Adultery Rise of the Death (completed)

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[Zaigham Bhatti]

Update....8


aage.......

Vikram Shaily aur Siya Miya ko leke waha se nikal padta hai.........

yeh log abhi raste mein hi the....tabhi Vikram ke Car se ek ladki achanak takrane hi wali thi ke...wo kisi tarah Car ko sambhalta hai....par wo ladki ko thodi si lag hi jata hai....aur wo niche gid jati hai.....

Vikram fatafat bahar nikalta hai....aur ladki ko uthane ke liye jaata hai......
Ladki ka chehra uske balo se dhaka hua tha isliye Vikram ab tak use dekh nhi paya tha.....lekin jab pas jake uska chehra dekha to woh bolte bolte ruk gaya.....par jhat se khud ko sambhala aur ladki ke pas jake pehle use uthaya.....
aur bola....kya tum thik ho...aise kaun road cross karta hai....pata hai kitna bada accident ho sakta tha.....

Shaily bhi bahar nikalti hai....aur woh bhi jab ladki ka chehra dekhti hai to wo bhi hakka bakka reh jati hai....Vikram use ankhon se ishara karke shant rehne ko bolta hai......

woh ladki chup hi thi....uske ankhon mein thodi si ansoon thi.....aur car se takkar hone ki wajah se uske left ghutne pe thodi si chot aayi thi.....

Vikram....kya hua....kuch to bolo....agar galti se badi accident ho jati to.....

Ladki....ji....im sorry...mera dhyan nhi tha....

VIKRAM uski baat aur awaj se samajh jata hai ke yeh ladki kisi baat se bohot pareshan hai....uski kapde bhi pehle se gande type ke the....

Vikram....thik hai koi baat nhi chalo pehle tumhe doctor ke pas le chalte hai.....

Ladki....nhi nhi main thik hoon....mujhe nhi jana doctor ke pas .........aur mere pas doctor ko dene ke liye paise bhi nhi hai......wo thodi shant lehje mein boli...last wali line ko....

Vikram....tumhe uski chinta karne ki jaroorat nhi hai....Shaily ise Car mein bithao....

phir Vikram us Ladki ko leke nikal padta hai ....

thodi hi der mein woh log ek doctor ke pas pohoch jate hain....jaha pe us ladki ka treatment hota hai....

Vikram thodi chintit tha....use yeh to pata chal gya tha ke yeh ladki kaun hai....yeh kyun pareshan hai....aur iske sath Vikram ka rishta kya hai...

Doctor ke pas se treatment karane ke baad woh log nikalne lagte hai....tab Vikram puchta hai.....kya main tumhara naam jaan sakta hun....

Ladki jo abhi tak chup thi...woh bas apne hi socho mein gum thi.....boli.....Ji ji mera naam Radhika hai....

Vikram ....bohot achi naam hai...chalo tumhe tumhraa ghar chhor deta hun....

Radhika....nhi nhi uski koi zaroorat nhi hai....main chali jaungi...apne mere liye itna kuch kiya uske liye bohot bohot shukriya....

Vikram....are shukriya ki koi baat nhi hai....yeh mera farz tha...tum baitho car mein aur apna address batao....

Radhika iske baad aur koi argument nhi karti hai....aur Car mein baith ke apne ghar ka pata batati hai....

in car....
Vikram....waise tum kaha tak padhi ho....

Radhika yeh sawal sunke thodi chowki....kyunki koi ajnabi aisi sawal nhi puchta hai....lekin khud ko sambhal ke bolti hai....ji main 10th tak padhi hun....aur uske baad kismat ne mere sath bohot hi ganda majak kiya....aur main age nhi pad payi....yeh bolte huye uske ankhon meim phir se thodi ansoon aa gaye....

Vikram ....maaf karna .....mujhe tumhe dukh pohochane ka koi irada nhi tha....main phir se maafi chahta hun...

pas main baithi...Shaily...apne Rumal se Radhika ke ansoon pochti hai....aur use shant karne lagti hai...

Radhika bhi ek kandha milne par ab uske ansoon ke bandh khul jate hai....aaj pehli bar use ek aisa kandha mila tha...

thodi der baad woh shant hoti hai....aur situation samajh ne ke baad woh thodi sharminda hoti hai.....

aise hi yeh log Radhika ke ghar ke pas pohoch jate hai....
Vikram....tumhe sharminda hone ki koi jaroorat nhi hai....yeh lo yeh card rakho....kal yaha aa jana shyad tumhari mushkile thodi asan ho jaye.....


Radhika...unhe ghar mein andar le jane ke liye bohot hi insist karti hai....lekin Vikram aur Shaily kisi aur din bolke waha se nikal jate hain....

Vikram jab apne mansion mein pohochta hai....to Siya Miya pehle se hi unka intejar kar rahe the.....woh log pehle hi aa chuke the.....

Siya....to aap chhoti bhabhi se mil liye...

yeh baat sunke Vikram ke chehre pe ek muskan aa gayi....
Lekin Shaily jhat se boli.....Siya tumhe Lord se aise swaal nhi karna chahiye....

wo age kuch bolti Vikram bol pada....Shaily main tumhe pehle hi bata chuka hun...main yaha Lord nhi hun...yeh dono mere behne hai...main yeh bas bolne ke liye nhi bola hai....inhe behen mana hai.....aur tumhe bhi maine apna dost mana hai....

yeh sunke Shaily ke ankhon mein thodi ansoon aa jati hai....woh jhat se Vikram ke pero ke pas baith ke .....mujhe mere gustakhi ke liye maaf kar dijiye....main bas apke ek naukar hun....mujhe itni ijjat dene ke liye main dil se aapki shukriya ada karti hun.....

