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Bahot shaandaar update bhaiUpdate.......2
Demian aur Brianna ne milkar us body ko leke ek portal se nikal ke aa gaye....wo abhi ek Castle ke samne khade the........
castle kuch is prakar tha
yeh Castle thi Undead King ki......yeh unke kingdom ki rajdhani mein thi.......is castle ka nam tha.......Fort Magmel.
Brianna ne us ladke ki body ko leke us castle me hi bane ek bohot hi bade aur alishan room mein leke gayi.....aur waha ek bade se bed pe lita diya.......
wo bhi wahi pe us bed ke sirhane baith gayi......uske ankhon mein thodi ansoon the.....aur chehre pe khusi.......wo dheere se us ladke ki taraf dekhke boli.....My King.....My love......bohot intezaar karwa liya apne.........ab to uth jaiye....dekhiye apki praja apke liye kayi sadiyo se intezaar kar rahi hai........
idhar jaise hi Kala pani Ladke ki srir mein gyaa to Universe mein 5 worlds apne aap prakat ho gaye.......
yeh the Lost worlds jo ek samy mein ek sath thi.....aur inka ek hi Raja hota tha.......Universe ka Sabse khtaarnak aur Taqat war Raja.......Lekin kuch Sadiyo pehle yeh worlds gayab ho chuke the..........apne king ke Marne ke baad..........
aise hi kuch din Nikal jata hai.....lekin us body mein kuch bhi hulchal nhi hoti..........
wo ladka ek bohot hi gehri neend mein tha.......
wo abhi ek kale andhere jagah mein bhatak raha tha......
tabhi uske samne ek shaks ata hai.......jo usse kuch 3-4 saal bada hoga......
samne wala ladka......yaha kaha bhtaak rahe ho Vikram......
acha to Hero ka naam Vikram hai........
Vikram......tum.....tum kaun ho....aur mera naam kaise jante ho........aur mujhe to goli lagi thi......main zinda kaise hun......aur main kahan hun.......
samne wala.....aram se aram se......thora patience rakho.......
chalo samne chalte hai......
tabhi waha ka scene hi change ho gaya........abhi jahan charo taraf andhera tha ......kuch bhi thik se dikhai nhi de raha tha.....wahi ab wo log ek jagah baithe the......jahan ek talab jaisa bana hua tha.....aur pas mein hi baithne ki jagah thi.......
Wo dono wahi pas mein rakhe pathar pe baith gaye......Vikram ab bhi confused tha.....uske man mein kayi swal the.....lekin jawab nhi......
phir wo ladka bolne laga......sabse pehli baat to....maim jab tak na bolun bich mein mat bolna.....
to tumhe goli lagi thi.....aur tum khayi se gir gaye the.....Lekin tum zinda ho......abhi tum apne Mind ke duniya mein ho.....
aur rahi sawal ke main kaun hun to....jawab hai.....main tum hi hun.....
ab kuch puchne se pehle samne talab mein jao.....aur ek dubki lagao.....
asha karta hun to tumhare sawalo ka jawab milenge....
Vikram us ladke ki baat mante huye.....talab ke andar jane laga.....
jab pani uske sine ke barabar aa gaya.....to usne dubki lagayi......
jaise hi uska Sir pani ke niche gaya....... To use apni pichle zindagu ke yaadein dikhne lagi....
ke. Wo kaun tha.....kaisa tha....kya kya karta tha......uski taqat kya kya thi........use pata chal gaya tha ke Uska naam Tha Raphael......
matlb jo dusra ladka tha wo hai asli Raphael......
Vikram ko sab kuch pata chal gaya tha apne bare mein......to wo talab se bhaar aya.......
bahar ake wo Raphael ke samne aya......
tan Raphael bola.......to i think tumhe sab kuch pata chak gaya hoga......
Vikram.....pata to bohot kuch chala....lekin agar main itna hi bada King tha to meri maut kaise huyi.......
Raphael ......iske bre mein zyada mat socho.....jab waqt ayega.....tumhe khud ba khud pata chal jyega.....bas is bare mein kisise puchna mat.....
Vikram.....thik hai jaisa tum kaho.....lekin ab mujhe kya karna hoga.......
