Adultery Rise of the Death (completed)

[nilu12]

Evil for evil
Ghanta..
Kya hua kya nahi pata chale bina end bhi ho gaya..
Sandhya ne jutha aarop q lagaya tha??
Vikram ki gand bhi mari gaye ek nahi bahot bar. Chalo jano do usko gandu hi banane doh.. per kon kaise change ho gaya?Vikaram ki maa coma se kaise bahar aye? Konse bhi sawal la jawab nahi mila.. udhar kajal bhi jinda hai maje ke sath joh etana kuch kar gaye.....ghar ke baki kaha gaye woh bhi nahi pata????

Story achi thi bhai....par aap khud hi khud ko bhul gaye likhate likhate...waise toh end ho gaya hi hai...par bahot kharab..
Kisi ko bura lage toh lage...lakin apne kaha tha main evil to evil pe bharosa karata hun.. aur yaha bina kuch kiye kahani khatam.... ab dusari story main bhi yahi karoge. Sab hero ki gand marenge bad main hero unko maf karke roj khud apni gand marvayega

 

[Pta nhi]

Awesome end

 

[Vipul]

Update......43



Kajal bhaagti rahi ...wo bohot bhaagi....apne maut se bachti rahi....chhupti rahi...
lekin maut ne uski picha nahi chhodi...

wo dheere dheere mentally break ho gayi....puri tarah se...depression mein chali gayi...
use har raat apne baap ke katal ka manjar dikhayi deta tha...aur wo sehem jaati....wo Vikram ko kosti...usse badla lene ki sochti...
lekin wo kar kuch nahi sakti....

usne 2 -3 bar Vikram ko marne ki plan bhi banayi...lekin uske aas paas bhi bhatak nahi paayi....
wo jab bhi use marne gayi...Vikram ka jaanwar wala roop uske samne aa jata....wo aur bhi sehem jaati...aur chah ke bhi kuch nahi kar paati...

phir use yaad ata ...ke in sabki wajah to wahi hai...usine to in sabki suruwat ki thi...uske paas sab tha...apna maa baap...ek bohot hi pyar karne wala insaan....jiska future bohot hi acha tha....lekin lalach mein aake usne sab kuch kho di....
ab dar dar thokre khate fir rahi hai...

usse sab kuch aur sehen nahi ho raha tha...wo andar andar hi mar rahi thi....akhir mein wo halat se aur na lad paayi..aur gale mein fanda laga li....khatam ho gayi ek aur jindagi ki kahani.....

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Vikram ki family sadak pe aa gayi thi...ab wo log ek ek dane ke mohotaj ban gaye hai....
kyun...
kyunke logo ne apni jaan ki dar se saari rishte tod di...chahe wo personal ho ya phir bussiness related....koi bhi unse baat tak nahi karna chahta tha....
isi liye dheere dheere unhone apna bussiness khoya....phir saare debt pura karne ke liye apne property aur paise khoye..unhe apna ghar chhodna pada...aur ek basti mein rehne ko majboor ho gaye..upar se Vikram ki maa ki ilaaj ke kharche...jise chalana mushkil ho raha tha...aur unki halat din ba din battar hote jaa rahi thi..

koi bhi unhe kuch bhi dena nahi chahta tha...nahi kuch bechna...nahi unse kuch kharidna....
isi beech..kuch log unki madat karne ko aage badhe.....lekin unki laash hi mili...jiske baad se sabko samajh ne mien der nahi laagi ke..jo bhi unki madat karega....wo apni jaan se hath dho baithega...

Vijendra ko koi bhi kaam nahi de raha tha....unke kapde tak fat chuke the....sabke
unka ahankar..unka gurroor sab mitti mein mil chuki thi...bheekh mangne tak majboor ho gaye the....

jin logo pe unhe apne bete se jyada bharosa tha...jiska unhe ahankar tha...aaj wahi khatam ho chuka tha...poori pariwar ko yeh baat realize ho chuki thi ke...unhone kya khoya hai...kya galti kar di hai unhone...
lekin ab pachhtawa karke kya faida...galti to ho chuki hai...
jise sudharne ka unke paas kaafi mauke the..lekin unhe wo nahi ajmaye...ab bhagat rahe hai..apne krani ka nateeja....

unhe ab pata chal raha tha ke...jab apne hi apno ke pith piche chhura ghopte hai...to kaisa lagta hai..kyunke uske Vijendra ke baaki ke pariwar walo tak unke madat karne ke liye apne hath khade kar chuke the....
ab in sabka din ..pachtawe..hatasha...hoplessness mein hi gujar raha hai...

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Ajay ghar se bhaagke..dusre seher mein chala gaya..jahan uska ek dost tha...wo apne dost ke sath hi rehne laga...
use yehi laga ke wo bach gaya hai...use ab Vikram nahi pakad sakta...

lekin uske dost ko jab uski sachayi pata chali ke...uske hi wajah se Vikram aisa hai...kyunke Ajay ne ek raat ko sharab ke nashe mein sab kuch baak diya...
Ajay..nashe mein....tujhe pata hai...wo sala humesha mujhse behtar tha...sab log sala mujhe hi humesha tana marte the...madarchod kahi ka...dekh kya kiya maine uske sath ...uski puri jindagi barbad kar di...

dost...kya kiya tune....

Ajay...aur kya....madarchod ko maine jhute rape case mein andar karwa diya...pata nahi us harami ke sath waha kya hua...wo ab hum sabke jaan ke piche pada hua hai...abhi mujhe khabar mili ke usne mere ghar mein ghuske mere maa ko mar diya...

dost...kya...aur tujhe koi dukh nahi hai...teri maa mari gayi hai..

Ajay...hahahahahahha..dukh wo bhi uss randi ke liye...acha hua saali mari gayi..aaj usi ke wajah se main yahan hun...sali ne hi mujhe bachpan se us kamine ke khilaaf bhadkaya ....usne hi mujhe yeh sab plan karne ko kaha tha...sali randi ne apne Raghu se chudwake jail mein hi uska rape karne ko kahi thi...taki wo sala harami ki aulad...apne rape ke sharam se suicide kar le...

Dost ka muh khula reh gaya....use pata tha ke Vikram kaisa hai...aur kya kar sakta hai..use marna nahi tha...Vikram ke dushman ki madat karke...isi liye usne usi pal soch liya ke wo Vikram ko Ajay ka khabar de dega....

Ajay...mere dost..tujhe pata hai..wo sala mujhe chhu tak nahi sakta....main kaha hun use to yeh bhi pata nahi hoga...aur mere paas tu hai...bachayega na tu mujhe...

dost...ha ha...jaroor jaroor...
usne bol do diya...lekin uske paseene chhut rahe the...wo khudke lash ko kati fati halat mein saaf saaf imagine kar sakta tha...isiliye agle din kisi tarah Vikram tak Ajay ki khabar pohocha di....