Vikram use uske kandhe se uthata hai....aur use gale se lagata hai....tum mere liye koi naukar nhi ho....pehle bhi ek dost thi....aur ab bhi ho....khud ko chhota mat samjho...thik hai....

Vikram uske ansoon pochta hai...to Shaily ke chehre pe ek khub surat smile aa jati hai....

Vikram ko pata tha ke Shaily khud uska naukar samajhti hai...isiliye usne yeh sab bola tha....kyunke wo use ek dost ki trah dekhta hai...na ki naukar ki tarah.....

yeh dekhke Siya Miya dono muskura rahi thi.....Miya dheere se boli.....lo lagta hai ek aur Bhabhi mil gayi.....

Siya....bhaiya apne bataya nhi chhoti bhabhi ke bare mein....

Vikram....are haan in sab baaton mein bhul hi gaya tha....usne bohot kuch jhela hai ab tak....kal aa rahi hai khud hi mil lena.....aur use humare bare mein kuch bhi batane ki zaroora nhi hai...use apne aap yaad aa jayegi.....

Siya Miya....thik hai bhaiya....Shaily ab to bhaiya ko chhodo....

Shaily sarmate huye Vikram ko chhodti hai....aur sarmake apni najre jhuka leti hai....aut mand mand muskurane lagti hai...

Vikram has ke. Bola...ladki chahe Vampire ho ya aam insan koi bhi sharmana nhi bhulti hai....

yeh sunke Shaily Vikram ke sine pe ek halka sa mukka marti hai.....

Vikram....acha suno mujhe abhi 1 ghante mein nikalna hai....agle padao ke liye.....

in sab kamo mein sham ho gayi thi....aur phir...8 baje Vikram nikal jata hai.....Shaily uske sath jane ki jid karti hai to....Vikram use kisi aur din bolke nikal jata hai.....

Vikram aaj Car se nikla tha....woh abhi ek sunsan sadak pe tha....thodi aage chala hi tha ke...
asman se dhadam karke kuch samne gidta hai.....Vikram jhat se apni car ka break lagata hai.....aur bahat aake jis taraf woh chij gira tha us taraf jane lagta hai....

tabhi samne jaha pe woh. Chij gira tha....us gadhe mein se ek roshni ki gola...teji se vikram ko aake lagti hai.....lekin Vikram ko kuch nhi hota...

Vikram thoda muskurata hai....aur bolta hai....main tumlogo ka hi intejar kar raha tha....ke tum log kab samne aaoge......

phir dhire dhire dhul chhat ti hai....to samne ek 8ft lambha shaks dikhayi deta....jiske ankhon mein angare thi....
tum ab nhi bachoge Raphael...main tumhe khatam karne aya hun....

Vikram....hahahhahahha............galti kar di tumne yaha aake Amanadiel....

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to be continued....

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Update....8


aage.......

Vikram Shaily aur Siya Miya ko leke waha se nikal padta hai.........

yeh log abhi raste mein hi the....tabhi Vikram ke Car se ek ladki achanak takrane hi wali thi ke...wo kisi tarah Car ko sambhalta hai....par wo ladki ko thodi si lag hi jata hai....aur wo niche gid jati hai.....

Vikram fatafat bahar nikalta hai....aur ladki ko uthane ke liye jaata hai......
Ladki ka chehra uske balo se dhaka hua tha isliye Vikram ab tak use dekh nhi paya tha.....lekin jab pas jake uska chehra dekha to woh bolte bolte ruk gaya.....par jhat se khud ko sambhala aur ladki ke pas jake pehle use uthaya.....
aur bola....kya tum thik ho...aise kaun road cross karta hai....pata hai kitna bada accident ho sakta tha.....

Shaily bhi bahar nikalti hai....aur woh bhi jab ladki ka chehra dekhti hai to wo bhi hakka bakka reh jati hai....Vikram use ankhon se ishara karke shant rehne ko bolta hai......

woh ladki chup hi thi....uske ankhon mein thodi si ansoon thi.....aur car se takkar hone ki wajah se uske left ghutne pe thodi si chot aayi thi.....

Vikram....kya hua....kuch to bolo....agar galti se badi accident ho jati to.....

Ladki....ji....im sorry...mera dhyan nhi tha....

VIKRAM uski baat aur awaj se samajh jata hai ke yeh ladki kisi baat se bohot pareshan hai....uski kapde bhi pehle se gande type ke the....

Vikram....thik hai koi baat nhi chalo pehle tumhe doctor ke pas le chalte hai.....

Ladki....nhi nhi main thik hoon....mujhe nhi jana doctor ke pas .........aur mere pas doctor ko dene ke liye paise bhi nhi hai......wo thodi shant lehje mein boli...last wali line ko....

Vikram....tumhe uski chinta karne ki jaroorat nhi hai....Shaily ise Car mein bithao....

phir Vikram us Ladki ko leke nikal padta hai ....

thodi hi der mein woh log ek doctor ke pas pohoch jate hain....jaha pe us ladki ka treatment hota hai....

Vikram thodi chintit tha....use yeh to pata chal gya tha ke yeh ladki kaun hai....yeh kyun pareshan hai....aur iske sath Vikram ka rishta kya hai...

