur dheere dheere tadpa tadpa ke sabke sar dhad se kat raha tha....use logo ki cheekh se sukun mil raha hai...is liye wo jitna mar raha hai,...use utna hi maja aa raha hai...aur wo utna hi dard nak tareeke se ,mar raaha hai.....

use itna hi majboor kar diya gaya tha ke...usne apni insaniyat kho di.....aur badal gaya hai ek janwar mein....jise bas dusro ki cheekh ...unka rona.....unke dard se hi khusi mil rahi hai...

akhri mein bacha tha Jailor ...jo darke mare apne cabin mein chhup chuka tha...wo darke mare yeh bhi bhul chuka tha ke...wo aur police force bhi bula sakta hai....wo ro raha tha...upar wale se khud ko bacha lene ki bheekh mang raha tha...lekin tab usne mut diya ...jab usne apni najre utha ke samne dekha ke uske samne ek kasayi khda hai...jiske hath mein wahi chaku hai...jisse khun ki boondein tapak rahi hai...aur pure sahreer mein khun hi khun .....

use aur koyi mauka hi nahi mila...kyunke Vikram ne use pakad liya...aur baaki ki tarah hi uska bhi hal karne laga....Jailor kaafi der chhat pata ta raha...apne gunaaho ko yaad karne laga....khas karke usne hi baaki sabko Vikram ka rape karne ke liye madat ki thi.....akhir mein jaake uska shareer bhi thanda pad gyaa....

Vikram ke chehre pe ab bhi koi baho nahi ....use bas andar se sukun mil raha tha....usne kisi ko nahi chhoda.....jinhone uske sath galat nahi kiya...unhe bhi nahi...kyunke use unke cheekhein aur apni jaan ki bheekh mangna acha lag raha tha...use sukun de rahi thi...

akhir mein maut ka tandav khatam karke usne ...wahi jail ke ek diwar mein likha.....MAUT KI SURUWAT.....phir wo wahi jailor ke bathroom mein nahaya...aur fresh kapde pehna...aur uss samshan se nikla....kyunke jail mein staff ko milake kul 35 bande the...sabke sar kate huye pade the...bahar koi guard bhi nahi tha....usne ab tak ek bhi shabd nahi bola tha....aur jab use goliyo se kuch nahi hua...to use pata chala ke jo usne LORD CHAOS ka sapna dekha tha...wo sach hai....

use ab apni jaan ki koi parwah hi nahi thi....use bas CHAOS chahiye....ab logo ke dil mein dar chahiye......is liye wo nikalne se pehle JAilor ke purse se paise nikal liye.....aur bahar aake sabse pehle ek resturant mein gaya...

uske ghuste hi sab use ajeeb tarah se dekhne lage...kyunke wo ek pagal ki tarah lag raha tha....aur uske kapde bhi kuch khas acha nahi tha...khair koi uske muh pe kuch keh nahi paya...kyunke wo dekhne mein darawna bhi tha....

khana khake ....wo bahar nikla...ab tak dopeher dhalne ko aayi thi....wo chalta raha...chalta raha...aur pohoch gaya..ek doctor ke cabin mein...jisne Kajal ke medical taste kiya tha...waha jaake bhi wahi maut ka nanga nach chala....jisme 1 nurse aur Doctor mara gaya....kyun...pata nahi...use maja aa rha tha...sukun mil raha tha...use sabke man mein dar chahye tha.....uska main target ban gaya ke iss system ko jisne uske sath galat aur anyay kiya...use uske kadmo mein gidana.....

nikalne se pehle usne waha bhi likha.......RISE OF THE DEATH





to be continued..........
Boss bohat hi. Confusing update magar dhasu.
1st tareef ki ek dam bhayankar dikhaya hain yaha Vikram ko aut waqai me kisi per itna zulm mat Karo ki woh Apni sharafat chor. De coz jab shareef Apni sharafat chor de to usse darna chahiye bohat zada darna chahiye.
AB doosri baat Yara ek dum se story kaha se kaha change kar di ab sawal yah Hai ki ab tak jo 38 updates padi thee woh sab waste Hai ya unka kahani se koi connection hain coz us story me 2 alag alag time frame ke flashback they kafi sarey characters they ab unko ek dam dream Kah kar mithya to nahi Kia jaa sakta. To kuch pichli sab ka nayi story me impact hoga aur kia woh character is nayi story me judege ya nahi. Aur specially Raphael the undead king Nemesis Shally and asedeous jis ko hell fire me dala thaa aur usne apna kaam kar diya aisa Bola thaa to Kia woh ab yaha aayega.
 