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Vikram ko khabar milte hi..wo nikal pada...
shikari nikal pada..shikar ke liye
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Ajay abhi jamin pe reng raha tha...uski ek tang kat chuki thi...aur ek tang tut chuki thi....sara sahreer khun se lathpath ho chuki thi....muh ke kayi dant gayab ho chuke the...ek kaan kata hua tha....kuch ungliya niche kati padi huy thi..aur charo taraf uska khun pada hua tha....aur paas mein hi ek ladki dari sehemi baithi huyi thi...

asal mein Ajay ekdum be fikar hoke apni jindagi jee raha tha...aaj wo ek randi ke paas aya tha...chodne ke liye...usne abhi pant hi utara tha ke uske upar humla ho gaya...
Randi khane ke logo ne jab dekha ke waha Vikram aya hai...to kisi mein himmat nahi thi ke koi kuch kare...tabhi ek insaan ke gand mein khujli huyi...use Vikram ke baare mein jada pata nahi thi...usne Vikram ko rokne ke liye age badha hi tha..uska kata hua sar neeche gid gaya...

jiske baad aur kisi mein kuch bhi karne ki himmat nahi huyi...kuch muk darshak banne ke liye waha reh gaye...aur kuch bhaag gaye...logo ko dusro ko dard mein dekhne mein maja jo ata hai...to use dekhne ka mauka ..jo log ruk gaye the...wo kaise gawa dete..
lekin Vikram ka behesi pana dekhke wo bhi bhaag gaye...aur jo prostitute thi...wo dar ke mare wahi ek kone mein dubak ke baithi huyi thi....

Ajay...tadap te huye...mere bhai ...chhor de..dekh tune mujhe saja de di hai..ab to chhor de..mujhe marna nahi hai....mujhe chhod de...dekh main kaise tadap raha hun ...ab to chhor de
Ajay ka mansik santulan hil chuka tha...uske dimaag mein bas ab yahi chal raha tha ke...use kisi traah bachna hai...jise kehte hai...survival instinct...

Vikram...saja abhi suru bhi nahi huyi....hahahahahhahaha...main kuch bhi nahi kar sakta...main bebas hu mere bhai.....chal tujhe ek baat batata hun....
main ek raja ....ek god tha...lekin aaj dekh main ek katil hun..jise logo ki cheekh se sukun milta hai...main isme kuch bhi nahi kar sakta...kyunke meri jindagi mere hath mein hi nahi hai......

Ajay apne dard mein hi muh fade uski baat sunta aa raha hai...

Vikram...tujhe samajh mein nahi aya...acha thik hai sun...tune iss baat pe kabhi dhyan diya ke...ek mamuli insaan pe kisi bhi hathiyar ka asar kyun nahi hota hai....main ek god hun...lekin phir bhi mere bhi upar kuch shakti hai...jo bas apne maje ke liye humare sath khelta hai...yeh mujhe abhi kuch din pehle hi pata chali hai...lekin main kuch kar nahi sakta...
hum sab ek lab mein rakhe huye..lab rat jaise hai...scientist jispe eperiment karta hai..aur akhir mein jab uska kaam khatam hoi jaye...to mar deta hai...aur ab tum logo ka kaam khatam ho chuka hai...aur yeh kaam mujhe diya gyaa hai...

yahi humari kismat hai...hum mese kisi ki bhi jingadi humare hath mein nahi hai...hum bas ek car mein rakhi gayi...luggage ki tarah hai...jiska malik jo chahe uske sath karta hai.....luggage ki khudki koi marji nahi hoti hai.....
mujhe koi dukh nahi hai...aur dukh karke hi main kya hi ukhad lunga....to faltu main dukh hi kyun mana na...tujhe to khush hona chahiye ke tujhe iss jindagi se mukti mil rahi hai...

kyun maine thik kaha na Writer...hum sabke Creator...mujhe pata hai tum abhi yeh sab likh rahe ho...hum sabki kismat...hum bas apki hath ki kath putli hai...jaise apki asli jindagi mein upar wala apke jindagi ke sath khelta hai.....
main bas itna hi kehna chahunga...ap yeh sab phirse likhiye...aur mujhe ek achi jindagi dijiye...main amar nahi banna chahta hun...bas ek achi jindagi chahta hun...

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Writer.....kya kehte ho mere readers...ya yun kahun..mere LAB ke baaki ke scientists.....kya kiya jaaye...inko achi jindagi diya jaaye...take yeh ek khushal jindagi beeta sake...ya phir aise hi inka kahani khatam kiya jaaye.....
jawab ka intejar rahega.......

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[Aksh_blood]

Evil for evil
Ghanta..
Kya hua kya nahi pata chale bina end bhi ho gaya..
Sandhya ne jutha aarop q lagaya tha??
Vikram ki gand bhi mari gaye ek nahi bahot bar. Chalo jano do usko gandu hi banane doh.. per kon kaise change ho gaya?Vikaram ki maa coma se kaise bahar aye? Konse bhi sawal la jawab nahi mila.. udhar kajal bhi jinda hai maje ke sath joh etana kuch kar gaye.....ghar ke baki kaha gaye woh bhi nahi pata????

Story achi thi bhai....par aap khud hi khud ko bhul gaye likhate likhate...waise toh end ho gaya hi hai...par bahot kharab..
Kisi ko bura lage toh lage...lakin apne kaha tha main evil to evil pe bharosa karata hun.. aur yaha bina kuch kiye kahani khatam.... ab dusari story main bhi yahi karoge. Sab hero ki gand marenge bad main hero unko maf karke roj khud apni gand marvayega

Ab aap hi kahani ko samajh nahi paye to isme humari kya galti bhai...

Maine pehle bhi kaha....yeh koi traditional fantasy story nhi hai....
Ismein 3 bar Vikram ka puri ki puri REALITY hi change huyi.....
Jismein wo alag alag tha....

Jis liye....3no jindigiya...alag alag hai...ek dusre ke liye koi maine nahi rakhta....
Aur yeh kya galat ka rona laga ke baithe ho.....
Grow up man
Yaha Eye for an Eye se bhi bade topic ke upar maine likha hai....
Agar samajh pate ho....to bohot ache...nahi to apki marji...

Aur meri baat se agar offend hote ho to....mujhe koi farak nahi padta....
Meri thinking ko aap samajh nahi paye...ismein meri galti nahi hai.....

Final baat yahi hai...maine yeh story is liye likhi ke.....take thode traditional thinking se bahar aao....
Thoda out of the box socho

 

[SameerK]

Last update......


Beta uth jao....kitni der tak lete rahoge.....

.....sone do na mom...aaj sunday hai na....ao ap bhi si jao.....yeh bolke Vikram apne maa ko apne sath sula deta hai...

kya kar raha hai...jaldi uth...dekh hume mandir jana hai na aaj....chalo ...chalo utho...
Vikram angdayi lete huye utha...aur ankhe kholke dekha ke....Nemesis uske samne hai...Malini banke...aur wo apne kamre mien leta hua tha...jo uske liye normal baat hai....

Vikram utha.....fresh huya...aur ache se ready hoke niche aaya...jaha baaki pariwar walon ne usko morning wish kiya....
jaha Vikram ne dekha ke uski teeno behene ready hoke baithi huyi hai.....tab Tamanna boli....chhotu kitni late karta hai..jaldi chal...warna mandir mein bhid badh jayegi.....

Mansi...haa bhaiya ap din ba din bohot hi alsi hote jaa rahe ho...
Vikram...are yaar...thoda hi to late hua hun...ab tum log baat karke samay barbad kar rahe ho....

Sandhya,....ha ha,,,...hum hi to late kar rahe hai....
Vijendra....are bacho jhagda mat karo......wo sidhiyo se niche utarte huye bola....

Vikram...dekho na papa ...yeh log mujhe dant rahe hai....
Vijendra...kyun deviyon...mere bache ko kyun dant rahe ho.....Manu beta tum batao..kya bat hai....

