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Incest Rishta

amita

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संध्या के मन में अब कोई दो राय नहीं है कि वो अपने बेटे को एज ए लवर प्यार करती है लेकिन आदित्य शायद अभी भी सन्ध्या के मन के भावों को ठीक से समझ नहीं पा रहा है.....या समझ कर भी अनजान बनने का नाटक कर रहा हो ।
जो प्रोब्लम रूचिका और मोहनलाल में " दोनों में से एक चुनने की " हुई थी....सेम प्रोब्लम संध्या और आदित्य में भी हो रही है । देखें , ये दोनों इस प्रोब्लम को कैसे शार्ट आउट करते हैं ।

Very Very Good Update.
Aapka vishleshan bahut hi Uttam darje ka hai.
Aapne harek ke manobhavo ko bahut bariki se samajh kar iska vishleshan kiya hai

Aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad.
 

vikram_singh

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QUOTE="amita, post: 1888083, member: 3367"]
Janha tak meri samajh hai koi bhi writer kabhi bhi jaanbhujkar kahani ko bich me chhodega.

Ho sakta hai uss writer ki kucch personal majburi ho ya kucch aur commitment ho, hame inn baton ka bhi dhyaan rakhna chahiye.

Ham Pathak apana hak samajhte hain ki lekhak ko update jaldi se jaldi dena chahiye aur kahani ko pura karna chahiye, ye hamara lekhak ke prati pyaar aur uss kahani me hamari gehri ruchi hai. Ye ek swabhavik samvedna hai, lekin kai baar kahani aise mod par aa jati hai ki lekhak bhi uljhan me aa jata hai ki kis disha me kahani ko lekar jaye kyounki ek tu uski khud ki soch aur dusra pathkon ke sujhav aur unka dabav, itna hi nahi uski khud ki parivarik aur vyavsayik jimmewariyan usko aage badhne se rok deti hain. Aise waqt me mera manna hai ki lekhak ko hamara sehyog usse aage badhne ke liye prerit karega aur vo ek acchi kahani prastut kar payega jisse padhkar ham uska aanand utha sakte hain.

Yanha hame ye kabhi nahi bhulna chahiye ki lekhak ya Pathak jo bhi iss forum par hain vo sab apani khushi se enjoy karne ke liye aate hain.
Ham ek dusre ko kucch kehkar apana aur dusre ka dil nahin dukhana chahiye balki janha tak sambhav ho kuch bura bhi laga ho tu usse bhulakar khushi se rehna chahiye, aisa mera manna hai.


Meri baat ka agar thodha sa bhi bura laga ho tu main kshama prathi hun

Dhanyavaad
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Last visited this forum in April this year. Came to this story to see whether the story has been completed. From the readers' preview, I can make out they are very much enamoured of your style of writing. Though there have been quite a few updates since April, a little disappointed personally to see that the story has not been completed. Shall comment on the story once I have read the downloaded updates. Good to see Amita spiritedly defending her fellow writers on the forum. But if a writer has for some reason got stuck somewhere in the storyline and is unable to continue with the story for a reasonably long period of time, the least he could do is to apologise to the readers and bring the story to an end. This much every writer owes to his readers, am sure everybody will agree. Better than going incommunicado and not answering readers' repeated please to continue. And if the writer is a habitual offender as in leaving stories incomplete without any any intimation, he should be banned from posting on the forum.

Once the writer declares the story closed without completing it, it should either be removed from the forum or tagged "closed incomplete" to ensure more/new readers are nor disappointed going forward. Let the reader use his discretion if he wants to start reading a story which was left incomplete.
 

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