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Waqt ke sath har ek cheej badalta hai....insaan bhi badal jaate hai.....
Kaveri ko marne ke waqt Vikram ko bohot hi sukun mila tha...lekin baad mein ek khalipan sa mehsoos hone laga...ab use logo ko marne mein koi maja nahi aa raha tha...jo sukun use mil raha tha wo nahi mil raha tha.....lekin unhe takleef mein dekhke sukun mil raha tha....

lekin asliyet yeh nahi thi...asliyat mein to Vikram ek bohot hi nek dil insaan hai...kuch waqt ke liye uske andhere hisse ne uspe kaabu jaroor paa liya tha..lekin ab dheere dheere uska asli roop samne aa raha tha...aur wo ab khudke feelings se hi pareshan hone laga....lekin uske sath huye galat ko bhi wo nahi bhul paa raha tha....wo abhi bhi wahi pe atka hua hai...age nahi badh paa raha hai....
jab bhi wo sab kuch bhulne ki kosish karta...tab hi use wo chehre yaad aa jaate...jo usko tadapta hua dekhke maje lete the....use wo dard yaa jata....jo wo ab tak jhelta hua aya hai....har wo yatnaye yaaad aati hai...jo use logo ne di hai...dusro ko wo kya hi galat thehraye...uske khudke apno ne uska sath nahi diya...

har raat ko use nightmares aate hai....aur uske jakhmo ko phirse kured dte hai....uske man mein ab after thoughts ane lage hai...ke wo jo bhi kar raha hai...kya wo sahi hai...kya use dusro ko ek aur mauka dena chahiye....galti sab karte hai..sabko hi ek dusra mauka jaroor milna chahiye...
jaldi hi use yeh baat realize ho gayi ...ke dusra mauka koi bhi desreve nahi karta....kyunke jab koi bhi galat karta hai...uske pehle ji use kaafi mauka mil jata hai...use kaafi mauka milta hai ke..wo galti na kare...piche hat jaaye...uska man use jaroor rokta hai...lekin phir bhi galat kar baithta hai...to isi liye har galti ki saja jaroor hoti hai...koi maafi nahi...aur gunaah ki maut....

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Kaveri ki maut se Vikram ke family mein jitni dukh ka mahol gujra...usse kaayi jyada dar ka mahol paida ho chuka hai...kyunke kuch ko chhor ke baaki kisi ko bhi nahi pata ke Vikram ne kaveri ko khyun maraa....aur isi liye sab dar mein ji rahe hai ke pata nahi ke agli baari kiski hogi...

isi beech Sandhya bhi Ajay ki tarah bhaag chuki thi....jisko kisine dhundne ki kosish nahi ki....ab har ek cheej ka reason to nahi hota...kyun nahi dhunda yeh to baaki ke family wale hi jaane....
khair wo bhaag chuki hai...kyunke Vikram ne uske ghar mein ghuske uske samne uski chaachi ki jaan le chuka hai...aur koi bhi kuch nahi kar paya...pura seher yeh najara dekha...lekin koi bhi kuch nahi kar paya...isi liye har ek insaan ke taraha...jo humesha apne pblms se bhaagta hai...wo bhi bhaag gayi...yehi ek aas mein ke Vikram use dhund nahi paayega....

Vikram ki dono bua ki family bhi aa chuki thi...lekin unke hath mein bhi kuch nahi tha....siwaye dukh wyakt karne ke
Malini to coma mein hi thi...uski uthne ki koi umeed hi nahi thi....apni saari jindagi waise hi duron ki daya pe jindaa rahegi...jo ek insaan ki sabse baadi saja hoti hai...jab wo dekh sun sab sakta hai...lekin na kuch bol sakta hai...na kuch kar sakta hai....

Vijendra ke ahankar tut chuka hai...use iss baat ka ehsaas bhi ho chuka hai ke...wo bhi insabka hissedar hai...wo bhi unmeses ek hai...jisne aaj iss janwar ko janam diya hai...wahi wo baap hai...jisne apne bache ko marke..ek jaanwar ko paida kiya hai...
lekin kisi ko bhi iss baat ka ehsaas tak nahi hua ke...akhir asli baat kya hai ...jo Vikram inta nirdayi ....ban chuka hai...siwaye ek ko chhorke...wo thi Tamanna...

usne apne bhai ko bachpan se dekhte huye aayi hai ke...uska bhai kitna nek dil hai...kitni bhi pareshani aa jaye...wo humesha dheeraj se kaam leta hai...kabhi bhi wo beheka nahi ....jo aaj wo iss halat mein hai...jab wo apne bhai ko apne samne dekhi thi...to wo use pehechan hi nahi paayi thi...uske chehre ki wo masoomiyat...kahi bhi nahi thi....thi to bas dard aur...nafrat...jise wo pehechan gayi thi...

