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ना उम्र की सीमा हो , ना जन्म का हो बंधन ।Update 68
Ruchika ne bina soche jhonk me hi keh diya 'Main aisa kyon kanhungi' lekin jaise hi usse Mohanlal ki baat ka matalab samajh aaya tu vo bahut jayada sharma gayi aur thodha aur khisak kar Mohanlal ki chahti ki taraf apane sar ko karte hue kehne lagi 'aap bahut gande hain' Uski baat sunkar Mohanlal hansne laga aur kehne laga 'Maine tu socha tha ki thodhi der baad kahegi, lekin tumne tu ek ho pal me mujhe aasmaan se dharti par la patka' aur ye kehte kehte Mohanlal ne usse apane aagosh me le liya aur uske Mathe ko chum liya aur fir uske chehre ko chumne lage.
Mohanlal jaise jaise Ruchika ko chum raha tha vaise vaise uski bhavnaon me ubal aa raha tha. Vo apani garam garam saansen Mohanlal ki gardan par chhod rahi thi, jisse Mohanlal bhi utejit hone laga. Mohanlal ka ek hath ko Ruchika ke sar ke neeche tha usse usne Ruchika ko pakad kar apane upar kheench liya jisse Ruchika ke boobs Mohanlal ki chhati par panhuch gaye aur vanha par boobs ke dabne ke ehsaas se Mohanlal ki utejana badh rahi thi. Uska hath jo peeth par tha vo peeth par ghumkar apane kaam kar raha tha.
Mohanlal ka dusra hath Ruchika ke kandhe se hota hua uski gardan par aa gaya aur uski gardan ko halke hath se sehlate hue hath ko uske gaal par lakar usse sehlane laga aur apane anguthe se uske hothon ke nichale hisse ko sehalate hue apane chehre ko uske chehre ke najdik lane laga tu Ruchika se uske hothon ke nichale hisse par Mohanlal ke anguthe ka masalana bardasht nahi ho paa raha tha tu Ruchika ne apane banyi taraf palti khayi aur Mohanlal ki taraf uski peeth ho gayi. Mohanlal ne uske kandhe se pakad kar jaise hi apani taraf ghumaya tu Ruchika ne apane ek hath ko Mohanlal ke chathi par rakhkar uss ko ek dhakka de diya tu vo ek taraf ho gaya. Usse gussa tu aaya, lekin gusse ko niyantran me rakhte hue vo Ruchika ki taraf fir se palti kha kar usko niharane laga.
Mohanlal ne uski taraf shikayati najron se dekha aur chup karke usko dekhta raha lekin na kuch bola aur na hi kucch kiya. Ruchika ko bhi pachtava hone laga ki kyoun usne dhakka de diya, vo man me sochane lagi ki agar koi oor uska Pati hota tu ab tak iss tarah dhakka dene se vo bhi suhagraat ko, tu pata nahin uski kya halat kar deta. Mohanlal uske Pati hone se pehle uske Papa hain tu ho sakta hai iss vajah se dekho kiss tarah mujhe kuch keh bhi nahi keh rahe hain. Unka na kehna Ruchika ko glani se bhar gaya.
Ruchika khisak kar Mohanlal ki taraf aa gayi aur usaki aankhon men jhaankate hue apana chehara unke chehre ke itane paas le aayi ki un donon ki saansen ek doosre se ṭakarane lagin.
Mohanlal bhi uski aankhon me jhankte hue ‘dekho Main samajh sakta hun ki pehli baar ye sab karne me bechaini hoti hai aur ab agar tumhe bechaini jayada ho rahi hai tu fir kabhi kar lenge'
Ruchika ne jawab na dekar Mohanlal ke galo ko chum liya tu Mohanlal ne kaha 'Dekh lo agar abhi karne ka man hai tu fir chaahe jitani bhi bechaini ho iss baar dhakelane ki bajaye bas mujhe bata dena, tumhari bechaini ko dur kar dunga'
Ruchika ne koi javaab nahin diyaa, bas Mohanlal ki aankhon men dekhati rahi aur aisa lag raha tha ki pucch rahi ho ki bechaini sach me dur kar doge ya badha doge.
