Incest Rishta

[amita]

Bahot shaandaar lajawab excellent update amita ji

Aapko itna pasand aaya aur aapki Sarahana ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Sath banaye rakhiye

 

[amita]

Sorry amita ki ma tumahri post par rajesh sarhdi ka review pad kar usko bhala bura kahne laga magar ma majboor ho gaya iska naam pad kar kyonki ye apni koi bhi story paari nahi karta mujhe dar laga ki iski najar na lag jaaye or ye story bhi adhoori na choot jaye sach me is site par 2 3 stories hi to padne laayak ha tumhaari story best ha isko bhi iski nazar naa lag jaye pl forgive me but is aadmi ko ahmiyat na dena or story par cosetrate karo bahut hi badiyaa jaa rahi ha ek baar phir maany many congratulations for top 50 but I am not satisfied for you are in top three list by my opinion ok good luck and keep rocking best wishes

It's a Forum, where we all come to relax and enjoy. It is not a Forum where we need to fight and settle our personal issues.

No two persons can have same choice and taste, so differences are bound to be there, however differences should not translate into clashes.

Well, here the Writers as well as Readers come voluntarily to express and exchange ideas and get relaxed. There are instances where the views of one may contradict someone else's views, doesn't mean that the two should clash on such occasions.

Well, I need to tell you that there are Writers, who would put their best to bring out the useful content, but no attention is paid and sometimes after putting so much time and energy no comments will come. This situation makes the Writers to frustrate and would like to leave the story in between.

There may be instances where sensible Writer is struck up how to proceed further and due to many thoughts he or she is unable to decide, how to move ahead, but because of the pressure of Readers, one could go in a wrong direction and is struck off. It doesn't mean that the Writer is wrong leaving the story incomplete. Readers would say many things, which would further frustrate the Writer and would not attempt further to write again.

Rajesh Sarhadi is one such Writer, who has depth in his writings and I have a great Respect for him and would continue to do so.

The clash between you nad him is because you also love him but you are angry with him because of incomplete stories. I would say that it's your respect for him that you want to read his good content and couldn't because of incompletion. It has made you angry, but just introspect yourself and would find that you love his writings and couldn't get to read and this has made you angry.

I would rather say that Rajesh ji would be an asset for this Forum. If he starts writing, Forum would definitely be benefitted.

If you feel, I have said something overboard, please accept my apology in advance and forget what I said and just enjoy.

Thanks for being patient to read all this.

 

[player7]

No amita I have much respect for you because you are such a wonderful writer you're writing skills is too instructive for enjoying your story my opinion for rajesh is not good I know I am sorry please you dont take it seriously and go ahead keep rocking

 

[amita]

Index updated

 

[Iron Man]

Waiting for next update

 

[amita]

Waiting for next update

Thanks for waiting.
Update will be posted today

 

[player7]

Waiting very eagerly

 

[neer]

Sandhya is so beautiful that it would be beautyless to remove your eyes from that beautiful person. Now Sandhya has changed a bit, the dressing style has also changed, both of them are going to college like a girlfriend-boyfriend. Enjoyed the fun conversation between the two. Aditya is mad, mom ready to be girlfriend and he is doing drama. Shruti also seems to be addicted to Aditya. The two do not feel good without each other, this shows the love between the two. What was Sandhya talking about? are there any problems?
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Everyone is posting shayari in this thread, I will also post shayari only and only for you...
लेखक नही हू लेकिन लिखने का शौक रखती हू,
विचारों को संजोकर एक नई पहचान लिखती हू,
शब्दो की ताकत और कलम की मजबूती रखती हू,
लेखक नही हू लेकिन लिखने का शौक रखती हू...
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Nice review

 

[neer]

Update 39
Uske jate hi vo kuch soch rahi thi ki uska phone baj utha aur jab usne phone uthaya tu vo kafi der tak phone par baat karti rahi aur koi aadha ghante baad in phone se jati tu uske chere par chinta ki lakire gehri hone lagi.

