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Incest Rishta

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On the one hand, it is being planned to send Sandhya and Aditya and on the other hand Mohanlal and Ruchika as well, which means father and daughter and son and mother together and there will be no fear of anyone, you have very Concept of good preparation.
You are continuing the present as well as the past, I love it. Mohanlal was attracted to his own daughter and lost in her beauty, but tell me what Ruchika used to think at that time. Mohanlal fulfills Ruchika's every wish as he loves Ruchika dearly. I can understand Mohanlal's heart, he is confused.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Bahut hi shaandar review diya hai
 

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Update 12

Tabhi Ruchika boli "mujhe college chhod do na", Mohanlal ne usko ek baar fir se niharate hue kaha "chalo" aur usne bahar jakar Motorcycle nikali aur Ruchika uske peeche baithi tu Usse aaj kuch alag anubhuti honrahi thi kyounki Ruchika ne aaj pehli baar shayad koi perfume lagaya tha jiski sugandh uske nathunon se jakar uske dil ko chedh rahi thi.
Jab vo bike par ja rahe the tu aaj Mohanlal apane hosh me nahi tha.

Jab use chhod kar Mohanlal vapis jane laga tu Ruchika smile karke college me chali gayi aur Vo uski smile me kho gaye aur us smile ke bare me sochne laga.

Vanha se nikal kar vo vapis jane ki bajaye ek janne vale sunar ke paas gaya aur usse Ruchika ke liye chandi ke gehne dikhane ke liye kaha tu usne chhedte hue puccha 'kya baat hai aaj subah subah hi, kya bhabhi ji naraz ho gayi jo us ko khush karna pad raha hai" Uski baat sunkar Mohanlal ne usse kaha
"are yaar chhodo na, bas kuch halke gehne dikha do" Dukaan daar ne usse bhari gehne lene ke liye bhi kaha lekin usne halke gehne hi pasand kiye aur unhe lekar vo Ruchika ke paas jane laga.

Vo jab Ruchika ke paas ja raha tha tab vo uske baare me hi soch raha tha ki ye gehne uspar kaise lagenge, yahi baat vo tab bhi soch raha tha jab in gehno ko kharid raha tha. Vo apane aap se lad bhi raha tha ki kya ek baap ka apani beti ke bare me iss tarah ki soch kaise ho sakti hai. Lekin uska dil ye bhi keh raha tha ki vo ek ladki bhi to hai. Uski antaraatma usko dusre hi pal dhikkarne lagti ki

"ye kya kar rahe ho, 'ladki bhi hai' tu kya jo bhi sundar ladki ho uske bare me tum aisa sochoge aur vo bhi apani beti ke liye, kuch tu sharam karo"

Yeh sochate hi usne bike ko break maar kar rok li aur use kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki vo kya kare. Kafi der sochane ke baad usne apane man ko pakka karke ye decide kiya ki vo usse apani beti hi samjhega aur sirf normal baat karega.

Yeh sochte hi
Mohanlal ne Ruchika ko phone karke bataya ki vah 10 minut mein college pahunch raha hai tab Ruchika ne kaha ki vo gate ke bahar milegi. Mohanlal college pahuncha Tu dekha ki vah college gate per uska intezar kar rahi thi. Mohanlal ne use vah gehne pakdakar jaane laga tu Ruchika ne usse kaha ki "achcha hota aap hi mujhe pahna dete"

Uski baat sunkar Mohan Lal ki soi hui bhavnayen ekdum fir se bhadakne lagi aur vah Ruchika ko dekhte hue sirf itna hi kaha "yahan achcha nahin lagega Tum ise khud pahan lena". Ruchika yah baat sunkar udas ho gayi aur aisa laga Jaise uska chehra bhuj gaya ho. Uski yah halat Mohanlal se bardasht nahin hui aur usne Ruchika se kaha "chalo bike per baitho, lekin pahle yah batao ki college mein kya bologi"

Ruchika khush hokar Mohan Lal ke piche bike per baith gai aur kahane lagi ki "usne Madam se pahle hi gehne lane ke liye bol diya hai" tu Mohanlal ne bike ko aage badha diya aur sochne Laga ki isko Gehne kahan par pahnahun. Mohanlal Ruchika se kaha ki "Ghar chalte hain aur vahin per gehne pahuna dunga" Jaise hi usne yah baat suni to ekadam se kaha "nahin nahin mujhe Ghar nahin Jana aap mujhe kahin Raaste mein pehna do"
Mohanlal ne socha ke raaste mein pahnane se koi un donon ko dekh lega aur tarah tarah ki baten banayega, isliye vo usse lekar ek acche se restaurant mein Main le gaya aur family cabin mein jakhar baithe.