Manu...kuch nahi papa..hum to bas aise hi majak kar rahe hai....
tabhi piche se malini aati huyi boli.....chalo bohot ho gaya ab...jaldi se chalo....
Vijendra...hum to taiyar hi bhagyeban...ap hi to ab aa rahi hai.....jis baat ko sunte...Malini Vijendra ko ankh dikhati hai....aur iss baat ko baaki ke bacho mand mand muskura rahe the....

yuhi yeh pariwar khatti mithi nok jhok ke sath mandir ke taraf nikal jaati hai...ek happy family....
Mandir mein puja hone ke baad ...sab ghar ko laut te hai....aur nasta pani karke...vikram nikal padta hai...apne dosto ke sath milne....

jaha...uske dost....Radhika...Kajal...Kavya....Labanya...Ranbir,....Ajay....Vijay...sab wait kar rahe the....
RAdhika....Kavya.aur Labnya ka vikram pe crush hai...lekin koi bata nahi paati...apni dost ko khone ke dar se...

Vikram ko bhi yeh pata hai...lekin wo koi pehel nahi karna chahta.....
sare dost pure Sunday ke din dhamal choukdi karte hai....Movie dekhna...shopping karna...resturant mein khana....
aur phir raat ko thaka hara..ghar lautna...aur mummy papa ka halka fulka dant khana...beheno se masti...

yeh sab Vikram ke liye aaam baat thi..aur baki sabke liye bhi...kyunke kisiko yaad hi nahi hai..ke unke sath kya hua hai...sabke liye yehi unki asliyat thi...

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Vikram ekdin akela baitha hua tha....use ab thoda ajeeb lagne laga tha...kyunke jab sab kuch acha ho to,...kuch kuch ajeeb lagta hai...life boring ho jata hai.....
deep down hum sab apne apne life mein...thodi chaos chahte hai...jo jaroori bhi hai...life ko enjoy karne ke liye...

Tabhi waha ek ladka aya...aur Vikram se bola....khushal Jindagi kaisi lag rahi hai Vikram......

Vikram piche mud ke dekha to ek ladka ..usse sawal kar raha hai...ladke ko wo pehchanta to nahi ...lekin apna pan jaroor feel hua...aur wo jawab dene se khud ko rok nahi paya...
Vikram....sabko hi khushiya achi lagti hai...

Ladka...lekin tum pareshan kyun ho...kya tumhein yeh sab nahi chahiye....

Vikram...aisi baat nahi hai...main bas yahi soch raha hun ke...yeh sab kuch ajeeb hai...kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai ke....yeh sab sach nahi hai...meri sachayi kuch aur hai....
LAdka Vikram ki baat sunke mand mand muskura raha tha....wo bola....
Laadka...tumhein jyada sochna nahi chahiye...tumhe khush rehna chhaiye...jo tumhe mila hai...sabko wo naseeb nahi hota...log sarri jindagi ..khushiyo ke liye tadap te hai....

Vikram...haa main janta hun..lekin...baat wahi hai....humesha ek khali pan mehsoos hota hai...

Ladka....ek kaam karo..apni ankhein band karo...mujhe tumhie kuch dikhana hai...

Vikram ne apni ankhein band kari...to ladke ne apni jeb se ek Pen nikala...aur Vikram ke sar pe rakha....jiske rakhte hi...Vikram ko apni pichli Realisties dikhi...kaise wo ek God tha...ek King tha...phir Silent Killer bana,...logo ko marna...aur phir uss reality mein use sachayi ka pata chalna....aur 4th wall break karna....

yeh sab dekhte dekhte ....Vikram ko kafi ajeeb lag raha tha...pehle to use gussa aya ke...koi uske jindagi ke sath khel raha hai...lekin phir use sachayi pata chali...wo bas ek character hai...jise dusro ke manoranjan ke liye banaya gaya hai....
usne apni ankhein kholi...aur bola....aap kaun hai....ap koi bhi ho mere liye aap bhagwan hai...aap kuch bhi kar sakte hai...

Ladka...hahaha..nahi main koi bhagwan nahi hun,....bas ek writer hun..jo sabke manoranjan ke liye likhta hun...tumne 4th wall break karke mujhse sawal pucha tha...is liye mujhe ana pada...

vikram...iska matlab main sach nahi hun...yeh sab sach nahi hai....

Ladka...nahi tum galat samajh rahe ho..tumhe jo bhi dikhayi de raha hai...tumhare sath jo bhi ho raha hai..wo tumhare liye sachayi hai...aur tumhare aas pas jo bhi hai un sabke liye bhi...ab jao apni khushal jindagi bitao...samay ke sath jo bhi sawal aate jayenge,,...samay hi unka jawab deta jayega....

vikram ladke ki baat manke chala gaya..aur kuch dur jaate hi sab kuch bhul gaya...aur piche ladka bhi muskurate huye gayab ho gyaa....

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writer....yahi to hota hai...humm jo bhi dekhte hai...hume wahi sach lagta hai....humare liye wahi sachayi hoti hai....lekin kabhi kabhi koi us sachayi pe sawal utha ta hai....to log use pagal kehte hai...jaisa suru se hota aya hai....lekin jab uski sawal ka jawab milta hai..to dunia badal ti hai...
jaise Galliliyo ne sawal kiya tha...Sir Issac Newton ne sawal kiya tha...Sir Alber Einstein ne sawal kiya tha....unhone aisi aisi sachayi hume batayi hai...jo hum dekh bhi nahi pate the...unhone hume yeh samjhaya hai ke...hum agar kisi cheej ko dekh nahi paate...hum agar kisi cheej ke bare mien nahi jante....
iska matlab yeh nahi hai ke...wo exist hi nahi karta...

hum ji cheej ko reality mante hai...kya pata koi meri tarah hi yeh sab likh raha ho....jiske bare mien hume koi andaja hi nahi hai,....
iske bare mein hum sab jante hai...hum sab hi kehte hai....kismat likha gaya hai...kismat ke bare mein sab jante hai...baat karte hai...lekin koi ispe gaur nahi karta....
kya pata koi sachme humari kismat likh raha ho.....

kya pata hum kisi lab ke lab rat ho...jispe Sceintists experiment kar raha ho...
lekin yeh sab sawal karne ke liye kisi ke paas waqt nahi hai...sab apne apne life mien busy hai...ya yeh kahun koi sochna hi nahi chahte....

aur isme unka koi gunah bhi nahi hai...sab log apne apne Eutopia mein khush rehna chahte hai....

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khair...ek achi journey rahi ab tak.....shukriya ap sabka...sath nibhane ke liye...
milenge...agli story mein..tab tak ke liye...good bye

FINISHED

Superb ending bhai. Jabardast

 

[Thakur008]

Last update......


Beta uth jao....kitni der tak lete rahoge.....

.....sone do na mom...aaj sunday hai na....ao ap bhi si jao.....yeh bolke Vikram apne maa ko apne sath sula deta hai...

kya kar raha hai...jaldi uth...dekh hume mandir jana hai na aaj....chalo ...chalo utho...
Vikram angdayi lete huye utha...aur ankhe kholke dekha ke....Nemesis uske samne hai...Malini banke...aur wo apne kamre mien leta hua tha...jo uske liye normal baat hai....