Mohanlal bhi apane honṭhon ko uske honṭho ke itane paas le aayaa ki vah unaki garmi mahasoos kar sake. Kuchh der vah unki garmi bardaasht karte hue Mohanlal ki aankhon men dekhati rahi. Mohanlal uski bhaari ho gayi saansen apane honṭhon par mahasoos karata raha. Jab Mohanlal ko laga ki Ruchika ab usake honṭh apane hothon par rakhkar chumban ke liye bekarar ho chuki hai the to Mohanlal ne apane hothon ko thodha aur uske hothon ki taraf badhya tu Ruchika ki saansen aur tej ho gayi. Uski saanson ki garmi ab Mohanlal se bhi bardasht nahi ho paa rahi thi tu usne apne hothon ko uske gulab ki pankhudiyo jaise hothon se saparash kiya tu Ruchika ke sharir ki kampan saaf saaf mehsoos ki. Ab usne der na karte hue usake honṭhon se apane honṭh jod diye.
Ruchika ab itni bekarar ho chuki thi Mohanlal ke hothon ko apane hothon me lene ke liye, lekin ek tu nari lajja aur dusra suhagraat, vo bhi uske apane Papa ke sath, in sab chijo ne usse bandh rakha tha aur jaise hi Mohanlal ke hothon ne uske hothon ko jakda tu usne vaakayi garmajoshi se un honṭhon ka swagat kiya, ek gahari thartharaahaṭ uske jism se guzari thi jise bakhoobhi Mohanlal ne uske jism par mahasoos ki thi kyonki usne dekha ki jaise kisi nashe ke atirek se uski aankhen mund gayi thi.
Mohanlal uske hothon ko dhire dhire apane hothon se sehlate hue uske nichale honṭh ko chusne laga aur kuchh der ki jhijhak, sharm aur hichakichaahaṭ ke baad usne bhi apane honthon ko thodha sa kholkar Mohanlal ke upari honṭh ko chusna shuru kiya. Donon ek dusre ke hothon ko chusne me tallin ho gaye aur jab thodhi der baad ruke tu ek dusre ki aankhon me dekhne lage, janha sirf aur sirf ek dusre ke liye pyar tha, haan Ruchika ki aankhon me pyar ke sath sath lajja ka bhi mishran tha.
Kucch palon baad jab Mohanlal ne uske upari hothon par apani pakad banaayi to Ruchika ne Mohanlal ke nichale honṭh par pakad bana li aur honṭhon ke is zabaradast mardan ke beech hi Mohanlal ne apani jeebh uske munh me dalni chahi tu Ruchika ne apane daant band kar liye aur vo uske munh me apani jeebh nahi daal paya. Mohanlal ne ek do baar fir se koshish ki lekin vo safal na ho paya tu usne Ruchika ki aankhon me dekhna chaha tu paya ki uski aankhein band hain.
Mohanlal uske hothon ko chuste hue apane hath ko uski peeth par le gaya aur uski lagbhag nangi peeth ko sehalate hue uski blouse ki patti se khelte hue apani ek ungali uss patti me daal di aur jaise hi uski ungali uss patti ke andar gayi tu Ruchika ke munh se nikala 'aa…aa…h' tu Mohanlal ne thodha aur chedkhani karte hue uske blouse ki patti ke huk ko pakad kar uske sharir se upar karke khinch kar ek dam chhod diya jisse Ruchika ke munh se nikala 'aauch’ aur Mohanlal ke liye itna mauka bahut tha aur usne apani jeebh ko uske honṭhon ko cheerate hue uske khul chuke munh men ghusa di. Mohanlal ne apani jeebh ko uske munh me daalkar uske munh me ghumane laga jisse Ruchika ko nasha chahne laga. Mohanlal ne mehsoos kiya ki Ruchika ko bahut maja aa raha hai kyonki usne apane boobs bhi Mohanlal ki chhati se ragadne lagi aur apane hathon se uski kamar ko kasne lagi. Ruchika ko itna maja aa raha tha ki iss baar jab Mohanlal ne jeebh uske munh me daali tuRuchika ne uski jeebh ko bhi aswikaar nahi kiya balki masti me aakar ab apani sharam ko taak par rakhkar usne Mohanlal ki jeebh ko pakad kar usse chusne bhi lagi. Ab Ruchika ko iss khel me maja aane laga aur kuchh der baad usne bhi apani jeebh ko Mohanlal ke munh mein daal di jisse vo bhi uski jeebh ko chusne laga. Ab donon hi bahut utejit ho rahe the. Mohanlal ka hath uski nangi peeth par ghumte hue kabhi sehlata, kabhi masalne lagta, kabhi beech beech me usse chikoti bhi kaatne laga jisse Ruchika Mohanlal se aur jayada chipak jati aur Mohanlal ko uske boobs ka ehsaas uski utejana ko badhava de raha tha.