Doctor ke pas se treatment karane ke baad woh log nikalne lagte hai....tab Vikram puchta hai.....kya main tumhara naam jaan sakta hun....

Ladki jo abhi tak chup thi...woh bas apne hi socho mein gum thi.....boli.....Ji ji mera naam Radhika hai....

Vikram ....bohot achi naam hai...chalo tumhe tumhraa ghar chhor deta hun....

Radhika....nhi nhi uski koi zaroorat nhi hai....main chali jaungi...apne mere liye itna kuch kiya uske liye bohot bohot shukriya....

Vikram....are shukriya ki koi baat nhi hai....yeh mera farz tha...tum baitho car mein aur apna address batao....

Radhika iske baad aur koi argument nhi karti hai....aur Car mein baith ke apne ghar ka pata batati hai....

in car....
Vikram....waise tum kaha tak padhi ho....

Radhika yeh sawal sunke thodi chowki....kyunki koi ajnabi aisi sawal nhi puchta hai....lekin khud ko sambhal ke bolti hai....ji main 10th tak padhi hun....aur uske baad kismat ne mere sath bohot hi ganda majak kiya....aur main age nhi pad payi....yeh bolte huye uske ankhon meim phir se thodi ansoon aa gaye....

Vikram ....maaf karna .....mujhe tumhe dukh pohochane ka koi irada nhi tha....main phir se maafi chahta hun...

pas main baithi...Shaily...apne Rumal se Radhika ke ansoon pochti hai....aur use shant karne lagti hai...

Radhika bhi ek kandha milne par ab uske ansoon ke bandh khul jate hai....aaj pehli bar use ek aisa kandha mila tha...

thodi der baad woh shant hoti hai....aur situation samajh ne ke baad woh thodi sharminda hoti hai.....

aise hi yeh log Radhika ke ghar ke pas pohoch jate hai....
Vikram....tumhe sharminda hone ki koi jaroorat nhi hai....yeh lo yeh card rakho....kal yaha aa jana shyad tumhari mushkile thodi asan ho jaye.....


Radhika...unhe ghar mein andar le jane ke liye bohot hi insist karti hai....lekin Vikram aur Shaily kisi aur din bolke waha se nikal jate hain....

Vikram jab apne mansion mein pohochta hai....to Siya Miya pehle se hi unka intejar kar rahe the.....woh log pehle hi aa chuke the.....

Siya....to aap chhoti bhabhi se mil liye...

yeh baat sunke Vikram ke chehre pe ek muskan aa gayi....
Lekin Shaily jhat se boli.....Siya tumhe Lord se aise swaal nhi karna chahiye....

wo age kuch bolti Vikram bol pada....Shaily main tumhe pehle hi bata chuka hun...main yaha Lord nhi hun...yeh dono mere behne hai...main yeh bas bolne ke liye nhi bola hai....inhe behen mana hai.....aur tumhe bhi maine apna dost mana hai....

yeh sunke Shaily ke ankhon mein thodi ansoon aa jati hai....woh jhat se Vikram ke pero ke pas baith ke .....mujhe mere gustakhi ke liye maaf kar dijiye....main bas apke ek naukar hun....mujhe itni ijjat dene ke liye main dil se aapki shukriya ada karti hun.....

Vikram use uske kandhe se uthata hai....aur use gale se lagata hai....tum mere liye koi naukar nhi ho....pehle bhi ek dost thi....aur ab bhi ho....khud ko chhota mat samjho...thik hai....

Vikram uske ansoon pochta hai...to Shaily ke chehre pe ek khub surat smile aa jati hai....

Vikram ko pata tha ke Shaily khud uska naukar samajhti hai...isiliye usne yeh sab bola tha....kyunke wo use ek dost ki trah dekhta hai...na ki naukar ki tarah.....

yeh dekhke Siya Miya dono muskura rahi thi.....Miya dheere se boli.....lo lagta hai ek aur Bhabhi mil gayi.....

Siya....bhaiya apne bataya nhi chhoti bhabhi ke bare mein....

Vikram....are haan in sab baaton mein bhul hi gaya tha....usne bohot kuch jhela hai ab tak....kal aa rahi hai khud hi mil lena.....aur use humare bare mein kuch bhi batane ki zaroora nhi hai...use apne aap yaad aa jayegi.....

Siya Miya....thik hai bhaiya....Shaily ab to bhaiya ko chhodo....

Shaily sarmate huye Vikram ko chhodti hai....aur sarmake apni najre jhuka leti hai....aut mand mand muskurane lagti hai...

Vikram has ke. Bola...ladki chahe Vampire ho ya aam insan koi bhi sharmana nhi bhulti hai....

yeh sunke Shaily Vikram ke sine pe ek halka sa mukka marti hai.....

Vikram....acha suno mujhe abhi 1 ghante mein nikalna hai....agle padao ke liye.....

in sab kamo mein sham ho gayi thi....aur phir...8 baje Vikram nikal jata hai.....Shaily uske sath jane ki jid karti hai to....Vikram use kisi aur din bolke nikal jata hai.....

Vikram aaj Car se nikla tha....woh abhi ek sunsan sadak pe tha....thodi aage chala hi tha ke...
asman se dhadam karke kuch samne gidta hai.....Vikram jhat se apni car ka break lagata hai.....aur bahat aake jis taraf woh chij gira tha us taraf jane lagta hai....

tabhi samne jaha pe woh. Chij gira tha....us gadhe mein se ek roshni ki gola...teji se vikram ko aake lagti hai.....lekin Vikram ko kuch nhi hota...

