• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Fantasy RISHI the SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)

What you guys think about my this story..


  • Total voters
    60
Status
Not open for further replies.

Hacker

Active Member
575
400
78
Nice story
 

Raj

Well-Known Member
4,444
15,232
158
BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR AUR INTERESTING UPDATE
RISHU JI
 

Aj1980

Well-Known Member
3,652
9,359
158
Bahut hi sunder likhati hai aap
Shandar
Jabrjust update
Aaj hi mane pura padha achcha laga

Aage ka intjar hai
 

Viraj Raj

Active Member
509
950
93
Super Story & Shandar update Bhai

Waiting
 

Rohan

Active Member
1,870
8,974
159
Waiting for update
 
UPDATE 16

Screen par chal rahe drishy dekh waha khade sabi logo ke ankho se aasu behne lagge..

Infact jin tin logo par spot light thi wo b rone lagge..
Or rote huye ek dusre ko apass mea dekhne lage..

Jab aruna or aarti ki ankhe mili toa dono ki ankho mea he ek gujarish thi..
Dono he ek dusre se gale mil bohot kuch kehna chahti thi..
Par dono b apni jagha se hil ni paa rahi thi..
Dono ke kadam jaha the wahi jamse gaye ho..

Jispar hall mea khade dursr sabi logo ki hooting se in tino behno ka dyan tuta..

Or sabi log chilla chilla kar yahi keh rahe the..
Gale milo or purane sare gille shikhwe dur karo..
Par aarti or aruna apne jagha se hil he nai rahe thi..

Dono ko bas samne wale ki pehel karne ka intazar tha..
Tabi fir ek baar mene screen par ek video play kiya jispar mea apne nana nani ka interview lea raha tha..
(Ye video meane kuch mahine pehlea banaya tha..
Apne college ka project hea bolkar)
(In video mea nai dikh raha hu qki mene camera pakadte huye question kiye hea)
{In video..

Me - So mr.arunlal rajawat jaisa ki aapne pehle bataya ki aapki 3 betiya hea..
Or har pita ko apne bete se jada beti he pyaari hoti in most of the cases..
Toa aapko aapki tino betiyo mea se kon sabse jada pyari hea..

Mere iss sawal par nanaji ne haste huye bole..

Beta mere liye meri tino betiya samaan hea..
Tino he ek dusre se alag hea..
Par yahi baat unki taqat hea..
Archana sabse jadda shant or disciplined hea toa aarti chulbali or nathkat hea wahi aaruna nathkat toa wo b hea qki wo or aarti ki judwa he par wo sath he sath tej or thori gusel be hea..
Gussa bohot jaldi aata hea usse..
In tino mea apni he khubi hea jisse ye agar tino sath hea toa inko kabi koi ni hara sakta par agar ye alag alag he toa..

Last wali baat kehte huye unke aankhe jara naam hogai thi..

Fir video change hua or iss baar meri darling nani ka interview tha..

Me - toa mrs.shantidevi jaisa aapne dekha mene aapke pati se kya sawal kiya tha par unhone sawal ke jawab ke jagha puri kahani he chap di..
Toa aapse me koi sawal kiye bina ye kahunga ki aap koi yaadgar kissa sunao apni betiyo ke bachpan ka jisse sun muje b thora maja aay..

Meri baat par nani ne haste huye mere kandhe par mara jisse camera jara hil sa gaya tha jisse mere left shoulder par bana tatto kuch he seconds ke liye dikha..

Jispar mera dyan ni tha..

Nani - beta ab koi ek yaadgar kissa ho toa sunauu ye tino jab b sath hoti toa bas ghar par sabi ki samat hoti..
Ghar chodo inke school college mea b issi wajase koi b ladki ho ya ladka inse panga ni leta tha..
Par fir b ab tum puch he rahe ho toa batati hu kuch..

Baat tab ki hea jab aarti or aruna ka 1st day tha college mea..

Ab dono behne fresher thi par unka nasib acha tha ki uss clg mea ragging ban thi..
Yaa yu kahu ki waha ke students iss mamle mea kuch had tak ache the..