Vikram utha.....fresh huya...aur ache se ready hoke niche aaya...jaha baaki pariwar walon ne usko morning wish kiya....
jaha Vikram ne dekha ke uski teeno behene ready hoke baithi huyi hai.....tab Tamanna boli....chhotu kitni late karta hai..jaldi chal...warna mandir mein bhid badh jayegi.....

Mansi...haa bhaiya ap din ba din bohot hi alsi hote jaa rahe ho...
Vikram...are yaar...thoda hi to late hua hun...ab tum log baat karke samay barbad kar rahe ho....

Sandhya,....ha ha,,,...hum hi to late kar rahe hai....
Vijendra....are bacho jhagda mat karo......wo sidhiyo se niche utarte huye bola....

Vikram...dekho na papa ...yeh log mujhe dant rahe hai....
Vijendra...kyun deviyon...mere bache ko kyun dant rahe ho.....Manu beta tum batao..kya bat hai....

Manu...kuch nahi papa..hum to bas aise hi majak kar rahe hai....
tabhi piche se malini aati huyi boli.....chalo bohot ho gaya ab...jaldi se chalo....
Vijendra...hum to taiyar hi bhagyeban...ap hi to ab aa rahi hai.....jis baat ko sunte...Malini Vijendra ko ankh dikhati hai....aur iss baat ko baaki ke bacho mand mand muskura rahe the....

yuhi yeh pariwar khatti mithi nok jhok ke sath mandir ke taraf nikal jaati hai...ek happy family....
Mandir mein puja hone ke baad ...sab ghar ko laut te hai....aur nasta pani karke...vikram nikal padta hai...apne dosto ke sath milne....

jaha...uske dost....Radhika...Kajal...Kavya....Labanya...Ranbir,....Ajay....Vijay...sab wait kar rahe the....
RAdhika....Kavya.aur Labnya ka vikram pe crush hai...lekin koi bata nahi paati...apni dost ko khone ke dar se...

Vikram ko bhi yeh pata hai...lekin wo koi pehel nahi karna chahta.....
sare dost pure Sunday ke din dhamal choukdi karte hai....Movie dekhna...shopping karna...resturant mein khana....
aur phir raat ko thaka hara..ghar lautna...aur mummy papa ka halka fulka dant khana...beheno se masti...

yeh sab Vikram ke liye aaam baat thi..aur baki sabke liye bhi...kyunke kisiko yaad hi nahi hai..ke unke sath kya hua hai...sabke liye yehi unki asliyat thi...

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Vikram ekdin akela baitha hua tha....use ab thoda ajeeb lagne laga tha...kyunke jab sab kuch acha ho to,...kuch kuch ajeeb lagta hai...life boring ho jata hai.....
deep down hum sab apne apne life mein...thodi chaos chahte hai...jo jaroori bhi hai...life ko enjoy karne ke liye...

Tabhi waha ek ladka aya...aur Vikram se bola....khushal Jindagi kaisi lag rahi hai Vikram......

Vikram piche mud ke dekha to ek ladka ..usse sawal kar raha hai...ladke ko wo pehchanta to nahi ...lekin apna pan jaroor feel hua...aur wo jawab dene se khud ko rok nahi paya...
Vikram....sabko hi khushiya achi lagti hai...

Ladka...lekin tum pareshan kyun ho...kya tumhein yeh sab nahi chahiye....

Vikram...aisi baat nahi hai...main bas yahi soch raha hun ke...yeh sab kuch ajeeb hai...kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai ke....yeh sab sach nahi hai...meri sachayi kuch aur hai....
LAdka Vikram ki baat sunke mand mand muskura raha tha....wo bola....
Laadka...tumhein jyada sochna nahi chahiye...tumhe khush rehna chhaiye...jo tumhe mila hai...sabko wo naseeb nahi hota...log sarri jindagi ..khushiyo ke liye tadap te hai....

Vikram...haa main janta hun..lekin...baat wahi hai....humesha ek khali pan mehsoos hota hai...

Ladka....ek kaam karo..apni ankhein band karo...mujhe tumhie kuch dikhana hai...

Vikram ne apni ankhein band kari...to ladke ne apni jeb se ek Pen nikala...aur Vikram ke sar pe rakha....jiske rakhte hi...Vikram ko apni pichli Realisties dikhi...kaise wo ek God tha...ek King tha...phir Silent Killer bana,...logo ko marna...aur phir uss reality mein use sachayi ka pata chalna....aur 4th wall break karna....

yeh sab dekhte dekhte ....Vikram ko kafi ajeeb lag raha tha...pehle to use gussa aya ke...koi uske jindagi ke sath khel raha hai...lekin phir use sachayi pata chali...wo bas ek character hai...jise dusro ke manoranjan ke liye banaya gaya hai....
usne apni ankhein kholi...aur bola....aap kaun hai....ap koi bhi ho mere liye aap bhagwan hai...aap kuch bhi kar sakte hai...

Ladka...hahaha..nahi main koi bhagwan nahi hun,....bas ek writer hun..jo sabke manoranjan ke liye likhta hun...tumne 4th wall break karke mujhse sawal pucha tha...is liye mujhe ana pada...

vikram...iska matlab main sach nahi hun...yeh sab sach nahi hai....

Ladka...nahi tum galat samajh rahe ho..tumhe jo bhi dikhayi de raha hai...tumhare sath jo bhi ho raha hai..wo tumhare liye sachayi hai...aur tumhare aas pas jo bhi hai un sabke liye bhi...ab jao apni khushal jindagi bitao...samay ke sath jo bhi sawal aate jayenge,,...samay hi unka jawab deta jayega....

vikram ladke ki baat manke chala gaya..aur kuch dur jaate hi sab kuch bhul gaya...aur piche ladka bhi muskurate huye gayab ho gyaa....

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writer....yahi to hota hai...humm jo bhi dekhte hai...hume wahi sach lagta hai....humare liye wahi sachayi hoti hai....lekin kabhi kabhi koi us sachayi pe sawal utha ta hai....to log use pagal kehte hai...jaisa suru se hota aya hai....lekin jab uski sawal ka jawab milta hai..to dunia badal ti hai...
jaise Galliliyo ne sawal kiya tha...Sir Issac Newton ne sawal kiya tha...Sir Alber Einstein ne sawal kiya tha....unhone aisi aisi sachayi hume batayi hai...jo hum dekh bhi nahi pate the...unhone hume yeh samjhaya hai ke...hum agar kisi cheej ko dekh nahi paate...hum agar kisi cheej ke bare mien nahi jante....
iska matlab yeh nahi hai ke...wo exist hi nahi karta...

hum ji cheej ko reality mante hai...kya pata koi meri tarah hi yeh sab likh raha ho....jiske bare mien hume koi andaja hi nahi hai,....
iske bare mein hum sab jante hai...hum sab hi kehte hai....kismat likha gaya hai...kismat ke bare mein sab jante hai...baat karte hai...lekin koi ispe gaur nahi karta....
kya pata koi sachme humari kismat likh raha ho.....

kya pata hum kisi lab ke lab rat ho...jispe Sceintists experiment kar raha ho...
lekin yeh sab sawal karne ke liye kisi ke paas waqt nahi hai...sab apne apne life mien busy hai...ya yeh kahun koi sochna hi nahi chahte....

aur isme unka koi gunah bhi nahi hai...sab log apne apne Eutopia mein khush rehna chahte hai....