Raphael.....sabse pehle tum purn man se mujhe swikar karo.....hum dono ko ek hone do....take tumhe tumhara pura shakti aur roop mil sake........
Vikram.....thik hai main tumhe purn roop se swikar karta hun....
uske yeh bolte hi.....Raphael ka Sharir ek Energy mein badal gaya.....aur Vikram ke sarir mein sama gya.....
Vikram ko asahaniya dard hone laga.......uske charo taraf roahni fel gayi......
idhar Castle ke room mein bhi chamak phail gayi......
Chamak itna zaida thi ke Room ke andar jitne bhi log the sabko apni ankhe bnd karni padi......
jab roshni kam huyi to unke. Samne......
Vikram khada tha Golden Armor mein......
jise dekhke.....Brianna....Demian....aur ek budha admi....jo kamre mein abhi the.....wo jhuk gaye.....My King bolke......
Vikram.....uth jaiye....ap sab
wo sab uth gaye.....sabke chehre pe khushi thi....khas karke Brianna ke....
Vikram....Brianna gale nhi lagenge apni pati ke.......
Brianna jhat se daud ke gayi aur Vikram ke gale lag gayi.....aur jo aanshoon abhi uske ankhon mein ruke huye thi.....wo ab behne lagi....
Vikram.....Brianna sambhalo khud ko....dekho hum wapas aa chuke hain......ab chup ho jaiye....isbar apko humse koi bhi juda nhi kar payega........
Brianna......Vikram se aur lipat gayi.....subkte huye boli.....My King ap to wapas aa gaye......lekin humare Behne......
Vikram.....wo bhi zaldi hi mil jayenge.....jitna mujhe pata hai....wo sabhi mere sath Prithwi pe hi the.......
Vikram samne khada Demian aur aur us budhe admi ke taraf dekhke bola......kaise ho Demian....aur Morgan......
Demian.....hum ache hai...ab aap wapas aa gaye hai....to sab thik hoga.....
Morgan.....My King apki wapasi ka hi to rasta hum dekh rhe the Sadiyo se.....
Vikram....sahi kaha hum wapas aa chuke hai......pichli bar se ab kuch alag hoga.......isbr koi bhi nhi bachega.........
to be continued.......
Mast update broupdate...3
Intro........Vikram apne kahani ka hero.......ya Villain.....
2.Brianna......Yeh ek half Angel aur Half Devil hai
3.Demian .......yeh ek demon.....wo bhi high Level ka
4... Morgan.....yeh ek dwarf hai.....aur iski umar kayi hajaro saal hai
5.....Siya....aur Miya.....Dono Dark elves hai...
6. Colossus......yeh ek warrior hai.....aur Vikram ke army ka general bhi......
7.Shaily...... Yeh ek Vampire hai aur unki queen bhi.....
age jo bhi ayenge unka intro hota jayega......
Vikram ka asli Family ka intro bad mein hoga.......
Vikram abhi apne insani roop mein wapas aa chuka tha......tabhi waha pe ek ladki aayi.....aur Vikram ke samne jhuk gayi.......yeh thi Shaily.....ekdum safed skin.....ankh thodi laal.....hoth bhi ekdum laal aur do teekhe dant.....waise to vampires din mein nhi nikal sakte .......lekin Shaily din mein bhi nikal sakti hai.....
Aur yeh Vikram ke badoulat hai.....kaise future mein pata chalega.......
wo jhuki huyi hi boli......My Lord...wapsi mubarak ho......kaise hain ap....
Vikram.....uth jao shaily......aur hum ache hai.....Lekin yeh insani Sharir bas Kamjor hai.....kai dino se kuch na khand ke karan Kamjori ho rahi hai.......
Yeh sunte hi sabko hi khayal aya ke.....sab khushi mein itna kho gaye the unhe yeh baat yaad hi nhi rahi ke.....Vikram ab ek insan hai......use khane ki bhi zaroorat hoti hai......
Brianna bina kuch bole jhat se waha se nikal gayi......Vikram samajh gaya ke wo kyun gayi hai.....Morgan bhi izazat leke nikal gaya......
