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maine majak nahi udaya ..us kahani me non stop sex karta hai ..us kahani me yahi kehna tha ki itna sex kaise karta hai ( jo 2 ya 4 reader ka kehna tha ) bas isliye kamdev ji aur sexy launda ji ko bataya ..
aur maine un writer se kaha hai ki kahani mujhe pasand hai ..bas cancer ki baat aayi to kuch yaad aa gaya ..bura mat maanna 🙏🙏..
Shi kha leon32 bhai cancer se kuch kya bhut kuch yad aa gya:respekt::feelsbadman::DD::DD:
 

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har sawaal ka jawaab mil gaya ki abtak ka matter kya tha 🤩..
sandhya ne apne bimaar beti ke baare me sochkar ye faisla liya ..

par kya mohanlal ko itni badi baat ( cancer ). apne patni se chupana sahi tha 🤔🤔..ruchika sirf mohan ki hi nahi sandhya ki bhi beti hai aur wi kitna pyar karti hai apne beti se jiske liye usne ye sab kiya ..
matlab mohanlal apne patni par utna trust nahi karta 🤔🤔..yaa usko apni patni me koi dilchaspi nahi hai 🤔🤔..
Chalo accha hai ki aapke swalon ke jawab mil gaye.

Baki jo aapke naye swaal paida hue hain unka bhi samadhan aane wale anko me milega
 

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This is why always

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What a deep analysis of thoughts of each individual person in this story.
We can never disrespect experience which kamdev99008 has tons of in him.:DD:

Really

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First of all Welcome to this Thread and Thanks to Kaamdev ji because of whose analysis you are here.

Agree with your remarks fully

Yes he has vast and rich experience which he translates into his powerful writings, may be story or review or any analysis as described here.

He has all the ingredients to translate into an effective and fruitful writing.

Thanks so much
 
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Good, अब नजदीकियां बढ़ती जा रही है और प्यार की चिंगारी भी भड़क चुकी है तो प्यार के तूफान में शोले भी नजर आयेंगे।
Padhne, pasand karne aur sarahana karne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad
 
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In today's update, I got to know everything about what happened and why Sandhya was attracted to Aditya.
At the time, I can understand Sandhya's pain, Sandhya was alone and wanted to see both daughter and husband happy. Aditya companion of Sandhya's loneliness but he still doesn't know the truth?
Ruchika has cancer and her condition is slowly deteriorating, I feel very bad, I am writing a review with difficulty, I don't feel like writing. I pray that everything goes well.Why do I feel sad about Diya and Mohanlal's closeness?
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

🖤🖤🖤
Wonderful review.
Yes this update revealed many facts and no doubt it was a sad update. I can understand that this type of update is not liked by Readers on this Forum and the same was mentioned when it was updated.

But being helpless as the story has to move on and each path on the journey can't be smooth, some bumps would be there.
One needs to enjoy both and think about the destination which would be fantastic.

Thanks so much
 

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Update 25

Thodhi der aur iss tarah karne ke baad ab Aditya se bardasht nahi ho raha tha aur usse lag raha tha ki kanhin isse aage badne par kuchh galat na ho jaye tu usne kaha "ab aap so jao aur main bhi ja raha hu". Sandhya ne uski taraf dekha, uska man tu kar raha tha ki Aditya iss khel ko chalu rakhe, lekin nari lajja ne usse chetaya aur usne kaha "Thanks" tab Aditya ne kaha "aap mujhe bhi Thanks kahogi tu kaise chalega, isliye No Thanks, aapka mujh par pura adhikar hai, jab aap kahogi main hazir ho jaunga" aur itna kehkar vo kamre se nikal gaya.

Vanha se nikalkar apane kamare me aakar bed par lait kar apane aur Mom ke Rishte ke baare me sochane laga aur sochate sochate so gaya.

Isko sone dete hain aur ham chalte hain Mohanlal ke paas.

Mohanlal ne maza lete hue usse kaha "thodha tez bolo na, sunai nahi diya" Ruchika ek dam se sharma gayi aur ekdam se Mohanlal ke gale lag gayi aur ek baar fir se "M..o..o..h..aa..nn" aur ye kehkar apane chere ko Mohanlal ki chhati me chupa liya aur apane hathon ko uski peeth par lejakar kas liya aur uske ubharon ne Mohanlal ki chathi me dhans kar Mohanlal ke hridye me uthal puthal mach di aur uske haath bhi Ruchika ki peeth par panhuchkar usse apane se kas liya aur uske mathe ko chumkar kaha "Meri Jàan, meri biwi Ruchika"