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khair...ek achi journey rahi ab tak.....shukriya ap sabka...sath nibhane ke liye...
milenge...agli story mein..tab tak ke liye...good bye

FINISHED

Bahut he shandaar story ka
Bahut he adbhud ant

 

[Bilal jan]

Behad hi shanadar or zabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting for next story .....

 

[Naik]

Update......43



Kajal bhaagti rahi ...wo bohot bhaagi....apne maut se bachti rahi....chhupti rahi...
lekin maut ne uski picha nahi chhodi...

wo dheere dheere mentally break ho gayi....puri tarah se...depression mein chali gayi...
use har raat apne baap ke katal ka manjar dikhayi deta tha...aur wo sehem jaati....wo Vikram ko kosti...usse badla lene ki sochti...
lekin wo kar kuch nahi sakti....

usne 2 -3 bar Vikram ko marne ki plan bhi banayi...lekin uske aas paas bhi bhatak nahi paayi....
wo jab bhi use marne gayi...Vikram ka jaanwar wala roop uske samne aa jata....wo aur bhi sehem jaati...aur chah ke bhi kuch nahi kar paati...

phir use yaad ata ...ke in sabki wajah to wahi hai...usine to in sabki suruwat ki thi...uske paas sab tha...apna maa baap...ek bohot hi pyar karne wala insaan....jiska future bohot hi acha tha....lekin lalach mein aake usne sab kuch kho di....
ab dar dar thokre khate fir rahi hai...

usse sab kuch aur sehen nahi ho raha tha...wo andar andar hi mar rahi thi....akhir mein wo halat se aur na lad paayi..aur gale mein fanda laga li....khatam ho gayi ek aur jindagi ki kahani.....

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Vikram ki family sadak pe aa gayi thi...ab wo log ek ek dane ke mohotaj ban gaye hai....
kyun...
kyunke logo ne apni jaan ki dar se saari rishte tod di...chahe wo personal ho ya phir bussiness related....koi bhi unse baat tak nahi karna chahta tha....
isi liye dheere dheere unhone apna bussiness khoya....phir saare debt pura karne ke liye apne property aur paise khoye..unhe apna ghar chhodna pada...aur ek basti mein rehne ko majboor ho gaye..upar se Vikram ki maa ki ilaaj ke kharche...jise chalana mushkil ho raha tha...aur unki halat din ba din battar hote jaa rahi thi..

koi bhi unhe kuch bhi dena nahi chahta tha...nahi kuch bechna...nahi unse kuch kharidna....
isi beech..kuch log unki madat karne ko aage badhe.....lekin unki laash hi mili...jiske baad se sabko samajh ne mien der nahi laagi ke..jo bhi unki madat karega....wo apni jaan se hath dho baithega...

Vijendra ko koi bhi kaam nahi de raha tha....unke kapde tak fat chuke the....sabke
unka ahankar..unka gurroor sab mitti mein mil chuki thi...bheekh mangne tak majboor ho gaye the....

jin logo pe unhe apne bete se jyada bharosa tha...jiska unhe ahankar tha...aaj wahi khatam ho chuka tha...poori pariwar ko yeh baat realize ho chuki thi ke...unhone kya khoya hai...kya galti kar di hai unhone...
lekin ab pachhtawa karke kya faida...galti to ho chuki hai...
jise sudharne ka unke paas kaafi mauke the..lekin unhe wo nahi ajmaye...ab bhagat rahe hai..apne krani ka nateeja....

unhe ab pata chal raha tha ke...jab apne hi apno ke pith piche chhura ghopte hai...to kaisa lagta hai..kyunke uske Vijendra ke baaki ke pariwar walo tak unke madat karne ke liye apne hath khade kar chuke the....
ab in sabka din ..pachtawe..hatasha...hoplessness mein hi gujar raha hai...

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Ajay ghar se bhaagke..dusre seher mein chala gaya..jahan uska ek dost tha...wo apne dost ke sath hi rehne laga...
use yehi laga ke wo bach gaya hai...use ab Vikram nahi pakad sakta...

lekin uske dost ko jab uski sachayi pata chali ke...uske hi wajah se Vikram aisa hai...kyunke Ajay ne ek raat ko sharab ke nashe mein sab kuch baak diya...
Ajay..nashe mein....tujhe pata hai...wo sala humesha mujhse behtar tha...sab log sala mujhe hi humesha tana marte the...madarchod kahi ka...dekh kya kiya maine uske sath ...uski puri jindagi barbad kar di...

dost...kya kiya tune....

Ajay...aur kya....madarchod ko maine jhute rape case mein andar karwa diya...pata nahi us harami ke sath waha kya hua...wo ab hum sabke jaan ke piche pada hua hai...abhi mujhe khabar mili ke usne mere ghar mein ghuske mere maa ko mar diya...

dost...kya...aur tujhe koi dukh nahi hai...teri maa mari gayi hai..

Ajay...hahahahahahha..dukh wo bhi uss randi ke liye...acha hua saali mari gayi..aaj usi ke wajah se main yahan hun...sali ne hi mujhe bachpan se us kamine ke khilaaf bhadkaya ....usne hi mujhe yeh sab plan karne ko kaha tha...sali randi ne apne Raghu se chudwake jail mein hi uska rape karne ko kahi thi...taki wo sala harami ki aulad...apne rape ke sharam se suicide kar le...

Dost ka muh khula reh gaya....use pata tha ke Vikram kaisa hai...aur kya kar sakta hai..use marna nahi tha...Vikram ke dushman ki madat karke...isi liye usne usi pal soch liya ke wo Vikram ko Ajay ka khabar de dega....

Ajay...mere dost..tujhe pata hai..wo sala mujhe chhu tak nahi sakta....main kaha hun use to yeh bhi pata nahi hoga...aur mere paas tu hai...bachayega na tu mujhe...

dost...ha ha...jaroor jaroor...
usne bol do diya...lekin uske paseene chhut rahe the...wo khudke lash ko kati fati halat mein saaf saaf imagine kar sakta tha...isiliye agle din kisi tarah Vikram tak Ajay ki khabar pohocha di....

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Vikram ko khabar milte hi..wo nikal pada...
shikari nikal pada..shikar ke liye
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Ajay abhi jamin pe reng raha tha...uski ek tang kat chuki thi...aur ek tang tut chuki thi....sara sahreer khun se lathpath ho chuki thi....muh ke kayi dant gayab ho chuke the...ek kaan kata hua tha....kuch ungliya niche kati padi huy thi..aur charo taraf uska khun pada hua tha....aur paas mein hi ek ladki dari sehemi baithi huyi thi...

asal mein Ajay ekdum be fikar hoke apni jindagi jee raha tha...aaj wo ek randi ke paas aya tha...chodne ke liye...usne abhi pant hi utara tha ke uske upar humla ho gaya...
Randi khane ke logo ne jab dekha ke waha Vikram aya hai...to kisi mein himmat nahi thi ke koi kuch kare...tabhi ek insaan ke gand mein khujli huyi...use Vikram ke baare mein jada pata nahi thi...usne Vikram ko rokne ke liye age badha hi tha..uska kata hua sar neeche gid gaya...

jiske baad aur kisi mein kuch bhi karne ki himmat nahi huyi...kuch muk darshak banne ke liye waha reh gaye...aur kuch bhaag gaye...logo ko dusro ko dard mein dekhne mein maja jo ata hai...to use dekhne ka mauka ..jo log ruk gaye the...wo kaise gawa dete..
lekin Vikram ka behesi pana dekhke wo bhi bhaag gaye...aur jo prostitute thi...wo dar ke mare wahi ek kone mein dubak ke baithi huyi thi....