Is beech Mohanlal ka jo haath peeth par tha vanha se neeche ki taraf jate hue uske nitambon par panhuch gaya aur jaise hi Mohanlal ne uske hath se Ruchika ke makhmali nitambon ko dabaya tu Ruchika ne ekdam se apane hath ko nitamb par le jakar Mohanlal ke hath ko hataya aur uske hothon ko chhod kar alag ho gayi. Vo bed par uthkar baith gayi aur lambi lambi saansen lene lagi.
Uske uthathe hi Mohanlal bhi uthkar baith gaya tu usne dekha ki uske gaalon par sharm ki gehri laalima faili huii thi aur usne Mohanlal ko iss tarah uthkar apani aur aate hue dekha tu apani aankhein bheench kar band kar li, jaise vo Mohanlal ki nazron ka samna na karna chah rahi ho. Mohanlal ne usse kandhon se thamate hue lita diya.
Mohanlal ne usse lita kar uski aankhon men jhaankana chaah magar usne apani nigaahen niche kar li. Usne fir ghoom kar Ruchika ke kandhe par hath rakha tu Mohanlal ko mehsoos hua ki jaise fir se uske jism men ek tharathart daud gayi ho.
Mohanlal ne Ruchika ko uske naam se pukarkar puucha ki kya hua tu usne ek nazar uṭhaa kar Mohanlal ki aankhon mein dekhaa aur vaapis nazaren neechee kar li vah samajh hi nahin paayi ki kya bole, kya kahe, isliye bas chup hi rahi. Vo man me bahut kuch soch rahi thi aur uske man me bahut duvidha thi ki kya kare aur kya na kare.
Mohanlal ne usse chup dekhkar usko nari sulabh sharam aur pehli baar ke dar ko sochkar usne socha ki ab aur intezar karna theek nahi hai aur Ruchika ko aur jayada mauka dena uske dar aur bechaini ko badha sakta hai. Ye sab sochate hue vo ab peeche hatna nahin chaahata tha kyounki kabhi na kabhi tu uski sharam ko todna hi padega tu fir aaj aur abhi kyoun nahi.
Mohanlal ne yeh sochate hi vo Ruchika ki taraf hokar usko mauka diye bina ekadam se uske honthon par apane honṭh rakh diye lekin Ruchika ne apane hothon ko nahi khola aur pratirodh karne lagi. Ruchika ne uski pakad se nikalna chaaha, lekin Mohanlal ne iss baar soch liya tha ki usse mauka nahi dena hai aur ye sochkar uski kamar ko apani giraft me le liya. Ruchika ne apana chehara haṭana chaaha, magar Mohanlal ne iss baar vo bhi nahi karne diya aur uske aitaraz ke sirf chnd palon baad uske honṭh khul gaye aur vo khud se Mohanlal ke honṭhon ko, jeebh ko choosane chubhalaane lagi, uski ḍheeli baahen Mohanlal ki kamar par panhuch kar sakht ho gayin
Welcome to the Thread.Fantastic story amita...i have a question...will there be an intimate scene between Aditya and Ruchika...