Ruchika ne jab apane mathe par Mohanlal ke honthon ka sparsh mehsoos hua tu use vo saparsh aaj kuch alag sa lag raha tha. Usse laga ki ho sakta hai yeh uska vaham ho lekin yeh saparsh uske man ke taron ko chedh gaya. Yeh saparsh tha tu kuch seconds ka lekin uska asar bahut gehra tha aur Ruchika ka man chah raha tha ki kaash ye saparsh thodha lamba hota. Usse lagne laga ki shayad uske Papa ne vo chumban aisa liya tha jaise shayad vo apani biwi ka lete honge. Uske man me ekdam se aaya ki vo unki biwi ka role hi tu kar rahi hai, isliye vo chumban uske Papa ne uska Pati bankar liya hai. Baat samajh aate hi usse sharam aane lagi aur uske hathon ki pakad apane Papa ki peeth se dheeli ho gayi aur vo unse alag hokar peeth karke khadi ho gayi aur uski saanse ekdam tez chalne lagi.

Mohanlal ko pehle tu kucch samajh nahi aaya, lekin fir usse dhyaan aaya ki Ruchika uski beti bhi hai aur nai nai Jawan ho rahi hai tu uski bhavnayen bhadakne me uske hug aur mathe par kiss ki vajah se hua hai. Usko laga ki kahin baat bigad na jaye tu usne aage badkar halke se uske kandhe par hath rakh kar kaha "kya hua Ruchika"

Jaise hi Mohanlal ne uske kandhe par hath rakha tu uski saanson ki gati ekdam itni tej ho gayi ki uske seene par donon ubharon ne upar neeche hona shuru kar diya. Mohanlal ne bade pyaar se use apani aur ghumya tu dekha ki uske ubahar upar neeche ho rahe hain jo usko acche tu lag rahe the lekin apane aap ko niyantrit karte hue usne kaha "Ruchika, main pehle hi janta tha ki ye Pati Patni ki tarah behave karna aasan nahi hota chahe vo naatak hi kyoun na ho"

Ruchika kya bolti usse tu kucch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha us bechari ne tu iss tarah ki anubhuti ka kabhi anubhav hi nahi kiya tha vo tu kya kehti, bas apani palkon ko sharam se jhuka kar khadi thi. Mohanlal ne uski thudhi ke neeche ungali rakhkar uske chehre ko upar uthate hue kaha "Dekho abhi kucch nahi bigada hai, agar tumhe meri Patni jaisa behave karne me dikkat hai tu tum jaise pehle tha vaise hi beti bankar raho aur usme tu koi dikkat ka sawaal hi nahi hai, kyounki usme na tu tumhe kucch sochana padega aur na hi apane aap ko badalna padega"

Ruchika ne apani palke jhukaye hue hi apani saanson ko thodha niyantrit kiya aur kaha "Main janti hu ki Patni ki tarah behave karne me dikkat aayegi, Kyounki main kabhi Patni nahi bani aur na hi kabhi aaj se pehle naatak kiya hai. Dikkat tu hai lekin iss tour par ab main aapki patni ki bhumika me hi ranhugi aur koshish karungi ki iss bhumika ko acche se nibha paun"

Mohanlal ne uski baat sunkar usse bade pyaar se usko pakad kar seat par baithaya aur uske sar par hath ferte hue "Ruchika, dekho beta mujhe lag raha hai ki meri Patni ka role nibhana tumhare liye mushkil hai, isliye meri salah maan jao aur ham dusre hotel me jayenge aur tum paise ki chinta bilkul bhi naa karo"

Ruchika ne kuchh socha aur fir apane chere ko upar uthaya aur kaha "Main ab aapki beti nahi Patni hu aur apani Patni ko beta nahi kehte. Thodhi si mushkil tu hai, lekin ab se lekar chahe kucch bhi ho jaye aap mujhe apani Patni hi manege" aur itna kehkar usne apani palke jhuka li.

Mohanlal ne Ruchika ke chere par ek dridh nischay dekha tha tu usse bhi laga ki ab uski beti Ruchika ekdam se badi ho gayi hai aur usse Ruchika par bahut pyaar aane lagaa. Uska jo hath sar par tha vo sar ke peeche se hota hua uske kandhe par panhuch gaya aur bade pyaar se uske kandhe ko halke se sehlate hue "Meri beti Ruchika ab badi ho gayi hai aur usne ab meri Patni banne ka dridh nischay kar liya hai. Mujhe tumhare nischay se khushi bhi hui lekin sath me dukhi bhi hu ki bina vajah meri beti ko apani identity ko bhulakar meri Patni banana pad raha hai. Beta main tu isliye tumhe mana kar raha tha ki tumhe akele me bhi Patni ki tarah behave karne me dikkat ho rahi thi tu socho ki jab ham bahar wale logon ke sath honge tu tab kya hoga aur agar logon ko thodha sa bhi shaq ho gaya tu beta ham donon ke liye bahut badi mushkil ho jayegi"