Demian bola......My King ap fresh ho jaiye.....tab tak apka khane ka bhi prabandh ho jayega......wo bhi nikal gaya......
tabhi bahar se ek maid aayi.....jo dikhne mein to insan thi.....lekin asal mein thi nhi.....aur yeh koi sadharan maid nhi thi.....Vikram ke castle mein aise 10 maid hai.....jinhe battle maids kehte hai.....
Yeh is Castle ki last line of defense hai......
jo maid aayi uska nam hai......Sana...
Vikram use dekhke thoda muskuraya.....aur bola....kaise ho sana.....Aaj bhi tum waise hi ho....jaise pehle thi.....
Sana....sar jhukaye huye boli.....My King hum ache hai.....aur ap to jante hain ke Humara umr kabhi badhega nhi.....yeh humari jati pe abhishap hai.......
Vikram.....wo kuch nhi bola....aur Fresh hone chal diya......wapas aya to Sana uske liye kapde leke Khadi thi...
Vikram ko usne taiyar kiya.....aur Dinning place pe le jane lagi.....
Vikram ne jane se mana kiya.....aur bola ke uska khnaa wahi pe lane ko.......
wo akhir mein sabke samne ana chahta tha.......
Vikram ne thoda bohot khaya......
phir Brianna Ayi....aur boli.....My King mujhe apko apke purane roop mein dekhna hai......jis roop mein ap mujhse mile the......
Vikram muskuraya......apna dono hath aa gaya.....aur dekhte hi dekhte uske pure sharir pe ek Armor aa gaya.....black color.....
Uski ankhein bhi ab Laal ho chuki thi........wo chalte huye apne kamre se nikla.....aur jaise hi darvar mein jane ke liye darwaja khula......to andar jitne bhi log the.....sabhi ghutno ke bal jhuk gaye.....aur apna sar niche kar liya......
Vikram jake apne Singhasan pe baith gaya.......
Vikram......sabhi uth jaiye.....
sab logone apna sar uthya lekin apne ghutne pe hi baithe rahe.....
Demian uthke Vikram ke samne aya aur phirse ghutno ke bal baith ke bola......My king....My lord....apko aaj apke Asli roop mein dekhke bohot khushi ho rahi hai.......
Vikram.....uth jaiye Demian. ....hume khushi huyi ....apki baaton se..
Aap sab log dhyan se suniye.....Ap sabko ab sabdhan rehna hoga.....Kingdom ki shuraksha puri tar diya jaye.......
Morgan...aap humare pramukh Updesh data hai....to aap is insani sharir ka koi ilaaj dhoondiye......
Demian....tum taiyari karo mujhe dharti pe lautna hoga.....bohot kuch taiyari karni hai....aur waha jake kuch hisab bhi barabar karna hai......
Brianna jo ab tak chup thi wo bol padi.....
My king aap akele waha nhi jaa sakte.....apke sath kisi ko to jana chahiye.....
Vikram....hum akele nhi jayenge....humare sath Shaily bhi jayegi.......main tumhe le jana chahta hun lekin.....isse humare kingdom pe khatra badh jayega........
yeh bolke Vikram apne singhasan se uth gaya aur bahar chala gaya......
wo abhi apne room mein tha.....
uske piche piche Brianna bhi aa gayi thi....Vikram abhi normal insan tha......Brianna bhi ek normal ladki jaise thi........
Brianna ake piche se Vikram ke gale lag gayi....uske ankhon mein thodi ansoon thi.....wo boli....mat jaiye na.....itne sadiyo baad to apse mulakat hui hai....firse juda nhi ho sakti.....
Vikram.....samjho Brianna jan jaroori hai.....abhi aagar main yaha raha to yaha pe khatra aur badh jayega........main abhi puri tarah se shakti shali nhi hua hun......aur mujhe tumhari behno ko bhi lana hai....
Brianna......acha thik hai.....jid nhi karti.....lekin apko kuch din yaha rukna hoga......uske bad chale jaiyega........
tabhi kamre ke darwaje pe knock hua......to do bohot hi khub surat Dark Elves andar ayi.....yeh thi Siya aur Miya....dono twins thi...