bahut he aache tarha se likhe huye shandaar update..Update 68
Ruchika ne bina soche jhonk me hi keh diya 'Main aisa kyon kanhungi' lekin jaise hi usse Mohanlal ki baat ka matalab samajh aaya tu vo bahut jayada sharma gayi aur thodha aur khisak kar Mohanlal ki chahti ki taraf apane sar ko karte hue kehne lagi 'aap bahut gande hain' Uski baat sunkar Mohanlal hansne laga aur kehne laga 'Maine tu socha tha ki thodhi der baad kahegi, lekin tumne tu ek ho pal me mujhe aasmaan se dharti par la patka' aur ye kehte kehte Mohanlal ne usse apane aagosh me le liya aur uske Mathe ko chum liya aur fir uske chehre ko chumne lage.
Mohanlal jaise jaise Ruchika ko chum raha tha vaise vaise uski bhavnaon me ubal aa raha tha. Vo apani garam garam saansen Mohanlal ki gardan par chhod rahi thi, jisse Mohanlal bhi utejit hone laga. Mohanlal ka ek hath ko Ruchika ke sar ke neeche tha usse usne Ruchika ko pakad kar apane upar kheench liya jisse Ruchika ke boobs Mohanlal ki chhati par panhuch gaye aur vanha par boobs ke dabne ke ehsaas se Mohanlal ki utejana badh rahi thi. Uska hath jo peeth par tha vo peeth par ghumkar apane kaam kar raha tha.
Mohanlal ka dusra hath Ruchika ke kandhe se hota hua uski gardan par aa gaya aur uski gardan ko halke hath se sehlate hue hath ko uske gaal par lakar usse sehlane laga aur apane anguthe se uske hothon ke nichale hisse ko sehalate hue apane chehre ko uske chehre ke najdik lane laga tu Ruchika se uske hothon ke nichale hisse par Mohanlal ke anguthe ka masalana bardasht nahi ho paa raha tha tu Ruchika ne apane banyi taraf palti khayi aur Mohanlal ki taraf uski peeth ho gayi. Mohanlal ne uske kandhe se pakad kar jaise hi apani taraf ghumaya tu Ruchika ne apane ek hath ko Mohanlal ke chathi par rakhkar uss ko ek dhakka de diya tu vo ek taraf ho gaya. Usse gussa tu aaya, lekin gusse ko niyantran me rakhte hue vo Ruchika ki taraf fir se palti kha kar usko niharane laga.
Mohanlal ne uski taraf shikayati najron se dekha aur chup karke usko dekhta raha lekin na kuch bola aur na hi kucch kiya. Ruchika ko bhi pachtava hone laga ki kyoun usne dhakka de diya, vo man me sochane lagi ki agar koi oor uska Pati hota tu ab tak iss tarah dhakka dene se vo bhi suhagraat ko, tu pata nahin uski kya halat kar deta. Mohanlal uske Pati hone se pehle uske Papa hain tu ho sakta hai iss vajah se dekho kiss tarah mujhe kuch keh bhi nahi keh rahe hain. Unka na kehna Ruchika ko glani se bhar gaya.
Ruchika khisak kar Mohanlal ki taraf aa gayi aur usaki aankhon men jhaankate hue apana chehara unke chehre ke itane paas le aayi ki un donon ki saansen ek doosre se ṭakarane lagin.
Mohanlal bhi uski aankhon me jhankte hue ‘dekho Main samajh sakta hun ki pehli baar ye sab karne me bechaini hoti hai aur ab agar tumhe bechaini jayada ho rahi hai tu fir kabhi kar lenge'
Ruchika ne jawab na dekar Mohanlal ke galo ko chum liya tu Mohanlal ne kaha 'Dekh lo agar abhi karne ka man hai tu fir chaahe jitani bhi bechaini ho iss baar dhakelane ki bajaye bas mujhe bata dena, tumhari bechaini ko dur kar dunga'
Ruchika ne koi javaab nahin diyaa, bas Mohanlal ki aankhon men dekhati rahi aur aisa lag raha tha ki pucch rahi ho ki bechaini sach me dur kar doge ya badha doge.