Ruchika bade dhyaan se Mohanlal ki baat sun rahi thi aur apane chere par ek halki smile late hue "Aap mujhe baar baar beti bolkar mujhe bhatka rahe ho aur iss vajah se main aapki Patni banne me galti kar jati hu aur jaisa ki aap keh rahe hain ki main akele me aapki patni ka role nibhane me galti kar rahi hu tu dusro ke samne bhi galti ke pure pure chance hain aur main isse bilkul sehmat hu, lekin ab se aap mere vishwas ko dagmagane se rokane ke liye aap bhul jaiye ki main aapki beti hu. Main sirf aur sirf aapki Patni hu aur jitna bhi waqt ab ham train me hain vo hamari reharasal ka waqt maankar jaise ki aap apani patni ke saath behave karte hain, vaisa hi kijiye taki mera confidence bade na ki aap usse baar baar mujhe beti bolkar kam karen"

Mohanlal tu uski baat sunkar hakka bakka reh gaya aur vo Ruchika ko aise dekhne laga jaise uske sar par seengh ugg aaye ho. Chahe jo bhi ho lekin usse bahut accha lagne laga aur uske man me gudgudi hone lagi ki baithe bithaye Ruchika jaisi husan pari uski Patni ka role aada kar rahi hai. Vo sochane laga ki jab vo uski beti hi thi tu uski khubsurati me vo kho jata tha aur uske man me uske saath samay bitane ko hota tha, lekin kucch galat na ho jaye isliye vo jaanbhujh kar usse dur rehne laga tha. Ab waqt ki dhar dekho kaise anjane me vo uske sath aa gayi aur usne khud hi Patni banne ka nischay kar liya hai aur mujhe bhi keh diya hai ki usse beti na samjhu. Jab usse apani biwi samjhunga tu apane man ko kaise samjhunga aur koi galti ho gai tu kya vo bura nahi maan jayegi. In socho me duba hua tha aur donon baap beti chup the aur kucch nahi bol rahe the ki tabhi coupe ke darwaje par knock hua tu Mohanlal ne jakar dekha tu waiter chai lekar aaya tha aur chai aur snacks rakh kar chala gaya.

Uske jane ke baad Mohanlal ne coupe ko andar se lock kar diya aur Ruchika ke paas jakar baith gaya aur uske chere par aayi lat ko hatakar uske chehre ko apane hathon me lekar uski aankhon me jhankte hue bade pyaar se usse kehne laga "Tum meri beti tu ho hi aur rahogi lekin main bhi tumhari baat mante hue ab se tum sirf aur sirf Meri Patni aur tumhe tab tak beti nahi kanhuga jab tak tum nahi chahogi."

Ruchika 'Thanks ki aapne meri bhavnaon ko samjha aur baat ko mana'

Mohanlal 'Madam, pehle tu ek baat acchhi tarah se apane man me baitha lo ki Pati aur Patni ek sikke ke do pehlu hote hain, vo do nahi ek hote hain aur koi bhi apane aap ko Thanks nahi kehta'

Ruchika 'Sorry sorry aage se dhyaan rakhungi'

Mohanlal ne hanste hue uske chere ko apane hathon me aur acche se pakad kar 'apane aap ko Sorry bhi nahi boltey'

Ruchika bhi smile karte hue 'Aapne bhi tu mujhe Sorry kaha tha'

Mohanlal 'ab lag raha hai ki tum meri Patni ban gayi ho, isliye barabar ki takkar de rahi ho, chalo accha hai'

Ruchika 'Chai pee lete hain' aur ye kehkar vo vanha se uthkar khidki ke paas bani table par rakhi hui Thermos se chai ko ek cup me dala aur jab dusre me dalne lagi tu Mohanlal ne usko rokate hue kaha 'Madam chai Pati ke sath peeni hai ya kisi aur ke saath'

Ruchika 'Pati ke saath'

Mohanlal 'Acche Pati Patni tu ek hi cup se peete hain, ab tum decide karo ki ham acche Pati Patni hain ki nahi'

Ruchika tu Mohanlal ki baat sunkar ekdam se sharma gayi aur Thermos ko vanhi rakh diya aur ek cup jisme chai thi utha liya tu Mohanlal ne uska hath pakad kar apane banyi taraf baitha liya aur chai ka cup uske munh ke paas lejakar usse peene ke liye kaha tu usne kaha 'Pehle aap' Mohanlal ne kaha 'Ladies First' tu Ruchika ne kaha 'Pehle pati fir patni'

Mohanlal 'Tum modern jamane ki Patni ho aur pehle pati wala kissa ab nahi chalega balki jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki Pati Patni do nahi ek hain aur donon me kisi bhi tarah ka koi fark nahi hai aur mere man me ladies first ki bhavna hai kyonki main ladies ki bahut izzat karta hu. Meri patni banana hai tu mera maana hai ki meri patni dabbu nahi balki confident honi chahiye jo har tarah ki dikkaton ka samna kar sakti ho'

