Naik
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Bahot shaandaar khoobsurat payar se bhara romantic update amita ji
Aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hain, shuru me wakai dikkat hoti hai.ये रिश्ता ही ऐसा है । थोड़ा सकुचाना , थोड़ा झिझकना , थोड़ा शर्माना , थोड़ा अन सेक्यूरड फिल करना ।
मां बेटा या बाप बेटी में ऐसा रिश्ता अगर कभी होता तो बिल्कुल ऐसा ही होता ।
बहुत खूबसूरती से इस रिश्तों की कशमकश को पेश किया है अमीता जी आप ने ।
Happy to note that this update made you happy and once again writing a beautiful review.I am very happy that Aditya has got a package of 10 lakhs. Sandhya and Aditya are much better with each other than before and it was great seeing them both together but once again Sandhya felt a bit uncomfortable. Overall everything was lovely, can say that and both have grown closer.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Thanks so much for your kind words of appreciationBehad hi shandar or jabardast update
nice update ..
Welcome to the Thread.nice update ..bahut seduction chal raha hai dono ke bich ,,ab lagta hai sandhya girlfriend wala kaam karne ko taiyar ho rahi hai ..
Aapne itni tareef kar di, dil khush ho gaya. Aapne iss update ko pasand kiya, aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad.Bahot shaandaar khoobsurat payar se bhara romantic update amita ji
I can understand that a Great Writer like you would always have thousands of queries with regards to any story or even update.kahani kal (jo gujar chuka) aur aaj ke beech ghum rahi hai, ek sawal hai mera lekin abhi nahi bolunga agle kuch update dekhta hun, agar laga sawal uchit hai to jarur uthaunga, kyunki mujhe nahi lagta ke tum jaisi writer vo kami chodegi jo is waqt mere dimag mein aa rahi hai![]()
To be honest with you I am the most hated person Xossip where I started writing and honestly it sucked my writing too. ( I try but I can not those trolls start featuring) as I said will observe few more updates because some times when the story is dillydolling in past n present even best of a reader could get confusedI can understand that a Great Writer like you would always have thousands of queries with regards to any story or even update.
I Would be delighted to answer any of your questions.
Mistakes are part of any work. You have given me credit that I won't commit any mistake, well it's your greatness.
No doubt I take extra care not to commit one, however if it's there I would accept it with grace and would try to rectify.
Thanks so much
To be honest with you I am the most hated person Xossip where I started writing and honestly it sucked my writing too. ( I try but I can not those trolls start featuring) as I said will observe few more updates because some times when the story is dillydolling in past n present even best of a reader could get confused![]()