Ajay...tadap te huye...mere bhai ...chhor de..dekh tune mujhe saja de di hai..ab to chhor de..mujhe marna nahi hai....mujhe chhod de...dekh main kaise tadap raha hun ...ab to chhor de
Ajay ka mansik santulan hil chuka tha...uske dimaag mein bas ab yahi chal raha tha ke...use kisi traah bachna hai...jise kehte hai...survival instinct...

Vikram...saja abhi suru bhi nahi huyi....hahahahahhahaha...main kuch bhi nahi kar sakta...main bebas hu mere bhai.....chal tujhe ek baat batata hun....
main ek raja ....ek god tha...lekin aaj dekh main ek katil hun..jise logo ki cheekh se sukun milta hai...main isme kuch bhi nahi kar sakta...kyunke meri jindagi mere hath mein hi nahi hai......

Ajay apne dard mein hi muh fade uski baat sunta aa raha hai...

Vikram...tujhe samajh mein nahi aya...acha thik hai sun...tune iss baat pe kabhi dhyan diya ke...ek mamuli insaan pe kisi bhi hathiyar ka asar kyun nahi hota hai....main ek god hun...lekin phir bhi mere bhi upar kuch shakti hai...jo bas apne maje ke liye humare sath khelta hai...yeh mujhe abhi kuch din pehle hi pata chali hai...lekin main kuch kar nahi sakta...
hum sab ek lab mein rakhe huye..lab rat jaise hai...scientist jispe eperiment karta hai..aur akhir mein jab uska kaam khatam hoi jaye...to mar deta hai...aur ab tum logo ka kaam khatam ho chuka hai...aur yeh kaam mujhe diya gyaa hai...

yahi humari kismat hai...hum mese kisi ki bhi jingadi humare hath mein nahi hai...hum bas ek car mein rakhi gayi...luggage ki tarah hai...jiska malik jo chahe uske sath karta hai.....luggage ki khudki koi marji nahi hoti hai.....
mujhe koi dukh nahi hai...aur dukh karke hi main kya hi ukhad lunga....to faltu main dukh hi kyun mana na...tujhe to khush hona chahiye ke tujhe iss jindagi se mukti mil rahi hai...

kyun maine thik kaha na Writer...hum sabke Creator...mujhe pata hai tum abhi yeh sab likh rahe ho...hum sabki kismat...hum bas apki hath ki kath putli hai...jaise apki asli jindagi mein upar wala apke jindagi ke sath khelta hai.....
main bas itna hi kehna chahunga...ap yeh sab phirse likhiye...aur mujhe ek achi jindagi dijiye...main amar nahi banna chahta hun...bas ek achi jindagi chahta hun...

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Writer.....kya kehte ho mere readers...ya yun kahun..mere LAB ke baaki ke scientists.....kya kiya jaaye...inko achi jindagi diya jaaye...take yeh ek khushal jindagi beeta sake...ya phir aise hi inka kahani khatam kiya jaaye.....
jawab ka intejar rahega.......

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai

 

[Naik]

Last update......


Beta uth jao....kitni der tak lete rahoge.....

.....sone do na mom...aaj sunday hai na....ao ap bhi si jao.....yeh bolke Vikram apne maa ko apne sath sula deta hai...

kya kar raha hai...jaldi uth...dekh hume mandir jana hai na aaj....chalo ...chalo utho...
Vikram angdayi lete huye utha...aur ankhe kholke dekha ke....Nemesis uske samne hai...Malini banke...aur wo apne kamre mien leta hua tha...jo uske liye normal baat hai....

Vikram utha.....fresh huya...aur ache se ready hoke niche aaya...jaha baaki pariwar walon ne usko morning wish kiya....
jaha Vikram ne dekha ke uski teeno behene ready hoke baithi huyi hai.....tab Tamanna boli....chhotu kitni late karta hai..jaldi chal...warna mandir mein bhid badh jayegi.....

Mansi...haa bhaiya ap din ba din bohot hi alsi hote jaa rahe ho...
Vikram...are yaar...thoda hi to late hua hun...ab tum log baat karke samay barbad kar rahe ho....

Sandhya,....ha ha,,,...hum hi to late kar rahe hai....
Vijendra....are bacho jhagda mat karo......wo sidhiyo se niche utarte huye bola....

Vikram...dekho na papa ...yeh log mujhe dant rahe hai....
Vijendra...kyun deviyon...mere bache ko kyun dant rahe ho.....Manu beta tum batao..kya bat hai....

Manu...kuch nahi papa..hum to bas aise hi majak kar rahe hai....
tabhi piche se malini aati huyi boli.....chalo bohot ho gaya ab...jaldi se chalo....
Vijendra...hum to taiyar hi bhagyeban...ap hi to ab aa rahi hai.....jis baat ko sunte...Malini Vijendra ko ankh dikhati hai....aur iss baat ko baaki ke bacho mand mand muskura rahe the....

yuhi yeh pariwar khatti mithi nok jhok ke sath mandir ke taraf nikal jaati hai...ek happy family....
Mandir mein puja hone ke baad ...sab ghar ko laut te hai....aur nasta pani karke...vikram nikal padta hai...apne dosto ke sath milne....

jaha...uske dost....Radhika...Kajal...Kavya....Labanya...Ranbir,....Ajay....Vijay...sab wait kar rahe the....
RAdhika....Kavya.aur Labnya ka vikram pe crush hai...lekin koi bata nahi paati...apni dost ko khone ke dar se...

Vikram ko bhi yeh pata hai...lekin wo koi pehel nahi karna chahta.....
sare dost pure Sunday ke din dhamal choukdi karte hai....Movie dekhna...shopping karna...resturant mein khana....
aur phir raat ko thaka hara..ghar lautna...aur mummy papa ka halka fulka dant khana...beheno se masti...

yeh sab Vikram ke liye aaam baat thi..aur baki sabke liye bhi...kyunke kisiko yaad hi nahi hai..ke unke sath kya hua hai...sabke liye yehi unki asliyat thi...

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Vikram ekdin akela baitha hua tha....use ab thoda ajeeb lagne laga tha...kyunke jab sab kuch acha ho to,...kuch kuch ajeeb lagta hai...life boring ho jata hai.....
deep down hum sab apne apne life mein...thodi chaos chahte hai...jo jaroori bhi hai...life ko enjoy karne ke liye...

Tabhi waha ek ladka aya...aur Vikram se bola....khushal Jindagi kaisi lag rahi hai Vikram......

Vikram piche mud ke dekha to ek ladka ..usse sawal kar raha hai...ladke ko wo pehchanta to nahi ...lekin apna pan jaroor feel hua...aur wo jawab dene se khud ko rok nahi paya...
Vikram....sabko hi khushiya achi lagti hai...

Ladka...lekin tum pareshan kyun ho...kya tumhein yeh sab nahi chahiye....

Vikram...aisi baat nahi hai...main bas yahi soch raha hun ke...yeh sab kuch ajeeb hai...kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai ke....yeh sab sach nahi hai...meri sachayi kuch aur hai....
LAdka Vikram ki baat sunke mand mand muskura raha tha....wo bola....
Laadka...tumhein jyada sochna nahi chahiye...tumhe khush rehna chhaiye...jo tumhe mila hai...sabko wo naseeb nahi hota...log sarri jindagi ..khushiyo ke liye tadap te hai....