Ruchika 'Main confident bankar dikhaungi'
Mohanlal 'That's like my wife. Chalo fir pehle tum piyo' tu Ruchika ne ek sip liya aur sip lene ke baad usne Mohanlal ki taraf cup kiya tu usne dekha ki Cup ke upar lipstick ke nishan aa gaya tu usse purana scene yaad aa gaya aur usne Muskarate hue ek sip liya aur fir cup ko Ruchika ki oor karke usse sip lene ke liye kaha tu usne bhi sharmate hue sip liya, iss tarah ek dusre ko sip karate hue uss cup ki chai khatam ho gayi.

Mohanlal ne vanha par rakha hua ek sandwich uthaya aur usse Ruchika ko khane ke liye kaha tu usne ek bite liya tu sandwich me se thodhi si cream usme se nikal kar Ruchika ke munh ke paas lag gayi tu Mohanlal Ruchika ki taraf hua aur uss cream ko apani ungali se uske munh par rakha tu Ruchika ekdam sihar gayi lekin Mohanlal ne uss ungali ki madad se cream ko vanha se lete hue apane munh me daal li tu Ruchika ne kaha ki 'Tissue se saaf kar lungi'

Mohanlal 'Mian hu tu tissue ki kya jarurat hai' tu Ruchika uski baat sunkar sharma gayi aur palke jhukaye hue baith gayi tu Mohanlal ne baar bar ungali uske munh par chua kar apane munh me le jata aur iss tarah se uske munh se sari cream saaf kar di.

Ab Ruchika ne sandwich Mohanlal ki taraf badaya tu vo jakar Mohanlal ki naak se takra gaya aur uss sandwich se cream nikalkar Ruchika ki ungaliyon par lag gayi tu Mohanlal ne kaha 'Main sandwich naak se nahi munh se khata hu'

Ruchika ne nazar utha kar dekha ki Sandwich ki cream Mohanlal ke naak par lagi hui thi tu usse thodhi hansi aane lagi tu Mohanlal ne kaha 'chalo accha hai ki meri vajah se tumhe hansi tu aayi'

Ruchika ne tissue uthane ke liye hath badaya tu Mohanlal ne uska hath pakadkar usse aisa karne se rok diya tu Ruchika ne uski taraf dekha tu usne aankhon ke ishra se tissue ke liye na kaha tu Ruchika ne sharmate hue apane hath se uski naak saaf karne ke liye uski taraf jhuki tu Mohanlal ko uske ubharon ko najdik se dekhkar aanand ka ehsaas hua aur Ruchika ne jaise hi naak ko hath se saaf karna chha tu vo saaf tu kya hoti balki us par Ruchika ki ungali par laga hua cream bhi lag gaya tu vo preshan ho gayi ki kya kare tu fir se tissue uthane ke liye hath badaya tu Mohanlal ne uska hath pakad liya aur mana kar diya.

Ruchika ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare, tabhi uske dimagh ne kaam kiya aur apane banye hath ko Mohanlal ki naak par lejakar acche se saaf kar diya. Mohanlal ki naak tu saaf ho gayi lekin ab uske donon hathon par cream lag gayi thi tu usne fir se tissue uthane ke liye hath badaya tu Mohanlal ne uska hath pakad liya aur dhire se usse apane munh me daal diya aur usse chatne laga tu Ruchika ke dil ki dhadkan ekdam se badh gayi. Mohanlal dhire dhire uske hath par lagi hui sari cream kha gaya aur fir dusra hath bhi pakad kar apane munh ki taraf le jane laga tu Ruchika aankhon ke ishare se mana karne lagi lekin Mohanlal kanha rukne wala tha aur usne uska hath munh me lekar cream ko chatne laga aur thodhi cream uski hatheli par bhi lagi thi vo bhi apani jeebh se chat gaya. Ruchika ki tu halat dekhane wali thi uske urojono ne uski saanson ki lay me dance karna shuru kar diya.

Mohanlal ki nazar jakar uske urojono par thahar gayi aur kafi der tak usne apani nazar ko vanha se nahi hataya, jiska ehsaas Ruchika ko bhi ho gaya tu usne Mohanlal se puccha "aap kya dekh rahe hain"

Mohanlal ' Apani Patni ki khubsurati ko Dekh raha hu aur ye dekha ki meri patni bahut hi jayada khubsurat hai'
Ruchika apani tareef sunkar sharma gayi aur apane chehre ko uski nazron se dur karne lagi. Mohanlal ne uska ek hath pakadkar usse apne aur jayada paas karke baitha liya aur dhire se uske hath ko sehlate hue kaha 'Meri biwi bahut khubsurat hai aur uski khubsurati ka koi muqabla nahi kar sakta'

Ruchika man hi man khush bhi ho rahi thi aur ek naye ehsaas ko bhi anubhav kar rahi thi, kyounki kisi ne bhi iss andaj me uski tareef nahi ki thi, tabhi uske chehre ko Mohanlal ne pakadkar apani taraf kiya aur apane munh ko uske chehre ke pass karne laga tu Ruchika ko ghabrahat hone lagi ki ye kya ho raha hai aur ghabrahat me apani aankhon ko band kar liya.

