Adultery Rise of the Death (completed)

[Shanu]

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[Naik]

Update........24


Aaj pehle kuch baatein clear karna chahunga......


Vijendra apne jawani mein bohot hi aiyash kisam ka ladka tha....isi liye jab Malini ke gaon mein kisi kam se gaya tha.....waha use dekhke hawas jaag gayi.....aur phir kar dala ghapa ghap....wo waha 2 saal continuous jata tha.....aur isi bich Malini pregnant ho gayi.....aur Malini ke gharwale thode Raubdar kisam ki insan the......(inka bhi role age ayega)...jis kiye Vikram ko apni jaan bachane ki khatir shadi karna para.....

Shadi karne ke bad bhi usne Malini ko apne ghar na le jake kisi aur jagah rakha.....aur phir jab Sandhya ka janam hua to use apne ghar le gaya.....isi bich usne apne bare mein sabkuch Malini ko bataya tha.....aur yeh baatein jab Malini ke gharwalon ko pata chali to wo Malini ko wapas lana chahe.....to Malini ne Vikram ka side chuna.

Jisse yeh hua ke Malini ke ghar walo ke sath uske rishta thoda kharab ho gaya.....(inka introduction bhi inke role ke sath hi ayega)

Vijendra ke Do behne hai.....jinmese ek to Dusri Country mein rehti hai.....aur dusri India mein hi......Lekin wo apne Bhai ke ghar kabhi aati nhi hai......kyun wo age pata chalega....

Vijendra ka ek Family bussiness hai.....jo kafi acha khasa hai....aur Vijendra ka dada ek bohot bade Jamindar the....jisse inke pas jaidad ki koi kami nhi hai....

Jab Vikram ka janam hua tha....uske bad se Vijendra badal gaya tha....wo pariwar pe ache se dhyan deta....koi aiyashi nhi karta.....lekin Kuch saal bdse sab kuch badalne laga.....aiyash to wo phirse ban hi gaya....upar se apne biwi bacho ko torture karna suru kiya.....khas karke Vikram pe.....iska bhi raaz hai.....jo samay ke sath khulega.....


Back to story.....

Ek dusri planet.....

yeh wahi planet hai....jaha Woh Princess aur Raja the....

Princess abhi bohot gusse mein thi....kyunki jise wo dhund rahi thi.....apne jadui mirror mein uska kuch bhi pata nhi chal raha hai....wo apne jagne ke bad se isi kaam mein lagi huyi thi.....lekin kuch bhi hath nhi lag raha tha.....

Intro

Princess.....Emma.....khubsurat.....behad hi khubsurat.....lekin niyat se ulti....iski Jindagi mein bas ek hi laksh hai....badla.....

Raja.....Ethiop.....bohot hi Shaktishali raja hai....ajtak bas ekjan se hi yeh hare hai...jiska inhe koi gam nhi....inki umar kya hai....kisi ko nhi pata....

Yeh Raja aur Princess yeh ek aisi prajati se belong karte hai...jo ek warrior prajati hai.....aur yeh lakho saal tak zinda rehte hai....inki umar jitni hoti hai.....inki taqat bhi utni hi badhti hai.....

Age inke bare mein aur bhi pata chalega.....


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princess gusse mein apne jadui aine ko tod deti hai.....aur Tabhi Raja usi kamre mein aa jate hai.....aur apne Beti ki aur us kamre ki halat dekhke aur chouk jate hai.....

Raja.....yeh kya kiya beti tumne....Jadui Mirror ko tod diya.....pata hai na tumhe isse kya hoga.....

Emma.....gurrate huye.....jo hoga dekh lungi....yeh koi kam ka nhi tha....kabse uske bare mein khoj rahi hun lekein kuch nhi bata raha hai....

Raja.....yeh to hona hi tha....tum kabhi bhi meri baat nhi sunti ho.....pehle bhi galti kar chuke ho ab bhi kar rahi ho....

Emma.....aap mujhe mat sikhaiye....ek to aap har gaye usse....upar se maine phele bhi usse badla liya hai.....isbar bhi lungi....aur aap humesha se galat hi rahenge.....

Raja....dukhi awaj mein.....yahi to main chahta hun....ke main galat ho jaun.....lekin dukh is baat ki hai ke aulad ki gakti ki saja Maa Baap ko bhi bhugatna parta hai.....

Emma....gusse mein hi....aap mujhe gyan mat dijiye....agar madat kar sakte hai to kijiye...warna jaiye....main khud sab dekh lungi.....

Raja....Agar apni hi man mani karna chahti ho to thik hai suno......jab tak uska Dragon kaid hai....tum use dhund nhi sakti....aur yeh mat samajhna ke woh kamjor hai.....agar isbar humara pura Kingdom bhi uske khilaf khade ho jaye....to bhi wo akele hi hume hara sakta hai......aur upar se uske sath isbar kuch ya koi hai....jo mujhe nhi pata.....jo use protect kar rahi hai.....

Emma.....ab main dekhti hun....kaise isbar mujhse bachta hai.....pehle bhi tumhe mara hai....isbar bhi maroge tum mere hatho....aur yeh hogi akhri bar....

Raja.....ek akhri baat....tum apna kabar khud khod rahi ho.....abhi bhi waqt hai...sambhal jao...warna main bhi tumhe bacha nhi paonga.....

Emma....main dekh lungi....main kya kar rahi hun...woh ache se janti hun....


Yeh bolke Princess waha se nikal jati hai....aur jati hai usi Planet pe rahi ek Ped ke paas .....jiska naam hai Tree of Knowledge......

Ab chalte hai dusri taraf...wahi usi andhere mein ghira planet pe....

Planet pe halchal pehle se ab zyada ho gayi thi.....harpal gurrane ki awaj...aur nirantar ho rahi bhukamp aur Volcano ka phatna.....jaisi kisi utasb ki taiyari ho rahi hai....

wahi pas ke planet ke Guardian aaj bohot khush tha....isiliye usne apne planet ke logo ko kuch batane ke liye aaj bulaya tha.....

Guardian.....mujhe aaj yeh batate huye bohot khushi ho rahi hai....hunare bhagwan bohot hi jald humare sath honge.....

Guardian ki is bat se planet ki logo mein utash dekhte hi banti thi.....

Guardian....ap sab Shant ho jaiye.....mujhe pata lag raha hai...mere Malik najdik hai.....isliye...agle 2 hafte tak...Dark planet ke aspas humara koi bhi Space ship nhi jana chahiye....kyunki mere Malik ki sena jagne wali hai....jisse agar koi waha gaya to usko apni jaan bhi gawana par sakta hai.....

Yeh batake wo aur bhi bohot sari baat batata hai....apni itihas ke bare mein....kaise unke planet ka sthapna hua....kaise woh log janme....yahi sab....

Last mein Guardian sab ko shubhkamnaye dete hai.....jiske bad Planet pe utsab ki taiyari hona suru ho gayi....apne Bhagwan ko phirse unke bich pane ki khushi to sabko hoti hai....inme bhi wahi thi.....jisse hor shor se taiyariya hone lagi.....


ab chalte hai un 5 Planets pe....jo Raphael ke lautne ke sth woh bhi laut aye....Yaha pe bhi har jaga khushi thi ke unka Malik wapas aa chuka hai.....Morgan ne in Planets ki Sena ko taiyar rehne ko bol diya tha....kyunke use pata tha ke .Vikram abhi waha nhi hai....jiska faida kayi log uthana chahenge....aur inpe humla bhi ho sakta hai....

Lekin inpe humla nhi hua tha....kuch khas logo ko chhodke in Planets ke bare mein kisiko jyada pata nhi tha....aur jisne bhi planets pe phochne ki kosish ki wo ek Barrier ko bhed nhi paaye aur wahi mar gaye.....

Aisi hi ek prachin prajati thi....inke under kayi planets the...jinpe yeh Raaj karte the....aur inka ek Home planet tha... Jahase inka har bada kam hota tha....aur wahi unka Capital bhi tha.....aaj yaha pe ek Sabha ka ayojan hua tha....jo yeh Jung pe jaane se pehle har bar karte the....take yeh apne strategy aur dushman ke bare mein jyada se jyada pata kar sake....


Yaha kuch commanders the....aur unke Raja .....

Raja....haa to is naye planets je bare mein jo bhi jo kuch janta ho wo age ake bataye....