Vikram thoda muskurata hai....aur bolta hai....main tumlogo ka hi intejar kar raha tha....ke tum log kab samne aaoge......

phir dhire dhire dhul chhat ti hai....to samne ek 8ft lambha shaks dikhayi deta....jiske ankhon mein angare thi....
tum ab nhi bachoge Raphael...main tumhe khatam karne aya hun....

Vikram....hahahhahahha............galti kar di tumne yaha aake Amanadiel....

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to be continued....

Boht khub lika hai ap ny asy hi likty rahiya or achy achy comments laty rahiya keep it up bro

 

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[Naik]

Update....8


aage.......

Vikram Shaily aur Siya Miya ko leke waha se nikal padta hai.........

yeh log abhi raste mein hi the....tabhi Vikram ke Car se ek ladki achanak takrane hi wali thi ke...wo kisi tarah Car ko sambhalta hai....par wo ladki ko thodi si lag hi jata hai....aur wo niche gid jati hai.....

Vikram fatafat bahar nikalta hai....aur ladki ko uthane ke liye jaata hai......
Ladki ka chehra uske balo se dhaka hua tha isliye Vikram ab tak use dekh nhi paya tha.....lekin jab pas jake uska chehra dekha to woh bolte bolte ruk gaya.....par jhat se khud ko sambhala aur ladki ke pas jake pehle use uthaya.....
aur bola....kya tum thik ho...aise kaun road cross karta hai....pata hai kitna bada accident ho sakta tha.....

Shaily bhi bahar nikalti hai....aur woh bhi jab ladki ka chehra dekhti hai to wo bhi hakka bakka reh jati hai....Vikram use ankhon se ishara karke shant rehne ko bolta hai......

woh ladki chup hi thi....uske ankhon mein thodi si ansoon thi.....aur car se takkar hone ki wajah se uske left ghutne pe thodi si chot aayi thi.....

Vikram....kya hua....kuch to bolo....agar galti se badi accident ho jati to.....

Ladki....ji....im sorry...mera dhyan nhi tha....

VIKRAM uski baat aur awaj se samajh jata hai ke yeh ladki kisi baat se bohot pareshan hai....uski kapde bhi pehle se gande type ke the....

Vikram....thik hai koi baat nhi chalo pehle tumhe doctor ke pas le chalte hai.....

Ladki....nhi nhi main thik hoon....mujhe nhi jana doctor ke pas .........aur mere pas doctor ko dene ke liye paise bhi nhi hai......wo thodi shant lehje mein boli...last wali line ko....

Vikram....tumhe uski chinta karne ki jaroorat nhi hai....Shaily ise Car mein bithao....

phir Vikram us Ladki ko leke nikal padta hai ....

thodi hi der mein woh log ek doctor ke pas pohoch jate hain....jaha pe us ladki ka treatment hota hai....

Vikram thodi chintit tha....use yeh to pata chal gya tha ke yeh ladki kaun hai....yeh kyun pareshan hai....aur iske sath Vikram ka rishta kya hai...

Doctor ke pas se treatment karane ke baad woh log nikalne lagte hai....tab Vikram puchta hai.....kya main tumhara naam jaan sakta hun....

Ladki jo abhi tak chup thi...woh bas apne hi socho mein gum thi.....boli.....Ji ji mera naam Radhika hai....

Vikram ....bohot achi naam hai...chalo tumhe tumhraa ghar chhor deta hun....

Radhika....nhi nhi uski koi zaroorat nhi hai....main chali jaungi...apne mere liye itna kuch kiya uske liye bohot bohot shukriya....

Vikram....are shukriya ki koi baat nhi hai....yeh mera farz tha...tum baitho car mein aur apna address batao....

Radhika iske baad aur koi argument nhi karti hai....aur Car mein baith ke apne ghar ka pata batati hai....

in car....
Vikram....waise tum kaha tak padhi ho....

Radhika yeh sawal sunke thodi chowki....kyunki koi ajnabi aisi sawal nhi puchta hai....lekin khud ko sambhal ke bolti hai....ji main 10th tak padhi hun....aur uske baad kismat ne mere sath bohot hi ganda majak kiya....aur main age nhi pad payi....yeh bolte huye uske ankhon meim phir se thodi ansoon aa gaye....

Vikram ....maaf karna .....mujhe tumhe dukh pohochane ka koi irada nhi tha....main phir se maafi chahta hun...

pas main baithi...Shaily...apne Rumal se Radhika ke ansoon pochti hai....aur use shant karne lagti hai...

Radhika bhi ek kandha milne par ab uske ansoon ke bandh khul jate hai....aaj pehli bar use ek aisa kandha mila tha...

thodi der baad woh shant hoti hai....aur situation samajh ne ke baad woh thodi sharminda hoti hai.....

aise hi yeh log Radhika ke ghar ke pas pohoch jate hai....
Vikram....tumhe sharminda hone ki koi jaroorat nhi hai....yeh lo yeh card rakho....kal yaha aa jana shyad tumhari mushkile thodi asan ho jaye.....


Radhika...unhe ghar mein andar le jane ke liye bohot hi insist karti hai....lekin Vikram aur Shaily kisi aur din bolke waha se nikal jate hain....

Vikram jab apne mansion mein pohochta hai....to Siya Miya pehle se hi unka intejar kar rahe the.....woh log pehle hi aa chuke the.....