Mohanlal bhi apane honṭhon ko uske honṭho ke itane paas le aayaa ki vah unaki garmi mahasoos kar sake. Kuchh der vah unki garmi bardaasht karte hue Mohanlal ki aankhon men dekhati rahi. Mohanlal uski bhaari ho gayi saansen apane honṭhon par mahasoos karata raha. Jab Mohanlal ko laga ki Ruchika ab usake honṭh apane hothon par rakhkar chumban ke liye bekarar ho chuki hai the to Mohanlal ne apane hothon ko thodha aur uske hothon ki taraf badhya tu Ruchika ki saansen aur tej ho gayi. Uski saanson ki garmi ab Mohanlal se bhi bardasht nahi ho paa rahi thi tu usne apne hothon ko uske gulab ki pankhudiyo jaise hothon se saparash kiya tu Ruchika ke sharir ki kampan saaf saaf mehsoos ki. Ab usne der na karte hue usake honṭhon se apane honṭh jod diye.
Ruchika ab itni bekarar ho chuki thi Mohanlal ke hothon ko apane hothon me lene ke liye, lekin ek tu nari lajja aur dusra suhagraat, vo bhi uske apane Papa ke sath, in sab chijo ne usse bandh rakha tha aur jaise hi Mohanlal ke hothon ne uske hothon ko jakda tu usne vaakayi garmajoshi se un honṭhon ka swagat kiya, ek gahari thartharaahaṭ uske jism se guzari thi jise bakhoobhi Mohanlal ne uske jism par mahasoos ki thi kyonki usne dekha ki jaise kisi nashe ke atirek se uski aankhen mund gayi thi.
Mohanlal uske hothon ko dhire dhire apane hothon se sehlate hue uske nichale honṭh ko chusne laga aur kuchh der ki jhijhak, sharm aur hichakichaahaṭ ke baad usne bhi apane honthon ko thodha sa kholkar Mohanlal ke upari honṭh ko chusna shuru kiya. Donon ek dusre ke hothon ko chusne me tallin ho gaye aur jab thodhi der baad ruke tu ek dusre ki aankhon me dekhne lage, janha sirf aur sirf ek dusre ke liye pyar tha, haan Ruchika ki aankhon me pyar ke sath sath lajja ka bhi mishran tha.
Kucch palon baad jab Mohanlal ne uske upari hothon par apani pakad banaayi to Ruchika ne Mohanlal ke nichale honṭh par pakad bana li aur honṭhon ke is zabaradast mardan ke beech hi Mohanlal ne apani jeebh uske munh me dalni chahi tu Ruchika ne apane daant band kar liye aur vo uske munh me apani jeebh nahi daal paya. Mohanlal ne ek do baar fir se koshish ki lekin vo safal na ho paya tu usne Ruchika ki aankhon me dekhna chaha tu paya ki uski aankhein band hain.
Mohanlal uske hothon ko chuste hue apane hath ko uski peeth par le gaya aur uski lagbhag nangi peeth ko sehalate hue uski blouse ki patti se khelte hue apani ek ungali uss patti me daal di aur jaise hi uski ungali uss patti ke andar gayi tu Ruchika ke munh se nikala 'aa…aa…h' tu Mohanlal ne thodha aur chedkhani karte hue uske blouse ki patti ke huk ko pakad kar uske sharir se upar karke khinch kar ek dam chhod diya jisse Ruchika ke munh se nikala 'aauch’ aur Mohanlal ke liye itna mauka bahut tha aur usne apani jeebh ko uske honṭhon ko cheerate hue uske khul chuke munh men ghusa di. Mohanlal ne apani jeebh ko uske munh me daalkar uske munh me ghumane laga jisse Ruchika ko nasha chahne laga. Mohanlal ne mehsoos kiya ki Ruchika ko bahut maja aa raha hai kyonki usne apane boobs bhi Mohanlal ki chhati se ragadne lagi aur apane hathon se uski kamar ko kasne lagi. Ruchika ko itna maja aa raha tha ki iss baar jab Mohanlal ne jeebh uske munh me daali tuRuchika ne uski jeebh ko bhi aswikaar nahi kiya balki masti me aakar ab apani sharam ko taak par rakhkar usne Mohanlal ki jeebh ko pakad kar usse chusne bhi lagi. Ab Ruchika ko iss khel me maja aane laga aur kuchh der baad usne bhi apani jeebh ko Mohanlal ke munh mein daal di jisse vo bhi uski jeebh ko chusne laga. Ab donon hi bahut utejit ho rahe the. Mohanlal ka hath uski nangi peeth par ghumte hue kabhi sehlata, kabhi masalne lagta, kabhi beech beech me usse chikoti bhi kaatne laga jisse Ruchika Mohanlal se aur jayada chipak jati aur Mohanlal ko uske boobs ka ehsaas uski utejana ko badhava de raha tha.