Dono ko dekhke Vikram bola.....kaise ho tum dono....tumse pehle kabhi mulakat nhi huyi.....lekin tumhari maa Meri bohoy khas yodha thi....usne ladai mein mere liye apni jaan bhi de di thi......tum mere liye bohog anmol ho...
Siya Miya....dono hi Vikram ke baat se khush ho gayi......
unhone Vikram ke bare mein ya yu kahein ke Raphael ke bars mein bohog kuch suna tha.....lekin aaj wahi shkas unke samne khada tha....
Siya thodi hesitation karke boli......My king kya ek baat puch sakti hun..
Vikram.....thoda muskura ke....Yehi na hum yeh insani sharir mein kaise aur kahan the......
Miya....yes My King....
Vikram.....yeh bohot lambi kahani hai.....kabhi bistar se sunna....
abhi tum dono jao.....
dono ke jate hi....Vikram Brianna se bola.....Brianna suno...mujhe jald se jald lautna hoga.....meri poori shaktiya pani hogi.....jo yahan baith ke sambhab nhi hai.....
Brianna....thik hai My Love
Vikram apne chehre pe ek shaitani hasi laate huye bola......ab hoga tabahi......
Superb Updateupdate...3
Intro........Vikram apne kahani ka hero.......ya Villain.....
2.Brianna......Yeh ek half Angel aur Half Devil hai
3.Demian .......yeh ek demon.....wo bhi high Level ka
4... Morgan.....yeh ek dwarf hai.....aur iski umar kayi hajaro saal hai
5.....Siya....aur Miya.....Dono Dark elves hai...
6. Colossus......yeh ek warrior hai.....aur Vikram ke army ka general bhi......
7.Shaily...... Yeh ek Vampire hai aur unki queen bhi.....
age jo bhi ayenge unka intro hota jayega......
Vikram ka asli Family ka intro bad mein hoga.......
Vikram abhi apne insani roop mein wapas aa chuka tha......tabhi waha pe ek ladki aayi.....aur Vikram ke samne jhuk gayi.......yeh thi Shaily.....ekdum safed skin.....ankh thodi laal.....hoth bhi ekdum laal aur do teekhe dant.....waise to vampires din mein nhi nikal sakte .......lekin Shaily din mein bhi nikal sakti hai.....
Aur yeh Vikram ke badoulat hai.....kaise future mein pata chalega.......
wo jhuki huyi hi boli......My Lord...wapsi mubarak ho......kaise hain ap....
Vikram.....uth jao shaily......aur hum ache hai.....Lekin yeh insani Sharir bas Kamjor hai.....kai dino se kuch na khand ke karan Kamjori ho rahi hai.......
Yeh sunte hi sabko hi khayal aya ke.....sab khushi mein itna kho gaye the unhe yeh baat yaad hi nhi rahi ke.....Vikram ab ek insan hai......use khane ki bhi zaroorat hoti hai......
Brianna bina kuch bole jhat se waha se nikal gayi......Vikram samajh gaya ke wo kyun gayi hai.....Morgan bhi izazat leke nikal gaya......
Demian bola......My King ap fresh ho jaiye.....tab tak apka khane ka bhi prabandh ho jayega......wo bhi nikal gaya......
tabhi bahar se ek maid aayi.....jo dikhne mein to insan thi.....lekin asal mein thi nhi.....aur yeh koi sadharan maid nhi thi.....Vikram ke castle mein aise 10 maid hai.....jinhe battle maids kehte hai.....
Yeh is Castle ki last line of defense hai......
jo maid aayi uska nam hai......Sana...
Vikram use dekhke thoda muskuraya.....aur bola....kaise ho sana.....Aaj bhi tum waise hi ho....jaise pehle thi.....
Sana....sar jhukaye huye boli.....My King hum ache hai.....aur ap to jante hain ke Humara umr kabhi badhega nhi.....yeh humari jati pe abhishap hai.......
Vikram.....wo kuch nhi bola....aur Fresh hone chal diya......wapas aya to Sana uske liye kapde leke Khadi thi...
Vikram ko usne taiyar kiya.....aur Dinning place pe le jane lagi.....
Vikram ne jane se mana kiya.....aur bola ke uska khnaa wahi pe lane ko.......
wo akhir mein sabke samne ana chahta tha.......