Siya....to aap chhoti bhabhi se mil liye...

yeh baat sunke Vikram ke chehre pe ek muskan aa gayi....
Lekin Shaily jhat se boli.....Siya tumhe Lord se aise swaal nhi karna chahiye....

wo age kuch bolti Vikram bol pada....Shaily main tumhe pehle hi bata chuka hun...main yaha Lord nhi hun...yeh dono mere behne hai...main yeh bas bolne ke liye nhi bola hai....inhe behen mana hai.....aur tumhe bhi maine apna dost mana hai....

yeh sunke Shaily ke ankhon mein thodi ansoon aa jati hai....woh jhat se Vikram ke pero ke pas baith ke .....mujhe mere gustakhi ke liye maaf kar dijiye....main bas apke ek naukar hun....mujhe itni ijjat dene ke liye main dil se aapki shukriya ada karti hun.....

Vikram use uske kandhe se uthata hai....aur use gale se lagata hai....tum mere liye koi naukar nhi ho....pehle bhi ek dost thi....aur ab bhi ho....khud ko chhota mat samjho...thik hai....

Vikram uske ansoon pochta hai...to Shaily ke chehre pe ek khub surat smile aa jati hai....

Vikram ko pata tha ke Shaily khud uska naukar samajhti hai...isiliye usne yeh sab bola tha....kyunke wo use ek dost ki trah dekhta hai...na ki naukar ki tarah.....

yeh dekhke Siya Miya dono muskura rahi thi.....Miya dheere se boli.....lo lagta hai ek aur Bhabhi mil gayi.....

Siya....bhaiya apne bataya nhi chhoti bhabhi ke bare mein....

Vikram....are haan in sab baaton mein bhul hi gaya tha....usne bohot kuch jhela hai ab tak....kal aa rahi hai khud hi mil lena.....aur use humare bare mein kuch bhi batane ki zaroora nhi hai...use apne aap yaad aa jayegi.....

Siya Miya....thik hai bhaiya....Shaily ab to bhaiya ko chhodo....

Shaily sarmate huye Vikram ko chhodti hai....aur sarmake apni najre jhuka leti hai....aut mand mand muskurane lagti hai...

Vikram has ke. Bola...ladki chahe Vampire ho ya aam insan koi bhi sharmana nhi bhulti hai....

yeh sunke Shaily Vikram ke sine pe ek halka sa mukka marti hai.....

Vikram....acha suno mujhe abhi 1 ghante mein nikalna hai....agle padao ke liye.....

in sab kamo mein sham ho gayi thi....aur phir...8 baje Vikram nikal jata hai.....Shaily uske sath jane ki jid karti hai to....Vikram use kisi aur din bolke nikal jata hai.....

Vikram aaj Car se nikla tha....woh abhi ek sunsan sadak pe tha....thodi aage chala hi tha ke...
asman se dhadam karke kuch samne gidta hai.....Vikram jhat se apni car ka break lagata hai.....aur bahat aake jis taraf woh chij gira tha us taraf jane lagta hai....

tabhi samne jaha pe woh. Chij gira tha....us gadhe mein se ek roshni ki gola...teji se vikram ko aake lagti hai.....lekin Vikram ko kuch nhi hota...

Vikram thoda muskurata hai....aur bolta hai....main tumlogo ka hi intejar kar raha tha....ke tum log kab samne aaoge......

phir dhire dhire dhul chhat ti hai....to samne ek 8ft lambha shaks dikhayi deta....jiske ankhon mein angare thi....
tum ab nhi bachoge Raphael...main tumhe khatam karne aya hun....

Vikram....hahahhahahha............galti kar di tumne yaha aake Amanadiel....

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Update......9


Brianna bohot bechain thi....use kuch bhi acha nhi lag raha tha....use bas kuch bura hone ki bhabnaye aa rahi thi....aur bar bar Vikram ke pas jane ki icha ho rahi thi....

jab wo khud pe kabu na kar payi....to wo ek portal bna ke Vikram ke pas chal di.....lekin jab wo Vikram ke pas pohochi to uski ankhein hairat se khul gayi......
uske muh se bas itna nikla....Amandiel....

Vikram jab Brianna ki awaj sunta hai to uske chehre pe aayi muskurahat aur bhi geheri ho jati hai.....

Amandiel bhi Brianna ko dekhta hai.....aur bola....Brianna maine tumse pehle bhi kaha tha....agar tum mere samne phir se aa gaye to tumhe dusra mauka nhi diya jayega......

Brianna yeh sunke dar gayi....

Vikram .....ooo bhai ooo...mere hi samne mere hi biwi ko dhamka raha hai....tere mein dam to hai....aur tum Angels ko kitni bar samjhana parega.....tum mere ek bal tak ukhad nhi sakte....

Amandiel yeh sunke gusse se timila gaya.....wo abhi ek attack karne hi wala tha ke.....Vikram ne bas itna bola......Amandiel aaj se tum ek aam insan ho...

bas aur kya Amandiel ek insan ban gya....woh apni ankhein aur muh far ke abhi jo hua use samajhne ki kosish karne laga.....

Amandiel....yeh kya kiya tumne....mujhe mere pankh wapas do....

Asal mein jab Amandiel insan ban gya to eka ek uski pankh uske sarir se alag ho gaye the....

Abhi Amandiel ke ankhon mein thodi khouf aur dar thi....use ab tak to samajh aa chuka tha ke uske samne jo shaks hai....wo pehle wala Raphael nhi hai....aur wo Vikram ke jhat ke bal tak nhi ukhad sakta hai.....