Mohanlal apane munh ko aur paas karta gaya aur fir usne Ruchika ko jaise hi chuma tu Ruchika jiski saanse bahut tej chal rahi thi aur Mohanlal ke honthon ka saparsh pakar apani aankhe ek pal ke liye khol deti hai aur uski khushi ka thikana nahi rehta jab usse pata chalta hai ki Mohanlal ka chumban uske mathe par tha aur vo rahat ki saans leti hai. Usse dar lag raha tha ki Mohanlal ka chumban uske hothon par hoga aur vo na chahte hue bhi usse rok nahi payegi lekin mathe par chumban hone se uske man me Mohanlal ke prati aadar ka bhav aa gaya aur khushi me usne apani banhe Mohanlal ke gale me daal di tu Mohanlal hairan reh gaya.

Mohanlal ko uske hathon ka saprsh apane gale par ek alag ehsaas de raha tha aur uske urojono ki narmhat ka ehsaas apani chathi par uske liye ek bahut hi sukhad anubhuti thi. Mohanlal ke hath bhi Ruchika ki kamar par panhuch kar uski peeth ko sehlane lage tu uske hathon ne Ruchika ki bra ke strap ka sparsh ka ehsaas kiya tu Mohanlal ka tapman ek jhatke me badh gaya aur vo sapno ki duniya me panhuch gaya. Ruchika ne bhi iss baat ko Mehsoos kiya ki uske Papa ke hathon ne uski bra ke strap ka ehsaas kiya hai tu usko bahut jayada sharam aane lagi, lekin fir apane aapnko samjahane lagi. Abhi baap beti aur kucch aage badte tabhi gate par knock hua tu Mohanlal ne uthkar dekha tu waiter tha aur usne bataya ki unka station aane wala hai.

Mohanlal ne usse tip dekar vida kiya aur fir gate band karke Ruchika se taiyar hone ko kaha tu dekha ki vo nazar jhukaye baithi hai. Mohanlal uske paas gaya aur uske kandhe par hath rakhkar kaha 'naya Rishta nibhane me dikkat hai tu purana Rishta'

Ruchika ne Mohanlal ko dekhkar kaha 'Main ab naye Rishte ke liye taiyar hu' aur iss baat ko pakka karne ke liye usne apana hath Mohanlal ke hath par rakh diya aur usse kaha ki 'aap chinta na karo kisi ko bhi nahi pata lagega ki Main aapki biwi nahi hu, balki har koi aapki aur aapki biwi ki tareef karega ki donon bahut accha couple hain'
Fir Ruchika ne apane purse me se kuchh kuchh nikalkar apana makeup theek karne lagi. Fir train rukne ke baad donon train se neeche aaye aur Ruchika ne Mohanlal ke hath ko iss tarah se pakada hua tha jaise ki nai naveli dulhan apane pati ka hath pakad kar chalti ho
Wonderful, अब देखते है कि नई दुल्हन क्या रंग दिखाती है।
 
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First of all Welcome to this Thread and Thanks to Kaamdev ji because of whose analysis you are here.

Agree with your remarks fully

Yes he has vast and rich experience which he translates into his powerful writings, may be story or review or any analysis as described here.

He has all the ingredients to translate into an effective and fruitful writing.

Thanks so much
Your story is so good and engrossing that maximum times I forget to comment on the update after reading and also seriously I think myself not qualified enough to comment on this great story. One of the best stories in this forum.

But I know I am qualified to comment on his comments, one of good and interesting readers here
 

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Itna kehkar Ruchika vanha se uthi aur jakar bed par lait gayi aur gusse me kaha 'Jaiye aap main ab iss kamre se teen din baad hi niklungi aur aap ko bilkul bhi kisi cheez ke liye nahi kanhugi'

Mohanlal tu Ruchika ki baat sunkar hakka bakka rah gaya ki vo kya bol gayi. Usko Ruchika ki aisi soch par gussa bhi bahut aa raha tha, lekin vo apani ladli ko kabhi bhi dukhi nahi dekh sakta tha tu aaj kaise dekhta.