Vikram ne thoda bohot khaya......
phir Brianna Ayi....aur boli.....My King mujhe apko apke purane roop mein dekhna hai......jis roop mein ap mujhse mile the......
Vikram muskuraya......apna dono hath aa gaya.....aur dekhte hi dekhte uske pure sharir pe ek Armor aa gaya.....black color.....
Uski ankhein bhi ab Laal ho chuki thi........wo chalte huye apne kamre se nikla.....aur jaise hi darvar mein jane ke liye darwaja khula......to andar jitne bhi log the.....sabhi ghutno ke bal jhuk gaye.....aur apna sar niche kar liya......
Vikram jake apne Singhasan pe baith gaya.......
Vikram......sabhi uth jaiye.....
sab logone apna sar uthya lekin apne ghutne pe hi baithe rahe.....
Demian uthke Vikram ke samne aya aur phirse ghutno ke bal baith ke bola......My king....My lord....apko aaj apke Asli roop mein dekhke bohot khushi ho rahi hai.......
Vikram.....uth jaiye Demian. ....hume khushi huyi ....apki baaton se..
Aap sab log dhyan se suniye.....Ap sabko ab sabdhan rehna hoga.....Kingdom ki shuraksha puri tar diya jaye.......
Morgan...aap humare pramukh Updesh data hai....to aap is insani sharir ka koi ilaaj dhoondiye......
Demian....tum taiyari karo mujhe dharti pe lautna hoga.....bohot kuch taiyari karni hai....aur waha jake kuch hisab bhi barabar karna hai......
Brianna jo ab tak chup thi wo bol padi.....
My king aap akele waha nhi jaa sakte.....apke sath kisi ko to jana chahiye.....
Vikram....hum akele nhi jayenge....humare sath Shaily bhi jayegi.......main tumhe le jana chahta hun lekin.....isse humare kingdom pe khatra badh jayega........
yeh bolke Vikram apne singhasan se uth gaya aur bahar chala gaya......
wo abhi apne room mein tha.....
uske piche piche Brianna bhi aa gayi thi....Vikram abhi normal insan tha......Brianna bhi ek normal ladki jaise thi........
Brianna ake piche se Vikram ke gale lag gayi....uske ankhon mein thodi ansoon thi.....wo boli....mat jaiye na.....itne sadiyo baad to apse mulakat hui hai....firse juda nhi ho sakti.....
Vikram.....samjho Brianna jan jaroori hai.....abhi aagar main yaha raha to yaha pe khatra aur badh jayega........main abhi puri tarah se shakti shali nhi hua hun......aur mujhe tumhari behno ko bhi lana hai....
Brianna......acha thik hai.....jid nhi karti.....lekin apko kuch din yaha rukna hoga......uske bad chale jaiyega........
tabhi kamre ke darwaje pe knock hua......to do bohot hi khub surat Dark Elves andar ayi.....yeh thi Siya aur Miya....dono twins thi...
Dono ko dekhke Vikram bola.....kaise ho tum dono....tumse pehle kabhi mulakat nhi huyi.....lekin tumhari maa Meri bohoy khas yodha thi....usne ladai mein mere liye apni jaan bhi de di thi......tum mere liye bohog anmol ho...
Siya Miya....dono hi Vikram ke baat se khush ho gayi......
unhone Vikram ke bare mein ya yu kahein ke Raphael ke bars mein bohog kuch suna tha.....lekin aaj wahi shkas unke samne khada tha....
Siya thodi hesitation karke boli......My king kya ek baat puch sakti hun..
Vikram.....thoda muskura ke....Yehi na hum yeh insani sharir mein kaise aur kahan the......
Miya....yes My King....
Vikram.....yeh bohot lambi kahani hai.....kabhi bistar se sunna....
abhi tum dono jao.....
dono ke jate hi....Vikram Brianna se bola.....Brianna suno...mujhe jald se jald lautna hoga.....meri poori shaktiya pani hogi.....jo yahan baith ke sambhab nhi hai.....
Brianna....thik hai My Love
Vikram apne chehre pe ek shaitani hasi laate huye bola......ab hoga tabahi......