Raja ne apne commanders se pucha to unme se ek age ake bola......My King....hume inke bare mein jyada kuch nhi pata....kyunke jab bhi humara koi bhi ship planets ke aspas bhi gaya to unhe nasht kar diya gaya....aur abtak Sekro jane mare gaye hai un planets ke bare mein janne ke kosish mein......

Raja....thik hai....kya kisiko kuch bhi andaja hai ke humara mukabala kisse hai.....aur kaun humare khilaf khada hua hai.....

Tabhi unmese ek dusra Commanader bolta hai......My King....hume bas itna pata hai ke yeh bohot Purane planets hai....aur har panch pe aisi Barrier hai jo humne aaj se pehle kabhi bhi nhi dekha hai........aur mujhe lagta hai Elder hi bas hume kuch bata sakte hai....

Raja.....thik hai to unhe bulaya jaye....

Elder.....kahe to inka Raaj guru....ek bohot hi gyani aur sant byakti....inhe is universe ki suruwat se leke bohot kuch ka gyan hai...jis wajah se Raja bhi inhe bohot manta hai.....


Kuch der bad Elder waha aate hai...aur bolte hai....Is Empire ke King ko main kaise madat kar sakta hun.......

Raja....hey Elder....ap Maha gyani hai....hume aaj phirse apki sahayata chahiye.....kripya karke aap humara margdarshan kare....

Yeh bolke Raja unhe un 5 planets ke bare mein bata ta hai....aur wo yeh kyun janna chahte hai woh bhi bataya...

Elder apne ankhe band kar kuch der baithe rehte hai....aur phir kuch hi der main unki ankhein khul jaati hai....unke chehre pe dar saaf saaf dekha jaa sakta tha.....Raja ne bhi yeh baat note kar liya....woh bhi chinta mein aa gaya....kyunke use pata tha ke agar Elder kisi baat ko leke dar gaya hai...to iska matlab baat bohot badi hai....

Elder.....My King....galti se bhi in Planets ke khilaf jung ka ghosna mat kijiye.....warna sab barbad ho jayega.....yeh bhukhe sadiyo se.....jung ke bhukhe...bas apne Raja ke intejar mein hai....

Unke awaj mein dar ssaf mehsoos kiya jaa sakta tha.....ek Commander bohot hi ghamandi tha...usne ghamand mein pucha.....aisa kya hai inme....hum unse kayi guna taqatwar hai....humare pas Arbo ki sena hai ....chutkiyo mein khatam kar denge....

Elder....hahahahhaha....to abtak kya ukhad liya tumne.....yad rakhna ye Ahankar hi Sabko le dubta hai....aur in 5 planets pe Universe ki 5 sabse prachin parajatiya rehti hai....aur sabse khatarnak.....aur Inka Raja hai Undead King.....


bas sabki phat ke chhattish....kyunke Undead king ek Myth hai inke liye....jisse yeh darte the....sirf yahi nhi sab darte hai...

Elder.....sadiyo phele inke Raja ke sath yeh bhi gayab ho gaye the....aur ek baat My King...ek bohot badi Jung pas hai...ab apko decide karna hai ke aap kis paksh mein rahenge Undead King ke khilaf ya unke sath......


Vikram ka Mansion....

Morning time....

Vikram ne Tamanna ko kisi kaam mein busy kar diya tha ....aur use bola tha ke woh kuch din ke liye woh Mansi ko leke kahi jaa rahe hai sath mein Siya aur Miya bhi......

subeh 9 baje ke karib Vikram ek private plane pe bakiyo ko sath leke nikal gaya....Jaha pe Demian abhi tha....aur phir waha se woh jane wale the.....


Anjaani raho mein....jaani manjil ke pass....



to be continued......

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[Naik]

Update.....25

Aage....

Kaberi bohot pareshan thi.....ek to uske sare plans pe pani phir raha tha......upar se uski dono betia gyab thi.....usne bohot kosish ki pata lagane ki lekin.....sab bekar kuch bhi pata nhi chal raha tha.....

Police bhi lagi huyi thi.....lekin Kaberi ko kuch gadbad lag rahi thi.....isliye usne apne admiyo ko bhi laga di....phir bhi sab bekar....

Woh itni pareshan isliye thi kyunke uski najar humesha apne betiyo pe hoti hai.....kahi koi unhe nuksan na phochaye.....isliye ke woh ache se janti thi ke jis raste pe wo chal rahi hai....usme khatra bohot hai.....lekin usdin jab Mansi ghar se bahar nikli tabse uska koi ata pata nahi.....nahi Tamanna ka koi khabar hai....

Kaberi apni hi socho mein gum thi....tabhi wahi Inspector aya jo Malini aur Sandhya ko arrest karne aya tha......

Kaberi.....kya bat hai Inspector aaj ap yaha kisliye....

Inspector....kaam to bohot hai Kaberi ji....bas mere kuch sawal ke jawab de dijiye....

Kaberi.....ji aap puchiye....

Inspector.....pehli baat 5 mahine pehle apne jo Rape case darj ki thi....woh to jhuti nikli....kyunke jis doctor ne appke medical records banaye the usne kabool kiya hai ke wo jhuthe the....
dusri baat.....Criminal ka police hirasat mein murder hona...

tisri baat....Murder suspect ka police hirasat se kidnap hona..
chouthi aur akhri baat.....ab apke betiyo ka gayab hona.....mujhe yeh sab koi coincidence to nahi lagta....upar se apke pati bhi yaha nhi hai....

Kaberi.....aap kehna kya chahte hai...maine yeh sab kiya....

Inspector.....ab mere lagne na lagne se kya jata hai.....mujhe jo dikh raha hai ....main wahi bol raha hun....bas itna kehna chahunga....agar kahi jana ho to jara humein bata kar jaiyega....

Kaberi......inspector apne had mein raho

ins.....hum apne had mein hi....agar had par kar de to ap yaha nhi hoti....chalta hun....bhagne ki kosish bekar hai....meri najar hunesha hogi....

Inspector ki baat se Kaberi timila gayi thi....ek mamuli inspector aaj use dhamki deke gaya hai....jo use hajam nhi ho rahi thi.....usne turant kisi ko call laga diya....

In call....

Kaberi....hello...kya tumhe pata hai yaha kya kya ho raha hai.....yaha aaj mujhe ek mamuli inspector dhamki deke gaya ke main sbdhan rahu.....aur tum pata nhi kaha busy ho....

.........apni aukat bhul rahi ho tum....jara awaj niche karke baat karo.....yaha main apni problems phasa hun....tumhari betiyo ko dhundne ke liye main baitha nhi hun..

dusri taraf se gusse mein jawab aaya....

Kaberi.....to aur kya karoon.....tumhara har admi nikamma nikla.....na Vijendra ka kuch pata kar paya...nahi un Maa betiyo ka.....upar se ab meri dono betiya bhi gayab hai....

.......mujhe koi parwah nhi teri beti jiye ya mare......jab tak tu meri kam ki thi....tab tak main sab sehta tha.....ab tu meri kisi kam ki nahi hai.....

Kaberi.....tum aisa nhi kar sakte.....tumne to kaha tha ke tum mujhse pyar karte ho.....jis liye main yeh sab kar rahi thi.....

Kaberi ke ankhon mein ab ansoon aa chuke the....

.........hahahhahaha....pyar aur woh bhi tujh jaise Randi se.....jo pata nhi kitne hi mardo ki bistar garam kar chuki hai.....are jo Aurat apne pati ki na huyi....wo mera kya hogi.....aur tu pyar ke liye nhi paiso ke liye yeh sab kar rahi hai.....yeh to tu bhi janti hai......ab phone rakh .....dobara call mat karna....jab kam hoga to main bata dunga....

Kaberi.....nhi nhi nhi...tum aisa nhi kar sakte......hello.....hello...hello...

Kaberi hello hello karti rahi lekin dusri taraf se koi jawab nhi aya.....

Kaberi hatash hoke baith gayi.....ajse phele usne apne faislo pe kabhi bhi gaur nhi ki thi.....lekin aaj use apne failse apne har kadam apne ankhon ke samne tair rahe the....jiske wajah se aaj woh is jagah khadi thi....aj uske pas bhale hi daulat ho....lekin apna kehne ko koi nhi hai.....

Tabhi usne ksii ko phirse call kiya....

Kaberi.....rote huye.....hello didi main musibat mein hun....mujhe apki madat chahiye.....jaldi yaha aaiye.....