Uske man me kai tarah ke vichar aa rahe the lekin sabse jayada aham tha ki Ruchika dukhi na ho tu usne apane gusse aur ego ko ek taraf karte hue Ruchika ko manane ki sochi aur vo Ruchika ke paas jakar uske sar par jaise hi hath rakha tu usne jhatak diya aur kehne lagi 'Aap ko janha jana hai, jo karna hai kariye, lekin mujhe akela chhod dijiye' aur vo rone lagi.

Mohanlal uske rone se aur jayada dukhi ho gaya aur ek baar fir se uske sar par hath rakha tu usne fir se jhatak diya tu Mohanlal ne bahut hi sanjidgi se kaha 'Lagta hai tumne mujhe galat samajh liya hai, meri mansha sirf itni si thi ki tumhe koi taklif na ho baki tum jaisa chahogi main vaise hi karunga, bas chup ho hai'

Ruchika 'Mujhe kucch nahi kehna, aap ko jo accha lage, aap vo kariye aur mujhe ab in sab se koi farak nahi padta' itna kehkar fir se subakane lagi.

Mohanlal ko kucch samajh nahi aa raha tha tu usne kaha 'Theek hai jaisi tumhari Marji, lekin jara thande dimagh se sochna ki Maine koi galti ki hai ki nahi aur jab gussa Uttar jaye tu fir baat karenge' aur kehkar sofey baith gaya.

Ruchika subakati rahi aur uske subakane ki awaj Mohanlal ke kano me padti tu usse bahut peeda hoti thi aur uska man karta tha ki vo usse manaye lekin kaise, uska gussa utarane ka naam le hi nahi raha tha. Kucch der aise hi baithe rehne ke baad usne ek gilas me pani liya aur Uske paas jakar 'Meri pyari biwi, uth jao na'

Ruchika 'koun biwi, main tu aapki beti hu'
Mohanlal 'Ab uth bhi jao aur main tumhari baat manunga'
Ruchika 'Main ab aapki chikni chupadi baton me nahi aane wali aur aapko meri koi baat manne ki koi jarurat nahi hai'

Mohanlal ne usse kaha ki 'pehle pani pi lo fir baat karenge'
Ruchika 'Mujhe pani peena hoga tu main pi lungi, aapko mere liye koi taklif karne ki jarurat nahi hai'

Mohanlal 'Mujhe tu takleef tab hoti hai jab tum dukhi hoti ho, agar tum chahti ho ki main dukhi na houn tu ye paani pi lo'

Ruchika ne pata nahi kya socha lekin Pani le liya aur peene lagi aur jab usne pani pi liya tu gilass lekar Mohanlal table ki taraf jate hue 'Thanks'

Ruchika 'Main pehle hi keh rahi thi ki aapka samajh hi nahi aata, abhi biwi bol rahe the aur ab Thanks bol rahe ho'
Mohanlal 'Sorry, sorry'

Ruchika ke chehre par muskan aa gayi 'aapne prove kar hi diya ki aap aur main couple nahi hain'

Mohanlal usko Muskarate dekhkar kehne laga 'Tumhare chehre par muskaan dekhne ke liye tu kucch bhi kar sakta hu, Thanks aur Sorry tu isliye bola hai'

Ruchika 'Matalab aapne Thanks aur Sorry man se nahi bola'

Mohanlal 'Biwi ko bhi koi ye sab bolta hai, tu main Kyoun bolunga, vo tu tumhe khush karne ke liye bola tha'

Ruchika jo bed par uthkar baithi thi vo daudkar Mohanlal ke paas aayi aur gale lag gayi aur kehne lagi 'Jab aapne kaha tha ki ham ek donon do nahi ek hain tu fir baar baar aap mujhe confuse kyoun karte ho'

Mohanlal 'Mera aashay sirf itna hi tha ki tum dukhi na ho, agar tumhe koi taklif nahi tu mujhe kya Preshani hogi' aur ye kehkar usne bhi Ruchika ko apani banho me bhar liya tu uski chuchiyan jo chati se lagi hui thi aur usko aisa lag raha tha ki aaj vo jaise kucch jayada hi uski chati par feel ho rahi thi tu uske armaan bhadakane lage aur uske hath dheere dheere Ruchika ki peeth par chalne lage.

Mohanlal ke hatho ko apani peeth par usse aaj bahut sukun de rahe the, lekin usse iski vajah nahi pata lag rahi thi. Ruchika ke hath jo pehle se hi Mohanlal ki peeth par the vo bhi apane aap upar neeche hone lage. Thodhi der aise hi chalta raha, beech beech me donon ek dusre ko kas lete the aur fir dheela chhod dete the, jaise ki ek dusre ko sukun de rahe ho.