usne thaan li ke...kuch bhi karke use hi sab kuch sahi karna hoga...use hi Vikram ke dard ko kaam karna hoga..lekin kaise...wo to ab uske samne tak jaane se thartharati hai...to phir kaise....akhir mein usne khudko majboot kari aur...chal padi Vikram ke paas...
jaha pohochke usne Vikram se baat karne ki mang ki...aaj peheli baar kisi ne Vikram ke paas aane ki himmat ki thi...isliye uske admiyo ne bhi use jaane diya...
Tamanna Vikram ke paas pohochke phirse khauf kha gayi...jab usne bola.....mujhe ek karan do ke main tumhe jinda chhor dun...

jiske jawab mein Tamanna kuch na keh paayi...aur wo jo bhi kehne aayi thi sab bhul gayi...uske paas kehne ko kuch nahi tha...wo ulte pair wapas aa gayi...
usne kayi baar aur kosish ki ...lekin har bar Vikram use ignore kar deta..jaise Tamanna uske liye exist hi nahi karta....
phir bhi Tamanna apna hausla na chhodi...wo kosish karti rahi....aur kehte hai na kosish karne walo ki kabhi har nahi hoti....

akhir mein Vikram ko jhukna hi pada...
Tamanna....main janti hun ke tumne bohhot dukh jhela hai...mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ke ...tumhare aisa banne ke piche bohot bada karan hai....main unhe badal to nahi kar sakti ...lekin tumhe unhe kam karne ki kosish jaroor kar sakta hun....

Tamanna ke iss baat ke jawab mein...Vikram hasa...pagalon ki tarha hasa...kaafi der tak hasta raha...jise dekhke Tamanna ko pehle ajeeb lagi...lekin samay bitte ke sath....use dar lagne ;laga.....

Vikram...mera dard kam karogi.....hahahahahaha...tum kuch nahi kar sakti...kuch bhi nahi..kyunke yaha humare hath mein kuch bhi nahi hai...kuch bhi nahi....hahahahahaha...chhalawa hai chhalawa...yeh sab bas chhhalawa hai...main tum sab bas chhalawa hai.....ahahahahahaha

Vikram ki iss baat se Tamanna ekdum confuse ho gayi.....jaise ab readers log hone wale hai.....
 

Ajay

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Update....42


Waqt ke sath har ek cheej badalta hai....insaan bhi badal jaate hai.....
Kaveri ko marne ke waqt Vikram ko bohot hi sukun mila tha...lekin baad mein ek khalipan sa mehsoos hone laga...ab use logo ko marne mein koi maja nahi aa raha tha...jo sukun use mil raha tha wo nahi mil raha tha.....lekin unhe takleef mein dekhke sukun mil raha tha....

lekin asliyet yeh nahi thi...asliyat mein to Vikram ek bohot hi nek dil insaan hai...kuch waqt ke liye uske andhere hisse ne uspe kaabu jaroor paa liya tha..lekin ab dheere dheere uska asli roop samne aa raha tha...aur wo ab khudke feelings se hi pareshan hone laga....lekin uske sath huye galat ko bhi wo nahi bhul paa raha tha....wo abhi bhi wahi pe atka hua hai...age nahi badh paa raha hai....
jab bhi wo sab kuch bhulne ki kosish karta...tab hi use wo chehre yaad aa jaate...jo usko tadapta hua dekhke maje lete the....use wo dard yaa jata....jo wo ab tak jhelta hua aya hai....har wo yatnaye yaaad aati hai...jo use logo ne di hai...dusro ko wo kya hi galat thehraye...uske khudke apno ne uska sath nahi diya...

har raat ko use nightmares aate hai....aur uske jakhmo ko phirse kured dte hai....uske man mein ab after thoughts ane lage hai...ke wo jo bhi kar raha hai...kya wo sahi hai...kya use dusro ko ek aur mauka dena chahiye....galti sab karte hai..sabko hi ek dusra mauka jaroor milna chahiye...
jaldi hi use yeh baat realize ho gayi ...ke dusra mauka koi bhi desreve nahi karta....kyunke jab koi bhi galat karta hai...uske pehle ji use kaafi mauka mil jata hai...use kaafi mauka milta hai ke..wo galti na kare...piche hat jaaye...uska man use jaroor rokta hai...lekin phir bhi galat kar baithta hai...to isi liye har galti ki saja jaroor hoti hai...koi maafi nahi...aur gunaah ki maut....