Vo apani socho me hi dubi rahi aur usse waqt ka pata hi nahi chala aur door bell baji tu usne dekha ki Aditya aaya hua tha aur uske liye kucch English seekhane ki books aur Ice-cream laya tha.

Sandhya ne usse kaha ki vo dinner taiyar kar deti hai
Mom ne aaj apne khaane se Aditya ko deewana bana diya tha. Roz se jyaada khaana khaya tha usne. Pulaav aur chhole to waise bhi Aditya ka favourite khana tha. Lekin Aaj tak aisa swadisht khana usne nahi khaya tha. Aur khane ke akhir me uski layi hui ice-cream. Aditya ne socha ab aisa maja mila hai ki kya bataun, vo bahut khush tha.

Aditya ne khaane ki taarif ki“ Mom aaj se mai tumhara gulam ho gaya. Main aaj bartan dhone me tumhari madad karunga.”
Mom: Pehle tu Mom nahi, Sandhya aur dusra Iski koi jaroorat nahi Aditya.

Aditya : Nahi Mom mujhe madad karni hai.
Mom : Thik hai. Bartan mai dho dungi, tum bas kapde se pochh dena lekin mujhe Mom nahi Sandhya bulaoge.

Aditya: Ghar me tu Mom hi kanhuga
Mom muskura deti hai aur bartano ki saaf safai me jut gayi. Aditya bagal me khade hokar kapde se dhoye hue bartan sukha raha tha. Uski Mom ne bartan dhone ke liye chunni ko uttar kar ek taraf rakh diya tha.

Achanak Aditya ki najar Mom ki kamij par padi. Bartan dhone me pani se kamij bhig gayi thi. Pardarshi ho gayi thi, aar paar dekh sakta tha Aditya. Bade bade kharbooje jaise mamme saaf saaf dikhai de rahe the, unke uppar rupye jitne aakar ke nipple bhi dikhai dene lage. Har cheez to dikh rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki kapde itne patle ho gaye ki phuk maarkar phaada ja sakta hai.

Mom ko iski thodi si bhi khabar nahi. Saare Bartan dho lene ke baad wo Aditya ki taraf mudi to usko apni taraf hi dekhta paaya. Lekin usne Aditya ki najro ka peecha kiya to paaya ki wo uske mammo ko ghur raha tha. Mom ne jhat se apne hatho se apne mammo ko chhupane ki bekar koshish karne lagi.

Aditya achanak hosh me aaya. Range haath pakde jaane par Maare sharm ke uska chehra laal ho gaya tha. Wo waha se aise bhagte hue apne kamre me ghusa jaise pichhe bhut laga ho.

Sandhya ko jab iska aabhas hua tu usse bhi sharam aane lagi, lekin ab kya kar sakti thi, jo hona tha vo ho chuka tha aur vo apane kamare me jakar kapde lekar bathroom me chali gayi aur ek nighty pehankar aayi aur Aditya ke kamre me knock karke usse bulaya. Aditya bahar aaya tu vo apani nazre chura raha tha, Sandhya ne usse kaha 'Mujhe angreji nahi sikhani kya'

Aditya: Haan haan kyoun nahi
Sandhya: Mere kamre me chalte hain aur mujhe Malham bhi laga dena
Aditya: Theek hai Chalo aapke kamre me chalte hain.

Donon Sandhya ke kamre me aa gaye tu
Sandhya: kya aisa ho sakta hai ki tum malham bhi lagate raho aur mujhe sath me angreji bhi seekhate raho
Aditya: Mujhe tu koi pareshani nahi hai, aap dekho ki aap ye donon kaam ikkathe kar sakti ho ki nahi

Sandhya: (Sandhya bed par baith gayi aur baithne se pehle apani nighty ko ghutno ke upar tak uthakar) Main kar lungi
Aditya tu apani Mom ko aisa karta dekhkar utejit ho gaya aur nazar churate hur malham le aaya aur apane hath par thodhi si malham nikalkar Sandhya ke ghutane ki malish shuru kar di. Sandhya ki jaangho ko dekhkar usse kucch kucch hone laga lekin Sandhya ki awaj sunkar aanand ke gote se bahar aata hua 'Haan tu angreji seekhane ka pehla usul hai ki jo bhi socho angreji me Socho, main aap se kuchh ishare se puchunga ki ye kaya hai tu aapne mujhe batana hai'