Dusri taraf.....kya hua tumhe.....thik hai main aati hun....

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Mr Shadow bohot gusse mein tha....aaj uska samrajya khatam hone aya tha....aur wo kuch kar bhi nhi paa raha tha....usne apni eri se choti tak ka jor laga diya... lekin koi result nhi nikla....

Jinke balbute pe wo Raaj karta tha.....aaj unmese adhe se jyada ya to mare gaye hai....yaa phir Raphael ka sath dete hai.....

Haa....Raphael....yahi to aari fasad ki jad hai....usne Rapahel ke bare mein janne ki bohot kosish ki.....kaun hai...kahan se ata hai....kuch bhi pata nhi chal raha tha.....uske khas admi PM bhi uske khilaf ho gaya hai....kaise use nhi pata.....

Use yeh to pata chal chuka tha ke Jitne bhi Dons aur Gangster hai sabke sab ab Raphael ka kaha mante hai....aur uska yeh samrajya dekhta hai Demian.....yeh usse bhi badi paheli hai.....ke yeh log kaise yeh sab kar rahe hai....aur kyun....sabse bada sawal tha kyun.....??

Demian ne dheere dheere karke puri India ko apne hukumat pe le liya tha....upar se to sab kuch sarkar Niyantrit kar raha tha...lekin andar se sab kuch uske hath mein tha.....lekin ek baat thi....crime rate kam ho gayi thi....khatam nhi.....kyunke dar hona jarori hai....


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Dusri taarf Mansi behosh ho chuki thi....kyunke Vikram ne uska Memory wapas lane ka process suru kar diya tha.....

Mansi ka insani sarir uska asli taqat jhel nhi paa raha tha....jis liye Vikram ko use naya Sharir bhi dena pada.....yeh sab kam hone mein abhi 1 hafte lagne wale the.....

kyunki baki sabme Mansi sabse jyada taqatwar hai....siwaye ek ko chhod ke.....

Vikram abhi Necro sword ko pane ke liye safar mein tha....use jayda takilf nhi huyi dhundne mein....kyunke Demian adhe se jyada kam pehle hi kar chuka tha....

Vikram abhi ek planet pe tha....jaha har taraf bas banjar jamin thi.....dur dur tak kuch bhi nhi.....woh yaha tha kyunke age ka rasta use yahi se milne wali thi....

Siya....bhaiya yeh hun kaha hai.....yaha to dur dur tak kuch bhi nhi hai....

Vikram.....yeh ek samay pe ek khushal jagah hua karti thi.....lekin us jung mein barbad ho gayi thi....lekin yaha pe mera ek saman hai....jo usne chupayi thi...mere jane ke bad.....

Vikram yeh bolke apne hatho mein Blue color ka Flame nikal ta hai....aur jamin pe marta hai....

Jaise hi jamin pe Flame touch hota hai waise hi jamin kampne lagti hai......aur thodi hi der mein Jamin far ke ek bohot bada Mandir jaisa structure khada ho jata hai....jisse Vikram muskura deta hai.....


Vikram jaise jaise age badh raha tha use dheere dheere apni khoyi huyi yaadein wapas mil rahi thi....aur jaise jaise use uski yaadein mil rahi thi....use age ke raston ke bare mein bhi pata chal raha tha....

Khair Vikram Siya Aur Miya ko leke building ke andar jane lagta hai....jaise jaise woh age badh rahe the....waise waise unhe chunotiyo ka bhi samna karna par raha tha....jinhe wo asani se par kar rahe the....

Jab wo main hall mein pohoche to unhe unke samne dikha ek talawar...jo ek pathar mein gadi huyi thi....

woh log abhi thoda age badhe hi the...ke dono taraf se do pathar ke danab unke samne aa gaye.....aur unhe rok diya....

Siya Miya....bhaiya ap bas show ka maa lijiye.....huk dekhte hai inhe....

bas lag gayi dono behne....lekin thode masakkat ke bad dono ne dono danab ko hara hi diya....

Miya....bapre yeh dono to khatam hi nahi ho rahe the....hum to thak gaye.....lekin wo talwar kya hai bhaiya jiske liye hum yaha aaye hai.....

Vikram....agar itna hi asan hota to ise koi bhi hasil kar leta....aur jo sword hai hum uske liye nhi aye hai....yeh to bas ek chabi hai....uske bad jo milega....wo asli chij hai...

yeh bolke Vikram age badhke sword ko hath lagata hai....hath lagte hi bahar tufan uthne lagti hai....bijli kadakne lagti hai.....andhi aa jati ha....

Vikram ne jaise hi sword ko nikala....waise hi kahi se Black flames ane lagti haai......jo Vikram ke Sharir mein samane lagi....


Siya Miya ne jaise hi Flames ko dekhi unke muh se bas itna hi nikli........Flames of Gaya


to be continued.......

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[Prince sumit]

Update........24


Aaj pehle kuch baatein clear karna chahunga......


Vijendra apne jawani mein bohot hi aiyash kisam ka ladka tha....isi liye jab Malini ke gaon mein kisi kam se gaya tha.....waha use dekhke hawas jaag gayi.....aur phir kar dala ghapa ghap....wo waha 2 saal continuous jata tha.....aur isi bich Malini pregnant ho gayi.....aur Malini ke gharwale thode Raubdar kisam ki insan the......(inka bhi role age ayega)...jis kiye Vikram ko apni jaan bachane ki khatir shadi karna para.....

Shadi karne ke bad bhi usne Malini ko apne ghar na le jake kisi aur jagah rakha.....aur phir jab Sandhya ka janam hua to use apne ghar le gaya.....isi bich usne apne bare mein sabkuch Malini ko bataya tha.....aur yeh baatein jab Malini ke gharwalon ko pata chali to wo Malini ko wapas lana chahe.....to Malini ne Vikram ka side chuna.

Jisse yeh hua ke Malini ke ghar walo ke sath uske rishta thoda kharab ho gaya.....(inka introduction bhi inke role ke sath hi ayega)

Vijendra ke Do behne hai.....jinmese ek to Dusri Country mein rehti hai.....aur dusri India mein hi......Lekin wo apne Bhai ke ghar kabhi aati nhi hai......kyun wo age pata chalega....

Vijendra ka ek Family bussiness hai.....jo kafi acha khasa hai....aur Vijendra ka dada ek bohot bade Jamindar the....jisse inke pas jaidad ki koi kami nhi hai....

Jab Vikram ka janam hua tha....uske bad se Vijendra badal gaya tha....wo pariwar pe ache se dhyan deta....koi aiyashi nhi karta.....lekin Kuch saal bdse sab kuch badalne laga.....aiyash to wo phirse ban hi gaya....upar se apne biwi bacho ko torture karna suru kiya.....khas karke Vikram pe.....iska bhi raaz hai.....jo samay ke sath khulega.....


Back to story.....

Ek dusri planet.....

yeh wahi planet hai....jaha Woh Princess aur Raja the....

Princess abhi bohot gusse mein thi....kyunki jise wo dhund rahi thi.....apne jadui mirror mein uska kuch bhi pata nhi chal raha hai....wo apne jagne ke bad se isi kaam mein lagi huyi thi.....lekin kuch bhi hath nhi lag raha tha.....

Intro

Princess.....Emma.....khubsurat.....behad hi khubsurat.....lekin niyat se ulti....iski Jindagi mein bas ek hi laksh hai....badla.....

Raja.....Ethiop.....bohot hi Shaktishali raja hai....ajtak bas ekjan se hi yeh hare hai...jiska inhe koi gam nhi....inki umar kya hai....kisi ko nhi pata....

Yeh Raja aur Princess yeh ek aisi prajati se belong karte hai...jo ek warrior prajati hai.....aur yeh lakho saal tak zinda rehte hai....inki umar jitni hoti hai.....inki taqat bhi utni hi badhti hai.....

Age inke bare mein aur bhi pata chalega.....


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princess gusse mein apne jadui aine ko tod deti hai.....aur Tabhi Raja usi kamre mein aa jate hai.....aur apne Beti ki aur us kamre ki halat dekhke aur chouk jate hai.....

Raja.....yeh kya kiya beti tumne....Jadui Mirror ko tod diya.....pata hai na tumhe isse kya hoga.....

Emma.....gurrate huye.....jo hoga dekh lungi....yeh koi kam ka nhi tha....kabse uske bare mein khoj rahi hun lekein kuch nhi bata raha hai....

