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amita

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Rajesh Sarhadi said:
No doubt she is writing good, taking the desired time to develop the feelings in a proper sequence, which is all the more important to develop a story properly.
And I am also coming back to writing mode, will review what has been written till date today and proceed further tonight if not then tomorrow definitely.
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Thanks so much for your kind words.
Would wait for your valuable Review.
Looking forward.
Thanks once again
 
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Rajesh Sarhadi said:
No doubt she is writing good, taking the desired time to develop the feelings in a proper sequence, which is all the more important to develop a story properly.
And I am also coming back to writing mode, will review what has been written till date today and proceed further tonight if not then tomorrow definitely.
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What a Review....
Yes Bro.. Amita Ji Is Too Good, She Has Extraordinarily writing skills
 
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amita said:
Thanks so much for your kind words.
Would wait for your valuable Review.
Looking forward.
Thanks once again
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:oops: Still a review is required.
Well then, as said before, description of Ruchika's thought process and Mohanlal's is well defined, both shy away but then slowly proceed further in their relation taking utmost caution as to not to annoy other. Mohanlal has zero sex life left with him, hence he would fall in line more easily once he get's a slight glimpse of Ruchika's change of thoughts towards him. And the wives of his friends would play major role in it though indirectly fueling up the hidden desire of Ruchika to be loved by a caring man.
On the other hand the mom son relationship will not be so easy to develop. Although the mother has accepted to become girl friend yet to fuel up the sexual thoughts towards son would take more time as she was denying sex to her husband because of the pain she would get during intercourse. So an emotional bondage with son would get easily developed as he would be making her feel those experiences which she was devoid off. The guilt process in her would be too severe because she never went to Doctor despite of Mohanlal's time and again request .
Let's see how you develop the story on other front. As of now it still the flashback going on between Mohanlal and Ruchika.
 
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