Mohanlal ko yaad aaya ki dinner bhi karna hai tu usne apne hath ko Ruchika ke sar par ferte hue 'Dinner par chalen'
Mohanlal 'ab naraj tu nahi ho'
Ruchika 'nahi'
Mohanlal 'Wife ke beti'

Ruchika ne ekdam se Mohanlal ko chhod diya aur bed ki aur jane lagi tu Mohanlal ne uska hath pakadte hue 'Jawab nahi diya'
Ruchika 'ab agar ek baar bhi iss tour par beti kaha tu main aapse baat nahi karungi'

Mohanlal usko apani taraf karte hue 'Theek hai Meri biwi' aur jaise hi Ruchika ghumi tu vo bina dupatte ke thi, kyounki uska dupatta tu bed par gir gaya tha aur bina dupatte ke vo kucch jayada hi khubsurat lag rahi thi. Uski chuchiyon ke upari hisse aur unke beech ki ghati saaf saaf najar aa rahi thi. Ruchika lambi tu thi lekin Mohanlal se height kam hone ki vajah se uski chuchiyon ka andruni hissa bhi usse najar aa raha tha aur uska rakt parvah badne laga.

Vo ektak Ruchika ko dekhe ja raha tha tu Ruchika ne uski najro ka peecha karte hue paya ki uske Papa ki najar kanha hai aur ye aabhas hote hi ki vo bina dupatte ke hai tu usne apane hathon ko aise kar liya jaise vo apani chuchiyon ko dhak rahi ho tu Mohanlal ki tandra tuti aur jhemp mitatte hue kaha 'Fir ready ho jao, chalte hain' Ruchika ne usse kaha ki vo tu ready hai, tab Mohanlal ne kaha 'Jao apana chera wash karlo nahi tu log kanhege ki miyan biwi ladkar aayen hain'

Ruchika uski baat maankar bathroom me chali gayi aur usne jab bathroom me bahut bade sheeshe ke samne khud ko paya tu usne apne aap ko dekha tu usse samajh aaya ki uske Papa uski chuchiyon ki sundarta me kaise kho gaye the tu usse gudgudi hone lagi aur sochne lagi ki kya ye sahi hai, tab usne socha ki abhi tu vo Papa nahi, Pati hain tu usse baar baar salesgirl ki baat yaad aane lagi ki iss sharir ko apane Pati ko nahi dikhaogi tu kisko dikhaogi aur unko tumhara size nahi pata, ye kaise ho sakta hai'

Uske man me dwandh chal raha tha ki vo Papa ki patni ban tu gayi hai lekin hai tu unki beti hi na tu mujhe kya karna chahiye jisse main unki Patni bhi bani ranhu aur maryada bhi bhang na ho. Main agar normal rehti hu jaise ek beti tu koi bhi us behaviour ko pakad lega aur fir agar pata lag gaya ki ham baap beti hain tu badnami aur saza. Nahin nahin main ye kabhi nahi kar sakti. Agar Patni ki tarah karti hu tu jaise ki aaj hua Papa meri aur aakrshit ho rahe hain, vaise tu Pati Patni me ye sab koi mayne nahi rakhta, lekin ham donon ke relationship me farak aa sakta hai.

Ab agar maine Patni banne ka nirnay le liya hai tu uss role ko nibhane ke liye kucch tu karna hi padega tabhi tu vastvik lagega nahi tu mushkil ho jayegi. Tu kya Papa ko apane sharir ko niharne du? Agar vo meri taraf aakrshit ho gaye tu? Logon ko agar vastvik lage tu in sab cheezon ko nazar andaaz karna padega. Ab tu vo Pati hai na ki Papa aur maine hi unhe baar baar majbur kiya hai ki vo mujhe sirf aur sirf Patni samjhe tu agar vo meri taraf aakrshit hote hain tu unka kya dosh, vaise bhi meri figure aur body se koi bhi aakarshit ho sakta hai, aisa uss salesgirl ne bhi kaha tha. Usne tu ye bhi kaha tha ki ye sharir Pati ko nahi dikhaogi tu kisko dikhaogi. Mere sharir ko dekhne ka hak Papa ko hai, ye sochte hi uske dil ki dhadkan badh gayi aur saans bahut tej chalne lagi.

Thodhi der baad samanaye hui tu usne apane chere ko acchi tarah se bahut hi sugandhit sabun se dhoya tu usne dekha ki vanha par face wash bhi hai tu usne usse bhi apane chere ko dhoya aur uske baad tauliya jo bahut hi naram aur mulayam tha apane chere se lagaya tu usse jannat ka maja aa gaya ki aise tauliye bhi hote hain. Fir apane aap ko thodha theek kiya tu ab usse bahar aana tha tu usse sharam aane lagi kyounki dupatta tu vo lai hi nahin thi. Usne apane aapko ek baar fir sheeshe me dekha tu usse laga ki dupatte ke bina vo jayada khubsurat lag rahi hai, lekin Papa ke samne? Usne nirnay liya ki dupatte ke bina hi confidence se jayegi.