Raja.....yeh to hona hi tha....tum kabhi bhi meri baat nhi sunti ho.....pehle bhi galti kar chuke ho ab bhi kar rahi ho....

Emma.....aap mujhe mat sikhaiye....ek to aap har gaye usse....upar se maine phele bhi usse badla liya hai.....isbar bhi lungi....aur aap humesha se galat hi rahenge.....

Raja....dukhi awaj mein.....yahi to main chahta hun....ke main galat ho jaun.....lekin dukh is baat ki hai ke aulad ki gakti ki saja Maa Baap ko bhi bhugatna parta hai.....

Emma....gusse mein hi....aap mujhe gyan mat dijiye....agar madat kar sakte hai to kijiye...warna jaiye....main khud sab dekh lungi.....

Raja....Agar apni hi man mani karna chahti ho to thik hai suno......jab tak uska Dragon kaid hai....tum use dhund nhi sakti....aur yeh mat samajhna ke woh kamjor hai.....agar isbar humara pura Kingdom bhi uske khilaf khade ho jaye....to bhi wo akele hi hume hara sakta hai......aur upar se uske sath isbar kuch ya koi hai....jo mujhe nhi pata.....jo use protect kar rahi hai.....

Emma.....ab main dekhti hun....kaise isbar mujhse bachta hai.....pehle bhi tumhe mara hai....isbar bhi maroge tum mere hatho....aur yeh hogi akhri bar....

Raja.....ek akhri baat....tum apna kabar khud khod rahi ho.....abhi bhi waqt hai...sambhal jao...warna main bhi tumhe bacha nhi paonga.....

Emma....main dekh lungi....main kya kar rahi hun...woh ache se janti hun....


Yeh bolke Princess waha se nikal jati hai....aur jati hai usi Planet pe rahi ek Ped ke paas .....jiska naam hai Tree of Knowledge......

Ab chalte hai dusri taraf...wahi usi andhere mein ghira planet pe....

Planet pe halchal pehle se ab zyada ho gayi thi.....harpal gurrane ki awaj...aur nirantar ho rahi bhukamp aur Volcano ka phatna.....jaisi kisi utasb ki taiyari ho rahi hai....

wahi pas ke planet ke Guardian aaj bohot khush tha....isiliye usne apne planet ke logo ko kuch batane ke liye aaj bulaya tha.....

Guardian.....mujhe aaj yeh batate huye bohot khushi ho rahi hai....hunare bhagwan bohot hi jald humare sath honge.....

Guardian ki is bat se planet ki logo mein utash dekhte hi banti thi.....

Guardian....ap sab Shant ho jaiye.....mujhe pata lag raha hai...mere Malik najdik hai.....isliye...agle 2 hafte tak...Dark planet ke aspas humara koi bhi Space ship nhi jana chahiye....kyunki mere Malik ki sena jagne wali hai....jisse agar koi waha gaya to usko apni jaan bhi gawana par sakta hai.....

Yeh batake wo aur bhi bohot sari baat batata hai....apni itihas ke bare mein....kaise unke planet ka sthapna hua....kaise woh log janme....yahi sab....

Last mein Guardian sab ko shubhkamnaye dete hai.....jiske bad Planet pe utsab ki taiyari hona suru ho gayi....apne Bhagwan ko phirse unke bich pane ki khushi to sabko hoti hai....inme bhi wahi thi.....jisse hor shor se taiyariya hone lagi.....


ab chalte hai un 5 Planets pe....jo Raphael ke lautne ke sth woh bhi laut aye....Yaha pe bhi har jaga khushi thi ke unka Malik wapas aa chuka hai.....Morgan ne in Planets ki Sena ko taiyar rehne ko bol diya tha....kyunke use pata tha ke .Vikram abhi waha nhi hai....jiska faida kayi log uthana chahenge....aur inpe humla bhi ho sakta hai....

Lekin inpe humla nhi hua tha....kuch khas logo ko chhodke in Planets ke bare mein kisiko jyada pata nhi tha....aur jisne bhi planets pe phochne ki kosish ki wo ek Barrier ko bhed nhi paaye aur wahi mar gaye.....

Aisi hi ek prachin prajati thi....inke under kayi planets the...jinpe yeh Raaj karte the....aur inka ek Home planet tha... Jahase inka har bada kam hota tha....aur wahi unka Capital bhi tha.....aaj yaha pe ek Sabha ka ayojan hua tha....jo yeh Jung pe jaane se pehle har bar karte the....take yeh apne strategy aur dushman ke bare mein jyada se jyada pata kar sake....


Yaha kuch commanders the....aur unke Raja .....

Raja....haa to is naye planets je bare mein jo bhi jo kuch janta ho wo age ake bataye....

Raja ne apne commanders se pucha to unme se ek age ake bola......My King....hume inke bare mein jyada kuch nhi pata....kyunke jab bhi humara koi bhi ship planets ke aspas bhi gaya to unhe nasht kar diya gaya....aur abtak Sekro jane mare gaye hai un planets ke bare mein janne ke kosish mein......

Raja....thik hai....kya kisiko kuch bhi andaja hai ke humara mukabala kisse hai.....aur kaun humare khilaf khada hua hai.....

Tabhi unmese ek dusra Commanader bolta hai......My King....hume bas itna pata hai ke yeh bohot Purane planets hai....aur har panch pe aisi Barrier hai jo humne aaj se pehle kabhi bhi nhi dekha hai........aur mujhe lagta hai Elder hi bas hume kuch bata sakte hai....

Raja.....thik hai to unhe bulaya jaye....

Elder.....kahe to inka Raaj guru....ek bohot hi gyani aur sant byakti....inhe is universe ki suruwat se leke bohot kuch ka gyan hai...jis wajah se Raja bhi inhe bohot manta hai.....


Kuch der bad Elder waha aate hai...aur bolte hai....Is Empire ke King ko main kaise madat kar sakta hun.......

Raja....hey Elder....ap Maha gyani hai....hume aaj phirse apki sahayata chahiye.....kripya karke aap humara margdarshan kare....

Yeh bolke Raja unhe un 5 planets ke bare mein bata ta hai....aur wo yeh kyun janna chahte hai woh bhi bataya...

Elder apne ankhe band kar kuch der baithe rehte hai....aur phir kuch hi der main unki ankhein khul jaati hai....unke chehre pe dar saaf saaf dekha jaa sakta tha.....Raja ne bhi yeh baat note kar liya....woh bhi chinta mein aa gaya....kyunke use pata tha ke agar Elder kisi baat ko leke dar gaya hai...to iska matlab baat bohot badi hai....

Elder.....My King....galti se bhi in Planets ke khilaf jung ka ghosna mat kijiye.....warna sab barbad ho jayega.....yeh bhukhe sadiyo se.....jung ke bhukhe...bas apne Raja ke intejar mein hai....

Unke awaj mein dar ssaf mehsoos kiya jaa sakta tha.....ek Commander bohot hi ghamandi tha...usne ghamand mein pucha.....aisa kya hai inme....hum unse kayi guna taqatwar hai....humare pas Arbo ki sena hai ....chutkiyo mein khatam kar denge....

Elder....hahahahhaha....to abtak kya ukhad liya tumne.....yad rakhna ye Ahankar hi Sabko le dubta hai....aur in 5 planets pe Universe ki 5 sabse prachin parajatiya rehti hai....aur sabse khatarnak.....aur Inka Raja hai Undead King.....


bas sabki phat ke chhattish....kyunke Undead king ek Myth hai inke liye....jisse yeh darte the....sirf yahi nhi sab darte hai...

Elder.....sadiyo phele inke Raja ke sath yeh bhi gayab ho gaye the....aur ek baat My King...ek bohot badi Jung pas hai...ab apko decide karna hai ke aap kis paksh mein rahenge Undead King ke khilaf ya unke sath......


Vikram ka Mansion....

Morning time....

Vikram ne Tamanna ko kisi kaam mein busy kar diya tha ....aur use bola tha ke woh kuch din ke liye woh Mansi ko leke kahi jaa rahe hai sath mein Siya aur Miya bhi......

subeh 9 baje ke karib Vikram ek private plane pe bakiyo ko sath leke nikal gaya....Jaha pe Demian abhi tha....aur phir waha se woh jane wale the.....


Anjaani raho mein....jaani manjil ke pass....



to be continued......

