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mass8787 said:
Amita jee aap nay tuu such much aak muskel khari kurdee maray leya yea kahani suru kur kay ab batawoo main kya likhoo comments main likhnay koo kuch elfaz hee nahi buchay hay is khubsurty kee daad danay koo kasay itna sunder likhty hoo aap ab batawoo naa kya liknun juu bhi liknay lugta hun woo iysa lugta hay kay repeat kur raha hun
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amita said:
Update 7

Aditya ne apane hath se uske hath ko pakad kar apane kandhe par rakh liya aur bina koi baat kiye bike ko aage badha diya aur iss baar dhéere dhéere chalane laga. Donon ke dil me pyar ki pehli chingari lag chuki thi jo ab itni aasani se bhujne wali nahi lag rahi thi.
Udhar ghar par Sandhya aur Aditya ke jane ke baad
Mohanlal: Khush
Ruchika: (Mohanlal ke gale lagate hue) Bahut khush
Mohanlal: Kanha chalna chohohi
Ruchika: Janha aap le jayen, mujhe tu bas aapke paas rehna hai.
Mohanlal: Mumbai ya Pune
Ruchika: Vaise tu janha aapka man ho, lekin main Pune ko prefer karungi.
Mohanlal: Main samajh sakta hu, lekin ab tum aaram karo aur thodhi der so jao
Ruchika: (Mohanlal se bilkul satte hue) Abhi tu badi mushkil se akele rehne ka mouka mila hai aur aap keh rahe hain ki main so jaun
Mohanlal ne bhi use apani banhon me bade pyar se kass liya aur kaha "ab tu mouke hi mouke hain, lekin mujhe tumhara khayal pehle hai, isliye meri baat mano aur thodha aaram kar lo"
Ruchika: Mujhe tu aaram sirf aur sirf aapki banhon me milta hai aur aap hain ki mujhe apane se dur karne ka mouka dhundhte ho
Mohanlal ne ekdam se use apani banhon me bharkar utha liya aur Ruchika ne apani banhon ka ghera Mohanlal ke gale me daal kar uske seene me apana sar rakh diya tu Mohanlal ne Ruchika ko kaha "Dur kar raha hu isliye ki hamesha paas rah sako, varna dil tu manta hi nahi ki tum se dur ho"
Itna kehkar Mohanlal ne use uthakar uske bedroom me le gaye aur usko bed par laita diya aur uske sath baithkar apane hath ko uske sar par rakhkar uske sar ko sehalane lage jisse Ruchika ko aanand aur sukun ki anubhuti hone lagi aur uski aankhe band hone lagi.
Mohanlal dheere dheere apane hath ki ungaliyon ko uske balo me firata raha aur Ruchika ne karvat badalkar Mohanlal ke dusre hath ko apane donon hathon me pakad kar apane seene ke paas rakh liya, jisse Mohanlal ko thodha jhukna pada aur vo tiracha hokar bed par adhleta ho gaya aur Ruchika ke masoom chere ko niharate hue uske baalon me ungaliyon ko firata raha. Uska maqsad tha ki kisi tarike se Ruchika so jaye.
Mohanlal sochane laga ki kaise kab kya badla aur uski jindagi me kya kya rang aaye aur gaye.
Uski aankhon ke samne vo drishye ubharane lage. Usse aaj bhi dhayan hai ki Jab uski gaanv me shaadi Sandhya se hui thi, tab vo aur Sandhya chote the, lekin gaanv ke lihaz se bade ho gaye the. Shadi ke ek saal baad pyari si ladki ne janam liya. Ladki ka janam hua tu maa baap, rishtedar aur gaanv vale kehne lage ki 'ladka hota tu accha hota, khaandan ko aage badatha' Us gaanv me ladkiyon ki koi izzat nahi thi aur ladki ko hamesha se hi vanha par bhojh samjha jata tha.
Jis din us ladki ka janam hua uske agale din mere Kano ne suna ki gaanv vale us ladki ko jinda hi dafan kar denge. Logon ki baatein sun sunkar mujhe bahut bura lagne laga par us gaanv ke logon se ladkar use bachana mushkil lag raha tha aur mera man karta tha ki gaanv se bhagh jaun, lekin kanha jaun.
Usdin logon ke baton se itna pareshan ho gaya maine ganv chhodne ka faisla kar liya aur Sandhya ko apane faisle ke baare me avagat kara diya. Vo meri baat taal tu nahin sakti thi lekin usne puccha "kanha jayenge aur apana guzara kaise karenge"
Maine kaha "Tum chinta na karo kuch bhi kar lenge lekin iss waqt hame iss nanhi si jaan ko bachana jayada jaruri hai, isliye aaj hi raat ko chupke se nikalna padega, taiyari kar lo"
Fir usidin mouka dekhkar raat me hi Sandhya aur nanhi si jaan ko lekar nikal gaye, raat bhar paidal chalte rahe aur subah bas pakadkar koi paanch ghante ka safar karke iss shahar me panhuch gaye. Ek dharamshala me kamra liya aur kuch kha peekar apane purane dost ki batai hui jagah par panhuch gaya tu vo mujhe ek dukaan par le gaya aur usse mere liye kaam ke baare me baat ki.
Vo jagah ek dukaan thi janha par Sadiyon aur readymade kapdo ka vyuopar hota tha tu seth ne mujhe upar se neeche dekha aur kaha "theek hai lag jao, lekin imandari se kaam karna" Maine haami bhar di
Main tu sirf aathanvi paas tha vo bhi gaanv ke school se tu jayada angreji nahi aati thi, lekin hissab kitaaab me hoshiyar tha tu Sethji ne mujhe maal ko ginati karne par laga diya ki kitna maal kanha se aaya aur kitana bika.
