Incest Rishta

[amita]

Bahut hi shaandaar

Thanks for enjoying and comments

 

[amita]

Kya baat hai

.Maa ne beti ko bina soche samje he sab adhikar de doya

You are right in saying.
Thanks for making the point.
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[amita]

Amita you have awesome writing skill

Thanks so much for your appreciation.
Hope I could write better

 

[amita]

main shayad kuch aur expect kar raha tha lekin tum ek buniyaad rakh rahi thi Sandhya ke liye , jindagi mein hone vali ghatnayen ane vale kal pe asar daalti hain shayad yahi chupe hue pal khul ke jeene ke liye jo pati aur beti keh rahe vo kal Sandhya ko ek akelepan ki teevrta ko mehsus karate hue use apne bete ke pyaar aur uski ehmiyat ka ehsas kara gaye varna itna aasan nahi hota uske liye aaj apne bete ko ek boyfriend ki tarha dekhna aur mehsuskarna chahe waqti taur pe ek akelepan ko door karne ki koshish hi kyun na ho , par bete ka dusri ladki ke saath najdikiyaan ek maa ke liye mamuli hain lekin ek premika ke liye nahi, ek maa jo khud ko premika ke roop mein dhalne ki koshish kar rahi ho vo bete ko kisi aur ke saath dekh bhadkegi bhi aur mayus bhi hogi jo use sare bandhan todne ko majboor karegi.
Honestly an update cant be reviewed in its solo version it occurred because there is past behind it. Though you are shifting the story between past and today but you are doing it so gracefully that this last episode seemed as if it occurred just now

You have narrated the whole thing so beautifully, it's really amazing.

Thanks for such a beautiful review as well as your appreciations.

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[amita]

outstandid update amrita ji...

Thanks so much for your appreciations.

Well please don't mind I am Amita not Amrita.
May be auto correction.

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[amita]

Hi there, only few writers Iconic at this forum u are one of them. Kindly complete ur task asap.

Please specify this message is for me or someone else

 

[happyraj]

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nice lov

wc

 

[happyraj]

nice lov

its my pleasure

 

[Lodon Ka Raja]

NICE STORY

 

[Nasn]

Thanks so much for your appreciations.

Well please don't mind I am Amita not Amrita.
May be auto correction.

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Sorry I know You Are Amita mem..
its error by Autocorrect.…..??