Nice update

 

[Saikumar]

Update.......2

Demian aur Brianna ne milkar us body ko leke ek portal se nikal ke aa gaye....wo abhi ek Castle ke samne khade the........




castle kuch is prakar tha

yeh Castle thi Undead King ki......yeh unke kingdom ki rajdhani mein thi.......is castle ka nam tha.......Fort Magmel.

Brianna ne us ladke ki body ko leke us castle me hi bane ek bohot hi bade aur alishan room mein leke gayi.....aur waha ek bade se bed pe lita diya.......

wo bhi wahi pe us bed ke sirhane baith gayi......uske ankhon mein thodi ansoon the.....aur chehre pe khusi.......wo dheere se us ladke ki taraf dekhke boli.....My King.....My love......bohot intezaar karwa liya apne.........ab to uth jaiye....dekhiye apki praja apke liye kayi sadiyo se intezaar kar rahi hai........


idhar jaise hi Kala pani Ladke ki srir mein gyaa to Universe mein 5 worlds apne aap prakat ho gaye.......

yeh the Lost worlds jo ek samy mein ek sath thi.....aur inka ek hi Raja hota tha.......Universe ka Sabse khtaarnak aur Taqat war Raja.......Lekin kuch Sadiyo pehle yeh worlds gayab ho chuke the..........apne king ke Marne ke baad..........


aise hi kuch din Nikal jata hai.....lekin us body mein kuch bhi hulchal nhi hoti..........

wo ladka ek bohot hi gehri neend mein tha.......

wo abhi ek kale andhere jagah mein bhatak raha tha......
tabhi uske samne ek shaks ata hai.......jo usse kuch 3-4 saal bada hoga......





samne wala ladka......yaha kaha bhtaak rahe ho Vikram......

acha to Hero ka naam Vikram hai........

Vikram......tum.....tum kaun ho....aur mera naam kaise jante ho........aur mujhe to goli lagi thi......main zinda kaise hun......aur main kahan hun.......

samne wala.....aram se aram se......thora patience rakho.......

chalo samne chalte hai......

tabhi waha ka scene hi change ho gaya........abhi jahan charo taraf andhera tha ......kuch bhi thik se dikhai nhi de raha tha.....wahi ab wo log ek jagah baithe the......jahan ek talab jaisa bana hua tha.....aur pas mein hi baithne ki jagah thi.......



Wo dono wahi pas mein rakhe pathar pe baith gaye......Vikram ab bhi confused tha.....uske man mein kayi swal the.....lekin jawab nhi......

phir wo ladka bolne laga......sabse pehli baat to....maim jab tak na bolun bich mein mat bolna.....

to tumhe goli lagi thi.....aur tum khayi se gir gaye the.....Lekin tum zinda ho......abhi tum apne Mind ke duniya mein ho.....

aur rahi sawal ke main kaun hun to....jawab hai.....main tum hi hun.....

ab kuch puchne se pehle samne talab mein jao.....aur ek dubki lagao.....

asha karta hun to tumhare sawalo ka jawab milenge....

Vikram us ladke ki baat mante huye.....talab ke andar jane laga.....

jab pani uske sine ke barabar aa gaya.....to usne dubki lagayi......


jaise hi uska Sir pani ke niche gaya....... To use apni pichle zindagu ke yaadein dikhne lagi....

ke. Wo kaun tha.....kaisa tha....kya kya karta tha......uski taqat kya kya thi........use pata chal gaya tha ke Uska naam Tha Raphael......
matlb jo dusra ladka tha wo hai asli Raphael......

Vikram ko sab kuch pata chal gaya tha apne bare mein......to wo talab se bhaar aya.......

bahar ake wo Raphael ke samne aya......
tan Raphael bola.......to i think tumhe sab kuch pata chak gaya hoga......

Vikram.....pata to bohot kuch chala....lekin agar main itna hi bada King tha to meri maut kaise huyi.......

Raphael ......iske bre mein zyada mat socho.....jab waqt ayega.....tumhe khud ba khud pata chal jyega.....bas is bare mein kisise puchna mat.....

Vikram.....thik hai jaisa tum kaho.....lekin ab mujhe kya karna hoga.......

Raphael.....sabse pehle tum purn man se mujhe swikar karo.....hum dono ko ek hone do....take tumhe tumhara pura shakti aur roop mil sake........

Vikram.....thik hai main tumhe purn roop se swikar karta hun....


uske yeh bolte hi.....Raphael ka Sharir ek Energy mein badal gaya.....aur Vikram ke sarir mein sama gya.....

Vikram ko asahaniya dard hone laga.......uske charo taraf roahni fel gayi......

idhar Castle ke room mein bhi chamak phail gayi......

Chamak itna zaida thi ke Room ke andar jitne bhi log the sabko apni ankhe bnd karni padi......

jab roshni kam huyi to unke. Samne......



Vikram khada tha Golden Armor mein......

jise dekhke.....Brianna....Demian....aur ek budha admi....jo kamre mein abhi the.....wo jhuk gaye.....My King bolke......

Vikram.....uth jaiye....ap sab

wo sab uth gaye.....sabke chehre pe khushi thi....khas karke Brianna ke....

Vikram....Brianna gale nhi lagenge apni pati ke.......

Brianna jhat se daud ke gayi aur Vikram ke gale lag gayi.....aur jo aanshoon abhi uske ankhon mein ruke huye thi.....wo ab behne lagi....


Vikram.....Brianna sambhalo khud ko....dekho hum wapas aa chuke hain......ab chup ho jaiye....isbar apko humse koi bhi juda nhi kar payega........


Brianna......Vikram se aur lipat gayi.....subkte huye boli.....My King ap to wapas aa gaye......lekin humare Behne......

Vikram.....wo bhi zaldi hi mil jayenge.....jitna mujhe pata hai....wo sabhi mere sath Prithwi pe hi the.......

Vikram samne khada Demian aur aur us budhe admi ke taraf dekhke bola......kaise ho Demian....aur Morgan......

Demian.....hum ache hai...ab aap wapas aa gaye hai....to sab thik hoga.....

Morgan.....My King apki wapasi ka hi to rasta hum dekh rhe the Sadiyo se.....

Vikram....sahi kaha hum wapas aa chuke hai......pichli bar se ab kuch alag hoga.......isbr koi bhi nhi bachega.........


to be continued.......

Excellent update
I think abi pruthwi par jayega badla lene ke liye

 

[Saikumar]

update...3



Intro........Vikram apne kahani ka hero.......ya Villain.....
2.Brianna......Yeh ek half Angel aur Half Devil hai
3.Demian .......yeh ek demon.....wo bhi high Level ka
4... Morgan.....yeh ek dwarf hai.....aur iski umar kayi hajaro saal hai

5.....Siya....aur Miya.....Dono Dark elves hai...
6. Colossus......yeh ek warrior hai.....aur Vikram ke army ka general bhi......
7.Shaily...... Yeh ek Vampire hai aur unki queen bhi.....

age jo bhi ayenge unka intro hota jayega......

Vikram ka asli Family ka intro bad mein hoga.......

Vikram abhi apne insani roop mein wapas aa chuka tha......tabhi waha pe ek ladki aayi.....aur Vikram ke samne jhuk gayi.......yeh thi Shaily.....ekdum safed skin.....ankh thodi laal.....hoth bhi ekdum laal aur do teekhe dant.....waise to vampires din mein nhi nikal sakte .......lekin Shaily din mein bhi nikal sakti hai.....

Aur yeh Vikram ke badoulat hai.....kaise future mein pata chalega.......

wo jhuki huyi hi boli......My Lord...wapsi mubarak ho......kaise hain ap....

Vikram.....uth jao shaily......aur hum ache hai.....Lekin yeh insani Sharir bas Kamjor hai.....kai dino se kuch na khand ke karan Kamjori ho rahi hai.......

Yeh sunte hi sabko hi khayal aya ke.....sab khushi mein itna kho gaye the unhe yeh baat yaad hi nhi rahi ke.....Vikram ab ek insan hai......use khane ki bhi zaroorat hoti hai......

Brianna bina kuch bole jhat se waha se nikal gayi......Vikram samajh gaya ke wo kyun gayi hai.....Morgan bhi izazat leke nikal gaya......

Demian bola......My King ap fresh ho jaiye.....tab tak apka khane ka bhi prabandh ho jayega......wo bhi nikal gaya......

tabhi bahar se ek maid aayi.....jo dikhne mein to insan thi.....lekin asal mein thi nhi.....aur yeh koi sadharan maid nhi thi.....Vikram ke castle mein aise 10 maid hai.....jinhe battle maids kehte hai.....

