Incest Rishta

[amita]

nice update ..to sandhya isliye naaraj thi ki aditya usko biwi nahi bolta ..usko mom nahi sirf biwi bankar rehna hai .
aditya ko mom se pyar karne me maja aata hai,, wahi sandhya ko pati banakar ..

Good imagination and explaination.

May be what you said is right, but it could be something else too.

Thanks for appreciating and nice review

 

[Aakash.]

I understood how Sandhya's mental state is, but I feel very bad, There can be many reasons for this, such as Sandhya doing this work behind her husband or she does not like Aditya's support, or desire to become a wife, Please make Sandhya the first one. Aditya is also trying his best, but I do not understand why Sandhya is alive like a corpse? Work is also important but the most important is the joy of Sandhya which is now lost and I do not even understand how I can explain to you how I feel. It seems like the mood of Sandhya has been fixed but what is the reason and I will not guess.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

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[amita]

I understood how Sandhya's mental state is, but I feel very bad, There can be many reasons for this, such as Sandhya doing this work behind her husband or she does not like Aditya's support, or desire to become a wife, Please make Sandhya the first one. Aditya is also trying his best, but I do not understand why Sandhya is alive like a corpse? Work is also important but the most important is the joy of Sandhya which is now lost and I do not even understand how I can explain to you how I feel. It seems like the mood of Sandhya has been fixed but what is the reason and I will not guess.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

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Superb review.
Happy to know that you understood the mental state of Sandhya.
Well the story is progressing and it would unfold many interesting things, which you would definitely enjoy.

Thanks for your constant, untiring support.

Thanks so much

 

[Rohit]

bahut badhiya ek mast update, bahut h garam aur kamuk tharika se is kahaani likha aapne madam, bahut khoob

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Good imagination and explaination.

May be what you said is right, but it could be something else too.

Thanks for appreciating and nice review

writer ji aap hindi me batao ki kya keh rahe ho ..english me kuch jyada samajh nahi aata ki aapne taarif ki yaa tont maara ..

 

[amita]

bahut badhiya ek mast update, bahut h garam aur kamuk tharika se is kahaani likha aapne madam, bahut khoob

Aapka iss Thread par Swagat hai.
Aapko kahani pasand aayi mujhe bahut khushi hui.

Aise hi sath banaye rakhna.
Dhanyavad

 

[amita]

writer ji aap hindi me batao ki kya keh rahe ho ..english me kuch jyada samajh nahi aata ki aapne taarif ki yaa tont maara ..

Maine Aapki kalpanashakti aur vyakhya ki tareef ki thi.

Sath me ye bhi kaha hai ki jo aap soch rahe ho, vaisa bhi ho sakta, lekin kucch aur bhi jo sakta hai.

Maine tu Aapki tareef hi ki hai koi tount nahin.

Main kisi ki kahi hui galat baat par bhi Tony nahi karti tu aap ki sahi baat par kaise ho sakta hai.

Maine jo English me likha hai, vo sirf aur sirf aapki tareef hai.

Dhanyawad

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Maine Aapki kalpanashakti aur vyakhya ki tareef ki thi.

Sath me ye bhi kaha hai ki jo aap soch rahe ho, vaisa bhi ho sakta, lekin kucch aur bhi jo sakta hai.

Maine tu Aapki tareef hi ki hai koi tount nahin.

Main kisi ki kahi hui galat baat par bhi Tony nahi karti tu aap ki sahi baat par kaise ho sakta hai.

Maine jo English me likha hai, vo sirf aur sirf aapki tareef hai.

Dhanyawad

thanks ..par tont aur taarif me bahut kam anter hota hai isliye aisa kaha ..
jaise --- ***** tu bada chalu hai ***
ye taarif hai ya kuch aur ..samajhne wale aur samjhaane wale ka explanation hai ..

 

[amita]

thanks ..par tont aur taarif me bahut kam anter hota hai isliye aisa kaha ..
jaise --- ***** tu bada chalu hai ***
ye taarif hai ya kuch aur ..samajhne wale aur samjhaane wale ka explanation hai ..

Samjhane ke liye shukriya

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

good one