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I don't like the distance between Ruchika and Mohanlal. Both are not able to understand each other properly but this should not happen.
At first I find the scene of Aditya and Sandhya boring, both are still stuck on their relationship but then I was happy to see the theater scene, a bit of fun, a little love and a little fear. Finger sucking, kissing, wow! .... what can I say now.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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At first I find the scene of Aditya and Sandhya boring, both are still stuck on their relationship but then I was happy to see the theater scene, a bit of fun, a little love and a little fear. Finger sucking, kissing, wow! .... what can I say now.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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