Par jab ye baat indono ko pata chali toa inhone pura clg sir par utha liya..
Or khud ja jakar seniors ko pareshan karne laggi..

Jisse thak har kar raaj or rohit jo ki aarti aruna ke ek saal he senior the unhe inki ragging leni pari..

Mene ispar nani ko rokte huye kaha tha..

Isme kya majedar tha..
Muje toa kuch b maja nai aaya..

Jispar nani ne muje ankhe dikhate huye boli..

Tu thora sabar rakh nai toa me ni batari kuch..

Fir wapas nani bolne lage ki..

Baat yaha tak toa tk thi par aruna kaha itne mea manti..
Wo toa theri shetano ki nani..

Usne pehle he sab kuch plan kar rakha tha in dono ke sath..(aarti or archana)..

Jaise he wo dono bichare in dono ki ragging lene lagge tabi police jeep aayi clg mea..

Jisme sea archana nakli inspector bane huye nikli..

Ab tum samaj he gaye hoge aage kya hua hoga..
Bichare dono ko 10000 rupay ka jurmana lagaya..
Or jo baate sunayi wo alag...

Wo toa acha hua raaj ke papa us clg ke trusty the kar ke bachgaye wo dono warna sayad undono ko bina galti ke clg se b nikalwa deti ye dono..

Ispar mene jagrukta was pucha..
Fir jab un dono ko sach(raaj or rohit) pata chala tab kya hua..

Ispar nani nea haste huye bola .
Tab indono shaitano ki sahi mayne mea ragging hui..
Archana badi thi isliye bach gayi par indono ko pure clg ke samne 50 uthak baithak karni padi..

Nani ki baat complete hotay he ham dono he ek sath hasne lagge..

Sath he hall mea majud sabi log b has rahe the..
Or tino behene b us pal ko yaad kar muskurate huye aage badi or tino ek sath gale mile..

Jispar pura hall ek baar fir talliyo ke gar garahat se gunj utha tha..
Or kuch der inka milap hua par isko brake laga te huye mene mic par kaha..

Toa nani darling ye raha is nachis ke taraf se ek chota sa gift..

Jispar nani ne haste huye rote huye mujse bahar aa milne ko kaha..
(Q ki ab tak iss pure scene mea gayab tha..
Kisi ne b muje dekha ni tha bas meri awaj sunai dea rahi thi unhe)
Jispar mene pause lagate huye cake wale waiter ko isara kiya or fir sare light ka color ek baar fir change hua..

Or cake hall ke bicho bich laya gaya jispar happy birthday darling likha hua tha..

Par nani cake he nai cut kar rahi thi..
Muje bahar aaneko bole ja rahi thi..
Unke sath sath baki sabi log b yahi keh rahe the..
Khass kar aruna masi par ab agar mea bahar aajata toa sare kiye daraye ka banta ghar hone wala tha..

Tabi muje kuch yaad aaya or mene dusre waiter ko ishara kiya plan b ka toa wo b maska leke chal para..
Sabi logo ke hatho mea jab waiters ne mask thama diye tab mea bola..

Mea aise thori aaunga samne..
Sabi ko ye mask pehena parega..

Fir kuch na nukur ke baad sabi ne mask pehen liya or mea b apni jagha se bahar nikal un sabi ke pass ja nani ke baju mea aagaya..

Jispar unhone muje hug karke mere kaan me thnx kaha..

Ab yaha mohol senti na hojaye kahi isliye mene fir ek baar wahi gana gana suru kiya...
Or fir talliyo ke sath nani ne cake cut kar pehla piece muje khilaya or fir riya ko..

Aap sab soch rahe honge ki riya ab tak kaha thi..
Wo kaise shant hosakti hea itni der se..
Toa iska karan b jald pata chalega..

Ek ek kar nani ne sabi ko cake khilaya .
Or fir start hua couple dance..