Yeh is Castle ki last line of defense hai......
jo maid aayi uska nam hai......Sana...

Vikram use dekhke thoda muskuraya.....aur bola....kaise ho sana.....Aaj bhi tum waise hi ho....jaise pehle thi.....

Sana....sar jhukaye huye boli.....My King hum ache hai.....aur ap to jante hain ke Humara umr kabhi badhega nhi.....yeh humari jati pe abhishap hai.......

Vikram.....wo kuch nhi bola....aur Fresh hone chal diya......wapas aya to Sana uske liye kapde leke Khadi thi...


Vikram ko usne taiyar kiya.....aur Dinning place pe le jane lagi.....
Vikram ne jane se mana kiya.....aur bola ke uska khnaa wahi pe lane ko.......

wo akhir mein sabke samne ana chahta tha.......

Vikram ne thoda bohot khaya......

phir Brianna Ayi....aur boli.....My King mujhe apko apke purane roop mein dekhna hai......jis roop mein ap mujhse mile the......

Vikram muskuraya......apna dono hath aa gaya.....aur dekhte hi dekhte uske pure sharir pe ek Armor aa gaya.....black color.....
Uski ankhein bhi ab Laal ho chuki thi........wo chalte huye apne kamre se nikla.....aur jaise hi darvar mein jane ke liye darwaja khula......to andar jitne bhi log the.....sabhi ghutno ke bal jhuk gaye.....aur apna sar niche kar liya......

Vikram jake apne Singhasan pe baith gaya.......








Vikram......sabhi uth jaiye.....

sab logone apna sar uthya lekin apne ghutne pe hi baithe rahe.....

Demian uthke Vikram ke samne aya aur phirse ghutno ke bal baith ke bola......My king....My lord....apko aaj apke Asli roop mein dekhke bohot khushi ho rahi hai.......

Vikram.....uth jaiye Demian. ....hume khushi huyi ....apki baaton se..

Aap sab log dhyan se suniye.....Ap sabko ab sabdhan rehna hoga.....Kingdom ki shuraksha puri tar diya jaye.......
Morgan...aap humare pramukh Updesh data hai....to aap is insani sharir ka koi ilaaj dhoondiye......

Demian....tum taiyari karo mujhe dharti pe lautna hoga.....bohot kuch taiyari karni hai....aur waha jake kuch hisab bhi barabar karna hai......

Brianna jo ab tak chup thi wo bol padi.....
My king aap akele waha nhi jaa sakte.....apke sath kisi ko to jana chahiye.....

Vikram....hum akele nhi jayenge....humare sath Shaily bhi jayegi.......main tumhe le jana chahta hun lekin.....isse humare kingdom pe khatra badh jayega........

yeh bolke Vikram apne singhasan se uth gaya aur bahar chala gaya......

wo abhi apne room mein tha.....

uske piche piche Brianna bhi aa gayi thi....Vikram abhi normal insan tha......Brianna bhi ek normal ladki jaise thi........

Brianna ake piche se Vikram ke gale lag gayi....uske ankhon mein thodi ansoon thi.....wo boli....mat jaiye na.....itne sadiyo baad to apse mulakat hui hai....firse juda nhi ho sakti.....


Vikram.....samjho Brianna jan jaroori hai.....abhi aagar main yaha raha to yaha pe khatra aur badh jayega........main abhi puri tarah se shakti shali nhi hua hun......aur mujhe tumhari behno ko bhi lana hai....

Brianna......acha thik hai.....jid nhi karti.....lekin apko kuch din yaha rukna hoga......uske bad chale jaiyega........

tabhi kamre ke darwaje pe knock hua......to do bohot hi khub surat Dark Elves andar ayi.....yeh thi Siya aur Miya....dono twins thi...

Dono ko dekhke Vikram bola.....kaise ho tum dono....tumse pehle kabhi mulakat nhi huyi.....lekin tumhari maa Meri bohoy khas yodha thi....usne ladai mein mere liye apni jaan bhi de di thi......tum mere liye bohog anmol ho...

Siya Miya....dono hi Vikram ke baat se khush ho gayi......

unhone Vikram ke bare mein ya yu kahein ke Raphael ke bars mein bohog kuch suna tha.....lekin aaj wahi shkas unke samne khada tha....

Siya thodi hesitation karke boli......My king kya ek baat puch sakti hun..


Vikram.....thoda muskura ke....Yehi na hum yeh insani sharir mein kaise aur kahan the......

Miya....yes My King....

Vikram.....yeh bohot lambi kahani hai.....kabhi bistar se sunna....

abhi tum dono jao.....

dono ke jate hi....Vikram Brianna se bola.....Brianna suno...mujhe jald se jald lautna hoga.....meri poori shaktiya pani hogi.....jo yahan baith ke sambhab nhi hai.....

Brianna....thik hai My Love

Vikram apne chehre pe ek shaitani hasi laate huye bola......ab hoga tabahi......

Superb update, story is going excellent

 

[Saikumar]

Update....7


aage.....

morning time.....
Ek bohot hi bada aur mashoor college mein...ek ladke ladkiyo ka group baatein kar rahe the......
is group mein 2 ladke aur 3 ladkiya thi.....
dekhne se aisa lag raha hai ke yeh sare amir baap ke bigde huye aulaadein hain

yeh log abhi aaj ane wale naye ladke ladkiyo ko ragging karne ke liye baat kar rahe the.....aur is group ki leader thi....Ladki 1...wohi sabse amir thi aur is college ki trustee ki beti bhi.....

naye naye students ane lage the....lekin yeh log khullam khulla to ragging nhi kar sakte the...is liye inhone socha ke canteen mein recess ke time mein ragging lenge....

yeh log abhi parking area mein hi the......tabhi.......

dusri taraf Vikram shaily Siya aur Miya yeh charo nikal ne wale the tab Vikram bolta hai......
suno Shaily ko is dunia ke bare mein sab kuch pata hai....lekin tum dono ko zyda nhi pata hai.....yeh bolke usne Siya aur Miya ke sar pe hath rakhta hai aur modern technology aur fashion ke bare mein sab kuch jankari de deta hai.....

jaise hi Siya aur Miya ko sari information milti hai.....to unhone jhat se chutki bajayi aur dono ka roop paribartan ho gaya.....ab dono jeans aur top mein thi....aur chehre pe thodi make up bhi.....unko dekhke aisa lag raha tha ke...ajise abhi agar miss universe ke competition mein gayi to jeet ke ayegi......

uske baad Vikram ne man mein gadiyo ke bare mein socha to samne.....2 chamchamati Black cars khadi ho gayi.....

ek thi.... Lamborghini Sian aur
dusri Bugatti Centodieci

yeh dono car hi India mein pehli thi....jo inke pas aya tha.....
Cars dekhke tino ladkiya bohot khush hoti hai......Siya khushi se uchalte huye Vikram ke gale lag jati hai.....Bhaiya yeh gadiya kamal ki hai......thank you thank you....thank you so much....

Tabhi side se Shaily bolti hai.....Siya sambhalo khud ko....tum humare King ke samne ho....
wo thode gusse mein thi...

Vikram.....Koi baat nhi Shaily tum log yaha pe mere dost aur behene ho.....yahan main koi King nhi hun......to formality ki koi zarorat nhi hai.....

yeh kehte huye hi usne apne bahe faila diya.....Miya apne bhai ke gale nhi lagogi....

Miya yeh sunke thodi Emotional ho gayi thi....wo bhi Vikram ke gale lag gayi.....

Shaily...acha chhoro bhi ab inhe.....hume der ho rahi hai....