Vikram.....hahahahahaha..........daro mujhse....tumhe darna chahiye....ab tak yeh to samajh chuke honge tum log ke....tum sab log milke bhi mera kuch nhi kar sakte.....
main kisi ke liye bewajah nhi hoon.....
mere samne jhuko....tum bach jaoge....

Ab tum wapas jao....

isike sath Amandiel ke pankh bhi wapas aa gaye....aur wo fauran waha se bhag nikla....


Brianna piche khadi huyi yeh sab dekh rahi thi.....wo khushi ke mare fule nhi sama rahi thi....use aaj apne pyar pe khud se jyada garb ho raha tha.....

wo jhat se Vikram ko piche se gale laga liya.....

Vikram...kya bat hai...bohot khush lag rahi ho....

Brianna .....hmmm

Vikram...acha chalo jis kam ke liye nikla tha wo to kar loon....tum abhi Siya Miya ke pas jao......

Brianna....nhi mujhe bhi apke sath jana hai...

Vikram...Bri jid mat karo...main bas jaunga aur aa jaunga....

Brianna....acha thik hai....jaldi wapas aiyega....

yeh bolke Brianna waha se nikal gayi....aur Vikram bhi apni car se nikal gaya....
thodi dur jake Vikram car ko rokke gayab ho gaya.....aur jake pohocha us state ke Chief Minister ke ghar.....wo abhi Raphael ke get up pe tha....

Chief minister ka nam tha.....Prabhakar....jo abhi apne alishan ghar mein ek sofe pe baith ke Tv pe news dekh raha tha.....sath mein uski biwi aur beti bhi thi........

Janta ko lutke aram se baith ke TV dekh raha hai.....

ek bohot hi gambhir aur sard awaj ayi Prabhu ke piche se....wo jhat se mura aur paya ke ek shaks uske piche khada hai.....full kale kapde lambe bal chehre pe ek nakab....usme se bas jalti huyi do nili ankhein....dahina hath normal....lekin baya hath aisa jaisa kisi janwar ko ho....

shaks ko dekhte hi Prabhu ke dimag mein khatre ki ghanti baji.....usne fauran pas mein padi phone ko uthaya bahar se scurity ko bulane ke liye.....lekin line dead thi....wo chillane hi wala tha ke Vikram bol pada.....
koi faida nhi hai...ghar ke sare phone ke line dead hai... Mobile phone ke bhi....aur bahar sare security yaa yun kahun gunde mare pade hai.....

Prabhu abhi bhi akad mein tha....wo apni akad mein bola....kaun ho tum aur kya chahiye tumhe....

Vikram....Raphael....
bas itna bolna tha....unke chehro pe khauf saf dekhi jaa sakti thi....Prabhu ke biwi aur beti ka bhi ek hi hal tha

Vikram ne Prabhu ke biwi aur beti ki taraf ungli karke bola....tum dono andar jao....

Prabhu ki Biwi ka nam tha Damini....
wo Vikram ke pairo ke pas ake boli....mere pati ko chhod do...main jaban deti hun yeh aaj se sare galat kam band kar denge.....wo gidgidate huye boli....

Prabhu ki beti hairan pareshan sare halat ko samajhne ki kosish karne lagi....use jhatka tab laga jab uski maa ne uske pyare baap ke galat kam karne ke bare mein boli.....

uska nam Dolly tha....

Dolly...maa yeh tum kya bol rahi ho....papa kaunsa galat kam karte hain....aur ap us shaks ke samne kyun gidgida rahi ho jo ek criminal hai.....

Damini....apni beti ko dant te huye....tu chup reh tu kuch nhi janti....

Prabhu....Dolly tum andar jao....main dekhta hun....

Dolly...nhi mujhe janna hai sab kuch...

Vikram....chal prabhu tere kale karname apne beti ko bata ....agar main batana shuru karoon to tujhe acha nhi lagega...

Prabhu....tum kis bare mein baat kar rahe ho....mujhe kuch nhi pata....

Vikram....acha tujhe kuch nhi pata....acha chal man liya....tujhe yeh to pata hoga....tera ladkiyo ka jo consignment mein tha abhi 30 mint mein nikalne wala hai....lekin afsos wo nhi niklega....

Prabhu yeh sunke ab sakte mein aa chuka tha...

Dolly...papa kya yeh sach hai....aap yeh kam karte ho...

Prabhu ne apna sar niche kar liya...

Dolly...maa tum bolo....kya yeh jo bol raha hai wo sach hai...????

uski maa bhi najre churane lagi.....wah pe ek khamoshi chha gayi.....

khamoshi ko todte huye. Vikram bola....main bata ta hun....

yeh kehke Vikram ne Prabhu ke sare kale chithe ek ek karke bolne laga.....uska drug ka dhanda....ladkiyo ki taskari....organ trafficking....arm dealing....

Vikram....yeh sab karke Prabhu tune apne Swish ke account mein 1000 crore jama kiya hai....jo bas abhi 1 2 3 second mein khali ho gaye.....

Prabhu bhouchakka sa Vikram ko dekhne laga...

Dolly abhi ro rahi thi....use ab apne baap se ghin ane lagi....aur apne maa pe bhi ...jo sab kuch jnate huye bhi chup rahi aaj tak.....Dolly aisi ladki thi....jo na galat dekhti thi....na galat sehti thi.....

Dolly....ankhon mein ansoon liye bharrayi awaj mein boli....papa aaj tak main apko ek sacha aur acha insan manti thi...ap mere ideal the ....lekin ab mujhe apse ghin aa rahi hai....