Is beech Mohanlal ka jo haath peeth par tha vanha se neeche ki taraf jate hue uske nitambon par panhuch gaya aur jaise hi Mohanlal ne uske hath se Ruchika ke makhmali nitambon ko dabaya tu Ruchika ne ekdam se apane hath ko nitamb par le jakar Mohanlal ke hath ko hataya aur uske hothon ko chhod kar alag ho gayi. Vo bed par uthkar baith gayi aur lambi lambi saansen lene lagi.
Uske uthathe hi Mohanlal bhi uthkar baith gaya tu usne dekha ki uske gaalon par sharm ki gehri laalima faili huii thi aur usne Mohanlal ko iss tarah uthkar apani aur aate hue dekha tu apani aankhein bheench kar band kar li, jaise vo Mohanlal ki nazron ka samna na karna chah rahi ho. Mohanlal ne usse kandhon se thamate hue lita diya.
Mohanlal ne usse lita kar uski aankhon men jhaankana chaah magar usne apani nigaahen niche kar li. Usne fir ghoom kar Ruchika ke kandhe par hath rakha tu Mohanlal ko mehsoos hua ki jaise fir se uske jism men ek tharathart daud gayi ho.
Mohanlal ne Ruchika ko uske naam se pukarkar puucha ki kya hua tu usne ek nazar uṭhaa kar Mohanlal ki aankhon mein dekhaa aur vaapis nazaren neechee kar li vah samajh hi nahin paayi ki kya bole, kya kahe, isliye bas chup hi rahi. Vo man me bahut kuch soch rahi thi aur uske man me bahut duvidha thi ki kya kare aur kya na kare.
Mohanlal ne usse chup dekhkar usko nari sulabh sharam aur pehli baar ke dar ko sochkar usne socha ki ab aur intezar karna theek nahi hai aur Ruchika ko aur jayada mauka dena uske dar aur bechaini ko badha sakta hai. Ye sab sochate hue vo ab peeche hatna nahin chaahata tha kyounki kabhi na kabhi tu uski sharam ko todna hi padega tu fir aaj aur abhi kyoun nahi.
Mohanlal ne yeh sochate hi vo Ruchika ki taraf hokar usko mauka diye bina ekadam se uske honthon par apane honṭh rakh diye lekin Ruchika ne apane hothon ko nahi khola aur pratirodh karne lagi. Ruchika ne uski pakad se nikalna chaaha, lekin Mohanlal ne iss baar soch liya tha ki usse mauka nahi dena hai aur ye sochkar uski kamar ko apani giraft me le liya. Ruchika ne apana chehara haṭana chaaha, magar Mohanlal ne iss baar vo bhi nahi karne diya aur uske aitaraz ke sirf chnd palon baad uske honṭh khul gaye aur vo khud se Mohanlal ke honṭhon ko, jeebh ko choosane chubhalaane lagi, uski ḍheeli baahen Mohanlal ki kamar par panhuch kar sakht ho gayin
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Happy to note that you as well your heart got happy with today's update.In today's update everything was very sweet. The kissing scene and the action was very sensual, I was out of control, There was a strange vibration and tickling in my body. Heart wanted this update to never end. Enjoyed reading.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
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