Vikram bhi haa mein sar hilata hai.....aur charo gadi mein nikal jate hain.....Vikram aur Shaily Bugatti mein aur Siya Miya lamborghini mein.....


idhar college mein.....wo group baat kar hi rahe the ke.....ek Black Lamborghini tez shor machate huye..... College ke andar aayi aur sidha jake Parking mein khadi ho gayi.....

jab car ka darwaja khula to usme se do Pariyo ko nikalte huye sabne dekha to.....ladko ke muh to khula ka khula hi reh gaya.....sath mein ladkiyo ke bhi.....

abhi sab log shock mein hi the ke Ek aur car shor machate huye aayi.....is bar sabki jaise ankhein hi bahar ane ko ho gayi....kyunke Car hi aisi thi....One and only one in India....

wo car bhi aake Drag karte huye Patking area mein ruki...
..Pehle left side ka darwaja khula....aur usme se ek bohot hi sundar aur Hot ladki nikli....ladke to lar tapkane lage.....Lekin jab unhone Right se ek bande ko nikalte dekha to unko Dar bhi laga.....kyunke....Jo banda nikla tha.....wo 6.4 ft....Choudi chhati..moti bajuyen.....Black dress ke upar se uske sare body pe cuts clearly visible the....in one word....ek Hunk...ya Hulk....
lekin dijhne mein Hot aur Handsome.....ankhon pe Chasma....

Inpe us group ki bhi najar padi.... Unhe dekhke ek ladka bola.....kya kismat hai bande ki Itni mehengi car aur sath mein Hot ladkiya bhi.....

ladke ki baat sunke sth mein khadi ladkiya jal gyi....kyunki bhai kuch bhi kaho....lekin kisi ek ladki ya aurat ke samne dusre ki tarif karoge to unki jalegi hi......
Ek ladki ne khud ko sambhal ke boli....jo bhi ho tum sach keh rahe ho.....waise banda bhi hai bada hot......ise to humare group mein shamil karna banta hai.......
dusri ladki....keh to tu sahi keh rahi hai....kapde aur gadiyan dekhke to aisa hi lagta hai....banda bohot hi raees hai.....

3rd ladki jo abhi tak chup chap thi...wo bas ek tak us ladke ko hi dekh rahi thi....na jaane kya tha us ladke mein....jo use uske traf attract kar rahi thi.....


tabhi Vikram aur teeno ladkiya.....unke pass se gujarne lage......to 2sra ladka bola.....ExcuSe me.....

Vikram...yes...
2ladka.....kya main kuch baat kar sakta hun.....

Vikram...man mein hasa aur bola waah beta...paise dekhi to samman aa gayi....warna tu to kisi se sidhe muh baat tak nhi karta hai.....

wo khud ko shant karke bola....
Vikram..ji main apki kya madat kar sakta hun.....yeh kehte huye usne apna Chasma utara....
jaise hi chasma utra 3no ladkiya uske ankhon mein kho gayi....un Green ankhon mein...

lekin 3sri ladki ko ye ankhein kuch jana pehchana lag rahi thi......lekin use kuch bhi yaad nhi aa rahi thi....

tab pehla wala ladka puchta hai.....kya hum tumhara naam jaan sakte hai......

Vikram thoda muskuraya....aur bola.....sorry...Main chhote logo se apni Identity share nhi karta.....

bas uska yehi kehna tha ke....teeno ladkiya apne day dream se nikli....unki to jal gayi thi Vikram ki baat sunke.....wo kuch palat jawab dete usse pehle hi Vikram Shaily ka hath pakad ke age chala jata hai.....aur piche piche Siya Miya bhi.....


idhar yeh group ki aag sulag gayi thi.....the yo bare baap ke bache....paise ka ghamand bhi tha....lekin jab inhone Vikram ko dekha to yeh bhi samajh gaye the ke....banda tagda hai......panga lena acha nhi hoga....isi liye hi yeh lov respect de rahe the itni......

lekin ab to inki sulag chuki thi.....ek ladke ne inki beizzati ki wo bhi Junior......

wo bas gusse mein usko kosne ke siwa kuch kar nhi paye.....

3sri ladki gusse mein boli.....uski itni badi himmat....mujhe chhota bola....ise dikhati hun....main bhi ek thakur hun....


Dusri taraf....Vikram muskurata hua class ki taraf jaa raha tha....tabhi Miya ne puch liya.....Bhaiya yeh log kaun the....

Vikram thoda haske.....Gudiya...yeh log wahi hai....jinse hi badla lena hai....
agar kisi Ped ko sabdhani se aur puri tarah katna hai to pehle uski sakhaye kat te hai.....aur dheere dheere jade......

yehi hai shakhaye...jinhe katna hai....per ko katne sse pehle....
per meri Family ki......



to be continued.....
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Waah bhai entry shandar huhi college mai, ab dekhte hai ki age kya hota hai

 

[Saikumar]

Update......17...

Shah Mansion.....

Tamanna aur Mansi aaj dono ghar laut aayi thi.....kyunki dono hi behne apne Bua ke pas ghumne gayi thi.....ya yeh kahein Kaberi ne hi unhe bheja tha....apne plan ko kamiyab karne ke liye.....Kaberi jaisi bhi thi...use apne betiyo se lagaw tha....aur apne betiyo ke samne uska image ek achi Maa ki thi....jise wo bigadna nhi chahti thi....

Tamanna to ek number ki ghamandi kisam ki ladki thi....kisi ki baat nhi sunti thi.... Apne baap ke company mein hi ek bade audhe pe kaam kar rahi hai...abhi kuch waqt se....yeh jyada apne pariwar ke mamlo mein nhi padti...yeh bas apne hi dosto mein rehti hai....khubsurat to yeh hai hi....aur yeh bhi apne Maa ki tarah hi Vikram se nafrat karti thi....lekin jaha Kaberi wo show nhi karti thi...yeh humesha Vikram ke sath bura bartaw karti thi.....aur yeh Malini aur Didi ko bhi pasaand nhi karti thi.....

Mansi ek pyari si sweet si doll hai....bohot hi masoom aur pyari si.....Ghar mein sabse hyada agar koi Vikram se pyar karta hai to yeh Mansi hi hai.....Vikram ise pyar se Manu bulata tha....Vikram pe jo bhi iljam lage the...isne kabhi unhe sach nhi mana.....jiske wajah se yeh Apne Maa aur behen se abhi baat nhi karti thi....aur sara din bas School aur apne hi kamre mein rehti thi.....khana bhi apne room mein hi khati thi......

Jab Tamanna aur Mansi ghar ke andar ghusi to Kaberi bhi wahi main hall ke sofe baithi huyi thi...aur bohot hi chinta mein dikh rahi thi....Tamanna ne apni Maa ko jab us traah chinta mein dekhi to usne puch hi liya.....

Tamanna.....Maa....kya baat hai...bohot tension mein lag rahi ho.....aapko humraa ane ka bhi pata hi nhi chala.....

Mansi bina kuch bole upar ko apne room mein jaa rahi thi.....ke tabhi uske kaano mein aayi.....

Kaberi....kuch nhi beti....wo tumhari Chhoti Maa aur Behen ko police leke gayi hai....aur uske baad se unka koi bhi pata nhi lag raha hai......

Mansi ne jab yeh suni to wo bhi tension mein aa gayi....kitni bhi wo naraj ho...aisi khabar sunke chinta hona lajmi hai....usne apne Maa se baat karna bekar samjhi.....aur upar apne room mein chali gayi.....aur jaake sidha Harsh ko call laga di....

in call....

Harsh....haa Mansi bol....itne dino baad tujhe apne is bhai ki yaad aayi....

Mansi....aisi baat nhi hai bhaiya....apko bhi pata hai...bite kuch mahino mein kya kya hua..hai ....

yeh baatein bolte huye Mansi ke akhon mein thodi ansoon aa gayi thi....use aaj Vikram ki yaad kuch jyada hi sata rahi thi....

Harsh....rote nhi Manu...sab thik ho jayega....

Mansi....kya thik hoga bhaiya....Pata nhi bhaiya kaha hai....sab kehte hai wo ek rapist hai...aur mar gaye hai....lekin main nhi manti....Mere bhaiya aise kuch nhi kar sakte.....wo kaha hai..kis halat mein hai.....rote huye hi boli....

Harsh....rote nhi Manu....tujhse jaldi hi milega Vikram......acha bol kis kiye calk kiya....

Mansi....bhaiya maine suna ke Chhoti maa Aur Didi ko police leke gayi hai...lekin kyun....

Harsh....yeh to mujhe bhi nhi pata ke kyun leke gayi hai....lekin itna pata hai ke...unka bhi kuch bhi pata nhi lag raha hai.....

Mansi.....subakte huye....pata nhi bhaiya yeh sab kya ho raha hai....pehle bhaiya ab Chhoti Maa aur didi bhi gayab hai....

Harsh .....tu jyada chinta mat kar....main dekhta hun....thik hai......

yeh bolke usne call cut kar di.....Call cut hone ke baad kuch der Mansi roti rahi...jab wo thodi shant huyi...to use Harsh ki baat yaad aayi...jo usne pehle notice nhi ki thi....