Thodhe din kaam karne par pata chala ki vanha ka ek aadmi herapheri kar raha tha, vo bill kam banakar kuch maal kam paise me dukaan se bahar niklwa deta tha. Maine yeh baat chupke se Seth ji ko bata di aur unhone apane tarike se pata lagwaya ki vo aadmi Sethji ko har mahine kam se kam 1 se 2 lakh ka nuksaan panhucha raha tha. Sethji ko bahut gussa aaya aur usko boley ki ya tu vo jitane paison ki herapheri ki hI vo laa ke de de nahi tu usko jail karwa denge. Vo maafi mangte hue kehne laga ki paise tu khatam ho gaye hain aur aage se aisa na karne ke liye kehne laga. Sethji ne uske ghar ki talashi karwai tu vanha se 5 lakh ke karib cash nikala jo Sethji ne lekar usse dukaan se nikaal diya aur meri tarakki karke vanha ka Manager bana diya aur meri tankha dugani kar di.
Maine Sethji ka dhanyawad kiya aur man lagakar kaam karne laga jisse Sethji ka karobaar falne fulne laga.
Idhar koi 2 saal baad nanhi si jaan badi hone lagi aur uska naam Ruchika rakha aur Sandhya ne ek ladke ko janam diya. Ladke ke janam par ek baar tu socha ki gharwalo ko bata du, lekin vanha ke haal ko jante hue apani gudiya (Ruchika) ke liye chup rehna hi munasib samjha.
Sandhya ke sath meri sex life bhi acchi chal rahi thi, ham roj pyar karte the aur apani duniya me khush the, lekin ladke (Aditya) ke janam ke baad pata nahi kya hua ki Sandhya sex ke waqt bahut chillane lagati jaise ki use bahut dard ho raha ho, main isse normal samjhata raha lekin vo samasya badne lagi tub dheere dheere hamari sex life suni hone lagi. Maine use kai baar kaha bhi ki kisi doctor se salah le lete hain, lekin vo sharam se kanhi bhi jane ko taiyar nahi hoti thi. Idhar bacche bhi bade ho rahe the tu unko paas ke ek school me admission dilwa diya.
Aise hi 5 saal aur beet gaye, Sethji ne apana karobaar badhane ki sochi aur Mujhe apana vishwaspatr mante hue mujhe baar baar maal lane aur payment lene dene ke liye bahar jana padta tha aur baar baar dusre sharon me jana padta tha, lekin mera dil nahi karta tha, kyounki mujhe hamesha Sandhya aur bachon ka khyal rehta tha aur man karta tha ki Sandhya se roj sex karu. Lekin uski samasya ki vajah se man masos leta tha, parantu usse samne dekhkar use tang tu kar hi sakta tha. Main kabhi use piche se banhon me bharkar uski badi badi chuchiyon ko daba deta tu vo "si.....i...i" karti tu mujhe bahut accha lagta tha aur fir main apane hothon ko uski gardan par rakhkar jor jor se uski chuchiyon ko dabate hue chumban karta jata tha. Kabhi kabhi tu uske pet par hath firate hue uski sadi khol deta tha tu vo "hai daiya" karti thi aur palat kar apani peeth meri taraf kar leti thi tu man khush ho jata tha. Main use peeche se jakar uske kandhon ko pakdta tu uski saanse tez hone lagti aur main usko ghumakar apani taraf karta tha, uski palke sharam se jhukhi hui hoti tu main apani ungli ko uski thudhi ke neeche le jakar uske chehre ko uthatha aur use niharane lagta aur uske urojono ka upari hissa jo duddh ki rangat ka tha ko dekhkar mera ling fantanane lagta tha tu main uski aankhon par apane honthon ko rakhkar dhire dhire uske galon ko chumte hue neeche ki aur badne lagta tu vo mere seene me lag jati aur uski chuchiyon ka meri chathi se takrana mere ling me rakt parvaah ko badha deta tha aur main uski peeth sehlate hue uske blouse ko kholne lagta tu vo mujhe apani aankhon se na karne ka isshare se rokti tu mera man usko dard na dene ke liye ruk jata lekin ek man karta tha ki aage badu. Pata nahi kyoun main usse itna pyar karta tha ki usse dard nahi de sakta tha aur usko chum chaat ke chhod deta tha, lekin meri payaas badhti jati thi.
Dusra karan ghar se dur na jane ka tha Ruchika se bahut jyada lagav. Pata nahi kyoun lekin Ruchika ke janam se log usse jitni nafrat karte the main usse kanhi jayada usse pyar karta tha aur usko chhod kar jane ka man nahi karta tha.
Ekdin ki baat hai ki Main Sandhya ke sath chedhkhani kar raha tha vo aayi aur boli "Papa papa aap sirf Mom ko pyar karte ho hame nahi" Main bola "kyoun, main tu tumse sabse jayada pyar karta hu" tu vo boli "aap tu mom ko gaal par kiss karte ho hame nahi" Sandhya tu sharma gayi lekin maine use apani goadi me baithakar uske galo par kiss kiya tu vo khush ho gayi. Main yeh khawabo me kar raha tha lekin asal me Ruchika ke galo par kiss karta ja raha tha jisse usne kunmuna kar aankhe kholkar mere ko bhi kiss karte hue boli "bahut pyar aa raha hai"
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Well written update but has confused me as well.
Why Mohanlal is always asking Ruchika to sleep even though they are alone?