Restaurant subah ka waqt hone ki vajah se bilkul Khali tha. Jaise hi family cabin mein baithe tu ek waiter ko bulakar do coffee aur sandwich ka order diya.

Waiter ke jaane ke baad Ruchika ne vo gehne dekhe tu khush ho gayi aur Mohanlal ko aankhon ke ishare se pehnane ke liye kaha.
Mohanlal ne necklace uthaya aur khada hokar Ruchika ki chair ke peeche jane laga tu Ruchika ne apani oodni ko utar kar dusri chair par rakh diya tu Ruchika ke ubharon ka kuch hissa dikhai dene laga aur Mohanlal (jisne socha tha ki use beti samjhega aur normal behave karega) ka rakt parvah badne laga.

Mohanlal khada hua tu baithi hui Ruchika ke ubharon ke andar tak ka nazara nazar aane laga. Mohanlal ne jaise hi necklace ko uski gardan par rakha tu uski ungliyon ne Ruchika ki gardan ko saparsh kiya aur Mohanlal ne uski gardan se baal hatakar necklace ka hook lagane laga lekin uski nazar Ruchika ke ubharon par hi thi. Uske hathon ka saparsh pehli baar Jawan hoti Ruchika ko accha lagne laga aur uski bhavanaon ko bhi bhadka gaya. Vo bhi soch me ped gayi ki ye kya ho rahe hai.

Necklace pehnane ke baad Mohanlal jhumke uthane ke liye aage aaya tu dekha ki Ruchika nazare jhukaye apane me khoyi hui hai.
Mohanlal ne uska dhyaan batane ke liye pucha ki " Jhumke pehan logi ki vo bhi pehnau", tu vo boli

"agar khud pehnna hota tu fir main yanha kyoun aati, aap pehli baar mere liye gehne laye hain, ye tu main aapse hi pehnungi"

Mohanlal ne ek chair kheench kar uske nazdik kar li aur uske ek kaan me jhumka dala tu fir se uske hathon ka saparsh apane kaan me hone se usko accha bhi lag raha tha aur kuchh kuchh ajib sa bhi kyounki use kaan me gudgudi aur dil me halchal ho rahi thi.

Mohanlal ka bhi haal bura tha kyounki uske naram naram kaan me hath lagate hue vo aanand ke sagar me gotey kha raha tha, lekin in goton me se nikalte hue us kaan me jhumka pehnane ke baad dusri taraf ki chair ko uske nazdik karke us kaan me bhi jhumka pehnane ke ke liye jaise hi kaan me dalne laga tu Ruchika ke munh se "aauch" nikla tu puchhne par pata laga ki Jhumke ka pin ched me na jakar uske kaan ko chubho gaya tu Mohanlal use "Sorry" bolne laga tu Ruchika ne nam aankhon se kaha ki koi baat nahi.

Mohanlal us kaan ko apane anguthe aur ek ungali ki sahayata se halke halke malte hue use aaram dene laga. Mohanlal ka iss tarah kaan malna Ruchika ke liye ek aisi anubhuti thi jo shabdon me bayan karna mumkin nahi hai.

Fir Mohanlal ne apane munh se garam garam swash kaan ke uss hisse par dalne laga janha par Ruchika ko chubhan hui thi. Ruchika tu mano ek alag hi duniya me panhuch gai. Jab use aaram mil gaya tu usne dusra jhumka pehnane ke liye kaha.

Mohanlal ne use bade dhayaan se aur bahut pyar se us kaan me bhi jhumka pehnaya aur pehnane ke baad aakar uske samne ki chair par baith gaya tu Ruchika kehne lagi "kaisi lag rahi hu" Tab tak Ruchika ne apani oodni ko nahi oodha tha.
Mohanlal use dekhkar bahut khush nazar aa raha tha kyounki vo gehne uss dress ke sath bilkul match kar rahe the aur Ruchika ki khubsurti me char chand laga rahe the. Mohanlal se uske ubharon ka drishye bardasht nahi ho raha tha tu usne kaha ki oodni ko ood lo. Ruchika ne uski baat bina prashan kiye maan li.