Tujhe jaldi hi milega Vikram...

Kehte haina samajhdar ko ishara hi kafi hai.....waise hi Mansi bhi samajh gayi ke Harsh Vikram ke bare mein kuch to janta hai.....usne desperate hoke phir se Harsh ko call laga di....lekin call connect hi nhi huyi.....

Uske man mein ek nayi aas jag gayi thi ke....uske bhaiya jinda hai....lekin kaha hai...yeh sawal use pareshan karne lagi...wo jald se jald apne bhaiya ke pas jana chahti thi....aur use gale lagake apne sara gam bhul jana chahti thi....


dusri taraf Vikram apne Room mein ankhe bad kiye huye yeh sab dekh raha tha...uske ankhon bhi abhi ansoon thi...apne behen ki tarap ko dekhke...usne apne hi man mein bola....bas aur kuch din....uske bad humesha ke liye tu mere pas hogi....maaf karna tujhe itna dukh dene ke liye.....

Tabhi uske phone pe Harsh ka cakm aya....

Harsh....haa bhai tune jaisa bola tha waisa hi hua.....aur jo jo bolne ko bola tha...wo maine Mansi ko bol diya hai....

Vikram...Shukriya mere dost ....tera mujhpe ahsan raha....

Mansi...ab kya bol raha hai....tu mera bhai hai....aur tere liye itna to kar hi sakta hun....age se Thank you wank you bola na to muh tod dunga....

Vikram...muskuraya...chal thik hai...Mansi ka dhyan rakhna...wo abhi kuch bhi karke tujhse pata lagane ki kosish karegi....bas kuch din ki baat hai....

Harsh....thik hai...main yaad rakhunga...chal baad mein baat karta hun....bye...

Bye.....

udhar Raghu bohot jyada pareshan ho chuka tha...use kuch bhi pata nhi lag raha tha Vijendra aur Malini aur uski beti ke bare mein....woh ek Gangster the...lekin jabse Raphael aya tha...tabse uska power bohot had tak kam ho chuki thi...kyunki sare gunde dare huye the...koi bhi uske kiye kaam nhi karna chahta tha.....

upar se uska Boss jo sabka mastermind tha wo use pareshan kar raha tha....use is Raphael ke bare mein pata karne ke liye.....usne bohot kosish ki lekin kuch bhi pata nhi chal raha tha.....Raghu abhi apne adde pe baitha yeh sab soch hi raha tha ke......bahar se goliya chalne aur chikhne chillane ki awaj ane lagi....

tabhi usne apne pas khare bande se bola....aa kallu jaa dekh to kya ho raha hai...

Kallu...jaise hi bahar aya bahar ki halat dekh ke woj Vomit karne kaga aur uska sar chakra gaya.....

Kyunki samne do ladki thi....ek hath mein talwar aur dusri ke hath mein Do choti talawar....aur charo taraf bando ke kati fati lash....har tarf khun hi khun...diwaro pe mas ke lothde chipke huye the......

Kallu..daud ke andar jake jaise hi Raghu ko batane wala tha ke bahar kya ho raha hai....jaise hi wo andar dakhil hua....uska Sar katke Raghu ke goud mein jaa gida....

Raghu ek palke liye to ghabra gaya....par fatak se khud ko sambhal liya...use samajhte der na lagi ke waha pe humla hua hai....lekin kisne kiya hai...iske kiye wo confuse tha....usne fatak se apne gun nikala aur darwaje ke traf point kar diya...ke kaun aa raha hai.....

Darwaje se do ladki andar aayi....jo kala Maids ke kapdon mei. Thi...aur unke chehre pe mask bhi laga huya tha....

Raghu.....kaun ho tum log...aur kya chahte ho....

Hum kya chahte hai....wo matter nhi karta ....matter karta hai ke tu hume kya dekh sakta hai....kyunki jo mujhe chahiye wo main leke rahunga....koi kuch bhi nhi ka sakta....

Raghu ke kaan mein ek jani pehchani awaj aayi.....aur tabhi andhere mein se ek akriti bahar nikli....jab Raghu ne us Sakhs ka chehra dekha ke wo itna dar gaya ke usne fatak se us shaks ke taraf dhai dhai karke goli chalana shuru kar diya.....

Ek to use pata chal gaya tha ke uske sare admi mare gaye hai...dusre uske samne tha Vikram jo mar chuka tha.....isliye wo itna ghabra gyaa tha....lekin uska pant usne tab gila kar diya jab usne dekha ke bandook ki sari ki sari goli lagne ke baad bhi Vikram ko kuch nhi hua......

Vikram....hahahahhahaha.....are are yeh kya kar diya. apne hi pant mein moot diya....bahadur Raghu ne jisne na jaane kitne hi Rape aur Murder kiye hai......hahahhahahaha....yeh to bohot na insafi hai.....

Raghu darke mare thar thar kamp raha tha....uske mooh se koi bhi shabd nhi nikal raha tha....usne ek bar Vikram ke taraf dekha aur ekbar dono ladkiyo ke taraf dekha....jo mask ke piche se muskura rahi thi.......Raghu ko bachke nikal ne ka koi bhi asar najar nhi aa raha tha.....

Vikram chalte huye Raghu ke pas aya....Tune bohot apni man mani kar liya.....aaj se tera waqt khatam....tere aur tere sathio ka ajse countdown shuru.....

Raghu....nhi nhi nhi nhi....mujhe mat maro....tum jo janna chahoge...main batata hun....plz...mujhe chhod do....

Vikram....hahahhahahaha....to jo bhi bolega....wo mujhe pata hai....aur jab tu aur logo ko marta tha tab wo bhi aise gid gidate the...tab tune suna....nhi na.....to tujhe main kyun chhod dun....

Raghu vikram ki baat aur hasi sunke aur bhi sehem gaya.....
Vikram ne Raghu ke sar pe hath rakha....aur wo hypnotized ho gaya.....

Vikram....Camera...

Vikram ne ek Battle maid ko bola....aur ek chutki bajayi...aur apne Raphael wale roop mein aa gaya....

Abhi pure desh mein log apne apne gharo mein baithke Tv dekh rahe the.....tabhi eka ek unka Tv mein jo programme aa rahi thi wo band ho gaya...aur ek scene chalne laga....

jisme ek banda kale kapde mein mask pehne khada tha....aur ek banda niche baitha hua tha.....

Vikram....Good Evening mere pyare desh wasiyo....aplogo ko pareshan karne ke liye maafi chahunga....kuch jaroori baatein hain jo main batana chahunga...

Mera naam hai Raphael ....main kya karta hun....abhi thodi der mein pata chal jayega....yeh jo admi aap log dekh rahe ho...iska naam hai Raghu....aur yeh ap logo se kuch kehna chahta hai....
Raghu ke taraf dekh ke ......chal bol...

Raghu hypnotized tha....to bolna suru kiya......Main ek Gangster hun....maine 30 rape aur 40 se bhi jyada murder kiye hai....aur aj tak mujhe koi bhi police arrest nhi kar payi...kyunke unko unka commission milta hai.....

Vikram .....sun liya aap logo ne...aise hi naa jane kitne hi Raghu humare as pas hai....jo khule aam ghum raha hai......

yeh bolke Vikram ne Raghu ke sar ko pakda....aur dhar se ukhad diya....

yeh scene jab tv pe dikhayi di....to log ultiya karne lage....sab apne bacho ko jo unke sath baithke Tv dekh rahe the....unhe waha se hatane lage....
dusri traaf Government officials aur channel wale bhi yeh sab dekh rahe the....woh log bohot kosish kar rahe the yeh sab rokne ki....lekin rok nhi paa rahe the....

Vikram ne phir Raghu ko pakda aur use bich mein se chid diya....

uske bad use faink diya....aur camera ke pas ake bola.....jo bhi galat karega...uske sath yehi hoga.....bachne ke do raste hai....ya to khud ko police ke hawake kardo......ya phir main aunga....Yaad rakhna mera Naam hai RAPHAEL ....jo bhi galat karega....use uska parinam bhi bhugatna hoga.....chahe wo koi bhi ho....

aur Boss mujhe pata hai...tu kaun hai...aur kaha rehta hai.....aaj se teri ulti ginti chalu hai....

just wait and watch....



to be continued.......

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