Jispar sabiko kuch b hojaye dance karna hea tha..
Jispar mene start kiya nani ke sath dance..
(Masi maa - maa,aruna masi-rohit,riya-radhika aise pair ban dance kar rahe the ham sab..
Or ye couple changing dance tha..
Or jo last tak 2 jan rahenge unke liye surprise gift rakha gaya tha jisme hall me majud baki sabi logone b participate kiya siway nanaji ke qki unko thora badan dard tha so he opted ki wo nai karenge dance)
Dance start huye kuch he der hui thi ki nani boli..

Beta tune meri akhri khwahish puri kardi hea..
Meri tino betiyo ko fir ek kar..
Ab mea chain se ma..

Nani isse aage kuch bolti usse pehle mene unke kamr pe rakhe hath ko nikal unke hotho par rakh bola.
(Party me music high hone ke wajase mera face unke karib lana parta bolne ke liye)

Nani Darling abi toa tumhare or mere bache kaha huye hea..
Abi b tum tin or bacho ko aaram se janam dea do..
Or marne ki baat kar rahi ho tu..
Bhulgayi kya nanaji ko unke pote kam bete/betiyo ka chera dikhane ki baat hui thi hamari..

Ispar nani ne ek jor dar mukka mere pit par mara jo hath unhone mere kandhe par rakha tha usse..
Or boli..

Kitna bigad gaya hea tu haa..
Apni nani se aisi baat karte huye sharam ni aati tuje..

Ispar mene unke kaan ke paas apna face laga kar phuk marte huye kaha
Sharam aati hena darling par tumhe dekh firsf chalijati hea..

Mera itna kehte he couples change huye or nani ki jagha aruna masi aagai thi ab mere sath dance karneko..

Unke sath kuch der dance kiya mene..
Par masi muje bas gure jaa rahi thi..
Par pyaar bhari najro se..
Ab unka bina kuch bole muje gure jana muje acha ni lag raha tha isliye mene kaha..

Kya hua masi..
Pehli baar mili ho aap or apne bhanje ko aise ghur ke dara rahi ho..
Aise koi karta he kya..

Meri baat par aruna masi ne haste huye kaha..
Jaisa suna tha tumhare bareme usse badkar paaya..
Tum bilkul raaj ke tarha he ho..

Itna bol unki or meri dono ki ankhe halki chalak uthi par dono ke karan bhin bhin the..
Par jo b ho senti hona na muje pasand he na me kisi ko hone deata hu..

Isliye mene baat badalte huye masi se kaha..

Waise masi wo phuljadi apki behen hea kya..
Mene riya ke taraf isara karte huye kaha..

Jispar masi ne haste huye kaha..
Dekh bachu mere sath tere ye flirting tricks nai chalegi..
Muje sab pata he tere bareme .
Bhale he aaj mili hu pehli baar par fir b tumhare bareme muje sab pata hea..

Isbaat par hamdono hasne lagge or fir couple change huye..
Or thodi der baad sirf 3 he couple bache the jisme mea riya rohit or maa or bache 2 anjan shaks the..

Or ab final round announce hua..
Isme couple change ni honge..
Or jo best hoga wo he winner hoga..
Or isme mea riya couple the toa rohit or maa dusre or bache huye tisra couple the..


Sry very very sry frnds..
Family ki sath thi 31st or 1st ko isliye update ni dea payi or aaj wapas kolkata aagayi hu hostle mea so aake he ye wala update likha hea..
Par bina edit kiye post kar rahi hu..

Or last mea..
Aap sabi ko late par..
Happywala New Year Frnds..
Hope This Year Will Bring Joy To Your Life N
Our This Forum..
 

John Cena

Well-Known Member
5,404
7,026
188
Fantastic
 

King

𝕿𝖍𝖊 𝕺𝖓𝖊 & 𝕺𝖓𝖑𝖞 𝕿𝖗𝖚𝖊 𝕶𝖎𝖓𝖌
3,951
6,990
159
New year ka Pehla update woh adhura ...
 

crazyrex

Banned
2,871
3,634
158
Very nice update
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top