Abhi Ruchika ne odhani odhi hi thi ki waiter ne knock kiya tu Mohanlal ne usse andar bulaya tu vo coffee aur sandwiches laya tha aur table par rakhkar bola "Sahab kuch aur chaiye tu aap bell baja dena" aur bolkar vo chala gaya.

Uske jaane ke bad Mohanlal ne Ruchika se nashta karne ke liye kaha to usne ek sandwich uthaya aur Mohanlal ki taraf le jakar uske munh se laga diya tu Mohanlal ne bade pyar se a ek tukra kat liya aur khane laga to Ruchika bade pyar se use khate hue dekhne lagi aur aur kaha "Thank you"

Mohanlal ne usse kaha "kis baat ka Thanks meri Baby doll" aur usne bhi dusra sandwich uthakar Ruchika ke komal honthon ko taraf badaya tu usne bhi ek tukda kaat liya aur khane lagi Nazar niche karke kehne lagi "aap mere liye pehli baar gehne lekar aaye jo mujhe itna aacha laga ki aap ko bata nahi sakti"

Mohanlal ne usse kaha "pehli baat tu Thanks ki koi jarurat nahi hai kyonki tum meri Baby doll ho aur bachpan se lekar aaj tak maine tumhari baat kabhi taali hai. Main to kabhi nahin chahta tha ki tumhare liye Chandi ke gahne laun, Main to yah chahta tha ki tumhare liye sone ke a ya heree Jadit gehne laun, ye sab tu maine majburi me kiya hai kyonki tumhe jaldi thi"

Uski baat sunkar Ruchika ko Mohanlal par bahut pyar aane laga aur usne kaha ki "aapke yah gehne Mere liye sone chandi ya hire Jadit gehno se jayada keemti hai aur main inhe bahut sambhal kar rakhingi"

Mohanlal ne sandwich ki taraf dekha tu us par Ruchika ki lipistic ka nishaan aa gaya tha tu vo nishaan ek baar fir se uski bhavanaon ko bhadkane lage aur jane anjane me uski nazar Ruchika ki taraf jakar vo uske honthon ko khubsurti ko dekh raha tha tu jab Ruchika ne uski taraf dekha tu usne apana sandwich ek baar fir uski taraf badha diya tu Ruchika ne bhi apane sandwich ko uski taraf badha diya tu donon ne ek dusre ke sandwich ke tukde ko kaat kar khane lage tu Mohanlal ko uski lipstick ka taste bhi aane laga aur vo aanand me khone laga.

Ab Mohanlal ne apane sandwich ki taraf dekha tu uspar bhi lipstick lagi hui thi tu Mohanlal man hi man prasaan hone laga aur bich bich me fir se lipstick ka aanand lene ke liye vo Ruchika ko khila kar apane aur uske sandwich se uske labon par lipstick ko khata raha lekin indirectly.

Sandwich ke saath saath coffee ko bhi vo donon ek dusre ke sath share kar rahe the tu Ruchika ke hothon par lagi lipstick dhire dhire Mohanlal ke munh se hotey hue uske pait me panhuch rahi thi lekin uska asar dil par jayada ho raha tha.

Nashta khatam karne ke baad Ruchika ne kaha ki ek photo tu khinch lo taki vo bhi dekh sake ki vo kaisi lag rahi hai tu Mohanlal ne sharat se kaha "Photo ki kya jarurat hai, uski aankhon me hi dekh le use dikh jayega".

Ruchika ne bura sa munh banaya tu Mohanlal ne kaha "Photo acchi chahiye ki nahi tu smile karo". Ruchika ki smile karti hui photo jab usne dekhi tu boli "kya oodni ke sath khinch li, necklace tu dikh hi nahi raha tu usne oodni Uttar di aur Mohanlal par ek baar fir se bijliyan gira di.

Mohanlal ki nazar na chahte hue bhi uske urojon par jakar tik gayi, lekin apne ko sambhalte hue camere ki nazar se uske urojon ka aanand leta raha aur fir ek photo khinch li, jisse dekhkar Ruchika bahut khush hui aur fir oodni oodh li.