Prabhu jaisa bhi tha apni beti se sabse jyada pyar karta tha....lekin jab apni beti ke muh se khud ke liye buri baatein suni to wo ab tut gaya.....

Prabhu....beti mujhe maaf karde....dekh aaj tak maine tujhpe burayi ka anch tak ane nhi diya....

Dolly....anch tak nhi ane diya iska matlab yeh to nhi ke aap sahi ho gyae....apne galat kiya hai....i hate u papa....i hate u...

Vikram....aaaaa bohot ho gaya family drama.... Judgement time....

Damini....nhi nhi inhe chhod do....yeh sudhar jayenge main wada karti hun....inhe mat maro....

Vikram....chup ab bas main bolunga.....
yeh age se kuch nhi kar payega....tu bole ya na bole....main yaha ek deal karne aya hun....agar man liya to tu bach gaya....

phir uske bad Vikram ne ek deal Prabhu ke samne rakha....prabhu ke pas manne ke alawa aur koi rasta nhi bacha tha...isliye use manna pada....

Vikram....chalta hun....wapas aunga....tab tak apni beti ki nafrat jhelo tum log.....


yeh bolke wo nikal gyya....aur apne mansion mein pohocha....jaha Siya Miya Shaily aur Brianna uska hi intejar kar rahi thi....

Vikram unke pas jake baatein karne laga....tabhi Miya ne puch liya....
bhaiya....hume jo chahiye wo hum asani se le sakte hain....phir yeh sab karne ki kya jaroorat hai....

Vikram muskura ke bola.....tum sahi ho....lekin dheere dheere tadpate huye chije hasil karne mein jo maja hai....wo ek jhatke mein kaha.........

 

[Jaguaar]

Update......9


Brianna bohot bechain thi....use kuch bhi acha nhi lag raha tha....use bas kuch bura hone ki bhabnaye aa rahi thi....aur bar bar Vikram ke pas jane ki icha ho rahi thi....

jab wo khud pe kabu na kar payi....to wo ek portal bna ke Vikram ke pas chal di.....lekin jab wo Vikram ke pas pohochi to uski ankhein hairat se khul gayi......
uske muh se bas itna nikla....Amandiel....

Vikram jab Brianna ki awaj sunta hai to uske chehre pe aayi muskurahat aur bhi geheri ho jati hai.....

Amandiel bhi Brianna ko dekhta hai.....aur bola....Brianna maine tumse pehle bhi kaha tha....agar tum mere samne phir se aa gaye to tumhe dusra mauka nhi diya jayega......

Brianna yeh sunke dar gayi....

Vikram .....ooo bhai ooo...mere hi samne mere hi biwi ko dhamka raha hai....tere mein dam to hai....aur tum Angels ko kitni bar samjhana parega.....tum mere ek bal tak ukhad nhi sakte....

Amandiel yeh sunke gusse se timila gaya.....wo abhi ek attack karne hi wala tha ke.....Vikram ne bas itna bola......Amandiel aaj se tum ek aam insan ho...

bas aur kya Amandiel ek insan ban gya....woh apni ankhein aur muh far ke abhi jo hua use samajhne ki kosish karne laga.....

Amandiel....yeh kya kiya tumne....mujhe mere pankh wapas do....

Asal mein jab Amandiel insan ban gya to eka ek uski pankh uske sarir se alag ho gaye the....

Abhi Amandiel ke ankhon mein thodi khouf aur dar thi....use ab tak to samajh aa chuka tha ke uske samne jo shaks hai....wo pehle wala Raphael nhi hai....aur wo Vikram ke jhat ke bal tak nhi ukhad sakta hai.....

Vikram.....hahahahahaha..........daro mujhse....tumhe darna chahiye....ab tak yeh to samajh chuke honge tum log ke....tum sab log milke bhi mera kuch nhi kar sakte.....
main kisi ke liye bewajah nhi hoon.....
mere samne jhuko....tum bach jaoge....

Ab tum wapas jao....

isike sath Amandiel ke pankh bhi wapas aa gaye....aur wo fauran waha se bhag nikla....


Brianna piche khadi huyi yeh sab dekh rahi thi.....wo khushi ke mare fule nhi sama rahi thi....use aaj apne pyar pe khud se jyada garb ho raha tha.....

wo jhat se Vikram ko piche se gale laga liya.....

Vikram...kya bat hai...bohot khush lag rahi ho....

Brianna .....hmmm

Vikram...acha chalo jis kam ke liye nikla tha wo to kar loon....tum abhi Siya Miya ke pas jao......

Brianna....nhi mujhe bhi apke sath jana hai...

Vikram...Bri jid mat karo...main bas jaunga aur aa jaunga....

Brianna....acha thik hai....jaldi wapas aiyega....

yeh bolke Brianna waha se nikal gayi....aur Vikram bhi apni car se nikal gaya....
thodi dur jake Vikram car ko rokke gayab ho gaya.....aur jake pohocha us state ke Chief Minister ke ghar.....wo abhi Raphael ke get up pe tha....

Chief minister ka nam tha.....Prabhakar....jo abhi apne alishan ghar mein ek sofe pe baith ke Tv pe news dekh raha tha.....sath mein uski biwi aur beti bhi thi........