Sandhya : Theek hai
Aditya: Isko angreji me bolo
Sandhya: Pata nahi
Aditya: Alright, ab batao ki vo kya hai
Sandhya: darwaja
Aditya: nahi Door
Sandhya: Okay

Aditya: ab theek hai
Sandhya: No, alright

Uski baat sunkar vo donon hi hansne lage aur idhar Aditya kucch kucch angreji ke words seekhata raha aur ghutane par iss tarah se malish kar raha th jisse Sandhya ki utejana ko badhava mile, taki uske munh se siskariyan sumkar Aditya ko maja aa raha tha aur vo uski khubsurati me khoya hua tha. Kafi der ke baad donon ko neend aane lagi tu Aditya apane kamare me chala gaya aur abVo dono sone ki taiyari kar rahe the.
Chalo inko sone do aur ham chalte hai Mohanlal ke paas.


Mohanlal sone ki koshish kar raha tha lekin usse rehrehkar Hotel wale drishya nazar aane lage

Mohanlal ko pata nahi ekdam gussa aa gaya aur usne begair kuch soche ek thappad Ruchika ke gaal par chipka diya aur vo thappad kafi jor ka tha jisse Ruchika jakar seedhe bed par gir gayi.

Ruchika jab bed par giri tu usne kabhi sapane me bhi nahi socha tha ki uske Papa kabhi jindagi me usse thappad bhi maar sakte hain aur vo bhi itni jot se maara tha ki uske chehre par Mohanlal ki ungaliyan tak chap gayi thi. Vo jar jar kar roye ja rahi thi.

Mohanlal gusse me tu tha lekin jaise hi usne Ruchika ko rotey dekha tu usse hosh aaya ki usne ye kya kar diya, jiss beti ko kabhi danta tak nahi usse thappad maar diya aur ab uska dil dukhi tha.

Mohanlal ne bahut socha ki ab kya karun aur isse kaise manau lekin usse kucch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Fir bhi badi himmat karke vo Ruchika ke paas gaya aur uske sar par hath rakha aur abhi kuch kehta usse pehle hi Ruchika ne uska hath jhatak diya. Usne ek baar fir se uske sar par hath rakha tu Ruchika ne palat kar kaha 'Maro aur maro, aap iske alava kar hi kya sakte hain'

Mohanlal 'Beta, I am sorry'
Ruchika ne rote rote hansana shuru kiya 'wah beta! Kya baat hai, kabhi biwi aur kabhi beta!'
Mohanlal 'Sorry, beta gusse me ho gaya'

Ruchika ' Bas itna hi gussa aaya ki Ek thappad bas aur gussa karo aur ek thappad hi kyoun, jaan hi le lo na ek baar me, kissa hi khatam karo'

Mohanlal 'Sorry beta ab nahi hoga'
Ruchika 'Beta! Jis beti ko bachpan se lekar aaj tak ek dant bhi na padi ho usse seedha jordar thappad'

Mohanlal 'Beta, vo tumne baat hi aisi kahi ki mujhe gussa aa gaya'
Ruchika subakte hue 'Maine aisa kya keh diya jo aapko itna gussa aa gaya'

Mohanlal 'Tum apane kapde mere samne hi badal logi'
Ruchika 'Patni aur Pati ek sikke ke do pehli hote hain, keh kehkar mere dimaag me acche se baitha diya aur uss par amal karne chali tu main galat kyoun, jab main patni hu tu Pati se kya sharam'