Uske baad bill pay karke bahar jane lage tu Mohanlal ne Ruchika se kaha ki uski lipstick kharab ho gayi hai, vo usse thik kar le. Ruchika ne sharmate hue nazar neechi karke kaha ki "Uske paas lipstick nahi hai"

Tab Mohanlal ne kaha ki Ghar chale tu Ruchika ne mana kar diya ki "Mom ko kya bataungi" Fir Mohanlal ne use salah di ki nai le lo tu usne baat maan li aur vo donon lipstick lene ke liye ek dukan par gaye tu use lipstick dilwai tu salesgirl kehne lagi ki makeup ka aur bhi saman dikhaun.

Ruchika meri taraf dekhne lagi tu maine use kaha ki jo pasand hai le lo. Usne kuch nahi liya tu bahar aakar puchhne par usne kaha "aap mujhe baad me le dena, abhi college jaldi jana hai aur dusra Mom ko kya bataungi" Maine use kuch na kehte hue bike se college chhod diya. Vo tu chali gayi lekin Mohanlal ke dil me khalbali macha gayi.
Mohanlal ke dil ke taron ko chhed gayi, ab tu Mohanlal ki Khair nahi.
Very Good update
 

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Abhi kya kahay bhai yea Amita jee na qasam kahi hay kay iysa likhna hay kay purhnay walay gareeb apnay khali damun ko dekh surm say moun hee chupa lay uuuuufffffffffffff aaj tuk main nay iysa nahi purha kay kasay aak resta dono main buna suru huwa qasam say woo Ghagra Choli wala scene woo Gahnay pahnanay wala munzar woo Ruchika kaa nay nay jazboo koo masus kurna woo Mohanlal kay dil main aak nay prem kaa puda khelna kya kya kahun buss aak aak lufz jasay heray juray hay hur hur update main insan jasay samnay dekh raha hay apni aankho kay yea sub huta huwa bus Amita jee aap kay leya tuu buss :adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore::adore:
Bahut badhiya likha hai . Amit ji wakai hi iss ki hakdaar hain
 

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:applause:
Behad Shandar Starting hai kahani ki aur Jis Tarah Se Ruchika aur Mohan Lal ke bich Aankhon Hi Aankhon Mein nain-matakka chal raha hai isse to yahi lagta hai ki dono baap beti ke bich Jarur Kuch Khichdi pak rahi hai ..... Btw aage dekhte hain ye dono ke bich kya chal raha hai or inke mann mein
kya Khichdi pak rahi hai .....
Khair inka jawab to samay hi dega

Anyway Agaz bahut badhiya hai.
At first Mohanlal loved Ruchika like a cute baby girl, but now his mind is slowly flowing, Ruchika's face, the fragrance of her body, her lips everything attracts Mohanlal and he himself cannot understand what is happening to him.
But now Ruchika has also grown up, she can also test right and wrong, so does she understand this or is it all happening in the unknown.
The jewelry wearing scene was very cute and exciting. There is a lot of love between the father and daughter and both are very happy, but who is happy for what reason, it matters.
Heart got happy after reading today's update. You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
:heart::heart::heart:
Good review
 

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Cupid has strike Mohanlal but now he's in dilemma - two characters of his own are fighting with each other - story already reveals who was the winner but only thing to be read how that character won - Lust or Love and Care or mix of both. Definitely Cupid will strike Ruchika but what made her to have attracted towards Mohanlal however she has shown the signal...
What make Sandhya to allow her son to be his boyfriend and open with her very casually and that very soon and addressed her with her name and darling she has given hint that Mohanlal not stick to his promise with her... something is going between her and Mohanlal, Mohanlal don't want her company...
Thank you
Good review
 

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Fantastic review
Aapko kahani ka koi hissa itna pasand aaya ki usse aapne reproduce hi nahi kiya balki usse feel kar rahe hain, ye mere liye khushi ki baat hai.
Aise hi saath banaye rakhiye.
Dhanyawad

wo kya hai na Sabse Alag Tarah Ka Romance Present karte ho...
Aapka Seduction style Sabse Umda Quality ka hai....

So hamein Pasand aa Gaya.....


Hum Aapke Saath hi Hain....aur aage bhi Rahenge....!!
 
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