Vikram...haa main janta hun..lekin...baat wahi hai....humesha ek khali pan mehsoos hota hai...

Ladka....ek kaam karo..apni ankhein band karo...mujhe tumhie kuch dikhana hai...

Vikram ne apni ankhein band kari...to ladke ne apni jeb se ek Pen nikala...aur Vikram ke sar pe rakha....jiske rakhte hi...Vikram ko apni pichli Realisties dikhi...kaise wo ek God tha...ek King tha...phir Silent Killer bana,...logo ko marna...aur phir uss reality mein use sachayi ka pata chalna....aur 4th wall break karna....

yeh sab dekhte dekhte ....Vikram ko kafi ajeeb lag raha tha...pehle to use gussa aya ke...koi uske jindagi ke sath khel raha hai...lekin phir use sachayi pata chali...wo bas ek character hai...jise dusro ke manoranjan ke liye banaya gaya hai....
usne apni ankhein kholi...aur bola....aap kaun hai....ap koi bhi ho mere liye aap bhagwan hai...aap kuch bhi kar sakte hai...

Ladka...hahaha..nahi main koi bhagwan nahi hun,....bas ek writer hun..jo sabke manoranjan ke liye likhta hun...tumne 4th wall break karke mujhse sawal pucha tha...is liye mujhe ana pada...

vikram...iska matlab main sach nahi hun...yeh sab sach nahi hai....

Ladka...nahi tum galat samajh rahe ho..tumhe jo bhi dikhayi de raha hai...tumhare sath jo bhi ho raha hai..wo tumhare liye sachayi hai...aur tumhare aas pas jo bhi hai un sabke liye bhi...ab jao apni khushal jindagi bitao...samay ke sath jo bhi sawal aate jayenge,,...samay hi unka jawab deta jayega....

vikram ladke ki baat manke chala gaya..aur kuch dur jaate hi sab kuch bhul gaya...aur piche ladka bhi muskurate huye gayab ho gyaa....

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writer....yahi to hota hai...humm jo bhi dekhte hai...hume wahi sach lagta hai....humare liye wahi sachayi hoti hai....lekin kabhi kabhi koi us sachayi pe sawal utha ta hai....to log use pagal kehte hai...jaisa suru se hota aya hai....lekin jab uski sawal ka jawab milta hai..to dunia badal ti hai...
jaise Galliliyo ne sawal kiya tha...Sir Issac Newton ne sawal kiya tha...Sir Alber Einstein ne sawal kiya tha....unhone aisi aisi sachayi hume batayi hai...jo hum dekh bhi nahi pate the...unhone hume yeh samjhaya hai ke...hum agar kisi cheej ko dekh nahi paate...hum agar kisi cheej ke bare mien nahi jante....
iska matlab yeh nahi hai ke...wo exist hi nahi karta...

hum ji cheej ko reality mante hai...kya pata koi meri tarah hi yeh sab likh raha ho....jiske bare mien hume koi andaja hi nahi hai,....
iske bare mein hum sab jante hai...hum sab hi kehte hai....kismat likha gaya hai...kismat ke bare mein sab jante hai...baat karte hai...lekin koi ispe gaur nahi karta....
kya pata koi sachme humari kismat likh raha ho.....

kya pata hum kisi lab ke lab rat ho...jispe Sceintists experiment kar raha ho...
lekin yeh sab sawal karne ke liye kisi ke paas waqt nahi hai...sab apne apne life mien busy hai...ya yeh kahun koi sochna hi nahi chahte....

aur isme unka koi gunah bhi nahi hai...sab log apne apne Eutopia mein khush rehna chahte hai....

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khair...ek achi journey rahi ab tak.....shukriya ap sabka...sath nibhane ke liye...
milenge...agli story mein..tab tak ke liye...good bye

FINISHED

Bahot khoobsurati k saath aapne iss kahani ka IKHTITAM(खत्म) kia h
Bahot behtareen shaandaar bhai

 

[Xabhi]

Update......43



Kajal bhaagti rahi ...wo bohot bhaagi....apne maut se bachti rahi....chhupti rahi...
lekin maut ne uski picha nahi chhodi...

wo dheere dheere mentally break ho gayi....puri tarah se...depression mein chali gayi...
use har raat apne baap ke katal ka manjar dikhayi deta tha...aur wo sehem jaati....wo Vikram ko kosti...usse badla lene ki sochti...
lekin wo kar kuch nahi sakti....

usne 2 -3 bar Vikram ko marne ki plan bhi banayi...lekin uske aas paas bhi bhatak nahi paayi....
wo jab bhi use marne gayi...Vikram ka jaanwar wala roop uske samne aa jata....wo aur bhi sehem jaati...aur chah ke bhi kuch nahi kar paati...

phir use yaad ata ...ke in sabki wajah to wahi hai...usine to in sabki suruwat ki thi...uske paas sab tha...apna maa baap...ek bohot hi pyar karne wala insaan....jiska future bohot hi acha tha....lekin lalach mein aake usne sab kuch kho di....
ab dar dar thokre khate fir rahi hai...

usse sab kuch aur sehen nahi ho raha tha...wo andar andar hi mar rahi thi....akhir mein wo halat se aur na lad paayi..aur gale mein fanda laga li....khatam ho gayi ek aur jindagi ki kahani.....

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Vikram ki family sadak pe aa gayi thi...ab wo log ek ek dane ke mohotaj ban gaye hai....
kyun...
kyunke logo ne apni jaan ki dar se saari rishte tod di...chahe wo personal ho ya phir bussiness related....koi bhi unse baat tak nahi karna chahta tha....
isi liye dheere dheere unhone apna bussiness khoya....phir saare debt pura karne ke liye apne property aur paise khoye..unhe apna ghar chhodna pada...aur ek basti mein rehne ko majboor ho gaye..upar se Vikram ki maa ki ilaaj ke kharche...jise chalana mushkil ho raha tha...aur unki halat din ba din battar hote jaa rahi thi..

koi bhi unhe kuch bhi dena nahi chahta tha...nahi kuch bechna...nahi unse kuch kharidna....
isi beech..kuch log unki madat karne ko aage badhe.....lekin unki laash hi mili...jiske baad se sabko samajh ne mien der nahi laagi ke..jo bhi unki madat karega....wo apni jaan se hath dho baithega...

Vijendra ko koi bhi kaam nahi de raha tha....unke kapde tak fat chuke the....sabke
unka ahankar..unka gurroor sab mitti mein mil chuki thi...bheekh mangne tak majboor ho gaye the....

jin logo pe unhe apne bete se jyada bharosa tha...jiska unhe ahankar tha...aaj wahi khatam ho chuka tha...poori pariwar ko yeh baat realize ho chuki thi ke...unhone kya khoya hai...kya galti kar di hai unhone...
lekin ab pachhtawa karke kya faida...galti to ho chuki hai...
jise sudharne ka unke paas kaafi mauke the..lekin unhe wo nahi ajmaye...ab bhagat rahe hai..apne krani ka nateeja....

unhe ab pata chal raha tha ke...jab apne hi apno ke pith piche chhura ghopte hai...to kaisa lagta hai..kyunke uske Vijendra ke baaki ke pariwar walo tak unke madat karne ke liye apne hath khade kar chuke the....
ab in sabka din ..pachtawe..hatasha...hoplessness mein hi gujar raha hai...