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Kaveri ki maut se Vikram ke family mein jitni dukh ka mahol gujra...usse kaayi jyada dar ka mahol paida ho chuka hai...kyunke kuch ko chhor ke baaki kisi ko bhi nahi pata ke Vikram ne kaveri ko khyun maraa....aur isi liye sab dar mein ji rahe hai ke pata nahi ke agli baari kiski hogi...

isi beech Sandhya bhi Ajay ki tarah bhaag chuki thi....jisko kisine dhundne ki kosish nahi ki....ab har ek cheej ka reason to nahi hota...kyun nahi dhunda yeh to baaki ke family wale hi jaane....
khair wo bhaag chuki hai...kyunke Vikram ne uske ghar mein ghuske uske samne uski chaachi ki jaan le chuka hai...aur koi bhi kuch nahi kar paya...pura seher yeh najara dekha...lekin koi bhi kuch nahi kar paya...isi liye har ek insaan ke taraha...jo humesha apne pblms se bhaagta hai...wo bhi bhaag gayi...yehi ek aas mein ke Vikram use dhund nahi paayega....

Vikram ki dono bua ki family bhi aa chuki thi...lekin unke hath mein bhi kuch nahi tha....siwaye dukh wyakt karne ke
Malini to coma mein hi thi...uski uthne ki koi umeed hi nahi thi....apni saari jindagi waise hi duron ki daya pe jindaa rahegi...jo ek insaan ki sabse baadi saja hoti hai...jab wo dekh sun sab sakta hai...lekin na kuch bol sakta hai...na kuch kar sakta hai....

Vijendra ke ahankar tut chuka hai...use iss baat ka ehsaas bhi ho chuka hai ke...wo bhi insabka hissedar hai...wo bhi unmeses ek hai...jisne aaj iss janwar ko janam diya hai...wahi wo baap hai...jisne apne bache ko marke..ek jaanwar ko paida kiya hai...
lekin kisi ko bhi iss baat ka ehsaas tak nahi hua ke...akhir asli baat kya hai ...jo Vikram inta nirdayi ....ban chuka hai...siwaye ek ko chhorke...wo thi Tamanna...

usne apne bhai ko bachpan se dekhte huye aayi hai ke...uska bhai kitna nek dil hai...kitni bhi pareshani aa jaye...wo humesha dheeraj se kaam leta hai...kabhi bhi wo beheka nahi ....jo aaj wo iss halat mein hai...jab wo apne bhai ko apne samne dekhi thi...to wo use pehechan hi nahi paayi thi...uske chehre ki wo masoomiyat...kahi bhi nahi thi....thi to bas dard aur...nafrat...jise wo pehechan gayi thi...

usne thaan li ke...kuch bhi karke use hi sab kuch sahi karna hoga...use hi Vikram ke dard ko kaam karna hoga..lekin kaise...wo to ab uske samne tak jaane se thartharati hai...to phir kaise....akhir mein usne khudko majboot kari aur...chal padi Vikram ke paas...
jaha pohochke usne Vikram se baat karne ki mang ki...aaj peheli baar kisi ne Vikram ke paas aane ki himmat ki thi...isliye uske admiyo ne bhi use jaane diya...
Tamanna Vikram ke paas pohochke phirse khauf kha gayi...jab usne bola.....mujhe ek karan do ke main tumhe jinda chhor dun...

jiske jawab mein Tamanna kuch na keh paayi...aur wo jo bhi kehne aayi thi sab bhul gayi...uske paas kehne ko kuch nahi tha...wo ulte pair wapas aa gayi...
usne kayi baar aur kosish ki ...lekin har bar Vikram use ignore kar deta..jaise Tamanna uske liye exist hi nahi karta....
phir bhi Tamanna apna hausla na chhodi...wo kosish karti rahi....aur kehte hai na kosish karne walo ki kabhi har nahi hoti....

akhir mein Vikram ko jhukna hi pada...
Tamanna....main janti hun ke tumne bohhot dukh jhela hai...mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ke ...tumhare aisa banne ke piche bohot bada karan hai....main unhe badal to nahi kar sakti ...lekin tumhe unhe kam karne ki kosish jaroor kar sakta hun....

Tamanna ke iss baat ke jawab mein...Vikram hasa...pagalon ki tarha hasa...kaafi der tak hasta raha...jise dekhke Tamanna ko pehle ajeeb lagi...lekin samay bitte ke sath....use dar lagne ;laga.....

Vikram...mera dard kam karogi.....hahahahahaha...tum kuch nahi kar sakti...kuch bhi nahi..kyunke yaha humare hath mein kuch bhi nahi hai...kuch bhi nahi....hahahahahaha...chhalawa hai chhalawa...yeh sab bas chhhalawa hai...main tum sab bas chhalawa hai.....ahahahahahaha

Vikram ki iss baat se Tamanna ekdum confuse ho gayi.....jaise ab readers log hone wale hai.....
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