Janta ko lutke aram se baith ke TV dekh raha hai.....

ek bohot hi gambhir aur sard awaj ayi Prabhu ke piche se....wo jhat se mura aur paya ke ek shaks uske piche khada hai.....full kale kapde lambe bal chehre pe ek nakab....usme se bas jalti huyi do nili ankhein....dahina hath normal....lekin baya hath aisa jaisa kisi janwar ko ho....

shaks ko dekhte hi Prabhu ke dimag mein khatre ki ghanti baji.....usne fauran pas mein padi phone ko uthaya bahar se scurity ko bulane ke liye.....lekin line dead thi....wo chillane hi wala tha ke Vikram bol pada.....
koi faida nhi hai...ghar ke sare phone ke line dead hai... Mobile phone ke bhi....aur bahar sare security yaa yun kahun gunde mare pade hai.....

Prabhu abhi bhi akad mein tha....wo apni akad mein bola....kaun ho tum aur kya chahiye tumhe....

Vikram....Raphael....
bas itna bolna tha....unke chehro pe khauf saf dekhi jaa sakti thi....Prabhu ke biwi aur beti ka bhi ek hi hal tha

Vikram ne Prabhu ke biwi aur beti ki taraf ungli karke bola....tum dono andar jao....

Prabhu ki Biwi ka nam tha Damini....
wo Vikram ke pairo ke pas ake boli....mere pati ko chhod do...main jaban deti hun yeh aaj se sare galat kam band kar denge.....wo gidgidate huye boli....

Prabhu ki beti hairan pareshan sare halat ko samajhne ki kosish karne lagi....use jhatka tab laga jab uski maa ne uske pyare baap ke galat kam karne ke bare mein boli.....

uska nam Dolly tha....

Dolly...maa yeh tum kya bol rahi ho....papa kaunsa galat kam karte hain....aur ap us shaks ke samne kyun gidgida rahi ho jo ek criminal hai.....

Damini....apni beti ko dant te huye....tu chup reh tu kuch nhi janti....

Prabhu....Dolly tum andar jao....main dekhta hun....

Dolly...nhi mujhe janna hai sab kuch...

Vikram....chal prabhu tere kale karname apne beti ko bata ....agar main batana shuru karoon to tujhe acha nhi lagega...

Prabhu....tum kis bare mein baat kar rahe ho....mujhe kuch nhi pata....

Vikram....acha tujhe kuch nhi pata....acha chal man liya....tujhe yeh to pata hoga....tera ladkiyo ka jo consignment mein tha abhi 30 mint mein nikalne wala hai....lekin afsos wo nhi niklega....

Prabhu yeh sunke ab sakte mein aa chuka tha...

Dolly...papa kya yeh sach hai....aap yeh kam karte ho...

Prabhu ne apna sar niche kar liya...

Dolly...maa tum bolo....kya yeh jo bol raha hai wo sach hai...????

uski maa bhi najre churane lagi.....wah pe ek khamoshi chha gayi.....

khamoshi ko todte huye. Vikram bola....main bata ta hun....

yeh kehke Vikram ne Prabhu ke sare kale chithe ek ek karke bolne laga.....uska drug ka dhanda....ladkiyo ki taskari....organ trafficking....arm dealing....

Vikram....yeh sab karke Prabhu tune apne Swish ke account mein 1000 crore jama kiya hai....jo bas abhi 1 2 3 second mein khali ho gaye.....

Prabhu bhouchakka sa Vikram ko dekhne laga...

Dolly abhi ro rahi thi....use ab apne baap se ghin ane lagi....aur apne maa pe bhi ...jo sab kuch jnate huye bhi chup rahi aaj tak.....Dolly aisi ladki thi....jo na galat dekhti thi....na galat sehti thi.....

Dolly....ankhon mein ansoon liye bharrayi awaj mein boli....papa aaj tak main apko ek sacha aur acha insan manti thi...ap mere ideal the ....lekin ab mujhe apse ghin aa rahi hai....

Prabhu jaisa bhi tha apni beti se sabse jyada pyar karta tha....lekin jab apni beti ke muh se khud ke liye buri baatein suni to wo ab tut gaya.....

Prabhu....beti mujhe maaf karde....dekh aaj tak maine tujhpe burayi ka anch tak ane nhi diya....

Dolly....anch tak nhi ane diya iska matlab yeh to nhi ke aap sahi ho gyae....apne galat kiya hai....i hate u papa....i hate u...

Vikram....aaaaa bohot ho gaya family drama.... Judgement time....

Damini....nhi nhi inhe chhod do....yeh sudhar jayenge main wada karti hun....inhe mat maro....

Vikram....chup ab bas main bolunga.....
yeh age se kuch nhi kar payega....tu bole ya na bole....main yaha ek deal karne aya hun....agar man liya to tu bach gaya....

phir uske bad Vikram ne ek deal Prabhu ke samne rakha....prabhu ke pas manne ke alawa aur koi rasta nhi bacha tha...isliye use manna pada....

Vikram....chalta hun....wapas aunga....tab tak apni beti ki nafrat jhelo tum log.....


yeh bolke wo nikal gyya....aur apne mansion mein pohocha....jaha Siya Miya Shaily aur Brianna uska hi intejar kar rahi thi....

Vikram unke pas jake baatein karne laga....tabhi Miya ne puch liya....
bhaiya....hume jo chahiye wo hum asani se le sakte hain....phir yeh sab karne ki kya jaroorat hai....

Vikram muskura ke bola.....tum sahi ho....lekin dheere dheere tadpate huye chije hasil karne mein jo maja hai....wo ek jhatke mein kaha.........

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