Mohanlal 'Tum meri Patni nahi beti ho'
Ruchika ab khilkhilane lagi aur chere par gusse wale bhav lakar 'Beti tu main hu nahi, hoti tu thappad kabhi nahi marte, kyounki tum apani beti ki koi takleef bardasht nahi kar sakte. Patni hu yahi samajh kar thappad maar diya na ki kaisi badtameez biwi hai jisko sharam nahi hai apane Pati se kaise baat ki jati hai. Aap kya samajhte hain ki main bevkuf hu jo aapki baaton ko samajhati nahi, pehle tu bolte ho ki meri biwi ko Modern hona chahiye aur jab modern banne ki koshish ki tu usse apane pairon ki juti banakar rakhna chahte ho. Upar se ye bhi ki Beta, Beta bolkar baap banne ka natak kar ke usse behla lena chahte ho'

Mohanlal tu uski baat sunkar hi hatparabh rah gaya aur usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare aur kya na karain aur vo kya jawab de. Fir bhi usne himmat ki aur kaha 'Ruchika tum meri jaan se jyada pyari beti ho'

Ruchika uski baat puri hone se pehle hi 'Ha....ha....ha.... Jaan se jayada pyari, isse bada kya jhuth hoga ki uss jaan se jayada pyari beti ko itni jor se thappad, wah!'

Mohanlal 'Beta galti ho gayi, please sorry beta'
Ruchika gusse me 'bas ab se mujhe aap beti nahi kanhege, aapne beti kehne ka hak kho diya hai'

Mohanlal 'Beti tu beti hi rahegi n
Ruchika 'Bahut khub, beti ab kabhi mujhe beti na kehna, beti ko biwi banakar maze lutna chahte the, mujhe kya bevkuf samjha hai'

Mohanlal 'Maine tu kabhi aisa nahi socha'
Ruchika 'Main aapki biwi hu iss tour tak aur uske baad hamara koi Rishta nahi samjhe'
Mohanlal 'Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum mujhe itna galat samajhti ho, theek hai main iss kamre se chala jata hu, tum khushi se raho' ye kehkar vo darwaje ki taraf gaya aur darwaja khola hi tha ki

Ruchika 'Bahut acche, aap iss kamre se bahar jaoge aur mujhe havalat ki sair karvaoge kyounki main aapki legal wife nahi. Jab tak ye tour khatam nahi ho jata aap sirf aur sirf mere Pati ho aur alag rehne ki tu sochana bhi nahi aur mujhe marne ki ab sochna bhi mat'

Ruchika ye bhi samajhati thi ki Mohanlal khud ko Ruchika ka doshi maan raha tha. Wo in sab mamlo me thoda jajbaati tha. Ruchika ne Mohanlal se kaha 'agar aapko iske baad bhi jaana hai to, jaa sakte ho, lekin aapke jate hi main bhi iss kamre ko chhod dungi aur pata nahi kanha jaungi'

Ruchika nahi chahati thi ki Mohanlal usse ek pal ke liye bhi dur jaaye. Mohanlal ki aankho me anischitata saaf jhalak rahi thi.

Mohanlal ne darwaaja turant andar se band kar liya. Wo wahi darwaaje se pithh tikaaye lambi lambi saanse le raha tha. Uski haalat patli ho chali thi. Kafi der vanhi khada raha aur sochta raha ki kaise ek thappad ne uski jindgi hi badal di.

Ruchika ne Mohanlal ko bahut kuch suna diya tha aur vo jakar bed par lait gayi aur shunye me takne lagi, kabhi beech beech me uske rone aur subakane ki awaje aati rahi. Kabhi vo uthkar baith jati aur fir thodi der baad lait jati aur Mohanlal ye sab dekhta raha lekin uski ab himmat nahi thi ki vo abhi Ruchika ko kucch bhi kahe. Jab vo so gayi aur kafi der tak bed par halchal na hui tu vo aakar sofey par baith gaya.

Good seduction of Sandhya and Aditya and Ruchika is angry with Mohanlal.
Nice twist

 

[neer]

The atmosphere of the house is very pleasant, dishes of choice being made. Sandhya said rightly, if you want to start this new relationship, then you have to quit saying mother. I have not seen such a teacher till today, feeling bliss along with studying.
Ruchika's mood is understood by her words. Ruchika's anger is at its peak. The matter worsened rather than settled. Amita ji, the solution to this problem is now in your hands.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Nice review