Mohanlal seems to love Sandhya as well then how come he got involved with Ruchika?

Why Sandhya is feeling good with Aditya and has no problem even becoming his girlfriend, why?
 
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Hayaan said:
Ab in maukon mein ghanti Bazna bilkul tay hai......
Waise Aapki Ghanti mili Ya nahi...kho gayi thi na...??

मुसाफ़िर हूँ मैं यारों....न घर है ना ठिकाना...मुझे तो बस चलते जाना है...!!
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Good shayari
 
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Hayaan said:
"Dur kar raha hu isliye ki hamesha paas rah sako, varna dil tu manta hi nahi ki tum se dur ho"

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Kahani Bayaan ki gayi hai...
Hawas rahit Pyar ko Darshaya gaya hai...
Ummid hai Yeh Pyara aise Pavitra Rahega...
Jiss din bhi Yeh Pyaar Hawas aur Jabardasti ka Roop lega..
Hum read karna band kar dege...
Kayi Logon ke comment the.. Papa ke dost ko bhi shamil karo,
Aditya ko bhi Ruchika se milao

Dono Jodi mast hai... Aisa Pavitrata wala prem bahut kam dekhne ko milta hai...
Ummid hai amita ji Yeh Saaf suthra pan aur Feelings Kayam Rahegi...

Thank you Very much Itni khoobsurat kahani ko pesh karne ke liye...!!
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What a fantastic review!
Hats off
 
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