kamdev99008
FoX - Federation of Xossipians
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Bahut accha vishleshan hai.ab ye sandhya ke pas kiska phone a gaya...jisse itni der bat ki aur chinta mein bhi aa gayi
vaise ab wo apni nayi pahchan bana rahi hai...............ek umrdaraj aurat se bilkul alag 22-25 sal ki ladki ki
keep it up
Thanks for reading, liking and enjoying.bahut mast update .. dekhte h aage kya hota h..
Very Good suggestions and Hope Admins do something about it.A humble suggestion for admins of the site.
A new post in every story should an update of the story only. Every comment or likes of readers should not appear as new posts but they should appear in a comments section of the last posted update only. Oftentimes, a reader is going through endless pages/posts to get to an actual update to the story. This is very frustrating for a reader.
As for some writers who leave their stories unfinished midway and not responding to any requests for updates, I find they have all the time to actively comment on other writers’ stories. Such unfinished threads for which no updates have been posted for a month should be removed from the site as they make the site appear to be unprofessionally handled. The only threads visible on the site should either be for completed or currently active ones.This site at present has a lot of unfinished stories bringing a bad name to the site. Any such writers leaving their stories unfinished should be blocked or their membership removed/discontinued.
Behtareen
Yes she is beautiful and each and every word of your review is true reflection of the update. With regards to the phone would be known in future updates.Sandhya is so beautiful that it would be beautyless to remove your eyes from that beautiful person. Now Sandhya has changed a bit, the dressing style has also changed, both of them are going to college like a girlfriend-boyfriend. Enjoyed the fun conversation between the two. Aditya is mad, mom ready to be girlfriend and he is doing drama. Shruti also seems to be addicted to Aditya. The two do not feel good without each other, this shows the love between the two. What was Sandhya talking about? are there any problems?
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Everyone is posting shayari in this thread, I will also post shayari only and only for you...
लेखक नही हू लेकिन लिखने का शौक रखती हू,
विचारों को संजोकर एक नई पहचान लिखती हू,
शब्दो की ताकत और कलम की मजबूती रखती हू,
लेखक नही हू लेकिन लिखने का शौक रखती हू...
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तजुर्बों को अपने महफ़िल ए अमिता में बेख़ौफ़ रखिये,
कीजिये वाकिफ़ हमें भी, बड़े शौक से ये शौक रखिये,
उठने दिजीये अंदर हर्फ़ों का तूफान अपने,
पहचान अपनी अब एक "लेखक" और लिखिए ।।
गर हो करम आपका अज़ीज़ों में आपकी शामिल हो जाएं...
तह ए दिल रहेगी कोशिस कि इस हर्फ़ के क़ाबिल हो जाएं।।
Babut hi Shaandar shayariतजुर्बों को अपने महफ़िल ए अमिता में बेख़ौफ़ रखिये,
कीजिये वाकिफ़ हमें भी, बड़े शौक से ये शौक रखिये,
उठने दिजीये अंदर हर्फ़ों का तूफान अपने,
पहचान अपनी अब एक "लेखक" और लिखिए ।।