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Ajay ghar se bhaagke..dusre seher mein chala gaya..jahan uska ek dost tha...wo apne dost ke sath hi rehne laga...
use yehi laga ke wo bach gaya hai...use ab Vikram nahi pakad sakta...

lekin uske dost ko jab uski sachayi pata chali ke...uske hi wajah se Vikram aisa hai...kyunke Ajay ne ek raat ko sharab ke nashe mein sab kuch baak diya...
Ajay..nashe mein....tujhe pata hai...wo sala humesha mujhse behtar tha...sab log sala mujhe hi humesha tana marte the...madarchod kahi ka...dekh kya kiya maine uske sath ...uski puri jindagi barbad kar di...

dost...kya kiya tune....

Ajay...aur kya....madarchod ko maine jhute rape case mein andar karwa diya...pata nahi us harami ke sath waha kya hua...wo ab hum sabke jaan ke piche pada hua hai...abhi mujhe khabar mili ke usne mere ghar mein ghuske mere maa ko mar diya...

dost...kya...aur tujhe koi dukh nahi hai...teri maa mari gayi hai..

Ajay...hahahahahahha..dukh wo bhi uss randi ke liye...acha hua saali mari gayi..aaj usi ke wajah se main yahan hun...sali ne hi mujhe bachpan se us kamine ke khilaaf bhadkaya ....usne hi mujhe yeh sab plan karne ko kaha tha...sali randi ne apne Raghu se chudwake jail mein hi uska rape karne ko kahi thi...taki wo sala harami ki aulad...apne rape ke sharam se suicide kar le...

Dost ka muh khula reh gaya....use pata tha ke Vikram kaisa hai...aur kya kar sakta hai..use marna nahi tha...Vikram ke dushman ki madat karke...isi liye usne usi pal soch liya ke wo Vikram ko Ajay ka khabar de dega....

Ajay...mere dost..tujhe pata hai..wo sala mujhe chhu tak nahi sakta....main kaha hun use to yeh bhi pata nahi hoga...aur mere paas tu hai...bachayega na tu mujhe...

dost...ha ha...jaroor jaroor...
usne bol do diya...lekin uske paseene chhut rahe the...wo khudke lash ko kati fati halat mein saaf saaf imagine kar sakta tha...isiliye agle din kisi tarah Vikram tak Ajay ki khabar pohocha di....

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Vikram ko khabar milte hi..wo nikal pada...
shikari nikal pada..shikar ke liye
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Ajay abhi jamin pe reng raha tha...uski ek tang kat chuki thi...aur ek tang tut chuki thi....sara sahreer khun se lathpath ho chuki thi....muh ke kayi dant gayab ho chuke the...ek kaan kata hua tha....kuch ungliya niche kati padi huy thi..aur charo taraf uska khun pada hua tha....aur paas mein hi ek ladki dari sehemi baithi huyi thi...

asal mein Ajay ekdum be fikar hoke apni jindagi jee raha tha...aaj wo ek randi ke paas aya tha...chodne ke liye...usne abhi pant hi utara tha ke uske upar humla ho gaya...
Randi khane ke logo ne jab dekha ke waha Vikram aya hai...to kisi mein himmat nahi thi ke koi kuch kare...tabhi ek insaan ke gand mein khujli huyi...use Vikram ke baare mein jada pata nahi thi...usne Vikram ko rokne ke liye age badha hi tha..uska kata hua sar neeche gid gaya...

jiske baad aur kisi mein kuch bhi karne ki himmat nahi huyi...kuch muk darshak banne ke liye waha reh gaye...aur kuch bhaag gaye...logo ko dusro ko dard mein dekhne mein maja jo ata hai...to use dekhne ka mauka ..jo log ruk gaye the...wo kaise gawa dete..
lekin Vikram ka behesi pana dekhke wo bhi bhaag gaye...aur jo prostitute thi...wo dar ke mare wahi ek kone mein dubak ke baithi huyi thi....

Ajay...tadap te huye...mere bhai ...chhor de..dekh tune mujhe saja de di hai..ab to chhor de..mujhe marna nahi hai....mujhe chhod de...dekh main kaise tadap raha hun ...ab to chhor de
Ajay ka mansik santulan hil chuka tha...uske dimaag mein bas ab yahi chal raha tha ke...use kisi traah bachna hai...jise kehte hai...survival instinct...

Vikram...saja abhi suru bhi nahi huyi....hahahahahhahaha...main kuch bhi nahi kar sakta...main bebas hu mere bhai.....chal tujhe ek baat batata hun....
main ek raja ....ek god tha...lekin aaj dekh main ek katil hun..jise logo ki cheekh se sukun milta hai...main isme kuch bhi nahi kar sakta...kyunke meri jindagi mere hath mein hi nahi hai......

Ajay apne dard mein hi muh fade uski baat sunta aa raha hai...

Vikram...tujhe samajh mein nahi aya...acha thik hai sun...tune iss baat pe kabhi dhyan diya ke...ek mamuli insaan pe kisi bhi hathiyar ka asar kyun nahi hota hai....main ek god hun...lekin phir bhi mere bhi upar kuch shakti hai...jo bas apne maje ke liye humare sath khelta hai...yeh mujhe abhi kuch din pehle hi pata chali hai...lekin main kuch kar nahi sakta...
hum sab ek lab mein rakhe huye..lab rat jaise hai...scientist jispe eperiment karta hai..aur akhir mein jab uska kaam khatam hoi jaye...to mar deta hai...aur ab tum logo ka kaam khatam ho chuka hai...aur yeh kaam mujhe diya gyaa hai...

yahi humari kismat hai...hum mese kisi ki bhi jingadi humare hath mein nahi hai...hum bas ek car mein rakhi gayi...luggage ki tarah hai...jiska malik jo chahe uske sath karta hai.....luggage ki khudki koi marji nahi hoti hai.....
mujhe koi dukh nahi hai...aur dukh karke hi main kya hi ukhad lunga....to faltu main dukh hi kyun mana na...tujhe to khush hona chahiye ke tujhe iss jindagi se mukti mil rahi hai...

kyun maine thik kaha na Writer...hum sabke Creator...mujhe pata hai tum abhi yeh sab likh rahe ho...hum sabki kismat...hum bas apki hath ki kath putli hai...jaise apki asli jindagi mein upar wala apke jindagi ke sath khelta hai.....
main bas itna hi kehna chahunga...ap yeh sab phirse likhiye...aur mujhe ek achi jindagi dijiye...main amar nahi banna chahta hun...bas ek achi jindagi chahta hun...

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Writer.....kya kehte ho mere readers...ya yun kahun..mere LAB ke baaki ke scientists.....kya kiya jaaye...inko achi jindagi diya jaaye...take yeh ek khushal jindagi beeta sake...ya phir aise hi inka kahani khatam kiya jaaye.....
jawab ka intejar rahega.......

To kajal ne itna sb hone ke bavjud bhi Vikram ko Marne ki Kosis ki 1 bar nhi kai bar pr asafal rhi or depressed hokr fashi lga li vhi Ajay ne nashe me apne dost ko sb sach bta diya jiske chalte us dost ne vikram ko bta diya or vikram ne apna maut ka khel fir suru kiya or Ajay ko ek kahani sunate huye khatm kiya... Sandar update bhai jabarjast dark side