Udhar Mohanlal Ruchika ke jane ke baad sochane laga ki usse kya hota ja raha hai. Vo fir se Ruchika ki taraf kucch jayada hi aakrshit ho raha hai aur aaj tu uske ubhare hue nitambon ko yaad karke aur chuchiyon ko bina dupatte ke dekhkar tu uske ling me bhi thodha tanav aa gaya tha, vo tu waqt rehte sambhal liya tha nahi tu mushkil ho jati.

Ab kya karu, socha tha ki usse dur ranhuga, lekin ye tu jabardasti meri Patni banne par taiyar ho gayi. Usse bahut baar samjha liya lekin usse tu maje lene hain. Main tu chah raha tha ki thodhe kam maje le le taki mujhe usko kam se kam logon se milwaun taki problem kam ho, lekin Madam ke upar tu enjoy karne ka bhut sawar hai tu main kya karoon. Ab usko kya samjhaun ki iss chhakar me kanih lene ke dene na pad jayen aur koi aisi galti ho jaye jiska khamiyaja na vo utha paye aur na hi main. Ab kya kar sakte hain, jan vo bina dupatte ke mere gale lagegi tu mera uttejit hona natural hain kyounki sachi baat ye hai ki main usse sach me pyaar karne laga hu. Abhi ke liye waqt par chhod dete hain ki kya hoga.

Tabhi bathroom ka darwaja khula aur Ruchika bahar aayi tu vo khili hui lag rahi thi, lekin sharma bhi rahi thi. Usne bahar aakar kaha 'Main taiyar hu, chalen'

Mohanlal ne usse upar se neeche tak dekha tu bola ''kucch kami lag rahi hai'
Ruchika 'kaisi kami'

Mohanlal 'kucch tu hai, socho ki kya hai'
Ruchika 'Mujhe tu nahi lag rahi'

Mohanlal ne uska hath pakda aur vanha par padi ek chair par baitha diya aur ek box me kholkar usme se kucch nikala aur Ruchika ko aankhein band karne ke liye kaha tu usne kar li. Mohanlal uske peeche gaya aur uski gardan se baal hatakar side me liye aur ek bahut hi keemti gold chain uske gale me dalkar peeche se lock kar diya aur fir baalon ko donon kano se bari bari hatakar usme Tops pehnaye aur fir Ruchika ko aankhein kholane ke liye kaha, lekin Ruchika tu Mohanlal ke hathon ke jadui saparsh me khoyi hui thi aur usse kucch sunai hi nahi de raha tha.

Mohanlal ne uske kandhon par hath rakhakr usse khada kar diya tu usne aankhein khol di lekin aisa lag raha tha jaise uski aankhon me nasha uttar aaya ho. Moahanlal ne uska hath pakadkar dusre hath se bari bari donon hathon me lock wale bracelet pehnaye. Uske baad Ruchika ko ek bahut hi khubsurat Ring di aur kaha ki pehan lo tu Ruchika ne kaha ki baki sab tu aapne pehnaya hai tu ye bhi aap pehna dijiye na. Mohanlal ne uska hath pakad kar uski ringfinger me vo ring pehna di aur Fir usko lekar Mohanlal sheeshe ke samne le gaya aur kaha dekho ye kami thi meri biwi me jo maine puri kar di.

Mohanlal Ruchika ke bilkul peeche khada tha aur usne Ruchika ke kandhe pakad rakha the tu sheeshe me vo dono sath khade hue bahut acche lag rahe the. Chain me ek locket tha jo jakar Ruchika ki chuchiyon ke beech ki ghati ko chu raha tha aur bahut acchi lag rahi thi.

Ruchika 'Ye aap kab laye'
Mohanlal 'Jab tum beauty parlour me thi'
Ruchika 'ye gold ki hain

Mohanlal 'bilkul shudh'
Ruchika 'aapne itna kharcha kyoun kiya'
Mohanlal 'Meri biwi ke paas koi bhi jewelery nahi, ye kaise ho sakta hai. Ye tu meri taraf se tumhe pehle tour ke liye gift hai'

Ruchika Mohanlal ki baat sunkar bhavuk ho gayi aur mudkar uske gale lag gayi aur bahut jor se Mohanlal ko apane se bhinch liya tu Mohanlal kanha peeche rehta tu usne bhi bheench liya jisse Ruchika ki chuchiyan Mohanlal ki chaudi chati me kuchal hi gayi tu ab Ruchika ko bhi nasha chane laga aur usne apani nak se apane Papa ki naak ragadte hue "Thanks my husband' tu Mohanlal ne usse apane sath aur chimta liya aur uska matha chumkar kaha ' No Thanks my sweet darling'
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amita

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Fantastic update, but update 18 is missing in Index
Thanks for reading, liking and appreciating.
Well it's there but due to some technical reasons it's here and there.
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